焦点 09 书面表达-备战2025年中考英语新课标（核心素养）二轮复习之优秀生拔高重难题型特训（广东广州）

焦点09 书面表达 备战2025年中考英语新课标（核心素养）二轮复习之优秀生拔高重难题型特训 【预测分析】 一、重难点分析 1. 审题与内容定位 难点：准确理解题目要求（体裁、话题、字数），避免偏题或漏要点。高频问题包括未明确写作对象（如书信格式缺失称呼/落款）、未覆盖所有提示要点（如议论文需正反观点均提及）。 易错点：混淆体裁（如将议论文写成记叙文），或过度依赖模板导致内容空洞。 2. 语言表达与逻辑连贯 难点： 词汇多样性：避免重复用词（如多次使用“good/bad”），需灵活替换同义词（如“important→significant”）。 句型复杂性：合理使用从句、分词短语（如非谓语作状语），但需避免过度堆砌导致语法错误。 衔接手段：缺乏过渡词（如however, therefore）导致段落割裂。 3. 语法与细节错误 高频错误：主谓一致、时态统一、冠词/介词误用（如“in 2025”误用“on”）。 中式英语：直译中文表达（如“With the development of society”滥用）。 4. 高分亮点与创新性 难点：在有限字数内展示高级词汇、复杂句型（如倒装句、虚拟语气）及文化元素（如广府文化）。 示例： 基础句：We should protect the environment. 升级句：Not only should we protect the environment, but also we need to educate others to join this cause. 二、解题步骤与技巧 1. 审题与列提纲（5分钟） 步骤： ▪ 圈出题目关键词（体裁、话题、对象），划出提示要点（如“3个理由+结论”）。 ▪ 确定结构：总分总（开头引入→主体分论点→总结升华）或问题解决型（现象→原因→措施）。 技巧：用符号或缩写快速列提纲（如“En1: 节约能源；En2: 减少污染”）。 2. 写作与语言优化（15分钟） 段落分配： 引言段：背景+观点（1-2句），可用名言或场景描写引入（如Whenever I think back to Guangzhou’s ancient streets...）。 主体段：每段1个核心论点+支撑细节（2-3句），结合具体事例或数据（如According to a survey, 60% of students...）。 结论段：总结+呼吁/建议（1-2句），强化主题（如Let’s take action to preserve our cultural heritage!）。 语言策略： 使用连接词（Firstly, Moreover, In conclusion）。 替换基础词汇（如“help→contribute to”）。 3. 检查与修改（5分钟） 重点检查： 格式错误（书信缺少Dear...或Yours sincerely）。 主谓一致、时态统一（如“last year”配一般过去时）。 技巧：通读全文，用符号标记已检查部分（如√）。 三、2025年命题趋势预测 1. 话题预测 校园生活类：社团活动、学习经验分享（如时间管理）、校园环保行动。 文化传承类：广府文化（早茶、骑楼保护）、非遗技艺（粤剧、广绣）的现代传播。 社会热点类：科技伦理（AI与生活）、城市发展（传统与现代的平衡）。 2. 题型预测 应用文：倡议书（如保护骑楼文化）、书信（给未来广州的一封信）。 议论文：观点对比（如“线上学习 vs 线下学习”）、现象分析（如直播间里的粤剧热）。 记叙文：成长故事（克服困难）、文化体验（教外国人包虾饺）。 3. 命题形式 半命题主导：如《一样的____，不一样的我》《裂缝中的光》，需在限定范围内挖掘个性化素材。 复合型题目：可能结合应用文格式与深度立意（如“设计社区垃圾分类积分银行方案”）。 四、备考建议 1. 素材积累 本土文化库：整理10个广州特色场景（如永庆坊改造、珠江夜游），提炼其象征意义。 社会热点库：记录“人工智能”“广交会”等话题的正反案例，强化思辨维度。 2. 能力训练 思辨表达：针对矛盾型题目（如《新与旧的对话》），练习“现象描述-本质剖析-价值升华”三段式结构。 细节描写：通过“五感法”训练场景刻画（如早茶店的蒸笼热气、茶碗碰撞声）。 总结：2025年广州中考书面表达将延续“贴近生活、关注思辨”的特点，考生需以审题精准为基础，以语言规范为保障，结合本土文化元素与热点话题，强化逻辑衔接与细节描写，同时通过模拟训练提升应变能力。 【基础试题】 A “每天锻炼一小时，健康生活一辈子！”，旨在倡导“全民健康，快乐为本”的理念。随着生活水平的提高，健康越来越受到重视。请根据以下思维导图的提示，以“How to Live a Healthy and Happy Life” 为题，用英语写一篇短文，告诉大家我们应如何做。 要求： 1. 文中需包含思维导图中的主要内容； 2. 句子及篇章结构准确、连贯、书写规范； 3. 可做适量拓展； 4. 词数：80 词左右。(标题不计入总词数) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ B 生命中总有许多值得我们去感动和回味的人和事，促进我们瞬间成长：如家人的叮咛、朋友的鼓励、师长的期许；也有先贤的智慧、榜样的力量，他们以担当推动社会；还有一些重大活动，如近期的体育加试、人机对话的准备与冲刺，让我们懂得了感恩亲情与友情，学会了责任与担当，磨练了意志，铸就了品格。请以“The most unforgettable moment”为题，写一篇100字左右的英语短文。 The most unforgettable moment There are a number of unforgettable moments in my life, but the one impresses me most is_____________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ C 假设你们学校正在校园网站上开展以“Good ways to study”为主题的讨论活动。以下是Gina在网站上的留言，请你根据Gina留言的内容，谈谈你的看法，并向Gina提出建议。 I feel worried about my studies. I listen to the teachers carefully in class and do my homework on time, but I always get a C for the exams at the end of each term. I don’t know why. Do you have the same problem? 要点： 1. Answer Gina’s question. 2. Give her some learning advice. 3. Encourage her. 注意: 1. 要点齐全，适当拓展； 2. 行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名； 4. 100 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Hi, Gina. I’m sorry to hear that you have problems with your study.___________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【提升试题】 A 拥有健康的体魄对青少年来说至关重要。学校公众号以“健康”为主题，面向全体初三同学征稿。请你根据下图提示，写一篇题为“How to live a healthy life”的短文，呼吁毕业班的同学们以饱满的精神状态迎接中考。 注意事项： 1. 短文内容可参考上图，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数不少于90个，短文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数； 3. 短文中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称； 4. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 How to live a healthy life As the saying goes, “You don’t know what health is until you lose it.” So it is very important to live a healthy life. Here are my suggestions._________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ All in all, I hope every Grade 9 student can pay more attention to health and all of us can face the coming exam with high spirits. B 初中三年校园生活丰富多彩，有些活动一定令你难忘。近期，学校英文俱乐部正在组织题为“The School Activity I Will Never Forget”的征文比赛。请根据提示， 写一篇短文参赛。 1. Which school activity will you never forget? 2. What did you do in this school activity? 3. What have you learned from it? 注意： ▲词数：100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 ▲文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； ▲文章必须包含所给提示问题，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； The School Activity I Will Never Forget In the past three years, there have been many colorful activities in our school. ___________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ C 如今外出旅游备受欢迎，但在旅游中我们也时常会看到一些不文明行为。学校校报正以“Traveling in Good Manners”为题，向广大学生征稿，倡导大家文明旅游。请你结合以下提示要点和自己的认识，写一篇英文稿件。 写作要点： 1. What are the impolite behaviors during travel? 2. What are your opinions and suggestions for the impolite behaviors during travel? 3. Please call traveling in good manners. 写作要求： 1.内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥； 2.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 3.词数：100左右。 Traveling in Good Manners Nowadays traveling is getting more and more popular.______________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拔高试题】 A 在丰富多彩的初中生活里，每个人都在挑战自我并超越自我。无论是体育场上挥洒的汗水，还是一次研学；无论是公众面前的勇敢发言，还是学会一项技能……这些经历都如同一颗颗璀璨的星辰，照亮了你成长的道路，让你受益匪浅。现在，学校公众号正开展以“My Journey of Growth in Junior High School”为主题的征稿活动。请你选择1-2个对你影响深远的成长经历，分享你的故事，并谈谈这些经历给你带来的感受以及你对未来的规划。 要求： 1.词数80-100； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。 My Journey of Growth in Junior High School _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ B 对你而言，在充满青春气息的初中校园里，总有一个地方格外特殊。它可能是图书馆，滋养求知的渴望；亦或是操场，见证成长的蜕变。你校校报英文版现以“A place that means a lot to me”为题，请你写一篇英文文章投稿。内容应包括： 1. 介绍该地方（包括外观、位置、设施等基本信息）； 2. 结合具体事例，阐述它对你的非凡意义； 3. 表达你对这个地方的特殊情感或愿望。 注意： 1. 词数100； 2. 内容涵盖要点，照抄本卷语篇不得分； 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 A place that means a lot to me _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ C 某青少年英文报“Youth Voice”（青春之声）专栏正在举办主题为“我尝试、我成长”的征文活动，请结合“I’ll try”这首小诗带给你的思考和启发，以“I tried, I ________”为题写一篇征文参与投稿。 写作要求： 1．描述一次自身积极尝试的经历； 2．分享这次经历带给你的启示与成长； 3．不少于80词且不出现个人真实信息。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 焦点09 书面表达 备战2025年中考英语新课标（核心素养）二轮复习之优秀生拔高重难题型特训 【预测分析】 一、重难点分析 1. 审题与内容定位 难点：准确理解题目要求（体裁、话题、字数），避免偏题或漏要点。高频问题包括未明确写作对象（如书信格式缺失称呼/落款）、未覆盖所有提示要点（如议论文需正反观点均提及）。 易错点：混淆体裁（如将议论文写成记叙文），或过度依赖模板导致内容空洞。 2. 语言表达与逻辑连贯 难点： 词汇多样性：避免重复用词（如多次使用“good/bad”），需灵活替换同义词（如“important→significant”）。 句型复杂性：合理使用从句、分词短语（如非谓语作状语），但需避免过度堆砌导致语法错误。 衔接手段：缺乏过渡词（如however, therefore）导致段落割裂。 3. 语法与细节错误 高频错误：主谓一致、时态统一、冠词/介词误用（如“in 2025”误用“on”）。 中式英语：直译中文表达（如“With the development of society”滥用）。 4. 高分亮点与创新性 难点：在有限字数内展示高级词汇、复杂句型（如倒装句、虚拟语气）及文化元素（如广府文化）。 示例： 基础句：We should protect the environment. 升级句：Not only should we protect the environment, but also we need to educate others to join this cause. 二、解题步骤与技巧 1. 审题与列提纲（5分钟） 步骤： ▪ 圈出题目关键词（体裁、话题、对象），划出提示要点（如“3个理由+结论”）。 ▪ 确定结构：总分总（开头引入→主体分论点→总结升华）或问题解决型（现象→原因→措施）。 技巧：用符号或缩写快速列提纲（如“En1: 节约能源；En2: 减少污染”）。 2. 写作与语言优化（15分钟） 段落分配： 引言段：背景+观点（1-2句），可用名言或场景描写引入（如Whenever I think back to Guangzhou’s ancient streets...）。 主体段：每段1个核心论点+支撑细节（2-3句），结合具体事例或数据（如According to a survey, 60% of students...）。 结论段：总结+呼吁/建议（1-2句），强化主题（如Let’s take action to preserve our cultural heritage!）。 语言策略： 使用连接词（Firstly, Moreover, In conclusion）。 替换基础词汇（如“help→contribute to”）。 3. 检查与修改（5分钟） 重点检查： 格式错误（书信缺少Dear...或Yours sincerely）。 主谓一致、时态统一（如“last year”配一般过去时）。 技巧：通读全文，用符号标记已检查部分（如√）。 三、2025年命题趋势预测 1. 话题预测 校园生活类：社团活动、学习经验分享（如时间管理）、校园环保行动。 文化传承类：广府文化（早茶、骑楼保护）、非遗技艺（粤剧、广绣）的现代传播。 社会热点类：科技伦理（AI与生活）、城市发展（传统与现代的平衡）。 2. 题型预测 应用文：倡议书（如保护骑楼文化）、书信（给未来广州的一封信）。 议论文：观点对比（如“线上学习 vs 线下学习”）、现象分析（如直播间里的粤剧热）。 记叙文：成长故事（克服困难）、文化体验（教外国人包虾饺）。 3. 命题形式 半命题主导：如《一样的____，不一样的我》《裂缝中的光》，需在限定范围内挖掘个性化素材。 复合型题目：可能结合应用文格式与深度立意（如“设计社区垃圾分类积分银行方案”）。 四、备考建议 1. 素材积累 本土文化库：整理10个广州特色场景（如永庆坊改造、珠江夜游），提炼其象征意义。 社会热点库：记录“人工智能”“广交会”等话题的正反案例，强化思辨维度。 2. 能力训练 思辨表达：针对矛盾型题目（如《新与旧的对话》），练习“现象描述-本质剖析-价值升华”三段式结构。 细节描写：通过“五感法”训练场景刻画（如早茶店的蒸笼热气、茶碗碰撞声）。 总结：2025年广州中考书面表达将延续“贴近生活、关注思辨”的特点，考生需以审题精准为基础，以语言规范为保障，结合本土文化元素与热点话题，强化逻辑衔接与细节描写，同时通过模拟训练提升应变能力。 【基础试题】 A “每天锻炼一小时，健康生活一辈子！”，旨在倡导“全民健康，快乐为本”的理念。随着生活水平的提高，健康越来越受到重视。请根据以下思维导图的提示，以“How to Live a Healthy and Happy Life” 为题，用英语写一篇短文，告诉大家我们应如何做。 要求： 1. 文中需包含思维导图中的主要内容； 2. 句子及篇章结构准确、连贯、书写规范； 3. 可做适量拓展； 4. 词数：80 词左右。(标题不计入总词数) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How to Live a Healthy and Happy Life With the improvement of living conditions, we are paying more attention to our health, which includes both physical and mental health. Then how can we live a healthy and happy life? Firstly, we should keep our bodies healthy. Not only do we need to eat healthy food, but also we need to exercise in a proper way every day. For example, we can run for 30 minutes every morning or play sports after school. Meanwhile, we still need enough sleep every day. Secondly, mental health is also very important. We need to love our life and try to be active. We need to get along well with others as well. When we’re sad, we need to communicate with parents and friends. In a word, if we have a healthy body and mind, we will have a healthy and happy life. 【难度】0.85 【知识点】情绪、健康饮食、健康与运动、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据思维导图中的提示展开写作，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明大家对身心健康的重视，引出下文； 第二步，具体介绍如何健康且开心地生活； 第三步，书写结语，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①With the improvement of 随着……的发展 ②pay more attention to 更加关注 ③in a proper way 以恰当的方式 ④Meanwhile 同时 ⑤get along well with 和……相处融洽 ⑥communicate with sb 和某人交流 [高分句型] ①With the improvement of living conditions, we are paying more attention to our health, which includes both physical and mental health. (which引导非限制性定语从句) ②When we’re sad, we need to communicate with parents and friends. (when引导时间状语从句) ③In a word, if we have a healthy body and mind, we will have a healthy and happy life. (if引导条件状语从句) B 生命中总有许多值得我们去感动和回味的人和事，促进我们瞬间成长：如家人的叮咛、朋友的鼓励、师长的期许；也有先贤的智慧、榜样的力量，他们以担当推动社会；还有一些重大活动，如近期的体育加试、人机对话的准备与冲刺，让我们懂得了感恩亲情与友情，学会了责任与担当，磨练了意志，铸就了品格。请以“The most unforgettable moment”为题，写一篇100字左右的英语短文。 The most unforgettable moment There are a number of unforgettable moments in my life, but the one impresses me most is_____________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The most unforgettable moment   There are a number of unforgettable moments in my life, but the one that impresses me most is the day I participated in the sports test. It was a sunny day, and my heart was pounding with excitement and nervousness. Before the test, my family gave me lots of advice and encouragement. They told me to do my best and not to give up. My friends were also there, cheering me on. Their support made me feel strong and confident. When it was my turn to run, I took a deep breath and started. The distance seemed long, but I kept reminding myself of my family’s words and my friends’ cheers. I pushed myself forward, step by step, until I finally crossed the finish line. That moment was truly unforgettable. It taught me the importance of perseverance and the power of support from loved ones. I realized that with their encouragement, I could overcome any challenge. This experience has shaped me into a more resilient and grateful person. 【难度】0.85 【知识点】叙事忆旧、个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：语句通顺、意思连贯、条理清楚，且无语法和拼写错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开门见山，表明自己最难忘的时刻； 第二步：具体介绍最难忘的时刻； 第三步：书写结语，总结自己从中获得的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①participate in参与，参加 ②give up放弃 ③cheer sb on为某人加油 ④take a deep breath深呼吸 ⑤step by step一步一步地 [高分句型] ①I realized that with their encouragement, I could overcome any challenge.（宾语从句） C 假设你们学校正在校园网站上开展以“Good ways to study”为主题的讨论活动。以下是Gina在网站上的留言，请你根据Gina留言的内容，谈谈你的看法，并向Gina提出建议。 I feel worried about my studies. I listen to the teachers carefully in class and do my homework on time, but I always get a C for the exams at the end of each term. I don’t know why. Do you have the same problem? 要点： 1. Answer Gina’s question. 2. Give her some learning advice. 3. Encourage her. 注意: 1. 要点齐全，适当拓展； 2. 行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名； 4. 100 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Hi, Gina. I’m sorry to hear that you have problems with your study.___________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Hi, Gina. I’m sorry to hear that you have problems with your study. I used to have the same problem as you, but now I have made progress and I often get good grades. I think it’s because I’ve developed some good ways to study. Here is my advice. First, set clear learning goals. Before starting to learn, we’d better know what we want to achieve. We also need to break the big picture into smaller and more specific goals, which makes it easier. Second, develop good time management skills. We should manage our time well to make sure that we have enough time to study and practice. Third, practice makes perfect. Practice is important for learning. Repeating what we have learned can be helpful. Fourth, face failure positively. As we all know, failure is the mother of success. Failure is a natural part of the learning process. We shouldn’t be afraid to make mistakes or fail. As long as you believe in yourself, you’re half way there. With good learning habits and skills, you are sure to get better grades next time! 【难度】0.85 【知识点】意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”回答吉娜的问题、给她一些学习建议并鼓励她。 [写作步骤] 第一步，回答吉娜的问题，导入正文； 第二步，给她一些学习建议； 第三步，鼓励吉娜。 [亮点词汇] ① be afraid to do sth害怕做某事 ② make mistakes犯错误 ③ believe in oneself相信自己 [高分句型] ① As long as you believe in yourself, you’re half way there.（使用条件状语从句） ② Repeating what we have learned can be helpful.（使用非谓语动词） 【提升试题】 A 拥有健康的体魄对青少年来说至关重要。学校公众号以“健康”为主题，面向全体初三同学征稿。请你根据下图提示，写一篇题为“How to live a healthy life”的短文，呼吁毕业班的同学们以饱满的精神状态迎接中考。 注意事项： 1. 短文内容可参考上图，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数不少于90个，短文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数； 3. 短文中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称； 4. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 How to live a healthy life As the saying goes, “You don’t know what health is until you lose it.” So it is very important to live a healthy life. Here are my suggestions._________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ All in all, I hope every Grade 9 student can pay more attention to health and all of us can face the coming exam with high spirits. 【答案】 How to live a healthy life As a saying goes, “you don’t know what health is until you lose it.” So it is very important to live a healthy life. Here are my suggestions. First of all, we should eat healthy food such as fresh vegetables and fruits. Stop eating junk food because it is harmful to us. Besides, getting enough sleep is of great help. We shouldn’t stay up late. Otherwise, we will feel sleepy easily in the daytime and can’t listen to teachers carefully in class. Exercise is also important. We can play basketball or take a walk after school to keep fit and energetic. Last but not least, we should keep a good mood. Don’t worry too much about the coming exam. When we feel stressed, we can talk to friends or ask parents for help.   All in all, I hope every Grade 9 student can pay more attention to health and all of us can face the coming exam with high spirits. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】身心健康、健康饮食、健康与运动、方法/策略 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料中的内容，并适当增加细节，保证拼写和语法正确。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图，健康很重要，我们要如何保持健康； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“饮食、锻炼和睡眠”三方面入手，重点介绍如何保持健康； ③第三步，书写结语。希望大家都能有健康的身体。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all首先 ②such as例如 ③stay up late熬夜 ④keep fit保持健康 [高分句型] ①Stop eating junk food because it is harmful to us.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②Don’t worry too much about the coming exam.（否定祈使句） ③When we feel stressed, we can talk to friends or ask parents for help.（when引导的时间状语从句） B 初中三年校园生活丰富多彩，有些活动一定令你难忘。近期，学校英文俱乐部正在组织题为“The School Activity I Will Never Forget”的征文比赛。请根据提示， 写一篇短文参赛。 1. Which school activity will you never forget? 2. What did you do in this school activity? 3. What have you learned from it? 注意： ▲词数：100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 ▲文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； ▲文章必须包含所给提示问题，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； The School Activity I Will Never Forget In the past three years, there have been many colorful activities in our school. ___________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 The School Activity I Will Never Forget    In the past three years, there have been many colorful activities in our school. Among them, the sports meeting last autumn is the most unforgettable one. I took part in the 800-meter race. Before the race, I felt very nervous. My classmates cheered for me, which made me feel more confident. When the race began, I ran as fast as I could. However, I fell down halfway. Just when I wanted to give up, I heard my teachers and classmates shouting my name. Their encouragement gave me the strength to stand up and keep running. Finally, I crossed the finish line. From this activity, I’ve learned that never giving up is the key to success. And I also know the power of support from others. It will always stay in my memory. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】个人经历、文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ② 时态：以“一般过去时”为主。 ③ 提示：写作要点明确，需回答难忘的校园活动是什么、在活动中做了什么以及从中学到了什么，要适当发挥，使文章连贯生动。    [写作步骤] 第一步，承接题目给定内容，引出要描述的校园活动。 第二步，先点明难忘的活动是秋季运动会，接着用一般过去时详细叙述参加800米赛跑的过程，包括赛前紧张、赛中摔倒又坚持等情节。 第三步，用一般现在时总结从活动中获得的“永不放弃是成功关键”以及感受到他人支持力量的感悟，完成文章收尾。   [亮点词汇] ① take part in 参加 ② cheer for 为……加油 ③ give up 放弃 ④ the key to success 成功的关键    [高分句型] ① My classmates cheered for me, which made me feel more confident.（which引导非限制性定语从句，） ② Just when I wanted to give up, I heard my teachers and classmates shouting my name.（when引导时间状语从句） ③ From this activity, I’ve learned that never giving up is the key to success.（that引导宾语从句） C 如今外出旅游备受欢迎，但在旅游中我们也时常会看到一些不文明行为。学校校报正以“Traveling in Good Manners”为题，向广大学生征稿，倡导大家文明旅游。请你结合以下提示要点和自己的认识，写一篇英文稿件。 写作要点： 1. What are the impolite behaviors during travel? 2. What are your opinions and suggestions for the impolite behaviors during travel? 3. Please call traveling in good manners. 写作要求： 1.内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥； 2.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 3.词数：100左右。 Traveling in Good Manners Nowadays traveling is getting more and more popular.______________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Traveling in Good Manners Nowadays traveling is getting more and more popular. However, some people don’t behave themselves in tourist attractions when traveling. For example, some of the travelers throw rubbish everywhere. It’s not only impolite but also harmful to the environment around us. We should put rubbish into dustbins. Some of the travelers like picking flowers in a park. It should also be stopped because flowers are beautiful and we should protect them. We can put up signs beside the flowers to remind travelers not to pick them. Let’s take action right now and travel in good manners. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】环境保护、旅行、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，列举两个不文明的行为进行介绍； 第二步，介绍自己对不文明行为的看法并给出改正建议； 第三步，号召大家文明旅行。 [亮点词汇] behave themselves文明举止 ②put rubbish into dustbins把垃圾扔进垃圾桶 ③put up signs张贴告示 [高分句型] ①However, some people don’t behave themselves in tourist attractions when traveling. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②Let’s take action right now and travel in good manners. (祈使句 【拔高试题】 A 在丰富多彩的初中生活里，每个人都在挑战自我并超越自我。无论是体育场上挥洒的汗水，还是一次研学；无论是公众面前的勇敢发言，还是学会一项技能……这些经历都如同一颗颗璀璨的星辰，照亮了你成长的道路，让你受益匪浅。现在，学校公众号正开展以“My Journey of Growth in Junior High School”为主题的征稿活动。请你选择1-2个对你影响深远的成长经历，分享你的故事，并谈谈这些经历给你带来的感受以及你对未来的规划。 要求： 1.词数80-100； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。 My Journey of Growth in Junior High School _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Journey of Growth in Junior High School In junior high school, I faced many challenges that helped me grow. One big step was joining the school’s speech contest. At first, I was really nervous about speaking in front of many people. But with lots of practice and encouragement from my friends, I became more confident. When I finally stood on stage and gave my speech, it felt amazing. This experience taught me that if I keep trying, I can do anything. Another important time was during a school trip. We had to work together to solve problems and decided where to go. It was hard, but we helped each other and had a lot of fun. This trip showed me how important it is to be a good team member and to trust my friends. The two experiences made me braver and more independent. In the future, I want to keep pushing myself to try new things and always to be there for my friends. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】个人经历、哲理感悟 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：不要遗漏题干中的内容，并适当增加细节，同时注意拼写、语法正确。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图，初中生活中，自己面临了什么挑战； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容，讲述具体经历，从中学到了哪些道理； ③第三步，书写结语，自己对未来有哪些规划。 [亮点词汇] ①at first起初 ②be nervous about 对……感到紧张或焦虑 ③have fun玩得开心 [高分句型] ①In junior high school, I faced many challenges that helped me grow.（that引导的限制性定语从句） ②When I finally stood on stage and gave my speech, it felt amazing.（when引导的时间状语从句） ③This experience taught me that if I keep trying, I can do anything.（that引导的宾语从句+if引导的条件状语从句） B 对你而言，在充满青春气息的初中校园里，总有一个地方格外特殊。它可能是图书馆，滋养求知的渴望；亦或是操场，见证成长的蜕变。你校校报英文版现以“A place that means a lot to me”为题，请你写一篇英文文章投稿。内容应包括： 1. 介绍该地方（包括外观、位置、设施等基本信息）； 2. 结合具体事例，阐述它对你的非凡意义； 3. 表达你对这个地方的特殊情感或愿望。 注意： 1. 词数100； 2. 内容涵盖要点，照抄本卷语篇不得分； 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 A place that means a lot to me _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A place that means a lot to me During my school days, the place that means a lot tome most is our school library. It’s on the left corner of our campus. It only takes me five minutes to walk there. It is a three-storey building with a lot of books on each floor. There are many bookshelves in the middle while the walls of the reading rooms are covered by soft materials to make them more comfortable. The library has made a big difference to my schoollife. Whenever I am free, I will go there and bury myself in the ocean of knowledge. The various books meet my different needs and broaden my horizons. The quiet learning environment is good for me. The library is the paradise of my mind and soul. And I like it very much. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】叙事忆旧、情感 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。首先介绍这个对你来说格外特殊地方。然后结合具体事例，阐述它对你的非凡意义。最后 表达你对这个地方的特殊情感或愿望。 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①made a big difference to对……产生很大的影响 ②broaden my horizons开阔我的视野 ③meet different needs满足不同需求 ④be good for有益于…… [高分句型] ①Whenever I am free, I will go there and bury myself in the ocean of knowledge. (Whenever引导的时间状语从句) ②During my school days, the place that means a lot tome most is our school library. (定语从句) C 某青少年英文报“Youth Voice”（青春之声）专栏正在举办主题为“我尝试、我成长”的征文活动，请结合“I’ll try”这首小诗带给你的思考和启发，以“I tried, I ________”为题写一篇征文参与投稿。 写作要求： 1．描述一次自身积极尝试的经历； 2．分享这次经历带给你的启示与成长； 3．不少于80词且不出现个人真实信息。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 I tried, I grew Life is full of challenges, and every attempt is a step forward. Last year, our school held a speech contest. The theme was appealing, but I was extremely nervous about speaking in public. Remembering the poem “I’ll try”, I summoned up my courage and signed up. I spent days writing and perfecting my speech script. Every day after school, I practiced in front of the mirror, paying attention to my gestures and expressions. When the big day came, my heart pounded as I stepped onto the stage. But once I started speaking, the nervousness gradually faded away. I focused on delivering my speech with passion. Although I didn’t win the top prize, the experience was invaluable. This attempt taught me that fear is just an illusion. Once we step out of our comfort zone and give it a try, we can overcome our inner barriers. I’ve become more confident and am no longer afraid of public speaking. I truly grew through this experience. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇征文，属于记叙文。通过讲述自身经历来表达主题，写作时需注重故事性和个人感悟的呈现。 ②时态：主要时态为一般过去时，用于描述过去发生的尝试经历；在阐述感悟和成长对现在的影响时，会涉及一般现在时。 ③提示：写作要点已明确，需围绕自身一次积极尝试的经历展开，不能遗漏“描述经历”和“分享启示与成长”这两个关键部分。要适当增添细节，使经历描述生动，突出成长感悟这一重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步、表明写作意图：可先简要提及诗歌“I’ll try”对自己面对挑战时的激励作用，自然引出要讲述的亲身尝试经历。 第二步、具体阐述写作内容：从“尝试的起因、准备过程、实际行动”等方面详细介绍这次经历。比如在准备演讲比赛时，如何克服紧张情绪写演讲稿、练习发音和肢体语言等。 第三步、书写结语：总结这次尝试带来的成长，如变得更自信等，再次强调勇于尝试的重要性，呼应征文主题。 [亮点词汇] ①summon up courage鼓起勇气 ②step out of comfort zone走出舒适区 ③overcome barriers克服障碍 ④invaluable无价的；极宝贵的 [高分句型] ①Although I didn’t win the top prize, the experience was invaluable. (although引导让步状语从句，体现语言丰富性) ②Once we step out of our comfort zone and give it a try, we can overcome our inner barriers. (once引导条件状语从句，增加文章逻辑性) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$