Unit 1 A New Start 日记（单元同步写作讲义）英语外研版2019必修第一册

外研版必修一 Unit 1 A New Start Writing a journal entry直击高考 近五年高考应用文未涉及该文体。 ( 写作框架 ) 日记是指把自己在当天生活中经历的有意义的事或所见所闻所想记录下来。与汉语日记一样，写日记时要先写日期、星期(可以省略)和天气情况。 [基本框架] 开头:引出事件； 主体:详细描述事情经过； 结尾:发表感想。 要写好英文日记，需要注意以下几点： 1．格式要正确。英文日记与中文日记写法大致相同，都是在正文之前，先依次有日期、星期几及当天的天气情况。 2．表达要清楚、准确、连贯。判断的标准就是通过阅读你的日记，看你是否用简洁明了的英语把事情经过及自己的感想等准确无误地表达了出来。 3．文体要口语化 。因为日记是写给自己看的，其内容多是记述自己亲身经历和亲眼看到的事或抒发自己的感情等，所以用第一人称写，文体也不必过分讲究，只需把该写的东西写清楚即可。 4．写日记的时间一般是在下午、晚上，有时也可以在第二天补写。因此，日记中所记述的事情通常发生在过去，常用一般过去时；但当记述天气、描写景色或展望未来时，可以用一般现在时或一般将来时。 ( 素材宝库 ) 【词汇积累】 holiday an unforgettable experience难忘的经历 create wonderful memories创造美好的回忆 scenery风景 outdoor activities户外活动 journey旅行 visit the museum/historical sites 参观博物馆/历史遗迹 travel to a coastal city 去海边城市旅行 explore the ancient forest 探索古老森林 take photos 拍照 try local food 尝试当地食物 learn from从…… 中学习 amazing令人惊讶的 fantastic极好的 unforgettable（难忘的 exciting令人兴奋的 meaningful有意义的 tiring but happy累但快乐 【句式积累】 1. Today is a weekend and it is the traditional Chinese festival-the Mid-Autumn Festival. 今天是周末，也是中国的传统佳节一-中秋节。 2.This was my first visit to the West Lake. 这是我第一次参观西湖。 3. As soon as we got there, we were divided into several groups. 我们一到那里就被分成了几个小组。 4. We were walking on our way home when we suddenly heard a cry for help. 我们正走在回家的路上，突然听到求救声。 5. Before we knew it, we had to say goodbye and go back home. 不知不觉，我们必须说再回家了。 6. We felt happy because we had done good job. 我们感到高兴，因为我们做了一件好事。 7. This was a real life-changing experience that I would never forget. 这是一次真正改变生活的经历，我永远不会忘记。 8.What a wonderful experience it is ! 多么棒的经历啊！ 9. Not only did it add color to my boring school life, but it also deepened my understanding of friendship. 它不仅为我枯燥的校园生活增添了色彩，还加深了我对友谊的理解。 ( 典例引领 ) Friday 8 September sunny to rainy Finally , my classmates and I went to a farm for a trip. In the morning, we helped the farmers pick apples. The orchard(果园) was full of red fruits, and the air smelled sweet. I climbed a ladder carefully, but my hands were shaking. “Don’t worry!” the farmer said with a smile. Later, we made apple juice together—it was so fresh and delicious! In the afternoon, it rained heavily. We couldn’t go hiking, so we played games inside. Although the weather was bad, we laughed and danced all morning. Before leaving, the farmer gave each of us a bag of apples. “Remember to share them with your families,” he said. This trip taught me that happiness isn’t about doing big things—it’s about enjoying simple moments with people we love. What a wonderful experience! [范文分析] 结构清晰：首段点明时间、地点、人物；主体段按时间顺序描述摘苹果、做果汁、雨天游戏；结尾升华主题。 细节丰富：使用感官描写（smelled sweet, fresh and delicious）、对话引用（“Don’t worry!”）和情感表达（laughed and danced）。 语法准确：正确使用一般过去时（went, picked, made）、不定代词（something）和复合句（Although the weather was bad...）。 主题突出：通过 “分享苹果” 和 “享受简单时刻” 升华主题。 ( 实战演练 ) 假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇日记，记述你周六做家务的一次经历，内容包括: 1.做家务的理由； 2.做家务的过程； 3.你的感受。 注意:1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头部分已写好，不计入总词数。 June 16th , Saturday foggy ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [审题构思] 1.确定体裁:本文为日记，属于应用文； 2.确定人称:本文的主要人称应为第一人称； 3.确定时态:本文的主体时态为一般过去时。 4.确定内容: ①介绍做家务的理由； ②描述做家务的过程； ③自己的感受。 [遣词造句] 1.我一直忙于学习，不常帮父母做家务。 I have been busy with my study and seldom _________________________________________the housework. 2.我为此感到很内疚，就开始考虑做些什么来帮助他们。 As I_____________________________ that,I began to think about what to do to help them. 3.当今天父母外出购物时，我打算突然对屋子来个大扫除。 When my parents went out shopping today, I decided to__________________________________________. 4.我把屋里的所有东西收集起来，并把它们放到适当的位置。 I collected all the things in the rooms and _____________________________________________ 5.我扫地拖地。 __________________________________________the floors. 6.父母回来时，很惊奇地发现屋子很整洁。 When my parents came back,they _____________________________all the rooms tidy. 7.我能从他们的眼中看到满意。 I could __________________________________________________ 8.虽然我很累，但我从未感到如此高兴。 Although I was tired,I______________________________________________________ [句式升级] 1.用分词形式做状语升级遣词造句中的2句 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.用as引导的倒装句升级遣词造句中的8句 ___________________________________________________________________________________________ [连句成篇] (使用恰当的过渡词) June 16th , Saturday foggy _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 举一反三 ) 1．假设你是李华，这周日你和班上同学一起参加了一次社区志愿者服务活动。请你写一篇英文日记，内容包括： 1.活动内容； 2.收获与感受。 注意：（1）写作字数80左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 September 16th,Saturday Sunny ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．为了提高学生的消防安全意识和应急处置能力，你校举行了一次全员消防演练。请写一篇英语日记，要点包括： 1.演练过程； 2.你的收获。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 参考词汇：灭火器extinguisher April 10, 2025, Thursday Sunny Today, our school conducted a fire drill. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，你昨天参加了某旅行社组织的海底探险旅行。请用英语写一篇日记，记述这次探险旅行，内容包括： 1. 时间、地点； 2. 探险项目：深海潜水、观察海洋生物、海底古文明遗址探险等； 3. 你的感受。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 参考词汇：探险（expedition） April 10, 2025, Thursday Sunny _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．上周五，你班举行了“科技创新在身边”主题班会。请你据此写一篇英文日记，内容包括： 1．班会目的； 2．班会过程； 3．班会反响。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80个左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 April 10, 2025, Friday cloudy _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．昨天上午你和你的美国朋友Allen一起去市博物馆参观了中国剪纸艺术展(the Chinese Paper-cutting Show)。请你写一篇英文日记，内容包括： 1. 时间、地点； 2. 展览情况； 3. 看展收获。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．周五刚刚结束的学农实践活动让人记忆犹新，请你写一篇学农日记，记录学农生活中的难忘经历。主要内容包括： 1. 活动过程（如：种苗、除草、施肥等）； 2. 活动感受。 参考词汇：seedling  n. 幼苗;  weed v.&n. 除草 注意： 1.词数120左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 April 10, 2025, Friday sunny We started our day at the local community farm. It was clear that this was not going to be a day of leisure, but a day of learning and physical labor. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7.假如你是李华，一名高三学生。为迎接人生中重要的时刻——成人礼，你所在班级召开了主题班会。请你写一篇英语日记，要点包括： 1.班会内容； 2.你的感想。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 May 27th, Tuesday Sunny Today was unforgettable! Our class held a special theme meeting to celebrate our coming-of-age ceremony. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12 / 17 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 外研版必修一 Unit 1 A New Start Writing a journal entry直击高考 近五年高考应用文未涉及该文体。 ( 写作框架 ) 日记是指把自己在当天生活中经历的有意义的事或所见所闻所想记录下来。与汉语日记一样，写日记时要先写日期、星期(可以省略)和天气情况。 [基本框架] 开头:引出事件； 主体:详细描述事情经过； 结尾:发表感想。 要写好英文日记，需要注意以下几点： 1．格式要正确。英文日记与中文日记写法大致相同，都是在正文之前，先依次有日期、星期几及当天的天气情况。 2．表达要清楚、准确、连贯。判断的标准就是通过阅读你的日记，看你是否用简洁明了的英语把事情经过及自己的感想等准确无误地表达了出来。 3．文体要口语化 。因为日记是写给自己看的，其内容多是记述自己亲身经历和亲眼看到的事或抒发自己的感情等，所以用第一人称写，文体也不必过分讲究，只需把该写的东西写清楚即可。 4．写日记的时间一般是在下午、晚上，有时也可以在第二天补写。因此，日记中所记述的事情通常发生在过去，常用一般过去时；但当记述天气、描写景色或展望未来时，可以用一般现在时或一般将来时。 ( 素材宝库 ) 【词汇积累】 holiday an unforgettable experience难忘的经历 create wonderful memories创造美好的回忆 scenery风景 outdoor activities户外活动 journey旅行 visit the museum/historical sites 参观博物馆/历史遗迹 travel to a coastal city 去海边城市旅行 explore the ancient forest 探索古老森林 take photos 拍照 try local food 尝试当地食物 learn from从…… 中学习 amazing令人惊讶的 fantastic极好的 unforgettable（难忘的 exciting令人兴奋的 meaningful有意义的 tiring but happy累但快乐 【句式积累】 1. Today is a weekend and it is the traditional Chinese festival-the Mid-Autumn Festival. 今天是周末，也是中国的传统佳节一-中秋节。 2.This was my first visit to the West Lake. 这是我第一次参观西湖。 3. As soon as we got there, we were divided into several groups. 我们一到那里就被分成了几个小组。 4. We were walking on our way home when we suddenly heard a cry for help. 我们正走在回家的路上，突然听到求救声。 5. Before we knew it, we had to say goodbye and go back home. 不知不觉，我们必须说再回家了。 6. We felt happy because we had done good job. 我们感到高兴，因为我们做了一件好事。 7. This was a real life-changing experience that I would never forget. 这是一次真正改变生活的经历，我永远不会忘记。 8.What a wonderful experience it is ! 多么棒的经历啊！ 9. Not only did it add color to my boring school life, but it also deepened my understanding of friendship. 它不仅为我枯燥的校园生活增添了色彩，还加深了我对友谊的理解。 ( 典例引领 ) Friday 8 September sunny to rainy Finally , my classmates and I went to a farm for a trip. In the morning, we helped the farmers pick apples. The orchard(果园) was full of red fruits, and the air smelled sweet. I climbed a ladder carefully, but my hands were shaking. “Don’t worry!” the farmer said with a smile. Later, we made apple juice together—it was so fresh and delicious! In the afternoon, it rained heavily. We couldn’t go hiking, so we played games inside. Although the weather was bad, we laughed and danced all morning. Before leaving, the farmer gave each of us a bag of apples. “Remember to share them with your families,” he said. This trip taught me that happiness isn’t about doing big things—it’s about enjoying simple moments with people we love. What a wonderful experience! [范文分析] 结构清晰：首段点明时间、地点、人物；主体段按时间顺序描述摘苹果、做果汁、雨天游戏；结尾升华主题。 细节丰富：使用感官描写（smelled sweet, fresh and delicious）、对话引用（“Don’t worry!”）和情感表达（laughed and danced）。 语法准确：正确使用一般过去时（went, picked, made）、不定代词（something）和复合句（Although the weather was bad...）。 主题突出：通过 “分享苹果” 和 “享受简单时刻” 升华主题。 ( 实战演练 ) 假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇日记，记述你周六做家务的一次经历，内容包括: 1.做家务的理由； 2.做家务的过程； 3.你的感受。 注意:1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头部分已写好，不计入总词数。 June 16th , Saturday foggy ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [审题构思] 1.确定体裁:本文为日记，属于应用文； 2.确定人称:本文的主要人称应为第一人称； 3.确定时态:本文的主体时态为一般过去时。 4.确定内容: ①介绍做家务的理由； ②描述做家务的过程； ③自己的感受。 [遣词造句] 1.我一直忙于学习，不常帮父母做家务。 I have been busy with my study and seldom _________________________________________the housework. 2.我为此感到很内疚，就开始考虑做些什么来帮助他们。 As I_____________________________ that,I began to think about what to do to help them. 3.当今天父母外出购物时，我打算突然对屋子来个大扫除。 When my parents went out shopping today, I decided to__________________________________________. 4.我把屋里的所有东西收集起来，并把它们放到适当的位置。 I collected all the things in the rooms and _____________________________________________ 5.我扫地拖地。 __________________________________________the floors. 6.父母回来时，很惊奇地发现屋子很整洁。 When my parents came back,they _____________________________all the rooms tidy. 7.我能从他们的眼中看到满意。 I could __________________________________________________ 8.虽然我很累，但我从未感到如此高兴。 Although I was tired,I______________________________________________________ [句式升级] 1.用分词形式做状语升级遣词造句中的2句 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.用as引导的倒装句升级遣词造句中的8句 ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案：1. helped my parents with 2. felt quite sorry for 3. give the room a good cleaning 4. put them in place 5. I swept and mopped 6. were quite surprised to find 7. see satisfaction in their eyes 8.never felt so happy 句式升级 1. Feeling quite sorry for that, I began to think about what to do to help them. 2. Tired as I was,I never felt so happy [连句成篇] (使用恰当的过渡词) June 16th , Saturday foggy _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [美文在线] September 16th,Saturday Sunny I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I began to think about what to do to help them. When my parents went out shopping today,I decided to give the room a good cleaning. Firstly, I collected all the things in the rooms and put them in place. Then I swept and mopped the floors. When my parents came back,they were quite surprised to find all the rooms tidy. I could see satisfaction in their eyes. Tired as I was,I never felt so happy. ( 举一反三 ) 1．假设你是李华，这周日你和班上同学一起参加了一次社区志愿者服务活动。请你写一篇英文日记，内容包括： 1.活动内容； 2.收获与感受。 注意：（1）写作字数80左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 September 16th,Saturday Sunny ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                        September 16th,Saturday Sunny Today, my classmates and I participated in a community volunteer service. We first cleaned the public areas, sweeping the streets and picking up litter. Then, we visited the elderly in the community center, chatting with them and helping with some chores. This experience was really rewarding. I not only contributed to making the community cleaner but also realized how much joy bringing warmth to others can bring. It made me understand the value of volunteering and strengthened my sense of social responsibility. What a meaningful day! 【导语】这是一篇应用文。最近考生和班上同学一起参加了一次社区志愿者服务活动，要求考生就此事写一篇日记进行记录。 【详解】1. 词汇积累： 参加：participate in→take part in 清扫：clean→sweep 有意义的，有益的：rewarding→worthwhile 意识到：realize→be aware of 2.句式拓展： 句型转换 原句：I not only contributed to making the community cleaner but also realized how much joy bringing warmth to others can bring. 拓展句：Not only did I contribute to making the community cleaner but also realized how much joy bringing warmth to others can bring. 【点睛】【高分句型 1】We first cleaned the public areas, sweeping the streets and picking up litter.（运用了现在分词短语“sweeping the streets and picking up litter”作伴随状语） 【高分句型 2】I not only contributed to making the community cleaner but also realized how much joy bringing warmth to others can bring.（运用了not only...but also 结构） 2．为了提高学生的消防安全意识和应急处置能力，你校举行了一次全员消防演练。请写一篇英语日记，要点包括： 1.演练过程； 2.你的收获。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 参考词汇：灭火器extinguisher April 10, 2025, Thursday Sunny Today, our school conducted a fire drill. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 April 10, 2025, Thursday Sunny Today, our school conducted a fire drill. At 10 AM, the fire alarm rang loudly, signaling us to evacuate. We quickly lined up and exited the building in an orderly manner, following our teachers’ instructions. Once outside, we gathered at the designated safe area. Fire safety officers demonstrated how to use a fire extinguisher and explained the importance of staying calm during emergencies. I learned valuable skills, including how to react in case of a fire and the significance of teamwork. This drill boosted my confidence in handling such situations and made me realize the importance of being prepared. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于为了提高学生的消防安全意识和应急处置能力，你校举行了一次全员消防演练这一情况，写一篇英语日记。 【详解】1.词汇积累 聚集：gather→congregate 增强：boost→enhance 意识到：realize→be aware of 处理：handle→deal with 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：This drill boosted my confidence in handling such situations and made me realize the importance of being prepared. 拓展句：This drill boosted my confidence in handling such situations, which made me realize the importance of being prepared. 【点睛】【高分句型1】At 10 AM, the fire alarm rang loudly, signaling us to evacuate.（运用了现在分词短语作状语） 【高分句型2】Fire safety officers demonstrated how to use a fire extinguisher and explained the importance of staying calm during emergencies.（运用了how to do的固定用法以及动名词短语作宾语） 3．假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，你昨天参加了某旅行社组织的海底探险旅行。请用英语写一篇日记，记述这次探险旅行，内容包括： 1. 时间、地点； 2. 探险项目：深海潜水、观察海洋生物、海底古文明遗址探险等； 3. 你的感受。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 参考词汇：探险（expedition） April 10, 2025, Thursday Sunny _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 April 10, 2025, Thursday Sunny Yesterday, I, together with some tourists, took part in an underwater expedition organized by a travel agency in the West Sea, which left a deep impression on me. We had many exciting activities, one of which was deep sea diving. During the diving, we enjoyed the undersea beauty and watched the marine life which we had never seen so close. What impressed me most was the exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea. Seeing those ruins, I couldn’t help wondering what the ancient people’s life was like and what they experienced later. As far as I’m concerned, this travel broadened our horizons as well as helped us learn more about the sea. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生昨天参加了某旅行社组织的海底探险旅行。请用英语写一篇日记，记述这次探险旅行。 【详解】1.词汇积累 参加：take part in→participate in 组织：organize→arrange 令人兴奋的：exciting→thrilling 帮助：help→assist 2.句式拓展 同义句 原句：Seeing those ruins, I couldn’t help wondering what the ancient people’s life was like and what they experienced later. 拓展句：When I saw those ruins, I couldn’t help wondering what the ancient people’s life was like and what they experienced later. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Yesterday, I, together with some tourists, took part in an underwater expedition organized by a travel agency in the West Sea, which left a deep impression on me. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] What impressed me most was the exploration of the ruins of ancient civilizations under the sea. (运用了what引导的主语从句) 4．上周五，你班举行了“科技创新在身边”主题班会。请你据此写一篇英文日记，内容包括： 1．班会目的； 2．班会过程； 3．班会反响。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80个左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 April 10, 2025, Friday cloudy _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】       April 10, 2025, Friday cloudy To arouse students’ interest in technology, our class held a class meeting titled “Technological Innovation Around Us” last Friday. The meeting began with our teacher’s giving examples of modern technological innovations to set the context, followed by student representatives showcasing their technological projects or innovations. Then, we had an interactive session, where we asked questions and discussed ideas about the development of technology in China and how technologies have changed our life. The meeting was well-received. It deepened our understanding of the significance of technological innovation in our daily life and motivated us to engage in future technological innovations. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇关于上周五举行的“科技创新在身边”主题班会的英文日记，内容需涵盖班会的目的、过程以及反响。 【详解】1.词汇积累 激发：arouse → stimulate/inspire 创新：innovation → creativity/novelty 展示：showcase → display/exhibit 重要性：significance → importance 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：The meeting was well-received. It deepened our understanding of the significance of technological innovation in our daily life and motivated us to engage in future technological innovations. 拓展句：The meeting was well-received, which not only deepened our understanding of the significance of technological innovation but also motivated us to actively participate in future technological endeavors. 【点睛】[高分句型1] To arouse students’ interest in technology, our class held a class meeting titled “Technological Innovation Around Us” last Friday. (运用了不定式短语作目的状语) [高分句型2] Then, we had an interactive session, where we asked questions and discussed ideas about the development of technology in China and how technologies have changed our life.(运用了关系副词where引导非限制性定语从句和连接副词how引导宾语从句) 5．昨天上午你和你的美国朋友Allen一起去市博物馆参观了中国剪纸艺术展(the Chinese Paper-cutting Show)。请你写一篇英文日记，内容包括： 1. 时间、地点； 2. 展览情况； 3. 看展收获。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Nov. 6, 2024  Tuesday  Fine Yesterday morning, I, as well as Allen, paid a visit to the city museum, where the Chinese Paper-cutting Show was held. We had a satisfying and memorable time. The show kicked off at 8:30. Numerous delicate and creative works, ranging from beautiful flowers to lovely animals, were on display, which gave us a deep impression. Besides, some well-preserved paper-cuttings were also exhibited to show the wisdom of our ancestors. Through this show, not only was our friendship enhanced but also we harvested the knowledge of the Chinese paper-cutting. How meaningful the day was! Hopefully, our school can provide the paper-cutting courses to let students learn the art so as to better preserve it. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇英文日记，记录和美国朋友Allen一起去市博物馆参观中国剪纸艺术展的体验。内容包括：1. 时间、地点；2. 展览情况；3. 看展收获。 【详解】1.词汇积累 难忘的：memorable→unforgettable 举办：hold → host 展出：on display→on show 此外：besides → what’s more/moreover/furthermore 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Hopefully, our school can provide the paper-cutting courses to let students learn the art so as to better preserve it. 拓展句：Hopefully, our school can provide the paper-cutting courses to let students learn the art so that it can be better preserved and passed on. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Yesterday morning, I, as well as Allen, paid a visit to the city museum, where the Chinese Paper-cutting Show was held.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Through this show, not only was our friendship enhanced but also we harvested the knowledge of the Chinese paper-cutting.（运用了not only放在句首的部分倒装句） 6．周五刚刚结束的学农实践活动让人记忆犹新，请你写一篇学农日记，记录学农生活中的难忘经历。主要内容包括： 1. 活动过程（如：种苗、除草、施肥等）； 2. 活动感受。 参考词汇：seedling  n. 幼苗;  weed v.&n. 除草 注意： 1.词数120左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 April 10, 2025, Friday sunny We started our day at the local community farm. It was clear that this was not going to be a day of leisure, but a day of learning and physical labor. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     April 10, 2025, Friday cloudy We started our day at the local community farm. It was clear that this was not going to be a day of leisure, but a day of learning and physical labor. Our first task was to help with the planting. We were shown how to prepare the soil, dig the holes, and place the seedlings carefully into their new homes. The process required great patience, something I’ve always struggled with. But as I watched the seedlings stand proudly in their new spots, I felt a sense of accomplishment that was hard-earned and deeply satisfying. After a quick lunch, we moved on to the next task, weeding. This was a lesson in determination and focus. The weeds were tenacious, but so were we. As we pulled and dug, I learned about the different types of weeds and how they compete with the crops for nutrients. It was fascinating to see how much care and attention goes into ensuring the health of the plants. Today was more than just a day of physical work. It was an immersion into the world of agriculture. I learned about the dedication and hardship it takes to be a farmer. I left the farm with a newfound respect for those who work the land and provide us with the food we often take for granted. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于刚刚结束的学农实践活动让人记忆犹新这一情况，写一篇学农日记，记录学农生活中的难忘经历。 【详解】1.词汇积累 要求：require→need 有吸引力的：fascinating→attractive 提供：provide→offer 确保：ensure→make sure 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：After a quick lunch, we moved on to the next task, weeding. This was a lesson in determination and focus. 拓展句：After a quick lunch, we moved on to the next task, weeding, which was a lesson in determination and focus. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As we pulled and dug, I learned about the different types of weeds and how they compete with the crops for nutrients.（运用了As引导的时间状语从句。） 【高分句型2】I left the farm with a newfound respect for those who work the land and provide us with the food we often take for granted.（运用了who引导的定语从句。） 7.假如你是李华，一名高三学生。为迎接人生中重要的时刻——成人礼，你所在班级召开了主题班会。请你写一篇英语日记，要点包括： 1.班会内容； 2.你的感想。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 May 27th, Tuesday Sunny Today was unforgettable! Our class held a special theme meeting to celebrate our coming-of-age ceremony. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 May 27th, Tuesday Sunny Today was unforgettable! Our class held a special theme meeting to celebrate our coming-of-age ceremony. The teacher shared inspiring stories about responsibility and growth, encouraging us to hug adulthood with courage. Every classmate shared compelling stories about overcoming and personal growth. Some of us were moved to tears while reading heartfelt letters from our parents. We cheered excitedly when we made our promise together to struggle for our dreams. I felt a mix of excitement and responsibility. Adulthood means not only freedom but also new opportunities and challenges. I’m determined to embrace the future with courage and treasure every moment with my classmates.Adulthood, here I come! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇日记，讲述班上召开的主题班会。 【详解】1.词汇积累 鼓舞人心的：inspiring→encouraging 鼓励：encourage→inspire 感动的：moved→touched 兴奋：excitement→thrill 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The teacher shared inspiring stories about responsibility and growth, encouraging us to hug adulthood with courage. 拓展句：The teacher shared inspiring stories about responsibility and growth, which encouraged us to hug adulthood with courage. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Some of us were moved to tears while reading heartfelt letters from our parents. (运用了while引导的时间状语从句和省略) [高分句型2] We cheered excitedly when we made our promise together to struggle for our dreams. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句) 12 / 17 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$