第1章 应用文写作-【创新教程】2021-2025五年高考真题英语分类特训试卷

第五部分写作 第一章应用文写作 (一)短文投稿十邀请信（邮件）十申请信（邮件） L.短文投稿 Writing1(2024浙江1月卷) 请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运 粱 动，内容包括： 1.介绍这项运动：2.说明推荐理由。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Stand Up and Exercise,Everybody! 数 Writing2(2023全国甲卷) 中性 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇 短文投稿，内容包括： 老桶 1.人物简介及事迹：2.意义或启示 注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 好 Writing3(2023全国乙卷) 網 学校英文报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能，请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。内 容包括： 1.简要描述：2.体验和感受。 注意：1.词数100左右：2.题目已为你写好。 Learning a New skill Writing4(2022全国乙卷) 学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨 论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.学习活动状况描述：2.简单评论：3.你的建议 注意：1.词数100左右：2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。 学计女丽失可K动丙年培零（人器门0格） 145 Learning English Beyond the Classroom Nowadays.with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, Writing5(2022全国甲卷) 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1.海洋的重要性：2.保护海洋的倡议。 注意：1.词数100左右：2.短文的首句已为你写好 When it comes to ocean,its polloution is becoming more and more serious. 2.邀请信（邮件） Writing1(2022新高考1&.Ⅱ卷) 假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做 一次访谈。内容包括： 1.节目介绍：2.访谈的时间和话题。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右：2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Dear Caroline. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Writing2(2022北京卷) 假定你是李华，请给外国学生Jm写一封邀请信，邀请其为自己的同学线上分享英语写作经验的 交流会 1.交流会内容及邀请他的原因：2.时间及其他注意事项。 注意：1.词数100左右：2.开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。 Dear Jim, 44444444 Yours. Li Hua 146 Writing3(2022浙江卷，6月) 假定你是李华，你校图书馆开设了一个小组学习室，请给留学生Michael写一封邮件，邀请一同前 往体验，内容如下： 1.位置和开放时间：2.室内设施与功能 注意：1.词数80左右：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.申请信（邮件） Writing1(2023天津卷) 假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读，校方为加强中英文化交流， 将举办“中国工坊”活动。该活动主题涉及中华美食、中国传统手工艺、中国书法和绘画，拟招募学生 现场教授相关技能。请按照以下提示，写一封申请信： (1)申请参加本次活动：(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解：(3)结合个人兴趣和特长，说 明拟教授何种技能，并阐述原因。 参考词汇：中国工坊Chinese Workshop 中华美食Chinese cuisine 手工艺handicraft 书法calligraphy 注意：(1)词数不少于100：(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯：(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入 总词数。 Dear Sir/Madam. 4444444 4444444 Sincerely yours, Li Jin Writing2(全国I卷) 假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信中请做志愿 者，内容包括： 1.写信目的：2.个人优势：3.能做的事情。 注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：3.结束语已为你写好。 Yours. Li Hua (二)普通信（邮件）十通知 L.普通信（邮件） Writing1(2o24新课标I&.Ⅱ卷) 假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Cis写一封邮件分享这 次经历，内容包括： (1)你完成的作品：(2)你的感想」 注意：(1)写作词数应为80个左右：(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 147 Dear Chris, I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. Yours, Li Hua Writing2(2023北京卷) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jm正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团 活动，他发来邮件询间你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)活动形式：(2)活动内容。 注意：(1)词数100左右：(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, Yours, Li Hua Writing3(2023新课标I&.Ⅱ卷) 假定你是李华，外教Rya准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组 存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.说明问题：2.提出建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右：2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I'm Li Hua from Class 3. 然 Yours sincerely, Li Hua Writing4(2022浙江1月卷) 假定你是李华，在“中国一爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chis,现在他已回国，请你给 他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.回忆活动经历：2.分享个人收获：3.希望保持联系。 注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 148 Writing5(2021新高考I卷) 你校英文报Yoh正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容 包括： 1.读报的经历：2.喜爱的栏目：3.期望和祝福。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右：2.请按如下格式作答。 Youth and Me 2.通知 粱 Writing(全国Ⅱ卷)》 你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Togeth er,内容包括： 数 1.短片内容：学校的发展：2.放映时间、地点：3.欢迎对短片提出意见 注意：1.词数100左右：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 中性 ( 三)建议信十求助信十告知信十道歉信十发言稿（演讲稿）十咨询信 划 棉 L.建议信 Writing1(2025全国一卷) 假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am"两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.你的选择；2.说明理由。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右：2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Dear Jenny, 好 I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. 44 相 Yours, Li Hua Writing2(2025北京卷) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动。你的外国好友 Jm打算参加，为此发来邮件，就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： L.提出的建议；2.建议的理由。提示词：倡议proposal 注意：1.词数100左右：2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, Yours. Li Hua 149 Writing3(2024北京卷) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得 知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文 给他回复，内容包括： 1.建议投稿内容：2.就以上建议简要说明理由。 注意：1.词数100左右：2.开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。 Dear Jim, Yours, Li Hua 2.求助信 Writing(2021全国甲卷) 假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封 邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括： 1.阐明写信事由：2.征求建议：3.表示感谢。 注意：1.词数100左右：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 44444,4444444444 3.告知信 Writing(2021天津卷) 假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮 件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括： 1.表示感谢并问候：2.计划与家人一起做的事情：3.你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。 注意：1.词数不少于100：2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯：3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数 Dear Nancy, Yours. Li Jin 4.道歉信 Writing(2o21北京卷) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。 请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.表达歉意并说明原因：2.提出建议并给出理由 注意：1.词数100左右：2.开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。 150 Dear Jim, Yours. Li Hua 5.发言稿（演讲稿） Writing1(2025浙江1月卷) 你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象 写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1.陈述看法；2.提出建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右：2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus Writing2(2024全国甲卷) 英语课要求做课堂展示，请你根据所给图片，以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇 发言稿。 shared hicyele high-speed train new energy vehicle 注意：1.词数100左右：2.题目和首句已为你写好。 Development of Transport in China From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport,Chinese transport has seen an enormous development. Writing3(2022天津卷) 你是高中口语社成员李津，李华为了招募新成员，让你录制一个视频，撰写视颜的文字稿，要点如下： 1.邀请大家加入社团：2.介绍一下社团活动（如英语演讲比赛，观看英语电影等）：3.谈谈你加入 社团以后的收获。 注意：1.词数100左右：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考i词汇：Spoken English Club:English Speech Contest 151 Writing4(2021全国乙卷) 你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括： 1.分析优势与不足；2.提出学习建议。 注意：1.词数100左右：2.题目和首句已为你写好。 Be smart online learners Learning online has become an important way to study recently. 6.咨询信 Writing(2025全国二卷) 假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chs上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.询问进展：2.提醒交稿时间。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右：2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, Best wishes, Li Hua (四)致歉信十感谢信 1.致歉信 Writing(全国Ⅲ卷) 假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bo约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1.表示歉意；2.说明原因：3.另约时间。 注意：1.词数100左右：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 2.感谢信 Writing(浙江卷) 假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alx即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内 容包括： 1.表示感谢：2.回顾Aex对你的帮助：3.临别祝愿。 注意：1.词数80左右：2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 44444444444444444444444444444 44444 152 (五)其他类：人物介绍十事件介绍十新闻报道十网贴 1.人物介绍 Writing(2020新课标I卷) 你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写 篇短文参赛，内容包括： 1.人物简介：2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意：1.词数100左右：2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。 The person I respect We have a lot of respectable people around us. 2.事件介绍 Writing(2021浙江卷) 昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿，内容包括： 1.展览时间、地点：2.观展感受：3.推荐观展 注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.新闻报道 Writing(2020山东卷) 假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括： 1.参加人员；2.跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下：3.活动反响。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右： 2.请按如下格式作答。 A Cross-Country Running Race 4.网贴 Writing(2025天津卷) 假如你是晨光中学的李津，你在宇航爱好者论坛(Space Awaits)看到一则英文讨论帖：一张记录 人类文明的光盘将随探测器飞向外太空，该光盘拟收录具有代表性的音像资料。根据各国网友的提 名，图中六项热度较高。请根据以下提示用英文跟帖，内容包括： 1.对六项提名进行概括性评论： 2.从其中选一个或另行推荐一项你认为最值得收录的，并给出理由。 (光盘上的内容：hello in different languages:the Great Wall:Peking Opera:pyramids:The ani- mals sounds in nature;China's high-speed trains) 注意：1.词数不少于100：2.可以适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 153详解详析 Passage 4 L点睛]L高分句型I]Lastly,it promotes a healthy and [语篇解读]这是一篇记叙文。文章作者讲述了自己为 active lifestyle,which is essential for overall well-being. 了保护海洋，减少塑料垃圾所做出的务力 (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 56.seventh考查序数词。句意：七年级的时候，我开始在 [高分句型2]This simple routine involves standing up 加州的蒙特利湾水族馆做志愿者。表示“七年级”用序 from your desk,stretching your arms,legs and back,and 数词，所以填seventho taking a few deep breaths,(运用了动名词作宾语) 57.hinking考查非谓语动词。句意：当我得知许多海洋 L高分句型3]It's a small change that can make a big 动物吃塑料垃圾，以为那是食物时，我很难过。分析句 difference in your day.(运用了that引导的定语从句) 子结构，57(think)it is food,用作状语，think与其 [参考范文] 逻辑主语many sea animals之间是主动关系，用现在分 Stand Up and Exercise.Everybody! 词，所以填thinking。 Everybody!Are you tired of sitting in class all day? 58.to educate考查非谓语动词。句意：我决定做一些事 情来教育人们这个问题。分析句子结构，58(edu How about incorporating some physical activity into your cate)people about this problem.用作目的状语，用不定 daily routine?One great option is the "Stand Up and 式，所以填to educate. Stretch"exercise.This simple routine involves standing up 59,which/that考查定语从句。句意：我决定，如果我知 from your desk.stretching your arms.legs and back,and 道有哪家公司大量使用塑料，我就给它发邮件，敦促它 taking a few deep breaths.It's a quick and easy way to get 减少使用塑抖。分析句子结构，59，used a lot of your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. plastic是一个定语从句，修饰先行词a company,关系 This exercise is recommended for several reasons. 词在从句中作主语，指物，用which或that引导该从 First,it helps to combat the negative effects of pro- 句，所以填which/that。 longed sitting,such as back pain and stiffness.Second.it 60.and考查连词。句意：我找到了这家公司的联系方 can improve your focus and concentration,making it easier 式，并给公司总裁发了电子邮件。“found”和“emailed” to stay engaged in class.Lastly,it promotes a healthy and 之间是并列关系，用and连接两个并列的谓语动词，所 active lifestyle,which is essential for overall well-being. 以填and。 So,next time you feel a bit sluggish during class,re- 6l.harmful考查形容词。句意：我告诉他塑料对环境的 member to stand up and stretch!It's a small change that 危害，并请他考虑使用更环保的产品。该处为how引 can make a big difference in your day. 导的感叹句，how之后接形容词，所以填harmful。 Writing 2 62.excited考查形客词。句意：当他给我回信时，我很兴 Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. 奋。该空作was之后的表语，用形容词，修饰人，用 His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values. u十ed形式的形容词，所以填excited respect for elders,and social harmony.Confucius traveled 63.was考查时态和主谓一致。句意：我给写信的最大的 throughout the country,imparting his wisdom to countless 公司之一是巴黎阿拉斯加航空公司。根据定语从句的 disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society. 谓语动词“wrote”可知这里描述发生在过去的事情，用 一般过去时：one of十形容词最高级十可数名词复数 The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. 结构中，谓语动词用单数，所以填was。 His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of 64.representative考查名词。句意：一位公司代表回信告 Chinese culture,fostering respect for authority,harmoni- 诉我，该航空公司将把每天1200个航班的型料杯换成 ous relationships.and the pursuit of knowledge.Even to- 纸杯。该空作句子主语，用名词，前面有不定冠词修 day,his ideas continue to guide individuals and communi- 饰，用名词单数，所以填representative. ties in China. 65.from考查介词。句意：一住公司代表回信告诉我，该 Confucius's life offers valuable lessons,which serves as 航空公司将把每天1200个航班的塑料杯换成纸杯 a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. 介词短语om.。.to..。以…到…符合语境，故填 His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, frome compassion.and social responsibility. 第五部分写作 Writing 3 Learning a New skill 第一章应用文写作 When I was in my primary school.I had an opportu- (一)短文投稿十邀请信（邮件）十申请信（邮件） nity to attend a musical contest held in my school.That 1.短文投稿 was the first time I had watched a live musical perform- Writing 1 ance.The fantastic players touched me deeply. 「语篇解读]本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇 短文向校英文报“Sports and Health'”栏目投稿，向同学们 I asked my parents to allow me to take up a piano les- 推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。 son for beginner.In the beginning,it was quite difficult to read the notes on the stave.However,it did not demoralize 解析：1.词汇积累 厌倦：be tired of-→be fed up with me.I spent most of my leisure hours to practice piano.Al- 首先：first-→above all though my fingers were painful after few hours practice,I 减轻：combat→relieve felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely. 提高：improve,enhance Even though I will not pursue as my life career,I will 2.句式拓展 still continue learning and playing piano as my hobby.It is 简单句变复合句 simply because music is the best medication for my soul. 原句：This simple routine involves standing up from your Writing 4 desk,stretching your arms,legs and back,and taking a few Learning English Beyond the Classroom deep breaths. Nowadays,with the growing popularity of smartpho- 拓展句：This is a simple routine that involves standing up nes and computers,an increasing number of students are from your desk,stretching your arms,legs and back,and choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various taking a few deep breaths. ways. 最新真题分类特训·英语 It can easily be seen that the percentage of students in writing a composition in English.Therefore,we hope who choose listening to English songs and watching Eng- you,a native speaker,would like to give us some advice on lish movies is respectively 65%and 50%.However,those what we can do well with our English compositions. choosing reading English books and visiting English learn The online talk is scheduled to take place between ing websites only account for 18%and 12%. 5:00pm and 6:30pm this Saturday,and if you will,I will As far as I'm concerned,it is a disturbing trend.For send you the link to Tencent Meeting,an video app compa- students,what benefits most to their study is reading Eng- rable to Zoom. lish books.Because of their lack of self-discipline,they're I would appreciate it so much if we could have you in more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. the talk. It's urgent for students themselves to improve their self- Yours. discipline,and it's also urgent for parents and teachers to Li Hua strengthen the guidance. Writing 3 Writing 5 工写作指导] When it comes to ocean.its pollution is becoming 主题语境：人与社会一人际沟通（良好的人际关系）。邀请 more and more serious.World Ocean Day,falling on June 朋友参与活动体验 gh,is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation. ①首段：开门见山说明写作目的。 Ocean plays a key role in our world.Not only does ②主体：a.具体交代邀请原因：b.邀请内容：活动性质、时 ocean offer us sufficient food,but also it maintains the bal- 间、地点、日期：心，有关要求和希望 ance of nature.Thus,it is imperative to protect ocean.First ③尾段：a.再次盛情邀请：b.希望尽快答复。 of all,what we can do is to place importance on our daily [参考范文] actions.For example,garbage can't be thrown into ocean. Dear Michael. What's more,we can also hand out leaflets to call on more Our school just opened a well-equipped group-study people to protect the ocean.The more people are involved. room in the library,so I want to invite you to study with the better the ocean environment is. me this Saturday morning. All in all,it is high time that we devoted ourselves to The room is designed for six people and open from 8 protecting ocean.To protect ocean is to protect ourselves. a.m.to 20 p.m.The room facing south is so bright that 2.邀请信（邮件）》 we can not only enjoy ourselves in the sea of knowledge but Writing 1 bath in sunshine,Meanwhile,it has two well-performing Dear Caroline, computers and a big sereen.with which we can share our This is my first time that I have invited you to attend thoughts with each other.What's more,free printer is al- our program-Talk and Talk.It is ten years since Talk and ways ready whenever you need to print essays. Talk was established.This is an amazing program where I hope you can join me!Looking forward to your early you can share your ideas with students.Now.when having reply so I can make a reservation. trouble in learning English well,plenty of students urge to Yours. know how to deal with it.As our distinguished foreign lan- Li Hua guage teacher,your aid can help us a lot.If you are availa- 3.申请信（邮件》 ble on this Sunday.I together with the whole Talk and Writing 1 Talk staff am waiting for your coming.I'd appreciate it if Dear Sir'Madam. you take my invitation into consideration. I am Li Jin.an exchange student from China.Knowing Yours sincerely, that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school,I am Li Hua writing to apply for taking part in the activity. Writing 2 The theme of the activity involves Chinese food,tradi- [写作指导] tional Chinese handicrafts.Chinese calligraphy and paint 主题语境：人与社会一一人际沟通（良好的人际关系）。邀 ing.So I think this activity is very significant.which is con- 请明友在线分享英语写作经验。 ducive to spreading excellent traditional Chinese culture and (1)审人称和时态。邀请信中的主要人称是第一人称，一般会 promoting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. 用到两种时态：一般现在时和一般将来时。那么这篇作文中 As a Chinese.I have a passion for making Chinese cuisine, 人称就是我(I)和我们(we):时态可用do,wil十do。 for example dumplings.Not only can I teach participants (2)关键词的翻译。主要是围绕作文要点来确定相应的英 how to make dumplings,but also let them fall in love with 语的表达。 Chinese cuisine. (3)列要点提纲。一般是三段式。第一段（写信目的）：邀 I would appreciate it if you would enroll me in the 请信的第一段要涉及到两方面的内容：第一句可做简要的 event.Looking forward to your reply. 的白我介绍（名字加身份）。第二段（具体事宜）：这部分就 Sincerely yours, 是邀请信的重心所在，一般写一个过渡句来衔接上下文。 Li Jin 第三段（表达期待的心情）：最后一段要做到首尾呼应，再 Writing 2 次表明期望对方能够接受邀请的心情。 Dear Sir or Madam. (4)润色作文 I am writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese [参考范文] Painting Exhibition which will be held in your art gallery.I Dear Jim, think I am qualified for this job,because I have learned Chi- I'm writing to invite you to an internet-based talk nese painting since childhood.Equally important,I am flu- about how to improve English writing.The talk is thought ent in both Chinese and English,so I have no difficulty in important for us Chinese students,of whom most are poor communicating with others.If I am lucky enough to be cho- 详解详析 sen as a volunteer,I can show visitors around the gallery L点睛]L高分句型1 Hearing that you are planning a and answer their questions about the paintings,after some club activity with the theme of "Green Beijing"and need my proper training. help,I am writing to offer you my suggestions.(运用了 I would be very grateful if you could offer me the op- hat引导宾语从句) portunity.I'm looking forward to your reply. [高分句型2]I think you can carry out this activity in an Yours. interactive and experiential manner,which means students Li Hua can participate and have a better understanding of "Green (二)普通信（邮件）十通知 Beijing"through getting involved in different activities by 1.普通信（邮件） themselves5.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) Writing 1 「参考范文 [语篇解读]本篇是应用文写作。耍求考生给Chris写 Dear Jim, 封信，分享在公园上美术课的经历。 Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the 解析：1.词汇积累 theme of "Green Beijing"and need my help,I am writing 决定：decide-*determine to offer you my suggestions. 整个的：entire-,whole I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive 提供：offer-*provide and experiential manner,which means students can partici- 总之：in a word-"in short pate and have a better understanding of "Green Beijing" 2.句式拓展 through getting involved in different activities by them- 简单句变复合句 selves.You can showcase garbage classification on site, 原句：Inspired by the fantastic scenery,I decided to create plant trees and publicize sharing economy,which will all fit a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's into the theme of“Green Beijing”. pond.surrounded by blooming flowers. 拓展句：Because I was inspired by the fantastic scenery,I Hopefully,you will get some inspiration from my sug- decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge gestions.Wish you success. over the park's pond,which was surrounded by blooming Yours. flowers. Li Hua [点睛][高分句型I]We were tasked to draw or paint Writing 3 something that impressed us most..(that引导的定语从 Dear Ryan, 句) I'm Li Hua from Class 3.I think it's not a good idea [高分句型2]I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted. to randomly pair up students for the spoken English train- (as引导的时间状语从句) ing after class.The reasons are as follows. To begin with,randomly pairing up students may lead [参考范文] to unbalanced language abilities within the groups.This Dear Chris, can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a one may dominate the conversation,leaving little room for park last Friday. the other students to improve.Besides,students may feel We were tasked to draw or paint something that im- uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who pressed us most.Inspired by the fantastic scenery,I decid- they don't get along with or have difficulty communicating ed to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over with. the park's pond,surrounded by blooming flowers. My suggestion is to group students based on their lan- The entire experience was incredibly refreshing.Being guage abilities or to let students choose their own partners. surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but al- so offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and This way.everyone can feel more comfortable practicing bustle of school life.I felt a deep sense of peace as I paint- and improving their spoken English together. ed. Thank you for considering my suggestion. In a word,it was not just an art class:it was a mo Yours sincerely, ment of connection with nature that I truly cherished. Li Hua Yours. Writing 4 Li Hua Dear Chris. Writing 2 How is everything going?I hope everything is going [语篇解读]本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好 well back in Ireland. 友Jm策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。 Looking back,I find it has been a year since you came 解析：1.词汇积累 back to Ireland.I miss you so much.I still remember the 建议：suggestion→tip very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival 提供：offer→provide two years ago.It was at that festival that you shared so 开展：carry out-*conduct many interesting things about your country together. 主题：theme*topic through which I learned a lot about your food,culture and 2.句式拓展 history.We really enjoyed ourselves there.What is far more 同义句转换 原句：Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the important is that we became good friends then.Though I theme of "Green Beijing"and need my help,I am writing felt a little sorry that you left China last year.I am pleased to offer you my suggestions. to know you are leading a happy life in your hometown. 拓展句：Since you are planning a club activity with the I hope we can keep in touch often. theme of "Green Beijing"and need my help,I am writing Best wishes! to offer you my suggestions. Yours. Li Hua 最新真题分类特训·英语 Writing 5 [参考范文] Youth and Me Dear Jenny, Congratulations on the tenth anniversary of the launch I really like the idea of adding a new column to our of Youth. English newspaper.I'm writing to express that my predi- Youth has sparkled my interest in English and broad- lection goes to "Guess who I am",which capitalizes on an ened my horizons.It enables me to keep pace with the latest object clause to signal its potential contents. The column will serve as a catalyst for closer bonds be- news at home and abroad.Of all the Youth columns.I like tween students.Redoubling efforts to boost academic perform- Western World most.Written in simple but authentic Eng- ance,we pay little heed to other classmates'personalities,hob- lish,the articles introduce me to Western society and cul- bies,strengths,and even aspirations.Such an inviting col- ture.Amazingly,they also inspire me to appreciate my own umn,adopting a "description and guess"approach,must ex- culture more. pose everyone to others'characteristics,thus strengthening I hope to continue benefiting from reading it and may mutual understanding.More importantly,more friendships Youth stay in youth forever. will be forged,since the column enables us to befriend someone 2.通知 on the same wavelength. Writing This eye-catching column,I'm firmly convinced, Hello,everyone!Would you like to learn about how won't fail to grant the whole class a harmonious atmos- phere. we school developed in the past and will have a big im- Yours. provement in the future?Well,please come to watch the Li Hua short film called Growing Together,which we made.The Writing 2 film will show in the school hall of the western side of 审题分析 school at 10:00 am this Friday.This film which lasts for 审体裁 应用文（建议信） two hours may have some shortcomings in it,so we really hope you to offer some ideas and suggestions after watching it so that we can fill in the content and have an overall and UN Proposal 审人称 以第一人称为主 exact introduction to our school.If you have any idea or ad- Campaign 和时态 以一般现在时为主 vice,welcome to contact us by email or mobile phone. Thank you a lot! 提出的建议 审要点 School Union 建议的理由 (三)建议信十求助信十告知信十道歉信 [思路点拨]通过审题我们知道这是一篇建议信，要求给 十发言稿（演讲稿）十咨询信 参加联合国倡议狂集活动的好友提建议，写作时需紧扣倡 1.建议信 议内容和理由，因此，这篇建议信的结构框架可以安排 Writing 1 如下： [语篇解读]本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就外 开头：直接回应好友邮件，表明乐意提建议，并对朋友参加 教Jenny提出的校英文报增设一个栏目，在“Fun at my 这一活动表达祝福和鼓励。 主体：分点提出倡议并说明理由，理由要说明倡议的必要 school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项中给出自己的推荐， 性和青少年参与的可行性，做到思路清晰，逻辑填密。 并说明理由。 结尾：表达所提建议能被采用的期望。 [详解] [高级句式] 1.词汇积累 篇首句 表达：express→convey 1.With regard to the problem you mentioned in your letter. 利用：capitalize on→use my suggestions are as follows. 担当：serve as→act as 关于你在信中提到的问题，我的建议如下。 注意：pay heed to·take notice of 2.I'm glad to hear you're participating in the UN Proposal 2.句式拓展 Campaign!Here are my suggestions. 简单句变复合句 我很高兴听到你参加了联合国的倡议征集活动！以下 是我的建议 原句：Such an inviting column,adopting a“description 篇中句 and guess"approach.must expose everyone to others 1.When it comes to such a situation,I would like to sug- characteristics,thus strengthening mutual understand- gest that...For one thing...For another...What's ing. more.. 拓展句：Such an inviting column,which adopts a“de 当涉及这种情况时，我建议…一方面…另一方 scription and guess"approach,must expose everyone to 面…而且… others'characteristics,thus strengthening mutual under- 2.Suggest establishing online platforms where teens can standing. share stories and access professional guidance. [点睛][高分句型l]I'm writing to express that my 建议建立在线平台，让青少年可以分享故事并获得专业 predilection goes to "Guess who I am",which capitalizes 指导。 篇尾句 on an object clause to signal its potential contents,.(运用了 1.I hope you will find my suggestions/advice helpful,use that引导的宾语从句，which引导的定语从句。) ful/practical/beneficial. [高分句型2]More importantly,more friendships will be 我希望你会认为我的建议是有帮助的/有用的：实用的/ forged,since the column enables us to befriend someone on 有益的。 the same wavelength.(运用了since引导的原因状语 2.I believe your voice will resonate! 从句。) 我相信你的声音会引起共鸣！ 详解详析 [参考范文] 2.求助信 Dear Jim. Writing I'm glad to hear you're participating in the UN Pro- [审题指导] posal Campaign!Here are my suggestions. [审题]三审：人称，时态，题材 First,focus on climate changes.Rising temperatures 「人称]第一人称 and extreme weather affect everyone,especially the youth. [时态] 将来时和一般现在时 You could propose global school programs to teach eco- [题材]求助信（征求意见） friendly habits like recycling or planting trees.Such initia- [主旨大意] tives empower students to drive change locally. 介绍中国文化给外国朋友，发布在英文网站上，这是 Second.advocate mental health support.Academic 班会的内容，因此求助外国友人，征求他们的意见。 pressure is widespread.Suggest establishing online plat- [参考范文] forms where teens can share stories and access professional guidance.This builds a supportive community across bor- Dear Chris. ders. How is everything going with you lately?A class Both topics address urgent global issues and highlight meeting will be held in my school about Chinese traditional youth's role in solving them.I believe your voice will reso- cultural and it will be displayed on the English website.I nate! am writing to ask some advice from you on what kind of Yours, Chinese conventional cultural attracts the foreigners like Li Hua you most. Writing 3 As we all know.Chinese traditional culture includes [语篇解读]本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。外国好友 calligraphy,Chinese knots,Chinese paintings,paper cutting Jim准各给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中 and so on.Besides.Chinese culture also includes various 国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，递请考 cultural thoughts and spiritual concepts in the national his- 生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。 tory.How much do you want to know about each part,and 解析：1.词汇积累 would you please tell me which part you are curious about? 很好的：great -wonderful What type of introduction will help foreigners to have a 成就：achievement,accomplishment much clearer knowledge of their interested section? 建议：suggestion→advice Your reply will be highly appreciated and thank you for 此外：in addition-*what's more your help.Looking forward to hearing from you soon. 2.句式拓展 Yours. 句式变换 原句：It's great to hear you're planning to write about Li Hua China's achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversa- 3.告知信 ry of the founding of this country. Writing 拓最句：It's great to hear what you're planning to write [参考范文] about is China's achievements on the occasion of the 75th Dear Nancy anniversary of the founding of this country. I am very glad to receive your E-mail.I am very grate- [点睛][高分句型1门To begin with,talk about ful to you and your family for taking care of me during my China's economic growth and technological advancements. study tour in the UK.And wish you all the best. which are the highlights in the past few decades.(运用了 Now that I have finished my high school studies,my which引导的善限定性定语从句) parents and I are going to travel to Beijing.I'm going to [高分句型2]Then,projects like the Belt and Road Initi- Tian'anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great ative make a good topic to discuss because it showeases Wall.In addition.I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy China's determination to build a shared future with the the elegant demeanor of famous universities.I have decided world.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句) to register for the computer major.With the rapid develop- [参考范文 ment of the Internet industry.the high-paying employment Dear Jim. in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the In- It's great to hear you're planning to write about ternet tide.Before choosing,consult people engaged in this China's achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversa- major or go to training institutions for consultation.Only ry of the founding of this country.Here are a few sugges- with a clear goal,we will have targeted learning in the fu- tions for your article. ture,which will be more efficient. To begin with.talk about China's economic growth and technological advancements.which are the highlights Yours. in the past few decades.Then,projects like the Belt and Li Jin Road Initiative make a good topie to discuss because it 4.道歉信 showeases China's determination to build a shared future Writing with the world.In addition.you can also mention China's [解题] role in helping solving global issues such as the global war- [题材]道款信 ming,offering a more comprehensive view. [人称]第一人称 Looking forward to reading your article! [人物关系]同英国好友Jim Yours. [段落]1.简短寒暄2.表达歉意并说明原因 Li Hua 3.提出建议并给出理由 最新真题分类特训·英语 [参考范文] [参考范文] Dear Jim, Development of Transport in China I'm sorry to inform you that I can't go out with you From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient trans- this weekend.I've just been told that I have to go and visit port.Chinese transport has seen an enormous develop- my sick grandfather in the countryside,who was suddenly ment.Firstly,shared bicycles have become a popular choice admitted to the hospital.I hope the change won't cause you in cities,providing an eco-friendly and cost-effective way to too much trouble. travel short distances.Secondly,the high-speed train net- How about going out next Saturday morning?If it's work has revolutionized long-distance travel,significantly convenient for you,let's meet at the school gate at 9:00. reducing travel time across the country.Finally,the rise of Please let me know what time suits you best.I should be new energy vehicles reflects China's commitment to sus- available anytime next weekend. tainable development and reducing carbon emissions.These In addition,next Saturday,there will be a flower advancements highlight China's progress in creating a mod- show in Beihai Park.Then we can go to see the flowers to- ern,efficient,and environmentally friendly transport sys- tem. gether. I am looking forward to your early reply. Writing 3 写作指导] Yours. 主题语境：人与社会一人际沟通（良好的人际关系） Li Hua (1)审题材：成员招募：(2)审时态：一般现在时为主，进行 5.发言稿（演讲稿） 时等为辅助：(3)审人称：第一、第二人称为主；(4)审要点： Writing 1 构思文章是否符合题目要求，主旨突出，内容要点齐全，写 [语篇解读]本篇书面表达属于演讲稿。要求考生针对 作对象明确，语言的选用得当，符合要求等 都分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象陈述看法并 「参考范文] 提出建议。 Hi!My name is Li Jin,a member from Spoken Eng- [详解] lish Club.Now I would like to represent our Club to recruit 1.词汇积累 new members. 记录：record→document As you can see,various activities are being held in our 缺，点：drawback→disadvantage Club,such as English Speech Contest,and Poetry Repeti- 分散注意力：distract·divert tion,etc.I have gained a lot from this fantastic Club.not 建议：suggest·propose only because it builds up courage and confidence in me by 2.句式拓展 practising but also because communicating with others easi- 并列句变复合句 ly in English helps me make more friends. 原句：In my opinion,it can be a fun way to record cam If you are interested in oral English,you can join us to pus life,but it also has its drawbacks. explore a new world,and become a new star in our Club. 拓展句：In my opinion,it can be a fun way that we can We are expecting your joining. use to record campus life,but it also has its drawbacks. Writing 4 [点睛][高分句型1]Not only may it distract us from [写作指导 our studies and even disrupt the school order.but it might ⊙题型解读 also cause unnecessary comparisons and affect our self-es- 本篇书面表达考查应用文中的发言稿，属于给提纲作 teem when the videos don't get the expected response. 文。要求学生以“Be smart online learners'”为题，写一篇发 用了not only...but also.,.并列结构和从属连词when引 言稿参赛，主题语境为人与自我中的善于学习，设置更加 导的时间状语从句) 贴近真实生活的英语交际任务情境，考生非常熟悉并有话 [高分句型2]I suggest we should limit the time for fil- 可说，虽给出了写作提纲，但仍具有一定的开放性和灵 ming and choose proper places,(运用了省略连词that的 活性。 宾语从句和虚拟语气) 回审题分析 [参考范文] 写一篇发言稿 My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus 要求 主题为人与自我 Recently,some of us have been filming short videos on 宁数100左右 campus.In my opinion,it can be a fun way to record cam- 在线学习成为学习的重要方式 pus life,but it also has its drawbacks.Not only may it dis- 写 分析在线学习的特点 优势 tract us from our studies and even disrupt the school order, 审题分析 but it might also cause unnecessary comparisons and affect 点 不足 分享在线学习建议 our self-esteem when the videos don't get the expected re- sponse. 以第一人称为主 I suggest we should limit the time for filming and 人称和时态 一般现在时为主， choose proper places.let's focus more on our academic 兼用一般将米时态 tasks and make good use of our time on campus. ⊙思路点拔 Thank you! 在分析写作要求及所给提钢后，以所给标愿和文章黄 Writing 2 句为依托对所给要点进行扩展，全文以三段式为宜，首句 [语篇解读]根据提供的关于共享单车、高铁和新能源汽 已经给出，第二段和第三段为写作重点。.先介绍线上学习 车的三幅图片，撰写一篇题目为“中同交通发展”的发言 的优势，之后是线上学习的缺点，自然引出第三段的内容， 稿，立足中国科技发展，培养学生创新意识和科学精神，衫 也就是提出在线学习建议。写作内容要条理清晰，并恰当 显时代发展，强化现代化人才建设，实现人才强国，引导学 使用高级句式以提升文章档次，但所用语言要符合发言稿 生关注我国经济社会的发展变化，增强国家富强、民族复 的长短句结合，朗朗上口的特点，同时应在结尾处发出呼 兴的自豪感和自信心。 吁以引起共鸣。 详解详析 [参考范文] [参考范文] Be smart online learners Dear Bob. Learning online has become an important way to study I'm sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with recently.However,each coin has two sides.So is learning you on Friday afternoon.I have just found that I have to at- online.On the one hand,it is surely convenient and flexible tend an important class meeting that afternoon.I hope the for us to learn online,because it is up to us to decide what change will not cause you too much trouble. we learn and where and when we study.What's more,we Shall we go on Saturday morning?We can set out ear- can learn the lessons repeatedly.On the other hand,learn- ly so that we'll have more time to read and select books.If it's convenient for you,let's meet at 8:30 outside the school ing online has some weaknesses,the biggest of which is low gate.If not,let me know what time suits you best.I should efficiency caused by a lack of self-discipline. be available any time after school next week. So how can we be smart online learners?First,it's Yours. necessary to have a quiet and comfortable room,which con- Li Hua tributes to focusing attention.Second,good time manage- [亮点]范文包括了所有要点内容，做到了语意连贯。范文 ment can improve our learning efficiency.More important- 使用了宾语从句that I have to attend an important class meet- ly,we should form a learning group online to motivate each ing that afternoon the change will not cause you too much other. trouble:目的款语从句so that we'll have more time to read and 6.咨询信 select books;条件句Ifit's convenient for you;省略句If not等， Writing 长短句结合，使内容更加丰富。 [语篇解读]本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给 2.感谢信 外教Chris写一封邮件，询问他上个月答应写一篇介绍加 Writing 拿大体育运动的文章的进展，并提醒交稿时间。 Dear Alex. [详解] I've just learned you're leaving for the United States 1.词汇积累 soon.At this moment,I want to express my sincere thanks to you for your help. 询问：inquire→ask Honestly speaking.but for your help.I wouldn't have 理解：understanding~comprehension made such great progress in English.With your help,I won 此外：alsobesides first prize in an English speech contest.Whenever I have 肯定地：surely·certainly difficulties,you always cheer me up and help me out.Words 2.句式拓展 can't describe how thankful I am. 简单句变复合句 Wish you a pleasant journey home. 原句：I'm writing to politely inquire about the progress of Yours. the article. Li Hua 拓展句：As you know,I'm writing to politely inquire a (五)其他类：人物介绍十事件介绍十新闻报道十 bout the progress of the article. 网贴 L点睛][高分句型l]Would you mind letting me know 1.人物介绍 how it's going？(运用了how引导的宾语从句。) Writing [高分句型2]Your insights into Canadian sports will surely The person I respect enrich our readers'understanding of global sports culture,which We have a lot of respectable people around us.They will be of benefit to us..(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从 may be our teachers,parents or one of our elders.As for 句。) me,my father is the person I respect most.My father is a [参考范文] teacher who loves his work and his students very much.He Dear Chris, works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me Hope this email finds you well!Last month,you about his work. kindly agreed to write an article about sports in Canada. When I come across the problems of learning in my and we're all looking forward to reading it. study,my father will listen to me patiently and encourage I'm writing to politely inquire about the progress of me to overcome the difficulties bravely.He achieved a lot the article.Would you mind letting me know how it's go- in his work,respected by his students.So.in my mind my ing?Also,could I remind you that the deadline for submis- father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply. sion is this Friday,June 14th?Your insights into Canadian 2.事件介绍 sports will surely enrich our readers'understanding of Writing global sports culture,which will be of benefit to us. Hello,everyone!Aiming at promoting Chinese cul- Thank you again for your support! ture,a students'traditional Chinese painting exhibition is Best wishes, held by our school in the library from May 30th to Li Hua June 5th. (四)致歉信十感谢信 As someone who has visited the exhibition yesterday,I L.致歉信 personally thought it was amazing.It not only shows us dif- ferent types of painting,but also various tools related to Writing painting,such as brush pens.papers and so on.Apart from [写作思路]题目要求写一封道歉信，就不能如约一起去 displaying,there are many other great activities like a paint- 书店，向Bb道歉，使用第一人称和一般现在时进行写作 ing knowledge quiz,lectures and games. 写作内容包括：表示歉意：说明原因：另约时间。注意使用 It is a visual feast that anyone who's interested in tra- 连接词，使作文内容连贯。 ditional Chinese painting should no miss. 最新真题分类特训·英语 [范文亮点]宣传稿应着重于宣传该展览的亮点，以达到 [高级句式] 及引更多人来观展的目的。根据题目要求，先开门见山指 篇首句 出该展览的基本信息（时间和地点），第二段在介绍观展感 1.Hi everyone!I'm Li Jin from Chenguang Middle School. 受时应把展览的亮点一并写进去，如展览中有什么值得看 I am deeply fascinated by this initiative.and it strikes me 或者有哪些特别的活动等等；最后总结该展览并推荐更多 that... 人来观展。在写作过程中，多使用高级句型和结构，如范 大家好！我是晨光中学的李津。我对这一提议深深着 文中的定语从句，现在分词作状语和过去分词作后置定语 迷，并且突然意识到… 等，这样文章读起来不会显得索然无味。 2.I'm glad to participate in the discussion on the forum. 3.新闻报道 From my perspective.the six proposed entries for the Writing cosmic-bound disc are... [审题指导]本篇作文要求写一篇报道。考生需要运用 很高兴能参与论坛的讨论。在我看来，这六份拟收录进 简洁精练的语言概述事件的主要内容，文章中应包含新闻 飞向宇宙的光盘的提名内容… 报道的五要素(5W:何时when,何地where,何人who,何 篇中句 因why,何事what):在新闻报道中应避免使用第一人称， 应从第三视角进行客观描述：活动已经结束，因此应用一 1.I believe...stands out,they are not only...but also.... 般过去时。 which mirrors the very essence of human ambition to... 考生要紧扣主题，展开想象，从参加人员，跑步路线 我认为…尤为突出，它们不仅…而且…，这反映 活动反响等方而进行写作，使每一个要点都得到明确的 了人类…的雄心本质。 体现 2.I'd pick...,an enduring icon of human perseverance,is [参考范文] not merely a...:it is a....representing... A Cross-Country Running Race 我会选择…，它作为人类毅力的不朽象征，不仅是一 Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country 个…，更是一个…，代表着… running race,which nearly drew the attention of every 篇尾句 student and teacher of our school. 1.In conclusion.while each nominated item holds intrinsie The students selected from every class took part in the value,...can serve as a powerful emblem.telling the competition.The route measured five kilometers,from our universe that we are a species capable of... school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain.Every runner 总之，尽管每一项提名都有其内在价值，但…可以作 tried their best to finish the task.with their classmates 为一个强有力的象征，向字宙宜告我们是一个有能力 along the way giving them necessarily help as well as en- ……的物种。 couragement.At last.all the runners managed to arrive at 2.Ultimately.be it the ancient grandeur of the pyramids or the finish line,receiving cheers from all the directions. the futuristic vitality of high-speed trains,what truly The activity was highly spoken of,because not only matters is that... did it provide chance for us to exercise,but also made us 最终，无论是金字塔的古老宏伟，还是高铁的未来活力， more cohesive. 真正重要的是… 4.网贴 「参考范文] Writing Hi everyone!I'm Li Jin from Chenguang Middle [审题分析] School.Glad to join the forum discussion!The six nomina- 审体裁 应用文（网站） ted entries for the cosmic-bound disc are impressively di- 以第一人称为主， verse,covering language ("hello"in various tongues). 英文跟贴 审人称 第三人称为辅 iconic architecture (the Great Wall and pyramids).tradi- tional art Peking Opera),natural harmony (animal sounds). 和时态 以一般现在时为主 and modern tech (China's high-speed trains).Together,they mirror humanity's ereativity.history.and bond with cul- 六项提名的概括 ture and nature. I believe China's high-speed trains stand out.More 审要点 你的推荐 than advanced transport.they're bridges uniting cities and people.With speeds up to 350km/h,they've revolutionized 推荐理由 travel,shrinking distances to hours.Their vast network [思路点拨] symbolizes human innovation and the drive to foster unity 本题为应用文中的论坛跟帖写作，需符合论坛交流语境， and shared growth.For extraterrestrial civilizations,they'd 同时要提出国绕“人类文明音像资料收录”提出推荐。 highlight our ambition to build a connected world. 开头：以论坛交流感的问候切入，快速概括六项提名共性 In conclusion,while all nominations are valuable, (如涵盖语言、建筑、艺术、自然、科技等维度，展现人类文 high-speed trains powerfully represent our ability to turn 明的多元与独特)，自然引出后续推荐内容。 dreams into a unified future. 主体：先点明所选内容（可从六项里选，或另推合理项），再 从“文明代表性”（体现文化独特性、科技艺术成就等）、 第二章读后续写 “外太空传播价值”（让外星文明/未来人类快速感知地球 主题1个人成长 魅力、善意等)展开理由闲述，结合具体细节（如高铁的速 Writing I 度、技术突破：京剧的艺术形式、文化富意)增强说服力。 [语篇解读]本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了作者作 结尾：总结推荐内容的意义，呼应“记录人类文明”的主题， 为国际学生在爱尔兰因中文名字发音难而遭遇挑战，之后 升华到对文明交流、共享的期待，让跟帖有情感共略与 在一次课堂讨论中分享名字含义，意识到分享文化身份重 深度。 要性，并借此与同学增进文化理解的故事。