内容正文:
2025学年英语小升初知识详细讲解
专题12 书面表达
考点归纳
考点
知识梳理
要点提示
写人篇
以写人为主的记叙文,应该注意对人物的肖像、行动、语言、心理等的描写以及细节描写。学生应根据写作要求,灵活掌握,突出重点。可以从一个人的思想品质、脾气性格、兴趣爱好等方面来写。
小学阶段英语的书面表达要求同学们能用所掌握的语法、词汇、句型造句,并组句成文。在写作过程中,要仔细审题,抓住要点,写出条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、无严重语法错误的短文。
记事篇
以写事为主的记叙文,应该注意交代六要素,即时间、地点、人物、事件、原因、结果。叙事时应注意描写事情发生与发展的过程、事情发生的前因后果等。
状物篇
以状物为主的记叙文,主要是通过语言文字把事物细致、准确地描写出来,使所描写的事物能够形象逼真地呈现在读者面前。写物时不仅要了解“物”的外部特征,而且要熟悉它的本质特点,可以从事物的形状、颜色、动态、静态等方面着手。写物时一般以空间顺序展开,可以由远及近,也可以由近及远,或者是自上而下、自左而右,还可以从整体到局部、由局部到整体等,做到主次分明、有条有理。
书信篇
书信的格式和要求。
(1)在信纸的右上角写收信人的地址,地址的顺序是由小到大,然后写日期。
(2)在日期下面一行或隔一行的左边是称呼语,顶格写,末尾通常用逗号,以Dear开头。
(3)在称呼语下面一行写正文。
(4)结束语下面一行写上寄信人的名字,前面一般写“Yours...”。
日记篇
日记记述的内容通常已经发生,所以多用过去时态,也可根据情况灵活运用。
日记表达意思要完整。有话则长,无话则短,但要写出真情实感。
考点剖析
例题 假如你是Tom,请根据表格提供的信息,以“My Day”为题写一篇短文。不少于5句话。
get up
6:30 a.m.
eat breakfast
7:15 a.m.
go to school
7:40 a.m.
have Chinese class
8:30 a.m.
play football
3:30 p.m.
go to bed
9:30 p.m.
剖析
从表格提供的信息可以看出短文需要按照一天的时间顺序去描述各个时间的活动特点。写作中注意人称代词及介词。
答案:参考范文:
My Day
Hello! My name is Tom. I'm a student. I'm very busy every day. I get up at 6:30 in the morning. I eat breakfast at 7:15. Then I go to school at 7:40. I have Chinese class at 8:30 in the morning. I often play football at 3:30 in the afternoon. I go to bed at 9:30 at night. I'm tired but I'm very happy.
知能训练
根据表格提示,写一篇短文介绍玲玲寒假想去的地方及活动安排。
地点
新疆(中国西部)
活动
骑马、爬天山、参观天池
要求:语句通顺,可适当发挥。不少于6句话。
提示:寒假 winter holiday 天山 the Tianshan Mountain 天池 the Tianchi Lake
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过关训练
一、中国的节日形式多样,内容丰富,是中华民族文化的重要组成部分。以“My Favourite Festival”为题,简要介绍你最喜欢的节日吧!
要求:语句通顺,表达清楚。不少于6句话。
可参照以下问题写作: 1.What's your favourite festival?
2.When is it?
3.What do people do?
4.What do people eat?
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二、假如你是Kate的朋友,请你根据表格中的提示写一篇短文介绍她。50个单词左右。
Name: Kate
Age:11
Sex: girl
Tel:6283578
Grade:6
Class:5
Hobbies: flying kites, collecting stamps and taking pictures
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三、以“My School”为题写一篇小作文,向你的爸爸妈妈介绍你的学校。
要求:条理清晰,意思连贯,用词得当,语法正确,书写规范。50个单词左右。
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四、假如你是Mike,请根据提示词写一篇短文介绍你这个周末的活动计划。不少于6句话。
提示词:Saturday、Sunday、read a magazine、go to the zoo、buy a book、learn kung fu、watch TV
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五、请用一般现在时,以“A Happy Day in Spring”为题,描写Mr Black一家人在春天的某一天在野外游玩的场景。可作适当的想象和发挥。
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六、以“My Mother”为题,写一篇短文向大家介绍你的妈妈。词数50个左右。
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七、以“My Favourite Animal”为题,描述一下你最喜欢的动物。不少于6句话。
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真题演练
一、(厦门)根据表格信息模仿续写。
Who
What
Lily
buy some delicious food
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buy some gifts
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clean the classroom
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put on the balloons
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take pictures
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Hooray! We'll have a farewell party. Lily is going to buy some delicious food for us.
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二、(郑州)同学们,小学生活马上就结束了,回顾你六年的变化,以“My Changes”为题,写一写自己的变化。
要求:1.条理清楚,语言准确,意思连贯。
2.标点正确,书写规范。
3.40个单词左右。
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参考答案:
知能训练
Lingling is a student. She is going to Xinjiang for her winter holiday. Xinjiang is in the west of China. It is a beautiful place. She's going there by train. She's going to visit the Tianshan Mountain and the Tianchi Lake. She's going to ride a horse and take pictures there, too. I think she will have a good time.
过关训练
一、参考范文:
My Favourite Festival
There are many interesting festivals in a year. My favourite festival is Children's Day. It's on June 1st. On that day we sing songs. We all wear beautiful clothes. We eat delicious food. We play games and take some pictures. We have a good time together.
二、参考范文:
Kate is my good friend. She is 11 years old. She is a beautiful and kind girl. She is in Class 5, Grade 6. She is tall and thin. She can play the piano and ride a bike. She likes flying kites, collecting stamps and taking pictures. Her telephone number is 6283578.Do you want to make friends with her?
三、参考范文:
My School
Dear father and mother, let me show you my school. Look! This is my school. It's big, clean and beautiful. There are about fifty classrooms in it. There are about 3,500 students and 200 teachers in it. There is a big playground. We often play basketball, play football and play games on it. I love my school.
四、参考范文:
Hello! My name is Mike. I'm going to have a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, I'm going to the zoo and see some animals. I'm going to read a magazine in the afternoon. I'm going to read a book in the evening. On Sunday morning, I'm going to buy a book. I'm going to learn kung fu in the afternoon. I'm going to watch TV in the evening. I think I will have a happy weekend.
五、参考范文:
A Happy Day in Spring
It's spring. It's sunny today. There are many big trees in the park. Mr Black and his family have a picnic in the park. They bring much food there. They bring fruit, drinks and bread. Mr Black and Mrs Black talk with each other. They talk very happily. Ann reads a magazine. Tom flies a kite. The kite flies very high. They are hungry now. They want to eat their food. They are very happy.
六、参考范文:
My Mother
Hello! I'm Lisa. I have a good mother. She is tall and thin. She is very beautiful. She can play the piano, draw pictures and dance. She likes drawing cartoons and dancing. She is a teacher. She teaches art. She goes to work by bus every day. She cooks delicious food for us. I love my mother very much.
七、参考范文:
My Favourite Animal
Hello! My name is Daming. My favourite animal is cat. I have a pet cat. Its name is Mimi. It's six months old. It's black and white. Its favourite food is mice. It often catches mice in the evening. I often play with it. I always give some food to it. I love it very much.
真题演练
一、参考范文:
Hooray! We'll have a farewell party. Lily is going to buy some delicious food for us. Tom is going to buy some gifts for his classmates and teachers. Sue and Mike are going to clean the classroom, and John is going to put on the balloons in the classroom. Mary is going to take pictures at the party. Amy is going to play the piano for us. We'll have a good time.
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