重难点20 书面表达（提分秘籍+名校模拟）-备考2025年中考英语：三轮冲刺重难点突破特训

备考2025中考英语：三轮冲刺重难点突破特训 重难点20 书面表达（省卷、广州卷、深圳卷）（提分秘籍+名校模拟） 【命题规律】 广东省卷和广州卷的书面表达话题涵盖生活、学习、科技、环保、文化等多个领域，要求学生对不同话题有一定的了解和思考，具备广泛的知识面和思维能力。题目可能会继续关注热点话题，如科技发展对生活的影响、传统文化的传承与保护、社会热点问题等，引导学生关注社会、关注生活，培养学生的思维能力和语言表达能力。 深圳卷的书面表达往往引导考生深入挖掘自己的亲身经历，感悟成长的真谛。预计会继续围绕“自我成长”这一主题开展，同时可能会结合一些时代热点，让学生在自身经历的基础上，对社会现象有更深入的思考和认识。 【解答技巧】 写作前 （1）认真审题：明确题目要求，包括文体、主题、人称、时态、要点以及字数限制等。例如，若是书信体，要注意格式；若是记叙文，通常以一般过去时为主。 （2）列出提纲：根据题目要点，用简单的单词、短语或句子列出写作提纲，确定文章的结构和大致内容，避免遗漏要点。 写作中 （1）内容丰富准确：涵盖所有要点，并适当拓展细节，使内容充实。运用丰富的词汇和多样的句式，避免重复单一的表达。如用“in addition”“moreover”等替换“and”，用定语从句、状语从句等复杂句式提升文章档次。 （2）逻辑清晰连贯：使用恰当的连接词或过渡句，使文章逻辑连贯、层次分明。如“firstly...secondly...finally”“however”“therefore”等。 （3）注意书写规范：保持卷面整洁，字迹工整，尽量减少涂改。字母大小写、标点符号使用要准确。 写作后 （1）仔细检查：检查语法错误，如主谓一致、时态语态、名词单复数、形容词副词的用法等；检查单词拼写和标点符号；确保内容完整，格式正确，字数符合要求。 （2）适度润色：在保证正确的基础上，对一些平淡的表达进行优化，可添加一些高级词汇或句式，但要确保使用准确。 【提分秘籍】 （1）精准审题：明确题目要求，包括文体、主题、人称、时态、要点及字数限制等。如省卷、广州卷可能会有书信、日记等文体，深圳卷也常考查根据提示进行写作，都需明确这些要素。 （2）积累素材：通过阅读经典范文学习表达方式和结构，建立词汇本积累新单词和短语，关注时事热点为写作提供背景资料和论据。 （3）丰富语言：确保语法准确，避免主谓不一致、时态错误等。运用多种句式，如简单句、复合句和复杂句结合，使用连接词增强逻辑关系。丰富词汇，避免重复，运用同义词、短语替代，合理使用词汇搭配。 名校模拟（省卷、广州卷、深圳卷） 广东省卷书面表达 （1） （2025·广东珠海·一模） 近期，文创雪糕风靡市场，成为旅游业新晋“网红”。拿着文创雪糕在景区拍照打卡成为旅游仪式的独特表达。请你根据以下思维导图的内容提示用英文写一篇短文谈谈你对文创雪糕的了解及看法。 注意： （1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 （2）不能照抄原文：不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生真实姓名。 （3）语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Nowadays, ice cream bars in the shape of cultural relics are very popular across China. ___________ （2） （2025·广东东莞·二模） 十年守护，全民国家安全教育日（National Security Education Day）步履不停。维护国家安全，同样需要青少年的力量。假设你是李华，你校英文校刊正在开展“国家安全在身边”主题征文活动。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文，向全校同学发出“增强国家安全意识，争做责任少年”的倡议。 注意： （1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 （2）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名。 （3）语句连贯，词数80左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。 Dear friends, Have you ever thought about what keeps us safe and happy every day? It’s national security. Thank you! Yours, Li Hua （3） （2025·广东江门·一模） 劳动教育是青少年全面发展的必要组成部分。劳动实践的形式丰富多样，比如种植庄稼、分担家务或参与志愿服务等。我校正在组织劳动之星（the Star of Labor）的评比活动，假如你是李明，请你给Jackson老师用英文写一封自荐信，积极参加评比。包括以下内容： （1）在家以及在校常做的劳动（至少三个）； （2）最擅长的劳动项目； （3）参与劳动的感受及收获 注意： 1.内容须包含所给要点，可适当发挥，以使行文通顺！ 2.文中不得透露真实人名、校名； 3.词数不少于80（开头已给出，不计入总词数） Dear Mr Jackson, My name is Li Ming. I would like to be Yours, Li Ming （4） （2025·广东东莞·一模）中学的学生李华，你打算向某学生英文网站投稿，分享你所在学校的课外活动。请根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文。 要求: 1 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名 2 语句连贯，词数 80左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Editor, I’m a student from No. 1 Middle School. My name is Li Hua. ___________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice can be accepted and helpful to all the students in our school! Yours, Li Hua （5） （2025·广东江门·二模）传承优秀家风是中华民族家国情怀的重要体现，你校校报英语专栏将举办“孝敬长辈，从我做起”的主题征文活动。请根据以下的结构图提示，结合自己的生活，写一篇 不少于80词的短文，向该专栏投稿。 注意： 1. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文章应包含所给要点提示，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 参考词汇：( virtuen. 美德) ( raisev. 养育) educate (v. 教育) Love and Respect the Elders As we all know, respecting and caring for our elders is not only a traditional Chinese virtue but also our duty. __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （6） （2025·广东佛山·一模）随着网络的普及，有很多学生每天花更多时间电子产品上，从而忽略了读书的重要性。为了鼓励同学们多读书、读好书，学校阅读周将举办题为“Reading Can Make a Difference”的中英双语演讲比赛。假设你是李华，请根据以下提示写一篇英文演讲稿，包含以下内容： 1．学生阅读的现状： 2．读书的重要性； 3．建议和号召。 要求：1．80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内）； 2．短文应包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； Reading Can Make a Difference Good morning, everyone! It is my great honor to give you a speech on _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 广东省卷书面表达参考答案 （1） Nowadays, ice cream bars in the shape of cultural relics are very popular across China. If I were to design one, I would choose the West Lake in Hangzhou. It is not only a UNESCO World Heritage Site but also symbolizes harmony between nature and humanity. My principles are uniqueness, cultural symbolism, and public appeal. For example, the West Lake’s iconic “Three Pools Mirroring the Moon” scene could be carved into the ice cream, making it visually striking and meaningful. I hope everyone can try these creative treats and share their photos online. Through this simple act, we can raise awareness of local culture and pass it on to future generations. Let’s embrace our heritage with both taste and pride!    （2） Dear friends, Have you ever thought about what keeps us safe and happy every day? It’s national security. National security is the key to our country’s safety and our happy life. Without it, everything would be in danger. Once, I saw someone spreading false information about our country online, so I reported it. (I often told my grandparents not to believe strange online news.) I was happy to do that. As teenagers, what can we do? First, learn more about national security. We can join school activities about it. Second, be careful with what we say and do online. Don’t spread bad information. Also, protect national symbols, like the national flag. If someone damages them, stop it. National security starts with each of us. Let’s take action now and make a difference for our country! Thank you! Yours, Li Hua （3） Dear Mr Jackson, My name is Li Ming. I would like to be the Star of Labor. At home, I often help with cooking, cleaning and washing clothes. At school, I take care of our class garden, clean the blackboard and organize books in the library. My best skill is gardening. I’ve grown beautiful flowers in our school garden. Through labor, I’ve learned responsibility and teamwork. It makes me happy to contribute to my family and school. I believe I deserve this honor. Yours, Li Ming （4） Dear Editor, I’m a student from No. 1 Middle School. My name is Li Hua. Our school offers various after-class activities. For example, the Sports Club encourages students to play basketball or badminton, which helps us stay healthy and build teamwork. Another popular activity is the Art Society, where we learn painting and pottery. It allows us to express creativity and relax after studying. However, there are some problems. First, activities are often held during lunchtime, so many students cannot join due to homework or rest. Second, most activities take place indoors. We rarely go outside to explore nature or visit museums, missing chances to learn beyond the classroom. To improve this, I suggest adjusting activity time to after-school hours. Also, organizing field trips monthly would let us experience real-world learning. I hope my advice can be accepted and helpful to all the students in our school! Yours, Li Hua （5） Love and Respect the Elders As we all know, respecting and caring for our elders is not only a traditional Chinese virtue but also our duty. Since I was born, my grandparents have always helped to look after me and my family. They raised me and played with me. When I grew older and became a student, they sent me to school and welcomed me home every day. Thanks to their help, my parents could focus on their work. Therefore, we should love and respect our elders. To achieve this, we can help our elders with chores as possible as we can. Spending time communicating with them is also important so that they won’t feel lonely. When it comes to their birthdays, we can send them a small present like cooking a bowl of long noodles for them to show our love and care. It’s also a good idea to take them to do exercise, such as walking in the park, to keep them healthy. In a word, as everyone will grow old one day, respecting the elders is respecting our future selves. （6） Reading Can Make a Difference Good morning, everyone! It is my great honor to give you a speech on reading. As we all know, books are our best friends and reading is the stepping stones to human progress. It can bring us not only wisdom of the wise people in history but also the progress and development. Reading books can provide us with rich knowledge. Also, reading can open our eyes. We can improve ourselves by reading. My concern is that students don’t read books because they have little interest in reading. How can we read wisely? There is no doubt that we should read some books that help with our growth, such as some classics, history books and so on. To improve our reading skills, we’d better take notes while reading. After that, it’s a good idea to write a book report and share it with friends. As long as we want to read, we can do it at any time and any place. There is no end to learning. Let’s enjoy reading and keep reading! That’s all. Thank you! 广州卷书面表达 （1） （2025·广东广州·一模）社会各界十分关心青少年的成长，希望青少年成为德、智、体、美、劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。请你根据下面的思维导图，以“To be a better student”为话题，写一篇演讲稿。 要求： 1. 文章应包括所给思维导图中所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 词数：80左右。文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入词数； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 To be a better student Boys and girls, Our society cares about teenagers. Teenagers are supposed to develop fully. Each of us wants to be a better student. How can we make it? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ These steps help us grow in every way. Let’s take action to be a better student. Thank you! （2） （2025·广东广州·一模）广东省近年来持续深入推进健康中国战略，你的学校将组织一场“我的健康我做主”的主题演讲比赛。请你根据提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍你是如何保持健康的。 要求： 1. 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 Hello, everyone! It’s very important for us to stay healthy. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you. （3） （2024·广东广州·三模）假设你是李华，学校科技节将举办题为“AI in Our Life”的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇英语演讲稿，包含以下内容： 注意： 1．参考词汇：AI人工智能。 2．文中需包含所给的相关信息，并可作适当想象和发挥。 3．文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名。 4．词数80词左右。 AI in Our Life Dear teachers and students, As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our daily life and has changed our lives greatly. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for your listening! （4） （2025·广东广州·一模）假如你是李华，你校英语校报将组织主题为“共建绿色校园”的征文活动，你打算写一封倡议书投稿，内容如下： 要求： 1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数80左右(倡议书开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数) 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear schoolmates, It is important for us to build a green school. There are things we should do and things we shouldn’t do. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （5） （2025·广东广州·一模）随着科技高速发展，人们的生活变得越来越智能和便利。你校英语报以 “Life in 20 years” 为题向学生征稿。请你从居家环境、日常饮食以及交通出行等方面展开想象，描述一下20年后的生活，并谈谈与现在生活的不同之处。 注意： 1．文章应包括所有要点； 2．可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 3．词数80词左右(短文的开头已给出，不计入词数)； 4．不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Life in 20 years What will life be like in 20 years? I think it will be very different._____________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 广州卷书面表达参考答案 （1） To be a better student Boys and girls,     Our society cares about teenagers. Teenagers are supposed to develop fully. Each of us wants to be a better student. How can we make it?     First, show love to our country and respect others. We must keep them in mind, work for them and serve them. Next, learn more to be wise, able and creative. We must live and learn. Then, build strong bodies and minds. Exercise every day and be brave to face difficulties in our life. Fourth, develop hobbies and interests to be able to find and enjoy the beauty in life. Last, respect labor, love labor. Learn basic living skills by sharing housework at home and taking part in labor at school.     These steps help us grow in every way. Let’s take action to be a better student.     Thank you! （2） My Ways to Keep Healthy Hello, everyone! It’s very important for us to stay healthy. Here are some ways I usually take to keep fit. On the physical health side, I always eat healthily. I avoid junk food like chips and cola. Instead, I have plenty of fruits, vegetables, whole grains, and protein. I also make sure to drink enough water every day, which is great for my body. Regular exercise is a must for me. I go jogging three times a week and play basketball with my friends on weekends. This helps me build strong muscles and keep a good figure. When it comes to mental health, I develop a good habit of reading. Reading different books broadens my horizons and relaxes my mind. When I’m stressed, I listen to soft music. It calms me down and makes me feel at ease. Also, I always try to look at the bright side of things and stay positive. In conclusion, by taking care of both my physical and mental health, I’m able to live a healthy and happy life. I believe we can all do it if we make an effort. That’s all. Thank you. （3） AI in Our Life Dear teachers and students, As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our daily life and has changed our lives greatly. We can see all kinds of AI products in our daily life. For example, smartphones can make work and study more efficient. If we have any problems in our studies, we will ask smartphones for help. Cleaning robots can help with housework. They all bring great convenience and progress to our society. However, with AI technology being widely used, many workers lost their jobs. Also, some students rely on AI too much so that they lose their ability to do things by themselves. All in all, just as every coin has its two sides, AI products have both advantages and shortcomings. I believe that if we use AI correctly, it will bring us more convenient life in the future. That’s all. Thank you for your listening! （4） Dear schoolmates,    It is important for us to build a green school. There are things we should do and things we shouldn’t do.    In order to make our school green, first, we should turn off the lights when leaving classrooms to save electricity. Secondly, turn off the taps after using water to avoid waste. Thirdly, we can plant more trees and flowers around our school to make it more beautiful. On the other hand, don’t litter anywhere. Avoid using one-time plastic products like plastic bags. And never step on the grass or pick flowers.    It’s important for us to have a green school. I believe our school will be more beautiful. Let’s take action now and make our school green!    Yours, Li Hua （5） Life in 20 years What will life be like in 20 years? I think it will be very different.   As for the living environment, we will live in smart homes. They may look like our current houses, but they will be able to control the temperature automatically, ensuring it is neither too cold nor too hot. The furniture will also be environmentally friendly. In 20 years, we won’t need to eat much rice, bread, or similar staples. Instead, we can enjoy more green food grown on farms, which will be very delicious. As for transportation, we will be able to travel by plane, which is fast. For ground travel, we can still use cars or trains. This will make future life very convenient.   I believe that with the rapid development of technology, people’s lives will become increasingly convenient. I am very excited about future life. 深圳卷书面表达 （1） （2025·广东深圳·一模）积极的心态可以帮助我们更好地应对生活中的压力和挫折。学校的英文校刊正在以“The power of positive thinking”为题进行征文。请你根据以下写作要点和要求，用英文写一篇短文，向校刊投稿。 写作要点： 1.积极的心态对你的帮助（具体事例）； 2.你对如何调整心态的建议。 写作要求： 1.文中须包含所给的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80左右。 The power of positive thinking __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2） （2025·广东深圳·一模）假定你是李明，你的手工作品正在你校“中华文化长廊”展出。为让下周到你校参观的新西兰姊妹学校师生更好了解你的作品，请你为你的作品写一篇英文介绍。 内容包括： 1.作品名称； 2.作品描述（材料、内容）； 3.作品解释（文化意涵）； 4.创作意图。 要求： 1.要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3.条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 4.80词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。 This artwork is called. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（3） （2025·广东深圳·一模）假如你是李华，昨天你的英国朋友Tony发来邮件：“听说2024年12月中国春节申遗成功了，我非常好奇你家是如何度过第一个非遗春节的，可以和我分享一下吗？”请根据以下提示内容，给Tony写一封回信。 提示内容： 1. 介绍一下你家今年过春节的活动；（至少三点） 2. 谈谈你对春节申遗成功的看法；（至今两点） 3. 邀请Tony明年来中国和你一起过春节。 注意事项： 1. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 条理清楚，语句通顺，书写规范。 提示词：the Intangible Cultural Heritage非物质文化遗产 add to the list 列入名单 reunion团聚 Dear Tony. I’m glad to hear from you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua （4） （2025·广东深圳·一模）深圳是一座创新之城，创意产品层出不穷。在深圳举办的第二十届文博会 (the20th China International Cultural Industries Fair) 引发了社会的广泛关注。假定你是Shenzhen Daily学生记者李华，请你写一篇英文报道，介绍此次活动，内容包括： 1. 活动时间、地点：今年5月，深圳国际会展中心 (Shenzhen World Exhibition and Convention Center)； 2. 活动内容：①深圳中小学生创意作品展示；②中国传统文化分享； 3. 活动反响：①促进了文化交流；②…… Shenzhen is a city of innovation, with creative products springing up continuously. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （5） （2024·广东深圳·一模）假如你是李华，你的学校从本学期开始每天安排一节体育课。请你根据以下提示写一篇文章来介绍学校“每天一节体育课”的开展情况，包含以下内容： 体育课的安排 体育课的具体活动，请举例说明。 每天一节体育课的好处 1. 减轻学习压力，保持身体和心理健康(psychological health)； 2. 培养(develop)更多的体育兴趣爱好； 3. 培养终身运动的习惯； 4. …… 你的建议 提出你对改进体育课的建议(至少两点)。 要求： 1. 80词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内)； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺，条理清楚，意义连贯； 4. 书写规范，卷面整洁。 Since the beginning of this term, my school has offered a daily PE class for students. In the class, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hopefully we can enjoy ourselves better in future PE classes 深圳卷书面表达参考答案 （1） The power of positive thinking Positive thinking has always been a powerful tool in our life. It helped me during a challenging math exam. I was so nervous that I thought I would fail. But then I thought about the good things. I remembered how much I studied and that I can do hard things. This made me feel better and I tried my best. Guess what? I did much better than I thought! To be positive, try to be happy about small things. Spend time with friends who make you feel good. Thank people who help you. These things can help you feel positive. Let’s use positive thinking to make our lives happier and more successful. （2） This artwork is called “The Harmony of Nature”. It is made of bamboo and silk, featuring a beautiful landscape with mountains, rivers, and trees. The artwork symbolizes the traditional Chinese belief in the harmony between humans and nature. I created this piece to share the beauty of Chinese culture and its deep respect for nature. I hope that through this artwork, visitors can appreciate the values of balance and peace that are central to Chinese philosophy. （3） Dear Tony, I’m glad to hear from you. I’d love to share how we celebrated this special Spring Festival with you. This year, we had a wonderful Spring Festival. On New Year’s Eve, when our family gathered for the reunion dinner, dumplings were the star dish. We also decorated our house with traditional red lanterns and Spring Festival couplets. In the evening, we watched the CCTV Spring Festival Gala together. I’m extremely delighted that the Spring Festival was added to the Intangible Cultural Heritage list. It not only preserves our traditions but also promotes Chinese culture globally. I warmly invite you to experience this joyful festival with me in China next year! Best wishes! Li Hua （4） Shenzhen is a city of innovation, with creative products springing up continuously. The 20th China International Cultural Industries Fair held at the Shenzhen World Exhibition and Convention Center in May this year, which has attracted widespread attention from society. In this event, primary and secondary school students in Shenzhen showcased their creative works, and through these works, we can see the continuous improvement of their innovation ability. In addition, traditional Chinese culture was shared at the meeting, allowing more and more people to understand Chinese traditional culture. This event not only promotes cultural exchange but also drives the development of China’s cultural industry. （5） Since the beginning of this term, my school has offered a daily PE class for students. In the class, our PE teacher always guides us to exercise patiently. He teaches us to run and jump. He also teaches us to play balls and even dance. Actually, it’s necessary for us to have daily PE classes. It not only reduces the pressure of study and maintains physical and mental health, but also develops more interests in sports and the habit of lifelong exercise. Apart from these, it also makes us sleep better at night. However, there are some points that we should pay attention to. We should emphasize the safety of PE class. What’s more, it is also very important to have a full rest after exercising. Hopefully we can enjoy ourselves better in future PE classes 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 备考2025中考英语：三轮冲刺重难点突破特训 重难点20 书面表达（省卷、广州卷、深圳卷）（提分秘籍+名校模拟） 【命题规律】 广东省卷和广州卷的书面表达话题涵盖生活、学习、科技、环保、文化等多个领域，要求学生对不同话题有一定的了解和思考，具备广泛的知识面和思维能力。题目可能会继续关注热点话题，如科技发展对生活的影响、传统文化的传承与保护、社会热点问题等，引导学生关注社会、关注生活，培养学生的思维能力和语言表达能力。 深圳卷的书面表达往往引导考生深入挖掘自己的亲身经历，感悟成长的真谛。预计会继续围绕“自我成长”这一主题开展，同时可能会结合一些时代热点，让学生在自身经历的基础上，对社会现象有更深入的思考和认识。 【解答技巧】 写作前 （1）认真审题：明确题目要求，包括文体、主题、人称、时态、要点以及字数限制等。例如，若是书信体，要注意格式；若是记叙文，通常以一般过去时为主。 （2）列出提纲：根据题目要点，用简单的单词、短语或句子列出写作提纲，确定文章的结构和大致内容，避免遗漏要点。 写作中 （1）内容丰富准确：涵盖所有要点，并适当拓展细节，使内容充实。运用丰富的词汇和多样的句式，避免重复单一的表达。如用“in addition”“moreover”等替换“and”，用定语从句、状语从句等复杂句式提升文章档次。 （2）逻辑清晰连贯：使用恰当的连接词或过渡句，使文章逻辑连贯、层次分明。如“firstly...secondly...finally”“however”“therefore”等。 （3）注意书写规范：保持卷面整洁，字迹工整，尽量减少涂改。字母大小写、标点符号使用要准确。 写作后 （1）仔细检查：检查语法错误，如主谓一致、时态语态、名词单复数、形容词副词的用法等；检查单词拼写和标点符号；确保内容完整，格式正确，字数符合要求。 （2）适度润色：在保证正确的基础上，对一些平淡的表达进行优化，可添加一些高级词汇或句式，但要确保使用准确。 【提分秘籍】 （1）精准审题：明确题目要求，包括文体、主题、人称、时态、要点及字数限制等。如省卷、广州卷可能会有书信、日记等文体，深圳卷也常考查根据提示进行写作，都需明确这些要素。 （2）积累素材：通过阅读经典范文学习表达方式和结构，建立词汇本积累新单词和短语，关注时事热点为写作提供背景资料和论据。 （3）丰富语言：确保语法准确，避免主谓不一致、时态错误等。运用多种句式，如简单句、复合句和复杂句结合，使用连接词增强逻辑关系。丰富词汇，避免重复，运用同义词、短语替代，合理使用词汇搭配。 名校模拟（省卷、广州卷、深圳卷） 广东省卷书面表达 （1） （2025·广东珠海·一模） 近期，文创雪糕风靡市场，成为旅游业新晋“网红”。拿着文创雪糕在景区拍照打卡成为旅游仪式的独特表达。请你根据以下思维导图的内容提示用英文写一篇短文谈谈你对文创雪糕的了解及看法。 注意： （1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 （2）不能照抄原文：不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生真实姓名。 （3）语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Nowadays, ice cream bars in the shape of cultural relics are very popular across China. ___________ （2） （2025·广东东莞·二模） 十年守护，全民国家安全教育日（National Security Education Day）步履不停。维护国家安全，同样需要青少年的力量。假设你是李华，你校英文校刊正在开展“国家安全在身边”主题征文活动。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文，向全校同学发出“增强国家安全意识，争做责任少年”的倡议。 注意： （1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 （2）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名。 （3）语句连贯，词数80左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。 Dear friends, Have you ever thought about what keeps us safe and happy every day? It’s national security. Thank you! Yours, Li Hua （3） （2025·广东江门·一模） 劳动教育是青少年全面发展的必要组成部分。劳动实践的形式丰富多样，比如种植庄稼、分担家务或参与志愿服务等。我校正在组织劳动之星（the Star of Labor）的评比活动，假如你是李明，请你给Jackson老师用英文写一封自荐信，积极参加评比。包括以下内容： （1）在家以及在校常做的劳动（至少三个）； （2）最擅长的劳动项目； （3）参与劳动的感受及收获 注意： 1.内容须包含所给要点，可适当发挥，以使行文通顺！ 2.文中不得透露真实人名、校名； 3.词数不少于80（开头已给出，不计入总词数） Dear Mr Jackson, My name is Li Ming. I would like to be Yours, Li Ming （4） （2025·广东东莞·一模）中学的学生李华，你打算向某学生英文网站投稿，分享你所在学校的课外活动。请根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文。 要求: 1 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名 2 语句连贯，词数 80左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Editor, I’m a student from No. 1 Middle School. My name is Li Hua. ___________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice can be accepted and helpful to all the students in our school! Yours, Li Hua （5） （2025·广东江门·二模）传承优秀家风是中华民族家国情怀的重要体现，你校校报英语专栏将举办“孝敬长辈，从我做起”的主题征文活动。请根据以下的结构图提示，结合自己的生活，写一篇 不少于80词的短文，向该专栏投稿。 注意： 1. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文章应包含所给要点提示，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 参考词汇：( virtuen. 美德) ( raisev. 养育) educate (v. 教育) Love and Respect the Elders As we all know, respecting and caring for our elders is not only a traditional Chinese virtue but also our duty. __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （6） （2025·广东佛山·一模）随着网络的普及，有很多学生每天花更多时间电子产品上，从而忽略了读书的重要性。为了鼓励同学们多读书、读好书，学校阅读周将举办题为“Reading Can Make a Difference”的中英双语演讲比赛。假设你是李华，请根据以下提示写一篇英文演讲稿，包含以下内容： 1．学生阅读的现状： 2．读书的重要性； 3．建议和号召。 要求：1．80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内）； 2．短文应包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； Reading Can Make a Difference Good morning, everyone! It is my great honor to give you a speech on _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 广州卷书面表达 （1） （2025·广东广州·一模）社会各界十分关心青少年的成长，希望青少年成为德、智、体、美、劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。请你根据下面的思维导图，以“To be a better student”为话题，写一篇演讲稿。 要求： 1. 文章应包括所给思维导图中所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 词数：80左右。文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入词数； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 To be a better student Boys and girls, Our society cares about teenagers. Teenagers are supposed to develop fully. Each of us wants to be a better student. How can we make it? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ These steps help us grow in every way. Let’s take action to be a better student. Thank you! （2） （2025·广东广州·一模）广东省近年来持续深入推进健康中国战略，你的学校将组织一场“我的健康我做主”的主题演讲比赛。请你根据提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍你是如何保持健康的。 要求： 1. 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 Hello, everyone! It’s very important for us to stay healthy. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you. （3） （2024·广东广州·三模）假设你是李华，学校科技节将举办题为“AI in Our Life”的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇英语演讲稿，包含以下内容： 注意： 1．参考词汇：AI人工智能。 2．文中需包含所给的相关信息，并可作适当想象和发挥。 3．文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名。 4．词数80词左右。 AI in Our Life Dear teachers and students, As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our daily life and has changed our lives greatly. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for your listening! （4） （2025·广东广州·一模）假如你是李华，你校英语校报将组织主题为“共建绿色校园”的征文活动，你打算写一封倡议书投稿，内容如下： 要求： 1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数80左右(倡议书开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数) 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear schoolmates, It is important for us to build a green school. There are things we should do and things we shouldn’t do. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （5） （2025·广东广州·一模）随着科技高速发展，人们的生活变得越来越智能和便利。你校英语报以 “Life in 20 years” 为题向学生征稿。请你从居家环境、日常饮食以及交通出行等方面展开想象，描述一下20年后的生活，并谈谈与现在生活的不同之处。 注意： 1．文章应包括所有要点； 2．可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 3．词数80词左右(短文的开头已给出，不计入词数)； 4．不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Life in 20 years What will life be like in 20 years? I think it will be very different._____________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 深圳卷书面表达 （1） （2025·广东深圳·一模）积极的心态可以帮助我们更好地应对生活中的压力和挫折。学校的英文校刊正在以“The power of positive thinking”为题进行征文。请你根据以下写作要点和要求，用英文写一篇短文，向校刊投稿。 写作要点： 1.积极的心态对你的帮助（具体事例）； 2.你对如何调整心态的建议。 写作要求： 1.文中须包含所给的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80左右。 The power of positive thinking __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2） （2025·广东深圳·一模）假定你是李明，你的手工作品正在你校“中华文化长廊”展出。为让下周到你校参观的新西兰姊妹学校师生更好了解你的作品，请你为你的作品写一篇英文介绍。 内容包括： 1.作品名称； 2.作品描述（材料、内容）； 3.作品解释（文化意涵）； 4.创作意图。 要求： 1.要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3.条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 4.80词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。 This artwork is called. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（3） （2025·广东深圳·一模）假如你是李华，昨天你的英国朋友Tony发来邮件：“听说2024年12月中国春节申遗成功了，我非常好奇你家是如何度过第一个非遗春节的，可以和我分享一下吗？”请根据以下提示内容，给Tony写一封回信。 提示内容： 1. 介绍一下你家今年过春节的活动；（至少三点） 2. 谈谈你对春节申遗成功的看法；（至今两点） 3. 邀请Tony明年来中国和你一起过春节。 注意事项： 1. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 条理清楚，语句通顺，书写规范。 提示词：the Intangible Cultural Heritage非物质文化遗产 add to the list 列入名单 reunion团聚 Dear Tony. I’m glad to hear from you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua （4） （2025·广东深圳·一模）深圳是一座创新之城，创意产品层出不穷。在深圳举办的第二十届文博会 (the20th China International Cultural Industries Fair) 引发了社会的广泛关注。假定你是Shenzhen Daily学生记者李华，请你写一篇英文报道，介绍此次活动，内容包括： 1. 活动时间、地点：今年5月，深圳国际会展中心 (Shenzhen World Exhibition and Convention Center)； 2. 活动内容：①深圳中小学生创意作品展示；②中国传统文化分享； 3. 活动反响：①促进了文化交流；②…… Shenzhen is a city of innovation, with creative products springing up continuously. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （5） （2024·广东深圳·一模）假如你是李华，你的学校从本学期开始每天安排一节体育课。请你根据以下提示写一篇文章来介绍学校“每天一节体育课”的开展情况，包含以下内容： 体育课的安排 体育课的具体活动，请举例说明。 每天一节体育课的好处 1. 减轻学习压力，保持身体和心理健康(psychological health)； 2. 培养(develop)更多的体育兴趣爱好； 3. 培养终身运动的习惯； 4. …… 你的建议 提出你对改进体育课的建议(至少两点)。 要求： 1. 80词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内)； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺，条理清楚，意义连贯； 4. 书写规范，卷面整洁。 Since the beginning of this term, my school has offered a daily PE class for students. In the class, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hopefully we can enjoy ourselves better in future PE classes 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$