Unit 7 Section Ⅶ Writing(课件PPT)-【精讲精练】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第三册（北师大版2019）

Section Ⅶ　Writing—A Formal Email 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 写作培优 妙笔生花 01 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 01 写作培优 妙笔生花 栏目导航 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 谢谢观看 栏目导航 UNIT 7　ART 1 本单元的写作项目属于新课标中应用体类别中的电子邮件。正式电子邮件包括收件人地址、寄件人地址、邮件的主题、开头、正文、结束语和签名。 课文展示 Dear Sir/Madam, 　I am writing to ask for information about entering a film in your festival.　(写邮件的原因)I am sixteen years old and I am a student at No.1 Senior Secondary School.I started making music videos three years ago, and I am very fond of it.Last year, I made my first short film.(自我介绍) I would like to ask about the films for your festival.Do you accept sport documentaries? I am currently working on a sport documentary with a school friend.For the past few months, we have been interviewing and filming young players about their interest in basketball.Could you tell me if this kind of film would be acceptable? I wonder if you could also give me more information about how to apply to be part of this festival.Can groups as well as individuals enter? Can we enter our film into another film festival at the same time? In addition, would it be possible to tell me about the prizes? Are there prizes for different age groups and for different types of films？　(详述) I appreciate your help and look forward to hearing from you.　(表达感谢和期望回信) Yours faithfully， Liu Ze 写作手法 【文章结构】 【相关词句】 ►常用开头语 1．I'm happy/glad/pleased to receive your e­mail dated by May 1st. 很高兴收到你五一发来的电子邮件。 2．I'm writing to thank you for your help during my stay in England. 我写这封信是为了感谢我在英国时你对我的帮助。 3．I'm sorry not to answer/reply to your e­mail in time because I have been busy these days. 很抱歉没有及时回复你的电子邮件，因为这些日子我一直很忙。 4．I'm sorry to learn that you did not do well in the entrance examination. 得知你在入学考试中发挥不好，我很难过。 5．I'm glad to receive your e­mail saying that you have been offered a good job in a big company.Congratulations to you. 我很高兴收到你的邮件，邮件中说你被一家大公司聘用了，祝贺你。 6．I have been missing you a lot since we met last time. 自从我们上次见面以来，我一直很想你。 7．How are you getting on with your English study? 你英语学得怎么样了？ 8．I am sorry for not writing to you sooner. 很抱歉没有早点给你写信。 ►常用结尾语 1．In the end, I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful. 最后，如果你发现我的建议有用我会非常高兴。 2．I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon. 盼望很快收到你的来信。 3．Please give my regards to your family. 请代我向你的家人问好。 4．If you have any more questions, please let me know. 如果你还有问题，请告诉我。 5．Wish you the best of health and success！ 祝您身体健康，工作顺利！ 6．I look forward to our next meeting. 期待我们的下次相见。 [注意事项] 1．各要点之间需要使用First...，Second...，Third...或First of all...，Next...，Third...，Then...，Finally...来表示顺序结构，不要使用阿拉伯数字。常用连接词还有： Firstly，I would like to... Secondly，could you...? Thirdly，I would be... Finally，I would like to... In addition to that，could you...? Another query I have is about... Something else I would like to ask about is... 2．要有过渡词句。由于平行的信息较多，所以除了上面的排序法以外，还应多使用一些衔接词或短语，表示递进关系：then，besides，moreover，in addition (to)，what's more，what's worse，similarly，in the same way...；表示转折关系：but，yet，however，still，though，otherwise，despite，regardless of，in spite of...。 3．句式要多样化。在文章中恰当地使用一些复合句、并列句、倒装句、虚拟语气、强调句型和非谓语等来调节文章的节奏。 4．一般要求在结尾对文章进行总结，可使用in a word，in short，briefly，generally speaking，finally，at last等总结性的词或短语。 5．写完后，一定要通读全文，并进行“四问”： (1)是否遗漏了要点？ (2)语句是否正确通顺？ (3)每段是否围绕中心展开？有没有中心句？结构安排是否合理？ (4)有没有过渡不太自然的地方？能否在此添加过渡词句？ 假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封电子邮件，询问有关情况 (箭头所指内容)。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [审题谋篇] (一) 审题 1．确定体裁：本文为电子邮件； 2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第一人称； 3．确定时态：时态应以一般现在时为主。 (二) 谋篇 首段：说明写邮件的原因 (想询问暑假英语课程的情况)； 中段：询问的内容； 尾段：结束并提出希望。 [词汇热身] 1．　attend a summer school　参加一个暑期学校 2．　six­week English course　六周的英语课程 3．　during the vacation　在假期期间 4．　advertisement　n.广告 5．　accommodation　n.住宿 6．　pay for　为……付钱 7．　host family　寄宿家庭 8．　dormitory　n.学生宿舍 9．　would like　想要；愿意 10．　look forward to　渴望；盼望；期待 [句式温习] 1．我计划假期去英国参加一个暑期学校。 　I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.　 2．我已看过你们的广告。 　I've seen your advertisement.　 3．我想多了解一下你们六周的英语课程。 　I'd like to know something more about your six­week English course.　 4．这门课我要付多少钱？ 　How much do I have to pay for the course？　 5．包括住宿吗？ 　Is accommodation included？　 6．是寄宿家庭还是大学宿舍？ 　Is it host family or university dormitory？　 [句式升级] 7．用and连接句2和句3 　I've seen your advertisement, and I'd like to know something more about your six­week English course.　 8．用I'd also like to know和 whether连接句4和句5 　I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.　 9．用there be 句型升级句6 　Would there be host family or university dormitory？　 [连句成篇] Dear Sir/Madam， I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.I've seen your advertisement, and I'd like to know something more about your six­week English course. First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class.I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory? I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully， Li Hua (2024·广东高一期中)假如你是校学生会主席李华。学生会最近举办了英语戏剧节(English Drama Festival)。在此期间，你的外教老师 Miss Brown 给予你们大力地指导和帮助。活动圆满结束后，请你代表全体同学，给她发一封电子邮件，以表示感激之情。内容包括： 1．表达感谢； 2．具体帮助； 3．同学收获。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ One possible version： Dear Miss Brown， I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude for your kind help in the school English Drama Festival，which has turned out to be an amazing success.It's so nice of you to have offered us various presentation skills and basic stage techniques.Under your professional guidance，the participants gave such an impressive performance.Some students who were afraid of acting in front of audience gained great confidence.Others developed communication skills and knew how to cooperate in a team.Besides，this activity has fueled our passion for English drama. Many thanks for your help and support. Yours， Li Hua $$