内容正文:
外研版必修一 Unit 2 Exploring English
建议信直击高考
单元话题
真题再现
考情分析
人与自我,主题语境学习英语,探索英语
【2023▪新高考I&II卷】
近几年高考应用文写作考查范围越来越广,写人叙事类也时有考查。人物介绍主要涉及人物特征、突出的事迹,以及对个人或者社会的影响。
目的是培养学生高尚的道德情操和帮助学生树立正确的人生观和价值观。
本单元主要涉及英语的历史,英语中的谚语,依次呈现了英语语言的多样性、创造性、学生不熟悉的英语表达等。本单元容易涉及到的应用文文体可以是语言学习的建议等。
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括;
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议
(
写作框架
)
建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告,一定要写得简明扼要、目的明确,具有合理性和说服力,并注意要礼貌当先。同时,建议信要简洁明确、理由充足, 具有合理性和说服力。通常以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;“第一人称”和“第二人称”为主。
[基本框架]
(
素材宝库
)
首段:
(1) I am writing to offer you some constructive suggestions regarding...
我写信是为了就.....向你提供一些建设性的建议
(2) Having learned about your difficulties in..., I feel it necessary to share with you some practical advice.
得知你在.....方面遇到了困难,我觉得有必要与你分享一些可行的建议
(3) I recently received your letter and fully understand your concerns about .... To help you address this issue, I would like to offer some practical advice.
我最近收到了你的来信,并完全理解你对.....的担忧。为了帮助你解决这个问题,我想提供一些实用的建议。
(4) Knowing that you are currently facing challenges in ..., I would like to share some useful strategies that may be of assistance.
知道你目前在.....方面面临挑战,我想与你分享一些可能有所帮助的实用策略。
(5) I was pleased to receive your letter and am more than willing to offer you some valuable advice on..., which I believe will significantly improve your situation.
我很高兴收到你的来信,并愿意为你提供一些关于.....的宝贵建议,我相信这些建议会显著改善你的情况。
主体段:
(1)To begin with, if I were you,I would do sth.,which would contribute to(doing)sth.
首先,如果我是你,我会做某事,这样有利于...
(2 ) Equally important(practical) is to do sth. Not only can it do sth.but also do sth..
同等重要的是做...它不仅... 而且...
(3)It is highly recommended that you(should)do sth.
强烈建议你(应该)做某事。
(4)Personally,it would be of greater benefit(more beneficial)if you could do sth.
在我看来,如果你能...将会更有好处。
(5)The more(比较级)...the more(比较级)...
(6)(Doing sth serves as an ideal way to deal with the problem.
做某事是一个理想的方式解决问题。
(7)It might be a fantastic idea to do sth.
做某事是一个极好的注意。
(8)It is of vital importance(vitally important)for sb.to do sth.
做某事对某人来说是至关重要。
(9)The top priority should be to do sth.
当务之急是做某事。
尾段:
1. I would appreciate it if you could take my ideas into serious account. Any early replies will be highly appreciated(anticipated).如果你能认真考虑我的建议,我将不胜感激。期待你早日回信。
2. Hopefully, these suggestions will be beneficial to you. Any early replies will be highly appreciated
希望我的建议会对你有益(有用)。期待你早日回信。
(
经典模板
)
模板一:
Dear ___________
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble in__________________________________.I am writing to give you some of my suggestions.
Initially, you'd better________________________________.(建议一)Besides,it would be a great idea to _____________________________________________,(建议二)because________________________(建议的原因)In addition, if I were you, I would _________________________________(建议三)I firmly believe that____________________________________________.(相信能够克服困难)
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Feel free to contact me if you have any questions.Your early reply is highly expected.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(
典例引领
)
(
实战演练
)【2023▪新高考I&II卷】
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括;
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【思路点拨】
建议信一般使用第一、二人称,时态以一般现在时为主。学生们在落笔前需要确定好每一段的中心内容,列出提纲,从而避免跑题。
Para1:收到来信,得知……(问题);安慰;写作目的(提建议);
Para2:具体的建议与理由;
Para3:希望采纳并祝福,期待情况改善。
【美文在线】
Dear Ryan,
I am Lihua, one of your students. I have some concerns about pairing up students randomly
for spoken English training. While I appreciate the idea of promoting interaction, I believe there are potential drawbacks to your approach.
Firstly, randomly pairing students might result in imbalanced skill levels within each group. Some students might struggle to keep up, while others could find the exercises too easy, which could hinder effective learning for both parties.Instead, I suggest grouping students based on their current English proficiency. This way, they can benefit from practicing with someone of a similar skill level, allowing for more meaningful interactions and targeted improvement.
Thank you for considering this suggestion. I believe it could enhance the learning experience for everyone.
Yours,
Lihua
(
实战演练
)
假定你是李华,你的朋友小明最近对记忆英语单词很是苦恼,请给他写一封信给出你的想法和建议, 内容包括:
(1) 你的建议;(2)你的期待。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
第一步:字斟句酌
1.听到你一直对如何记住如此多的英语单词所困惑,我感到很遗憾。 (confused)
________________________________________________________________________________________
2.这么多令人困惑的英语单词可能已让你很迷惑。 (confusing,be likely to)
________________________________________________________________________________________
3.实际上,一开始遇到一些不熟悉的单词,在学习英语语法时有困难是相当常见的。(actually,it 作形式主语,rather,come across,unfamiliar, have trouble doing)
__________________________________________________________________________________________
4意识到困难,你不应该消极,而应该找到自己的方法来应对它们。(形容词短语作状语,be aware of, negative)
___________________________________________________________________________________________
5.大家意识到多花时间阅读英语文章是非常有效的。 (it作形式主语,recognise)
___________________________________________________________________________________________
6.你不仅可以记住很多新单词,还可以通过上下文更好地理解整篇文章。(倒装,not only...but also...,context)
___________________________________________________________________________________________
7.希望你尽快适应你的英语学习!(as soon as possible)
___________________________________________________________________________________________
第二步:连句成篇
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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举一反三
)
1.假定你叫李华,你的美国朋友John来信,说他正在学习中文,他希望暑假来中国旅游能用中文和中国朋友交流,但是仍然担心用中文交流时会遇到困难。请你用英语给John写封回信,提几点建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,
How is everything going?
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2.假定你是李华,你的英国好友Mike发现很多同学借助AI直接生成作文,他对此感到困惑,写信询问你的看法。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
(1) 你的态度;
(2) 你的建议。
注意:
(1) 写作词数应为80个左右;
(2) 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动。你的外国好友Jim打算参加,为此发来邮件,就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 提出的建议;
2. 建议的理由。
提示词:倡议 proposal
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4.为了帮助学生健康成长,你校英文报开设了“心灵驿站”(Heart-to-Heart)专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑李津,收到了一封署名Jim的求助信。信中,Tom提到自己最近因为和好朋友产生误会,导致情绪低落,甚至影响了学习状态。请你用英文给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 表示理解并给予安慰;
2. 提出建议并说明理由。
要求:
1. 词数不少于100;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.假定你是学生会主席李华,获悉你校食堂计划举办“Healthy Eating Week”的活动。请代表学生会给食堂负责人写一封建议信。
内容需包括:
1. 活动的重要性;
2. 活动的建议(至少两条)。
注意:
1. 写作词数80词左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Hua, president of the Students’ Union.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
12 / 17
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
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外研版必修一 Unit 2 Exploring English
建议信直击高考
单元话题
真题再现
考情分析
人与自我,主题语境学习英语,探索英语
【2023▪新高考I&II卷】
近几年高考应用文写作考查范围越来越广,写人叙事类也时有考查。人物介绍主要涉及人物特征、突出的事迹,以及对个人或者社会的影响。
目的是培养学生高尚的道德情操和帮助学生树立正确的人生观和价值观。
本单元主要涉及英语的历史,英语中的谚语,依次呈现了英语语言的多样性、创造性、学生不熟悉的英语表达等。本单元容易涉及到的应用文文体可以是语言学习的建议等。
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括;
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议
(
写作框架
)
建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告,一定要写得简明扼要、目的明确,具有合理性和说服力,并注意要礼貌当先。同时,建议信要简洁明确、理由充足, 具有合理性和说服力。通常以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;“第一人称”和“第二人称”为主。
[基本框架]
(
素材宝库
)
首段:
(1) I am writing to offer you some constructive suggestions regarding...
我写信是为了就.....向你提供一些建设性的建议
(2) Having learned about your difficulties in..., I feel it necessary to share with you some practical advice.
得知你在.....方面遇到了困难,我觉得有必要与你分享一些可行的建议
(3) I recently received your letter and fully understand your concerns about .... To help you address this issue, I would like to offer some practical advice.
我最近收到了你的来信,并完全理解你对.....的担忧。为了帮助你解决这个问题,我想提供一些实用的建议。
(4) Knowing that you are currently facing challenges in ..., I would like to share some useful strategies that may be of assistance.
知道你目前在.....方面面临挑战,我想与你分享一些可能有所帮助的实用策略。
(5) I was pleased to receive your letter and am more than willing to offer you some valuable advice on..., which I believe will significantly improve your situation.
我很高兴收到你的来信,并愿意为你提供一些关于.....的宝贵建议,我相信这些建议会显著改善你的情况。
主体段:
(1)To begin with, if I were you,I would do sth.,which would contribute to(doing)sth.
首先,如果我是你,我会做某事,这样有利于...
(2 ) Equally important(practical) is to do sth. Not only can it do sth.but also do sth..
同等重要的是做...它不仅... 而且...
(3)It is highly recommended that you(should)do sth.
强烈建议你(应该)做某事。
(4)Personally,it would be of greater benefit(more beneficial)if you could do sth.
在我看来,如果你能...将会更有好处。
(5)The more(比较级)...the more(比较级)...
(6)(Doing sth serves as an ideal way to deal with the problem.
做某事是一个理想的方式解决问题。
(7)It might be a fantastic idea to do sth.
做某事是一个极好的注意。
(8)It is of vital importance(vitally important)for sb.to do sth.
做某事对某人来说是至关重要。
(9)The top priority should be to do sth.
当务之急是做某事。
尾段:
1. I would appreciate it if you could take my ideas into serious account. Any early replies will be highly appreciated(anticipated).如果你能认真考虑我的建议,我将不胜感激。期待你早日回信。
2. Hopefully, these suggestions will be beneficial to you. Any early replies will be highly appreciated
希望我的建议会对你有益(有用)。期待你早日回信。
(
经典模板
)
模板一:
Dear ___________
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble in__________________________________.I am writing to give you some of my suggestions.
Initially, you'd better________________________________.(建议一)Besides,it would be a great idea to _____________________________________________,(建议二)because________________________(建议的原因)In addition, if I were you, I would _________________________________(建议三)I firmly believe that____________________________________________.(相信能够克服困难)
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Feel free to contact me if you have any questions.Your early reply is highly expected.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(
典例引领
)
(
实战演练
)【2023▪新高考I&II卷】
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括;
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【思路点拨】
建议信一般使用第一、二人称,时态以一般现在时为主。学生们在落笔前需要确定好每一段的中心内容,列出提纲,从而避免跑题。
Para1:收到来信,得知……(问题);安慰;写作目的(提建议);
Para2:具体的建议与理由;
Para3:希望采纳并祝福,期待情况改善。
【美文在线】
Dear Ryan,
I am Lihua, one of your students. I have some concerns about pairing up students randomly
for spoken English training. While I appreciate the idea of promoting interaction, I believe there are potential drawbacks to your approach.
Firstly, randomly pairing students might result in imbalanced skill levels within each group. Some students might struggle to keep up, while others could find the exercises too easy, which could hinder effective learning for both parties.Instead, I suggest grouping students based on their current English proficiency. This way, they can benefit from practicing with someone of a similar skill level, allowing for more meaningful interactions and targeted improvement.
Thank you for considering this suggestion. I believe it could enhance the learning experience for everyone.
Yours,
Lihua
(
实战演练
)
假定你是李华,你的朋友小明最近对记忆英语单词很是苦恼,请给他写一封信给出你的想法和建议, 内容包括:
(1) 你的建议;(2)你的期待。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
第一步:字斟句酌
1.听到你一直对如何记住如此多的英语单词所困惑,我感到很遗憾。 (confused)
________________________________________________________________________________________
2.这么多令人困惑的英语单词可能已让你很迷惑。 (confusing,be likely to)
________________________________________________________________________________________
3.实际上,一开始遇到一些不熟悉的单词,在学习英语语法时有困难是相当常见的。(actually,it 作形式主语,rather,come across,unfamiliar, have trouble doing)
__________________________________________________________________________________________
4意识到困难,你不应该消极,而应该找到自己的方法来应对它们。(形容词短语作状语,be aware of, negative)
___________________________________________________________________________________________
5.大家意识到多花时间阅读英语文章是非常有效的。 (it作形式主语,recognise)
___________________________________________________________________________________________
6.你不仅可以记住很多新单词,还可以通过上下文更好地理解整篇文章。(倒装,not only...but also...,context)
___________________________________________________________________________________________
7.希望你尽快适应你的英语学习!(as soon as possible)
___________________________________________________________________________________________
答案:1I'm sorry to hear that you have been confused about how to remember too many English words.
2.So many confusing English words may be likely to have confused you a lot.
3.Actually, it is rather common to come across some unfamiliar words and have trouble learning English grammar at first.
4Aware of the difficulties, instead of being negative, you should find your own way to deal with them.
5.It is recognized that spending much time reading the articles written in English is very efficient.
6.Not only can you remember a lot of new words, but you can also have a good understanding of the whole article through context.
7.Hope you adapt to your English learning as soon as possible!
第二步:连句成篇
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案:
Dear Xiaoming,
I'm sorry to hear that you have been confused about how to remember too many English words.
So many confusing English words may be likely to have confused you a lot. But actually, it is rather common to come across some unfamiliar words and have trouble learning English grammar at first. Aware of the difficulties, instead of being negative, you should find your own way to deal with them. It is widely recognised that spending much time reading the articles written in English is very efficient. Not only can you remember a lot of new words, but you can also have a good understanding of the whole article through context.
Hope you adapt to your English learning as soon as possible!
Yours,
Li Hua
(
举一反三
)
1.假定你叫李华,你的美国朋友John来信,说他正在学习中文,他希望暑假来中国旅游能用中文和中国朋友交流,但是仍然担心用中文交流时会遇到困难。请你用英语给John写封回信,提几点建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,
How is everything going?
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear John,
How is everything going? I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer holiday. Now let me tell you something about how to learn Chinese well. You should not be shy and speak Chinese whenever you can. This is very important. The more you use Chinese, the better you will learn it. You’d better speak slowly, and repeat the words if necessary. If others can’t understand you, you can use pictures or body language to help you. I hope these advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友John写信,针对他用中文交流时可能遇到的困难给出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→happy
害羞的:shy→timid
重要的:important→significant
建议:advice→suggestion
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer holiday.
同义句:I’m extremely delighted to hear that you will be visiting China this summer vacation.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer holiday. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】The more you use Chinese, the better you will learn it. (运用了“the+比较级,the+比较级”的句型)
2.假定你是李华,你的英国好友Mike发现很多同学借助AI直接生成作文,他对此感到困惑,写信询问你的看法。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
(1) 你的态度;
(2) 你的建议。
注意:
(1) 写作词数应为80个左右;
(2) 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I hope this email finds you well. Thank you for sharing me with your worries about using AI for English essays. After careful consideration, here is what I think.
While AI boosts efficiency and language skills, relying too heavily on it risks slowing your growth. For one thing, writing isn’t just creating text — it’s a journey to develop critical thinking, creativity, and self-expression. For another, letting AI draft essays for you takes away chances to promote your ability to improve vocabulary and polish sentences. Therefore, it is strongly recommended that you should organize your ideas first, and then turn to AI for grammar checks or inspiration, which enables you to develop skills while using tech’s benefits. Never forget: AI amplifies your potential but can’t replace your originality.
Stay curious, and trust your potential! Feel free to discuss it further.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友Mike写一封邮件,阐述你对很多同学借助AI直接生成作文的态度以及给出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
担心:worry → concern
依靠:rely on → depend on
机会:chance → opportunity
因此;therefore → thus
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Thank you for sharing me with your worries about using AI for English essays.
拓展句:Thank you for sharing with me what worries you about using AI for English essays.
【点睛】【高分句型1】After careful consideration, here is what I think.(运用了what引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】While AI boosts efficiency and language skills, relying too heavily on it risks slowing your growth. (运用了while引导的让步状语从句)
3.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动。你的外国好友Jim打算参加,为此发来邮件,就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 提出的建议;
2. 建议的理由。
提示词:倡议 proposal
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear that you want to take part in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers. Here’s my advice.
I suggest focusing on environmental protection. As we know, the environment is facing serious problems, which affect everyone’s life. If we can raise awareness about it and encourage more people to take action, it will make a big difference. Another idea is to promote cultural exchange. We live in a world where different cultures coexist. By sharing our cultures and learning from each other, we can build a more harmonious global community.
I hope these suggestions help! Let me know if you need more ideas.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生针对外国好友Jim关于联合国全球青少年倡议征集活动的询问进行回复,给出倡议内容的建议及理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad → delighted
建议:suggest→advise
关注:focus on → concentrate on
提高:raise→enhance
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I’m glad to hear that you want to take part in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers.
拓展句:Hearing that you want to take part in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers, I feel glad.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We live in a world where different cultures coexist.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Let me know if you need more ideas.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
4.为了帮助学生健康成长,你校英文报开设了“心灵驿站”(Heart-to-Heart)专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑李津,收到了一封署名Jim的求助信。信中,Tom提到自己最近因为和好朋友产生误会,导致情绪低落,甚至影响了学习状态。请你用英文给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 表示理解并给予安慰;
2. 提出建议并说明理由。
要求:
1. 词数不少于100;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret.
Here’s what you can do. To begin with, talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. What’s more, going outdoors and playing team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. In addition, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】这是一篇应用文。考生收到了一封署名Jim的求助信。信中,Tom提到自己最近因为和好朋友产生误会,导致情绪低落,甚至影响了学习状态。请你用英文给他写一封回信。
【详解】1. 词汇积累:
艰难时期:bad time→tough time
控制:control→dominate
处理,移除:get rid of→remove
乐观的:optimistic→positive
2. 句式拓展:
简单句变复合句
原句:Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
拓展句:Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits, which may significantly improve your overall well-being.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much.(运用了 that 引导的表语从句和when引导的定语从句)
【高分句型 2】To begin with, talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.(运用了how引导的宾语从句以及which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
5.假定你是学生会主席李华,获悉你校食堂计划举办“Healthy Eating Week”的活动。请代表学生会给食堂负责人写一封建议信。
内容需包括:
1. 活动的重要性;
2. 活动的建议(至少两条)。
注意:
1. 写作词数80词左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Hua, president of the Students’ Union.
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/ Madam,
Learning that our school canteen plans to hold an event called Healthy Eating Week, I am writing to offer some suggestions.
This initiative is of great significance as it will foster a healthier campus culture, raising our awareness of nutrition. To boost participation, we can set up a suggestion box for students to voice their opinions on healthy recipes and winning recipes could be prepared by the canteen chefs. Additionally, participants who share photos of their balanced meals for five consecutive days might receive rewards like fresh fruit or yogurt.
Hope my ideas are helpful. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,是一封建议信,要求考生代表学生会给食堂负责人写一封信,说明“Healthy Eating Week”活动的重要性并提出至少两条活动建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
计划:plan→ intend
建议:suggestion→ recommendation
提供:offer→ provide
有用的:helpful→ useful
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:I am writing to offer some suggestions.
拓展句:I am writing to contribute some ideas for consideration.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that our school canteen plans to hold an event called Healthy Eating Week, I am writing to offer some suggestions.(使用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】Additionally, participants who share photos of their balanced meals for five consecutive days might receive rewards like fresh fruit or yogurt.(使用了以participants为先行词的定语从句,引导词为关系代词who)
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