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英语写作指导(一) 求助信
Part A: Model
假定你是李华,你正在为高考紧张复习,但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习,于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下:
1. 作业多,没时间运动。
2. 压力大,难以入睡。
3. 希望得到Kate的帮助。
注意:字数100左右,可以适当增加细节,注意行连贯
Dear kate,
I am Li hua, a senior 3 student. Recently, I have been busy_______( prepare) for my college Entrance Exam, but_______( unfortunate) I find it quite hard to focus on my study. So I am writing to ask you _________ help.
I am meeting with some problems ________trouble me a lot. First, I have to spend so much time on my homework _________ I hardly have time to take sports. Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely________( stress) because I don't want to let them down. What_____( trouble) me most is that it's difficult for me to fall asleep every night.
________(Face) with the above problems, I am anxious _______( get) your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems? I really appreciate ____if you could consider my requests favourably.
Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours
yours
Part B: Outline / structure
1. 表明写信的目的,请求帮助。
2. 清晰陈述请求帮助的具体问题。
3. 希望得到帮助(语气委婉真诚),对别人帮助表示感谢并盼望得到回复。
Part C: 常用词语
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1. 做某事有麻烦
2. 遇到一些问题或困难
3. 让某人失望
4. 寻求帮助
5. 给某人帮助
6. 忙于做某事
7. 为某事做准备
8. 集中精力
9. 学以致用
10. 克服恐惧
11. 取得巨大的进步
12. 渴望做某事
13. 提供一些有建设性的指导
14. 因某事感谢某人
Part D: 常用句式
1. 我写信请求你的帮助。
2. 我遇到了三个困扰我的问题。首先,… 其次…. 最困扰我的事…
3. 不幸的是,我觉得做某事很困难。
4. 面对以上的问题,我渴望得到你的帮助,你能给予我一些关于…的建议吗?
5. 希望您能很好地考虑我的请求
6. 我想知道你能否帮助我解决这些问题,如果你能帮助我处理此事,我将感激不尽。
Part E:Correction
Dear sir
I am a middle school student and I am writing to tell you my problem troubled me for a long time. It is relationship between my mother and me.
My mother is a university professor and working very hard. She is strict in me but she is so busy with her work which she finds little time to talk to me. I love her and I do well in my studies, but I still feel a little afraid of her because she losses her temper easy. I don’t know how to communicate with her. Maybe it is because we have seldom sat down and exchange our feelings and thought. I hope we can understand for each other better. I do hope we will be close. I would appreciate you if you give me a way out.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
Part F:Homework
假如你是李华,你的叔叔是一位戏剧专家,你校英语俱乐部拟于5月25日举办一个“戏剧之夜”, 你班在选择剧本时遇到了困难。请根据以下短剧的要求,给你的叔叔一封信,请他给予建议和帮助。
1. 短剧40分钟左右,不能太长太短 2. 题材与校园生活有关。
注意:1. 词数100左右 2. 信的格式已给出,不计入总词数
Dear Uncle,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
英语写作指导(二) 建议信
Part A: Model
Dear Andrew,
How nice______( hear) from you again! I think______ is natural for you not to get used to the life there. Here I have some_________( suggestion) for you.
First of all, you should respect the local customs there and try to involve yourself in the natives’ lives. Just as the saying ______(go) , “When in Rome, do ________ the Romans do.” Secondly, don’t be afraid___________(communicate) with American students and make friends with them. Friendship will bring you________( happy). What’s more, it is better for you to join in more outdoor activities with your friends, _______may help you relax and have fun. __________(Final), mind your own manners and remain modest and honest when getting along _______your friends.
I hope my suggestions ______(help). May you adapt _____your new life and enjoy your stay there.
Yours sincerely
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. Why not try writing to me in Chinese next time
I hope you will find the above suggestions will be useful and helpful. I will be more than glad to see any improvements in this regard. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
Part B: Outline / structure
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议,让对方接受自己的想法和主张解决有关问题。提出的想法和主张要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。同时建议信要简洁明确理由充足,具有说服力。
1. 表明写信的目的。
2. 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告
3. 表达希望采纳建议或所提的建议对对方有所帮助并盼望得到回复。
Part C: 常用词语
1. 给某人建议
2. 如下
3. 做某事时遇到困难
4. 利用
5. 制订一个计划
6. 参加
7. 认为… 有用
8. 听从某人的建议
9. 把…考虑在内
10. 得到改善
11. 依我看来
Part D: 常用句式
1. 你就…向我寻求建议,我写信就这个问题表明我的观点。
2. 我觉得如果你能够…., 这将是很有帮助的/ 有益的
3. 如果我是你,我会….
4. 我希望你会觉得这些建议是有帮助的。
5. 我希望你会考虑我的建议的。
6. 我会非常高兴看到这个方面的改善提高。
Part E: Common model
Dear Li hua,
Having received your letter, I know that you have some difficulty in—————, which is a common problem. Here are a few of my suggestios./ I will try to give some suggestions.
In the first place/ first of all, you had better ________, in this way, _______. What’s more, it’s a good idea __________ so that ____________. Last but not least, if you could ______________ , it would be useful/ helpful/ beneficial.
I do hope you will find my suggestions practical. Wish you all the best.
Part F: Homework
假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom的弟弟沉溺于电脑游戏,不能集中精力学习。Tom非常着急,向你来信求助。请你在给Tom的回信中提出一些建议。(开头和结尾已经为你写好)。
内容包括以下要点:
1. 耐心说服弟弟不要沉迷于电脑游戏;
2. 适当玩游戏可以得到放松,从而更高效地(more efficiently)学习;
3. 让他多和朋友交流;4. 给他提供其它的娱乐方式。
注意:1.词数不少于100个; 2. 作文中不能出现学校和个人的名字。 3.参考词汇:
1) 沉溺于be addicted to 2) 说服 persuade ( sb. to do ) 3) 更高效地 more efficiently
Dear Tom,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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