专题08书面表达 (解题技巧+名校模拟)-2025年中考英语考前必练题型（广州深圳专用）

2025年中考英语考前必练题型（广州深圳专用） 专题08书面表达 (解题技巧+名校模拟) 审题切意 （1） 确定文体：常见的文体有记叙文、说明文、应用文、议论文等。根据题目给出的信息，如若是描述经历及感受，一般为记叙文；说明介绍、观点建议等则多为说明文；演讲稿、日记、信 件等属于应用文；阐述观点看法、图表类作文等通常是议论文。 （2） 明确人称和时态：描述过去的经历用一般过去时，以第一人称为主；说明介绍某人、某物、 某地点或阐述观点看法用一般现在时；介绍规划安排用一般将来时。 （3） 标记要点：认真阅读文字、图表等信息，通常会有6个左右要点，用铅笔标记出来，防止 遗漏。 （4） 确定结构：一般采用“总—分—总”结构。开头引出主题，正文详细阐述要点，结尾总结全 文，升华主题或提出倡议等。 遣词造句 （1）列出细节要点：在草稿纸上理清要点顺序，用单词或短语列出每句的细节要点。 （2）补充细节：适当补充内容，使文章丰富，但要注意详略得当，围绕主题展开。 （3）丰富句型词汇：用词、句式尽量多样，多用课文经典句型，根据能力适当选用高级词汇、 长难句，如定语从句、状语从句、宾语从句等。 连句成篇 （1）确保要点齐全：写作时要写齐要点，遇到不会的内容，用熟悉、有把握的词句转换表达。 （2）使用关联词：使用得体的关联词，体现内容要点间的逻辑关系，增强文章流畅性。如表示对比关系的instead of等；因果关系的so等；转折关系的but等；顺序关系的first等；结论的in short 等。 检查错误 完成写作后，检查文章是否有遗漏要点、时态和人称错误、句子结构不完整、大小写或拼写错 误，以及关联词使用是否得体等问题。 名校模拟 1．（2025·广东广州·一模）广东省近年来持续深入推进健康中国战略，你的学校将组织一场“我的健康我做主”的主题演讲比赛。请你根据提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍你是如何保持健康的。 要求： 1. 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 Hello, everyone! It’s very important for us to stay healthy. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you. 2．（2025·广东广州·一模）社会各界十分关心青少年的成长，希望青少年成为德、智、体、美、劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。请你根据下面的思维导图，以“To be a better student”为话题，写一篇演讲稿。 要求： 1. 文章应包括所给思维导图中所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 词数：80左右。文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入词数； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 To be a better student Boys and girls, Our society cares about teenagers. Teenagers are supposed to develop fully. Each of us wants to be a better student. How can we make it? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ These steps help us grow in every way. Let’s take action to be a better student. Thank you! 3．（2025·广东广州·一模）假如你是李华，你校英语校报将组织主题为“共建绿色校园”的征文活动，你打算写一封倡议书投稿，内容如下： 要求： 1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数80左右(倡议书开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数) 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear schoolmates, It is important for us to build a green school. There are things we should do and things we shouldn’t do. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4．（2025·广东广州·一模）上周，你校举办了学校开放日。当天，你作为志愿者出色地完成了任务。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示写一篇短文，向学校宣传部投稿，回顾此次开放日的情况。 注意： （1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 （2） 词数80词左右。 （3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 The School Open Day Last week, our school held an Open Day. ____________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2025·江苏南通·模拟预测）榜样的力量是无穷的。核潜艇之父黄旭华、潜心研究AI的梁文锋、机器人之父王兴兴、弃医从艺的饺子、遨游太空的女工程师王浩泽等都是青少年的榜样。成长的过程中，每个人都有自己的榜样。学校英文报正在开展以“My Role Model”为主题的征文活动。请根据下列提示谈谈你心中的楷模并分享你的体会。 提示： 1. Who is your role model?    2. Why is he/she your model? 3. What can you learn from him/her? 要求： 1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名； 3. 90 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Role Model Everyone has a role model, so do I. My role model is ______________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2025·广东广州·二模）你们学校的科技节将举办题为 “生活中的人工智能（AI in our life）” 的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下思维导图提示写一篇演讲稿。 注意： 1. 可在思维导图内容提示上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数 80 词左右； 3. 不得透露学校、真实姓名及任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 AI in our life Dear teachers and students, As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our daily life and has changed our lives greatly. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·广东广州·一模）你校将举办主题为“青少年应该具备的生活技能”（Important life skills for teens）的英语征文比赛。请根据以下思维导图，用英语写一篇征文，描述青少年应具备的生活技能及如何提高这些技能。 要求： 1、80词左右，开头已给出 ，不计入总词数； 2、涵盖要求的内容并适当拓展。 Life skills are necessary for us. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·广东广州·二模）为提升公众环保意识，你校将组织主题为 Protect the Earth, Start from Now公益活动，同学们分组向市民宣传环保知识，请你写一封 e-mail 邀请英国交流生 Mike 参加活动，告知他你所参加的小组的两项具体活动。 Theme (主题): Protect the Earth, Start from Now Time June, 29th Place The People’s Park Group Group 1: Green Consumer Group 2: Protect Animals Group 3: Guard the Blue Sky 要求： 1、80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2、涵盖要求的内容并适当拓展。 Dear Mike, Our school will hold an environmental protection activity. __________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Jia Ming 9．（2023·广东广州·一模）假如你是李华，学校将接待一批国际交换生，请你为学校拟一封邮件，向交换生们推荐两项有关中国文化的交流活动，给出理由，并提供一些建议。 注意： 1. 词数80词左右(文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数，请根据要点提示适当发挥) 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear exchange students, Welcome to our school! To make your visit more pleasant and meaningful,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We are looking forward to your arrival! Yours, Li Hua 10．（2025·广东广州·一模）上周学校开展了一项关于初三学生学业压力的调查活动。假设你是校报小记者李华，请根据以下思维导图，简述同学们在学习中遇到的问题并分享你的建议。 注意： 1.词数80 词左右(开头已给出，不计入词数) 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Last week, a survey on study pressure was carried out among Grade 9 students in our school. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．（2025·广东广州·二模）在丰富多彩的初中生活里，每个人都在挑战自我并超越自我，无论是体育场上挥洒的汗水，还是公众面前的勇敢发言……这些经历都让你受益匪浅。现在，学校英语社团以“My Journey of Growth in Junior High School”为题向学生征文。请你根据下列思维导图分享你一次成长的经历，并谈谈这次经历给你带来的感受。 When did it take place? What happened? My Journey of Growth in Junior High School Where did it take place? What did you learn? 注意：1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；2. 字数80词左右；3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My Journey of Growth in Junior High School Looking back, every experience in junior high school has taught me how to grow up.____________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2025年中考英语考前必练题型（广州深圳专用） 专题08书面表达 (解题技巧+名校模拟) 审题切意 （1） 确定文体：常见的文体有记叙文、说明文、应用文、议论文等。根据题目给出的信息，如若是描述经历及感受，一般为记叙文；说明介绍、观点建议等则多为说明文；演讲稿、日记、信 件等属于应用文；阐述观点看法、图表类作文等通常是议论文。 （2） 明确人称和时态：描述过去的经历用一般过去时，以第一人称为主；说明介绍某人、某物、 某地点或阐述观点看法用一般现在时；介绍规划安排用一般将来时。 （3） 标记要点：认真阅读文字、图表等信息，通常会有6个左右要点，用铅笔标记出来，防止 遗漏。 （4） 确定结构：一般采用“总—分—总”结构。开头引出主题，正文详细阐述要点，结尾总结全 文，升华主题或提出倡议等。 遣词造句 （1）列出细节要点：在草稿纸上理清要点顺序，用单词或短语列出每句的细节要点。 （2）补充细节：适当补充内容，使文章丰富，但要注意详略得当，围绕主题展开。 （3）丰富句型词汇：用词、句式尽量多样，多用课文经典句型，根据能力适当选用高级词汇、 长难句，如定语从句、状语从句、宾语从句等。 连句成篇 （1）确保要点齐全：写作时要写齐要点，遇到不会的内容，用熟悉、有把握的词句转换表达。 （2）使用关联词：使用得体的关联词，体现内容要点间的逻辑关系，增强文章流畅性。如表示对比关系的instead of等；因果关系的so等；转折关系的but等；顺序关系的first等；结论的in short 等。 检查错误 完成写作后，检查文章是否有遗漏要点、时态和人称错误、句子结构不完整、大小写或拼写错 误，以及关联词使用是否得体等问题。 名校模拟 1．（2025·广东广州·一模）广东省近年来持续深入推进健康中国战略，你的学校将组织一场“我的健康我做主”的主题演讲比赛。请你根据提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍你是如何保持健康的。 要求： 1. 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 Hello, everyone! It’s very important for us to stay healthy. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you. 2．（2025·广东广州·一模）社会各界十分关心青少年的成长，希望青少年成为德、智、体、美、劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。请你根据下面的思维导图，以“To be a better student”为话题，写一篇演讲稿。 要求： 1. 文章应包括所给思维导图中所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 词数：80左右。文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入词数； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 To be a better student Boys and girls, Our society cares about teenagers. Teenagers are supposed to develop fully. Each of us wants to be a better student. How can we make it? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ These steps help us grow in every way. Let’s take action to be a better student. Thank you! 3．（2025·广东广州·一模）假如你是李华，你校英语校报将组织主题为“共建绿色校园”的征文活动，你打算写一封倡议书投稿，内容如下： 要求： 1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数80左右(倡议书开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数) 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear schoolmates, It is important for us to build a green school. There are things we should do and things we shouldn’t do. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4．（2025·广东广州·一模）上周，你校举办了学校开放日。当天，你作为志愿者出色地完成了任务。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示写一篇短文，向学校宣传部投稿，回顾此次开放日的情况。 注意： （1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 （2） 词数80词左右。 （3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 The School Open Day Last week, our school held an Open Day. ____________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2025·江苏南通·模拟预测）榜样的力量是无穷的。核潜艇之父黄旭华、潜心研究AI的梁文锋、机器人之父王兴兴、弃医从艺的饺子、遨游太空的女工程师王浩泽等都是青少年的榜样。成长的过程中，每个人都有自己的榜样。学校英文报正在开展以“My Role Model”为主题的征文活动。请根据下列提示谈谈你心中的楷模并分享你的体会。 提示： 1. Who is your role model?    2. Why is he/she your model? 3. What can you learn from him/her? 要求： 1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名； 3. 90 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Role Model Everyone has a role model, so do I. My role model is ______________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2025·广东广州·二模）你们学校的科技节将举办题为 “生活中的人工智能（AI in our life）” 的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下思维导图提示写一篇演讲稿。 注意： 1. 可在思维导图内容提示上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数 80 词左右； 3. 不得透露学校、真实姓名及任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 AI in our life Dear teachers and students, As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our daily life and has changed our lives greatly. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·广东广州·一模）你校将举办主题为“青少年应该具备的生活技能”（Important life skills for teens）的英语征文比赛。请根据以下思维导图，用英语写一篇征文，描述青少年应具备的生活技能及如何提高这些技能。 要求： 1、80词左右，开头已给出 ，不计入总词数； 2、涵盖要求的内容并适当拓展。 Life skills are necessary for us. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·广东广州·二模）为提升公众环保意识，你校将组织主题为 Protect the Earth, Start from Now公益活动，同学们分组向市民宣传环保知识，请你写一封 e-mail 邀请英国交流生 Mike 参加活动，告知他你所参加的小组的两项具体活动。 Theme (主题): Protect the Earth, Start from Now Time June, 29th Place The People’s Park Group Group 1: Green Consumer Group 2: Protect Animals Group 3: Guard the Blue Sky 要求： 1、80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2、涵盖要求的内容并适当拓展。 Dear Mike, Our school will hold an environmental protection activity. __________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Jia Ming 9．（2023·广东广州·一模）假如你是李华，学校将接待一批国际交换生，请你为学校拟一封邮件，向交换生们推荐两项有关中国文化的交流活动，给出理由，并提供一些建议。 注意： 1. 词数80词左右(文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数，请根据要点提示适当发挥) 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear exchange students, Welcome to our school! To make your visit more pleasant and meaningful,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We are looking forward to your arrival! Yours, Li Hua 10．（2025·广东广州·一模）上周学校开展了一项关于初三学生学业压力的调查活动。假设你是校报小记者李华，请根据以下思维导图，简述同学们在学习中遇到的问题并分享你的建议。 注意： 1.词数80 词左右(开头已给出，不计入词数) 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Last week, a survey on study pressure was carried out among Grade 9 students in our school. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．（2025·广东广州·二模）在丰富多彩的初中生活里，每个人都在挑战自我并超越自我，无论是体育场上挥洒的汗水，还是公众面前的勇敢发言……这些经历都让你受益匪浅。现在，学校英语社团以“My Journey of Growth in Junior High School”为题向学生征文。请你根据下列思维导图分享你一次成长的经历，并谈谈这次经历给你带来的感受。 When did it take place? What happened? My Journey of Growth in Junior High School Where did it take place? What did you learn? 注意：1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；2. 字数80词左右；3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My Journey of Growth in Junior High School Looking back, every experience in junior high school has taught me how to grow up.____________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 1．例文： My Ways to Keep Healthy Hello, everyone! It’s very important for us to stay healthy. Here are some ways I usually take to keep fit. On the physical health side, I always eat healthily. I avoid junk food like chips and cola. Instead, I have plenty of fruits, vegetables, whole grains, and protein. I also make sure to drink enough water every day, which is great for my body. Regular exercise is a must for me. I go jogging three times a week and play basketball with my friends on weekends. This helps me build strong muscles and keep a good figure. When it comes to mental health, I develop a good habit of reading. Reading different books broadens my horizons and relaxes my mind. When I’m stressed, I listen to soft music. It calms me down and makes me feel at ease. Also, I always try to look at the bright side of things and stay positive. In conclusion, by taking care of both my physical and mental health, I’m able to live a healthy and happy life. I believe we can all do it if we make an effort. That’s all. Thank you. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇关于如何保持健康的演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时态”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生要根据思维导图提示，从身体健康和精神健康两个方面来介绍，需适当添加细节并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出演讲主题，指出保持健康的重要性； 第二步，写保持身体健康的方法； 第三步，写保持精神健康的方法； 第四步，总结点题，呼吁大家健康生活。 [亮点词汇] ① keep fit 保持健康 ② avoid 避免 ③ broaden one’s horizons 拓宽视野 ④ in conclusion 总之 [高分句型] ① I also make sure to drink enough water every day, which is great for my body.（定语从句） ② I believe we can all do it if we make an effort.(if引导条件状语从句) 2．例文 To be a better student Boys and girls,     Our society cares about teenagers. Teenagers are supposed to develop fully. Each of us wants to be a better student. How can we make it?     First, show love to our country and respect others. We must keep them in mind, work for them and serve them. Next, learn more to be wise, able and creative. We must live and learn. Then, build strong bodies and minds. Exercise every day and be brave to face difficulties in our life. Fourth, develop hobbies and interests to be able to find and enjoy the beauty in life. Last, respect labor, love labor. Learn basic living skills by sharing housework at home and taking part in labor at school.     These steps help us grow in every way. Let’s take action to be a better student.     Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、开篇点题，引出话题； 第二步、详细介绍如何成为全面发展的青少年； 第三步、书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①keep…in mind记住…… ②be able to能够 ③take part in参加 [高分句型] ①Let’s take action to be a better student.(祈使句) 3．例文： Dear schoolmates,    It is important for us to build a green school. There are things we should do and things we shouldn’t do.    In order to make our school green, first, we should turn off the lights when leaving classrooms to save electricity. Secondly, turn off the taps after using water to avoid waste. Thirdly, we can plant more trees and flowers around our school to make it more beautiful. On the other hand, don’t litter anywhere. Avoid using one-time plastic products like plastic bags. And never step on the grass or pick flowers.    It’s important for us to have a green school. I believe our school will be more beautiful. Let’s take action now and make our school green!    Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为征文投稿； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生写作时应注意要按征文要求写，需按要求在“应该做的事”和“不应该做的事”两方面进行拓展，不能遗漏要点，根据实际情况可适当添加细节，突出共建绿色校园主题。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，引出共建绿色校园应做和不应做之事； 第二步，分别从“应该做的事”(如节约用电用水、种植花草树木)和“不应该做的事”(如不乱扔垃圾、不使用一次性塑料制品、不践踏草坪摘花)两方面，阐述具体内容及理由； 第三步，书写结语，表达共建绿色校园的重要性，对校园变美的信心，并呼吁大家行动起来。 [亮点词汇] ① in order to  为了…… ② turn off  关闭 ③ avoid doing  避免做某事 ④ take action  采取行动 [高分句型] ① We should turn off the lights when leaving classrooms to save electricity. (含有时间状语从句的省略形式，完整为when we leave classrooms) ② It’s important for us to have a green school. (含有It作形式主语的特殊句型) ③ I believe our school will be more beautiful. (含有宾语从句的复合句) 4．例文 The School Open Day Last week, our school held an Open Day. A variety of activities were organized to showcase the school’s features. There was an exhibition of students’ artworks, where paintings and handicrafts were displayed, showing the creativity of students. Also, a science experiment show was carried out, which attracted many visitors. As a volunteer, I was busy but fulfilled. I guided parents and guests around the campus, answering their questions patiently. When they showed great interest in our school, I felt proud. I also helped with the exhibition, introducing the artworks to the visitors. This Open Day was a great opportunity for our school to communicate with the outside. I’m glad I could contribute to it and I hope there will be more such activities in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要为 “一般过去时”； ③提示：文章完整涵盖了学校开放日活动的介绍、作者作为志愿者的经历和感受以及对开放日活动的总结评价，内容要点齐全，且通过具体细节生动展现活动过程与个人体验。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明主题，介绍学校举办了开放日活动，并阐述学校组织了各类展示特色的活动，如学生艺术作品展览和科学实验展示，清晰阐述写作背景； 第二步，详细叙述自己作为志愿者的经历，包括引导家长和客人参观校园、耐心解答问题、协助展览并介绍艺术作品，突出个人在活动中的参与和感受； 第三步，总结开放日活动的意义，表明这是学校与外界交流的良好契机，表达自己为活动做出贡献的喜悦之情以及对未来更多此类活动的期待，对整个事件进行了评价和展望。 [亮点词汇] ①a variety of各种各样的 ②showcase展示 ③carry out开展 ④contribute to为……做贡献   [高分句型] ①There was an exhibition of students’ artworks, where paintings and  handicrafts were displayed, showing the creativity of students. (where引导定语从句，现在分词短语作结果状语) ②I guided parents and guests around the campus, answering their questions  patiently. (现在分词短语作伴随状语) 5．例文： My Role Model Everyone has a role model, so do I. My role model is Huang Xuhua, known as the “Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines”. I admire him because he spent over 30 years working secretly on submarines without telling his family. Even when facing technical difficulties, he never gave up. What touches me most is that he once said, “I’m willing to be silent for the country’s future.” His words show his deep love for our nation. From him, I’ve learned two important things. First, we should be brave enough to face challenges, just as he did during research. Second, we must always put the country’s needs first. Whenever I feel tired in study, I think of his spirit and keep going. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要是“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意要点齐全，可适当拓展，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。用“我的榜样是黄旭华”引出下文。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。表明我把他当作榜样的原因。 第三步，书写结语。表明我可以从他身上学到什么，进行情感升华。 [亮点词汇] ①admire仰慕 ②give up放弃 ③brave勇敢的 [高分句型] What touches me most is that he once said, “I’m willing to be silent for the country’s future.” (that引导宾语从句) 6．例文 AI in our lifeDear teachers and students, As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our daily life and has changed our lives greatly. Take smart speakers for example. With simple voice orders, we can play music, get weather forecasts, and even control smart home devices. What’s more, nowadays we can pay by just scanning our faces. It makes shopping much more convenient as we can pay in seconds without taking out wallets. These changes not only save our time but also make our life more comfortable. To make good use of AI, first, we should keep learning about new AI technology to fully enjoy their benefits. Second, we must use AI tools carefully in order to protect ourselves. I believe only by using AI in a proper way, can we benefit a lot from it. Thanks for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍AI在日常生活中带来的变化； 第二步、觉得这些变化怎么样； 第三步、介绍如何在日常生活中好好利用AI。 [亮点词汇] ①take… for example以……为例 ②not only…but also不仅……而且 ③make good use of 好好利用 [高分句型] ①I believe only by using AI in a proper way, can we benefit a lot from it.(倒装句) 7．例文： Life skills are necessary for us. What life skills should we teenagers develop? And how? Here are my opinions.   First, we should try our best to keep healthy. It’s a good idea to keep a balanced diet and do daily exercise. Second, learn to manage time. We can make a list of things to do every morning. Get up early and never be late for school. Third, in order to take care of ourselves better, we should learn some basic skills, such as cooking and doing some chores. Besides, working with others is important. Sometimes, we need to work as a team. When we communicate with others, try to understand them. All in all, if we try our best to improve these life skills, we will lead a happier and healthier life. 【详解】①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时” ； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应该注意不要遗漏，可添加细节，紧扣主题并突出写作重点，即所需要掌握的技能。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头部分，点明生活技能的重要性。 第二步，主体部分，详细介绍需要培养的技能及如何提高。 第三步，总结陈述个人的感悟，回应文章开头并表达期望。 [亮点词汇] ①try one’s best to do 尽某人最大努力做某事 ②communicate with 与……沟通 ③all in all 总之 [高分句型] ①It’s a good idea to keep a balanced diet and do daily exercise. （it作形式主语句型） ②All in all, if we try our best to improve these life skills, we will lead a happier and healthier life. （if引导的条件状语从句） 8． Dear Mike, Our school will hold an environmental protection activity. The theme of the event is “Protect the Earth, Start from Now”, which aims to raise public awareness about environmental issues. The activity is scheduled for June 29th at the People’s Park. Our school has been divided into several groups, each focusing on a specific aspect of environmental protection. I am part of Group 1, which is dedicated to promoting green consumption, and we will be educating the public on the importance of sustainable shopping habits. Additionally, we will hold educational workshops. We will be conducting workshops to educate people on the environmental impact of their consumption habits. I believe this is a great opportunity for us to make a positive impact and contribute to our planet’s well-being. I sincerely hope you can join us for this event. Looking forward to your reply.                                                                                                                                                           Yours,                                                                                                                                                       Jia Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：这是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态应为“一般现在时“和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点包括活动的主题、时间、地点、小组分配和具体活动内容。考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。通过介绍即将举行的公益活动来引出邀请； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详细介绍活动的主题、时间、地点以及你所在的小组和小组的具体活动内容； 第三步，书写结语。表达希望Mike能够参加的愿望，并结束邮件。 [亮点词汇] ① protect保护 ② environmental环境的 ③ participate参加 [高分句型] The theme of the event is “Protect the Earth, Start from Now”, which aims to raise public awareness about environmental issues.（定语从句） 9．例文 Dear exchange students, Welcome to our school! To make your visit more pleasant and meaningful, here are some amazing activities for you. To learn about Chinese traditional culture, taking our ancient poetry class is the top choice. While reading the poems, you may feel that you are meeting people from the past and experiencing their life. It is even more wonderful if you wear some traditional clothes like hanfu and try to behave like them, which helps you understand their life better. To meet modern Guangzhou, I strongly recommend you to take a trip by riding a shared bicycle along the Pearl River. As one of “the four great inventions” in modern China, shared bikes are convenient enough to take you anywhere, anytime. Touring with a bike, you can enjoy not only the natural beauty along the river, but also some famous landmarks around Zhujiang New Town. By the way, remember to take your mobile phone, as using shared bicycles needs scanning with a mobile phone. We are looking forward to your arrival! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文。 ②时态：以一般现在时为主。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，补全开头，交代出写作目的，介绍几个活动给对方； ②第二步，分别从校内和校外两个方面来介绍活动； ③第三步，总结全文，表示对于对方到来的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①learn about学习关于…… ②try to do尝试做某事 ③recommend sb to do sth推荐某人做某事 ④not only…, but also…不但……，而且…… ⑤by the way顺便说一下 [高分句型] ①While reading the poems, you may feel that you are meeting people from the past and experiencing their life. (while引导的时间状语从句) ②It is even more wonderful if you wear some traditional clothes like hanfu and try to behave like them, which helps you understand their life better. (if引导条件状语从句，which引导定语从句) 10．例文： Last week, a survey on study pressure was carried out among Grade 9 students in our school. Many students find it hard to manage time properly. They are often overwhelmed by a large amount of homework and lack a reasonable schedule. Also, some students haven’t adopted effective learning methods, making their study less efficient. In my view, first, making a detailed plan is crucial. It helps allocate time for different subjects and rest. Second, explore suitable learning methods, like summarizing key points and making mind-maps. Additionally, take breaks during study to relax. With these ways, we can better handle study pressure. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题； 第二步，根据提示内容分享调查结果； 第三步，补充自己的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①a large amount of... 大量的…… ②In my view 在我看来 ③take breaks 休息 [高分句型] ①Many students find it hard to manage time properly.（“find it+adj. to do sth”结构） ②Also, some students haven’t adopted effective learning methods, making their study less efficient.（句中现在分词结构表示结果） 11．范文： My Journey of Growth in Junior High School Looking back, every experience in junior high school has taught me how to grow up. In junior high school, I faced many challenges that helped me grow. One big step was joining the school’s speech contest. At first, I was really nervous about speaking in front of many people. But with lots of practice and encouragement from my friends, I became more confident. When I finally stood on stage and gave my speech, it felt amazing. This experience taught me that if I keep trying, I can do anything. Another important time was during a school trip. We had to work together to solve problems and decided where to go. It was hard, but we helped each other and had a lot of fun. This trip showed me how important it is to be a good team member and to trust my friends. The two experiences made me braver and more independent. In the future, I want to keep pushing myself to try new things and always to be there for my friends. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：不要遗漏题干中的内容，并适当增加细节，同时注意拼写、语法正确。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。作者描述自己的初中生活中面临的挑战； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。作者讲述其具体经历； ③第三步，书写结语，作者总结从中学到的道理及对未来有哪些规划。 [亮点词汇] ①at first 起初 ②be nervous about doing sth. 对……感到紧张或焦虑 ③help each other 相互帮助 [高分句型] ①In junior high school, I faced many challenges that helped me grow.（that引导的定语从句） ②When I finally stood on stage and gave my speech, it felt amazing.（when引导的时间状语从句） ③This experience taught me that if I keep trying, I can do anything.（that引导的宾语从句；if引导的条件状语从句） ④This trip showed me how important it is to be a good team member and to trust my friends. (宾语从句；不定式作真正的主语) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$