2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习错领的猫咪归位记导学案

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Back home, I asked my husband, “Eldon, did you pick up Feibee from the vet?” “Yes, he’s home,” Eldon replied. “Everything was fine, the vet said.” Our old cat, Feibee, had his yearly check-up today. He is usually grumpy (脾气暴躁的), but we love him very much. He has lived with us for fifteen happy years and we have been an inseparable (不可分离的) family. Walking into the house through the back door, I expected to see Feibee sitting by his empty food bowl, his tail moving impatiently, waiting for his dinner. And more importantly, I waited for his special welcome: three slow sweeps of his tail across the floor whenever I came home. It was our thing, a little sign that he knew it was me. But the house was strangely quiet. No loud “Meow” greeted me. No familiar swish, swish, swish-the three sweeps of his tail. “Eldon?” I called out, feeling a little worried. “Where’s Feibee?” Eldon looked up from his phone. “Oh he’s under our bed,” he said casually. “He ran directly there when I opened his carrier. He won’t come out, not even for his favorite fish!” “That’s... really strange,” I said, my worry growing. Feibee never hid under the bed. He liked high places where he could watch everything. And he always gave me his tail-wag welcome I walked to the bed and knelt down. In the darkness under the bed, two round eyes stared back at me. “Come on, grumpy boy,” I whispered softly, reached in and gently pulled him out. His fur felt softer than Feibee’s usually did. Holding the large cat up to look at him carefully, a cold shock ran through me. This cat looked like Feibee... but he felt different. He even didn’t have Feibee’s little white patch (斑点) behind his left ear! And his tail hung still. No welcome swishes. My heart sank. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: “Eldon, this... this isn’t Feibee!” I said, with my voice shaking. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Putting down the phone, we drove straight to the vet’s office to get Feibee back. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文本分析 1.角色：_____________________________ 2.视角：第________人称 3.时空线：Feibee 去兽医处做年度检查→Eldon 从兽医处接回 “猫”→“我” 回家后发现异常→确认接错猫→（续写）告知 Eldon 并联系兽医→（续写）前往兽医处换回 Feibee 4.可能的线索 What was special about Feibee?：______________________________________________ Why was "I" worried about the cat under the bed?：______________________________________________ How did "I" realize it wasn't Feibee?：______________________________________________ What did Eldon do after picking up the cat?：______________________________________________ What would "I" and Eldon do next?：______________________________________________ 5.情节线：“我” 和 Eldon 的老猫 Feibee 去做年度检查→Eldon 接回一只猫，猫躲在床底→“我” 发现猫异常，仔细查看后确认不是 Feibee→（续写）“我” 告知 Eldon 真相，两人联系兽医→（续写）前往兽医处换回 Feibee 6.情感线：“我”：normal（询问 Feibee 情况）→ worried（发现异常）→ shocked（确认不是 Feibee）→ （续写）→ （续写）；Eldon：casual（接猫后）→ （续写）→ （续写） 7.文章大意 中文__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8.句式（宾语从句，同位语从句，定语从句，非谓语动词，with 的复合结构） _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9.主题 ___________________________________________________________________________ 情节构造 第一段提示句：“Eldon, this... this isn’t Feibee!” I said, with my voice shaking. 衔接 1（对 “isn’t Feibee” 提问 “Eldon 的反应？”）：_____________________________ 过渡句推演：衔接 1→___________ ←衔接 2 衔接 2（对后续情节提问 “兽医的回应？”）：_____________________________ 第二段提示句：Putting down the phone, we drove straight to the vet’s office to get Feibee back. 衔接 3（对 “drove to the vet’s office” 提问 “到达后看到什么？”）：_____________________________ 过渡句推演：衔接 3→___________ ←主题 主题：_____________________________ 段落构思 第一段提示句：“Eldon, this... this isn’t Feibee!” I said, with my voice shaking. ① _____________________________ ② _____________________________ ③ _____________________________ Para1: ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第二段提示句：Putting down the phone, we drove straight to the vet’s office to get Feibee back. ④ _____________________________ ⑤ _____________________________ ⑥ _____________________________ Para2: ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 文本分析 1.角色：“我”；丈夫 Eldon；“我们” 的老猫 Feibee；兽医（未直接出场）；被错领的猫 2.视角：第（一）人称 3.时空线：Feibee 去兽医处做年度检查→Eldon 从兽医处接回 “猫”→“我” 回家后发现异常→确认接错猫→（续写）告知 Eldon 并联系兽医→（续写）前往兽医处换回 Feibee 4.可能的线索 What was special about Feibee?：（脾气暴躁，喜欢高处，左耳后有白色斑点，会用尾巴扫三下欢迎 “我”） Why was "I" worried about the cat under the bed?：（Feibee 从不躲在床底，也没有用尾巴欢迎 “我”） How did "I" realize it wasn't Feibee?：（手感不同，左耳后没有白色斑点，尾巴不动） What did Eldon do after picking up the cat?：（将猫带回家，猫躲在床底，他没发现异常） What would "I" and Eldon do next?：（告知 Eldon 真相，联系兽医，去换回 Feibee） 5.情节线：“我” 和 Eldon 的老猫 Feibee 去做年度检查→Eldon 接回一只猫，猫躲在床底→“我” 发现猫异常，仔细查看后确认不是 Feibee→（续写）“我” 告知 Eldon 真相，两人联系兽医→（续写）前往兽医处换回 Feibee 6.情感线：“我”：normal（询问 Feibee 情况）→ worried（发现异常）→ shocked（确认不是 Feibee）→ （续写）anxious（担心 Feibee）→ （续写）relieved（换回 Feibee 后）；Eldon：casual（接猫后）→ （续写）surprised（得知接错猫）→ （续写）hurried（去换回 Feibee 时） 7.文章大意 中文： “我” 和丈夫 Eldon 的老猫 Feibee 去做年度检查，Eldon 接回一只猫后，“我” 发现这只猫没有 Feibee 左耳后的白色斑点，也没有用尾巴欢迎 “我”，确认不是 Feibee，内心十分担忧。 英文： Our old cat Feibee had his yearly check-up. Eldon picked a cat up from the vet, but when I got home, I found the cat didn't have Feibee's little white patch behind his left ear and didn't welcome me with tail swishes. I realized it wasn't Feibee and felt worried. 8. 句式（宾语从句，同位语从句，定语从句，非谓语动词，with 的复合结构） 定语从句：He has lived with us for fifteen happy years and we have been an inseparable family. 非谓语动词：Walking into the house through the back door, I expected to see Feibee sitting by his empty food bowl. with 的复合结构：In the darkness under the bed, two round eyes stared back at me. 宾语从句：I asked my husband, “Eldon, did you pick up Feibee from the vet?”） 9. 主题 家人间的牵挂与重视；生活中的小意外及解决过程 情节构造 第一段提示句：“Eldon, this... this isn’t Feibee!” I said, with my voice shaking. 衔接 1（对 “isn’t Feibee” 提问 “Eldon 的反应？”）：Eldon 起初不信，仔细查看后发现确实不是 过渡句推演：衔接 1→两人赶紧联系兽医询问情况←衔接 2 衔接 2（对后续情节提问 “兽医的回应？”）：兽医表示可能接错了，Feibee 还在诊所 第二段提示句：Putting down the phone, we drove straight to the vet’s office to get Feibee back. 衔接 3（对 “drove to the vet’s office” 提问 “到达后看到什么？”）：看到 Feibee 在诊所，正焦躁地叫着 过渡句推演：衔接 3→换回 Feibee，错领的猫也被其主人领走←主题 主题：家人间的情感联结，小意外中的温暖 段落构思 第一段提示句：“Eldon, this... this isn’t Feibee!” I said, with my voice shaking. ① Eldon 放下手机，一脸疑惑地过来看，“怎么可能？” ② 当 “我” 指给他看猫左耳后没有白色斑点时，他愣住了，“天哪，我接错了！” ③ 他立刻拿起电话打给兽医，语气焦急，“我们接错猫了，Feibee 还在你那里吗？” Para1: “Eldon, this... this isn’t Feibee!” I said, with my voice shaking. Eldon looked up, confused. "What do you mean?" he asked, walking over. I pointed to the cat's left ear. "No white patch—Feibee has one there." His eyes widened. "I must have grabbed the wrong carrier!" He fumbled for his phone, dialing the vet. "We picked up the wrong cat. Is Feibee still there?" His voice was tight with worry as he listened. 第二段提示句：Putting down the phone, we drove straight to the vet’s office to get Feibee back. ④ 一到诊所，就听到 Feibee 熟悉的叫声，“我” 赶紧跑过去，它正不安地在笼子里打转。 ⑤ 兽医连连道歉，原来另一只猫的主人也刚到，大家换回了各自的猫。 ⑥ 抱着 Feibee 回家的路上，它用尾巴轻轻扫了 “我” 三下，“我” 的心终于放下了。 Para2: Putting down the phone, we drove straight to the vet’s office to get Feibee back. As soon as we walked in, Feibee’s loud meow greeted us. He was pacing in a cage, looking grumpy but relieved. The other cat’s owner arrived too, and we swapped cats with a laugh. On the drive home, Feibee purred, his tail giving three slow sweeps against my arm. I smiled—our grumpy boy was back. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$