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专题07 书面表达
1.(23-24高一下·天津河西区·期末)
假设你叫李津,你校上周五组织了一次全校性的图书义卖活动。请你根据以下要点,给你的美国笔友Chris写一封电子邮件,告诉他此次活动的有关情况。
1. 活动的目的;
2. 活动的时间、地点和方式;
3. 你对本次活动的感悟。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:
图书义卖a book sale
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【答案】Dear Chris,
How are you doing recently? Now I’m so excited that I can’t wait to share with you an unforgettable experience.
Last Friday, our school held a book sale, aimed to raise some money to help those in need. During the course of the after-class activity, we gathered on the playground to sell books, which were collected ahead of time. Luckily, a great many students took an active part in this program and we got a large amount of money.
I believe our generous help is sure to have a good effect on children in need, especially those in the mountainous areas or poverty-stricken districts. Through our efforts, we can not only share what we have with them, but also make their life more colorful.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Chris写一封电子邮件,告诉学校上周五组织的一次全校性的图书义卖活动的有关情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮助:help→assist
幸运地:luckily→fortunately
影响:effect→influence
努力:effort→attempt
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last Friday, our school held a book sale, aimed to raise some money to help those in need.
拓展句:Last Friday, our school held a book sale, which was aimed to raise some money to help those in need.
【点睛】【高分句型1】During the course of the after-class activity, we gathered on the playground to sell books, which were collected ahead of time. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Through our efforts, we can not only share what we have with them, but also make their life more colorful. (运用了not only…but also句型以及what引导的宾语从句)
2.(23-24高一下·天津和平区·期末)
假设你是李津,近日来,网络上一个话题——“当短视频邂逅传统文化”吸引了广泛关注,很多网友都基于这个话题制作短视频来表达自己的观点或是讲述与其相关的故事。你也想制作一部短视频来表达自己的看法,请撰写一篇短视频的文案,内容包括:
(1)简单介绍你对传统文化的认识和理解;
(2)谈一谈你对于短视频 (video clips) 的看法;
(3)说说在你的短视频中你将怎么样呈现传统文化。
注意:
(1) 词数不少于100;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
When video clips encounter traditional culture
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【答案】范文
When video clips encounter traditional culture
When it comes to video clips and traditional culture, I believe it’s a wonderful combination.
Traditional culture is the essence of our nation, passing down wisdom and values through generations. I think video clips are a great way to showcase traditional culture. They are short, interesting, and can reach a wide audience. In my video, I will use vivid images and sounds to present traditional culture. Maybe I’ll show some traditional art forms like calligraphy or paper-cutting, and explain their history and meaning. In this way, more people can understand and appreciate the beauty of traditional culture.
Let’s embrace this new form of expression and let traditional culture shine in the digital age.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。近日来,网络上一个话题——“当短视频邂逅传统文化”吸引了广泛关注,很多网友都基于这个话题制作短视频来表达自己的观点或是讲述与其相关的故事。你也想制作一部短视频来表达自己的看法,要求考生撰写一篇短视频的文案。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很好的:wonderful→amazing
使用:use→make use of
展示:show→exhibit
接受:embrace→accept
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Traditional culture is the essence of our nation, passing down wisdom and values through generations.
拓展句:Traditional culture is the essence of our nation, which passes down wisdom and values through generations.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When it comes to video clips and traditional culture, I believe it’s a wonderful combination. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Let’s embrace this new form of expression and let traditional culture shine in the digital age. (运用了祈使句)
3.(23-24高一下·天津河北区·期末)
假设你是晨光中学的高一学生李津。面对学校选课走班提供的众多选择,你犹豫不决,因此决定给英国笔友Chris写一封信,征求他的建议。
内容包括:
(1)介绍你正在考虑选择的科目(至少2门科目);
(2)说明你选择这些科目的理由(如:个人兴趣、学术优势、职业规划等);
(3)希望Chris给你一些建议。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:高中选课high school subjects selection
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m delighted to hear from you. I’m writing to tell you what subjects I’ll choose in my second year of high school.
I intend to choose history, biology and chemistry. First, as a fan of historical events, I wouldn’t miss any chance to learn more about history. Also, biology is always appealing to me. Because it is not difficult to learn and needs to memorize more things. Although chemistry is known as a most challenging subject, it’s also a subject widely applied to many fields, conducive to better employment and career planning. It is believed that interest is the best teacher. I hope that you could give some precious advice.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本文是应用文。面对学校选课走班提供的众多选择,考生犹豫不决,因此决定给英国笔友Chris写一封信,征求他的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选择:choose→select
打算做某事:intend to do sth.→plan to do sth.
首先:first→to begin with
机会:chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I intend to choose history, biology and chemistry.
拓展句:The subjects I intend to choose are history, biology and chemistry.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to tell you what subjects I’ll choose in my second year of high school. (由what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Although chemistry is known as a most challenging subject, it’s also a subject widely applied to many fields. (由Although引导的让步状语从句)
4.(23-24高一下·天津南开区·期末)
假如你是李津,即将作为学生代表参加国际青少年科技论坛,并做Youth & Technology: Shaping Tomorrow主题演讲。请按照以下要点写一篇演讲稿。
1.科技进步对你生活的影响(如在生活,学习方面):
2.青少年参与科技创造的方式;
3.呼吁青少年积极参与科技创造。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)文章中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名;
参考词汇:
国际青少年科技论坛 International Youth Science and Technology Forum
Youth & Technology: Shaping Tomorrow
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【答案】 Youth & Technology: Shaping Tomorrow
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen!
It is a great honor for me to attend the International Youth Science and Technology Forum. Today I want to share with you my thoughts about technology and teenagers.
There is no doubt that the progress of science and technology has had a great impact on my study and life. Various online resources and apps have not only made my learning easier and richer, but also enriched my spare time and broadened my horizon. Therefore, as a teenager, who has enjoyed the benefits of technological progress, we should take an active part in scientific and technological innovation, such as academic lectures, science and technology competitions and other practical activities.
Science and technology can shape the bright future. So I hope all teenagers can get involved in scientific and technological innovation activities.
【导语】本书面表达属于应用文写作。要求写篇演讲稿,介绍科技进步的影响及青少年参与科技创造的方式。
【详解】1.词汇积累
毫无疑问:there is no doubt that→undoubtedly
影响:impact →influence
参加:take part in→participate in
比赛:competition→contest
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It is a great honor for me to attend the International Youth Science and Technology Forum.
拓展句:It is a great honor that I can attend the International Youth Science and Technology Forum.
【点睛】【高分句型1】There is no doubt that the progress of science and technology has had a great impact on my study and life.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)
【高分句型2】Therefore, as a teenager, who has enjoyed the benefits of technological progress, we should take an active part in scientific and technological innovation, such as academic lectures, science and technology competitions and other practical activities.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
5.(23-24高一下·天津五区县·期末)
假如你是晨光中学学生李津。你在前不久举行的“用英语讲中国故事”大赛中获得冠军。英语俱乐部请你在学校英文网站“Reading China”专栏留言,跟同学们分享一下提升英语口语水平、了解中国传统文化的经验。内容要点如下:
1.多听、多说,并积极参加学校的“英语角”、演讲比赛等活动;
2.广泛阅读传统文化书籍、参观博物馆等;
3.表达你的祝愿。
参考词汇:
“用英语讲中国故事”大赛Stories of China Retold in English Challenge;冠军champion;英语角English Corner。
Dear fellow students,
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Li Jin
【答案】Dear fellow students,
I am Li Jin, who won the champion in the Stories of China Retold in English Challenge. And at the request of the English club of our school, I would like to share with you my experience of improving my oral English and learning about traditional Chinese culture.
First of all, when it comes to spoken English, the best way to improve it is to practise listening and speaking as much as you can. Besides, what is considered an effective approach is to participate in beneficial activities like “English Corner” or English speech competitions. As for accumulating knowledge concerning traditional Chinese culture, I strongly recommend that you should read more related books and visit museums where splendid Chinese history and culture are exhibited vividly.
All in all, I sincerely hope that you can make great progress in your speaking and broaden your horizons through constant efforts.
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生在前不久举行的“用英语讲中国故事”大赛中获得冠军。英语俱乐部请考生在学校英文网站“Reading China”专栏留言,跟同学们分享一下提升英语口语水平、了解中国传统文化的经验。
【详解】1.词汇积累
改善,改进:improve→ upgrade
英语口语:oral English→ spoken English
方法:approach→ method
参与:participate in→ engage in
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Besides, what is considered an effective approach is to participate in beneficial activities like “English Corner” or English speech competitions.
拓展句:Besides, participating in beneficial activities like “English Corner” or English speech competitions is considered an effective approach .
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am Li Jin, who won the champion in the Stories of China Retold in English Challenge.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Besides, what is considered an effective approach is to participate in beneficial activities like “English Corner” or English speech competitions.(运用了what引导的主语从句、不定式to participate in作表语)
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专题07 书面表达
1.(23-24高一下·天津河西区·期末)
假设你叫李津,你校上周五组织了一次全校性的图书义卖活动。请你根据以下要点,给你的美国笔友Chris写一封电子邮件,告诉他此次活动的有关情况。
1. 活动的目的;
2. 活动的时间、地点和方式;
3. 你对本次活动的感悟。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:
图书义卖a book sale
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.(23-24高一下·天津和平区·期末)
假设你是李津,近日来,网络上一个话题——“当短视频邂逅传统文化”吸引了广泛关注,很多网友都基于这个话题制作短视频来表达自己的观点或是讲述与其相关的故事。你也想制作一部短视频来表达自己的看法,请撰写一篇短视频的文案,内容包括:
(1)简单介绍你对传统文化的认识和理解;
(2)谈一谈你对于短视频 (video clips) 的看法;
(3)说说在你的短视频中你将怎么样呈现传统文化。
注意:
(1) 词数不少于100;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
When video clips encounter traditional culture
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3.(23-24高一下·天津河北区·期末)
假设你是晨光中学的高一学生李津。面对学校选课走班提供的众多选择,你犹豫不决,因此决定给英国笔友Chris写一封信,征求他的建议。
内容包括:
(1)介绍你正在考虑选择的科目(至少2门科目);
(2)说明你选择这些科目的理由(如:个人兴趣、学术优势、职业规划等);
(3)希望Chris给你一些建议。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:高中选课high school subjects selection
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
4.(23-24高一下·天津南开区·期末)
假如你是李津,即将作为学生代表参加国际青少年科技论坛,并做Youth & Technology: Shaping Tomorrow主题演讲。请按照以下要点写一篇演讲稿。
1.科技进步对你生活的影响(如在生活,学习方面):
2.青少年参与科技创造的方式;
3.呼吁青少年积极参与科技创造。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)文章中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名;
参考词汇:
国际青少年科技论坛 International Youth Science and Technology Forum
Youth & Technology: Shaping Tomorrow
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5.(23-24高一下·天津五区县·期末)
假如你是晨光中学学生李津。你在前不久举行的“用英语讲中国故事”大赛中获得冠军。英语俱乐部请你在学校英文网站“Reading China”专栏留言,跟同学们分享一下提升英语口语水平、了解中国传统文化的经验。内容要点如下:
1.多听、多说,并积极参加学校的“英语角”、演讲比赛等活动;
2.广泛阅读传统文化书籍、参观博物馆等;
3.表达你的祝愿。
参考词汇:
“用英语讲中国故事”大赛Stories of China Retold in English Challenge;冠军champion;英语角English Corner。
Dear fellow students,
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Li Jin
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