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2025年暑假新七年级英语衔接学习系列
专题23 书面表达之书信类(词汇句法策略)
一、试题类型
(一)介绍类书信
1. 自我介绍:要求学生在书信中介绍自己的基本信息,如姓名、年龄、来自哪里、就读学校、兴趣爱好等。例如给笔友写信,开篇可能是 “Dear friend, I am very glad to write to you. My name is Li Hua. I am 13 years old and I come from Beijing. I study in No.1 Middle School.”(亲爱的朋友,很高兴给你写信。我叫李华,今年13岁,来自北京,在第一中学上学)。
2. 介绍他人或事物:介绍家人、朋友、学校、城市等。以介绍学校为例,会涉及学校的规模、设施、课程、师生等方面。如 “My school is big and beautiful. There are about 2,000 students and 200 teachers. We have a big library with thousands of books, and a playground where we can do sports after class.”(我的学校又大又漂亮。大约有2000名学生和200名老师。我们有一个藏书数千册的大图书馆,还有一个课后可以做运动的操场)。
(二)邀请类书信
1. 邀请参加活动:包括生日派对、野餐、聚会、运动会等。信中要说明活动的时间、地点、活动内容以及邀请对方的原因。比如邀请朋友参加生日派对,“Dear Tom, I am going to have a birthday party at my home this Sunday at 6 p.m. There will be delicious food, games and music. I really hope you can come and celebrate with me.”(亲爱的汤姆,这个周日下午6点我将在家里举办生日派对。会有美味的食物、游戏和音乐。我真的希望你能来和我一起庆祝)。
2. 邀请来访:邀请对方来自己所在的城市、学校或家里参观游玩。要介绍当地或自己家的特色,让对方有兴趣前来。如 “Dear Lucy, I sincerely invite you to visit my city. It is a beautiful place with many historical sites and delicious local foods. You can visit the ancient temple and taste our famous dumplings. I will show you around when you come.”(亲爱的露西,我真诚地邀请你来参观我的城市。这是一个美丽的地方,有许多历史遗迹和美味的当地美食。你可以参观古老的寺庙,品尝我们著名的饺子。你来的时候我会带你四处逛逛)。
(三)求助类书信
1. 学习求助:在学习上遇到困难,如英语语法不懂、数学题不会做、写作困难等,向老师、同学或笔友求助。例如 “Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to ask for your help. I have a lot of trouble in learning English grammar, especially the use of tenses. Can you give me some advice on how to learn it well?”(亲爱的史密斯老师,我写信是向您求助。我在学习英语语法上有很多困难,尤其是时态的用法。您能给我一些如何学好它的建议吗?)。
2. 生活求助:生活中遇到问题,如和父母闹矛盾、与朋友发生争吵、丢失物品等,寻求他人的帮助或建议。像 “Dear friend, I had an argument with my best friend yesterday. I don't know what to do now. Can you give me some suggestions on how to make up with him?”(亲爱的朋友,我昨天和我最好的朋友吵架了。我不知道现在该怎么办。你能给我一些如何和他和好的建议吗?)。
二、话题特点
(一)贴近生活
1. 日常活动相关:书信话题常围绕学生的日常生活,如学校的一天、周末活动、假期安排等。比如描述学校一天的学习生活,从早上起床、上学,到上课、课间休息、课外活动,再到放学回家。“My school day is busy but interesting. I get up at 7 a.m. and go to school by bike. We have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon. After class, I often play basketball with my classmates.”(我的学校生活忙碌但有趣。我早上7点起床,骑自行车上学。我们上午有四节课,下午有三节课。课后,我经常和同学们一起打篮球)。
2. 人际关系方面:涉及与家人、朋友、老师的相处。如写一封给父母的信,表达对他们的感激之情;给朋友写信,分享最近的趣事或倾诉烦恼。“Dear parents, I want to say thank you for your love and care. You always support me and help me with my study. I love you very much.”(亲爱的爸爸妈妈,我想说谢谢你们的爱和关心。你们总是支持我,帮助我学习。我非常爱你们)。
(二)具有实用性
1. 解决实际问题:求助类书信旨在解决学生在学习或生活中遇到的具体问题,通过书信寻求他人的帮助和建议,使学生能够将所学知识运用到实际情境中。例如在学习英语写作困难时,向老师求助,老师的回复可能会提供一些写作技巧和练习方法,帮助学生提高写作能力。
2. 促进交流互动:邀请类书信和介绍类书信能够帮助学生与他人建立联系,分享信息,促进交流。通过给笔友写信介绍自己的国家、文化,能增进不同地区学生之间的了解和友谊。“Dear pen pal, I would like to tell you something about my country, China. It is a country with a long history and rich culture. We have many traditional festivals, such as the Spring Festival and the Mid - Autumn Festival.”(亲爱的笔友,我想给你讲讲我的国家,中国。这是一个历史悠久、文化丰富的国家。我们有许多传统节日,比如春节和中秋节)。
三、试题考法
(一)要点考查
1. 信息完整性:要求学生在书信中涵盖题目所给定的所有要点信息,不能遗漏。比如在写一封介绍学校开放日活动的书信时,题目给出了活动时间、活动内容(参观校园、听课、与老师交流等)、邀请对方参加等要点,学生必须在信中完整地呈现这些内容。
2. 要点阐述清晰:不仅要写出要点,还要对要点进行适当的阐述和扩展,使内容丰富、具体。以介绍学校图书馆为例,不能只说 “We have a library.”,而要进一步描述图书馆的规模、藏书种类、开放时间等,如 “Our school library is quite large. It has thousands of books, including storybooks, science books and magazines. It is open from 8 a.m. to 5 p.m. on weekdays, providing us with a great place to read and study.”(我们学校图书馆很大。有数千册图书,包括故事书、科学书籍和杂志。工作日从早上8点到下午5点开放,为我们提供了一个阅读和学习的好地方)。
(二)语言运用
1. 词汇准确恰当:考查学生对词汇的掌握和运用能力,要求使用准确、恰当的词汇来表达自己的意思。在描述食物美味时,不能只用 “good”,可以用 “delicious”“tasty” 等更生动的词汇。如 “The food at the party was so delicious that everyone enjoyed it.”(派对上的食物非常美味,每个人都很喜欢)。
2. 语法正确规范:关注学生对基本语法知识的运用,包括动词的时态、语态,名词的单复数,代词的使用等。例如在描述过去发生的事情时,要用一般过去时。“I visited the museum yesterday. I saw many interesting things there.”(我昨天参观了博物馆。在那里我看到了许多有趣的东西)。
(三)格式与逻辑
1. 书信格式正确:书信有特定的格式,包括称呼、正文、结束语、署名等部分。学生需要掌握正确的格式,称呼顶格写,结束语如 “Best wishes!”“Yours sincerely” 等要写在正文之后的右下角,署名在结束语的下一行右下角。
2. 逻辑连贯合理:书信内容要逻辑清晰,段落之间过渡自然。在介绍多个事物或活动时,可以使用连接词,如 “firstly”“secondly”“finally” 等,使文章层次分明。如 “Firstly, we will visit the school library where you can see a large collection of books. Secondly, there will be a class for you to attend. Finally, you can talk with our teachers and learn about our study life.”(首先,我们将参观学校图书馆,在那里你可以看到大量的藏书。其次,会有一节课让你去听。最后,你可以和我们的老师交流,了解我们的学习生活)。
四、解答策略
(一)认真审题
1. 明确书信类型:仔细阅读题目,判断是介绍类、邀请类还是求助类书信,不同类型的书信有不同的写作重点和语言风格。例如邀请类书信要突出邀请的热情,求助类书信要诚恳地说明问题。
2. 确定要点信息:圈出题目中的要点,如时间、地点、人物、事件等,并思考如何将这些要点合理地组织到书信内容中。在写一封邀请朋友参加运动会的书信时,要明确运动会的时间、地点、比赛项目以及邀请朋友的原因等要点。
(二)组织内容
1. 开头部分:根据书信类型选择合适的开头方式。介绍类书信可以先简单问候,然后直接说明写信目的是介绍自己或某物;邀请类书信可以表达对对方的想念,再引出邀请的事情;求助类书信则开门见山地说明自己遇到的问题。如 “Dear friend, I haven't heard from you for a long time. I am writing to invite you to our school sports meeting.”(亲爱的朋友,好久没有你的消息了。我写信是想邀请你参加我们学校的运动会)。
2. 中间部分:详细阐述要点内容,按照一定的逻辑顺序进行描述。可以先介绍主要的、重要的内容,再介绍次要的。在介绍学校时,可以先介绍学校的整体印象,再分别介绍教学楼、操场、图书馆等设施。“My school is really wonderful. The teaching buildings are modern and well - equipped. We have a big playground where we can do various sports. And the library is my favorite place, full of interesting books.”(我的学校非常棒。教学楼很现代化,设备齐全。我们有一个大操场,可以在那里进行各种运动。图书馆是我最喜欢的地方,有很多有趣的书)。
3. 结尾部分:总结书信内容,再次强调写信目的。邀请类书信可以表达期待对方的回复和到来;求助类书信可以表示希望得到对方的帮助;介绍类书信可以询问对方的相关情况。如 “I really hope you can come to the sports meeting. Please write back and tell me if you are available. Looking forward to your reply.”(我真的希望你能来参加运动会。请回信告诉我你是否有空。期待你的回复)。
(三)运用语言
1. 运用积累词汇:回忆平时所学的相关词汇,尽量使用丰富多样的词汇来表达。描述天气好,除了 “sunny”,还可以用 “bright and clear” 等。如 “It was a bright and clear day, perfect for our picnic.”(那是一个晴朗明媚的日子,非常适合我们野餐)。
2. 遵循语法规则:写作过程中注意语法的正确使用,写完后仔细检查动词时态、名词单复数等是否有误。如果描述过去的一次旅行,动词要用一般过去时。“We visited the Great Wall last week. It was an amazing experience.”(我们上周参观了长城。那是一次很棒的经历)。
(四)检查修改
1. 格式检查:查看书信格式是否正确,称呼、结束语、署名是否符合规范。
2. 内容检查:检查要点是否齐全,内容是否表达清楚,逻辑是否连贯。看看有没有遗漏的信息,句子之间的衔接是否自然。
3. 语言检查:检查语法错误、拼写错误以及词汇使用是否恰当。修改不通顺的句子,使语言更加准确、流畅。
1.假如你是李华,你的澳大利亚好友Tom 对中国传统文化和节日习俗很感兴趣,他来信说想了解春节的习俗,请根据提示,给他写一封70词左右的回信。
提示:
1.春节通常在一月或二月;
2.春节是个重要的节日,是家人团聚的时刻:
3.在除夕夜有大型的家庭聚餐,我们通常吃饺子和美味的食物; 饭后看春节晚会:
4.孩子们拜访长辈送祝福,长辈给孩子们红包:
5.……
参考词汇:春节晚会 the Spring Festival Gala 长辈 the elder 红包 red envelope
要求:
1. 把提示信息表达完整,意思连贯,语法正确。
2.可适当发挥,词数在70 词左右。
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your last letter. I’m very glad you are interested in Chinese traditions and culture. I will tell you some traditions about Spring Festival.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2.为更好地开展社团活动,红星学校学生会围绕“New Clubs, More Fun”这一主题征集意见稿。假如你是李华,请你参考问卷内容写一封信给学生会。
要求:
(1)包含所有提示信息,可适当扩展,所给提示语供选择使用;
(2)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息;
(3)词数60 左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
提示语:
expect (期望) develop our interest in...show our talents (展示才能) be close to nature
Questionnaire (问卷)
Dear studentsWe’d like to know your ideas about school clubs. Please complete the questionnaire and return it to us.
Students’ Union
1.What is your hobby?
□ Reading books □ Taking photos
□ Playing basketball □ Others_______
2. What club do you want to join?
□Music club □ Sports club
□ Reading club □ Others_______
3.What is your advice (建议) on club activities?
□ Go hiking □ Act out stories
□ Play musical instruments □ Others
4.The reasons for your advice.
_________________________________________________________
Dear Students’ Union,
I’m glad to share my ideas about school clubs. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
3.良好的习惯成就美好的未来,良好的习惯让人受益终身。假设你叫李辉,你的美国好友John来信询问该如何培养好习惯。请你用英语写一封回信,谈谈你对养成良好习惯的看法及未来一年的计划。参考词汇:培养好习惯 develop good habits
要求:1. 80-100词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 要点齐全,条理清晰,语句通顺,可适当扩展。
3. 不得出现真实的大名和校名。
要点:1. 交代写作目的,浅述对培养良好习惯的看法。
2. 分享你打算培养的习惯(如:学习、运动、饮食、阅读)及未来一年的计划。
3. 表达对未来的期待与希望。
Dear John,
How is everything going? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
4.假如你是李明,你校英语读书社团正在招募新成员,你想加入该社团。请根据以下提示,用英语写一封申请信。
提示:(1)介绍你的基本信息;
(2)介绍你的兴趣爱好;
(3)说明你想加入该社团的理由。
要求:(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括提示中所有要点内容;
(3)词数:40词左右。
Dear sir,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Ming
5.课后服务实施后,为使学校课外活动更加丰富多彩,你校决定成立音乐俱乐部。假设你是Mike Davis,想申请加入音乐俱乐部。请根据以下信息,向音乐俱乐部负责人高老师写一封自荐信。
Name
Mike Davis
Age
13
Class
Class 6, Grade 7
Favorite subject
Music
Abilities
Sing, play a musical instrument…
Reasons to apply (申请理由)
Want to make more friends…
要求:1. 内容包括全部要点,可以适当发挥;2. 不得使用真实姓名和校名;
3. 不少于40词 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Miss Gao,
My name is Mike Davis. I want to join the music club in our school. Now please let me tell you something about myself.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Mike Davis
6.本学期即将结束,学校英语期刊正在进行“闪亮之星”(Shining Stars)的评选,假如你是班长李华,你将推荐本班同学Sam参加评选。请根据以下提示,完成这篇英语推荐信。
要求:1.词数80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
姓名
Sam Smith
外貌
英俊,戴眼镜……
爱好
打篮球,旅游,阅读……
性格
善良,开朗……
课余时间
做家务,给老人讲故事……
参考词汇:recommend v.推荐;outgoing adj.开朗的
Dear Sir,
I’d like to recommend my classmate Sam to be the Shining Star in our school. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
7.假如你是李华,你校英文报See The World举行了题为 “My Winter Holiday Plan ” 的专题征文活动。请根据提示内容及要求,用英语写一封信,分享你寒假的学习、生活等方面的计划。
PLANS NEEDED
The Winter Holiday is coming! We are going to collect different kinds of plans for this year’s winter holiday. So many students can learn from you.
Your plan includes (包括):
● What do you eat and how do you exercise?
● How do you celebrate the Spring Festival?
● How do you use your lucky money?
●
...
Looking forward to your sharing!
注意:
1.内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥。
2.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear classmates,
The winter holiday is coming. I am glad to share my winter holiday plan with you.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
8.假设你是Bobby,你的笔友Anna计划来沈阳游玩,想了解沈阳的天气情况和最适合游玩的季节。请你写封回信,给出建议。内容包括:
1.沈阳的气候情况;
2.推荐最适合游玩的季节及原因;
3.表达期望。
要求:1.词数 80—100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Anna,
I am glad to know that you are coming to Shenyang for a holiday.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Bobby
9.假定你是李辉,是学校环保社团的一员。最近你看到一些环境污染的相关报道后,决定写一篇英文倡议信,号召大家一起保护地球。
要点:
1.污染问题;
2.保护措施;
3.表达倡议。
要求:
1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear friends,
As we know, the Earth is our home and it is facing many problems now. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
10.假如你是李华,今天是你班英语老师Mrs. Brown的生日,请你根据以下提示信息,用英文写一封信,送上生日祝福并感谢她一学期以来的辛苦付出。
写作要求:
(1)须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
(3)词数60左右,书信格式已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mrs. Brown,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案
1.
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your last letter. I’m very glad you are interested in Chinese traditions and culture. I will tell you some traditions about Spring Festival.
Spring Festival usually comes in January or February. It is an important festival when families get together. On New Year’s Eve, we usually have a big family dinner, and we enjoy dumplings and delicious food. After dinner, we watch the Spring Festival Gala. Children visit the elders to give their best wishes and receive red envelopes from them.
I like the Spring Festival very much. We always have a good time at the Spring Festival.
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,感谢对方的来信,引出主题;
第二步,介绍春节的各种习俗;
第三步,表达自己对春节的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
It is an important festival when families get together.(时间状语从句)
2.
Dear Students’ Union,
I’m glad to share my ideas about school clubs. As for me, playing the piano is my favourite thing to do in my free time. So I would really like to join the Music Club at school.
For club activities, I suggest we have regular classes to learn more knowledge about different kinds of music. We could also organize music concerts to show our talents. I believe these activities will help us improve our musical skills, build our stage confidence, and also make new friends with those who have similar interests.
I’m really looking forward to joining the Music Club! And I hope my ideas do help and work!
Li Hua
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的爱好以及想加入哪个俱乐部;
第二步,给出对活动的建议和理由;
第三步,最后表达期待和希望。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②different kinds of不同种类的
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
I believe these activities will help us improve our musical skills, build our stage confidence, and also make new friends with those who have similar interests.(宾语从句,定语从句)
3.
Dear John,
How is everything going? Last time, you asked me how to develop good habits. I think, as teenagers, it is important to develop good habits, but what shall we do?
In my opinion, we should finish our homework on time every day. In the spare time, we had better read some books to get more knowledge. Taking exercise three or four times a week is also a good habit. By taking exercise, we can feel relaxed and refresh. I have made my New Year’s resolutions. I’m going to develop good habits—exercise and reading. I plan to play basketball three times a week and run 30 minutes a day. This year, I’m going to read two classic books every week.
I hope to have a healthy body and a perfect figure by exercise and increase my knowledge by reading. Wish you develop your good habits and persist in them.
Yours,
Li Hui
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主,“一般将来时”为辅;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏。可适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作目的和自己对培养好习惯的看法;
第二步,介绍自己打算培养的习惯及未来一年的计划;
第三步,表达对未来的希望。
[亮点词汇]
① in my opinion依我看来
② had better do sth.最好做某事
③ make my New Year’s resolutions制定我的新年计划
[高分句型]
①Taking exercise three or four times a week is also a good habit. (动名词短语作主语)
② This year, I’m going to read two classic books every week. (含be going to的一般将来时)
4.
Dear sir,
I’m Li Ming. I’m thirteen years old. I am writing to tell that I want to be a membet of the English Reading Club. I’m interested in reading English. So, the club becomes what I’m willing to join. For one thing, challenging to read English books will improve my English level. For another, I can make more friends and share my ideas. I would be thankful if you could consider my application. Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Ming
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“想加入英语阅读社团”并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简单介绍自己的信息并表明写信目的;
第二步,表明自己想加入社团的原因;
第三步,希望获得批准并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①want to do想要
②improve my English level提高我的英语水平
③be thankful感谢
[高分句型]
①I am writing to tell that I want to be a member of the English Reading Club.(that引导宾语从句)
②I would be thankful if you could consider my application.(if引导的条件状语从句)
5.
Dear Miss Gao,
My name is Mike Davis. I want to join the music club in our school. Now please let me tell you something about myself.
I am 13 years old and I am in Class 6, Grade 7. My favorite subject is music because I enjoy expressing myself through it. I have abilities in singing and playing musical instruments. I would like to join the club to make more friends who share the same interests. Thank you for your consideration.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Mike Davis
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:主要采用“一般现在时”;
③内容:写作要点已给出,考生可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇表明写作意图,提出申请加入俱乐部,并引出下文介绍自己;
第二步,详细介绍自己的年龄、班级、音乐特长及申请理由等;
第三步,给出加入音乐俱乐部的理由,如交朋友,并结束全文。
[亮点词汇]
①express myself 表达自我
②share the same interests 有相同兴趣
[高分句型]
①I would like to join the club to make more friends who share the same interests.(定语从句)
6.
Dear Sir,
I’d like to recommend my classmate Sam to be the Shining Star in our school. His first name is Sam and his last name is Smith. He is very handsome. He has a round face and short hair. He wears glasses. He loves sport, reading and travelling. He is good at playing basketball. He is very outgoing and kind. We all like him. He often does some housework. He also tells his grandparents some interesting stories. We all want to recommend him.
Thank you.
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:要求根据提示内容进行写作,可适当增添细节,注意行文连贯,表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题,表明想要推荐Sam为“闪亮之星”;
第二步,从姓名、外貌、爱好、性格及课余时间等方面具体介绍Sam;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②do some housework做些家务
③interesting有趣的
[高分句型]
His first name is Sam and his last name is Smith. (and连接的并列句)
7.
Dear classmates,
The winter holiday is coming. I am glad to share my winter holiday plan with you.
First, I plan to eat healthy food, such as fruits and vegetables. I will also exercise every day to keep healthy. I will run in the morning and do some sports in the afternoon. Second, I will make a study plan. I will review what I have learned in the past semester and preview the new lessons. Third, I will celebrate the Spring Festival with my family. We will have a big dinner and watch the Spring Festival Gala together. As for my lucky money, I will donate a portion to the Hope Project and use the remaining portion to buy school supplies.
I believe I will have a happy and meaningful winter holiday.
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍我将分享我的寒假计划;
第二步,具体阐述寒假都有哪些计划;
第三步,书写结语,相信自己会有一个快乐的有意义的假期。
[亮点词汇]
①plan to do计划做某事
②such as例如
③as for至于
[高分句型]
①I will review what I have learned in the past semester and preview the new lessons. (what引导的宾语从句)
②I believe I will have a happy and meaningful winter holiday. (省略that的宾语从句)
8.范文
Dear Anna,
I am glad to know that you are coming to Shenyang for a holiday. There are four seasons in Shenyang, spring, summer, autumn and winter. It’s warm in spring. It is hot and rainy in summer. The temperature drops rapidly in autumn. I think the best season to visit Shenyang is winter. In winter, when it snows, everything is white. You can enjoy the snow scenery. If you are a skiing lover, you can have a try. You can see a lot of beautiful snow sculptures and ice lanterns.
Hope you will enjoy your trip!
Yours,
Bobby
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文为一篇应用文,为书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:要点内容已给出,注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍沈阳的气候情况;
第二步,推荐最适合游玩的季节及原因;
第三步,希望对方玩得开心。
[亮点词汇]
① have a try试一试
② snow sculptures雪雕
[高分句型]
① I think the best season to visit Shenyang is winter.(宾语从句)
② In winter, when it snows, everything is white.(when引导的时间状语从句)
③ If you are a skiing lover, you can have a try.(if引导的条件状语从句)
9.
Dear friends,
As we know, the Earth is our home and it is facing many problems now. There are many different kinds of pollution, such as water pollution and plastic pollution. We can’t live better if the environment on the Earth becomes worse. So it’s everyone’s duty to protect the planet.
We can protect the Earth by doing small things, like turning off the taps after using water, not throwing away rubbish everywhere, switching off the lights when leaving the room and walking to school instead of taking a car.
Let’s take action to protect the Earth—our only home from now on. Protecting the Earth is protecting ourselves. I hope everybody can do something to make a difference.
Yours,
Li Hui
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“污染问题,保护措施以及表达我的倡议”,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“众所周知,地球是我们的家园,它现在面临着许多问题。”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“现如今存在的污染问题和提出保护措施”来倡议保护地球;
第三步,书写结语。表达“我希望每个人都能有所作为。”
[亮点词汇]
① different kinds of不同种类的
② turn off关掉
[高分句型]
① We can’t live better if the environment on the Earth becomes worse.(if引导的条件状语从句)
② Let’s take action to protect the Earth—our only home from now on.(let引导的祈使句肯定形式)
10.
Dear Mrs. Brown,
Today is your birthday. We wish you a happy birthday! On this special day, we want to say thank you. You are strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly. Your classes are so interesting. So it is easy for us to learn English well. You always help us out with our problems. Because of your help, we make much progress. We hope you will always be healthy and happy.
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,送上生日祝福;
第二步,描述英语老师的付出,并表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①are strict with对……严格
②take care of照顾
③help sb. with sth.在某事上帮助某人
[高分句型]
We hope you will always be healthy and happy.(宾语从句)
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专题23 书面表达之书信类(词汇句法策略)
一、试题类型
(一)介绍类书信
1. 自我介绍:要求学生在书信中介绍自己的基本信息,如姓名、年龄、来自哪里、就读学校、兴趣爱好等。例如给笔友写信,开篇可能是 “Dear friend, I am very glad to write to you. My name is Li Hua. I am 13 years old and I come from Beijing. I study in No.1 Middle School.”(亲爱的朋友,很高兴给你写信。我叫李华,今年13岁,来自北京,在第一中学上学)。
2. 介绍他人或事物:介绍家人、朋友、学校、城市等。以介绍学校为例,会涉及学校的规模、设施、课程、师生等方面。如 “My school is big and beautiful. There are about 2,000 students and 200 teachers. We have a big library with thousands of books, and a playground where we can do sports after class.”(我的学校又大又漂亮。大约有2000名学生和200名老师。我们有一个藏书数千册的大图书馆,还有一个课后可以做运动的操场)。
(二)邀请类书信
1. 邀请参加活动:包括生日派对、野餐、聚会、运动会等。信中要说明活动的时间、地点、活动内容以及邀请对方的原因。比如邀请朋友参加生日派对,“Dear Tom, I am going to have a birthday party at my home this Sunday at 6 p.m. There will be delicious food, games and music. I really hope you can come and celebrate with me.”(亲爱的汤姆,这个周日下午6点我将在家里举办生日派对。会有美味的食物、游戏和音乐。我真的希望你能来和我一起庆祝)。
2. 邀请来访:邀请对方来自己所在的城市、学校或家里参观游玩。要介绍当地或自己家的特色,让对方有兴趣前来。如 “Dear Lucy, I sincerely invite you to visit my city. It is a beautiful place with many historical sites and delicious local foods. You can visit the ancient temple and taste our famous dumplings. I will show you around when you come.”(亲爱的露西,我真诚地邀请你来参观我的城市。这是一个美丽的地方,有许多历史遗迹和美味的当地美食。你可以参观古老的寺庙,品尝我们著名的饺子。你来的时候我会带你四处逛逛)。
(三)求助类书信
1. 学习求助:在学习上遇到困难,如英语语法不懂、数学题不会做、写作困难等,向老师、同学或笔友求助。例如 “Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to ask for your help. I have a lot of trouble in learning English grammar, especially the use of tenses. Can you give me some advice on how to learn it well?”(亲爱的史密斯老师,我写信是向您求助。我在学习英语语法上有很多困难,尤其是时态的用法。您能给我一些如何学好它的建议吗?)。
2. 生活求助:生活中遇到问题,如和父母闹矛盾、与朋友发生争吵、丢失物品等,寻求他人的帮助或建议。像 “Dear friend, I had an argument with my best friend yesterday. I don't know what to do now. Can you give me some suggestions on how to make up with him?”(亲爱的朋友,我昨天和我最好的朋友吵架了。我不知道现在该怎么办。你能给我一些如何和他和好的建议吗?)。
二、话题特点
(一)贴近生活
1. 日常活动相关:书信话题常围绕学生的日常生活,如学校的一天、周末活动、假期安排等。比如描述学校一天的学习生活,从早上起床、上学,到上课、课间休息、课外活动,再到放学回家。“My school day is busy but interesting. I get up at 7 a.m. and go to school by bike. We have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon. After class, I often play basketball with my classmates.”(我的学校生活忙碌但有趣。我早上7点起床,骑自行车上学。我们上午有四节课,下午有三节课。课后,我经常和同学们一起打篮球)。
2. 人际关系方面:涉及与家人、朋友、老师的相处。如写一封给父母的信,表达对他们的感激之情;给朋友写信,分享最近的趣事或倾诉烦恼。“Dear parents, I want to say thank you for your love and care. You always support me and help me with my study. I love you very much.”(亲爱的爸爸妈妈,我想说谢谢你们的爱和关心。你们总是支持我,帮助我学习。我非常爱你们)。
(二)具有实用性
1. 解决实际问题:求助类书信旨在解决学生在学习或生活中遇到的具体问题,通过书信寻求他人的帮助和建议,使学生能够将所学知识运用到实际情境中。例如在学习英语写作困难时,向老师求助,老师的回复可能会提供一些写作技巧和练习方法,帮助学生提高写作能力。
2. 促进交流互动:邀请类书信和介绍类书信能够帮助学生与他人建立联系,分享信息,促进交流。通过给笔友写信介绍自己的国家、文化,能增进不同地区学生之间的了解和友谊。“Dear pen pal, I would like to tell you something about my country, China. It is a country with a long history and rich culture. We have many traditional festivals, such as the Spring Festival and the Mid - Autumn Festival.”(亲爱的笔友,我想给你讲讲我的国家,中国。这是一个历史悠久、文化丰富的国家。我们有许多传统节日,比如春节和中秋节)。
三、试题考法
(一)要点考查
1. 信息完整性:要求学生在书信中涵盖题目所给定的所有要点信息,不能遗漏。比如在写一封介绍学校开放日活动的书信时,题目给出了活动时间、活动内容(参观校园、听课、与老师交流等)、邀请对方参加等要点,学生必须在信中完整地呈现这些内容。
2. 要点阐述清晰:不仅要写出要点,还要对要点进行适当的阐述和扩展,使内容丰富、具体。以介绍学校图书馆为例,不能只说 “We have a library.”,而要进一步描述图书馆的规模、藏书种类、开放时间等,如 “Our school library is quite large. It has thousands of books, including storybooks, science books and magazines. It is open from 8 a.m. to 5 p.m. on weekdays, providing us with a great place to read and study.”(我们学校图书馆很大。有数千册图书,包括故事书、科学书籍和杂志。工作日从早上8点到下午5点开放,为我们提供了一个阅读和学习的好地方)。
(二)语言运用
1. 词汇准确恰当:考查学生对词汇的掌握和运用能力,要求使用准确、恰当的词汇来表达自己的意思。在描述食物美味时,不能只用 “good”,可以用 “delicious”“tasty” 等更生动的词汇。如 “The food at the party was so delicious that everyone enjoyed it.”(派对上的食物非常美味,每个人都很喜欢)。
2. 语法正确规范:关注学生对基本语法知识的运用,包括动词的时态、语态,名词的单复数,代词的使用等。例如在描述过去发生的事情时,要用一般过去时。“I visited the museum yesterday. I saw many interesting things there.”(我昨天参观了博物馆。在那里我看到了许多有趣的东西)。
(三)格式与逻辑
1. 书信格式正确:书信有特定的格式,包括称呼、正文、结束语、署名等部分。学生需要掌握正确的格式,称呼顶格写,结束语如 “Best wishes!”“Yours sincerely” 等要写在正文之后的右下角,署名在结束语的下一行右下角。
2. 逻辑连贯合理:书信内容要逻辑清晰,段落之间过渡自然。在介绍多个事物或活动时,可以使用连接词,如 “firstly”“secondly”“finally” 等,使文章层次分明。如 “Firstly, we will visit the school library where you can see a large collection of books. Secondly, there will be a class for you to attend. Finally, you can talk with our teachers and learn about our study life.”(首先,我们将参观学校图书馆,在那里你可以看到大量的藏书。其次,会有一节课让你去听。最后,你可以和我们的老师交流,了解我们的学习生活)。
四、解答策略
(一)认真审题
1. 明确书信类型:仔细阅读题目,判断是介绍类、邀请类还是求助类书信,不同类型的书信有不同的写作重点和语言风格。例如邀请类书信要突出邀请的热情,求助类书信要诚恳地说明问题。
2. 确定要点信息:圈出题目中的要点,如时间、地点、人物、事件等,并思考如何将这些要点合理地组织到书信内容中。在写一封邀请朋友参加运动会的书信时,要明确运动会的时间、地点、比赛项目以及邀请朋友的原因等要点。
(二)组织内容
1. 开头部分:根据书信类型选择合适的开头方式。介绍类书信可以先简单问候,然后直接说明写信目的是介绍自己或某物;邀请类书信可以表达对对方的想念,再引出邀请的事情;求助类书信则开门见山地说明自己遇到的问题。如 “Dear friend, I haven't heard from you for a long time. I am writing to invite you to our school sports meeting.”(亲爱的朋友,好久没有你的消息了。我写信是想邀请你参加我们学校的运动会)。
2. 中间部分:详细阐述要点内容,按照一定的逻辑顺序进行描述。可以先介绍主要的、重要的内容,再介绍次要的。在介绍学校时,可以先介绍学校的整体印象,再分别介绍教学楼、操场、图书馆等设施。“My school is really wonderful. The teaching buildings are modern and well - equipped. We have a big playground where we can do various sports. And the library is my favorite place, full of interesting books.”(我的学校非常棒。教学楼很现代化,设备齐全。我们有一个大操场,可以在那里进行各种运动。图书馆是我最喜欢的地方,有很多有趣的书)。
3. 结尾部分:总结书信内容,再次强调写信目的。邀请类书信可以表达期待对方的回复和到来;求助类书信可以表示希望得到对方的帮助;介绍类书信可以询问对方的相关情况。如 “I really hope you can come to the sports meeting. Please write back and tell me if you are available. Looking forward to your reply.”(我真的希望你能来参加运动会。请回信告诉我你是否有空。期待你的回复)。
(三)运用语言
1. 运用积累词汇:回忆平时所学的相关词汇,尽量使用丰富多样的词汇来表达。描述天气好,除了 “sunny”,还可以用 “bright and clear” 等。如 “It was a bright and clear day, perfect for our picnic.”(那是一个晴朗明媚的日子,非常适合我们野餐)。
2. 遵循语法规则:写作过程中注意语法的正确使用,写完后仔细检查动词时态、名词单复数等是否有误。如果描述过去的一次旅行,动词要用一般过去时。“We visited the Great Wall last week. It was an amazing experience.”(我们上周参观了长城。那是一次很棒的经历)。
(四)检查修改
1. 格式检查:查看书信格式是否正确,称呼、结束语、署名是否符合规范。
2. 内容检查:检查要点是否齐全,内容是否表达清楚,逻辑是否连贯。看看有没有遗漏的信息,句子之间的衔接是否自然。
3. 语言检查:检查语法错误、拼写错误以及词汇使用是否恰当。修改不通顺的句子,使语言更加准确、流畅。
1.假如你是李华,你的澳大利亚好友Tom 对中国传统文化和节日习俗很感兴趣,他来信说想了解春节的习俗,请根据提示,给他写一封70词左右的回信。
提示:
1.春节通常在一月或二月;
2.春节是个重要的节日,是家人团聚的时刻:
3.在除夕夜有大型的家庭聚餐,我们通常吃饺子和美味的食物; 饭后看春节晚会:
4.孩子们拜访长辈送祝福,长辈给孩子们红包:
5.……
参考词汇:春节晚会 the Spring Festival Gala 长辈 the elder 红包 red envelope
要求:
1. 把提示信息表达完整,意思连贯,语法正确。
2.可适当发挥,词数在70 词左右。
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your last letter. I’m very glad you are interested in Chinese traditions and culture. I will tell you some traditions about Spring Festival.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2.为更好地开展社团活动,红星学校学生会围绕“New Clubs, More Fun”这一主题征集意见稿。假如你是李华,请你参考问卷内容写一封信给学生会。
要求:
(1)包含所有提示信息,可适当扩展,所给提示语供选择使用;
(2)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息;
(3)词数60 左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
提示语:
expect (期望) develop our interest in...show our talents (展示才能) be close to nature
Questionnaire (问卷)
Dear studentsWe’d like to know your ideas about school clubs. Please complete the questionnaire and return it to us.
Students’ Union
1.What is your hobby?
□ Reading books □ Taking photos
□ Playing basketball □ Others_______
2. What club do you want to join?
□Music club □ Sports club
□ Reading club □ Others_______
3.What is your advice (建议) on club activities?
□ Go hiking □ Act out stories
□ Play musical instruments □ Others
4.The reasons for your advice.
_________________________________________________________
Dear Students’ Union,
I’m glad to share my ideas about school clubs. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
3.良好的习惯成就美好的未来,良好的习惯让人受益终身。假设你叫李辉,你的美国好友John来信询问该如何培养好习惯。请你用英语写一封回信,谈谈你对养成良好习惯的看法及未来一年的计划。参考词汇:培养好习惯 develop good habits
要求:1. 80-100词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 要点齐全,条理清晰,语句通顺,可适当扩展。
3. 不得出现真实的大名和校名。
要点:1. 交代写作目的,浅述对培养良好习惯的看法。
2. 分享你打算培养的习惯(如:学习、运动、饮食、阅读)及未来一年的计划。
3. 表达对未来的期待与希望。
Dear John,
How is everything going? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
4.假如你是李明,你校英语读书社团正在招募新成员,你想加入该社团。请根据以下提示,用英语写一封申请信。
提示:(1)介绍你的基本信息;
(2)介绍你的兴趣爱好;
(3)说明你想加入该社团的理由。
要求:(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括提示中所有要点内容;
(3)词数:40词左右。
Dear sir,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Ming
5.课后服务实施后,为使学校课外活动更加丰富多彩,你校决定成立音乐俱乐部。假设你是Mike Davis,想申请加入音乐俱乐部。请根据以下信息,向音乐俱乐部负责人高老师写一封自荐信。
Name
Mike Davis
Age
13
Class
Class 6, Grade 7
Favorite subject
Music
Abilities
Sing, play a musical instrument…
Reasons to apply (申请理由)
Want to make more friends…
要求:1. 内容包括全部要点,可以适当发挥;2. 不得使用真实姓名和校名;
3. 不少于40词 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Miss Gao,
My name is Mike Davis. I want to join the music club in our school. Now please let me tell you something about myself.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Mike Davis
6.本学期即将结束,学校英语期刊正在进行“闪亮之星”(Shining Stars)的评选,假如你是班长李华,你将推荐本班同学Sam参加评选。请根据以下提示,完成这篇英语推荐信。
要求:1.词数80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
姓名
Sam Smith
外貌
英俊,戴眼镜……
爱好
打篮球,旅游,阅读……
性格
善良,开朗……
课余时间
做家务,给老人讲故事……
参考词汇:recommend v.推荐;outgoing adj.开朗的
Dear Sir,
I’d like to recommend my classmate Sam to be the Shining Star in our school. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
7.假如你是李华,你校英文报See The World举行了题为 “My Winter Holiday Plan ” 的专题征文活动。请根据提示内容及要求,用英语写一封信,分享你寒假的学习、生活等方面的计划。
PLANS NEEDED
The Winter Holiday is coming! We are going to collect different kinds of plans for this year’s winter holiday. So many students can learn from you.
Your plan includes (包括):
● What do you eat and how do you exercise?
● How do you celebrate the Spring Festival?
● How do you use your lucky money?
●
...
Looking forward to your sharing!
注意:
1.内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥。
2.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear classmates,
The winter holiday is coming. I am glad to share my winter holiday plan with you.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
8.假设你是Bobby,你的笔友Anna计划来沈阳游玩,想了解沈阳的天气情况和最适合游玩的季节。请你写封回信,给出建议。内容包括:
1.沈阳的气候情况;
2.推荐最适合游玩的季节及原因;
3.表达期望。
要求:1.词数 80—100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Anna,
I am glad to know that you are coming to Shenyang for a holiday.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Bobby
9.假定你是李辉,是学校环保社团的一员。最近你看到一些环境污染的相关报道后,决定写一篇英文倡议信,号召大家一起保护地球。
要点:
1.污染问题;
2.保护措施;
3.表达倡议。
要求:
1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear friends,
As we know, the Earth is our home and it is facing many problems now. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
10.假如你是李华,今天是你班英语老师Mrs. Brown的生日,请你根据以下提示信息,用英文写一封信,送上生日祝福并感谢她一学期以来的辛苦付出。
写作要求:
(1)须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
(3)词数60左右,书信格式已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mrs. Brown,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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