Unit 2 Section Ⅶ Writing(课件PPT+Word教案)-【步步高】2024-2025学年高一英语必修第三册教师用书（外研版2019）

Section Ⅶ　Writing 本单元的写作任务是写一篇人物传记，这属于记叙文。传记是记载人物生平事迹的一种文体，大多按照时间、空间或逻辑顺序。传记写作多采用倒叙法，先对人物进行总体的简单介绍，然后介绍其出生、成长历程和成就、思想、品德等，最后进行评论，表达作者的看法。传记一般不虚构，纪实性是传记的基本要求。 一、格式 此类文章以人物为中心组织材料，围绕这个人物写一件或几件事，一般按照时间顺序。写人物传记时要重点描述其出生年月、主要事迹以及人们的评价等。文章一般可采用“总——分——总”的结构。 二、时态和人称 因描写的事情都是过去发生的事，所以通常用一般过去时。介绍的是他人的经历，应用第三人称。 1．开头部分常用表达 Known as a famous...，he/she was born in... 作为著名的……，他/她出生于…… Born in...，she/he is known as... 出生于……，她/他被称为…… Born into a poor family in...，he/she showed great interest in... 他/她出生在……的一个贫穷家庭，对……表现出极大的兴趣。 Having a gift for...，she/he made up her/his mind to become... 对……极有天赋，她/他下定决心要成为…… He/She was one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century. 他/她是20世纪最伟大的科学家之一。 2．主体部分常用表达 He/She studied at a local high school and graduated from... 他/她曾就读于当地一所高中，毕业于…… By the age of...，he taught himself advanced mathematics. 在他……岁时，他自学了高等数学。 He was admitted to...in the year of...，and graduated as a．..major. 他在……年被……录取，作为……专业学生毕业。 When at university，he majored in...and then went abroad for further study，receiving his PhD/doctor’s degree. 大学时，他主修……，然后出国深造，获得博士学位。 She/He was highly thought of because of her/his achievements in... 她/他因在……方面的成就而受到高度评价。 She has been devoting all her time to researching into... 她一直致力于……的研究。 Thanks to her creative work，China is playing a leading role in... 多亏了她创造性的工作，中国在……领域处于领先地位。 3．结尾部分常用表达 Such is...，a simple man who has made great achievements in the field of... 这就是……，一个在……领域取得巨大成就的普通人。 ...made great contributions to the development of science，which paved the way for further research. ……对科学的发展做出了巨大的贡献，为进一步的研究铺平了道路。 He has set a good example to us and his story tells us that... 他给我们树立了一个好榜样，他的故事告诉我们…… From her，I realise that as long as we keep on trying，we will achieve our dream. 从她身上，我意识到只要我们不断努力就会实现梦想。 He/She is such a learned/strong-willed person that we all admire/respect him/her. 他/她是如此博学/意志坚定的人，我们都很钦佩/尊敬他/她。 请根据教材P30的信息写一篇英语作文，对中国首位获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖的科学家屠呦呦作简单介绍。 第一步　审题谋篇 审题 写作要求是介绍人物——屠呦呦。写作时应注意下面几点： 1．确定文体：这是一篇人物传记。 2．主体时态：以一般过去时为主。 3．主体人称：以第三人称为主。 谋篇 第一段：开门见山，简要介绍人物以及主要成就； 第二段：具体介绍人物的主要经历； 第三段：进行评论和总结。 第二步　遣词造句 核心词汇(含本单元词汇) 1．第一次 for the first time 2．终身兼首席研究员 a tenured and chief researcher 3．疟疾的治疗方法 a treatment for malaria 4．提取extract 5．贡献 contribution 6．被授予 be presented with 7．被提名为 be nominated for 8．把时间和精力贡献给…… devote one’s time and energy to... 连词成句 1．2015年，中国科学家首次获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖。 In 2015，for the first time，a Chinese scientist won the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine. 2．她在1930年12月30日出生于浙江省宁波市。 She was born in Ningbo，Zhejiang Province on 30 December 1930. 3．1951年至1955年，屠呦呦就读于北京医学院。 Tu Youyou studied at Beijing Medical College from 1951 to 1955. 4．1955年起，她一直在中国中医科学院工作，如今任终身兼首席研究员。 Since 1955，she has been working at China Academy of Chinese Medical Sciences and now as a tenured and chief researcher. 5．1969年，她担任一个研究小组的组长，该小组旨在发现疟疾的治疗方法。 In 1969，she worked as the leader of a research team that aimed to discover a treatment for malaria. 6．到1972年，她成功地从一种中草药中提取出了能有效对抗疟疾的青蒿素。 By 1972，she had managed to extract qinghaosu from a Chinese herb，which is effective in fighting malaria. 7．由于她的巨大贡献，她在85岁时获得了诺贝尔奖。 Because of her great contribution，she was awarded the Nobel Prize at the age of 85. 8．2019年，她被提名为“20世纪最伟大的人”。 In 2019，she was nominated for “The Greatest Person of the 20th Century”． 9．她广受钦佩，因为她把大部分时间和精力都用于医学研究。 She is widely admired because she devotes most of her time and energy to medical research. 10．这就是屠呦呦，一位为全世界人民的健康做出巨大贡献的伟大科学家。 Such is Tu Youyou，a great scientist who has made great contributions to peoples’ health all over the world. 第三步　句式升级 1．用分词作状语合并句2、3。 Born in Ningbo，Zhejiang Province on 30 December 1930，Tu Youyou studied at Beijing Medical College from 1951 to 1955. 2．用分词作定语改写句5。 In 1969，she worked as the leader of a research team aiming to discover a treatment for malaria. 3．将句7改成强调句型。 It was because of her great contribution that she was awarded the Nobel Prize at the age of 85. 第四步　组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。 参考范文 In 2015，for the first time，a Chinese scientist won the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine.She is Tu Youyou. Born in Ningbo，Zhejiang Province on 30 December 1930，Tu Youyou studied at Beijing Medical College from 1951 to 1955.Since 1955，she has been working at China Academy of Chinese Medical Sciences and now as a tenured and chief researcher.In 1969，she worked as the leader of a research team aiming to discover a treatment for malaria.By 1972，she had managed to extract qinghaosu from a Chinese herb，which is effective in fighting malaria.It was because of her great contribution that she was awarded the Nobel Prize at the age of 85.In 2019，she was nominated for “The Greatest Person of the 20th Century”． She is widely admired because she devotes most of her time and energy to medical research.Such is Tu Youyou，a great scientist who has made great contributions to peoples’ health all over the world. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Section Ⅶ Writing Unit 2 Making a difference 本单元的写作任务是写一篇人物传记，这属于记叙文。传记是记载人物生平事迹的一种文体，大多按照时间、空间或逻辑顺序。传记写作多采用倒叙法，先对人物进行总体的简单介绍，然后介绍其出生、成长历程和成就、思想、品德等，最后进行评论，表达作者的看法。传记一般不虚构，纪实性是传记的基本要求。 写作指导 一、格式 此类文章以人物为中心组织材料，围绕这个人物写一件或几件事，一般按照时间顺序。写人物传记时要重点描述其出生年月、主要事迹以及人们的评价等。文章一般可采用“总——分——总”的结构。 二、时态和人称 因描写的事情都是过去发生的事，所以通常用一般过去时。介绍的是他人的经历，应用第三人称。 1.开头部分常用表达 Known as a famous...，he/she was born in... 作为著名的……，他/她出生于…… Born in...，she/he is known as... 出生于……，她/他被称为…… Born into a poor family in...，he/she showed great interest in... 他/她出生在……的一个贫穷家庭，对……表现出极大的兴趣。 常用表达 Having a gift for...，she/he made up her/his mind to become... 对……极有天赋，她/他下定决心要成为…… He/She was one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century. 他/她是20世纪最伟大的科学家之一。 2.主体部分常用表达 He/She studied at a local high school and graduated from... 他/她曾就读于当地一所高中，毕业于…… By the age of...，he taught himself advanced mathematics. 在他……岁时，他自学了高等数学。 He was admitted to...in the year of...，and graduated as a...major. 他在……年被……录取，作为……专业学生毕业。 When at university，he majored in...and then went abroad for further study，receiving his PhD/doctor’s degree. 大学时，他主修……，然后出国深造，获得博士学位。 She/He was highly thought of because of her/his achievements in... 她/他因在……方面的成就而受到高度评价。 She has been devoting all her time to researching into... 她一直致力于……的研究。 Thanks to her creative work，China is playing a leading role in... 多亏了她创造性的工作，中国在……领域处于领先地位。 3.结尾部分常用表达 Such is...，a simple man who has made great achievements in the field of... 这就是……，一个在……领域取得巨大成就的普通人。 ...made great contributions to the development of science，which paved the way for further research. ……对科学的发展做出了巨大的贡献，为进一步的研究铺平了道路。 He has set a good example to us and his story tells us that... 他给我们树立了一个好榜样，他的故事告诉我们…… From her，I realise that as long as we keep on trying，we will achieve our dream. 从她身上，我意识到只要我们不断努力就会实现梦想。 He/She is such a learned/strong-willed person that we all admire/respect him/her. 他/她是如此博学/意志坚定的人，我们都很钦佩/尊敬他/她。 分步演练 请根据教材P30的信息写一篇英语作文，对中国首位获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖的科学家屠呦呦作简单介绍。 第一步　审题谋篇 审题 写作要求是介绍人物——屠呦呦。写作时应注意下面几点： 1.确定文体：这是一篇人物传记。 2.主体时态：以一般过去时为主。 3.主体人称：以第三人称为主。 谋篇 第一段：开门见山，简要介绍人物以及主要成就； 第二段：具体介绍人物的主要经历； 第三段：进行评论和总结。 _______________ _____________________________ _______________________ ________ ______________ _________________ ________________ ______________________________ 第二步　遣词造句 核心词汇(含本单元词汇) 1.第一次 2.终身兼首席研究员 3.疟疾的治疗方法 4.提取 5.贡献 6.被授予 7.被提名为 8.把时间和精力贡献给…… for the first time a tenured and chief researcher a treatment for malaria extract contribution be presented with be nominated for devote one’s time and energy to... 连词成句 1.2015年，中国科学家首次获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖。 In 2015，　　　　　　　　，a Chinese scientist won the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine. 2.她在1930年12月30日出生于浙江省宁波市。 ________________________，Zhejiang Province on 30 December 1930. 3.1951年至1955年，屠呦呦就读于北京医学院。 Tu Youyou studied at Beijing Medical College . for the first time She was born in Ningbo from 1951 to 1955 4.1955年起，她一直在中国中医科学院工作，如今任终身兼首席研究员。 Since 1955， at China Academy of Chinese Medical Sciences and now . 5.1969年，她担任一个研究小组的组长，该小组旨在发现疟疾的治疗方法。 In 1969，she worked as the leader of a research team that _____________ ______________________________. 6.到1972年，她成功地从一种中草药中提取出了能有效对抗疟疾的青蒿素。 By 1972，she qinghaosu from a Chinese herb，which is effective in fighting malaria. she has been working as a tenured and chief researcher aimed to discover a treatment for malaria had managed to extract 7.由于她的巨大贡献，她在85岁时获得了诺贝尔奖。 Because of her great contribution，she _____________________________ ______________. 8.2019年，她被提名为“20世纪最伟大的人”。 In 2019，she “The Greatest Person of the 20th Century”. 9.她广受钦佩，因为她把大部分时间和精力都用于医学研究。 She is widely admired because she _________________________________ ___________________. was awarded the Nobel Prize at the age of 85 was nominated for devotes most of her time and energy to medical research 10.这就是屠呦呦，一位为全世界人民的健康做出巨大贡献的伟大科学家。 Such is Tu Youyou，a great scientist _______________________________ __________________________________. who has made great contributions to peoples’ health all over the world 第三步　句式升级 1.用分词作状语合并句2、3。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.用分词作定语改写句5。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Born in Ningbo，Zhejiang Province on 30 December 1930，Tu Youyou studied at Beijing Medical College from 1951 to 1955. In 1969，she worked as the leader of a research team aiming to discover a treatment for malaria. 3.将句7改成强调句型。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ It was because of her great contribution that she was awarded the Nobel Prize at the age of 85. 第四步　组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。 参考范文 In 2015，for the first time，a Chinese scientist won the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine.She is Tu Youyou. Born in Ningbo，Zhejiang Province on 30 December 1930，Tu Youyou studied at Beijing Medical College from 1951 to 1955.Since 1955，she has been working at China Academy of Chinese Medical Sciences and now as a tenured and chief researcher.In 1969，she worked as the leader of a research team aiming to discover a treatment for malaria.By 1972，she had managed to extract qinghaosu from a Chinese herb， which is effective in fighting malaria.It was because of her great contribution that she was awarded the Nobel Prize at the age of 85.In 2019，she was nominated for “The Greatest Person of the 20th Century”. She is widely admired because she devotes most of her time and energy to medical research.Such is Tu Youyou，a great scientist who has made great contributions to peoples’ health all over the world. $$