内容正文:
第二章 读后续写
主题1 个人成长
Writing1(2025全国二卷)
新鲜度: 难度: 体裁:记叙文
话题:向 外 国 人 解
释中国人名字的发
音和背后的意义
关键词:
Pronunciation
词数:283 建议时间:24分钟
“Whatisyourname? ”isaquestionmostfrequentlyaskedwhenpeoplemeetforthefirsttime.
Butforme,itwasthefirstchalengeIencounteredasaninternationalstudentinIreland.
ThepronunciationsystemoftheChineselanguageisquitedifferentfromthatofEnglish.FornG
ativespeakersofEnglish,someChinesewordsareratherdifficulttopronounce.MygivennameQiG
uyu(秋雨),forinstance,happenedtobeagreatchalengeformanyofthem.EverytimeIgaveaselfG
introduction,Ihadtoexplainhowtopronouncemynameatleastfivetimes,yettheystilcouldnot
sayitthewayIdid.
Onceinalecture,theprofessortriedrepeatingmynameaftermeoverandoverinfrontofthirty
classmates.IrealydidnotknowwhetherIshouldcontinuecorrectinghimorsimplydropthematter.
Ifearedthatmyclassmatesmightgrowtiredofmyeffortsorevenlosepatiencewithme.Afteral,I
didcareabouthowotherswouldthinkofme.IrealizedthatifIdidntstop,theentirelecturewould
beruined.“Itsokay,professor,”Ishrugged(耸肩).Theawkwardmomentendedwiththeclass
eruptingintolaughter.Iforcedasmile,unsurehowtorespondfurther.
Afterthatincident,Istoppedactingasa“Chineseteacher”.Insteadofcorrectingotherswhen
theywerestrugglingtopronouncemyname,Ijustsmiledandnoddedapprovingly.Thisapproach
sparedmethediscomfortofhavingtooverGexplain.However,Isoonfoundthatbydoingso,Imight
belosingsomethingmoreimportant:theopportunitytoshareasmalpartofmyculturalidentity.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答.
Inaclassdiscussion,Iwasinvitedtoexplainthemeaningofmyname.
Manyofmyclassmatesgotinterestedandcameuptomeafterclass.
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最新真题分类特训英语
Writing2(2025浙江1月卷)
新鲜度: 难度: 体裁:记叙文
话题:12岁的 Kevin冷
静果断处理突发事件
关键词:
trouble
词数:338 建议时间:24分钟
Kevinwasprettybored.Hismotherwasatwork,andhisfatherhadbeenawayonbusiness.
Therefore,hewasleftinthecareofMrs.Hil,anoldladywholivednextdoor.Hisparentshad
raisedthe12GyearGoldtobeagoodboy.Henevergotintotrouble,thoughsometimeshewantedtodo
riskythings.Mrs.Hil wasasleep.Kevinsighed(叹息)andhopedsomethingexcitingwouldhapG
pen.Suddenly,amovementoutsidecaughthiseye.
Mrs.HilsfrontwindowfacedMr.andMrs.Greenshouseacrossthestreet.Thecouplehad
bothgonetowork,soitwasstrangethatsomeonewasoverthere.Kevinstaredatthemanattheir
frontdoor.Suddenly,themanjumpedthroughanopenwindowintothehouse.Withhisheartinhis
mouth,KevingrabbedMrs.Hilshomephoneandcaledthepolice.
Thinkingthatthemanmightgetawaywithwhateverhewantedbeforethepolicearrived,Kevin
decidedtodosomething.HerushedoutofMrs.Hilshouseandcrossedthestreetquickly.GrabG
bingabranchfromacutGdowntree,hejumpedinthroughthewindow.“Stoprightthere! Youmust
leaverightnow!”hecaledout,holdingthebranchwithbothhands.
Themanfrozeforasecond,butwhenhesawtheskinnyboyhebreathedasighofrelief.“Hey,
kid,putthatdown.Itwasmyhome.Myparentsusedtolivehereandmyfatherswatchwashere,”
heexplained,tryingtoliftafloorboard.
Atthatmoment,thesoundsofapolicecarechoed(回响)intheair.ThemanstoodupinapanG
ic,thenranthroughthehousetowardthewindowandjumpedout.Kevinfolowedoutandtoldthe
arrivingpoliceofficerswhathadhappened.Theypursuedandarrestedtheman.
KevinwentbacktoMrs.Hilshouse.Somehowhewasntsurehehaddonetherightthing.
“Whatifhehastoldthetruth?”hethoughttohimself.Themanswordssoundedprettyconvincing.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答.
WhenMr.andMrs.Greengothome,Kevinwenttotalktothem.
KevinandMr.Greentookthewatchtheyhadfoundtothepolicestation.
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第五部分 写作
Writing3(2024浙江1月卷)
新鲜度: 难度: 体裁:记叙文
话题:运 用 心 术 解
决日常生活难题
关键词:way 词数:324 建议时间:24分钟
Evaspentthefirstweekofhighschooltryingtokeepherheadabovewater.Oneofthemajor
headachesforherwasfindingherwayinthehugeschoolbuilding.ItwasasixGstorybuilding.Oneach
floor,halwaysstretchedinfourdirections,leadingtoclassrooms,laboratories,andteachersoffices.
Somewhereinthebuilding,therewasalsoalibrary,acafeteria,andagym.
Havingapoorsenseofdirection,Evafounditimpossibletogetaroundinsuchahugebuilding.
Althedifferenthalwaysandroomsweretoomuchtothinkabout,letalonecommittomemory.She
decidedthatshewouldmemorizewhereherclasseswereandthenpretendthattherestoftheplace
didntexist.
InherfirstPEclass,EvawasshockedwhenCoachPittannouncedthateveryonehadtorunone
milearoundthetrackoutside.Shesearchedthefacesofherclassmatesforsignsofpanic.Therewas
nothingshefearedmorethanhavingtorunawholemile.ToEva,“amile”wasusedtodescribelong
distances.Itwastenmilesfromherhometohergrandfathers,andthatalwaysseemedlikealong
way,eveninacar!
WhenCoachPittblewhiswhistle(哨子),Evafiguredshewouldbeleftinthedust.However,
whilesomeofherclassmatesedgedahead,othersactualyfelbehind.“Itsjustthebeginning,”she
thought.“Ilcomeinlastforsure.”
SoonEvabegantobreathehard,withherheartpoundingandlegsshaking.Feelingdesperate,Eva
startedusingamindtrickonherself.Shestoppedthinkingabouttheword“mile”.Instead,shefocused
onreachingtheshadowcastonthetrackbyanoaktreeupahead.Thensheconcentratedonjoggingto
thespotwherethetrackcurved(拐弯).Afterthat,shetriedtoseeifshecouldcompleteherfirstlap.
Onelapturnedintotwo,thenthree,thenfour.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答.
WhenCoachPittsaid“Nicework!”toheratthefinishline,Evawassurprised.
Evadecidedtousethesametricktodealwiththeschoolbuilding.
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最新真题分类特训英语
Writing4(2023新课标Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)
新鲜度: 难度: 体裁:记叙文
话题:得遇良师,
挑战自己,爱上写作
关键词:writing 词数:324 建议时间:24分钟
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文.
WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.I
saidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymy
secondlanguage.WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadalowedmetopresG
entmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedaltheparts.Noone
laughedharderthanhedid.
So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail? Hisreply:“BeG
causeIloveyourstories.Ifyourewilingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”
Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.
IchosePaulRevereshorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(银匠)inBostonwho
rodeahorseatnighton April18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswere
coming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorsesmouth.Notabriliantidea,butfunny;and
unlikelytobeanyoneelseschoice.
Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight? Didhegettired? Havedoubts? Didhe
wanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,like
Revereshorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspeling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrect
mygrammar.IcheckedoutahalfGdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewof
them.
WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,
writeitagain.”Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinalyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinG
ninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidntwin,Iwouldntcare.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答.
Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.
Iwenttomyteachersofficeaftertheawardpresentation.
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第五部分 写作
Writing5(2022新高考Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)
新鲜度: 难度: 体裁:记叙文话题:患病男孩自强之“跑”关键词:run 词数:339 建议时间:24分钟
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文.
ItwasthedayofthebigcrossGcountryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinand
aroundthesmaltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路线)throughthickevergreenforG
est.
IlookedaroundandfinalyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebya
fence.Hewassmalfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverand
askedhim whyhewasntwiththeotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednot
torun.
Whatwaswrong? Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!
Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschoolscoachandaskedhim whathadhappened.“Iwas
afraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,”heexplaineduncomfortably.“Igavehimthe
choicetorunornot,andlethimdecide.”
Ibitbackmyfrustration(懊恼).Iknewthecoachmeantwel-hethoughthewasdoingthe
rightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowards
me,hissmalbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.
Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,but
atschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.HealwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilG
ityinwhatevertheyweredoing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhad
decidedtojointhecrossGcountryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger-thatsal.DavidhadnotmissedasinG
glepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinG
ish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,IwasfamiliarwiththechalengesDavidfacedand
wasproudofhisstrongdetermination.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答.
Paragraph1:
Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldntlookatme.
Paragraph2:
IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.
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主题2 亲情友情
Writing1(2025全国一卷)
新鲜度: 难度: 体裁:记叙文
话题:兄弟间
的冰释前嫌
关键词:brother 词数:313 建议时间:25分钟
MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmalgatheringinthe
earlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnacks,whilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.
Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadntcounted
on:MybrotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a50Gpoundbaloffire.Thoughfriendly,hecouldeasily
knockovermyniecessmalboysandmysixGmonthGoldgranddaughter.So,whenmybrothershowed
up,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.
Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthin
thebackyardandgivingthekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.
Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.
Itwasanawkwardmoment.IdidntwantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmy
brotherwasnthappywithdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventualy,mybrotherdecidedtoleave
ratherthanforcetheissue.
Afewdayspassed,andIhadntheardanythingfrommybrother.ItextedhimandexpressedwiG
shesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise-ashock,actualy:“Notachance.”
Clearly,hewasunhappyoverthewaywehadparted.Afteral,Ihadlefthimlittlechoice.Wel,
helgetoverit,Ireasoned.
Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinking
heshouldcalfirst.However,myconscience(良心)keptbotheringme.Itriedtoputmyselfinmy
brothersshoes.HewasfacinghealthissuesandhiswifeofthirtyGfiveyearshadpassedawayafew
monthsearlier.Tobywashisconstantcompanion,theonewhokepthimgoing.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答.
Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.
Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrothersdoor.
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第五部分 写作
Writing2(2022浙江卷,改编)
新鲜度: 难度: 体裁:记叙文 话题:小组合作项目 关键词:teammate 词数:404 建议时间:25分钟
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文.
WhenDr.Hendersonwasassigning(指定)projectmatesforhispsychologyclass,Isecretly
hopedthathewouldpairmewithmybestfriendoratleastaclassmateIcouldhavesomefunwith.
Aboveal,Ihopedhewouldntassignmetoworkwiththefiercelycompetitiveandextremelyserious
felow whoalwaysworedarkclothesandapparentlyhadapersonalitytomatch.Asfate(命运)
wouldhaveit,Dr.HendersonverydeliberatelymatchedeveryoneinclassandannouncedthatIwould
beworkingwiththeonepersoninclassIwantedtoavoid.
Iwentuptomynewteammateandintroducedmyself.HelookedatmeasthoughIwerent
there.IfelthetreatedmeasthoughIwouldholdhimbackandprobablymakehimfailtogetanAin
thecourse.Hewasntmeanorabusive;hejustgavemetheimpressionthathecoulddowhatever
projectwedreamedupbetterifhediditalone.
Needlesstosay,Ididntlookforwardtoanentiretermofbeingbrushedoff,butItriedtomake
thebestofitanddidntsayanythingforfearthatIwouldmakethingsworse.
Theprojectrequiredeachteamtodevelopahypothesis(假说),setupanexperimenttotestthe
hypothesis,dothestatisticalanalysisandpresentthefindings.Whatevergradetheteamreceived
wouldbesharedbybothstudents.
WhenmyteammateandImettodiscussourproject,Iwasuneasy.Herewasthischalenging
studentwhohadareputationforsingleGmindednessandgoodgrades—theexactoppositeofme.IacG
tualywantedtodroptheclassatonepoint,butstoppedshortbecauseIdidntwanttogivehimthe
satisfactionofmychickeningout.Idecidedtosticktoitnomatterwhat.
AfterlongdiscussionswesomehowagreedtodoastudyonthepsychologicalwelGbeingofteenG
agers.Iwasntsurewhatitmeantexactly,butatleastwehadatopic.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好.
Paragraph1:
Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.
Paragraph2:
OnedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtohospitalforaseriousdisease.
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最新真题分类特训英语
Writing3(2021新高考Ⅰ卷)
新鲜度: 难度: 体裁:记叙文话题:母亲节给妈妈做饭 关键词:SURPRISE词数:388建议时间:25分钟
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文.
AMOTHERSDAYSURPRISE
Thetwinswerefiledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningfor
MothersDay.Howpleasedandproud Motherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.
TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.TheyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchG
en.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.
Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothe
kitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.Theyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftitto
boilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jenna
foundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburner
toheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepan
wastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkand
putintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.
ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,
theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfuly,Jeffstayedcalmandturned
offthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinue
tocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeffshandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.JenG
namadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmelofburning.Ohdear! Thepieceof
breadinthepanhadturnedblackaswel.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答.
Paragraph1:
Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.
Paragraph2:
Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.
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第五部分 写作
主题3 助人为乐
Writing1(2024新课标Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)
新鲜度: 难度: 体裁:记叙文
话题:与出租车司
机的诚信之约
关键词:Promise 词数:350 建议时间:25分钟
ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoVienG
naandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyan
hourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbusto
Prague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedinto
thefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.
ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadntheardofthe
busstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthe
stillookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupa
friend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphone
downandstartedthecar.
Finaly,withjusttwominutestospareweroledintothebusstation.Thankfuly,therewasa
longqueue(队 列)stil waitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turned
around,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.“Wemadeit,”hesaid.
JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywalet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpuled
outmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.
AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.
Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghalofthebusstation.There,attheenG
trance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmy
cardin,onlytoreadthemessage:“Outoforder.Sorry.”
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答.
IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.
Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcaledGunteraspromised.
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最新真题分类特训英语
Writing2(2022浙江卷)
新鲜度: 难度: 体裁:记叙文 话题:帮助无家可归者 关键词:need 词数:361 建议时间:25分钟
Ineededtodosomethinginmycommunity(社区)inordertocompletethecommunityservice
hoursrequiredtograduatefromhighschool.Someofmyfriendshadsigneduptospendtimeatasoup
kitchen,soIdid,too.Itseemedlikeagoodthingtodo.
Ithoughtthatwewouldjustbepassingoutdinnerstothoseinneed,butIfoundoutwewould
bedoingeverythingfrompreparingtoservingthedinner.Webeganpreparingthefood,frommixing
saladdressingtoseparatingfrozenmeat.Muchstilneededtobedonebeforedinnerwasserved,but
alreadyoutsidethebuildingmanyhomelesspeopleweregathering.Itwasntuntilacoupleofhours
laterthatweopenedthedoorsandbeganservingdinner.
Asthelineofpeoplecametowardme,Igotalittlescared.IdcomefacetofacewiththehomeG
less:HowshouldIact? Howwouldtheytreatme? Wouldtheyhatemeforhavingmorethanthey
did? Whilesomeofthepeoplelookedveryfriendly,someofthemlookedsodangerous.Ididnthave
toomuchtimetoworryaboutit.Iwasassigned(分配)toservethesaladwiththeladynexttome.
ShesmiledatmeandsaidifIneededhelp,shedberightthere,whichIfoundquitecomforting.
Ihadneverseensomanypeoplewantingfood.Theywereofalagesandnationalities.Mostof
themworeclothesthatweretornanddirty.Somelookedliketheyhadtotalygivenuponlife,while
othersseemedtobemakingthebestofthesituation,smilingandjoking.Somewerebetteroffthan
others,buttheyalneededagoodmealandawarmplacetoeat.Itsaddenedmetothinkofhowmany
peopletherewerewhodidnthaveaplacetocalhomeandtheonlyfoodtheygotcamefromasoup
kitchen.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.
Paragraph1:
Astheycameinmydirection,Iputonmybrightestandhappiestsmile.
Paragraph2:
IwassohappythatIhadearnedmyservicehoursinthisway.
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第五部分 写作
主题4 人与动物
Writing(2023浙江卷)
新鲜度: 难度: 体裁:记叙文
话题:作者与
蜂鸟的故事
关键词:hummingbid 词数:337 建议时间:25分钟
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文.
IwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriendsfarminwesternWashington.IparkedmycaroutG
sidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.A
noiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.Itwasahummingbird(蜂鸟),desperately
tryingtoescape.ShewascoveredinspiderGwebs(蛛网)andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.She
ceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.
Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebroken
windowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closG
ingthedoorsecurelybehindme.
WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.
IremovedthestickyspiderGwebsthatcoveredherheadandwings.Stil,shemadenoattempttofly.
Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired? Ortoothirsty?
AsIcarriedheruptheblackberryGlinedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebeG
gantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.
Hovering(悬停),sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,thistiny
creaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.
Duringthecookout,Itoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthe
window.AsIwasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.IwasstandingbythecarwhenahumG
mingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntil
shecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcalandwasgone.
Foramoment,al werespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,“ShemusthavecometosaygoodGbye.”
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.开头已给出.
Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.
Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.
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[范文亮点] 宣传稿应着重于宣传该展览的亮点,以达到
吸引更多人来观展的目的.根据题目要求,先开门见山指
出该展览的基本信息(时间和地点),第二段在介绍观展感
受时应把展览的亮点一并写进去,如展览中有什么值得看
或者有哪些特别的活动等等;最后总结该展览并推荐更多
人来观展.在写作过程中,多使用高级句型和结构,如范
文中的定语从句,现在分词作状语和过去分词作后置定语
等,这样文章读起来不会显得索然无味.
3.新闻报道
Writing
[审题指导] 本篇作文要求写一篇报道.考生需要运用
简洁精练的语言概述事件的主要内容,文章中应包含新闻
报道的五要素(5W:何时 when,何地 where,何人 who,何
因 why,何事 what);在新闻报道中应避免使用第一人称,
应从第三视角进行客观描述;活动已经结束,因此应用一
般过去时.
考生要紧扣主题,展开想象,从参加人员、跑步路线、
活动反响等方面进行写作,使每一个要点都得到明确的
体现.
[参考范文]
ACrossGCountryRunningRace
LastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycrossGcountry
runningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofevery
studentandteacherofourschool.
Thestudentsselectedfromeveryclasstookpartinthe
competition.Theroutemeasuredfivekilometers,fromour
schoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain.Everyrunner
triedtheirbesttofinishthetask,withtheirclassmates
alongthewaygivingthemnecessarilyhelpaswelasenG
couragement.Atlast,altherunnersmanagedtoarriveat
thefinishline,receivingcheersfromalthedirections.
Theactivitywashighlyspokenof,becausenotonly
diditprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsomadeus
morecohesive.
4.网贴
Writing
[审题分析]
英
文
跟
帖
审体裁 应用文(网站)
审人称
和时态
以第一人称为主,
第三人称为辅
以一般现在时为主
审要点
六项提名的概括
你的推荐
推荐理由
[思路点拨]
本题为应用文中的论坛跟帖写作,需符合论坛交流语境,
同时要提出围绕“人类文明音像资料收录”提出推荐.
开头:以论坛交流感的问候切入,快速概括六项提名共性
(如涵盖语言、建筑、艺术、自然、科技等维度,展现人类文
明的多元与独特),自然引出后续推荐内容.
主体:先点明所选内容(可从六项里选,或另推合理项),再
从“文明代表性”(体现文化独特性、科技/艺术成就等)、
“外太空传播价值”(让外星文明/未来人类快速感知地球
魅力、善意等)展开理由阐述,结合具体细节(如高铁的速
度、技术突破;京剧的艺术形式、文化寓意)增强说服力.
结尾:总结推荐内容的意义,呼应“记录人类文明”的主题,
升华到对文明交流、共享的 期 待,让 跟 帖 有 情 感 共 鸣 与
深度.
[高级句式]
篇首句
1.Hieveryone!ImLiJinfromChenguangMiddleSchool.
Iamdeeplyfascinatedbythisinitiative,anditstrikesme
that...
大家好! 我是晨光中学的李津.我对这一提议深深着
迷,并且突然意识到
2.Imgladtoparticipateinthediscussionontheforum.
From myperspective,thesixproposedentriesforthe
cosmicGbounddiscare...
很高兴能参与论坛的讨论.在我看来,这六份拟收录进
飞向宇宙的光盘的提名内容
篇中句
1.Ibelieve...standsout,theyarenotonly...butalso...,
whichmirrorstheveryessenceofhumanambitionto...
我认为尤为突出,它们不仅而且,这反映
了人类的雄心本质.
2.Idpick...,anenduringiconofhumanperseverance,is
notmerelya...;itisa...,representing...
我会选择,它作为人类毅力的不朽象征,不仅是一
个,更是一个,代表着
篇尾句
1.Inconclusion,whileeachnominateditemholdsintrinsic
value,...canserveasapowerfulemblem,telingthe
universethatweareaspeciescapableof...
总之,尽管每一项提名都有其内在价值,但可以作
为一个强有力的象征,向宇宙宣告我们是一个有能力
的物种.
2.Ultimately,beittheancientgrandeurofthepyramidsor
thefuturisticvitalityofhighGspeedtrains,whattruly
mattersisthat...
最终,无论是金字塔的古老宏伟,还是高铁的未来活力,
真正重要的是
[参考范文]
Hieveryone! Im LiJinfrom Chenguang Middle
School.Gladtojointheforumdiscussion! ThesixnominaG
tedentriesforthecosmicGbounddiscareimpressivelydiG
verse,coveringlanguage (“helo”invarioustongues),
iconicarchitecture(theGreatWalandpyramids),tradiG
tionalart(PekingOpera),naturalharmony(animalsounds),
andmoderntech(ChinashighGspeedtrains).Together,they
mirrorhumanityscreativity,history,andbondwithculG
tureandnature.
IbelieveChinashighGspeedtrainsstandout.More
thanadvancedtransport,theyrebridgesunitingcitiesand
people.Withspeedsupto350km/h,theyverevolutionized
travel,shrinkingdistancestohours.Theirvastnetwork
symbolizeshumaninnovationandthedrivetofosterunity
andsharedgrowth.Forextraterrestrialcivilizations,theyd
highlightourambitiontobuildaconnectedworld.
Inconclusion,whileal nominationsarevaluable,
highGspeedtrainspowerfulyrepresentourabilitytoturn
dreamsintoaunifiedfuture.
第二章 读后续写
主题1 个人成长
Writing1
[语篇解读] 本文以人物为线索展开,主要讲述了作者作
为国际学生在爱尔兰因中文名字发音难而遭遇挑战,之后
在一次课堂讨论中分享名字含义,意识到分享文化身份重
要性,并借此与同学增进文化理解的故事.
442
最新真题分类特训英语
[详解]
1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“在课堂讨论中,我被邀请解释我
名字的含义.”可知,第一段可描写作者在课堂讨论中解
释自己名字的含义,并感受到同学们的专注和尊重,意
识到这是一个文化交流的契机.
②由第二段首句内容“我的许多同学都很感兴趣,下课
后都来找我.”可知,第二段可描写课后同学们对作者名
字背后的文化产生浓厚兴趣,纷纷提问,作者通过教他
们写中文名字,进一步加深了彼此的文化理解和欣赏.
2.续写线索:课堂受邀请解释名字的含义———作者阐释名
字的寓意———同学们专注倾听———同学们 对 名 字 背 后
的文化感兴趣———作者教他们写中 文 名 字———感 悟 文
化桥接
3.词汇激活
行为类
①代表:represent/standfor
②解释:explain/ilustrate
③保护:preserve/protect
情绪类
①紧张:nervousness/tension
②兴奋:excitement/thril
[点睛] [高分句型1] AsIspoke,InoticedtheraptatG
tentionofmyclassmates,theireyesreflectingcuriosityand
respect.(运用了as引导的状语从句以及独立主格结构.)
[高分句型2] Throughthisinteraction,Irealizedthatby
embracingmyculturalidentity,Iwasnotonlypreserving
myheritagebutalsoenrichingthelivesofthosearound
me.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和“notonly...butalG
so...”连接两个并列结构.)
[参考范文]
Inaclassdiscussion,Iwasinvitedtoexplainthe
meaningofmyname.Standingup,IfeltamixofnerG
vousnessandexcitement.“Myname,Qiuyu,combinesthe
charactersforautumnandraininChinese,”Ibegan,my
voicesteady.“Autumnrepresentsharvestand maturity,
whilerainsymbolizesnourishmentandgrowth.Together,
theyembodyatimeofabundanceandrenewal.”AsI
spoke,Inoticedtheraptattentionofmyclassmates,their
eyesreflectingcuriosityandrespect.Itwasamomentof
connection,abridgebuiltbetweenculturesthroughthe
simpleactofsharingmyname.
Manyofmyclassmatesgotinterestedandcameupto
meafterclass.Theysurroundedme,theirquestionspouG
ringoutlikeastream.“Whatothernameshavebeautiful
meaningsinChinese?”“Canyouteachushowtowriteour
namesinChinesecharacters?”Ismiled,feelingawarmth
spreadthroughme.Itookoutapieceofpaperandbeganto
sketchoutcharacters,explainingeachstrokeanditssignifG
icance.Throughthisinteraction,IrealizedthatbyembraG
cingmyculturalidentity,Iwasnotonlypreserving my
heritagebutalsoenrichingthelivesofthosearoundme.It
wasasmalyetmeaningfulsteptowardsfosteringcultural
understandingandappreciation.
Writing2
[语篇解读] 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述 Kevin在父母
不在家时,看到一男子闯入格林夫妇家,他报警并阻止男
子,男子被捕后他怀疑自己是否做对.
[详解]
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“当格林夫妇回到家时,凯文去和
他们交谈.”可知,第一段可描述 Kevin向格林夫妇解释
他所做的事情,以及格林夫妇的反应和真相的揭露.
②由第二段首句内容“凯文和格林先生带着他们找到的
手表去 了 警 察 局.”可 知,第 二 段 可 描 述 Kevin和 Mr.
Green去警察局解释情况,以及事情解决后他们的感受
和 Kevin学到的教训.
2.续写线索:Kevin向 Green夫妇解释———Green夫妇的反
应———真相揭露———Kevin和 Green去警察局———事情
解决———Kevin的感受和教训
3.词汇激活:
行为类
①进入:enter/comeinto
②拥抱:hug/embrace
③找回:retrieve/getback
④核实:verify/confirm
情绪类
①吃惊:surprise/astonishment
②感激:gratitude/appreciation
③宽慰:relief/comfort
[点睛] [高分句型1] Mrs.GreenhuggedKevin,thanG
kinghimforhisbravery.(运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Atthepolicestation,theyexplainedthe
situationtotheofficers,whoweresurprisedbutunderG
standing.(运用了 who引导的非限制性定语从句)
[参考范文]
WhenMr.andMrs.Greengothome,Kevinwenttotalk
tothem.Heexplainedhowhehadwitnessedthestrangeman
enteringtheirhouseandhowhewasarrested.Mr.and Mrs.
Greenlistenedattentively,withamixtureofsurpriseandgratiG
tudeontheirfaces.Mrs.GreenhuggedKevin,thankinghimfor
hisbravery.Mr.Green,however,lookedthoughtful.Heasked
Kevintodescribethemanindetailandthenrevealedthatthe
manwasindeedhisyoungerbrother,whohadcometoretrievea
watchtheirfatherhadleftbehind.Kevinseyeswidenedin
shock.
KevinandMr.Greentookthewatchtheyhadfound
tothepolicestation.Ontheway,Mr.Greenexplained
thatthewatchwasafamilyheirloom,passeddownfrom
generationtogeneration.Atthepolicestation,theyexG
plainedthesituationtotheofficers,whoweresurprised
butunderstanding.Theman,whohadbeenreleasedafter
hisidentitywasverified,waswaitingoutside.Hesmiled
weaklyatKevin,whofeltamixofembarrassmentandreG
lief.Mr.Greenhandedoverthewatchtohisbrotherwith
apatontheback,andtheyalagreedtokeepintouch.
Kevinlearnedanimportantlessonthatday:alwaysverify
thefactsbeforetakingaction,butneverhesitatetohelp
thoseinneed.
Writing3
[语篇解读] 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了高中生 Eva
因为方向感不强,经常在学校里迷路,在一次体育课上教
练要求他们沿着校园跑步的时候 Eva发现跟着树的影子
能找到方向,她通过这个方法重新认识到了校园.
解析:1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“当 Pitt教练在终点线对她说:“干得
好!”,伊娃很惊讶.”可知,第一段可描写 Eva通过自己追
随影子的方法找到方向,并且受到了教练的称赞.
②由第二段首句内容“Eva决定用同样的手段来记住学校大
楼.”可知,第二段可描写 Eva通过记住影子的方法来记住学
校大楼并且通过这件事之后的感悟.
2.续写线索:方向感太差记不住学校建筑的位置———体育
课上绕着学校跑却找不到方向———害怕最后一名心里非
常紧张———跟随影子找到方 向———受到 教 练 的 赞 赏———
获得感悟
542
详解详析
3.词汇激活:
行为类
①努力做某事:struggletodosth./strivetodosth.
②导航:navigate/guide
③了解:learn/know/acknowledge
情绪类
①使某人惊讶:surprisesb./astonishsb.
②激动地:excitedly/inexcitement
[点睛] [高分句型1] Hereffortswerenoticedbythe
teacher,whopraisedherinnovativethinking.(who引导的
非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Shelearnedthatwithalittlecreativityand
observation,anychalengecouldbeovercome.(that引导的
宾语从句)
[参考范文]
WhenCoachPittsaid “Nicework!”toheratthefinG
ishline,Evawassurprised.Inthevastexpanseofher
school,agirlwithpoordirectionalskilsstruggledtonaviG
gateandoftengotlost.Oneday,duringgymclass,sheobG
servedauniquewaytofindherway-folowingtheshadG
owsoftrees.Asthesuncastitsrays,thegirlnoticedhow
theshadowscreatedpatternsontheground,guidingher
path.Shetookaleapoffaithandfolowedtheshadows,
surprisingherselfwitheachturnandstretch.Herefforts
werenoticedbytheteacher,whopraisedherinnovative
thinking.
Evadecidedtousethesametricktodealwiththe
schoolbuilding.Sheusedtheshadowstonavigatethe
schoolhalways,find herclasses,and evenlocatethe
schoolsvariousfacilities.Thisnewfoundskil notonly
helpedthegirlnavigateherschoolbutalsoinstiledinhera
senseofconfidenceandadventure.Shelearnedexcitedly
thatwithalittlecreativityandobservation,anychalenge
couldbeovercome.Andwitheachstepshetook,sheleft
behindalegacyofinspirationforthosewhofolowedinher
footsteps,knowingthatevenwithoutaclearsenseofdirecG
tion,theresalwaysawaytofindonesway.
Writing4
Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,
therecamethenews.IwasinformedthatIwonthefirst
prizeinthewritingcontestandthatthere wouldbean
awardpresentationintwodays.Iwassohappytohearthe
newsthatIimmediatelyshareditwithmyteacher.“Iknew
youdwin!Iamproudofyou.Youmadeit!”hesaidexcitG
edly.Thencamethebigday.WhenIwasinvitedtothe
stagetoreceivetheaward,Iexpressedmythankstomy
teacher.Isaid,“Itsyouwhomakemefalinlovewith
writing,mysocialstudiesteacher.WithoutyourrecogniG
tionandguidance,Icouldnthave writtenthisarticle.
Againthankyouverymuch!”
IwenttomyteachersofficeaftertheawardpresenG
tation.Myteacherwaswaitingforme.Holdingmyhands,
hesaid“Congratulations! Youareagoodwriter,sokeep
writing.”“YouknowIdidntlikewritingbefore,butnowI
amcrazyaboutit! I wil try my besttocreategood
works.”Isaidseriously.Sincethen,Ihavewrittenmany
goodworksandnowIamafamouswriter.IowemysucG
cesstomysocialstudiesteacherwhoisabeaconinmylife
ontheroadtowriting.
Writing5
Paragraph1:
Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldnt
lookatme.Isaidgentlyandquietly,“Noonecanchange
yourmind,exceptyourself.IfyoudesiretochalengeyourG
self,thereisnothingtodowithothersthoughts.”Hesat
stil withadeepbreath.“Youhaveafulpreparationbefore
thisevent,whichisthemostimportantreasonwhyyou
showuphere,”Iaddedwithasinceretone.Hearingmy
words,Davidturnedtometremblinglywithtearsspiling
outofhiseyesandexpressedhehadmadeafirmdetermiG
nationtofinishthecrossGcountryrun.Hiscoachheardwhat
Davidsaidandgavemealook—thekindthatwasmoredeG
terminedthananyoneelses.
Paragraph2:
IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewith
theotherrunners.Theracestarted.ItseemedthattherunG
waywasextremelylongforyoungchildren,nottomention
achildwithabraindisease.Davidinsistedonrunningasif
hehadforgottenalhisweaknesses,thoughhetrippedover
withinafewkilometers.Itdidnttakelongbeforehepicked
himselfupagainandcontinuedhismission.Classmatesal
appearedontheracingtrack,cheeringforhim.“Comeon!
Youcanmakeit! Weareproudofyou!”theyshoutedenG
thusiasticaly.Toeveryonesjoy,hereachedthefinalline
andrankedthe20th.Itwasnomoreimportantwhetherhe
wonthefirstplaceornot.Itwashisbraveheartandstrong
faiththatcouldmakesomethingunusualhappenfinaly.
主题2 亲情友情
Writing1
[语篇解读] 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者因担心
弟弟的狗 Toby影响聚会,要求弟弟看好狗,后因天气变化
导致弟弟提前离开并心生芥蒂.两个月后作者意识到自
己的过错,主动带着妻子做的饼干登门道歉,最终兄弟俩
和解的故事,展现了亲情中理解与包容的重要性.
[详解]
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我意识到是我错了.”可知,第一
段可描写作者反思自己在聚会上只顾控制局面,忽视了
Toby对弟弟的重要性,因骄傲迟迟未联系弟弟,最终通
过电话留言道歉并约定见面.
②由第二段首句内容“带着妻子做的饼干,我来到了弟
弟家门口.”可知,第二段可描写弟弟开门时的惊讶与沉
默,兄弟俩拥抱和解,坐在门廊上谈心,看着 Toby依偎
在弟弟腿边,明白亲情修复的意义.
2.续 写 线 索:反 思 过 错———电 话 留 言 道 歉———约 定 见
面———带饼 干 登 门———拥 抱 沉 默———谈 心 和 解———领
悟亲情
3.词汇激活:
行为类
①道歉:apologize/saysorry/makeanapology
②拥抱:hug/embrace
③重建:rebuild/restore/reconstruct
情绪类
①宽慰:relief/comfort/satisfaction/ease
②惊讶:surprised/shocked/astonished
[点睛] [高分句型1] Ihadbeensofocusedonkeeping
thepartyundercontrolthatIfailedtoconsiderhowimporG
tantTobywastomybrotherduringthisdifficulttime.(运
用了“so...that...”引导结果状语从句以及how引导宾语
从句.)
642
最新真题分类特训英语
[高分句型2] Oneevening,Ipickedupthephoneand
lefthimavoicemessage,apologizingformybehaviorand
askingifwecouldmeet.(运用了现在分词短语作状语以及
if引导的宾语从句.)
[高分句型3] AsIwatchedTobygentlyresthisheadon
mybrothersleg,Iknew wewerefinalyonthepathto
healing.(运用了as引导时间状语从句以及省略that的宾
语从句.)
[参考范文]
Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.Ihadbeenso
focusedonkeepingthepartyundercontrolthatIfailedto
considerhowimportantToby wasto mybrotherduring
thisdifficulttime.Mypridehadkeptmefromreaching
out,andnowmonthshadpassedwithoutaproperconverG
sation.Oneevening,Ipickedupthephoneandlefthima
voicemessage,apologizingformybehaviorandaskingif
wecouldmeet.Tomyrelief,hecaledbackthenextday,
andweagreedtogettogethersoon.
Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmy
brothersdoor.Heopeneditwithasurprisedsmile,and
foramoment,neitherofusspoke.Thenwehugged -
something wehadntdonesincebeforehis wifepassed
away.WesatontheporchwithTobyrestingbesideus,
andIhandedhimtheboxofbiscuits.“Thankyou,”hesaid
quietly.Wetalkedforhours,laughing,rememberingold
times,andslowlyrebuilding whathadbeenlost.AsI
watchedTobygentlyresthisheadonmybrothersleg,I
knewwewerefinalyonthepathtohealing.
Writing2
[写作指导]
◆文章主线
已知线索:
Henderson教授为他的心理学课分配项目伙伴———“我”被
分配到自己避之不及的队友———向新 的 队 友 介 绍 自 己
———被队友忽视———项目要求每个小组提出一个假说,并
进行验证———“我”和队友见面讨论“我们”的项目———达
成一致
可续写线索:
“我”和队友相处如何? 两人之间的关系有何转变? 看见
他躺在病床上,“我”有何感想? 项目进展如何? “我”有何
感悟?
◆续写词汇
续写可能用到的词汇:
gradualy,detail,effort,fuly,attention,helplessly,
energy,present,success,joy...
[参考范文]
Paragraph1:
Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.
Seriousasmyteammatewas,wegradualygrewingood
tunewitheachother.Hehadawaywithtechnicalthings
andapproachedeverydetailwithaclearpurpose.AndI
sparednoefforttodomybit,colectingdataandrecording
resultscarefuly,soastomakeupformyacademicdisadG
vantage.Ifulydiscussedmyideasandsharedmyinsights
withhim,whowasonceindifferentbutlaterlistenedtome
withcloseattention.Weweremakingsteadyprogresswith
ourproject.
Paragraph2:
OnedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtohospital
foraseriousdisease.ThemomentIsawhimlyinghelpG
lesslyinbed,IdecidedIhadtoactaloneanddomybest.I
assuredhimIwouldnotlethimdownandheshouldconG
centrateonrecovering.Ipouredmoretimeandenergyinto
thatprojectthaneverbefore,andfinalypresentedour
findingstotheclass,whichsurprisinglyearnedusanexG
celentgrade! WhenItoldhimaboutoursharedsuccess,
hesmiled.Ithadtodowithtrustandthejoyofsharinga
commonprize.
Writing3
[思路点拨]
一、起:阅读原文,了解本篇故事基本情节.
一对双胞胎想在母亲节给妈妈准备早餐(粥和面包),
但是因为没有经验把事情搞糟了.正当他们一筹莫展,深
陷绝望之时爸爸出现了
二、承转:分析续写段落首句,预设续写情节.(研究“矛盾
点”、预设“引爆点”)
“一方面渴望为妈妈准备一份早餐,一方面由于没有
经验而把事情搞砸了”这就是故事的“矛盾点”.解决这一
矛盾的关键在于预设富有生活情趣的情节———父亲在他
们无助时突然出现,无疑会让孩子们喜出望外;在父亲的
点拨下,孩子们找到了成功的感觉.这就是解决故事矛盾
点的“引爆点”.父亲是如何点拨? 孩子们是如何心领神
会? 大功告成时,主人公的心情又是怎样的? 来之不易的
早餐呈现在妈妈面前时的场景为哪般? 这个场面也是整
个故事的高潮,这里需要细 腻 的 描 写,需 要 强 烈 的 情 感
烘托.
三、合:体现本篇故事的写作目的,传递正能量.
主题语境:人与社会.从“渴望给妈妈惊喜”到“不知
所措”再到“皆大欢喜”,儿女为母亲,丈夫为妻子,一家人
其乐融融.值得注意的是,这个续写的落地点绝非单纯地
讲对母亲之爱,重点在于遇到困难的时候,如何听取别人
的“高见”,迎难而上,如此生活才会更美丽.
[参考范文]
Paragraph1:
Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,
theirfatherappeared.Theireyestwinkledwithpleasure
andturnedtohimforhelpimmediately.TheirfatherpaG
tientlyexplainedwhythebreakfasttheymadehadbeena
messandshowedthemtherightprocedures.Healsotold
themthatproblemswouldbecomesmaleraslongasthey
didntavoidthem,butconfrontedthem.ThankstohisenG
couragement,thetwinswereconfidentofmakingatasteful
breakfastfortheirmother.Jeffcleanedupthemesswitha
gloveandcookedtheporridgewithgreatcare.Jennafried
threepiecesofbreadonlowheatandpaintedaheartonthe
firstonewithhermothersfavoritesaladsauceabsorbedly.They
feltasmalglowofsatisfactionwheneverythingwasdone.
Paragraph2:
Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsand woke
theirmotherup.Shestaredatthebreakfastontheplate,
withtearsofjoystreamingdownherface.Shetoldthe
twinsthatitwasthebestsurpriseshehadeverreceived.
Thetwinsweresodelightedthattheygavekissesontheir
motherscheeks.Inaddition,theylearnedthatitwasessenG
tialtoseekadvicefromanexperiencedpersonliketheirfaG
therwhentheywereintrouble.Theywerereadytoriseto
theunpredictablechalengesintheirfuturelife.
主题3 助人为乐
Writing1
[语篇解读] 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在一次
因风暴延误的旅途中,匆忙搭乘出租车前往车站赶最后一
班去布拉格的公共汽车.司机冈特不熟悉车站位置,通过
电话求助后顺利抵达.到达时作者却发现自己没带现金,
尝试用葡萄牙银行卡支付没有成功,而车站的取款机也故
障了.
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详解详析
解析:1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我跑回到冈特那里,告诉他这个坏
消息.”可知,第一段可描写作者留下冈特的电话,承诺会
还钱给对方,最终作者及时登上了公共汽车.
②由第二段首句内容“四天后,当我回到维也纳时,我按照
承诺给冈特打了电话.”可知,第二段可描写作者还钱给冈
特,并向对方表示感激,两人成为了好朋友.
2.续写线索:作者给出解决办法———承诺还钱———履行承
诺还钱———作者登上 公 共 汽 车———冈 特 帮 助———两 人 成
为朋友
[提分词句]
1.提 分 词 汇:withouthesitation毫 不 犹 豫;betouchedby
被感动;pulaway开动;chatabout闲 聊;turninto
变成;thanksto归功于等.
2.提分句型:therebeing构成的独立主格结构;现在分词的
完成式作状语;what引导的主语从句等.
[参考范文]
IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.WithG
outhesitation,hereachedintohisownwaletandhanded
mesomecash.“Here,takeitbecauseIthinkyouneedsome
cashtopayforthebus,”hesaid,therebeingtrustinhis
eyes.Iwastouchedbyhisgenerosity,tearsofgratitude
streamingdownmycheeks.Havingpromisedtopayback
hismoneyandwrittendownhistelephonenumber,IboarG
dedthebusjustintime.IwavedatGunterthroughthe
window,mouthing “Thankyou.”againandagain.His
warmsmilewasthelastthingIsawwiththebuspulingaway.
Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,Icalled
Gunteraspromised.Iwantedtorepayhimandproperly
expressmygratitude.Heansweredthephonecheerfuly,
rememberingmeimmediately.Wearrangedto meetata
caféneartheairport.When we met,Ihandedhimthe
moneyIowed,alongwithasmalgiftfromPraguetoshow
myappreciation.GunterwasdelightedandwespenttheafG
ternoonchattingaboutourlives,hobbiesandtravels.What
hadstartedasastressfuleveningturnedintoawonderful
friendship,althankstoGunterskindnessandtrustinme.
Writing2
[语篇解读] 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者为了完
成高中毕业所需的社区服务时间,需要在所在的社区做点
什么,作者去了施粥所,作者发现准备过程中要做的事情
很多,作者看到无家可归的人靠近时心里有点害怕,但是
却忙得没有时间去担心这些,作者看到了年龄和国籍各不
相同的人,这让作者感到很难过.
解析:1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“当他们朝我走来的时候,我露出了
最灿烂、最幸福的笑容.”可知,第一段可描写作者是怎么
为无家可归的人施粥.
②由第二段首句内容“我很高兴我用这种方式赢得了我的
服务时间.”可 知,第 二 段 可 描 写 作 者 对 这 次 社 区 服 务 的
感悟.
2.续写线索:对无家可归的人笑———作者舀粥———无家可
归的人感激———作者感悟———作者发出呼吁
3.词汇激活:
行为类
①倒:pour/decant
②意识到:realizethat/beawarethat
③主张:urgesb.todo/advocatesb.todo
情绪类
①感谢:gratefuly/thankfuly
②急切的:anxious/eager
[点睛] [高分句型1] Thisexperiencemademerealize
thattherearesomanypeopleinthisworldwhoneedour
help.(由that引导的宾语从句和 who引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Iwilneverforgetthewaytheylookedat
mewhentheyweregivenfood.(由关系代词that引导的定
语从句,省略了that和 when引导的时间状语从句)
[参考范文]
Paragraph1:
Astheycameinmydirection,Iputonmybrightest
andhappiestsmile.Iwantedto makethem knowthatI
wasrealyanxioustohelpthem.Tomyrelief,theysmiled
politelybackatmewhentheysaw mysmile,andIcould
seetheirexhaustionintheireyes.Iwantedtoknow what
theyweregoingthroughandIwasdesperatetoknowwhat
Icoulddoforthem.TheynoddedgratefulyasIpushedmy
spoonintothepotandtookalargespoonfulandpouredit
intotheirbowls.
Paragraph2:
IwassohappythatIhadearnedmyservicehoursin
thisway.Thisexperiencemademerealizethatthereareso
manypeopleinthisworldwhoneedourhelp.Italsomade
merealizethatoursmalactofkindnesscanmakethemfeel
warmandmakeagreatdifferencetothem.IwilneverforG
getthewaytheylookedatmewhentheyweregivenfood.I
amanxioustourgetheworldtodoeverythingpossibleto
helpthoseinneed.
主题4 人与动物
Writing
[写作指导]
◆文章主线
已知线索:
作者受邀去一个农场野餐———作者发现一只蜂鸟被蜘蛛
网困住 了———作 者 把 蜂 鸟 救 了 下 来,但 它 迟 迟 不 肯 飞
走———当作者捧着蜂鸟走过一条布满黑莓的小路时,它开
始动了,但还是没有立刻飞走———蜂鸟盯着作者的眼睛,
左右转动它的头———蜂鸟终于飞走了———当作者准备离
开农场时,蜂鸟又飞到了作者面前,好像是在与作者告
别
可续写线索:
作者再次见到蜂鸟了吗? 蜂鸟做了什么? 作者有何感想?
◆续写词汇
续写可能用到的词汇:
near,drift,rescue,rushbackto,comfort,wonder,get
on,catchonesattention,turnaround,convey,relief,
awe,atthesightof,grateful...
[参考范文]
Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.Asmy
carnearedit(时间状语从句)mythoughtsdriftedbackto
themomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbirdfromthespiG
derGwebs(定语从句).Irushedbacktothedesertedhouse.
Itwasagreatcomfortthattheoriginalholeinthewindow
wasnowheretobefound(主语从句).Leavingthehouse,I
couldnthelpwonderinghowitwasgettingonnow(宾语从
句).
IwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdapG
peared.Aflashofmovementcaughtmyattention.Iturned
aroundtoseethesamehummingbirdhoveringintheair.It
seemedthatthebirdwaswaitingforme(主语从句),its
beadyeyeslockedon mineasiftryingtoconveysome
deep,unspokengratitude.Ifeltasurgeofreliefandaweat
thesightofthissoundandgratefulcreature,andIknew
thatIwouldalwayscherishthememories(宾语从句)we
shared(定语从句)asIclimbedintomycaranddroveaway
(时间状语从句).
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