Unit 2 Section Ⅴ Writing(课件PPT)-【精讲精练】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第三册（人教版2019）

Section Ⅴ　Writing 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 栏目导航 写作培优 妙笔生花 01 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 01 写作培优 妙笔生花 栏目导航 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 谢谢观看 栏目导航 Unit 2　Morals and Virtues 1 如何写道德寓言故事的评论 寓言往往以比喻性的故事寄寓意味深长的道理。寓言故事评论以评论为主，主要通过对故事内容折射出的寓意作点评，使读者领悟其中的内涵以达到受教育的目的。写作时要力求语言简练、内容概括全面、寓意表达清晰。 [文章架构] [亮点词汇] ①comment评论 ②recommend推荐 ③highlight强调 ④theme主题 ⑤lesson教训 ⑥principle 道德原则 ⑦be recognized as被认可为 ⑧learn from从……中学到 ⑨impress upon/on使……牢记；给……留下深刻印象 ⑩take responsibility for对……负责任 ⑪be successful in在……方面成功 [高级句式] 段首句 ①This is a fable about how neighbors get along. 这是一则关于邻里之间如何相处的寓言故事。 ②It is known to all that this novel has a great influence on the development of Chinese literature. 众所周知，这部小说对中国文学的发展有很大影响。 ③Glad to hear from you.I'd like to tell you something about a moral fable I recently read. 很高兴收到你的来信。我想告诉你我最近读到的一个道德寓言故事。 ④The fable is titled Waiting for Gain without Pain. 这则寓言的标题是《守株待兔》。 主体段落句 ①Once upon a time there was a farmer who worked hard in the fields every day. 从前，有一个农民每天在地里辛勤劳动。 ②It is recognised that kindness and diligence are both traditional virtues of Chinese people. 公认的是，善良和勤劳都是中国人民的传统美德。 ③As a matter of fact，the fable mirrors that different attitudes may bring about different results. 事实上，这个寓言反映了不同的态度可能会带来不同的结果。 ④The fable is well worth reading，which is aimed at telling us a message: No pains，no gains. 这则寓言非常值得一读，它旨在告诉我们“不劳无获”这样一个寓意。 ⑤After I read the story，I have a better understanding of what he experienced. 读完这个故事后，我对他所经历的有了更好地了解。 ⑥Having read the story，I was lost in thought，feeling disappointed with what she did. 读完这个故事后，我陷入了沉思，对她的所作所为感到失望。 ⑦What impresses me most is that he helped the people in need. 让我印象最深刻的是他帮助了急需帮助的人。 段尾句 ①I strongly hope that you can have a try and it won't disappoint you. 我强烈希望你能试一试(读一读)，它不会让你失望的。 ②I hope we shouldn't be that kind of people.It is working hard that is the most valuable. 我希望我们不应该是那种人。努力工作才是最有价值的。 ③Do you think so? Looking forward to your reply. 你这么认为吗？期待你的回复。 ④I think the story is worth reading because it told us how to do that. 我认为这个故事值得一读，因为它教会我们如何去做。 ⑤I would love to share the story with my family. 我很乐意分享这个故事给我的家人。 假如你是李华，请你给学校英语校报写一篇关于《孔融让梨》的英文评论。包括以下内容： 1．故事梗概； 2．内容分析； 3．个人观点。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步　审题谋篇 第二步　遣词造句 1．《孔融让梨》是一个关于美德的故事。 Kong Rong Gives Up the Biggest Pear is a story of virtue　. 2．孔融四岁时，就能按年龄次序来分梨。 When Kong Rong was four years old， he could divide the pears according to the order of age　. 3．(一句多译)每个人都分到了自己应得的一份，唯独给自己的那一个是最小的。 ①Everyone gets his share，but the one which is given to himself is the least.(定语从句) ②Everyone gets his share，but the one given to himself is the least　.(过去分词作定语) 4．他说敬重长辈是基本准则。 He said respecting the elders is the basic principle　. 5．这个故事想告诉我们要学会尊敬长辈，懂得分享，不要自私自利。 The story is intended to tell us to learn to respect the elders　，know how to share　，and not to be selfish. 6．故事简短，脉络清晰。 The story is short and the thread is clear. 7．它很好地起到了教育世人的目的。 It serves its purpose of educating the world well. 8．我喜欢这个故事。我想向读者推荐它。 I like this story.I would like to recommend it to the readers　. 第三步　词句升级 9．合并句6、7为并列句 The story is short and the thread is clear，and it serves its purpose of educating the world well.　 10．把句8改为复合句(so...that...) I like this story so much that I would like to recommend it to the readers.　 第四步　妙笔成篇 __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Kong Rong Gives up the Biggest Pear is a story of virtue.When Kong Rong was four years old，he could divide the pears according to the order of age.Everyone gets his share，but the one given to himself is the least.He said respecting the elders is the basic principle. The story is intended to tell us to learn to respect the elders，know how to share，and not to be selfish.The story is short and the thread is clear，and it serves its purpose of educating the world well. I like this story so much that I would like to recommend it to the readers. 你最近又读了一遍中国古代寓言故事《守株待兔》，从中学到了很多生活哲理，你打算把这则寓言故事分享给你的外国朋友，希望他们能对中国文化有更多的了解并从中学到一些人生的道理。要点包括： 1．对故事的简要介绍； 2．你从中悟出的人生哲理。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 参考词汇：树桩 stump；锄头 hoe；讽刺 satirize __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 I read the fable titled“Waiting for Gains Without Pains”again recently. A young farmer wanted to eat good food every day，but he didn't like working.One day，while ploughing in his field，he saw a hare bump into a stump by accident and die.He had the chance to eat delicious meat of the hare.From that day on，he put down his hoe，waiting by the stump for a second hare to turn up，but no luck. The story satirizes those who would rather complain or just wait for luck than make efforts to obtain what they need.I think we shouldn't be that kind of people.It is working hard that is the most precious. $$