读后续写 小猫Phin 的生命转机 导学案 湖北省华中师范大学第一附属中学2024-2025学年高二下学期5月联考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Both my husband and I were laid off. There wasn’t much surprise about it because the economy was really bad these days. I was working as a temporary waitress in a fast-food restaurant, and my husband Colin was looking for a job, believing that he would soon find one. Though optimistic, we were living a tight life — we reduced our film time in the cinemas and ate out less. Skimming through Instagram videos at home, I came across a post featuring a litter of five kittens (小猫) that had been born in an animal adoption agency. “Cute,” I thought, watching the tiny balls of fluff (毛茸茸) bounce around together on the floor. Then, I noticed one of them couldn’t walk straight. It wobbled (摇晃) from side to side with each step, struggling to maintain balance. The caption (说明文字) explained his names was Phin and it had been diagnosed with cerebellar hypoplasia, a neurological disorder which affects walking, balance and movement. “I hope he does well and finds a good home,” I commented on the post. When I checked the adoption agency’s page two months later, I was sad to see Phin still hadn’t been adopted. I knew that if it was not adopted within half a year, it would be put to sleep because of the limited funding of the adoption agency — they could not afford to keep so many cats and dogs living in there. “I don’t want to watch Phin die,” I turned to Colin, who was also watching the videos of Phin. In the videos, the figure of Phin wobbling down the stairs looked cautious and adorable. Because he had movement issues, he would also peck (啄) at his food rather than keep his head down at his bowl to eat. “He looks like a little angel,” I sighed. “No, he is a drunken sailor,” Colin responded. “Even if we adopt this drunken sailor, we can still make a living. I will find a job soon,” my husband said firmly. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: We set off for the adoption agency the next morning. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: With the posts of Phin spreading widely online, he was not a financial burden at all. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文本分析 1．角色：_____________________________ 2．视角：第________人称 3．时空线：夫妻失业→看到 Phin 视频→_____→决定收养 Phin→（续写）前往收养机构→_____ 4. 线索梳理 • 家庭状况：______________________________________________ • Phin 的情况：______________________________________________ • 收养原因：______________________________________________ • 丈夫态度：______________________________________________ 5．情节线：夫妻因经济危机失业，生活拮据。→看到有行走障碍的小猫 Phin 未被收养，面临安乐死。→_________________→（续写）第二天前往收养机构。→_________________ 6．情感线：I：担忧经济→看到 Phin 时_____→得知其未被收养时_____→决定收养时_____（续写）→_____（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一个） ◦ 中文：_____________________________________________________ ◦ 英文：_____________________________________________________ 8. 句式：宾语从句；非谓语；感叹句；同位语；完全倒装句；比喻；夸张 9. 文章类型：人与动物：_______________________________________ 情节构造 第一段提示句：We set off for the adoption agency the next morning. • 衔接句 1（前往路上的情况）：What was the atmosphere like on the way? • 过渡句推演：衔接 1→______？______←衔接 2 • 衔接句 2（到达后的心理活动）：What were we thinking when arriving? 第二段提示句：With the posts of Phin spreading widely online, he was not a financial burden at all. • 衔接句 3（Phin 在网上走红的表现）：How did Phin become popular? • 过渡句推演：衔接 3→_____？_____←主题 • 主题：_________________________________ 第一段：我们第二天早上出发前往收养机构。→①_________________→②_________________→③_________________； 英文：_____________________________________________________ 第二段：随着 Phin 的帖子在网上广泛传播，他完全不再是经济负担。→④_________________→⑤_________________→⑥_________________。 英文：_____________________________________________________ 参考答案 文本分析 1．角色：“我”、丈夫 Colin、小猫 Phin、动物收养机构工作人员 2．视角：第一人称 3．时空线：夫妻失业→看到 Phin 视频→两个月后发现 Phin 未被收养→决定收养 Phin→（续写）前往收养机构→（续写）Phin 在网上走红 4. 线索梳理 • 家庭状况：夫妻双双失业，“我” 做临时服务员，生活拮据，减少娱乐消费。 • Phin 的情况：患有小脑发育不全，走路摇晃，进食困难，未被收养且可能被安乐死。 • 收养原因：同情 Phin 的处境，不愿其被安乐死，被其乐观的状态打动。 • 丈夫态度：称 Phin 为 “醉酒水手”，坚定支持收养，相信自己能找到工作。 5．情节线：夫妻因经济危机失业，生活拮据。→看到有行走障碍的小猫 Phin 未被收养，面临安乐死。→与丈夫商量后决定收养 Phin→（续写）第二天前往收养机构。→（续写）Phin 的帖子在网上传播，带来积极改变。 6．情感线：I：担忧经济→看到 Phin 时喜爱 / 同情→得知其未被收养时难过→决定收养时坚定（续写）→因 Phin 走红而感激（续写） 综合概括 • 中文：我和丈夫失业后生活拮据，在网上看到患有行走障碍的小猫 Phin 因未被收养面临安乐死。尽管经济困难，丈夫仍坚定支持收养 Phin。我们第二天前往收养机构办理手续，后来 Phin 的故事在网上走红，不仅解决了经济负担，还带来了积极影响。 • 英文：My husband and I lived a tight life after being laid off. We came across Phin, a kitten with walking difficulties, online and found he might be put to sleep if not adopted. Despite our financial stress, we decided to adopt him. The next day we went to the agency, and later Phin's story went viral online, bringing positive changes to our lives. 句式分析 • 宾语从句：I knew that if it was not adopted within half a year...（我知道如果它半年内未被收养……） • 非谓语动词：Skimming through Instagram videos at home...（在家浏览 Instagram 视频时……） • 比喻：he is a drunken sailor（他像个醉酒的水手） 文章类型 人与动物：展现人与动物之间的温情，以及善意带来的积极改变。 情节构造 第一段提示句：We set off for the adoption agency the next morning. • 衔接句 1（前往路上的情况）：The car was quiet except for the radio, but I could feel Colin's hand squeezing mine tightly, a mix of nervousness and determination in the air. • 过渡句推演：路上的紧张与决心→到达后看到 Phin 时的感受如何？→衔接 2 • 衔接句 2（到达后的心理活动）：When Phin wobbled towards us with a tiny meow, my heart ached—he was smaller than in videos, but his eyes shone like buttons, and I knew we'd made the right choice. 第二段提示句：With the posts of Phin spreading widely online, he was not a financial burden at all. • 衔接句 3（Phin 在网上走红的表现）：Thousands of people followed his account, sending donations for his food and even designing a special "wobble-proof" bed; a local news channel even interviewed us about the "brave kitten who changed a family". • 过渡句推演：Phin 走红带来物质帮助→如何影响家庭和社会？→主题 • 主题：善意与生命的价值，困境中的温暖与希望。 续写段落 Paragraph 1: We set off for the adoption agency the next morning. The car ride was quiet, but I could feel Colin's hand squeezing mine tightly. When we walked in, a staff member led us to Phin's enclosure. He was curled up in a corner, but when he saw us, he wobbled over, tiny paws sliding on the floor. I knelt down, and he climbed onto my lap, purring loudly despite his shaky body. Colin smiled beside me, saying, "Look at our drunken sailor—he's ready to board." We filled out the papers quickly, ignoring the tightness in our wallets. As we left with Phin in a carrier, I noticed Colin's phone buzzing—maybe a job interview at last. Paragraph 2: With the posts of Phin spreading widely online, he was not a financial burden at all. Donations poured in from strangers, enough to cover his special food and vet bills. A pet company even sent a custom-made ramp for our stairs. But more importantly, Phin's videos inspired others to adopt special-needs animals. One day, Colin got a call from a local firm—they'd seen our story and wanted to hire him. Now, Phin sleeps on our bed every night, his wobbles a reminder that even in hard times, love finds a way. Our little "drunken sailor" had sailed into our lives and guided us through the storm. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$