读后续写之积极情感 学案-2025届高三下学期英语二轮复习专项

读后续写之积极情感描写练习 一、赏析下面句子。 1. Lu Fei is happy. He smiled from ear to ear , showing his white teeth. 2. A spark of surprise flashed across his face. He was stunned there, staring at me with wide eyes. 3. She hugged them to her chest, and at last she was able to look up with tearful eyes and a smile. 4. I began to cry out from relief, throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly. 5. With tears of gratitude rolling down his cheeks, Peter hugged Grace tightly, saying “You’ve saved me today. I couldn’t thank you enough.” 6. Nina looked at me with amazement. “I don’t believe you.” she uttered. 7. When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin. 8. The sun dropped through and laid on his head and shoulders. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 二、句式升级训练。 1. Body language—Actions 1) I felt a rush of pride, ran over to my sister, and put my arms round her. →_________________________________________________________(非谓语动词) 2) As she opened the box, _______________________________.(她的手激动得发抖) → As she opened the box, _________________________________. (独立主格结构) 3) I felt delighted and thrilled, and skipped into the supermarket along with my smiling mother. →___________________________________________________________(形容词作状语) 4) She was so embarrassed that she stood there clumsily, _______________________. (无法说出话来) →___________________________________________________________(so that倒装句) 2. Facial expression 1) Grateful tears were hanging in his eyes and he kept expressing his gratitude, “Thanks a million.” →________________________________________________________________________(with的复合结构) 2) When she won the first prize, _________________________________.(她的双眸闪烁着激动的光芒) → She won the first prize, _________________________________. (独立主格结构) 3) She stood there clumsily, and she felt the blood rushing to her face. →______________________________________________________________(非谓语) →_________________________________________________________(with的复合结构) 3. Surroundings The first light of a summer morning was in the sky and the birds were starting to sing. ①___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.(一阵风吹过窗户，拨开了低垂的窗帘) ② ____________________________________________________________ _________________. (空气中满是玫瑰的芳香) 三、微情境写作。 1. Mary’s son won first prize in the national competition. (分别用动作描写、神态描写、语言描写表达Mary的骄傲和满意) ①________________________________________________________________________(骄傲极了，跑过去用双臂搂着儿子) ②________________________________________________________________________ (满腔自豪，双眸激动得发光) ③________________________________________________________________________ (抱住儿子，用颤抖的声音说道：“你太棒了！”) 2. 根据所给情节，尝试续写一个等待和老友重逢及终于等到老友的情节。侧重人物高兴和激动的情感细节描写。(情绪和动作、神态、语言描写搭配体现期待和激动，可适当增添一句环境描写） She stood by the window, joyfully and patiently watching. ___________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ 读后续写消极情感描写练习 一、划出文中表达伤心的词块并归类。 Nothing but dead silence hung over the area. Every solider was down in the dumps. Li Yannian sat on the ground and great sorrow clouded his eyes—How to defeat an enemy fifteen times the size of his own in fire power and number? Looking up, he saw the five-star red flag, which seemed to be encouraging him, “ holding 346.6 Highland (守住346.6高地) is your calling.” Platoon leader Zhang (张排长) came and volunteered that he would get in disguised (伪装) as an enemy soldier to destroy their explosive magazine (弹药库) and he succeeded. Yet, he would never come back. How hard broken they were to lose their beloved comrade. Li tried in to keep back his tears. Zhao sobbed, hiding his face in his hands. Tears started welling up in Han’s eyes and rolling down his cheeks. Luo was seized by a burst of grief and screamed take “Take the revenge for Platoon Leader Zhang”. Tell Show 二、思考下列句子中的情感的表达方式。(tell or show) 1. The sound of explosion came from afar. Li Yannian knew Zhang’s plan succeeded. But, this beloved comrade would never come back. Seized by a burst of grief, he tried to fight back his tears. 2. As the traitor (叛徒) looked out his back window into the darkness，he saw a shadow flash by. He double-checked the door, which was well locked. Obviously he was seized by a strong feeling of terror, with his face turning pale and his palms sweating. 3. The U.S. refused the proposal of defining the 38th parallel (38线) as the dividing boundary. Furious and irritated, Deng grasped the paper in both hands, filled with fire and fury. “I have never come across such mean and rude requirements,” stormed Nan, biting his teeth and clenching his fists. 4. “You betrayed your Belief, your Party and your People!” the general thundered. The traitor was so ashamed that he dared not look straight into the general’s eyes. He recalled how much expectation his leader had of him but he ruined everything. Having no defence, he repeatedly grumbled, “sorry.” 三、按要求完成句子。 他一想到在树林里迷路就吓坏了。 (1) 先尝试用概括描述，将意思表达清楚。 When he thought he was lost in the woods, _______________________________. (形容词) (2) 在概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及句意的合理。 ①At the thought of being lost in the woods, _____________________________________. (嗓子发紧，膝盖发软) (sb. felt so+adj.+that...) ②At the thought of being lost in the woods, _____________________________________. (被深深的恐惧感所控制，手心出汗) (with的复合结构) ③Thinking he was lost in the woods, __________________________________________. (吓呆了，不能动弹) (形容词做状语) 四、续写微作文。 请根据所给情节，尝试续写Jenny摔在地上后的情感。利用动作、神态和语言描写等表现人物的尴尬、羞愧、失望、绝望等。（词数80左右) Jenny walked nervously, and bent down to start a somersault(后空翻). When she rolled, she fell heavily on the blanket. Kids laughed in surprise at the noise. _____________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 五、用叙述和描写技巧润色段落，可适当增添细节。 观看影视片段后填写恰当的形容词: Learning that few soldiers survived in the recent battle, Xiao Andong felt _________ and he decided to escape. His comrades felt _______ at his coward (怯懦的) behavior. After being caught, he felt _____________. 改写：_____________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$1) Feeling a rush of pride, I ran over to my sister and put my arms round her. 2) As she opened the box, her hands were trembling with excitement. → She opened the box, her hands trembling with excitement. 3) Delighted and thrilled, I skipped into the supermarket along with my smiling mother. 4) She was so embarrassed that she stood there clumsily, unable to utter a word./ completely speechless. /nothing voiced. →So embarrassed was she that she stood there clumsily, unable to utter a word./ completely speechless. /nothing voiced. → Standing there clumsily, she was too embarrassed to utter a word. 1) With grateful tears were hanging in his eyes and he kept expressing his gratitude, “Thanks a million.” 2) When she won the first prize, her eyes were twinkling/sparkling/shining with excitement. → She won the first prize, her eyes twinkling/sparkling/shining with excitement. 3) She stood there clumsily, feeling the blood rushing to her face. Standing there clumsily, she felt the blood rushing to her face. She stood there clumsily, with the blood rushing to her face. The first light of a summer morning was in the sky and the birds were starting to sing. A gust of wind blew through the window and parted the drooping/hanging curtains. The fragrance/scent of roses filled the air. The air was filled with the fragrance/scent of roses. 1. Feeling a rush of pride, she ran over to her son and put her arms around him. 2. She swelled with pride, her eyes shining/twinkling/sparkling with excitement. 3. She gathered her son into her arms and uttered in a shivering/trembling voice, “You are so great!” $$