Unit 2 Getting along（单元同步写作讲义）英语外研版2024八年级上册

Unit 2 Getting along 同步写作课讲义-外研版2024八年级上册 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) 本单元以“人际交往”为话题，主要围绕如何维持良好的人际关系、人际交往中常见的问题和解决方法等方面展开。介绍自己的问题时应以第一人称为主，就别人的问题提供建议时应以第二人称为主；可能涉及的时态有一般现在时、一般过去时等。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) 相关的写作通常涉及以下几个方面： 1.就自己在人际交往中遇到的问题向别人寻求建议； 2.就别人在人际交往中遇到的问题给出自己的建议； 3.讲述一个关于人际交往的故事。 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 英语课上，老师要求学生就“与他人相处”的话题展开小组讨论。请根据以下你所在小组的讨论结果，以“How to Get On Well with Others”为题，写一篇英语短文 Suggestions ·learn to share ·respect(尊重）others ·communicate with each other My suggestion … 注意: 1.词数 80~100； 2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3.文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校Hello everyone, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 审主题：如何与他人和睦相处 审体裁：记叙文 审时态：以一般现在时为主 审人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主 审要点：相处的情况、举例说明、和谐相处的方法 写作步骤 ◆ 步骤一：引出话题 ◆ 步骤二：说明问题，给出建议 ◆ 步骤三：总结，表达祝福 ( ⭐写作框架⭐ ) 步骤 构思 列纲 1 开篇点题 ... should learn how to get on well with.. 2 点明建议：几种相处方法 respect others, communicate with each other and share our happiness and sad ness, be kind to others, offer necessary help 3 结尾：阐明自己的观点 In my opinion. ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) 相处经历 ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 study and play together一起学习和玩耍 help each other互帮互助 have problems with...在……方面遇到问题 argue over...因……而争吵 share...with...与……分享/共用…… be in a bad mood心情不好 相处建议 offer comfort给予安慰 help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事 build trust建立信任 be a good listener做一个好的倾听者 be ready to do sth.乐意做某事 care about关心，在乎 描述类词汇 honest诚实的 sincere真诚的 polite有礼貌的 outgoing外向的 patient耐心的 generous慷慨的 selfish自私的 understanding善解人意的 ( 句型积累 ) 开头句 I’d like to talk about how to get on well with...我想谈谈如何与……和睦相处。 Today I feel honored to be here to share some advice on how to get along with...今天我很荣幸能在这里分享一些关于如何与……和睦相处的建议。 中间句 1.与相处的经历相关 She is always ready to help me with my homework when I have problems.当我有问题的时候，她总是愿意帮助我做作业。 When I was sick, she took good care of me.当我生病时，她细心地照顾我。 Whenever I don’t understand something, he always explains it patiently.每当我不明白某件事情，他总是耐心地解释。 2.与相处的建议有关 To build a good relationship with..., I think we should...要想与……建立良好的关系，我认为我们应该…… To get on well with..., we had better...为了与……和睦相处，我们最好…… In my opinion, communication and understanding are the key to a good relationship with...在我看来，沟通和理解是与……保持良好关系的关键。 结尾句 By helping and supporting each other, I think everyone can...通过互相帮助和支持，我认为每个人都可以…… I hope all of us can get on well with our friends.我希望我们所有人都能与我们的朋友和睦相处。 ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) How to Get On Well with Others As we know, students should learn how to get on well with others. But in what ways? First of all, we should respect others. Everybody has their own way of doing things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness. What's more, we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble. In my opinion, we should treat others in an honest way. Only in these ways can we get along well. ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） （23-24八年级下·安徽黄山·期末）当你在学习、交友、家庭生活等方面遇到困难或烦恼时，是怎样应对和处理的呢？请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文，分享一次自己解决烦恼的经历并谈谈你的收获和感悟。 □ What was your trouble? □ How did you solve it? □ What have you learned from the experience? 注意：1.短文须包含以上所有提示，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和个人信息； 3.词数80左右 (短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 People always have trouble in their daily life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2） （24-25八年级上·湖北武汉·期末）同学们，过去一年，你们可能学习有困难、与家人或朋友相处有矛盾、或者对未来感到迷茫……这些都是成长的烦恼，每个人都会经历。新的一年带来希望和动力，我们不仅要反思过去、解决当下问题，更要规划未来，成为更好的自己。请你根据以下内容提示完成一篇英语短文。 内容提示： 1. What was your biggest problem in 2024? 2. How did this problem make you feel? 3. What’s your New Year’s resolution for it? 4. Something more about this topic. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I did face some problems in 2024. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （3） （24-25八年级下·浙江金华·期中）假如你是李明，你的好友Maria来信，因体育中考临近，她倍感压力，情绪低落、焦虑。请你结合自己的经历和以下思维导图给她回信，并提出至少三条合理的建议。 要求： （1）要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； （3）80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Maria, I’m sorry to hear that ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming （4） （24-25八年级下·浙江·期中）朋友是我们人生路上的一盏明灯，彼此关爱携手前行。假设你是李华，你的好朋友Tony最近遇到了一些困惑。请根据下表信息给他写一封邮件，提出你的建议。 Tony’s problems Your advice always have a headache lie down,... have too much homework talk with... argue with his brother about chores … 注意： （1）邮件必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥； （2）邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； （3）词数：80—100，邮件开头和结尾已给，不计入总词数。 Dear Tony, I am sorry to hear that. It’s normal to have these problems. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice will work. You’re not alone. I’m always here to help! Yours, Li Hua （5） （24-25八年级下·湖北鄂州·期中）父母是我们最亲的人，但我们有时会在与父母沟通时遇到困难。请根据所给思维导图的提示，以“How to Communicate with Our Parents”为题用英语写一篇短文，谈谈与父母沟通的技巧和做法。 要求： （1）文中需包含思维导图中的主要内容； （2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名； （3）词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 How to Communicate with Our Parents Communication with parents is very important in our life. As we grow older, we’ll find it not easy to communicate with our parents. So what should we do when communicating with them? Here are some of my ideas. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope you can have proper communication with your parents. （6） （24-25八年级下·湖北武汉·期中）假如你是李华，你的同学Tom最近觉得学业压力增大，课外活动减少，他非常苦恼。你打算以你的经历和经验，给他写一封邮件，告诉他平衡学习和生活的重要性。 内容提示： What problems did you face in study and life? How did you deal with the problems? Why is it important to balance (平衡) your study and life? Something more about your advice. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, I’m very happy to hear from you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope everything goes well with you. Yours Li Hua （7） （24-25八年级下·湖北宜昌·期中）同学们，“5125”健康生活指南对你应对压力有什么启示吗？你都有哪些压力？你打算怎样应对这些压力呢？请你写一篇英语短文具体阐述你的压力，以及应对这些压力你准备采取的具体措施。 Stress Solutions 1. can’t get good grades listen to the teachers carefully; … 2. can’t get on well with classmates be kind to others; … … … 要求： (1) 文章中须包括表格中所有信息并适当发挥； (2) 文章不少于80词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $$ Unit 2 Getting along 同步写作课讲义-外研版2024八年级上册 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) 本单元以“人际交往”为话题，主要围绕如何维持良好的人际关系、人际交往中常见的问题和解决方法等方面展开。介绍自己的问题时应以第一人称为主，就别人的问题提供建议时应以第二人称为主；可能涉及的时态有一般现在时、一般过去时等。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) 相关的写作通常涉及以下几个方面： 1.就自己在人际交往中遇到的问题向别人寻求建议； 2.就别人在人际交往中遇到的问题给出自己的建议； 3.讲述一个关于人际交往的故事。 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 英语课上，老师要求学生就“与他人相处”的话题展开小组讨论。请根据以下你所在小组的讨论结果，以“How to Get On Well with Others”为题，写一篇英语短文 Suggestions ·learn to share ·respect(尊重）others ·communicate with each other My suggestion … 注意: 1.词数 80~100； 2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3.文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校Hello everyone, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 审主题：如何与他人和睦相处 审体裁：记叙文 审时态：以一般现在时为主 审人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主 审要点：相处的情况、举例说明、和谐相处的方法 写作步骤 ◆ 步骤一：引出话题 ◆ 步骤二：说明问题，给出建议 ◆ 步骤三：总结，表达祝福 ( ⭐写作框架⭐ ) 步骤 构思 列纲 1 开篇点题 ... should learn how to get on well with.. 2 点明建议：几种相处方法 respect others, communicate with each other and share our happiness and sad ness, be kind to others, offer necessary help 3 结尾：阐明自己的观点 In my opinion. ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) 相处经历 ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 study and play together一起学习和玩耍 help each other互帮互助 have problems with...在……方面遇到问题 argue over...因……而争吵 share...with...与……分享/共用…… be in a bad mood心情不好 相处建议 offer comfort给予安慰 help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事 build trust建立信任 be a good listener做一个好的倾听者 be ready to do sth.乐意做某事 care about关心，在乎 描述类词汇 honest诚实的 sincere真诚的 polite有礼貌的 outgoing外向的 patient耐心的 generous慷慨的 selfish自私的 understanding善解人意的 ( 句型积累 ) 开头句 I’d like to talk about how to get on well with...我想谈谈如何与……和睦相处。 Today I feel honored to be here to share some advice on how to get along with...今天我很荣幸能在这里分享一些关于如何与……和睦相处的建议。 中间句 1.与相处的经历相关 She is always ready to help me with my homework when I have problems.当我有问题的时候，她总是愿意帮助我做作业。 When I was sick, she took good care of me.当我生病时，她细心地照顾我。 Whenever I don’t understand something, he always explains it patiently.每当我不明白某件事情，他总是耐心地解释。 2.与相处的建议有关 To build a good relationship with..., I think we should...要想与……建立良好的关系，我认为我们应该…… To get on well with..., we had better...为了与……和睦相处，我们最好…… In my opinion, communication and understanding are the key to a good relationship with...在我看来，沟通和理解是与……保持良好关系的关键。 结尾句 By helping and supporting each other, I think everyone can...通过互相帮助和支持，我认为每个人都可以…… I hope all of us can get on well with our friends.我希望我们所有人都能与我们的朋友和睦相处。 ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) How to Get On Well with Others As we know, students should learn how to get on well with others. But in what ways? First of all, we should respect others. Everybody has their own way of doing things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness. What's more, we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble. In my opinion, we should treat others in an honest way. Only in these ways can we get along well. ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） （23-24八年级下·安徽黄山·期末）当你在学习、交友、家庭生活等方面遇到困难或烦恼时，是怎样应对和处理的呢？请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文，分享一次自己解决烦恼的经历并谈谈你的收获和感悟。 □ What was your trouble? □ How did you solve it? □ What have you learned from the experience? 注意：1.短文须包含以上所有提示，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和个人信息； 3.词数80左右 (短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 People always have trouble in their daily life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 People always have trouble in their daily life. Last week, I failed in the math exam. When my mother knew the result, she felt very unhappy and we argued loudly with each other. I talked to my best friend about this problem. She told me it was wrong for me to talk back to my mother. After that, I said sorry to my mother. My mother also said sorry to me and encouraged me to study hard. What I have learned from the experience is that when we have problems, we should find someone to talk about them and find some ways to solve them. 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：主要运用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，开篇点明日常生活中难免遇到麻烦，以自己数学考试失利为切入点，引发读者共鸣。 第二步，详细描述与母亲的争执、向朋友求助、彼此道歉和解的过程，展现沟通的重要性。 第三步，总结感悟，升华文章主题。 ［亮点词汇］ ①trouble麻烦 ②fail in the exam考试失利 ③result结果 ④argue争吵 ⑤talk to sb. about sth和某人谈论某事 ⑥talk back顶嘴 ⑦encourage鼓励 ⑧solve解决 ［高分句型］ ①When my mother knew the result, she felt very unhappy and we argued loudly with each other.（When引导的时间状语从句） ②She told me it was wrong for me to talk back to my mother.（宾语从句） ③What I have learned from the experience is that when we have problems, we should find someone to talk about them and find some ways to solve them.（that引导的表语从句） （2） （24-25八年级上·湖北武汉·期末）同学们，过去一年，你们可能学习有困难、与家人或朋友相处有矛盾、或者对未来感到迷茫……这些都是成长的烦恼，每个人都会经历。新的一年带来希望和动力，我们不仅要反思过去、解决当下问题，更要规划未来，成为更好的自己。请你根据以下内容提示完成一篇英语短文。 内容提示： 1. What was your biggest problem in 2024? 2. How did this problem make you feel? 3. What’s your New Year’s resolution for it? 4. Something more about this topic. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I did face some problems in 2024. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I did face some problems in 2024. My biggest problem was struggling with math. No matter how hard I tried, complex formulas and difficult problems always confused me. This problem made me extremely frustrated. Every time I saw a low score on my math test, I felt disappointed and even doubted my own abilities. For the new year, my resolution is to improve my math skills. I plan to spend an extra hour every day practicing math problems and ask my teacher for help whenever I’m stuck. I believe that as long as I keep working hard, I can overcome this difficulty. The new year is full of hope, and I’m ready to become a better version of myself. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括4个问题要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山地指出在2024年遇到了一些问题，引出话题； 第二步，着重描述数学问题给自己带来的负面情绪； 第三步，围绕新年计划展开，表明针对数学难题，决心在新的一年提高数学技能； 第四步，书写总结：表达信心和期待。 [亮点词汇] ①be full of充满 ②ask sb. for help向某人求助 [高分句型] ①Every time I saw a low score on my math test, I felt disappointed and even doubted my own abilities. (时间状语从句) ②I believe that as long as I keep working hard, I can overcome this difficulty. (宾语从句、as long as引导的条件状语从句) （3） （24-25八年级下·浙江金华·期中）假如你是李明，你的好友Maria来信，因体育中考临近，她倍感压力，情绪低落、焦虑。请你结合自己的经历和以下思维导图给她回信，并提出至少三条合理的建议。 要求： （1）要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； （3）80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Maria, I’m sorry to hear that ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 【答案】例文 Dear Maria, I’m sorry to hear that you are under pressure, depressed and anxious due to the approaching physical education exam. I’ve been there. I always failed English when I was a freshman. In order to solve this problem, I listened carefully in class and reviewed carefully after class. When I met with difficulties, I asked my teachers and classmates for help in time. Now my English is very good. So I suggest you communicate with your parents more. At the same time, you should be patient and never give up when you encounter difficulties. Finally, you should practice more sports. I hope my advice is helpful to you. Yours, Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、承接已给的开头，阐述对方的问题； 第二步、介绍自己的个人经历，包括时间、遇到的问题以及解决方法等； 第三步、给出建议并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①under pressure在压力下 ②in order to为了 ③at the same time同时 [高分句型] ①When I met with difficulties, I asked my teachers and classmates for help in time.(when引导时间状语从句) （4） （24-25八年级下·浙江·期中）朋友是我们人生路上的一盏明灯，彼此关爱携手前行。假设你是李华，你的好朋友Tony最近遇到了一些困惑。请根据下表信息给他写一封邮件，提出你的建议。 Tony’s problems Your advice always have a headache lie down,... have too much homework talk with... argue with his brother about chores … 注意： （1）邮件必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥； （2）邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； （3）词数：80—100，邮件开头和结尾已给，不计入总词数。 Dear Tony, I am sorry to hear that. It’s normal to have these problems. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice will work. You’re not alone. I’m always here to help! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Tony, I am sorry to hear that. It’s normal to have these problems. First, if you always have a headache, just lie down and rest for a while. Make sure you drink enough water and get enough sleep at night. As for too much homework, why not talk with your teachers? Explain how you feel. They might give you some advice to spend time better. Also, try to make a study plan to finish home work step by step. Finally, it’s not fun to argue with your brother about chores. May be you could make a cleaning plan together. For example, you can take turns to do different chores. Understanding each other is very important! I hope my advice will work. You’re not alone. I’m always here to help! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点包括针对Tony在信中提到的问题，提出合理的建议，并适当添加细节，以突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据Tony的问题给出相应的建议； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①lie down躺下 ②as for至于 ③step by step逐步 ④take turns轮流 [高分句型] ①First, if you always have a headache, just lie down and rest for a while. (if引导的条件状语从句) ②Understanding each other is very important! (动名词作主语) （5） （24-25八年级下·湖北鄂州·期中）父母是我们最亲的人，但我们有时会在与父母沟通时遇到困难。请根据所给思维导图的提示，以“How to Communicate with Our Parents”为题用英语写一篇短文，谈谈与父母沟通的技巧和做法。 要求： （1）文中需包含思维导图中的主要内容； （2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名； （3）词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 How to Communicate with Our Parents Communication with parents is very important in our life. As we grow older, we’ll find it not easy to communicate with our parents. So what should we do when communicating with them? Here are some of my ideas. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope you can have proper communication with your parents. 【答案】例文 How to Communicate with Our Parents  Communication with parents is very important in our life. As we grow older, we’ll find it not easy to communicate with our parents. So what should we do when communicating with them? Here are some of my ideas.      Firstly, we can make a list of things our parents and we disagree about most. Try to find out the reason why we disagree with each other and accept each other’s ideas little by little. If we still have disagreements, we’d better not get too angry. Secondly, we should talk with them more! Sharing ideas can make us closer. Besides, we should also learn how to really listen. Listening is a skill that must be learned and practiced. Finally, be sure to be polite.      Hope you can have proper communication with your parents. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、开篇点题，引出话题； 第二步、介绍与父母沟通的技巧和做法； 第三步、书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①make a list列清单 ②each other彼此 ③little by little逐渐地 ④be sure to do sth.务必做某事 [高分句型] ①If we still have disagreements, we’d better not get too angry.(if引导条件状语从句) （6） （24-25八年级下·湖北武汉·期中）假如你是李华，你的同学Tom最近觉得学业压力增大，课外活动减少，他非常苦恼。你打算以你的经历和经验，给他写一封邮件，告诉他平衡学习和生活的重要性。 内容提示： What problems did you face in study and life? How did you deal with the problems? Why is it important to balance (平衡) your study and life? Something more about your advice. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, I’m very happy to hear from you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope everything goes well with you. Yours Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Tom, I’m very happy to hear from you. I learned that you are troubled by heavy study pressure. I had similar experiences last year. I spent my free time studying and I often felt stressed out and lost interest in learning. I tried to come up with some ways to solve the problem. For example, I finished my homework in two hours and then spent an hour playing basketball, which helped me relax and focus better. I also talked with my teachers about my worries. It is important to balance study and life, which helps us stay healthy and happy. If we just study all the time without having fun or taking care of our bodies, we might feel very tired and stressed. So I advise you to do something you like and take short breaks instead of pushing yourself too hard. Then you’ll become better. Hope everything goes well with you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据写作要点展开，适当补充，注意条理清晰和语法正确。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你在学习和生活中遇到了的问题，以及是如何解决问题的； 第二步，介绍平衡学习和生活很重要的原因； 第三步，提出建议。 [亮点词汇] ①similar experiences相似经历 ②feel stressed out感到压力重重 ③come up with想出 ④instead of而不是 [高分句型] ①It is important to balance study and life, which helps us stay healthy and happy. (it的固定句型、定语从句) ②If we just study all the time without having fun or taking care of our bodies, we might feel very tired and stressed. (if引导条件状语从句) （7） （24-25八年级下·湖北宜昌·期中）同学们，“5125”健康生活指南对你应对压力有什么启示吗？你都有哪些压力？你打算怎样应对这些压力呢？请你写一篇英语短文具体阐述你的压力，以及应对这些压力你准备采取的具体措施。 Stress Solutions 1. can’t get good grades listen to the teachers carefully; … 2. can’t get on well with classmates be kind to others; … … … 要求： (1) 文章中须包括表格中所有信息并适当发挥； (2) 文章不少于80词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： In our daily life, we all face different kinds of stress. For me, I have several problems. First, I can’t get good grades at times, which makes me worried. To solve this, I will listen to teachers carefully in class and do more exercises after class. Second, I sometimes can’t get on well with my classmates. I think I should be kind to others and try to understand them. Also, I have stress from too much homework. I plan to make a study schedule so that I can manage my time better. The “5125” healthy life guidelines remind me to pay attention to my mental health. By taking these measures, I believe I can deal with stress better and live a more positive life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“在我们的日常生活中，我们都面临着不同种类的压力。”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍自己遇到的压力以及具体的应对措施； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①do more exercises做更多练习 ②get on well with sb.与某人相处融洽 ③pay attention to注意 [高分句型] ①First, I can’t get good grades at times, which makes me worried. (which引导的非限制性定语从句） ②I plan to make a study schedule so that I can manage my time better. (so that引导的目的状语从句) $$