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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In my collection of photographs is an old picture that is forever imprinted in my memory. It shows me with Dad and my two sisters arm in arm and grinning for the camera. Looming (耸立) in the background is Magnum, the world’s tallest and fastest roller coaster. The picture is thirty years old, but the memory it contains is timeless, especially my father’s words — “Don’t ever apologize for knowing your limits.” Every time I see this photo, all the details of that summer day at the amusement park rush back: the shining morning sun; the heavy smell of popcorn; the way we decided to ride the roller coaster; the precious photo taken before we took the ride, etc. But no one knew I was secretly terrified of riding the roller coaster. I fear height. Now that the rest of my family all nodded with excitement, I didn’t want to be the only one to stay behind. My little sister, who barely met the height requirement, behaved fearlessly. If she wasn’t afraid, how could I admit that I was? While inching our way up the long line, I tried to swallow my fear and stand resolute. “You can do this,” Irepeated to myself. But with every step forward, a sense of unease grew in my chest. All too soon, we reached the end of the line. Our turn came. The cars rolled up and clicked to a stop and the gate swung open. It was time to step in. My body went stiff with fear, and at that moment I knew: I could not ride Magnum. I looked at the attendant and said, “I don’t want to go.” She was so considerate as to wave me toward an exit ramp(坡道) and instructed me on how to find my way down. Too embarrassed to face my family, I simply called over my shoulder to Dad that I was leaving. There wasn’t time for him to say anything, and I didn’t look back. I walked down the exit ramp on shaky but relieved legs. Whatever disappointment or ridicule I would face for chickening out was a small price to pay for skipping that ride.  注意：  1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I sat down on a bench in the shade and waited for the others. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “So what happened to you up there?” Dad asked. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文本分析 1. 角色：_____________________________ 2. 视角：第________人称 3. 时空线：from the old photo→___________→before/after the roller coaster ride 4. 线索梳理： What's special about the photo?： ______________________________________________ Why was "I" terrified?： ______________________________________________ How did "I" behave in the line?： ______________________________________________ What happened when it was time to ride?： ______________________________________________ How did "I" feel after leaving?： ______________________________________________ 5．情节线：老照片勾起回忆→全家兴奋决定坐过山车→“我” 因恐高暗自恐惧→排队时强装镇定→临上车时退缩离场→（续写）→。 6．情感线：nostalgic→___________→___________→relieved→（续写）→（续写） 7. 文章大意： 中文：_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ 英文：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 句式与修辞： 宾语从句：______________________________________________ 非谓语：______________________________________________ 比喻 / 场景描写：______________________________________________ 主题归类：______________________ 情节构造 第一段提示句：I sat down on a bench in the shade and waited for the others. · 衔接 1（现场情况）：How did "I" wait? → ______________________________________________ · 衔接 2（心理活动）：What did "I" worry about? → ______________________________________________ 第二段提示句："So what happened to you up there?" Dad asked. · 衔接 3（互动细节）：How did Dad approach? → ______________________________________________ · 主题：______________________________________________ 续写段落框架（需填充内容） Paragraph 1: I sat down on a bench in the shade and waited for the others. __________________________. __________________________. __________________________. Paragraph 2: "So what happened to you up there?" Dad asked. __________________________. __________________________. __________________________. 参考答案 文本分析 1. 角色：“我”、Dad、two sisters、attendant 2. 视角：第一人称 3. 时空线：from the old photo→amusement park→before/after the roller coaster ride 4. 线索梳理： What's special about the photo?：It shows the family arm in arm in front of Magnum, the tallest roller coaster. Why was "I" terrified?："I" fear heights, but didn’t want to stay behind as family was excited. How did "I" behave in the line?：Tried to swallow fear, but unease grew. What happened when it was time to ride?：Body stiffened; told the attendant "I don’t want to go" and left via exit ramp. How did "I" feel after leaving?：Shaky but relieved, thinking skipping was worth avoiding disappointment/ridicule. 5．情节线：老照片勾起回忆→全家兴奋决定坐过山车→“我” 因恐高暗自恐惧→排队时强装镇定→临上车时退缩离场→（续写）坐在阴凉处等待家人→爸爸询问情况。 6．情感线：nostalgic→terrified→embarrassed→relieved→（续写）anxious→（续写）comforted 7. 文章大意： 中文：一张旧照片让 “我” 回忆起三十年前在游乐园的经历：全家兴奋地准备乘坐最高的过山车 “Magnum”，但恐高的 “我” 在排队时强忍恐惧，最终临上车前退缩离场，虽感尴尬却因避开乘坐而如释重负，父亲 “不要为了解自己的极限而道歉” 的话语让这段记忆永恒。 英文：An old photo reminds "me" of a day 30 years ago at an amusement park, where the family prepared to ride Magnum, the tallest roller coaster. Though terrified of heights, "I" tried to hide fear in line but finally backed out before boarding, feeling embarrassed yet relieved. Father’s words "Don’t apologize for knowing your limits" made the memory lasting. 句式与修辞： 宾语从句：I knew I could not ride Magnum. 非谓语：Walking down the ramp, I felt shaky but relieved. 比喻：A sense of unease grew like a knot in my chest. 场景描写：The sun shone brightly, popcorn scented the air, and Magnum loomed tall. 主题归类：人与自我（面对恐惧、认识极限） 情节构造 第一段提示句：I sat down on a bench in the shade and waited for the others. · 衔接 1（现场情况）：How did "I" wait? → Hands twisting in my lap, I watched the coaster loop overhead, each scream making my pulse race. · 衔接 2（心理活动）：What did "I" worry about? → Would sisters mock me? Would Dad be disappointed? I rehearsed excuses for chickening out. 第二段提示句："So what happened to you up there?" Dad asked. · 衔接 3（互动细节）：How did Dad approach? → Dad sat beside me, arm resting gently on my shoulder, sisters chattering excitedly nearby. · 主题：Accepting limits with dignity; father’s wisdom overcomes embarrassment. 续写段落框架（需填充内容） Paragraph 1: I sat down on a bench in the shade and waited for the others. Hands twisting in my lap, I watched Magnum’s cars hurtle through loops, screams echoing like thunder. The popcorn smell that once smelled inviting now turned my stomach. I ducked my head, fearing my sisters would spot me and point, their laughter stinging like nettles. Why couldn’t I be as brave as them? Paragraph 2: "So what happened to you up there?" Dad asked. He’d approached quietly, settling beside me without a trace of anger. My sisters zoomed past, mimicking the coaster’s twists, but Dad’s eyes stayed soft on mine. "I… I was scared," I mumbled, voice trembling. He nodded, pulling me closer. "Being scared doesn’t make you weak. Knowing when to stop— that’s courage." Sunlight filtered through the trees, warming my cheek, and I realized his words, like the photo, would never fade. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$