专题9 书面表达(25年云南一模新题速递)(云南专用)-【好题汇编】2025年中考英语一模试题分类汇编
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专题9书面表达
(25年一模新题速递)
(2025·云南玉溪·一模)
随着中国的发展,越来越多的外国人想了解中国,因此学好英语讲好中国故事对我们来说意义重大。
加之今年春晚以非物质文化遗产为主旋律,讲述了一个个传奇的中国故事,更是迫切地要求我们要弘扬中
华文化。现你校英语专栏正在举办一场题为Learn English,Tell China's Stories"的征文话动,请你用英语写
一篇短文投稿,介绍用英语讲好中国故事的意义或谈谈学好英语的好处。
要求:1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80:
2语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁:
3文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
(2025·云南昆明·一模)
为了帮助同学们更好地利用周末时间,你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“Making Good Use of Weekend
Tme”为题的征文活动。请你用英文写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,叙述一次你善用周末时间(如进行学习活动、
体有锻炼或家庭活动等)的经历及感悟,或谈谈你如何善用周末时间。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80:
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁:
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计:
4请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
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春日暖阳下,同学们的课间十五分钟悄然“生长”。从容的课间时间,让同学们享受更加健康活力的校
园生活,促进同学们的身心健康发展。那么你的课间是怎么度过的呢?请以“My Activities During the Break”
为题,介绍你课间的活动内容,并谈谈你的感受。
要求:
1根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80:
2语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁:
3文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
(2025·云南曲靖·一模)
你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“A(A)
School Activity'"为题的征文活动。请你补全标题并用英
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语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,叙述你在活动中的具体经历,以及你从这次活动中获得的收获。要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80词:
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁:
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计:
4.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
(2025·云南楚雄双柏·一模)
毕业临近,你校英语协会将针对九年级的学生举办主题为Looking Back and Moving Forward"的征文
活动。请你用英语写一篇短文,分享初中三年中一次对你有深刻影响并促进你继续向前的经历及感悟。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80:
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计:
4.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
Looking Back and Moving Forward
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父母是世界上最爱我们的人。作为中学生,我们可以做一些力所能及的事情关爱我们的父母。请你以
“How to Care for Our Parents”为题,根据以下提示和要求,联系生活实际,用英语写一篇短文,介绍关爱父
母的方式。
提示:
()和父母一起锻炼,帮助父母做家务:
(2)告诉父母吃健康的食物,保持充足的睡眠:
(3)分享我们的校园生活,与他们更亲密。
要求:
(1)根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80:
(2)语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁:
(3)文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计:
(4)请将短文写在答题卡上,写在试卷上一律无效。
(2025·云南昭通·一模)
习近平主席在全国教育大会上强调,中学生要做德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。请
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以“How to Be A Good Teenager'”为趣,结合实际生活,从爱国、爱家、诚信、健康等方面倒述如何做一名
新时代好少年。
要求:
1语言流畅,书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于80:
2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,如使用姓名,请用Mike、Gina等英文名字,校名统一用Guangming Middle
School:
3将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
How to Be A Good Teenager
(2025·云南楚雄禄丰·一模)
假如你是李辉,下周你校将举行“健康伴我行”主题征文活动。请结合以下要点提示,用英语写一篇短
文,给校英文报投稿。
要点:
the purpose of this activity
the methods to stay healthy:
▣eat well
take pleasure in our meals
▣get enough sleep
your opinions about this theme
要求:
1.词数不少于80(开头已给出,不计入总词数):
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2.语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁:
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
Health accompanies me
I'm Li Hui.Next week,our school will hold an essay competition called "Health accompanies me"
(2025·云南昆明·一模)
你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“Sunshine in My Life'”为趣的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文,向专栏
投稿,叙述一次如阳光般温暖你心的经历及感悟(如朋友的一次帮助,老师的一个微笑等),或者分享如何
保持生活积极阳光的方法。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80:
2,语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁:
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名、否则以零分计:
4,请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
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单丝不成线,独木不成林。团队合作在我们的学习和生活中都扮演着重要的角色。请以The Importance
of Teamwork”为趣,用英语写一篇短文。叙述一次有关团队合作的经历及感受,或者谈谈团队合作的好处。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80个;
2.语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁:
3.文中不得使用真实姓名,校名,否则以零分计:
4.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试卷上无效。
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学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
专题9 书面表达
(25年一模新题速递)
(2025·云南玉溪·一模)
随着中国的发展,越来越多的外国人想了解中国,因此学好英语讲好中国故事对我们来说意义重大。加之今年春晚以非物质文化遗产为主旋律,讲述了一个个传奇的中国故事,更是迫切地要求我们要弘扬中华文化。现你校英语专栏正在举办一场题为“Learn English, Tell China’s Stories”的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍用英语讲好中国故事的意义或谈谈学好英语的好处。
要求:1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于 80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
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【答案】范文:
Learn English, Tell China’s Stories
With the rapid development of China, more and more foreigners are interested in learning about China. Therefore, it is of great significance for us to learn English well and tell Chinese stories.
First of all, learning English well can help us communicate with foreigners better. By learning English, we can introduce Chinese culture, history, and society to the world, which can enhance mutual understanding and friendship between China and other countries. In addition, learning English well can also help us gain more knowledge and information from abroad. We can read English books, watch English movies, and listen to English songs, so as to broaden our horizons and improve our language skills.
Moreover, telling Chinese stories can let the world know more about China. China has a long history and rich culture, and there are many touching and inspiring stories in China. By telling these stories, we can not only promote Chinese culture, but also make the world understand China better.
In a word, learning English well and telling Chinese stories are important for us. We should make good use of English to tell Chinese stories and let the world know a real, beautiful, and charming China.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:围绕“用英语讲好中国故事的意义”展开论述,需包含学习英语的好处和文化传播的重要性。
[写作步骤]
第一步:点明背景和主题,强调学习英语与传播中国故事的重要性;
第二步:分点论述学习英语的好处和讲中国故事的意义;
第三步:总结全文,呼吁行动,强化主题。
[亮点词汇]
①of great significance 具有重要意义
②enhance mutual understanding 增进相互理解
③broaden one’s horizons 开阔视野
[高分句型]
①By learning English, we can introduce Chinese culture, history, and society to the world, which can enhance mutual understanding and friendship between China and other countries. (非限制性定语从句)
②China has a long history and rich culture, and there are many touching and inspiring stories in China. (并列句)
(2025·云南昆明·一模)
为了帮助同学们更好地利用周末时间,你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“Making Good Use of Weekend Time”为题的征文活动。请你用英文写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,叙述一次你善用周末时间(如进行学习活动、体育锻炼或家庭活动等)的经历及感悟,或谈谈你如何善用周末时间。
要求:
1. 根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名, 否则以零分计;
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
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【答案】例文
Making Good Use of Weekend Time
Last Saturday, I spent my weekend meaningfully by joining a community clean-up activity. Early in the morning, my classmates and I collected litter in the park near our school. We sorted plastic bottles, paper waste and fallen leaves into different bags. Though it was tiring, I saw the tidy park filled us with pride.
This experience taught me that weekends can be both relaxing and productive. Instead of staying indoors playing video games, doing something helpful for others makes time more valuable. Now I plan to use weekends for more community services and skill-learning activities. Time flies fast, but meaningful actions make it count.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是话题作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”;
③提示:要求以“Making Good Use of Weekend Time”为题,根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我通过加入社区清理活动,度过了有意义的周末。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,描述社区清理活动的经历及感悟。
第三步,描述如何善用周末时间。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of代替
②collect litter收集垃圾
③plan to do sth.计划做某事
[高分句型]
①Though it was tiring, I saw the tidy park filled us with pride. (Though引导的让步状语从句)
②This experience taught me that weekends can be both relaxing and productive. (宾语从句)
(2025·云南大理·一模)
春日暖阳下,同学们的课间十五分钟悄然“生长”。从容的课间时间,让同学们享受更加健康活力的校园生活,促进同学们的身心健康发展。那么你的课间是怎么度过的呢?请以“My Activities During the Break”为题,介绍你课间的活动内容,并谈谈你的感受。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
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【答案】例文
My Activities During the Break
During the fifteen-minute break, I usually do different activities to relax. Sometimes I chat with my classmates about interesting topics or homework. Other times, I walk around the classroom to stretch my legs and refresh my mind. If the weather is nice, I go outside to enjoy the sunshine and fresh air.
My favorite break activity is playing table tennis with friends. It’s fun and helps me stay active. When I feel tired, I just sit quietly and listen to music to recharge.
I think short breaks are important because they help me focus better in class. They also make school life more enjoyable. I always feel happier and more energetic after a good break!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为话题作文;
② 时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③ 提示:根据题目要求介绍课间活动内容并表达感受,注意语言流畅、书写规范,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:介绍你课间的活动内容;
第二步:描述自己最喜欢的活动;
第三步:总结课间活动的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① chat with 和……聊天
② help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
③ energetic 精力充沛的
[高分句型]
①If the weather is nice, I go outside to enjoy the sunshine and fresh air.(条件状语从句)
②When I feel tired, I just sit quietly and listen to music to recharge.(时间状语从句)
(2025·云南曲靖·一模)
你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“A (An) ______School Activity”为题的征文活动。请你补全标题并用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,叙述你在活动中的具体经历,以及你从这次活动中获得的收获。要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80词;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
4.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
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【答案】例文:
A Memorable School Art Festival
A few months ago, our school held an art festival, and it was one of the most memorable school activities I’ve ever taken part in.
Before the festival, I was chosen to be part of the performance team. We spent weeks preparing for it. Every day after school, we practiced dancing hard. We had to remember the complex dance moves and cooperate well with each other. It was not easy. But with the encouragement of my teammates and the dance teacher, I kept practicing.
Finally, the day of the art festival arrived. When the music started and the lights focused on us, I was so nervous at first. But as I began to dance, I gradually forgot about my nervousness and lost myself in the performance. The audience’s applause and cheers gave us even more energy.
Through this activity, I’ve learned the importance of perseverance. No matter how difficult something seems at first, as long as I keep trying, I can overcome the difficulties. Also, I’ve experienced the power of teamwork. We worked together, supported each other, and achieved a great result. This art festival will always hold a special place in my heart.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:选择合适的形容词补全标题,叙述自己在活动中的具体经历,以及从这次活动中获得的收获,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引入主题,简要说明这次活动的背景;
第二步,详细叙述自己在活动中的具体经历;
第三步,总结感悟,叙述从这次活动中获得的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②give up放弃
③keep doing做某事
[高分句型]
①... and there were times when I felt like giving up because I just couldn’t get some of the moves right. (because引导的原因状语从句)
(2025·云南楚雄双柏·一模)
毕业临近,你校英语协会将针对九年级的学生举办主题为“Looking Back and Moving Forward”的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文,分享初中三年中一次对你有深刻影响并促进你继续向前的经历及感悟。
要求:
1. 根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
Looking Back and Moving Forward
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【答案】例文
Looking Back and Moving Forward
There is one thing in junior high school that has influenced me a lot.
Once, I took part in an English speech contest. When I first prepared for it, I was really worried. I was afraid I couldn’t do well. But I didn’t give up. I spent a lot of time practising my speech.
On the day of the contest, I was nervous when I stood on the stage. But as I started speaking, I became more and more confident. Although I didn’t win a big prize, I got a lot of encouragement.
This experience made me braver. It also helped me improve my spoken English. When I meet difficulties in the future, I will remember this experience and keep going.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是话题作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据写作要求,介绍对你有深刻影响并促进你继续向前的经历及感悟。避免语法错误,确保语句通顺连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“初中有一件事对我影响很大。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容,描述有影响的经历及感悟。
第三步:书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①prepare for为……做准备
②spend...doing sth.花费时间做某事
③more and more confident越来越自信
[高分句型]
①On the day of the contest, I was nervous when I stood on the stage. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Although I didn’t win a big prize, I got a lot of encouragement. (Although引导的让步状语从句)
(2025·云南大理·一模)
父母是世界上最爱我们的人。作为中学生,我们可以做一些力所能及的事情关爱我们的父母。请你以“How to Care for Our Parents”为题,根据以下提示和要求,联系生活实际,用英语写一篇短文,介绍关爱父母的方式。
提示:
(1) 和父母一起锻炼,帮助父母做家务;
(2) 告诉父母吃健康的食物,保持充足的睡眠;
(3) 分享我们的校园生活,与他们更亲密。
要求:
(1) 根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
(2) 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
(3) 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
(4) 请将短文写在答题卡上,写在试卷上一律无效。
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【答案】 How to Care for Our Parents
Parents are the people who love us most in the world. As their children, learning to care for our parents is what we should do.
First of all, we can exercise with our parents. It can not only keep us healthy but also strengthen our relationship. Also, we should help them with housework. For example, we can clean the rooms, wash the dishes and so on. This can make them feel relaxed after a long-day’s work.
Secondly, we need to tell our parents to eat healthy food. We can remind them to have more fruits and vegetables and less junk food. And we should also encourage them to get enough sleep. A good sleep can make them energetic.
Last but not least, we should share our school life with them. We can talk about our interesting experiences at school, our new friends and our achievements. By doing this, we can become closer to our parents.
In a word, we should show our love and care for our parents in our daily life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍关爱父母的方式,可适当发挥,注意语句通顺,意思连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题,表达父母对我们的爱;
第二步,根据提示内容具体介绍我们应该如何关爱自己的父母;
第三步,书写结语,进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①not only... but also...不但……而且……
②and so on等等,诸如此类
③remind sb. to do sth.提醒某人做某事
[高分句型]
①As their children, learning to care for our parents is what we should do. (what引导表语从句)
(2025·云南昭通·一模)
习近平主席在全国教育大会上强调,中学生要做德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。请以“How to Be A Good Teenager”为题, 结合实际生活, 从爱国、爱家、诚信、健康等方面阐述如何做一名新时代好少年。
要求:
1.语言流畅,书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于80;
2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,如使用姓名,请用 Mike、Gina等英文名字,校名统一用 Guangming Middle School;
3.将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
How to Be A Good Teenager
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【答案】例文
How to Be A Good Teenager
In modern society, what does it mean to be a good teenager? First of all, we must love our country and home. We should be honest and keep our promise. And we should also be friendly to the people around us. Secondly, it’s our duty to study hard, and we should try our best to achieve our dreams. Next, taking exercise can make us keep healthy. After that, we are supposed to show love to nature and protect the environment. Animals are our friends, so we should get on well with them. What’s more, we should get into the habit of taking an active part in all kinds of activities, such as tidying up the classroom and helping our parents with housework.
Come on! I believe we can make it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:注意语句通顺,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山。点明主题——在现代社会,做一个好青年意味着什么;
第二步,具体阐述。谈谈如何做一名新时代好青少年;
第三步,书写结语。表达决心。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly with sb.对某人友好
②be supposed to do sth.应该做某事
③get on well with sb.与某人友好相处
[高分句型]
①Next, taking exercise can make us keep healthy.(动名词短语作主语)
(2025·云南楚雄禄丰·一模)
假如你是李辉,下周你校将举行“健康伴我行”主题征文活动。请结合以下要点提示,用英语写一篇短文,给校英文报投稿。
要点:
●the purpose of this activity
●the methods to stay healthy:
◇ eat well
◇ take pleasure in our meals
◇ get enough sleep
● your opinions about this theme
要求:
1.词数不少于80(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
Health accompanies me
I’m Li Hui. Next week, our school will hold an essay competition called “Health accompanies me”. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Health accompanies me
I’m Li Hui. Next week, our school will hold an essay competition called “Health accompanies me.” It will encourage all of us to live a healthy life.
I believe the first step is to eat well. Eating healthy food helps us keep strong and healthy. Secondly, we should take pleasure in our meals. Planning our meals ahead of time is a great idea. Whenever possible, we should cook our own meals instead of ordering fast food. Thirdly, getting enough sleep is important. For students like us, a good sleep at night helps us study better and stay focused.
All in all, everyone should develop good living habits to keep healthy and happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态是“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,写作意图开头已给出,写作时可直接描写这项活动的目的;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,主要围绕“保持健康的方法”展开,适当补充,丰富细节;
第三步,书写结语,进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③take pleasure in从……中得到乐趣
④ahead of领先
⑤instead of代替,而不是
⑥All in all总之
[高分句型]
I believe the first step is to eat well. (宾语从句)
(2025·云南昆明·一模)
你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“Sunshine in My Life”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,叙述一次如阳光般温暖你心的经历及感悟 (如朋友的一次帮助,老师的一个微笑等),或者分享如何保持生活积极阳光的方法。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名、否则以零分计;
4.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
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【答案】例文
Sunshine in My Life Last winter, I failed an important math exam. I felt so upset that I hid in the school garden, tears freezing on my face. Suddenly, my best friend Lily appeared. Without a word, she handed me a hot chocolate and sat beside me. “Let’s study together after school,” she smiled. For the next two weeks, she patiently explained every problem I didn’t understand. When I passed the next exam, her eyes sparkled with joy.
That experience taught me that kindness is like sunshine—it warms hearts quietly. Now, I try to be someone’s sunshine too.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是话题作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:要求以“Sunshine in My Life”为题,根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步:引入主题,数学考试失败;
第二步:具体阐述写作内容——朋友如何帮助;
第三步:书写结语,点明“阳光”的象征意义。
[亮点词汇]
①felt upset感到不安
②sparkled with joy闪烁着喜悦
③try to do sth.试着做某事
[高分句型]
①When I passed the next exam, her eyes sparkled with joy. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②That experience taught me that kindness is like sunshine—it warms hearts quietly. (宾语从句)
(2025·云南西双版纳·一模)
单丝不成线,独木不成林。团队合作在我们的学习和生活中都扮演着重要的角色。请以“The Importance of Teamwork”为题,用英语写一篇短文。叙述一次有关团队合作的经历及感受,或者谈谈团队合作的好处。
要求:
1. 根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80个;
2. 语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名,校名,否则以零分计;
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试卷上无效。
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【答案】例文
The Importance of Teamwork
I didn’t know the importance of teamwork well until last year.
At that time, I was made to be the leader of our group. We needed to finish a project together. There was so much work to do every day but I didn’t know how to ask my group members to work together. Some said they had no time, others said they couldn’t do well. I felt very tired and wanted to give it up. Luckily, my class teacher noticed that and taught me how to share the work with others. All the members understood that teamwork was very important. They did their duties and we finally finished the project successfully.
One wood doesn’t make a forest. Teamwork is one of the most important ways of solving problems in our daily life. Let’s learn to work with others!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题;
第二步,介绍自己的一次有关团队合作的经历;
第三步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①the importance of ……的重要性
②work together一起工作
③give up放弃
④One wood doesn’t make a forest.独木不成林
[高分句型]
①There was so much work to do every day but I didn’t know how to ask my group members to work together.(but表示转折)
②Some said they had no time, others said they couldn’t do well.(宾语从句)
③ All the members understood that teamwork was very important.(宾语从句)
④Teamwork is one of the most important ways of solving problems in our daily life.(one of+形容词最高级+名词复数)
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