Unit 6 Famous people in history 单元主题写作满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材，分层练习）英语新教材沪教版五四学制六年级下册

学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 6 Famous people in history 单元主题写作满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材，分层练习） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．古今中外的名人犹如一颗颗明星一般闪耀在历史的星空中。请选择一位你了解的历史名人，谈谈你对他/她的看法，60词以上。包括但不限于以下内容： ●对他/她的简要介绍； ●他/她的主要贡献； ●他/她身上值得学习的品质。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．你的班级打算进行历史人物故事演讲比赛，请根据以下要点，介绍历史人物岳飞。内容包括以下要点： 1. 岳飞出生在一个贫穷的家庭。 2. 他从小非常喜欢看书，从书中学到了很多知识。 3. 多年以后，岳飞参军。由于他在军队中表现很优秀，他成为了一名将军。岳飞领兵作战，赢得了很多战争。 4. 你的感想…… 参考词汇：general将军，army军队 要求： 1. 词数：80词—100词左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2, 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear classmates, I would like to introduce a Chinese hero today. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．孔子（Confucius）是我国古代伟大的思想家和教育家，儒家学派创始人，世界著名的文化名人之一。请根据以下信息写一篇不少于60词的小短文介绍他的生平。内容提示： 1. 孔子出生于公元前551年的鲁国。（the state of Lu） 2. 当他小的时候，他的父母双亡，但他受到良好的教育。（receive good education） 3. 在他三十多岁时，他开始教学，一直到他去世。（spend the rest of one’s life doing sth.） 4. 55岁时，周游列国寻求正确的行为准则（search for good rules of behaviour），68岁时返回鲁国。 5. 73岁时因病去世。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Lisa来信说她最近正在学习汉语，在学习过程中遇到“程门立雪”（Cheng Men Li Xue）这一成语，不解其意。请你根据下面图片提示，用英语给她回信，简要叙述这个成语故事，并谈谈自己的理解和感悟。 要求： 1.语言规范，语句通顺，可适当发挥； 2.词数90左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：idiom 成语；during the Northern Song Dynasty 北宋时期；Cheng Yi 程颐；have a nap 小憩；disturb打扰；until 直到……为止；wake up 醒来；moved感动的 Dear Lisa, I’m glad to hear from you. In your letter, you say you don’t understand the meaning of the idiom “Cheng Men Li Xue”. Now let me tell you the story about it. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5．书面表达 根据下面提供的有关海伦·凯勒的经历以及你对她的了解, 写一篇有关她的英语文章。80词左右。提示： 6 months old—can say a few words 19 months old—be badly ill；can't see, hear or talk 6 years old—have a teacher, learn to read through her hands grow up—become a writer, the first book—The Story of My Life ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．学校读书会组织开展“与名人对话”活动，鼓励学生积极阅读鲁迅先生的作品。鲁迅先生是中国现代文学的奠基人之一，他不仅是一位作家，也是一位思想家和革命家，对中国文化和社会产生了深远的影响。鲁迅的作品《朝花夕拾》 (Dawn Blossoms Plucked at Dusk),《呐喊》 (Call to Arms)，《彷徨》 (Hesitation)等，至今仍被广泛阅读和研究。请以“A conversation with Lu Xun: Insights from a Literary Giant”为题，根据提示写一篇短文，不少于60词。Suggested questions: (1)Introduce Lu Xun and his significance in modern Chinese literature; (2)Describe one of Lu Xun’s famous works and explain its impact on society; (3)Discuss how Lu Xun’s ideas and writings continue to inspire people today. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．请根据下面所给的提示内容，写一篇60词左右的人物简介。 贝多芬 德国伟大的作曲家 1770-1827 自幼爱好音乐，钢琴弹得很好，28岁得了耳病，18年后完全聋了。在此期间他仍继续工作，他的大部分作品都出自这个时间。《第九交响曲》是他一生中最著名的作品之一。 参考词汇： 贝多芬Beethoven 德国的German 作曲家composer 聋的deaf 继续工作go on working 作品works 《第九交响曲》The Ninth Symphony 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8．2021年5月22日，“杂交水稻之父”袁隆平院士在湖南长沙与世长辞， 请根据下面所给的袁隆平院士的信息简介，写一篇英语短文。 要求： 1. 书写规范， 语法正确。 2. 不少于五句话。 Fact Box: Yuan Longping ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．在跳水界，全红婵这个名字早已家喻户晓。这个年仅17岁的女孩以其无与伦比的天赋和刻苦训练，连续夺得奥运会金牌，成为中国跳水队的传奇人物。请根据下面有关于全红婵的思维导图写一篇文章向喜欢她的外国朋友介绍一下这位体育明星。 要求： （1）你的文章必须包括思维导图中所有的要点信息，顺序不限； （2）文中不得出现你个人真实姓名和校名； （3）词数50词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Quan Hongchan is a great diving player. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。 内容包括： 1. 威廉·莎士比亚（William Shakespeare）是英国著名的剧作家和诗人。他一生中写了大约38个剧本，154首短诗，还有一些长诗。 2. 莎士比亚出生于1564年，在上学时候的莎士比亚就喜欢戏剧。所以在14岁毕业的时候，他决定成为一名演员。 3. 他于1582年结婚，有三个孩子。莎士比亚大约在1592年去了伦敦。他成了一名成功的演员，并开始写剧本。 4. 他在52岁时去世。他既富有又成功。 要求： 1. 词数：80左右 2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 能力综合实践5篇 11．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友John 想让你给他介绍一位中国音乐家。请你根据以下提示，给John 写一封电子邮件，介绍这位著名音乐家。 1. 冼星海是最伟大的古典与传统音乐作曲家之一，被称为“人民音乐家”。 2. 冼星海于1905年6月13日出生，于1945年10月30日逝世。 3. 1939年，冼星海只用几天就写出歌曲《黄河大合唱》，并因此而闻名。 4. 冼星海用传统的中国音乐来写歌。他的歌曲至今仍很受欢迎。 5. 你认为…… 参考词汇：《黄河大合唱》The Yellow River 要求： 词数：80 词左右。 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 要点齐全， 行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear John, I’m writing to tell you about _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 12．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友 Mike想了解中国的作曲家聂耳，请根据以下思维导图写一封英文邮件，介绍一下聂耳。 参考词汇： 《义勇军进行曲》March of the Volunteers 注意： 1.禁止抄袭本试卷中所有语篇内容； 2.70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, I’ m happy to hear from you. I’ d like to introduce Nie Er to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 13．每个人都有自己的偶像，相信你心中也有一颗“星”在闪烁。请根据以下要求，以“My favorite star/person”为题写一篇不少于70词的英语短文，介绍一下你最喜欢的明星/人，可以是你的父母、老师、朋友，也可以是有正能量的明星，体育明星、影视歌星、网络主播（streamer）等。 要求： 1.我最喜欢的明星/人是…… 2.我喜欢他/她的原因； 3.他/她的一些个人情况。（要求使用形容词的比较级或最高级） My favorite star/person________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．Write a short passage about “I’d like to learn from…”. (以“我想向……学习”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文) Use the following points as a reference: a. Who would you like to learn from, a model student, a famous person or someone else? b. What do you know about him or her? c. How will you change yourself to learn from him or her? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．《二泉映月》（ “The Moon over a Fountain” ）是中国民间音乐家阿炳（Ah Bing） 的代表作，是中国著名传统乐曲。以下是有关阿炳的简介，请根据以下要点提示， 简单介绍一下他。 写作要点： 1. 阿炳出生于 1893 年，逝世于 1950 年； 2. 家乡：江苏省无锡市； 3. 个人经历：早年丧母，后来跟随父亲学习鼓、二胡，12 岁时可以演奏多种乐器； 4. 34岁时失明，但并没有放弃演奏，因《二泉映月》而出名。 写作要求： 1. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确； 2. 70—80 词。 参考词汇：instrument 乐器；lose one’s eyesight 失明；give up 放弃 erhu 二胡 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 9 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 6 Famous people in history 单元主题写作满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材，分层练习） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．古今中外的名人犹如一颗颗明星一般闪耀在历史的星空中。请选择一位你了解的历史名人，谈谈你对他/她的看法，60词以上。包括但不限于以下内容： ●对他/她的简要介绍； ●他/她的主要贡献； ●他/她身上值得学习的品质。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Albert Einstein was a famous German scientist. He discovered the theory of relativity, which changed how we see time and space. He also came up with the famous equation E = mc2 which shows how energy and matter are related. I admire Einstein for his curiosity and bravery. He never stopped asking questions and showed us that it’s okay to think differently. He also believed in peace and used his fame to speak up for what was right. In conclusion, Albert Einstein was an amazing person who made the world a better place. We should learn to be curious, brave and kind, just like him. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先写一下对他/她的简要介绍； 第二步，写一下他/她的主要贡献； 第三步，最后写一下他/她身上值得学习的品质。 [亮点词汇] ①think differently不同的方式思考 ②believed in相信 ③a better place一个更好的地方 [高分句型] ①He also came up with the famous equation E = mc2 which shows how energy and matter are related.（定语从句） ②He never stopped asking questions and showed us that it’s okay to think differently.（and连接并列成分，宾语从句） 2．你的班级打算进行历史人物故事演讲比赛，请根据以下要点，介绍历史人物岳飞。内容包括以下要点： 1. 岳飞出生在一个贫穷的家庭。 2. 他从小非常喜欢看书，从书中学到了很多知识。 3. 多年以后，岳飞参军。由于他在军队中表现很优秀，他成为了一名将军。岳飞领兵作战，赢得了很多战争。 4. 你的感想…… 参考词汇：general将军，army军队 要求： 1. 词数：80词—100词左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2, 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear classmates, I would like to introduce a Chinese hero today. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear classmates, I would like to introduce a Chinese hero today. Yue Fei, a famous general in ancient China, was born in a poor family. He enjoyed reading books very much when he was very young. He read a lot of different kinds of books and learned a lot from the book. Many years later, Yue Fei joined the army and became a soldier. As a soldier, he was excellent in the army, so he became the general of the army. Yue Fei led the soldiers to fight with enemies bravely. They won many wars. Yue Fei was a great hero. We should learn from him and devote ourselves to our motherland. Thanks for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍岳飞的出生及爱好； 第二步，介绍岳飞参军及在军队的表现； 第三步，评价岳飞并表达自己的感想。 [亮点词汇] ①be born in 出生于 ②different kinds of 不同种类的 ③devote oneself to 献身于 [高分句型] He enjoyed reading books very much when he was very young.（enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事；when引导的时间状语从句） 3．孔子（Confucius）是我国古代伟大的思想家和教育家，儒家学派创始人，世界著名的文化名人之一。请根据以下信息写一篇不少于60词的小短文介绍他的生平。内容提示： 1. 孔子出生于公元前551年的鲁国。（the state of Lu） 2. 当他小的时候，他的父母双亡，但他受到良好的教育。（receive good education） 3. 在他三十多岁时，他开始教学，一直到他去世。（spend the rest of one’s life doing sth.） 4. 55岁时，周游列国寻求正确的行为准则（search for good rules of behaviour），68岁时返回鲁国。 5. 73岁时因病去世。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Confucius was born in the state of Lu in 51BC. When he was young, his parents died. But Confucius received good education. In his thirties, Confucius began to teach. He spent the rest of his life teaching. At the age of 55, Confucius began to travel around to search for good rules of behaviour. When Confucius was 68 years old, he returned to the state of Lu. He died of illness at the age of 73. Confucius is famous around the world. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题属于材料作文。要求利用所给信息介绍孔子的生平，要点要齐全，可适当增加细节描写。 2. 写作指导：写作时要用第三人称来叙述，时态使用一般过去时。注意用准确的语言将要点表达出来，并适当发挥。书写时注意条理清晰，层次分明，语言规范。 4．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Lisa来信说她最近正在学习汉语，在学习过程中遇到“程门立雪”（Cheng Men Li Xue）这一成语，不解其意。请你根据下面图片提示，用英语给她回信，简要叙述这个成语故事，并谈谈自己的理解和感悟。 要求： 1.语言规范，语句通顺，可适当发挥； 2.词数90左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：idiom 成语；during the Northern Song Dynasty 北宋时期；Cheng Yi 程颐；have a nap 小憩；disturb打扰；until 直到……为止；wake up 醒来；moved感动的 Dear Lisa, I’m glad to hear from you. In your letter, you say you don’t understand the meaning of the idiom “Cheng Men Li Xue”. Now let me tell you the story about it. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Lisa, I’m glad to hear from you. In your letter, you say you don’t understand the meaning of the idiom“Cheng Men Li Xue”. Now let me tell you the story about it. During the Northern Song Dynasty, there was a famous teacher called Cheng Yi. One day, two young men came to the teacher’s house to learn from him. One of them was Yang Shi. It was snowing heavily and the teacher was having a nap. The other man said, “Let’s enter and ask the teacher for help.” But Yang said, “No, the teacher is having a nap. We should wait outside and not disturb him until he wakes up.” After some time, the teacher woke up. When he found the two young men standing outside in the big snow, he was moved and asked them to come in. But Yang said, “I’m sorry to trouble you.” The story tells us that we should respect our teachers. I hope it can help you! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般将来时”； ③提示：根据图片中所给的提示叙述“程门立雪”这一故事，并谈谈自己的见解，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作目的（已给出）。 第二步：具体讲述“程门立雪”这一故事。 第三步：表达自己的见解和感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①learn from向……学习 ②have a nap打盹 ③wake up醒来 [高分句型] ①When he found the two young men standing outside in the big snow, he was moved and asked them to come in. (时间状语从句) ②The story tells us that we should respect our teachers. (宾语从句) 5．书面表达 根据下面提供的有关海伦·凯勒的经历以及你对她的了解, 写一篇有关她的英语文章。80词左右。提示： 6 months old—can say a few words 19 months old—be badly ill；can't see, hear or talk 6 years old—have a teacher, learn to read through her hands grow up—become a writer, the first book—The Story of My Life ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Helen Keller was a very famous writer. She was clever when__she__was__young.  She could say a few words when she was six months old. But when she was 19 months old，she was badly ill，and after that she could not see，hear or talk. Luckily she had a good teacher at__the__age__of six. She learned to read through her hands. Then when she grew up，she became a writer. Her first book was The Story of My Life. Her story encourages people around the world. 【详解】这是一篇材料作文，写一篇有关海伦·凯勒的经历。时态为一般过去时，人称为第三人称，在某人多少岁时，既可以用when引导的时间状语从句，也可以用at the age of在表达。在文章的开头先用一句话整体描述，交代海伦·凯勒的职业，然后根据要点提示，分时间段来介绍她的经历，最后用一句话来概括。在写作过程中，可适当选择恰当的连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．学校读书会组织开展“与名人对话”活动，鼓励学生积极阅读鲁迅先生的作品。鲁迅先生是中国现代文学的奠基人之一，他不仅是一位作家，也是一位思想家和革命家，对中国文化和社会产生了深远的影响。鲁迅的作品《朝花夕拾》 (Dawn Blossoms Plucked at Dusk),《呐喊》 (Call to Arms)，《彷徨》 (Hesitation)等，至今仍被广泛阅读和研究。请以“A conversation with Lu Xun: Insights from a Literary Giant”为题，根据提示写一篇短文，不少于60词。Suggested questions: (1)Introduce Lu Xun and his significance in modern Chinese literature; (2)Describe one of Lu Xun’s famous works and explain its impact on society; (3)Discuss how Lu Xun’s ideas and writings continue to inspire people today. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： A conversation with Lu Xun: Insights from a Literary Giant Lu Xun was a significant writer in modern China, known for his deep insights into society and his critical spirit. One of his most famous works is Dawn Blossoms Plucked at Dusk, a collection of memoir essays that take us through his childhood and youth. These essays not only tell personal growth stories but also reflect the social landscape of that era. If I could have a conversation with Lu Xun, I would ask him about the inspiration behind his writing and how he looked upon the world around him. I would also inquire about the message he hoped to convey through his vivid and poignant memories. It would be fascinating to hear his thoughts on how literature can be a mirror to society and a tool for change. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、介绍鲁迅及其在现代中国文学中的重要性； 第二步、描述鲁迅的一部著名作品并解释其对社会的影响； 第三步、讨论鲁迅的思想和作品如何继续激励当代人。 [亮点词汇] ①not only…but also不仅……而且 ②have a conversation交谈 ③hope to do sth.希望做某事 [高分句型] ①One of his most famous works is Dawn Blossoms Plucked at Dusk, a collection of memoir essays that take us through his childhood and youth.(one of+the+形容词最高级+名词复数) 7．请根据下面所给的提示内容，写一篇60词左右的人物简介。 贝多芬 德国伟大的作曲家 1770-1827 自幼爱好音乐，钢琴弹得很好，28岁得了耳病，18年后完全聋了。在此期间他仍继续工作，他的大部分作品都出自这个时间。《第九交响曲》是他一生中最著名的作品之一。 参考词汇： 贝多芬Beethoven 德国的German 作曲家composer 聋的deaf 继续工作go on working 作品works 《第九交响曲》The Ninth Symphony __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Beethoven was a great German composer. He was born in 1770 and died in 1827. When he was young, he liked music and played the piano very well. At the age of 28, there was something wrong with his ears, and 18 years later, he was deaf. During the time, he still went on working. He wrote most of his works. The Ninth Symphony was one of his most famous works in his life. 【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍贝多芬。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：He was……，When he was ……,there was something wrong with……，he still went on……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了贝多芬是德国伟大的作曲家，接下来介绍他生平经历，最后指出《第九交响曲》是他一生中最著名的作品之一。此处play the piano, at the age of,  go on doing sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。 8．2021年5月22日，“杂交水稻之父”袁隆平院士在湖南长沙与世长辞， 请根据下面所给的袁隆平院士的信息简介，写一篇英语短文。 要求： 1. 书写规范， 语法正确。 2. 不少于五句话。 Fact Box: Yuan Longping ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                                               Fact Box: Yuan Longping      Yuan Longping is a famous scientist. He was born in Beijing in 1930. He developed a new kind of rice in 1976. He travelled around the world and taught people to grow rice in 1980. He won World Food Prize in 2004. He lived to be ninety-one and died in 2021. I think Mr. Yuan is a great person. He is so selfless and hard-working that I respect him very much. I will never forget him. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当增加细节描述，写作时保持主谓一致。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍袁隆平的生平事迹； 第二步，谈谈对袁隆平的评价。 [亮点词汇] ①be born in出生于 ②teach sb. to do sth.教某人做某事 ③live to be活到……岁 [高分句型] ①I think Mr. Yuan is a great person. (宾语从句) ②He is so selfless and hard-working that I respect him very much. (so…that…“如此……以至于……”) 9．在跳水界，全红婵这个名字早已家喻户晓。这个年仅17岁的女孩以其无与伦比的天赋和刻苦训练，连续夺得奥运会金牌，成为中国跳水队的传奇人物。请根据下面有关于全红婵的思维导图写一篇文章向喜欢她的外国朋友介绍一下这位体育明星。 要求： （1）你的文章必须包括思维导图中所有的要点信息，顺序不限； （2）文中不得出现你个人真实姓名和校名； （3）词数50词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Quan Hongchan is a great diving player. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Quan Hongchan is a great diving player. She was born on March 28th. Her hobby is dancing and her favorite subject is math. She studies at Zhanjiang Sports School. In her family, there are her grandmother, grandfather, mother, father, two sisters and two brothers. She has achieved great success in diving and is well-known all over the world. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据图片所列出的要点提示介绍全红婵，注意避免语法错误，确保行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：点明全红婵是一名优秀的跳水运动员； 第二步：根据图片要点提示，具体介绍全红婵的生日、爱好、家人信息等； 第三步：介绍全红婵的成就和知名度。 [亮点词汇] ①be born出生 ②be well-known著名 ③all over the world全世界 [高分句型] ①Her hobby is dancing and her favorite subject is math.（and连接的并列句） ②In her family, there are her grandmother, grandfather, mother, father, two sisters and two brothers. （there be句型） 10．请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。 内容包括： 1. 威廉·莎士比亚（William Shakespeare）是英国著名的剧作家和诗人。他一生中写了大约38个剧本，154首短诗，还有一些长诗。 2. 莎士比亚出生于1564年，在上学时候的莎士比亚就喜欢戏剧。所以在14岁毕业的时候，他决定成为一名演员。 3. 他于1582年结婚，有三个孩子。莎士比亚大约在1592年去了伦敦。他成了一名成功的演员，并开始写剧本。 4. 他在52岁时去世。他既富有又成功。 要求： 1. 词数：80左右 2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： William Shakespeare was a famous English writer of plays and poems. He wrote about thirty-eight plays, 154 short poems and a few long poems in his life. Shakespeare was born in 1564. At school he liked plays, so he decided to be an actor when he finished school at fourteen. He got married in 1582 and had three children. Shakespeare went to London in about 1592. He became a successful actor and began to write plays. William Shakespeare died at the age of fifty-two. He was rich and successful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意核对材料中莎士比亚在各年龄段的经历以及具体年份。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍莎士比亚的地位、作品； 第二步，介绍莎士比亚的人生经历； 第三步，对莎士比亚进行评价。 [亮点词汇] ①be born in出生于 ②decide to do sth.决定做某事 ③begin to do sth.开始做某事 [高分句型] At school he liked plays, so he decided to be an actor when he finished school at fourteen.（when引导的时间状语从句） 能力综合实践5篇 11．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友John 想让你给他介绍一位中国音乐家。请你根据以下提示，给John 写一封电子邮件，介绍这位著名音乐家。 1. 冼星海是最伟大的古典与传统音乐作曲家之一，被称为“人民音乐家”。 2. 冼星海于1905年6月13日出生，于1945年10月30日逝世。 3. 1939年，冼星海只用几天就写出歌曲《黄河大合唱》，并因此而闻名。 4. 冼星海用传统的中国音乐来写歌。他的歌曲至今仍很受欢迎。 5. 你认为…… 参考词汇：《黄河大合唱》The Yellow River 要求： 词数：80 词左右。 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 要点齐全， 行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear John, I’m writing to tell you about _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear John, I’m writing to tell you about Xian Xinghai. Xian Xinghai is one of the greatest composers of classical and traditional music, known as the “people’s musician”. Xian Xinghai was born on June 13, 1905 and died on October 30, 1945. Xian Xinghai became famous for writing the Yellow River Cantata in just a few days in 1939. Xian Xinghai uses traditional Chinese music to write songs. His songs are still popular today. I think he is one of the greatest musicians in China. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：一般过去时为主； ③提示：结合写作要点，介绍著名音乐家冼星海，可适当加入细节，不要遗漏要点，确保行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作目的； 第二步：根据所给的要点介绍冼星海的信息和成就； 第三步：表达自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①known as被称为 ②became famous for因……而出名 [高分句型] ①Xian Xinghai is one of the greatest composers of classical and traditional music, known as the “people’s musician”. (形容词最高级句型) ②I think he is one of the greatest musicians in China. (宾语从句) 12．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友 Mike想了解中国的作曲家聂耳，请根据以下思维导图写一封英文邮件，介绍一下聂耳。 参考词汇： 《义勇军进行曲》March of the Volunteers 注意： 1.禁止抄袭本试卷中所有语篇内容； 2.70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, I’ m happy to hear from you. I’ d like to introduce Nie Er to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, I’ m happy to hear from you. I’ d like to introduce Nie Er to you. Nie Er was born in Yunnan Province in 1912. In 1927, he began to learn to play the violin. In 1931, he studied music in Shanghai and he studied very hard. In 1932, he started to write music and wrote the famous March of the Volunteers in 1935. Unfortunately, he died in Japan in the same year at the age of 23. Nie Er was a great musician and composer. He wrote more than 30 compositions in his life. His works are still popular today. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍作曲家聂耳的生平事迹； 第二步，评价并总结聂耳这一生。 [亮点词汇] ①be born in 出生于…… ②play the violin 拉小提琴 ③at the age of 在……岁时 [高分句型] In 1931, he studied music in Shanghai and he studied very hard.（and连接的并列句） 13．每个人都有自己的偶像，相信你心中也有一颗“星”在闪烁。请根据以下要求，以“My favorite star/person”为题写一篇不少于70词的英语短文，介绍一下你最喜欢的明星/人，可以是你的父母、老师、朋友，也可以是有正能量的明星，体育明星、影视歌星、网络主播（streamer）等。 要求： 1.我最喜欢的明星/人是…… 2.我喜欢他/她的原因； 3.他/她的一些个人情况。（要求使用形容词的比较级或最高级） My favorite star/person________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: My favorite star My favorite star is Jackie Chan. He is a great actor. I like him very much because he works hard. I think his movies are the most exciting and he is much friendlier than other movie stars. Most of his movies are very popular. Jackie Chan is one of the most successful stars in the world. He is living in Hong Kong now. He likes Beijing Opera very much. He has so many fans, including me. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求以“My favorite star/person”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍最喜欢的明星是谁； 第二步，具体介绍为什么喜欢他/她； 第三步，介绍他/她的一些个人情况。 [亮点词汇] ①very much非常 ②works hard工作努力 ③in the world在世界上 [高分句型] ①I like him very much because he works hard.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②I think his movies are the most exciting and he is much friendlier than other movie stars.（省略that的宾语从句和并列句） 14．Write a short passage about “I’d like to learn from…”. (以“我想向……学习”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文) Use the following points as a reference: a. Who would you like to learn from, a model student, a famous person or someone else? b. What do you know about him or her? c. How will you change yourself to learn from him or her? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I’d like to learn from Zhao Liying As is well-known to us, Zhao Liying is one of the most famous actresses in China. And she is also the very person that I’d like to learn from. As far as I know, before she became popular across the country, she played many unimportant roles in many soap operas and films. What’s more, many people said that she could never play a leading role because of her round face. However, she never gave up. She kept learning and tried to improve her acting skills. Finally, she succeeded. Sometimes, it is easy for me to give up whenever I am in trouble. From her, I have learned that I can never achieve my dream in this way. From now on, I will try to solve problems bravely no matter how big or how small they are. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③ 提示：写作内容提示已给出，考生要注意不要遗漏内容提示中的信息，针对内容提示的问题展开文章。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己想要向谁学习； 第二步，介绍关于他或她，自己了解什么； 第三步，介绍将如何改变自己，去向他或她学习。 [亮点词汇] ①as far as I know就我所知 ②across from the country全国各地 ③what’s more此外 ④give up放弃 [高分句型] ①As is well-known to us, Zhao Liying is one of the most famous actresses in China.（as引导的定语从句） ②As far as I know, before she became popular across the country, she played many unimportant roles in many soap operas and films. (before引导的时间状语从句) 15．《二泉映月》（ “The Moon over a Fountain” ）是中国民间音乐家阿炳（Ah Bing） 的代表作，是中国著名传统乐曲。以下是有关阿炳的简介，请根据以下要点提示， 简单介绍一下他。 写作要点： 1. 阿炳出生于 1893 年，逝世于 1950 年； 2. 家乡：江苏省无锡市； 3. 个人经历：早年丧母，后来跟随父亲学习鼓、二胡，12 岁时可以演奏多种乐器； 4. 34岁时失明，但并没有放弃演奏，因《二泉映月》而出名。 写作要求： 1. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确； 2. 70—80 词。 参考词汇：instrument 乐器；lose one’s eyesight 失明；give up 放弃 erhu 二胡 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文     Abing was one of the greatest Chinese folk musicians. He was famous for his The Moon Over a Fountain. He was born in Wuxi, Jiangsu Province in 1893 and died in 1950. His mother died when he was young. And he started to learn to play the drums and erhu from his father. At the age of twelve, he could play all kinds of instruments. When he was thirty-four, he lost his eyesight, but he didn’t give up playing. What a great man! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山介绍阿炳是中国最伟大的民间音乐家之一； 第二步，从出生及去世时间、家乡、个人经历等方面具体介绍阿炳； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be famous for因……而著名 ②be born in出生在某地 ③give up放弃 [高分句型] ①When he was thirty-four, he lost his eyesight, but he didn’t give up playing. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②What a great man!(what引导的感叹句) 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 1 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$