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Reading for Writing
新人教选必四
Unit 3
Sea Exploration
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教学目的
By the end of this period,you will be able to:
1.understand the basic structure of an argumentative essay.
2.distinguish arguments and evidence in the text.
3.master the language that expresses agreement and disagreement.
4.write an argumentative essay.
Lead-in:
How many species can you find? What does it show?
What are the advantages and disadvantages of sea exploration?
benefits :
1. Get new sources of food .
2. We can get fossil fuels such as oil , gas and coal .
negative effects :
1. Spilling oil into the sea causes pollution.
2. Cause plastic pollution.
pros
cons
sea pollution
sea animals extinction
oil leaking
discover new species
detect energy resources
predict potential disasters
Reading:
Skim the two texts and answer the questions below.
1. What is the text type of the two texts?
A. Narration (记叙文). B. Exposition (说明文).
C. Practical writing (应用文).D. Argumentation (议论文).
2. What are the three parts in argumentative essay?
∙ argument论点;
∙ evidence论据;
∙ restatement重申/recommendation推荐/
a call to action号召
1. What are the two authors’ opinions about the sea exploration ?
opposed
supportive
Skim Text 1 and divide it into three parts.
Argument
(part 1)
Evidence
(part 2)
Restatement
(part 3)
Para 1
Para 2~4
Para 5
Sea exploration caused problems
Pollution
Mining
Overfishing
Less exploration
& more protection
argument evidence
Exploration causes pollution. Deepwater Horizon oil spill
深海地平线号漏油事件
Plastic pollution
argument evidence
Mining for resources is damaging.
1.Burning fossil fuels adds to climate change.
2.It hurts the Arctic.
argument evidence
Overfishing is an issue. 1.Whales and dolphins are hunted.
2.Banned, but some countries still doing it ,such as Japan.
Check the arguments分论点 and evidence论据 in text 1.
1
argument
evidence
2
1. Exploration causes pollution.
∙ Deepwater Horizon oil spill
∙ Plastic pollution
2. Mining for resources is damaging.
∙ It hurts the Arctic.
∙ Burning fossil fuels adds to climate change.
3. Overfishing is an issue.
∙ Whales and dolphins are hunted.
∙ Banned, but some countries still doing it.
3
Style:
Against the sea exploration
argumentative essay
Para. 1
Argument
Sea exploration caused problems
Para. 2-4
pollution
mining
overfishing
Facts:
Deepwater Horizon oil spill;
Plastic pollution
Cause and effect:
It hurts the Arctic;
Burning fossil fuels adds to climate change.
Example:
Whales and dolphins are hunted;
Statistics:
Banned in 1982, but some countries still doing it.
Para. 5
Restatement
Less exploration and more protection.
Language features: using facts, examples & statistics; persuasive
Argument
Evidence
Sea exploration is important
Scientific research
Resource management
The survival of mankind
Recommendation
manage the balance between sea protection and economic needs
Skim Text 2 and divide it into three parts.
argument evidence
Sea exploration is important for our future . 1.Scientific research ships can help address 设法解决important issues like climate change.
argument evidence
Understanding more about the sea will also help us manage its resources better.
1.Logging new species, new medicines,
food resources and energy.
2.Predict events such as earthquakes.
Text 2
海星具有解毒散结、
和胃止痛、
软坚散结之功效。
常用于甲状腺肿大、
胃痛泛酸、腹泻、
中耳炎等症。
海马具有强身健体、补肾、舒筋活络、消炎止痛、镇静安神、止咳平喘等药用功效。
argument evidence
We need new resources for future development. 1.Vast amounts of resources may be under the sea and ice,not just oil and gas but also valuable minerals 矿物质.
gas
coal
oil
rock with oil
Check the arguments分论点 and evidence论据 in text 2.
1
2
argument
evidence
1. Sea exploration is important for our future.
∙ Scientific research ships can help address important issues like climate change.
2. Understanding more about the sea will also help us manage its resources better.
∙ New medicines, food resources and energy.
∙ Predict events such as earthquakes.
3
3. We need new resources for future development.
∙ Vast amounts of resources may be under the sea and ice.
For the sea exploration
Style:
argumentative essay
Para. 1
Argument
Evidence 1
We must explore the ocean.
Sea exploration is important.
Example: Scientific research ships can help address important issues like climate change.
Para. 2-3
Evidence
2&3
Para. 4
Restatement
Keep a balance between sea exploration / economic needs and environmental risks.
It helps us manage its resources better.
We need new resources for future development.
Examples:
New medicines, food
resources and energy.
Predict events such as
earthquakes.
Explanation:
Vast amounts of resources may be under the sea and ice.
Language features: opposition to the affirmative
charts
Which one supports which text?
text2
text1
argument
evidence 1
facts
evidence 2
cause and effect
evidence 3
examples
restatement
Style: argumentative essay
argument
evidence 1
example
evidence 2
examples
evidence 3
explanation
restatement
How to write an argumentative essay?
Argument
Evidence
Restatement
Take Text1 as an example
Sea exploration caused problems
Pollution
Mining
Overfishing
More protection and less exploration
Writing:
引言段:简单阐释要讨论的主题。
主体段:一般可提出两、三个论据,并分别进行阐述。
结论段:往往用几句话提出自己的看法、意见或建议,从而结
束文章。要注意与引言段呼应,但不能照搬前面的原话。
议论文的结构一般分为三部分:
What is your opinion about the sea exploration?
I’m in favor of the sea exploration
I’m against the sea exploration
because it brings about some problems
such as marine pollution, mining and overfishing.
because it can bring benefits to human lives
such as food resources and energy.
sea exploration is important not only for protecting the oceans and marine life but also for obtaining natural resources to sustain human life.
Do you have any evidence to support your point?
Brainstorm
Brainstorm
Evidence to support your point.
evidence
Evidence 1:
Exploring is not the same as exploiting.
Evidence 2:
Understanding the sea is key to protecting them.
Evidence 3: The sea is critical to human life.
How to write an argumentative essay about sea exploration?
Brainstorm
An argumentative essay
structure
Point
Evidence
Explanation
Link
words and phrases
language features
using facts,
examples & statistics; persuasive
Writing an argumentative essay
假设你是李华,最近你班就“人类是否应该进行海洋探索”进行了讨论。请根据讨论结果,写一封信给某英文报社的编辑来报道此事。
赞成的理由 反对的理由 你的看法
1.获取更多的海底资源;
2.提高对地球上生命的理解。 1.造成海洋污染,导致海洋生物死亡;
2.破坏生态系统。 ……
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
第一步 审题谋篇
第二步 遣词造句
核心词汇(含本单元词汇)
1.探索/开发海洋_____________________
2.支持_____________________
3.反对___________________________
4.食物和能量的来源________________________
5.反对者___________________
6.毁坏_____________________
7.杀害_____________________
8.怜悯_____________________
9.海生的;海的_____________
explore/exploit oceans
in favour of/be for/support
be against/object to/be opposed to
sources of food and energy
opponent
destroy/ruin
murder
mercy
marine
1.人们应该广泛探索海洋吗?
____________________________ extensively?
2.昨天,我们班对此进行了激烈的讨论。
Yesterday our class______________________________.
3.由于海洋探索使得发现新的食物和能源资源成为可能,并且提高了我们对地球上生命的了解,一些人支持海洋探索。_________________________________ discover new sources of food and energy and improves our understanding of life on the earth, ______________________.
Should people explore oceans
had a heated discussion about it
As sea exploration makes it possible to
some are in favour of it
连词成句(含本单元句型)
4.海洋探索的反对者认为这可能会导致如此多的污染以至于会破坏水下生态系统。___________________________________________________________________________ it can destroy the underwater ecosystem.
5.如此多的海洋动物已被残忍地杀掉,海洋物种的多样性正在被破坏。
So many marine animals ______________________________ and the diversity of sea species is being destroyed.
6.在我看来,平衡环境风险和经济需求可以保证和谐的海洋探索。Personally,____________________________________________can guarantee harmonious sea exploration.
Opponents of sea exploration think that it may bring about so much pollution that
have been murdered without mercy
balancing environmental risks with economic needs
1.请把句1和句2合成whether引导的宾语从句。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.请把句5用with的复合结构改写。
_____________________________________________, the diversity of sea species is being destroyed.
Yesterday our class had a heated discussion about whether people should explore oceans extensively.
With so many marine animals murdered without mercy
第三步 句式升级
第四步 组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加上联想内容,组成一篇英语短文。
Dear Editor,
Yesterday our class had a heated discussion about whether people should explore oceans extensively.(高分句型一)(说明议论的话题)
As sea exploration makes it possible to discover new sources of food and energy and improves our understanding of life on the earth, some are
in favour of (高分词汇) it.(高分句型二)Opponents(高分词汇) of sea exploration think that it may bring about so much pollution that it can destroy(高分词汇) the underwater ecosystem. Besides, with so many marine(高分词汇) animals murdered without mercy(高分词汇),the diversity of sea species is being destroyed. (高分句型三)(正反方观点及其理由)
Personally, balancing environmental risks with economic needs can guarantee harmonious(高分词汇) sea exploration.(高分句型四)(表明自己的观点)
Yours,
Li Hua
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Unit 3
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