专题09 书面表达(单元话题满分范文,期末必背)(上海专用)-【好题汇编】备战2024-2025学年八年级英语下学期期末真题分类汇编
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学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
专题09 书面表达
(单元话题满分范文,期末必背)
1.(23-24八年级下·上海松江·期末) Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
针对学生当中存在浪费电的现象,学校决定举行抵制浪费电的活动。假设你是学校学生会成员之一,请你在学校英文报上写一封倡议书。
1. 活动的理由及目的;
2. 节约用电的具体做法;
3. 呼吁从我做起,节约用电。
以下词汇仅供参考:
call on join hands take action
注意:
短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
照抄阅读语篇不得分;
短文开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear schoolmates,
Have you noticed that electricity waste happens every minute in our school? I’d like to call on everyone to______________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Students’ Union
June 16th
2.(23-24八年级下·上海静安·期末)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
今年暑假你校将组织一次游学夏令营(study tour summer camp),现有以下四种设想:
1. 博物馆之旅(a trip to the museum)
2. 科技之旅(a science and technology journey)
3. 地理之旅(a geography journey)
4. 艺术之旅(an art journey)
学校正通过校报了解学生的意向。假设你是李华,请给校报张老师写封邮件,表明你最喜欢的一种设想,说明理由,并推荐一个目的地。
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3.(23-24八年级下·上海嘉定·期末)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格)
假如你是李华,请你对英国朋友Jack 的邮件进行回复。词数不少于60个单词,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
To: Li Hua@mail. com
Subject: See you soon!
Hi, Li Hua!
Next month, I’ll be with you in Shanghai. I can’t wait! It’s going to be so cool! We can do lots of exciting things together! I need to pack for my trip. What should I bring with me? Any interesting places worth visiting?
I’d like to get you a gift from where I live. What would you like me to get you? I’m so excited about the trip! See you soon.
Jack
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4.(23-24八年级下·上海杨浦·期末)In 50—100 words, write an article according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇50—100字的短文,标点符号不占格。)
你所在学校的校报正在开展征文活动,主题为“我心中的旅游胜地”。请写一篇短文,向同学们推荐一个你喜欢的旅游地 (travel destination)。文中应包括以下内容:
1. 旅游地的名称和位置;
2. 旅游地的特点和吸引人的地方;
3. 你为什么喜欢这个地方;
4. 给出一些旅行建议。
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5.(23-24八年级下·上海浦东新·期末)Write at least 60 words about the topic “China is calling”. (以“中国在召唤”为题,写一篇不少于60字的短文,标点符号不占格。)
中国这些年来发生了很多的变化,科技发展突飞猛进,人民的幸福指数也上升了。我们的国家发生了哪些改变呢?你的生活又发生了哪些改变呢?请结合自己的亲身经历写出你自己的感想吧。
1. What do you think of your motherland?
2. What can tourists/you see in China?
3. What can tourists/you do in China?
(注意:1.短文中不得出现考试姓名/校名等个人信息,否则不与评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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6.(23-24八年级下·上海浦东新·期末)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
Cece Bell虽然患有听力障碍,但她依然努力将自己的故事改编成图画故事,以此表达自己心中所想,并鼓励更多的人。在你的生活中,你也一定会遇到一些困难,请你结合自己的经历,以“This time I won”为题,谈一谈你是如何战胜困难以及你的感悟。
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7.(23-24八年级下·上海浦东新·期末)Write at least 60 words on the topic “I learned to be __________ through a school activity”
【以“通过一次学校活动我变得__________”为题,写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格】提示:初中三年来你一定参加了不少学校活动,也从中学到了不少东西,请就其中一次活动的经历和收获写一篇短文。
注意:1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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8.(23-24八年级下·上海浦东新·期末)Camping has become a popular choice for people to relax on weekends. However, some people damage the environment while enjoying the outdoors. Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the suggested questions below.
Suggested questions:
*What do people do to damage the environment while camping?
*What do you think of their behavior?
*What advice do you have for them?
注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。
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二、预测
9.世界上最美的相遇,是遇见一个更优秀的自己。读书和旅行都能让我们开拓视野,增长见识,变得更加优秀。你更喜欢哪种方式呢?请以“ _______ helps me meet a better self”为题,根据下面的提示并结合自身的经历,用英语写一篇短文,分享自己的进步、经历和未来计划。
1. What helps you meet a better self?
2. What is your most unforgettable book or trip?
3. What do you learn from the book or the trip?
4. What will you do in the future?
注意事项:
1.补全题目,如“reading”或“travelling”;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3.词数:100词左右;
4.文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
____________ helps me meet a better self
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10.假设你是李华,你所在的英语俱乐部开展了主题为“My favourite cartoon hero”的演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,介绍你最喜欢的卡通人物。
写作要点:
1.介绍你最喜欢的卡通人物(名字、外貌特征、……)。
2.谈谈你喜欢它的原因 (至少两点)。
3.从中你获得的启示。
写作要求:
1.内容必须包含写作要点的所有信息。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.文中不得透露个人信息。
4.词数80词左右(开头语已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇: round(adj. 圆圆的) honest(adj. 正直的) inspire(v. 鼓舞)
My favourite cartoon hero
Good morning, everyone! Today, I’d like to share my favourite cartoon hero with you.
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Thanks for listening!
11.Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Fire Rules in our Life” (以“我们生活中的消防守则”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格)
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分)
Suggested questions:
1. Why is the fire dangerous?
2. Is it important to remember and obey fire rules?
3. What should we do and shouldn’t do in the fire? (Give at least two examples)
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12.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Water around us”.
Suggested questions:
◆ How much do you know about water?
◆ What’s the use of water?
◆ What are the threats to the water?
◆ What should we do to deal with the water pollution?
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学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
专题09 书面表达
(单元话题满分范文,期末必背)
1.(23-24八年级下·上海松江·期末) Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
针对学生当中存在浪费电的现象,学校决定举行抵制浪费电的活动。假设你是学校学生会成员之一,请你在学校英文报上写一封倡议书。
1. 活动的理由及目的;
2. 节约用电的具体做法;
3. 呼吁从我做起,节约用电。
以下词汇仅供参考:
call on join hands take action
注意:
短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
照抄阅读语篇不得分;
短文开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear schoolmates,
Have you noticed that electricity waste happens every minute in our school? I’d like to call on everyone to______________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Students’ Union
June 16th
【答案】例文
Dear schoolmates,
Have you noticed that electricity waste happens every minute in our school? I’d like to call on everyone to save electricity because most of our electricity sources are converted from natural resources and they are limited because they are not renewable. Therefore, we must cherish them. Here are my suggestions on how to save electricity.
First, please remember to turn off the lights when you don’t need them. Second, try to use as little electronics as possible. Third, use new products that consume less electricity. Last, promote the principle of using less electricity to others.
I hope you can do this, but not for you, but for everyone. And if everyone can take action from now on, and everyone’s quality of life will become better.
Students’ Union
June 16th
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:本文的主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已经给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当增加细节补充内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,写出抵制浪费电的活动理由和目的;
第二步,说明节约用电的具体做法;
第三步,呼吁大家节约用电。
[亮点词汇]
① call on 号召
② natural resources 自然资源
③ therefore 所以
④ cherish 珍视
⑤ as...as possible 尽可能
[高分句型]
① I’d like to call on everyone to save electricity because most of our electricity sources are converted from natural resources and they are limited because they are not renewable. (原因状语从句)
② First, please remember to turn off the lights when you don’t need them. (时间状语从句)
③ And if everyone can take action from now on, and everyone’s quality of life will become better. (条件状语从句)
2.(23-24八年级下·上海静安·期末)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
今年暑假你校将组织一次游学夏令营(study tour summer camp),现有以下四种设想:
1. 博物馆之旅(a trip to the museum)
2. 科技之旅(a science and technology journey)
3. 地理之旅(a geography journey)
4. 艺术之旅(an art journey)
学校正通过校报了解学生的意向。假设你是李华,请给校报张老师写封邮件,表明你最喜欢的一种设想,说明理由,并推荐一个目的地。
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【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Zhang,
For the study tour summer camp held by our school, I’d like to recommend a trip to the museum. Generally speaking, museums stand for art, culture and history. While visiting the museums, we can not only enjoy the splendid rich Chinese art and culture, but also learn from history. When talking about museums, the Palace Museum, which is famous for the Forbidden City, is the best choice for us. It is the best place for us to see exhibitions from the ancient.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:本文的主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据题目分析写作要点完成本篇书面表达,注意不要遗漏要点,并可适当发挥,要使用正确的时态和词汇,使语意通顺,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,写明你最喜欢的一种设想;
第二步,写出你推荐这个设想的理由;
第三步,推荐一个目的地。
[亮点词汇]
① recommend 推荐
② generally speaking 通常来说
③ splendid 非常好的
④ exhibition 展览
[高分句型]
① While visiting the museums, we can not only enjoy the splendid rich Chinese art and culture, but also learn from history. (not only...but also...引导的并列句)
② When talking about museums, the Palace Museum, which is famous for the Forbidden City, is the best choice for us. (非限制性定语从句)
3.(23-24八年级下·上海嘉定·期末)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格)
假如你是李华,请你对英国朋友Jack 的邮件进行回复。词数不少于60个单词,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
To: Li Hua@mail. com
Subject: See you soon!
Hi, Li Hua!
Next month, I’ll be with you in Shanghai. I can’t wait! It’s going to be so cool! We can do lots of exciting things together! I need to pack for my trip. What should I bring with me? Any interesting places worth visiting?
I’d like to get you a gift from where I live. What would you like me to get you? I’m so excited about the trip! See you soon.
Jack
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【答案】例文
Hi Jack,
I am so glad to receive your email. I can’t wait to see you, too.
It will be very hot in Shanghai next week, so you should bring some T-shirts and shorts as well as some sunscreen. There are a lot of interesting places, and I have made a wonderful travel plan for you. First, we will play in Changfeng Park. We will take many photos with dolphins and seals. Then, we will visit Yu Garden. It is a traditional place. We will buy some small souvenirs. After that, we will travel to Oriental Pearl Tower. It is the highest building in Asia. Finally, we will take a walk at the magnificent Huang Pu River. I believe you will have a good time in Shanghai. I like English local products very much. If it is convenient for you, please bring me some.
I am looking forward to meeting you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,写一封邮件;
②时态:时态以“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:考生注意根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先表示自己很开心收到对方的邮件;
第二步,具体阐述他需要带的东西以及介绍上海的一些有趣的地方;
第三步,最后介绍自己想要对方带什么,以及表达期待对方的到来。
[亮点词汇]
①as well as 也
②traditional 传统的
③souvenirs 纪念品
④take a walk 散步
⑤magnificent 壮丽的
⑥convenient 方便的
[高分句型]
①I believe you will have a good time in Shanghai.(省略that宾语从句)
②If it is convenient for you, please bring me some.(if引导的条件状语从句)
4.(23-24八年级下·上海杨浦·期末)In 50—100 words, write an article according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇50—100字的短文,标点符号不占格。)
你所在学校的校报正在开展征文活动,主题为“我心中的旅游胜地”。请写一篇短文,向同学们推荐一个你喜欢的旅游地 (travel destination)。文中应包括以下内容:
1. 旅游地的名称和位置;
2. 旅游地的特点和吸引人的地方;
3. 你为什么喜欢这个地方;
4. 给出一些旅行建议。
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【答案】例文
I would suggest France as a travel destination. France is located in Western Europe and is famous for its rich culture and history. The Eiffel Tower and the historic castles in the Loire Valley are must-see attractions. I love France because of its delicious food, friendly people, and beautiful scenery. When you visit France, make sure to learn some basic French. Also, try to visit both the cities and the countryside to get a full experience.
I hope you all consider visiting France during your next holiday. I’m sure you will have a wonderful time!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括四个方面的内容要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍旅游地的名称和位置;
第二步,介绍旅游地的特点和吸引人的地方;
第三步,具体阐述自己为什么喜欢这个地方;
第四步,最后给出一些旅行建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be located in位于
②because of因为
③make sure确保
④try to do sth努力做某事
[高分句型]
I hope you all consider visiting France during your next holiday.(宾语从句)
5.(23-24八年级下·上海浦东新·期末)Write at least 60 words about the topic “China is calling”. (以“中国在召唤”为题,写一篇不少于60字的短文,标点符号不占格。)
中国这些年来发生了很多的变化,科技发展突飞猛进,人民的幸福指数也上升了。我们的国家发生了哪些改变呢?你的生活又发生了哪些改变呢?请结合自己的亲身经历写出你自己的感想吧。
1. What do you think of your motherland?
2. What can tourists/you see in China?
3. What can tourists/you do in China?
(注意:1.短文中不得出现考试姓名/校名等个人信息,否则不与评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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【答案】例文
China is calling
China, which is also known as “the Divine Land”, is located in Asia continent of the earth. It has become one of the largest modern and international contries in the world. With the development of the economy, you can see that transportation in China is becoming increasingly convenient, and high-speed trains can be seen everywhere. All Chinese welcome you to visit China.
If you enjoy shopping, you should visit Hong Kong. It is called “Shopping Paradise” in China. You won’t feel bored if you walk in this city and many goods will attract. If you enjoy eating delicious food, don’t forget to visit Xi’an and Chongqing where a lot of local snacks will wait for you there.
I will always be in love with my motherland—China!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出“中国在呼唤”的话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“你对祖国的看法、中国的变化、在中国旅游能做什么”等方面进行介绍;
第三步,书写结语,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①modern现代的
②with the development of随着……的发展
③enjoy doing享受做某事
[高分句型]
①China, which is also known as “the Divine Land”, is located in Asia continent of the earth.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②If you enjoy shopping, you should visit Hong Kong.(if引导的条件状语从句)
6.(23-24八年级下·上海浦东新·期末)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
Cece Bell虽然患有听力障碍,但她依然努力将自己的故事改编成图画故事,以此表达自己心中所想,并鼓励更多的人。在你的生活中,你也一定会遇到一些困难,请你结合自己的经历,以“This time I won”为题,谈一谈你是如何战胜困难以及你的感悟。
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【答案】例文
This time I won
In our daily life, we have all kinds of difficulties that prevent us from moving forward. But we can’t give up.
When I was in primary school, I struggled with math. I often failed my exams and felt very discouraged. However, I decided not to give up. I started to spend extra time practicing math problems every day. I also asked my teacher and classmates for help whenever I didn’t understand something. Gradually, I began to improve. One day, I finally scored an A on my math test. This time I won.
From this experience, I have learned that perseverance and hard work can help us overcome any difficulty.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为话题作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给话题和题干提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,整体说明每个人都会遇到困难;
第二步,具体描述自己的个人经历;
第三步,最后表达自己学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
① all kinds of各种各样的
② give up放弃
③ decide to do决定做
[高分句型]
①In our daily life, we have all kinds of difficulties that prevent us from moving forward.(定语从句)
②When I was in primary school, I struggled with math(时间状语从句)
③From this experience, I have learned that perseverance and hard work can help us overcome any difficulty.(宾语从句)
7.(23-24八年级下·上海浦东新·期末)Write at least 60 words on the topic “I learned to be __________ through a school activity”
【以“通过一次学校活动我变得__________”为题,写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格】提示:初中三年来你一定参加了不少学校活动,也从中学到了不少东西,请就其中一次活动的经历和收获写一篇短文。
注意:1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文
I learned to be patient through a school activity
I used to be impatient. Every time I met math problems that is difficult for me, I would give them up.
Last year, my school held a puzzle activity. The student that first finished it would award a big prize. At first, I refused to attend it, but my friend said to me that he would finish it faster than me. I must turn out that I was the best. During the match, when I saw the messy pieces, I wanted to give up. However, I must turn out that I am the best. In the end, there was only me who didn’t make it. Everyone cheer me up. I thought to myself, never give up! Be patient! At last, I made it.
Through the activity, I know patience can make everything possible.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:根据要表达的内容准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍经历这次活动之前的我;
第二步,具体介绍这次学校活动;
第三步,讲述这次活动我的感悟和收获。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do过去常常做某事
②give up放弃
③refuse to do拒绝做某事
[高分句型]
①The student that first finished it would award a big prize.(that引导定语从句)
②At first, I refused to attend it, but my friend said to me that he would finish it faster than me.(that引导宾语从句)
8.(23-24八年级下·上海浦东新·期末)Camping has become a popular choice for people to relax on weekends. However, some people damage the environment while enjoying the outdoors. Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the suggested questions below.
Suggested questions:
*What do people do to damage the environment while camping?
*What do you think of their behavior?
*What advice do you have for them?
注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。
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【答案】例文:
Nowadays, more and more people choose to go camping to relax themselves on weekends. It’s a good way to enjoy the outdoors. However, some campers damage the environment while camping. They carelessly set the campfire, which causes damage to the surrounding animals and plants. When they leave the campsite, some even leave behind a large amount of garbage.
I strongly disapprove of their behavior. I think they should set the campfire carefully to make sure the safety of the environment. Besides, it’s necessary for them to take away the garbage when they leave the campsite. Nature is our home, and it’s our responsibility to protect it well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇写对破坏环境的露营活动看法的话题作文;
②时态:时态为“ 一般现在时态”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意按要求写出露营活动危害、对此的看法和建议,注意写全要点同时适当添加细节,使文章完整通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步,写人们对露营活动的喜爱以及一些破坏环境的不良行为;
第二步,写对这些行为的看法以及如何改善的建议;
[亮点词汇]
①leave behind遗弃
②disapprove of不赞同
③responsibility责任
[高分句型]
①When they leave the campsite, some even leave behind a large amount of garbage.(状语从句)
② Nature is our home, and it’s our responsibility to protect it well. (and引导两个句子)
二、预测
9.世界上最美的相遇,是遇见一个更优秀的自己。读书和旅行都能让我们开拓视野,增长见识,变得更加优秀。你更喜欢哪种方式呢?请以“ _______ helps me meet a better self”为题,根据下面的提示并结合自身的经历,用英语写一篇短文,分享自己的进步、经历和未来计划。
1. What helps you meet a better self?
2. What is your most unforgettable book or trip?
3. What do you learn from the book or the trip?
4. What will you do in the future?
注意事项:
1.补全题目,如“reading”或“travelling”;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3.词数:100词左右;
4.文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
____________ helps me meet a better self
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【答案】例文一:
Traveling helps me meet a better self
Traveling is like a mirror that helps me discover new parts of myself. Among all my trips, the most unforgettable one was my visit to Yunnan with my family last summer.
During the trip, we hiked in the mountains near Lijiang. At first, the path made me nervous, and I almost gave up halfway. But my parents encouraged me to keep going. Step by step, I finally reached the top. The view of the green valleys and snow-capped mountains was amazing! I learned that challenges are easier to overcome with patience and courage. I also met local children there. They shared stories about their lives. Their kindness and happiness touched my heart deeply.
From this trip, I learned to be more confident and open-minded. In the future, I want to travel to more places, especially those with different cultures. I’ll try to learn and respect local customs wherever I go. Traveling isn’t just about seeing new sights—it’s about becoming a better self.
例文二:
Reading helps me meet a better self
Reading is a journey that allows me to explore both the world and my inner self. The most unforgettable book I’ve read is “Treasure Island” by Robert Louis Stevenson. It tells the exciting story of a brave boy who sailed the sea to find hidden treasure.
The book taught me valuable lessons. Jim faced pirates, storms, and betrayal, but he never lost hope. His courage and wisdom inspired me to believe that even young people can overcome challenges. One scene I remember was when Jim stood up to Long John Silver, the cunning pirate. It showed me that bravery is not about being fearless, but about doing what is right despite fear. I also learned the importance of teamwork from the crew’s struggles.
From “Treasure Island”, I realized that books can shape our character. In the future, I will read more adventurous stories to strengthen my courage and creativity. I’ll try to act bravely in difficult situations, just like Jim. Reading isn’t just about words on a page—it’s about discovering a stronger, wiser self.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”、“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:材料所要求内容不得遗漏,写作过程注意时态切换运用。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,点明文章主旨;
第二步,详细介绍难忘的旅行的经历;
第三步,分享自己旅行的收获和未来的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①give up放弃
②encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
③step by step一步一步地
[高分句型]
①Traveling is like a mirror that helps me discover new parts of myself. (定语从句)
②I learned that challenges are easier to overcome with patience and courage. (宾语从句)
10.假设你是李华,你所在的英语俱乐部开展了主题为“My favourite cartoon hero”的演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,介绍你最喜欢的卡通人物。
写作要点:
1.介绍你最喜欢的卡通人物(名字、外貌特征、……)。
2.谈谈你喜欢它的原因 (至少两点)。
3.从中你获得的启示。
写作要求:
1.内容必须包含写作要点的所有信息。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.文中不得透露个人信息。
4.词数80词左右(开头语已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇: round(adj. 圆圆的) honest(adj. 正直的) inspire(v. 鼓舞)
My favourite cartoon hero
Good morning, everyone! Today, I’d like to share my favourite cartoon hero with you.
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Thanks for listening!
【答案】例文:
My favourite cartoon hero Good morning, everyone! Today, I’d like to share my favourite cartoon hero with you. My favourite cartoon hero is Doraemon. He is a cute robot cat with a round head and a chubby body. He has no ears and always wears a small red bell around his neck.
I like Doraemon for several reasons. First of all, he is very kind-hearted. Whenever Nobita, his friend, gets into trouble, Doraemon is always there to help with his amazing gadgets. Secondly, he is honest. He never lies and always tries to do the right thing.
From Doraemon, I’ve learned that friendship is precious and we should always be ready to help others. Also, no matter how difficult the problem is, we should face it bravely with wisdom.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你最喜欢的卡通人物;
第二步,谈谈你喜欢它的原因;
第三步,谈谈从中你获得的启示。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②get into trouble陷入麻烦
③try to do sth.尽力做某事
④be ready to do准备好做某事
[高分句型]
①Also, no matter how difficult the problem is, we should face it bravely with wisdom.(让步状语从句)
11.Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Fire Rules in our Life” (以“我们生活中的消防守则”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格)
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分)
Suggested questions:
1. Why is the fire dangerous?
2. Is it important to remember and obey fire rules?
3. What should we do and shouldn’t do in the fire? (Give at least two examples)
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【答案】例文:
Fire Rules in our Life
Fire is dangerous because it can burn forests and destroy many tall buildings. If some people can’t run away from fire, it can kill them. So it is important for us to remember and obey fire rules.
There are some fire rules for you to follow when there is a fire. First of all, judge if you can put out the fire, if not, find as much water as you can, and wet your clothes or a towel. Then, use the wet clothes to cover your mouth and nose, and bend your body to escape. Meanwhile, keep calm and find the safety exit as soon as possible. If you can’t find an exit, stay in place and wait for rescue.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:材料所给问题需完整表达,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,讲述火灾的危险性,并引出遵守消防守则的重要性;
第二步,详细阐述火灾中我们的做法。
[亮点词汇]
①run away 逃走;逃避
②first of all首先
③put out扑灭
④as soon as possible尽快
[高分句型]
①Fire is dangerous because it can burn forests and destroy many tall buildings.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②There are some fire rules for you to follow when there is a fire.(when引导的时间状语从句)
12.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Water around us”.
Suggested questions:
◆ How much do you know about water?
◆ What’s the use of water?
◆ What are the threats to the water?
◆ What should we do to deal with the water pollution?
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【答案】例文
Water around us
As we all know, water is very important in our daily life. For example, we drink water every day. And in our daily life, we use water to wash vegetables and cook. We cannot live without water.
However, there is less and less clean water on the Earth. Many factories directly put polluted water into the river and people may throw litter into the water, which makes the water be polluted seriously. All in all, water is very important to us. We should try our best to protect water..
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息,并适当添加内容,使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍水的重要性以及用途;
第二步,介绍现在水被污染的现状;
第三步,呼吁人们保护水源。
[亮点词汇]
①less and less越来越少
②all in all总而言之
③try one’s best to do竭尽全力做某事
[高分句型]
Many factories directly put polluted water into the river and people may throw litter into the water, which makes the water be polluted seriously.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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