第二章 写作基础专项训练-【满分作文】新高中英语满分作文

高中英语满分作文 第二章写作基础专项训练 第二章 写作基础专项训练 简单句 句 含有一个主语（或并列主语）和一个谓语（或并列谓语）的句子。 (Simple Sentences) 子 结 并列句 包含两个或两个以上主谓结构的句子且句子之间有并列连词 构 (Compound Sentences) and/but等或用分号连接。 分 类 复合句 包含一个主句和一个从句或一个主句和多个从句的句子，且从 (Complex Sentences) 句用从属连词引导。 一，写好简单句 温馨提示：主语和不及物动词（短语）是组 要拿到高考英语写作高分，就必须在语 成本句型不可缺少的必要成分。在实际运 言上有所突破，那么语言突破的关键是正确 用中，不及物动词常常与副词、介词及其它 构建简单句，这也是写好作文的第一步，是 相关成分有相对稳定的搭配关系。 走向更复杂句子结构的基础。将简单句把 常见不及物动词： 握好之后，再将其加以合理润色和组合，方 come来 g0去 能使之登堂入室，实现高分梦想。 act行动 agree同意 温馨提示：同学们在写作时切忌好高骛远，在 disagree不同意 apologize道款 基本的简单句还没有把握好的情况下就要写 arrive到达 appear出现 很复杂的句子，很可能会搞得遍体鳞伤。要 disappear消失 look看 从自己可以掌控的东西出发，先学会把自己 listen听 blow刮风 的思想表达成为得体的筒单句，进而对之进 cough咳嗽 cry哭 行再加工，转换，方能最后创作出漂亮的作 die死 exist生存 文。 fall跌落 grow生长 掌握好简单句的五种基本句型，会使你 happen发生 jump跳 在写作中感到游刃有余、得心应手。需要注 leave离开 Iive居住 意的是，只有包含了主语、谓语动词等的句 lie说谎：位于 last持续 子才是完整的简单句，否则就是不完整的句 rise升起：起床 ring铃响 子（祈使句、省略句和特殊句型除外）。 run跑 talk讲话 (一)简单句的五种基本句型： tremble颤抖 wOrk工作 1.主语+不及物动词(S十vi.) walk步行 smile微笑 She cried at the news.她听到那个消息时哭 2.主语十及物动词十宾语(S十t.十O) 了 He had lunch at home,他在家里吃午饭。 Time flies.时间飞逝. He liked the film very much,他很喜欢这部 My head aches.我头疼 电影。 Victory won't come to me unless I go to it.胜利是不会向我们走来的，我必须自己走向胜利， 第二章写作基础专项训练 高中英语满分作文 I have already finished reading the book. give sb.sth.=give sth.to sb. 已经读完这本书了。 pass sb.sth.=pass sth.to sb He can't afford to send his son to school. tell sb.sth.=tell sth.to sb. 承担不起送儿子上学。 show sb.sth.=show sth.to sb. 温馨提示：此句型中的谓语动词是及物动词 offer sb.sth.=offer sth.to sb. 或短语，后面的宾语可以是名词、代词、动名 lend sb.sth.=lend sth.to sb. 词或动词不定式等。修饰谓语动词的状语通 take sb.sth.=take sth.to sb. 常放在句末，这些状语多数是副词或介词短 teach sb.sth.=teach sth.to sb. write sb.sth.=write sth.to sb. 语，也可以是名词短语、分词或不定式短语 buy sb.sth.=buy sth.for sb. 等。 cook sb.sth.=cook sth.for sb. 常见的接单宾语的及物动词有： get sb.sth.=get sth.for sb. hate憎恨 love热爱 make sb.sth.=make sth.for sb. accept接受 use使用 choose sb.sth.=choose sth.for sb. admire佩服 admit承认 sing sb.sth.=sing sth.for sb. affect影响 afford付得起 4.主语十系动词十表语(S十link.v十P) announce宣布 bury埋葬 My English teacher is very easy-going.我的 celebrate庆祝 cover涉及 英语老师很随和。 defeat击败 destroy摧毁 He seems unhappy,.他似乎不高兴。 devote奉献 protect保护 温馨提示：此句型中的系动词即连系动词， invent发明 discover发现 如appear显得，seem好像，turn变得（十 educate教育 enjoy喜欢 颜色)，taste尝起来，feel觉得：摸起来， equip装备 explain解释 smell奥起来，fal变得(+asleep/ill/ post邮寄 raise抬高 short/silent等)，kecp保持，go交得(+ supply供应 bad/wrong/blind/deaf等表不好的形容 3.主语十及物动词+双宾语(S十t.+O+O) 词)，get变得，grow变得，become变得， Dad bought me a bike yesterday.(Dad sound听起来，look看起来，等等，作表语 bought a bike for me yesterday.)爸爸昨天 的可以是名词、代词、形容词、副词等。 给我买了辆自行车。 5.主语+及物动词+宾语+宾补(S+.+O He gave her some money.=He gave some +C) money to her..他给她一些钱。 We named him Tom.我们给他取名为汤姆。 She passed him the book=She passed the At first I found English quite hard..开始时 book to him.她把书递给了他。 我发现英语相当难。 Tell him not to be late tomorrow.告诉他明 温馨提示：此句型中的及物动词后接两个宾 天不要迟到。 语（双宾语），即指人的间接宾语和指物的直 He made all of us laugh.他使我们都大笑起 接宾语。通常情况下，间接宾语在前，直接宾 来。 语在后（如上面最后一例，him为间接宾语， We found him cheating on the exam.我们 book为直接宾语)。有时候间接宾语也可改 发现他考试作弊。 为由介词to或for引起的短语，放在直接宾 They left the lights on all day..他们整天亮 语的后面。 着灯。 Industry is the parent of success.戚功源于勒奇。 高中英语满分作文 第三章写作基础专项训练 温馨提示：此句型中的宾语后面需接上宾语 help sb.(to)do帮助某人做某事 补足语（宾补）来补充说明宾语的有关情况， (4)接现在分词作宾语补足语的动词常见 这样意思才完整。宾语和宾语补足语合称复 的有： 合宾语，宾语补足语对宾语起到补充说明的 see sb.doing看见某人正做某事 作用。可作宾语补足语的有名词、形容词、现 hear sb.doing听见某人正做某事 在分词、动词不定式、介词短语等。 watch sb.doing观察某人正做某事 (1)接名词作宾补的动词常见的有：name, notice sb.doing注意到某人正做某事 call,make,think,consider等。 catch sb.doing当场撞见某人正做某事 (2)接形容词作宾补的动词常见的有：keep, find sb.doing发现某人正做某事 make,find,think,declare等。 keep sb.doing让某人保持做某事 (3)动词不定式作宾补时通常分为以下三种 leave sb.doing放任某人做某事 情况： 6.There be句型（在此句型中，谓语动词有时 A.接带to的动词不定式作宾补的动词常见 可用表示存在的其他动词，如live,stand,lie 的有 等代换。) want sb.todo想某人做某事 There is some money in the drawer.抽屉里 ask sb..todo请某人做某事 有些钱。 tell sb.todo告诉某人做某事 There stands a temple on the hill..山上有一 getb.todo让某人做某事 座庙。 teach sb..todo教某人做某事 There are some people in the hall..大厅里有 encourage sb.todo鼓励某人做某事 些人。 warn sb.todo警告某人做某事 There lived five blind men in this village. advise sb..todo建议某人做某事 个村子里住着5个盲人。 order sb.todo命令某人做某事 (I)注意与have的区别：have/has作“有”讲 force sb.todo强迫某人做某事 时，表示所属关系，即“所有，占有”：而there like sb.todo喜欢某人做某事 be结构表示客观上的存在，不说明所有 require sb.todo要求某人做某事 关系 allow sb.todo允许某人做某事 There is a new pen in his pencil-box. beg sb.todo乞求某人做某事 在他的铅笔盒里有一支新钢笔。（钢笔在铅 expect sb.todo期望某人做某事 笔盒里) persuade sb.todo说服某人做某事 He has a new pen.他有支新钢笔。（钢笔为 invite sb.todo邀请某人做某事 他所有) forbid sb.todo禁止某人做某事 (2)该句型中谓语动词的人称和数应与后面 B.接不带to的动词不定式作宾补的动词常 的主语保持一致。若后面有两个或两个以 见的有： 上的名词作主语时，则应采取“邻近原则”， let sb.do使某人做某事 即谓语应与邻近的主语在数上保持一致。 make sb..do使某人做某事 There are going to be two football matches see sb.do看见某人做了某事 this afternoon.今天下午有两场足球比赛。 hear sb.do听见某人做了某事 There is a pen and some books on the desk watch sb.do观察某人做了某事 书桌上有支钢笔和几本书。 C.接带to或不带to的动词不定式作宾补 There seem to be many problems in the 的动词常见的是 project,.这个工程似乎存在很多问题 For man is man and master of his fate,.人就是人，是自已命运的主人。 第二章写作基础专项训练 高中英语满分作文 (3)there be存在句中，there是引导词，无实 B 义，其主语是be动词之后的名词或名词短 语，且这些名词或名词短语通常用不确定的 11.Would you please speak something about 限定词(a,no,all等)修饰，不用确定的限定 your family? 词(the,this,that等)修饰。同时，此句型中 的主语不能是人称代词、专有名词以及被物 12.The writing of the report spent me two even- 主代词或所有格修饰的名词。 ings. 正：China is/lies to the east of Japan, 误：There is,/lies China to the east of Japan.. 13.I followed Mr Smith enter the office. 正：Their books are on the desk. 误：There are their books on the desk. 14.We must study hard in order to serve for 正：They are under the tree. the people better in the future. 误：There are they under the tree. (二)考生典型病句诊断 15.He'll leave Beijing to Paris tomorrow. A 16.Has he returned back yet? 1.I'm very much like English. 17.The old man walked slowly cross the street. 2.My favourite subjects including English and Chinese. 18.The flowers smell well. 3.The future life will become more and more 19.Why don't you ask somebody else help you? better. 4.There is Mary and Tom in the reading 20.Do you fond of hunting? room. 5.In their opinion,go to university is the only way to success. 21.He leave Beijing on a cold winter night. 6.There have many students talking outside. 22.My idea is quite different from you. 7.He cost ten dollars for the book. 23.He was late to school this morning. 8.She is confidence and patience. 24.You'd better borrow your bike to her. 9.Oliver Twist,the hero of the story,he was 25.Every of them has a copy of the an orphan. handbook. 10.The most people think so. 26.I can be able to work out the maths problem. A strong man will struggle with the storms of[ate最者能同命运的风暴抗争. 高中英语满分作文 第二章写作基础专项训练 27.He will can get over his illness. 43.He spends two hours to study English every night. 28.He is works hard every day. 44.We can see cars go and coming 29.I'm admire him very much. constantly. 30.We stayed in the hotel for a hour. 45.I heard him to go out. 46.You can find many students play D basketball on the playground every day. 31.He had his brother waited for him outside. 47.This boy calls Bill.That is,his name is Bill. 32.I worked hardly in order to catch up with others. 48.He often didn't listen the teacher in class. 33.He told me listened to him careful. 49.After the meeting,we discussed about the issue. 34.My English teacher gave me an advice on it. 50.My home village has taken place great changes in the past few years. 35.His father works in an university. (三)根据上面句子的正确表达进行一对一强 36.She fell very happy at the news. 化训练 37.Her English is very well,too. 1.我很喜欢数学。 38.Smoking do a great harm to your health. 2.我的兴趣包括集邮。 39.Try to fit in well with you classmates. 3.你会越来越健康的。 40.My friend Dick now studying abroad. 4.办公室里有我的同桌同学。 E 5.在我看来，学好英语不难。 41.The fire destroied their houses. 6.操场上有很多来访者。 42.There are a book,a pencil and some exercise books on the desk. 7,那本字典他花了98元。 Energy and persistence conquer all thing.能量加较力可以征服一切， 第二章写作基础专项训练 高中英语满分作文 8.他很诚实和热心。 26.你能一个人完成此事吗？ 9.李明，我的同桌，是我们的班长。 27.你将能够成功的。 10.大多数同学都读过那个故事。 28.我们每天上学很早。 29,我喜欢读小说。 B 11.我想就这个问题说一点。 30.他们的争吵持续了一个小时 12.这篇文章花了我两个小时。 D 13.我跟着他进了会议室。 31.他让我们整天工作。 14.我们要全心全意为人民服务。 32.我们必须努力学习来实现梦想。 15.我要离开此地去北京了。 33.他让我耐心一点。 16.他在十点回来的。 34.我请他就英语学习给我提条建议。 17.那个小男孩很快地跑过了马路。 35.我们本周刚刚学完一个单元。 18.棉花摸起来很软。 36.那天他感到很郁闷。 19.我想请他帮我一把。 37.这篇文章也很好。 20.你喜欢旅游吗？ 38.喝酒对你的健康有害。 39.他家里人对我很好。 C 21.她今天早上去了公园。 40.李明现在北京大学读书。 22.我的词典与你的一样。 E 23.别上课迟到。 41.那天我们玩得很快乐。 24.我不想把车借给他。 42.屋子里有一张桌子，两把椅子和几把笤帚。 25.他们中的每一个人都能回答这个问题。 43.我每天早上花半个小时大声朗读英语。 Cease to struggle and you cease to live.生命不止，奋斗不，息。 高中英语满分作文 第二章写作基础专项训练 44.我看到他在角落里哭。 money.他的叔叔去世了，留给了他很多钱。 Not knowing his name,I found it hard to 45.我听到他把门锁上了。 find him.由于不知道他的名字，我发现很难 找到他。 46.你会发现很多人在聚精会神地听他讲。 It rained heavily,causing severe flooding in that place.大雨滂沱，造成了那个地方洪 47.他叫李明。我们都叫他李。 水泛滥。 He got there in a hurry,only to find 48.你必须认真听老师讲课。 everybody gone.他匆匆忙忙到达那儿，结果 发现大家都走了。 49.放学后，我们对此进行了讨论。 You are old enough to take care of yourself now,你已经够大的了，能够照顾好 50,近两年来，我们的学校发生了巨大变化。 自己了。 原则四：非谓语动词在名词后作定语时，在通 二、正确使用非谓语动词 常情况下，用不定式表示动作尚未发生，用 非谓语动词包括动词不定式、动名词和 现在分词表示动作正在进行，用过去分词表 分词三种。 示被动意义和动作已经发生。 非谓语动词的使用会使文章结构简洁 ·I have a lot of papers to type.我有一些文 明朗，信息量大，是英语作文中的最大亮点， 件要打印。 因此，正确使用非谓语动词是高考作文获得 ·the house to be built next month下月将 高分的一个法宝。 要建造的房子（表将来） (一)非谓语动词使用原则 ·the house being built now现在正在建造 原则一：用不定式作目的状语 的房子（表进行） When asked why he went there,he said ·the house built last year去年建造的房子 he was sent there to be trained for a space (表被动和完成) flight.当问到他为什么去那儿时，他说他被 温馨提示：①当被修饰的名词前有the 派往那儿是为了训练太空飞行。 first,the second,the only,the next,the To master a foreign language,one must bcst,the most suitable等序数词或最高级 work hard at it.要想掌握一门外语，必须刻 形容词时，原则上要用不定式作定语。 苦努力。 He was the first one to think of the 原则二：用分词作伴随和方式状语（尤其是现 idea.他是第一个想到那个主意的。 在分词) ·You are the only person to be late..你是 They walked into the classroom talking 唯一一个迟到的。 and laughing.他们说着笑着走进了教室。 ②及物动词的过去分词与被修饰词之间是 The professor went out of the lab, 被动关系，表示完成或被动的动作，不及物 followed by a group of students..教授走出 动词的过去分词测仅表示动作的完成。 了实验室，后面跟着一群学生。 ·the boiled water开水 原则三：用现在分词作结果状语和原因状语， ·the developed country发达国家 个别特殊结构中也用不定式。 ·the fallen leaves落叶 His uncle died,leaving him a lot of ·the risen sun已经升起的太阳 10 A thousand-li journey is started by taking the first step.千里之行，始于是下. 第二章：写作基础专项训练 高中英语满分作文 原则五：非谓语动词作状语时，其逻辑主语通 2.When she heard the news,she burst into 常应与主句主语保持一致。 tears. To get yourself fully developed,you need 改写： to take an active part in all kinds of activities.为了得到全面发展，你需要积极 3.As she was still rather weak,she could not 参加各种各样的活动。 Having cleaned the rooms we began to stay up for too long. paint the house.打扫完房间，我们开始粉刷 改写： 房子。 Criticized unfairly,she left the office 4.People usually shake hands when they are without saying a word.由于受到不公平的 introduced to each other. 指责，她没说一句话就离开了办公室。 改写： 原则六：通常用过去分词表被动，但若涉及的动 作尚未发生，则用不定式的被动式，若所涉及 5.Because the boy was greatly touched by his 的动作正在进行，则用现在分词的被动式。 teacher's words,he did a lot of things to The children talked so loudly at the dinner table that I had to struggle to be help his classmates. heard.孩子们在饭桌上大声地交谈着，为了 改写： 让他们听清楚，我只好使劲喊。 The repairs cost a lot,but it's money well B spent.修缮工作花钱很多，但是很值得。 温馨提示：有些过去分词被动意味并不强，其 6.The worker wrote to the police and 使用是与固定搭配有关。 disclosed who stole the money. Faced with so much trouble,we failed to 改写： complete the task on time.因为面对太多的 麻烦，我们没能按时完成任务。 7.Most of the artists who had been invited to ·Do you know the girl dressed in red?你 the party were from Europe. 认识穿红衣的那个女孩吗？ 原则七：若强调动作发生在主句谓语动作之前 改写 时，原则上要用完成式（根据情况选用不定 式的完成式或现在分词的完成式)。 8.The prices of the computers which are Not having received his phone call for being shown here are still unknown. long,she got worried..好长时间没接到他的 改写： 电话，她焦虑起来。 ·He seemed to have seen the film,看起来 9.When it is seen from the hill,the park looks 他已经看过那部影片。 very beautiful. (二)使用非谓语动词改写下列句子 改写： A 1.Be careful when you cross the street. 10.Don't speak until you are spoken to. 改写： 改写： 1 ('onstant dripping wears away the stone,.腹而不会，金石可镂， 高中英语满分作文 第二章写作基础专项训练 改写： 11.If we were given more time,we could do it 20.I was frightened by the loud noise,so I much better. went to see what was happening. 改写： 改写： 12.Though they had been warned of the E storm,the farmers were still working in the fields. 21.Our school was built in 1910,and it has a 改写： history of 100 years. 改写： 13.Even if I'm invited,I won't take part in the party. 22.After I was given some advice on how to 改写： avoid making the same mistake,I felt confident and light-hearted. 14.The teacher entered the classroom,and he 改写： was followed by a group of students. 改写： 23.Because I didn't know how to get in touch with him,I turned to his brother. 15.The manager held his head high:he 改写： walked into the room. 改写： 24.Since I haven't met him before,I don't know what he is like. 改写： D 16.All our savings were gone,and we started 25.His parents were very poor,and couldn't looking for jobs. afford to send him to school. 改写： 改写： 17.He rushed into the room,and his face was covered with sweat. 改写： 26.When he heard the news,he jumped with joy. 18.You should never give up when you are 改写： faced with difficulties. 改写： 27.The questions which were discussed at the meeting yesterday are very important. 19.If the weather permits,we will go and visit 改写： the Zhongshan Park. 12 A young idler,an old beggar,少壮不努力，老大徒伤德 第二章：写作基础专项训练 高中英语满分作文 28.Most of the students who live in the 7.应邀出席开幕式的都是来自全国各地的 school are those from outside the city. 专家。 改写： 29.You fell ill,and it worried us all. 8.那儿正在建设的大楼是我们的新图书馆。 改写： 30.When I look at the pictures,I can't help 9.当我问他怎么去火车站的时候，他给我看了 thinking of those happy days we spent 张地图。 together. 改写： 10.除非受到邀请，否则他不参加任何聚会的。 (三)根据以上改写内容进行仿写（一对一练 习) A 1.当我们在街上走着的时候我们遇到了我们 11,加热到一定的高温，水会变成水蒸气。 的一些朋友。 12,尽管告诉了他很多次，他还是不记得那个 2.当我进入公园时，我一个人也没找到。 电话号码。 3.我感到精疲力尽，于是就早早地上床睡 觉了。 13.即使受到老师的表扬，他也不显得高兴。 4.当受到他人的表扬时，你应该保持谦虚。 14.他在他的儿子的陪同下去了火车站。 5.美丽的风景激发了他的灵感，他创作出了又 15.那位老人手里拿着一个很重的箱子，费力 一伟大作品。 地走进了候车室。 B D 6.我给他打电话，邀请他参加我的生日派对。 16.所有的工作都完成后，我们返回了营地。 13 No pain,no gain..没有付出，就没有收获。参考答案 高中英语满分作文 参考答案 15.to→for错因：词汇用法错误。leave与for搭 第二章 写作基础专项训练 配，for后面跟目的地 一、写好简单句 l6.去掉back。错因：词汇用法不当。return=get/ come/go back,词义重复。 (二】 17.cross->across错因：词性不分。cross为动词； A.l.改为：I like English very much..like“喜欢”，为 across为介词。此处应使用介词 动词。而be like“很像”，like为介词。错因：词 l8.wel-→good错因：smell闻起来，为系动词。其 性不分。 后应跟形容词作其表语。 2.including改为include错因：句子无谓语动词 l9.help→to help错因：ask后应该用to do sth.作 不成立。 其宾语补足语，ask sb.to do sth.。 3.more and more better-→better and better错因： 20.Do>Are错因：句子缺少谓语动词。fond为形 用比较级修饰比较级。 容词，应与be搭配使用。 4.改为：Mary and Tom are in the reading room.或 C.2l.leave-→left错因：该句谓语动词没有时态以 倒装结构：In the reading room are Mary and 及人称与数的变化。 Tom.错因：专有名词不能作there be句型的主 22.you→yours错因：句子前后不对称。my idea应 语。 与“你的看法”即yours相呼应。 5.go→going错因：动词原形不可作主语。 23.to→for错因：常见词汇用法不当。be late for 6.have→are错因：句型混乱。there be句型中，be sth.做某事迟到了。 不可换成have。 24.borrow-→lend错因：lend“借出”与borrow“借 7.cos1>paid错因：cost的主语应该为物。sth. 进”混淆。 cost sb.money 25.Every-→Each错因：对every的词性不清。ev 8.confidence and patience-confident and patient ery为形容词，不能单独作主语，宾语，它可以作 错因：词性不分。作表语时，若表示特性特征，应 用其形容词形式。 定语，修饰单数名词。each既可以作形容词，也 9.去掉he。错因：句子主语重复。Oliver Twist就 可以为代词，单独使用。 是主语，the hero of the story为其同位语。 26.去掉be able to或将can be改为am。错因：情 l0.The most-→Most错因：most前加the时表示最 态动词不可叠加使用.can/could不能与be 高级的含义，与句意不符。表示“大多数”时，前 able to同时使用，表示“能够”。 无冠词。 27.去掉can。错因：情态动词不可与其他的情态动 B.1l.speak→say借因：动词用法错误。speak后 词或助动词同时使用。 跟语言作宾语，如speak English。 28.去掉is。错因：句子谓语动词混乱。is为多余 l2.spent-→took错因：动词用法错误。spend的主 系动词。 语为人，用于：sb.spend time/money on sth. 29.Im→I错因：句子谓语动词混乱。am为多余 l3.改为：Following Mr Smith,I entered the office. 系动词。 错因：该句为典型汉语式英语。 30.a→an 错因：违背了冠词的变化规律，即：a用 14.去掉for。错因：serve表示“服务”时为及物动 于辅音音素前，而an则用于元音音素前。hour 词，后面不用for。 中的h字母不发音。 13 高中英语满分作文 参考答案 D.3l.waited-→waiting错因：have sth.done意为 45.去掉to。错因：hear后应跟不带to的不定式作 “使某事被做”，此处句意不通。have sb.doing 宾补。 sth.使某人一直做某事。 46.play→playing错因：find后不能跟不定式作 32.hardly-→hard错因：hard与hardly用法混乱。 宾补(tobe结构例外)。find sb.doing sth.为正 hard努力地，hardly几乎不。 确形式。 33.listened→to listen:careful→carefully错因： 47.calls-→is called错因：call后面应该跟复合宾 谓语动词随意罗列：副词、形容词用法不明。 语，用名词作宾补。 tell后应该跟复合宾语，tell sb.to do sth.:修饰 48.listen后加to。错因：listen为不及物动词，却被 谓语动词应使用副词carefully。 用做及物动词。其后应跟介词0。 34.an→a piece of错因：对于不可数名词advice用 49.去掉about。.错因：及物动词discuss被用做了 法不清。advice为不可数名词，前面可用some 不及物动词。 修饰，若要表示“一条（建议）”，则可使用a piece 50.改为：Great changes have taken place in my of advice. home village in the past few years.错因：take 35.an→a错因：违背了冠词的变化规律，即：a用于 place后不能再跟宾语。 辅音音素前，而an则用于元音音素前。univer (三) sity的第一个音素为/ju/,应使用冠词a。 A.1.I like maths very much. 36.fell→felt错因：feel的过去式拼写错误。feel的 2.My interests include collecting stamps. 过去式和过去分词为felt,而fell为fall(跌落) 3.You'll get healthier and healthier. 的过去式。 4.My deskmate is in the office. 37.wll→good错因：词性用法错误。作表语时，若 5.In my opinion,it is not difficult to study English 表示特性特征，应用其形容词形式。 well./...to study English well is not difficult. 38.do→does;去掉a。错因：该句谓语动词没有时 6.There are many visitors on the playground. 态以及人称与数的变化：不可数名词前不可用 7.He paid 98 yuan for the dictionary. 不定冠词 8.He is very honest and warm-hearted. 39.you→your错因：人称代词当成物主代词使用。 9.Li Ming,my deskmate.is our monitor. 40.now前加is错因：句子没有谓语动词。is与 10.Most students have read the story. studying构成谓语，表示动作在进行。 B.11.I'd like to say something about it. E.4l.destroied-→destroyed错因：动词的变化形式 12.The article took me two hours. 没有搞清。以辅音字母加y结尾的动词，变y为 13.Following him,I entered the meeting room. i,后加一ed(如study→studied);以元音字母加y 14.We should serve the people heart and soul. 结尾的词，直接加一ed(如enjoy-→en可joyed). 15.I'm leaving here for Beijing. 42.are→is错因：谓语动词没有采用就近一致的 16.He returned at ten. 原则。there be句型中若后有两个或两个以上 17.That little boy ran quickly across the road. 的名词作主语时，则应采取“邻近原则”，即谓语 18.Cotton feels soft. 应与邻近的主语在数上保持一致。 19.I'd like to ask him to lend me a hand. 43.to study→studying错因：常用固定结构为 20.Are you fond of travelling? spend time/money doing sth. C.21.She went to the park this morning. 44.g0→going错因：两个并列的非谓语动词没有保 22.My dictionary is the same as yours. 持一致。go与come为并列关系，形式上应该 23.Don't be late for class. 保持一致。 24.I don't want to lend my car to him. 132 参考答案 高中英语满分作文 25.Each of them is able to answer the question. 4.People usually shake hands when introduced to 26.Are you able to finish it by yourself? each other. 27.You will make it. 5.Greatly touched by his teacher's words,he did a 28.We go to school early every day. lot of things to help his classmates. 29.I enjoy reading novels. B.6.The worker wrote to the police,disclosing 30.Their quarrel lasted an hour. who stole the money. D.31.He has us working all day long. 7.Most of the artists invited to the party were 32.We must work hard to achieve our dreams. from Europe. 33.He told me to be patient. 8.The prices of the computers being shown here 34.I asked him to give me a piece of advice on Eng- are still unknown. lish study. 9.Seen from the hill,the park looks very beautiful. 35.We have just finished learning a unit this week. 10.Don't speak until spoken to. 36.He felt depressed that day. C.11.Given more time,we could do it much better. 37.This article is very good,too. 12.Having been warned of the storm,the farmers 38.Drinking does harm to your health. were still working in the fields. 39.His family are very nice to me. 13.Even if invited,I won't take part in the party. 40.Li Ming is now studying at Beijing University. 14.The teacher entered the classroom,followed by E.41.We enjoyed ourselves very much that day. a group of students. 42.There is a desk,two chairs and a few brooms in 15.Holding his head high,the manager walked into the room. the room. 43.I spend half an hour reading English aloud ev- D.16.All our savings gone,we started looking for ery morning. jobs. 44.I saw him crying in the corner. 17.He rushed into the room,his face covered with 45.I heard him lock the door. sweat. 46.You can find many people listening to him care- 18.Never should you give up when faced with dif- fully. ficulties. 47.He is called Li Ming.We all call him Lee. 19.Weather permitting,we will go and visit the 48.You must listen to the teacher carefully. Zhongshan Park. 49.We discussed it after school./We had a discus- 20.Frightened by the loud noise,I went to see sion about it after school. what was happening. 50.Great changes have taken place in our school in E.21.Built in 1910,our school has a history of 100 the recent two years. years. 22.Given some advice on how to avoid making the 二、正确使用非谓语动词 same mistake,I felt confident and light-heart- (二】 ed. A.1.Be careful when crossing the street. 23.Not knowing how to get in touch with him,I 2.Hearing the news,she burst into tears. turned to his brother. 3.Being still rather weak,she could not stay up for 24.Not having met him before,I don't know what too long. he is like. 133 高中英语满分作文 参考答案 25.His parents were too poor to send him to 15.Holding a heavy case in his hand,the old man school. walked into the waiting room with great diffi- F.26.Hearing the news,he jumped with joy. culty. 27.The questions discussed at the meeting yester- D.16.All the work done,we returned to our camp- day are very important. site. 28.Most of the students living in the school are 17.He was running wildly,his face covered with those from outside the city. sweat. 29.Your falling ill worried us all. 18.Never shall we give way to disappointment 30.Looking at the pictures,I can't help thinking of when faced with difficulties. those happy days we spent together. 19.Time permitting,we'll go and do some shop- (三】 ping. A.1.We met some friends of ours while walking in 20.Surprised at what was happening,Tom didn't the street. know what to do. 2.Entering the park,I didn't find a single person. E.21.Born in 2003,he is nearly 15 years old. 3.Being worn-out,I went to bed early. 22.Exposed to various kinds of advertisements,we can't help being influenced by them. 4.You should keep modest when praised by oth- 23.Being very familiar with this city,I feel myself ers. at home. 5.Inspired by the beautiful scenery,he created an- 24.Not having heard of him,I felt worried. other great work. 25.He is too young to go to school.He is not old B.6.I called him up,inviting him to my birthday enough to go to school. party. F.26.Looking out of the window,I saw my moth- 7.Those invited to the opening ceremony were all er. experts from all over the country. 27.The student referred to just now is my classmate. 8.The building being built there will be our new li- 28.People living here are suffering from pollution. brary./ 29.His being late made the teacher unhappy. The building under construction there will be 30.Thinking of the happy days,he couldn't help our new library. smiling. 9.Asked how to get to the railway station,he showed me a map. 三、把握并列句 10.He won't go to any party,unless invited to. (二) C.11.Heated to a high temperature,water will A.1.Work hard,and you will pass the driving change into vapour. test. 12.Having been told many times,he still doesn't 2.Be quick,or we'll be late for the meeting. remember the telephone number. 3.She is seriously ill,but there is still hope of her 13.Even if praised by the teacher,he doesn't ap- recovery. pear happy. 4.He was a little man with thick glasses but he 14.He went to the railway station,accompanied by had a strange way of making his classes lively his son. and interesting. 134 参考答案 高中英语满分作文 5.Right now it is the summer vacation and I'm 8.The science of medicine,in which progress has helping my Dad on the farm. been very rapid lately,is perhaps the most im- B.6.Neither I would consult him nor would he ask portant of all the sciences. me for advice. 9.Tony will never forget those days when she 7.She has difficulty in learning English;however, lived in China with her mother,which has a she works hard and is making rapid progress. great effect on her life. 8.We had better stay at home,for it was raining. 10.He made another wonderful discovery,which I 9.He didn't work hard,therefore he failed in the think is of great importance to science. examination. (二) 10.I like football,while my sister likes basketball. 1.We don't know whether/if Lily is coming to the C.11.We were about to set off when the phone museum. 2.Neither of us could tell why Jim was absent rang. 12.Would you like a cup of coffee or shall we get from class yesterday. down to business right away? 3.We should never pretend to know what we don't know. 13.I did my best not to show pleasure,but what I 4.It was uncertain whether they would make it. was feeling was pure happiness,for my words 5.That nobody else will come is certain./It is cer- had the power to make people laugh. tain that nobody else will come. 14.He couldn't know the truth about me,other- 6.The question is whether we should tell her about wise/or else/or he wouldn't treat me like this. it. 15.Not only did he donate some money to them, 7.After ten years,she changed a lot and looked but he also went to help with the building of different from what she used to be. the houses himself. 8.Information has been put forward that more 四、合理使用复合句 middle school gaduates will be admitted into universities. (-) 9.What the doctors really doubt is whether she 1.The house in which we live is beautiful./The will recover from the serious disease soon. house where we live is beautiful. 10.We expressed the hope that they would come 2.The letter which/that I received yesterday was and visit China again. from my uncle. (三) 3.Our teacher is talking with the man who is Li 1.While I admit that you've made great progress in Ming's father. your English,I still don't think it good enough. 4.Soon they came to a farm house whose roof was 2.As the days went on,the situation there was much higher than others. getting worse and worse. 5.He works in a middle school,in front of which 3.Since everybody is here,let's set out right away. there is a river. 4.You should put the dictionary where you can 6.As is known to everyone,the moon travels find it easily. round the earth once every month. 5.Getting a right job can be difficult unless the 7.He's got himself into a dangerous situation students are prepared to deal with the job inter- where he is likely to lose control over the plane. view./..if the students are not prepared. 135 高中英语满分作文 参考答案 6.Wherever you go,you should bear the mother- 5.It is you who am supposed to take on the re- land in mind. sponsibility to look after your sick mother. 7.Although/Even though he had failed several B.6.It was in that shop that the old man found his times,he kept on working. wallet missing. 8.Whatever difficult problems I may meet with,I 7.Is it in the school reading room that he is stud- shall carry it on. ying? 9.Whenever he meets with me,he always borrows 8.It was what he learnt there that helped him out money from me. again and again 10.Child as/though he was,he was well-in- 9.It was then that he realized what a terrible mis- formed./Although/Though he was a child, take he had made. he... 10.It is the ability to do the job that matters,not 五、特殊结构或句型 where you come from or what you are. (三)】 A.1.Not until Father came back did I go to bed. 1.Time permitting,we'll do another two exerci- 2.Only in this way can we get along very well with ses. each other. 2.My task (having been)finished,I'll go and play 3.In front of the building stands a tall tower. football. 4.Not only can travelling relax us,but also broad- 3.There being no buses,we had to walk home. en our horizons. 4.The exam to be held tomorrow,I can't go to the 5.So angry was I that I telephoned the police who cinema tonight. came shortly after. 5.I went to see my best friend who had got injured B.6.Hardly could I believe my ears. in the accident,my heart full of worry. 7.Seldom does he refuse to help others if ever. 6.The hunter entered the forest,gun in hand. 7.The rain having stopped,he went out for a 8.Hardly had I finished my homework when my walk. best friend Tom came. 8.The boy lay on the ground,his eyes closed and 9.I don't know where he has gone,nor do I care. his hands trembling. 10.You disagree with them,so do I. 9.He came out of the library,a large book under C.11.Had you listened to your parents then, his arm. things would be quite different now. 10.The meeting over,the workers went home. 12.Should you have free time,please drop in on (二) me. A.1.It was not until all the fish in the river died 13.Never will we give way to disappointment. out that the villagers realized the importance of 14.should you be discouraged. protecting environment. 15.Here comes the bus. 2.I do hope you will attend my wedding tomor- D.16.Not a single word did he say at the meeting. row. 17.Out rushed the policeman. 3.What is it that I should do then? 18.Seated on the platform were our teachers and 4.It is I who am to blame. some parents. 136 参考答案 高中英语满分作文 19.It is true that money can contribute to our hap- 6.I would rather do some reading at home than go piness,but by no means is it everything. shopping with them. 20.No sooner had he arrived home than it began to 7.Since/Now that you can't change others,why rain. not try changing yourself? (四) 8.It seems a long time since we last met. A.1.If I were you,I wouldn't lose heart. 9.My English teacher's humour was such as to 2.If he were here,everything would be all right. make all of us laugh./My English teacher was 3.If I had studied harder,I would have got through so humourous as to make all of us laugh. the exam. 10.I was so embarrassed that I felt at a loss what 4.If he had got up early,he would have caught the to say. first bus. 六、写作基础综合训练 5.If I were to meet him tomorrow,I should ask him about it. (- B.6.Without your help,we would not have made 1.It's known to all that doing exercise is beneficial such rapid progress. to health. As is known to all,doing exercise is beneficial to 7.If you were mayor of this city,what measures health. would you take to deal with it? What is known to all is that doing exercise is 8.Without electricity (=If there were no electrici- beneficial to health. ty),life would be quite different. We all know that doing exercise is beneficial to 9.I would rather you didn't go abroad. health. 10.She looked after the boy as if he were her own We all know the fact that doing exercise is bene- son. ficial to health. C.11.He talked about the place as if he had been Exercise does good to health,as is known to us there. all, 12.If only I had arrived in time! 2.Great changes have taken place in our country- 13.How I wish I hadn't said that then! side in the past few years. 14.If only I were able to see you earlier! Our countryside has changed a lot in the past 15.It is high time that people awoke to the great few years. danger of pollution. Our countryside is no longer what it was a few (五) years ago. 1.I would appreciate it if you would help me with Our countryside has taken on a fresh look now. this problem. Having changed a lot,our countryside is beyond 2.We would have arrived there much earlier if it recognition. had not been for the heavy snow. Our countryside is quite different from what it 3.It happened that I had no money on me. used to be. 4.It will be several years before everything returns The past few years have witnessed great changes to normal. in our countryside. 5.I had hardly arrived at the station when the train Our countryside has experienced/undergone dra- Ieft. matic changes in the past few years. 137 高中英语满分作文 参考答案 3.He refused to accept the prize,which was a great In face of great difficulties,we shall still keep up surprise to people. our courage and never give way. What made people surprised was that he refused Faced with great dfficulties,we shall still keep to accept the prize. trying and manage to smooth them away. We were surprised that he refused to accept the (二) prize. A.1.30%of my classmates disagree with it,saying It was surprising that he refused to accept the children shouldn't study all day long. prize. 2.With so much homework to do,we almost have Surprisingly,he refused to accept the prize. no free time to take part in any out-of-class ac- To people's surprise,he refused to accept the tivities.Having so much homework to do,we prize. almost have no free time to take part in any out- 4.He was ill then,and consequently he failed the of-class activities./We have much homework to exam. do every day,almost having no free time to take He was ill then;as a consequence,he failed the part in any out-of-class activities. 3.Kate,a new student from Beijing,finds it hard to exam. Being ill then,he didn't pass the exam. fit in here. 4.I got a first in the competition,which delighted He failed the exam owing to his illness. That he didn't pass the exam was because he my mother. 5.Instead of writing letters,more and more people was ill then. e-mail to each other on the computer. The reason why he didn't pass the exam was B.6.Satisfied with my performance at school,my that he was ill then. father bought me a computer. That he was ill then was the reason for his fail- 7.People are against the idea,arguing that raising ing the exam. pets will pollute the environment./People (who His illness resulted in his failing the exam. are)against the idea argue that raising pets will His illness explained why he didn't pass the ex- pollute the environment. am. 8.Due to the bad weather,the picnic had to be can- 5.Difficult as it may be,we should never lose celled. heart. 9.In spite of many difficulties,we managed to set- In spite of various possible difficulties,we tle the problem. should never give way. 10.Instead of going to play football yesterday,I Although we may meet with various difficul- surfed the Internet at home. ties,we should never be discouraged. C.11.In spite of (Regardless of)the rain,the Never should we give in to any possible difficul- workers kept on working. ties. 12.I'll never forget the day when I joined the Party. In no circumstances shall we give way to disap- 13.It's very kind of you to help me learn English pointment even if faced with great difficulties. every day. Whatever difficulties we may meet with,we 14.We think it very important to speak more Eng- shall never give up. lish. We shall never give up even if there exist many 15.The question is how to improve our spoken great difficulties. English. 138 参考答案 高中英语满分作文 D.16.Mother went to work without having break- 第五章 读后续写突破 fast. 17.Moved by the hero,she decided to study har- der. 热考场景一青春校园 18.I started early in order to get there on time. Ⅲ，l.(1)who:for he was familiar with the topic 19.Not having received his father's letter,he de- (2)icy shell gradually melted away;looking cided to make a call to him. straight in his eyes 20.They lived in a room that faced the south. (3)that he was admitted to They lived in a room facing the south. E.21.English,in which most business letters are (4)Hearing the words;lying:face pale written,is widely used in the world. (5)Though he was weak 22.I suggest you visit the Great Wall,which has a (6)which earned us history of more than two thousand years. 2.参考范文 23.It is a fact that in the past five years,there have At first he was the one who dominated our been changes in people's diet. discussion for he was familiar with the topic,but I 24.The weather being fine,we went to visit the was the opposite. West Lake. However,as days passed,it seemed that his icy 25.Having an important meeting to attend,I will shell gradually melted away and eventually I could not be able to meet you at the airport that day. discuss with him looking straight in his eyes.The (三) next day,words came that he was admitted to hos- 1.There is no doubt that I will be popular with the pital for a serious disease.Hearing the words,I students and get along well with my colleagues. 2.What we can learn from the story is however dashed to the hospital and found him,my dear terrible the situation is,try your best to work teammate,lying on the bed,face pale.Though he hard. was weak,he encouraged me to continue our pro- 3.Therefore,it is important to improve people's ject independently.Greatly inspired,I gathered all awareness of their health. my courage and made the presentation,which 4.It was such an exciting activity that we all en- earned us straight A. joyed ourselves very much. IV.It was my timely apology that saved our friend- 5.I hate it when others disturb me when I'm read- ship:With her encouragement ing. 6.The government should take firm action to deal 热考场景二 暖心家庭 with this problem. IlI.1.(1)Finally came the day 7.As a saying goes,every coin has two sides. (2)Wearing fancy dress;so proud but nervous 8.These behaviors will make bad impressions upon visitors to China. (3)as busy as a bee;accompanying me 9.I think all of us should mind our behavior in (4)that they were always there;drove away all my public places.Only in this way can we live in nervousness more comfortable and beautiful surroundings. (5)So successful was my performance 10.As we all know,books are the source of knowl- (6)could hardly wait to ring:sharing the exciting edge.I benefit a great deal from reading. news 139