专题35 关爱动物类读后续写讲义（考情+语料+金句+真题+模拟） -2025年新高考英语读后续写提分宝典

《2025年高考英语读后续写高分宝典》 专题35关爱动物类读后续写讲义（考情+语料+金句+真题+模拟）原卷版 【读后续写关爱动物类话题深度解读】 【关爱动物话题解读】 人与动物的主题在“读后续写”中是一个备受青睐的题材，因为这种关系不仅充满温情，也容易唤起读者的情感共鸣。试题文本一般从两个角度展开，一是人和动物和谐相处, 要么是人类帮助动物解决问题，要么是动物帮助人类解决问题；二是人类与动物产生冲突，尤其遇到勇猛高大的动物，遇到危险，首先沉着冷静与动物周旋，后来向别人求助，之后成功脱险的故事。例如：人鸟情未了：农场看到蜂鸟被困窗户叮嘱朋友修复，再次光顾农场与蜂鸟邂逅感恩（2024年1月浙江高考）人狼大战：骑车旅途遭遇狼wolf追赶，脱险经历（2017年6月浙江高考）；人熊大战：北极探险者给北极熊拍照，遭遇polar bear追赶的惊险经历（2020年6 月浙江高考）；人狗和谐：父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴，帮助Poppy摆脱孤独和想念的故事（2020年1月浙江高考）。 【关爱动物话题六年考情】 年份 卷别 主题 话题 类型 2025 浙江1月卷 人与社会/自我 勇寻真相并且学会共情的重要性 生活故事类 八省联考卷 人与社会/动物 铁汉柔情让我感动流浪犬守护者 关爱动物类 2024 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 车站履行承诺还钱给出租车司机 个人成长类 浙江1月卷 人与自我 利用脑图来确定方位找到教学楼 校园生活类 九省联考卷 人与自然 志愿者训练意外发现海豚的秘密 关爱动物类 2023 新课标I&II卷 人与自我 老师鼓励参加作文比赛终获大奖 校园生活类 浙江1月卷 人与自然 作者两次与蜂鸟的神奇邂逅感悟 关爱动物类 2022 新课标I&II卷 人与自我 鼓励身残志坚男孩参加校越野赛 校园生活类 浙江6月卷 人与社会 为社区无家可归的人们发放食物 助人为乐类 浙江1月卷 人与社会 与“最不合拍”搭档终成为好朋友 校园生活类 2021 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 孩子母亲节给妈妈做早餐送惊喜 家庭亲情类 浙江6月卷 人与自我 作者上学时一次打工挣钱的经历 个人成长类 浙江1月卷 人与社会 少年头意外卡在南瓜中爆红网络 生活故事类 2020 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 三个孩子帮助贫困家庭孩子挣钱 个人成长类 浙江7月卷 人与自然 与北极熊面对面的一次脱险经历 关爱动物类 浙江1月卷 人与自然 帮助宠物狗重获快乐收获新伙伴 关爱动物类 【读后续写关爱动物类话题思维导图】 ( 点 1 ： 位于续写 第一段段首 ，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点 2 ： 位于续写 第一段段尾 ，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点 3 ： 位于续写 第二段段首 ，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点 4 ： 续写 结尾 主旨 升华 ，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 ) 【读后续写关爱动物类话题满分策略】 【关爱动物故事情节构建】 情节发展 情绪刻画 主题升华句 可爱型动物故事情节 可爱型动物，如狗，鸟等，陪伴、忠诚，或者人救助动物生命，动物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情节。 陪伴、珍爱生命、自然和谐、忠诚等。 凶猛型动物故事情节 凶猛的动物，如狼、熊、蛇等，一般会给人造成生命威胁，所以主要是以遇险、脱险的故事情节为主。 难忘的经历、获得教训、感谢他人救助等。 【关爱动物主题语境满分语料】 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 一、好奇期待类 1. _____________________满怀好奇与兴奋 2. _____________________小心靠近 3. _____________________满眼好奇 二、陪伴守护类 1. _____________________始终陪伴左右 2. _____________________沉默的守护者 3. _____________________带来慰藉危机救援类 三、危机救援类 1. _____________________迅速前来救援 2. _____________________护免受伤害 3. _____________________本能地行动 四、不舍告别类 1. _____________________依依不舍地告别 2. _____________________苦乐参半的告别 3. _____________________怀着感激的心铭记成长感悟类 五、成长感悟类 1. _____________________被忠诚所感动 2. _____________________理解陪伴的美好 3. _____________________感激每一个相处的瞬间 六、初识动物类 1. ________________________________________________________________________ 她眼中闪烁着好奇，小心翼翼地伸出手。 2. ________________________________________________________________________ 被恐惧吓呆，害怕到动也不能动。 3. ________________________________________________________________________ 他小心翼翼地靠近那只动物，心中既兴奋又忐忑。 七、陪伴动物类 1. ________________________________________________________________________ 在无数个日夜，它默默陪伴在他身边。 2. ________________________________________________________________________ 他们心有灵犀，由忠诚和信任维系着彼此。 3. ________________________________________________________________________ 在它的陪伴下，他找到了慰藉，仿佛世界也温柔了许多。 八、危机反应类 1. ________________________________________________________________________ 它充满忠诚地站在他和危险之间，毫不动摇。 2. ________________________________________________________________________ 在那关键时刻，它成了他的无言守护者，竭尽全力守护他。 3. ________________________________________________________________________ 我的妻子抓住我的衣服，手颤抖着，使劲吞着口水。 4. ________________________________________________________________________ 一想到狼的血淋淋的嘴，麦克吓得差点死了。 5. ________________________________________________________________________ 看到它，艾莉疯狂地挥舞着双手，尖叫着：“救命！” 6. ________________________________________________________________________ 我用一块石头作为支撑点，解开了链子，把狼放了出来。 7. ________________________________________________________________________ 危险来临时，那只动物毫不犹豫地保护他免受伤害。 8. ________________________________________________________________________ 从树桩中拔出巨大的尸体后，布莱恩清理了伤口，然后对他进行了仔细的治疗。贝基跪下来，和布莱恩一起照顾狼。 九、不舍告别类 1. ________________________________________________________________________ 在道别时，他意识到它对他生命的深刻影响。 2. ________________________________________________________________________ 他们的离别苦乐参半，他感激每一个共同度过的瞬间。 3. ________________________________________________________________________ 他心情沉重地注视着它消失在地平线，回忆涌上心头。 十、主旨升华类  1. ________________________________________________________________________ 猫可能有九条命，但它们给了我们一生的爱。 2. ________________________________________________________________________ 猫就像小小的毛茸茸的奇迹，给我们的生活带来欢乐。 3. ________________________________________________________________________ 狗快乐的脸是对生活中简单快乐的提醒。 4. ________________________________________________________________________ 尽管秋风凛冽，他们的家里却充满了爱和团聚的温暖。 5. ________________________________________________________________________ 那天的雨是一个奇迹，拯救了我们的农场，就像我的儿子拯救了一条生命一样。 6. ________________________________________________________________________ 正是通过这种无言的陪伴，他才领悟了忠诚与奉献的深邃，那是一种超越言语与行动的纽带。 7. ________________________________________________________________________ 直到离别的瞬间，他才真正明白他们之间那份无声无息融入他生命的深切联结。 【关爱动物主题优秀片段欣赏】 一、从分离到相拥：狗狗母子的团圆奇迹 While Dakota loved me and her new home, she still missed her kid. She would utter mournful howls whenever I took her out for walks in the woods. It seemed as if she was calling for her puppy to come back. The exact scene made me heart-broken, and I took action all at once, determined to reunite mother and pup. I called the TV station, asking for conditions about the little dog, only to be told that Indiana was receiving medical treatment for falling on the ground when jumping over the fence. I decided to bring three-legged Indiana to my home. Instantly they got reunited, Dakota couldn't stop licking her puppy's face. Happy and excited, the two dogs were wagging their tails wildly. The heart-warming scene moved anyone on the spot. Dakota has since stopped her sorrowful howls while Indiana has never tried to jump over the fence. These once-separated dogs played together, chasing each other around the room and slept together with their noses resting on each other. If there is to be any devotion, it will come through any species. 【范文译文】 虽然达科他爱我和她的新家，但她仍然想念她的孩子。每当我带她到树林里散步时，她都会发出悲哀的嚎叫。似乎她在呼唤她的小狗回来。确切的场景让我心碎，我立刻采取行动，决心让母狗团聚。我打电话给电视台，询问这只小狗的情况，却被告知印第安纳州因跳过栅栏时摔倒在地正在接受治疗。 我决定把三足印第安纳带回我家。当他们重逢时，达科塔忍不住舔了舔她小狗的脸。两只狗既高兴又兴奋，疯狂地摇着尾巴。暖心的一幕感动了在场的每一个人。达科他从此停止了她悲伤的嚎叫，而印第安纳从未试图跳过栅栏。这些曾经分离的狗一起玩耍，在房间里互相追逐，一起睡觉，鼻子靠在一起。如果有任何奉献，它将来自任何物种。 二、网球场上的跨越：伤痕狗狗奔向父亲怀抱 Suddenly there was a sound in the bush. Out of the growth flew this battered dog right into my father's arms. Spider had leaped over the tennis court fence with great force and certainty. My father's eyes shone, and the old lady and I stood there with tears in our eyes. He kept licking my father's face and making choking noises. He smelt dreadful. We wrapped him in an old blanket and I held him on my lap on the way back, He never once took his eyes off my father as we drove home. Every so often I received a lick of gratefulness. Once home we had the task of getting all the prickles off him. Before he was put in at in tub, we gently cleaned him up with soap. Spider stood stoically through all this as my father also examined his teeth and ears. Spider spent the rest of his days -years - on the front porch, content and satisfied, always in wait for my sister and me coming home from school where he would give us a lot of licks to make sure we were all right. He then waited for my father by the garage door. We never left him anywhere alone again. 【范文译文】 突然，灌木丛中传来一阵声响。这只被打得遍体鳞伤的狗突然飞到我父亲的怀里。蜘蛛以极大的力量和确定性跳过了网球场围栏。我父亲的眼睛闪闪发光，我和老太太站在那里，眼里含着泪水。他不停地舔我父亲的脸，发出令人窒息的声音。他闻起来很可怕。我们用一条旧毯子把他裹起来，在回家的路上我把他抱在腿上。我们开车回家时，他从未把目光从我父亲身上移开。每隔一段时间，我都会收到一点感激之情。 回家后，我们的任务是把他身上的刺都拔掉。在他被放进浴缸之前，我们用肥皂轻轻地把他洗干净。蜘蛛坚忍地站着，我父亲也检查了他的牙齿和耳朵。蜘蛛在前廊度过了他的余生——几年——心满意足，总是等着我和妹妹放学回家，在那里他会给我们很多舔舐，以确保我们没事。然后，他在车库门口等我父亲。我们再也没有把他单独留在任何地方。 【关爱动物话题高考真题调研】 （2024浙江1月卷）--揭秘：海豚玛雅如何玩转“收藏游戏” 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Last summer, Hilda worked as a volunteer with dolphin trainers at a sea life park. Her job was to make sure the tanks were free of any items so that the trainers could train the dolphins to fetch specific items. However, one day after cleaning, one of the dolphins, Maya, presented Hilda with a candy wrapper from the tank. When Katherine, the trainer, saw this, she blamed Hilda for her carelessness. Upset but not discouraged by this event, Hilda decided to do some spying on Maya. The next morning, Hilda arrived at the park early. She put on her scuba gear (水下呼吸器) and jumped into the tank for her usual, underwater sweep. Finding nothing in the tank, she climbed out of the water just in time to see Katherine jumping in on the other side. After what happened yesterday, Hilda knew what she was doing. She watched as Katherine performed her underwater search, but Hilda wasn’t surprised when she surfaced empty-handed. During the tank sweeps, Maya had been swimming playfully, but now the dolphin stopped suddenly and swam to the back part of the tank where the filter (过滤) box was located. She stuck her nose down behind the box and then swam away. What was Maya doing back there? Hilda wondered. She jumped back into the water and swam over to take a look behind the box, and her question was answered. Hilda then swam across the tank following Maya’s path and emerged from the water to find Katherine removing her scuba gear. As Katherine turned around, her mouth dropped open. There was Maya at the edge of the tank with a comb (梳子) in her mouth waiting for her treat. “Maya! Where did you get that?” demanded Katherine, taking the comb and throwing her a fish. “I know where she got it,” declared Hilda climbing out of the tank with a handful of items still wet from their watery, resting place. “What’s all this?” Katherine asked, obviously confused. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “This is Maya’s secret,” Hilda said with a big smile. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Now Katherine realized what had been going on. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2023浙江1月卷）--重访农场：与感恩蜂鸟的奇妙重逢 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up. With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me. When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty? As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight. During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【关爱动物话题名校好题调研】 【调研1】（2025·广东·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The Right Thing to Do Fauna had always dreamed of keeping a pet. Time and again, she asked her parents, promising to walk, feed, and look after it. Each time, though, they gave the same gentle response: “We’ll see.” One afternoon, on her way home from school, Fauna saw a little dog wandering near the park. Its fur was messy, and it looked lost, sniffing the ground as if searching for something. Feeling curious and hopeful, Fauna bent down and called to it. The dog quickly ran over, wagging (摇) its tail and gently pressing its nose into her hand, like they had known each other forever. She looked around, but no one seemed to be searching for the dog. Feeling pity for the lost dog, Fauna decided to take it home. As they walked side by side, her heart swelled with joy. It felt as though this was the pet she had always dreamed of—a friend she had been waiting for. At the front door, Fauna’s mother greeted her with a warm smile. Although she found the dog adorable, she gently reminded Fauna that they needed to try and find its owner. If the dog was lost, someone must be missing it. Fauna reluctantly (不情愿地) agreed, though part of her wished no one would come forward to claim the little dog. Over the next few days, Fauna and the dog—whom she named Buddy—grew inseparable. She fed him, played with him, and let him sleep curled up at the foot of her bed. Every day, it became harder to imagine life without him. Buddy seemed happy too, wagging his tail whenever she came home from school. But Fauna knew deep down that she had to do the right thing. She and her parents posted flyers around town, hoping to find Buddy’s owner. Just a few days later, the phone rang. Fauna’s heart sank as her father answered. From the conversation, it was clear that the caller was Buddy’s owner. He described Buddy perfectly—the friendly eyes and playful personality. Fauna knew Buddy would soon be leaving her. Her father arranged for the owner to come by and pick Buddy up. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When the man arrived, the little dog ran straight into his arms, barking with joy. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That evening, Fauna sat quietly in her room, feeling the emptiness that Buddy’s absence had left behind. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【调研2】（24-25高二上·云南昭通·期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My family always had various animals around. To my great annoyance, I never had one that truly belonged to me. I couldn’t count how many times that I begged them for buying or adopting one for me. My parents, ultimately, compromised and permitted me to keep my own until I was nine years old. The day that I had longed for finally arrived. So thrilled was I that an increasing sense of excitement stuffed my heart. Knowing my parents brought a fish back home, which I would like to call it Mark, I offered to undertake the responsibility to look after it without hesitation. Every Saturday, it’s a routine to clean out his bowl. Cleaning which seemed impossible for me to shoulder, turned into something that I was desperate for and enjoyed. I found myself unconsciously turning down invitations from my friends to go somewhere immediately after school, because what I was concerned was to dash home to feed my fish first. Every day he would remind me that I was needed and that I had someone relying on me. Whenever I looked at him and appreciated his swimming freely, my heart was filled with joy and enjoyment. One day, I came home from school and headed to my room to feed Mark. I found a terrible thing had happened without any sign. I dropped my bag and ran over to the bowl. I held my breath, not daring make a sound. Panic took hold of me. I saw my best friend Mark floating around, lifeless. I couldn’t believe what I was seeing, rooted to the spot. 注意： 1. 续写的词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 At the very moment, my mom walked into my room. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After a while, I suddenly realized that Mark hadn’t just left me. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【调研3】（24-25高二上·云南昭通·期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My family always had various animals around. To my great annoyance, I never had one that truly belonged to me. I couldn’t count how many times that I begged them for buying or adopting one for me. My parents, ultimately, compromised and permitted me to keep my own until I was nine years old. The day that I had longed for finally arrived. So thrilled was I that an increasing sense of excitement stuffed my heart. Knowing my parents brought a fish back home, which I would like to call it Mark, I offered to undertake the responsibility to look after it without hesitation. Every Saturday, it’s a routine to clean out his bowl. Cleaning which seemed impossible for me to shoulder, turned into something that I was desperate for and enjoyed. I found myself unconsciously turning down invitations from my friends to go somewhere immediately after school, because what I was concerned was to dash home to feed my fish first. Every day he would remind me that I was needed and that I had someone relying on me. Whenever I looked at him and appreciated his swimming freely, my heart was filled with joy and enjoyment. One day, I came home from school and headed to my room to feed Mark. I found a terrible thing had happened without any sign. I dropped my bag and ran over to the bowl. I held my breath, not daring make a sound. Panic took hold of me. I saw my best friend Mark floating around, lifeless. I couldn’t believe what I was seeing, rooted to the spot. 注意： 1.续写的词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 At the very moment, my mom walked into my room. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After a while, I suddenly realized that Mark hadn’t just left me. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【调研4】（2024·福建泉州·三模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 My Uncle Joe had a farmland in the countryside. Every summer, I would spend a few weeks there, playjing around and doing some help. his farmland is often visited by crows (乌鸦). I discovered that they were so intelligent. They would drop nuts onto roads to be broken open by passing cars and even could use their sharp beaks (鸟喙) to open cups of bottles. That day was the hottest day of the year. Even the birds would rest in the shades of our yard to cool themselves. Uncle Joe was wiping sweat off his face when he came into the house. “Ken, did you let the air out of two tyres on my old truck?” he asked me. And I denied. “I guess I must have run over some nails,” Uncle Joe said. I helped him pump (打气)some air into the tyres so we could drive to the garage. The garage man couldn’t find any nails, It seemed it was due to the opening of the tyre valves (阀门). “Maybe, Ken, here, was playing a trick,” he told Uncle Joe. “I wouldn’t do that!” I said with red face, “Flattyres aren’t funny.” “But there are only three others who live nearby, and they’re on vacation,” Uncle Joe said. “It’s a mystery.” The next morning was even hotter. Uncle Joe stormed into the house, shouting at me, “Now three tyres are flat! Who else could be pulling such a trick?” We pumped up the tyres again. When Uncle Joe went back inside, I decided to solve this mystery myself. I hid behind a bush, keeping an eye on the truck. Maybe some kid who is visiting one of our neighbors is doing it, I thought. The sun got hotter and hotter. I got sleepier and sleepier. Suddenly I heard a ssst, ssst hissing sound. My eyes flew open, and I stared at the strangest sight I’d ever seen. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2，请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I noticed a crow standing beside Uncle Joe’s back tyre. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Seeing the crow cooling from tyre’s air, I rushed to find Uncle Joe. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【调研5】（2024·江西鹰潭·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The Making of a Believer It was Christmas Eve morning, and I awoke with a mission: to find my lost cat, Baby-Girl, who is chubby and cute, fond of sitting in her one-and-only spot near the nearth (壁炉). AS I got ready, I could hear icy rain pouring down. I said a quick prayer for Baby-Girl. She was out there somewhere in the storm, I could just feel it. Sure, it had been six months since she’d gone missing, but I still had faith. It was the season for miracles, after all. That summer, my sweet cat had disappeared from my parents’ house in Indiana. Baby-Girl had been staying with them. At the time, I lived and worked in Washington, D．C． Baby-Girl had gotten out of my parents’ house three days before I was set to fly back home to pick her up. My dad and I spent that entire visit searching for her. Dad was the family’s resident “realistic”, which mean the spent a whole lot of time trying to prepare me for the worst. She’s either been hit by a car or been taken in by someone who found her” he said. I rolled my eyes. Dad always supported me, but he was so skepticat. He could do with a little more faith! Besides, though I couldn’t explain it, I knew I’d see her Baby-Girl again. If any cat could do the impossible, it was my Baby-Girl. Even after T returned to D．C． without her and the weeks stretched into months, deep down I had this feeling that we’d be reunited. How, home again for the holidays, I was de tem mined to pick up my search. I grabbed Baby-Girl’s cat carrier and loaded it into the car, then persuaded Dad to drive me to the shelter, hoping she’d been found. “Sharon, you have to be realistic,” my dad said as we headed to the garage. “She’s been gone too long. You’re not going to find her.” “Well, I just have a feeling,” I said Dad raised an eyebrow a she climbed into the driver’s seat to take me to the shelter. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 We were led to the room where the abandoned cats lived. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Shortly after, my shocked Dad drove us back home. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【调研6】（2025·山东潍坊·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was one of those freezing nights we got here in Minnesota in the middle of winter. The dampness in the air got trapped and a curtain of fog sank all around, mixing with the snow on the ground and the strong snow falling from the sky to white out everything. Normally I wouldn’t drive in that kind of weather, but I’d been at a Tupperware party all evening, and I was so exhausted. The desire to be in the comfort of my own home beat my better judgment. However never had I imagined my little act could save my life on such a night. I was only on the road for a minute before I regretted my decision not to stay put. The winding country road was totally deserted. My car’s headlights could barely cut through the heavy fog. The snow was getting heavier. A lot heavier. Everything beyond a few feet in front of me was a mystery. I drove slowly. I wasn’t quite sure where I was, though I knew there were railways specifically built for freight (货运) trains in this area. But in such weather, it was impossible to spot the tracks or any signs of an approaching train. Trembling with cold, I turned up the heat. The loud blowers did their work, sheltering me from the bitter cold and the sound outside. Seemingly, everything went smoothly as I inched forward. All at once, my headlights shone on a small animal in front of me, right at the farthest point they could reach. I hit the brakes-tires screeched (发嘎吱声) against the snow as the car was coming to a stop. When the world stopped spinning, taking a closer look, I found it was a brown rabbit, its fur covered with ice crystals in the headlights. I tapped the horn, no response. I tried again, yet the little creature remained rooted-it appeared unwilling to get out of the way. Curiously, I got out of the car and made my way toward it. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Getting near, I found its leg stuck in a trap. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Just as I was freeing the rabbit from the trap, a train whooshed(呼啸)by. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【调研7】（2025·辽宁大连·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 We purchased our first home about six years ago. We had fallen in love immediately with a bank-owned, three-floor log cabin in a lake community. We promised the universe that day that if we got the house, we’d rescue one dog that needed it most. It would move in with us the same day we moved in and become part of the family. We didn’t want a puppy; we wanted an unwanted dog, a large one. Those are the ones that usually get left behind in the animal rescue stands, anyway, but I wanted a large dog. It would be a companion for the kids and me because my husband worked far away during the day. The dog would watch over us. I reached out to a rescue group, and we started the paperwork. They approved us and were very excited to have adopters like us. Three days before moving day, we got the call. They had rescued a twelve-year-old German Shepherd called Misty. She had heartworm, suffered from malnutrition (营养不良) and had lost most of her chest hair. According to them, she certainly wasn’t what most adopters considered pretty. She wouldn’t need much just a home to live out her days. We fell in love with Misty before we even met her. Moving day came, and just as the last truck was unloaded, the rescue arrived. Friends watched eagerly, excited to meet Misty. She was more beautiful than I could have imagined. She moved with a senior grace, her cloudy eyes taking in her new home and family. She was underweight at eighty pounds, but she was aware of where every inch of her was. She was led over to where my infant (婴幼儿) daughter was stretched out, cooing on a blanket. We held Misty while she sniffed the baby’s head and then cautiously lay next to her without touching her blanket. Misty was given the best of everything. She enjoyed the companionship of her doggy brother and sister as much as she adored her human brother and sister. A day before Thanksgiving, I had begun cooking a series of three turkeys so we’d have enough food for everyone. I left the first one cooling on the back of the stove as I stepped out for a short break to have coffee with the neighbor. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When I returned, only a few bones remained. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ My heart broke because she was terrified by her own behavior. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【调研8】（24-25高三上·四川南充·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Puppies for Sale A shop owner placed a sign above his door that read, “Puppies for Sale.” As we know, signs like this always have a way of appealing to young children, and to no one’s surprise, a little boy appeared by the shop owner’s sign and approached the owner. “Excuse me, how much are you going to sell the puppies for?” he asked. The shop owner replied, “For anything between $30 and $50.” The little boy reached in his pocket and pulled out some change from it. “I have $2. 37 on me,” he said in a low voice. “Can I please look at them?” The shop owner smiled and whistled. Out of the doghouse came the mother dog, who ran down the passage of his shop, followed by five tiny ball of fur. One puppy was moving slowly and fell behind. In no time the little boy picked out the slow puppy and asked, “What’s wrong with that little dog?” The shop owner explained that the vet had examined the little puppy and had discovered that one of his back legs was injured. He would always walk slowly and with difficulty. He would be lame (瘸的). Hearing what the shop owner had said, the little boy became excited, “That is the little puppy I want to buy.” The shop owner said, “No, you don’t want to buy that little dog. If you really want him, I’ll just give him to you.” The little boy got quite upset. He looked straight into the shop owner’s eyes and said, “I don’t want you to give him to me. That little dog is worth every bit as much as all the other dogs and I’ll pay full price. As a matter of fact, I’ll give you $2. 37 right now, and 50 cents a month until I have him paid for.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The shop owner shook his head and declined the little boy. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ All of a sudden, the little boy reached down and rolled up one leg of his pants. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【调研9】（24-25高二下·河北保定·开学考试）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a gloomy afternoon, with dark clouds hanging low in the sky, making the already old-fashioned campus seem even more deserted. After the last class of the day, I walked across the campus with my close classmate, Tom. As we neared a quiet corner beside the old library, a series of faint meowing sounds (猫叫声) pierced the stillness. Our curiosity piqued, we exchanged a glance and immediately traced the source of the noise. Behind a messy stack of old boxes, we discovered a minuscule, emaciated cat. Its once-soft fur was now caked with dirt, and its small body trembled ever so slightly, a clear indication that it had suffered from days of hunger and cold. A profound sense of pity welled up within us. Tom bent down slowly, his hand extended gently, his voice soft as he tried to lead the frightened animal out. At first, the cat was frightened, its wide-eyed gaze fixed on us in fear. But gradually, after a few moments of cautious sniffing (嗅), it timidly stepped out from its hiding spot. We knew we couldn’t abandon this helpless creature. Tom proposed taking it to the school infirmary (医务室), believing the school doctor might be able to assess its condition. I nodded in instant agreement, yet a tinge of worry crept in as we pondered how the school authorities would respond to us bringing a cat into the infirmary. Just at that moment, Lily, a classmate with a kind heart and a skill of animal care, happened to pass by. The moment she laid eyes on the pitiful cat in our arms, her expression softened. She informed us that she had experience in dealing with stray (走失的) animals and eagerly offered her assistance. With Lily on board, our determination to save the cat grew tenfold. We held the cat gently and made our way towards the infirmary, filled with hope and a touch of nervousness. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸相应位置作答。 On reaching the infirmary, the school doctor greeted us with a surprised look. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Over the next few days, we took turns to take care of the cat. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【调研10】（24-25高一下·江西·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Tiffany Massey had just moved to the state of Maine last year and lived alone. She enjoyed the beach near the neighbourhood and jogging (慢跑) around in the evenings. It was during one of those evenings that she noticed Mrs Johnson. She’d never forget their first meeting. Mrs Johnson had a dog named Max. Max almost attacked her one evening if it hadn’t been for Mrs Johnson. “Stop now, or you won’t get any food tonight!” she yelled at the dog from a distance. “I’m sorry. Max didn’t mean it. He just doesn’t like strangers! You’d better stay away from him!” Mrs Johnson apologized, walking up to her. “Well...” Before Tiffany could say anything, the elderly woman and the dog walked away. Days later, she was jogging along the beach again when Max barked (狗叫) at her like their first meeting. Tiffany tried to change her route (路线) to escape him. This happened even every time she went for a jog later, and Tiffany had had enough of him! With weeks flying, things changed a bit as they met more often. Max no longer barked at Tiffany but followed her instead, obviously friendly. Gradually, Tiffany got used to jogging on the beach with Max running after her, and Mrs Johnson watching them run. And they began their conversation and Tiffany began to know about Mrs Johnson, who was in her late seventies and lived alone as well. Or rather, with Max, she was not alone. One day, Tiffany went for her usual jog, but she didn’t see Max. She felt a bit upset that he wasn’t following her. However, in the following days, Mrs Johnson and Max still didn’t show up on the beach. “Where has he gone? Did they move somewhere?” Tiffany wondered. Mrs Johnson and Max had become a part of her daily routine, and their sudden absence left her uneasy. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 With curiosity, Tiffany decided to figure out what had happened. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Tiffany offered to take care of Max until Mrs Johnson recovered. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $$《2025年高考英语读后续写高分宝典》 专题35关爱动物类读后续写讲义（考情+语料+金句+真题+模拟）解析版 【读后续写关爱动物类话题深度解读】 【关爱动物话题解读】 人与动物的主题在“读后续写”中是一个备受青睐的题材，因为这种关系不仅充满温情，也容易唤起读者的情感共鸣。试题文本一般从两个角度展开，一是人和动物和谐相处, 要么是人类帮助动物解决问题，要么是动物帮助人类解决问题；二是人类与动物产生冲突，尤其遇到勇猛高大的动物，遇到危险，首先沉着冷静与动物周旋，后来向别人求助，之后成功脱险的故事。例如：人鸟情未了：农场看到蜂鸟被困窗户叮嘱朋友修复，再次光顾农场与蜂鸟邂逅感恩（2024年1月浙江高考）人狼大战：骑车旅途遭遇狼wolf追赶，脱险经历（2017年6月浙江高考）；人熊大战：北极探险者给北极熊拍照，遭遇polar bear追赶的惊险经历（2020年6 月浙江高考）；人狗和谐：父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴，帮助Poppy摆脱孤独和想念的故事（2020年1月浙江高考）。 【关爱动物话题六年考情】 年份 卷别 主题 话题 类型 2025 浙江1月卷 人与社会/自我 勇寻真相并且学会共情的重要性 生活故事类 八省联考卷 人与社会/动物 铁汉柔情让我感动流浪犬守护者 关爱动物类 2024 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 车站履行承诺还钱给出租车司机 个人成长类 浙江1月卷 人与自我 利用脑图来确定方位找到教学楼 校园生活类 九省联考卷 人与自然 志愿者训练意外发现海豚的秘密 关爱动物类 2023 新课标I&II卷 人与自我 老师鼓励参加作文比赛终获大奖 校园生活类 浙江1月卷 人与自然 作者两次与蜂鸟的神奇邂逅感悟 关爱动物类 2022 新课标I&II卷 人与自我 鼓励身残志坚男孩参加校越野赛 校园生活类 浙江6月卷 人与社会 为社区无家可归的人们发放食物 助人为乐类 浙江1月卷 人与社会 与“最不合拍”搭档终成为好朋友 校园生活类 2021 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 孩子母亲节给妈妈做早餐送惊喜 家庭亲情类 浙江6月卷 人与自我 作者上学时一次打工挣钱的经历 个人成长类 浙江1月卷 人与社会 少年头意外卡在南瓜中爆红网络 生活故事类 2020 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 三个孩子帮助贫困家庭孩子挣钱 个人成长类 浙江7月卷 人与自然 与北极熊面对面的一次脱险经历 关爱动物类 浙江1月卷 人与自然 帮助宠物狗重获快乐收获新伙伴 关爱动物类 【读后续写关爱动物类话题思维导图】 ( 点 1 ： 位于续写 第一段段首 ，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点 2 ： 位于续写 第一段段尾 ，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点 3 ： 位于续写 第二段段首 ，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点 4 ： 续写 结尾 主旨 升华 ，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 ) 【读后续写关爱动物类话题满分策略】 【关爱动物故事情节构建】 情节发展 情绪刻画 主题升华句 可爱型动物故事情节 可爱型动物，如狗，鸟等，陪伴、忠诚，或者人救助动物生命，动物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情节。 陪伴、珍爱生命、自然和谐、忠诚等。 凶猛型动物故事情节 凶猛的动物，如狼、熊、蛇等，一般会给人造成生命威胁，所以主要是以遇险、脱险的故事情节为主。 难忘的经历、获得教训、感谢他人救助等。 【关爱动物主题语境满分语料】 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 一、好奇期待类 1. be filled with curiosity and excitement满怀好奇与兴奋 2. cautiously approach 小心靠近 3. with eyes full of wonder 满眼好奇 二、陪伴守护类 1. always by one’s side 始终陪伴左右 2. a silent guardian 沉默的守护者 3. offer a sense of comfort 带来慰藉危机救援类 三、危机救援类 1. rush to one’s rescue 迅速前来救援 2. protect…. from harm 护免受伤害 3. act out of instinct 本能地行动 四、不舍告别类 1. part with reluctance 依依不舍地告别 2. a bittersweet farewell 苦乐参半的告别 3. remember with a grateful heart 怀着感激的心铭记成长感悟类 五、成长感悟类 1. be touched by the loyalty 被忠诚所感动 2. understand the beauty of companionship 理解陪伴的美好 3. grateful for every moment spent together 感激每一个相处的瞬间 六、初识动物类 1. Curiosity sparkled in her eyes as she reached out her hand tentatively. 她眼中闪烁着好奇，小心翼翼地伸出手。 2. Seeing the approach of the polar bear, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch. 被恐惧吓呆，害怕到动也不能动。 3. He approached the animal cautiously, his heart racing with both excitement and uncertainty. 他小心翼翼地靠近那只动物，心中既兴奋又忐忑。 七、陪伴动物类 1. Through countless days and nights, it stood by him, a silent companion. 在无数个日夜，它默默陪伴在他身边。 2. They shared an unspoken understanding, bound by loyalty and trust. 他们心有灵犀，由忠诚和信任维系着彼此。 3. In its presence, he found solace, as if the world was a little kinder. 在它的陪伴下，他找到了慰藉，仿佛世界也温柔了许多。 八、危机反应类 1. With a fierce loyalty, it stood between him and danger, unwavering. 它充满忠诚地站在他和危险之间，毫不动摇。 2. In that critical moment, it was his silent protector, guarding him at all costs. 在那关键时刻，它成了他的无言守护者，竭尽全力守护他。 3. My wife Elli grasped my clothes and trembled, swallowing hard. 我的妻子抓住我的衣服，手颤抖着，使劲吞着口水。 4. Thinking of the wolf’s bloody mouth, Mac was nearly dead with fright. 一想到狼的血淋淋的嘴，麦克吓得差点死了。 5. At the sight of it, Elli waved her hands wildly, screaming, “Help!” 看到它，艾莉疯狂地挥舞着双手，尖叫着：“救命！” 6. Using a rock as the supporting point, I unlocked the chain and set the wolf free. 我用一块石头作为支撑点，解开了链子，把狼放了出来。 7. When danger struck, the animal acted without hesitation, shielding him from harm. 危险来临时，那只动物毫不犹豫地保护他免受伤害。 8. Having pulled the massive body out of the stump, Brian cleaned the wounds and then gave him careful treatment. Becky knelt down and tended to the wolf together with Brian. 从树桩中拔出巨大的尸体后，布莱恩清理了伤口，然后对他进行了仔细的治疗。贝基跪下来，和布莱恩一起照顾狼。 九、不舍告别类 1. As he bid farewell, he realized how deeply it had touched his life. 在道别时，他意识到它对他生命的深刻影响。 2. Their parting was bittersweet, leaving him grateful for every moment shared. 他们的离别苦乐参半，他感激每一个共同度过的瞬间。 3. With a heavy heart, he watched it disappear into the horizon, memories flooding his mind. 他心情沉重地注视着它消失在地平线，回忆涌上心头。 十、主旨升华类  1. Cats may have nine lives, but they give us a lifetime of love. 猫可能有九条命，但它们给了我们一生的爱。 2. Cats are like little furry miracles that bring joy to our lives. 猫就像小小的毛茸茸的奇迹，给我们的生活带来欢乐。 3.  A dog's happy face is a reminder of the simple joy in life. 狗快乐的脸是对生活中简单快乐的提醒。 4. Despite the chill autumn wind, their home was filled with the warmth of love and reunion. 尽管秋风凛冽，他们的家里却充满了爱和团聚的温暖。 5. The rain that came that day was a miracle, saving our farm, just like my boy saved a life. 那天的雨是一个奇迹，拯救了我们的农场，就像我的儿子拯救了一条生命一样。 6. It is through this silent companionship that he came to understand the depth of loyalty and devotion, a bond that went beyond words and gestures. 正是通过这种无言的陪伴，他才领悟了忠诚与奉献的深邃，那是一种超越言语与行动的纽带。 7. Not until the moment of parting did he grasp the intensity of the connection they shared, an attachment woven quietly into the fabric of his life. 直到离别的瞬间，他才真正明白他们之间那份无声无息融入他生命的深切联结。 【关爱动物主题优秀片段欣赏】 一、从分离到相拥：狗狗母子的团圆奇迹 While Dakota loved me and her new home, she still missed her kid. She would utter mournful howls whenever I took her out for walks in the woods. It seemed as if she was calling for her puppy to come back. The exact scene made me heart-broken, and I took action all at once, determined to reunite mother and pup. I called the TV station, asking for conditions about the little dog, only to be told that Indiana was receiving medical treatment for falling on the ground when jumping over the fence. I decided to bring three-legged Indiana to my home. Instantly they got reunited, Dakota couldn't stop licking her puppy's face. Happy and excited, the two dogs were wagging their tails wildly. The heart-warming scene moved anyone on the spot. Dakota has since stopped her sorrowful howls while Indiana has never tried to jump over the fence. These once-separated dogs played together, chasing each other around the room and slept together with their noses resting on each other. If there is to be any devotion, it will come through any species. 【范文译文】 虽然达科他爱我和她的新家，但她仍然想念她的孩子。每当我带她到树林里散步时，她都会发出悲哀的嚎叫。似乎她在呼唤她的小狗回来。确切的场景让我心碎，我立刻采取行动，决心让母狗团聚。我打电话给电视台，询问这只小狗的情况，却被告知印第安纳州因跳过栅栏时摔倒在地正在接受治疗。 我决定把三足印第安纳带回我家。当他们重逢时，达科塔忍不住舔了舔她小狗的脸。两只狗既高兴又兴奋，疯狂地摇着尾巴。暖心的一幕感动了在场的每一个人。达科他从此停止了她悲伤的嚎叫，而印第安纳从未试图跳过栅栏。这些曾经分离的狗一起玩耍，在房间里互相追逐，一起睡觉，鼻子靠在一起。如果有任何奉献，它将来自任何物种。 二、网球场上的跨越：伤痕狗狗奔向父亲怀抱 Suddenly there was a sound in the bush. Out of the growth flew this battered dog right into my father's arms. Spider had leaped over the tennis court fence with great force and certainty. My father's eyes shone, and the old lady and I stood there with tears in our eyes. He kept licking my father's face and making choking noises. He smelt dreadful. We wrapped him in an old blanket and I held him on my lap on the way back, He never once took his eyes off my father as we drove home. Every so often I received a lick of gratefulness. Once home we had the task of getting all the prickles off him. Before he was put in at in tub, we gently cleaned him up with soap. Spider stood stoically through all this as my father also examined his teeth and ears. Spider spent the rest of his days -years - on the front porch, content and satisfied, always in wait for my sister and me coming home from school where he would give us a lot of licks to make sure we were all right. He then waited for my father by the garage door. We never left him anywhere alone again. 【范文译文】 突然，灌木丛中传来一阵声响。这只被打得遍体鳞伤的狗突然飞到我父亲的怀里。蜘蛛以极大的力量和确定性跳过了网球场围栏。我父亲的眼睛闪闪发光，我和老太太站在那里，眼里含着泪水。他不停地舔我父亲的脸，发出令人窒息的声音。他闻起来很可怕。我们用一条旧毯子把他裹起来，在回家的路上我把他抱在腿上。我们开车回家时，他从未把目光从我父亲身上移开。每隔一段时间，我都会收到一点感激之情。 回家后，我们的任务是把他身上的刺都拔掉。在他被放进浴缸之前，我们用肥皂轻轻地把他洗干净。蜘蛛坚忍地站着，我父亲也检查了他的牙齿和耳朵。蜘蛛在前廊度过了他的余生——几年——心满意足，总是等着我和妹妹放学回家，在那里他会给我们很多舔舐，以确保我们没事。然后，他在车库门口等我父亲。我们再也没有把他单独留在任何地方。 【关爱动物话题高考真题调研】 （2024浙江1月卷）--揭秘：海豚玛雅如何玩转“收藏游戏” 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Last summer, Hilda worked as a volunteer with dolphin trainers at a sea life park. Her job was to make sure the tanks were free of any items so that the trainers could train the dolphins to fetch specific items. However, one day after cleaning, one of the dolphins, Maya, presented Hilda with a candy wrapper from the tank. When Katherine, the trainer, saw this, she blamed Hilda for her carelessness. Upset but not discouraged by this event, Hilda decided to do some spying on Maya. The next morning, Hilda arrived at the park early. She put on her scuba gear (水下呼吸器) and jumped into the tank for her usual, underwater sweep. Finding nothing in the tank, she climbed out of the water just in time to see Katherine jumping in on the other side. After what happened yesterday, Hilda knew what she was doing. She watched as Katherine performed her underwater search, but Hilda wasn’t surprised when she surfaced empty-handed. During the tank sweeps, Maya had been swimming playfully, but now the dolphin stopped suddenly and swam to the back part of the tank where the filter (过滤) box was located. She stuck her nose down behind the box and then swam away. What was Maya doing back there? Hilda wondered. She jumped back into the water and swam over to take a look behind the box, and her question was answered. Hilda then swam across the tank following Maya’s path and emerged from the water to find Katherine removing her scuba gear. As Katherine turned around, her mouth dropped open. There was Maya at the edge of the tank with a comb (梳子) in her mouth waiting for her treat. “Maya! Where did you get that?” demanded Katherine, taking the comb and throwing her a fish. “I know where she got it,” declared Hilda climbing out of the tank with a handful of items still wet from their watery, resting place. “What’s all this?” Katherine asked, obviously confused. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “This is Maya’s secret,” Hilda said with a big smile. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Now Katherine realized what had been going on. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分范文】 “This is Maya’s secret,” Hilda said with a big smile. The truth of the matter, Hilda continued, is that Maya has been secretly collecting items from the tank, hiding them near the filter in the back of the tank. When you train her, she will give you some items so that she can get treats from you. “Really? How do you know that?” Catherine asked in surprise. Hilda laughed and replied, “It took me a long time to discover this secret, too. It’s not easy to follow Maya.” Now Katherine realized what had been going on. Catherine thought to herself, this is really a clever dolphin. And she said to Hilda, “Well, Maya loves treats, so we’ll work together, and you’ll secretly help her collect a few things and put them in the filter at the back of the tank. I’ll give her treats, the number of which I can increase.” Hilda replied, “Good idea, let’s do it.” From then on, the Sea Life Park is full of warmth and harmony. Maya’s performance in front of the audience is getting better and better. 【解析】 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了希尔达在一家海洋生物公园与海豚训练员凯瑟琳一起做志愿者，以及她们和海豚玛雅之间的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“‘这是玛雅的秘密，’希尔达笑着说。”可知，第一段可描写玛雅的秘密是什么。 ②由第二段首句内容“现在凯瑟琳意识到发生了什么事。”可知，第二段可描写凯瑟琳的对这件事的反应以及事情的结果。 2.续写线索：训练海豚——发现秘密——分析秘密——互相协商——共同配合——良好结果 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①密密地：secretly/in private ②收集：collect/gather ③隐藏：hid/conceal 情绪类 ①惊讶地：in surprise/in amazement ②笑：laugh/smile 【点睛】【高分句型1】The truth of the matter, Hilda continued, is that Maya has been secretly collecting items from the tank, hiding them near the filter in the back of the tank. (运用了that引导的表语从句和现在分词作状语)  【高分句型2】I’ll give her treats, the number of which I can increase. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) （2023浙江1月卷）--重访农场：与感恩蜂鸟的奇妙重逢 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up. With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me. When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty? As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight. During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web. I rushed back to the deserted house. It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. Leaving the house, I couldn’t help wondering how it was getting on now. Had it managed to find its way back home, or was it still out there somewhere struggling to survive? I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of movement caught my attention. I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air. It seemed that the bird was waiting for me, its beady eyes locked on mine as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude. I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this sound and grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into my car and drove away. 【解析】 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者被邀请去一个农场野餐，发现一个房子里有只蜂鸟被蜘蛛网困住了，作者把蜂鸟救了，把蜂鸟带出去的时候它迟迟不肯走，当作者走到一条布满黑莓的小路时，它开始动了，但是却不肯飞走，徘徊着，后来终于飞走了，当作者准备离开时，蜂鸟又飞到作者面前，好像是在和作者告别。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“几个星期后，我又去了农场。”可知，第一段可描写作者回到农场时所看到的和所想到的。 ②由第二段首句内容“我正要离开，这时蜂鸟出现了。”可知，第二段可描写蜂鸟是如何对作者的以及作者的感想。 2.续写线索：想起救蜂鸟的时候——回到那个房子——想到那只蜂鸟——看见蜂鸟——蜂鸟的表现——作者的感想 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①思绪回到……：thoughts drift back to/thoughts return to ②匆匆回到：rush back to/hurry back to ③盯着：eyes locked on/eyes staring at 情绪类 ①宽慰：feel a surge of relief/feel relieved ②感激：grateful/thankful 【点睛】[高分句型1] As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web. (由as引导的时间状语从句和when引导的限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. (由that引导的主语从句) 【关爱动物话题名校好题调研】 【调研1】（2025·广东·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The Right Thing to Do Fauna had always dreamed of keeping a pet. Time and again, she asked her parents, promising to walk, feed, and look after it. Each time, though, they gave the same gentle response: “We’ll see.” One afternoon, on her way home from school, Fauna saw a little dog wandering near the park. Its fur was messy, and it looked lost, sniffing the ground as if searching for something. Feeling curious and hopeful, Fauna bent down and called to it. The dog quickly ran over, wagging (摇) its tail and gently pressing its nose into her hand, like they had known each other forever. She looked around, but no one seemed to be searching for the dog. Feeling pity for the lost dog, Fauna decided to take it home. As they walked side by side, her heart swelled with joy. It felt as though this was the pet she had always dreamed of—a friend she had been waiting for. At the front door, Fauna’s mother greeted her with a warm smile. Although she found the dog adorable, she gently reminded Fauna that they needed to try and find its owner. If the dog was lost, someone must be missing it. Fauna reluctantly (不情愿地) agreed, though part of her wished no one would come forward to claim the little dog. Over the next few days, Fauna and the dog—whom she named Buddy—grew inseparable. She fed him, played with him, and let him sleep curled up at the foot of her bed. Every day, it became harder to imagine life without him. Buddy seemed happy too, wagging his tail whenever she came home from school. But Fauna knew deep down that she had to do the right thing. She and her parents posted flyers around town, hoping to find Buddy’s owner. Just a few days later, the phone rang. Fauna’s heart sank as her father answered. From the conversation, it was clear that the caller was Buddy’s owner. He described Buddy perfectly—the friendly eyes and playful personality. Fauna knew Buddy would soon be leaving her. Her father arranged for the owner to come by and pick Buddy up. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When the man arrived, the little dog ran straight into his arms, barking with joy. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That evening, Fauna sat quietly in her room, feeling the emptiness that Buddy’s absence had left behind. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 When the man arrived, the little dog ran straight into his arms, barking with joy. Fauna watched as Buddy wagged his tail furiously, licking the man’s face with excitement. It was clear that Buddy remembered his owner and was overjoyed to see him again. The man thanked Fauna and her family for taking such good care of Buddy. Fauna knelt down to give Buddy one last hug, whispering, “I’ll miss you, Buddy.” As the man led Buddy away, Fauna stood at the door, waving until they were out of sight. That evening, Fauna sat quietly in her room, feeling the emptiness that Buddy’s absence had left behind. Her parents noticed her sadness and sat down with her. Her father said, “How about visiting the animal shelter this weekend? If you’re ready, maybe we can find a pet that needs a home—one that we can keep forever.” Fauna’s eyes lit up, and a small smile returned to her face. She realized that while saying goodbye to Buddy was hard, it had also opened the door to a new possibility—a chance to give another animal a loving home. 【导语】本文以人物和动物为线索展开。Fauna一直梦想养一只宠物，最终在公园里遇到了一只迷路的小狗，并带回了家。尽管她与小狗Buddy建立了深厚的感情，但最终Buddy的主人找到了它，Fauna不得不与Buddy分别。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ① 由第一段首句内容“当那个人到达时，小狗径直跑到他怀里，高兴地叫着。”可知，第一段可描写Buddy与主人重逢的温馨场景，以及Fauna内心的复杂情感。 ② 由第二段首句内容“那天晚上，Fauna静静地坐在她的房间里，感受着Buddy离开后留下的空虚。”可知，第二段可描写Fauna在Buddy离开后的孤独感，以及他们的计划。 2. 续写线索： 重逢场景——Buddy的喜悦——Fauna的失落——Buddy离开后的空虚——计划——感悟 3. 词汇激活： 行为类 ①照顾：take care of/look after ②拥抱：hug/embrace ③注意到：notice/observe 情绪类 ①兴奋地：with excitement/excitedly ②非常高兴：overjoyed/delighted 【点睛】[高分句型1] It was clear that Buddy remembered his owner and was overjoyed to see him again.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句） [高分句型2] As the man led Buddy away, Fauna stood at the door, waving until they were out of sight.（运用了连词as和until引导的时间状语从句、现在分词作状语） [高分句型3] If you’re ready, maybe we can find a pet that needs a home—one that we can keep forever.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句和that引导的定语从句） 【调研2】（24-25高二上·云南昭通·期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My family always had various animals around. To my great annoyance, I never had one that truly belonged to me. I couldn’t count how many times that I begged them for buying or adopting one for me. My parents, ultimately, compromised and permitted me to keep my own until I was nine years old. The day that I had longed for finally arrived. So thrilled was I that an increasing sense of excitement stuffed my heart. Knowing my parents brought a fish back home, which I would like to call it Mark, I offered to undertake the responsibility to look after it without hesitation. Every Saturday, it’s a routine to clean out his bowl. Cleaning which seemed impossible for me to shoulder, turned into something that I was desperate for and enjoyed. I found myself unconsciously turning down invitations from my friends to go somewhere immediately after school, because what I was concerned was to dash home to feed my fish first. Every day he would remind me that I was needed and that I had someone relying on me. Whenever I looked at him and appreciated his swimming freely, my heart was filled with joy and enjoyment. One day, I came home from school and headed to my room to feed Mark. I found a terrible thing had happened without any sign. I dropped my bag and ran over to the bowl. I held my breath, not daring make a sound. Panic took hold of me. I saw my best friend Mark floating around, lifeless. I couldn’t believe what I was seeing, rooted to the spot. 注意： 1. 续写的词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 At the very moment, my mom walked into my room. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After a while, I suddenly realized that Mark hadn’t just left me. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 At the very moment, my mom walked into my room. I turned around as tears started to well in my eyes. “Mommy, Mark died!” With that last word I started crying uncontrollably, tears streaming down my face like a flood. Trying to provide some comfort, she stepped close and threw her arms around me tightly, whispering soothing words and hoping to ease my pain. Then she added, “Sometimes we should be open to a different perspective.” It was those words that touched a string in my heart and drew my attention back to the right track. Lost in thought, I tried to make out what Mark’s companionship meant to me. After a while, I suddenly realized that Mark hadn’t just left me. He had taught me what responsibility meant, which I learned through feeding him and cleaning his bowl. To my nine-year-old self, this was a great achievement that I would value for a lifelong time. Slowly, a smile crossed my face. Even though Mark was gone, the lessons he taught me would forever be carved into my memory. Not only had Mark given me companionship, but also taught me about responsibility, love, loss and the importance of cherishing every moment. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。作者一直渴望拥有属于自己的宠物，九岁时父母带回一条鱼，作者取名马克并悉心照料，为了照顾它甚至推掉朋友邀约。然而有一天放学回家，作者发现马克死了，不敢相信眼前的景象。 【详解】1. 段落续写 ①由第一段句首内容“就在那一刻，我妈妈走进了我的房间。”可知，第一段可以描写妈妈对作者的开解和作者的反应。 ②由第二段句首内容“过了一会儿，我突然意识到马克并没有离开我。”可知，第二段可以描写作者反思自己通过喂养马克所得到的收获和感悟。 2. 续写线索：妈妈走进房间——安慰——沉思——意识到没有离开——感悟——终生珍视 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ①提供：provide/offer ②走近：step close/get close ③缓解：ease/alleviate 情绪类 ①泪水盈眶：tears started to well in one’s eyes/tears fill one’s eyes ②安慰：comfort/consolation 【点睛】【高分句型1】I turned around as tears started to well in my eyes. (运用了as引导的时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】It was those words that touched a string in my heart and drew my attention back to the right track. (运用了It was... that...强调句型) 【调研3】（24-25高二上·云南昭通·期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My family always had various animals around. To my great annoyance, I never had one that truly belonged to me. I couldn’t count how many times that I begged them for buying or adopting one for me. My parents, ultimately, compromised and permitted me to keep my own until I was nine years old. The day that I had longed for finally arrived. So thrilled was I that an increasing sense of excitement stuffed my heart. Knowing my parents brought a fish back home, which I would like to call it Mark, I offered to undertake the responsibility to look after it without hesitation. Every Saturday, it’s a routine to clean out his bowl. Cleaning which seemed impossible for me to shoulder, turned into something that I was desperate for and enjoyed. I found myself unconsciously turning down invitations from my friends to go somewhere immediately after school, because what I was concerned was to dash home to feed my fish first. Every day he would remind me that I was needed and that I had someone relying on me. Whenever I looked at him and appreciated his swimming freely, my heart was filled with joy and enjoyment. One day, I came home from school and headed to my room to feed Mark. I found a terrible thing had happened without any sign. I dropped my bag and ran over to the bowl. I held my breath, not daring make a sound. Panic took hold of me. I saw my best friend Mark floating around, lifeless. I couldn’t believe what I was seeing, rooted to the spot. 注意： 1.续写的词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 At the very moment, my mom walked into my room. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After a while, I suddenly realized that Mark hadn’t just left me. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     At the very moment, my mom walked into my room. I turned around as tears started to well in my eyes. “Mommy, Mark died!” With that last word I started crying uncontrollably, tears streaming down my face like a flood. Trying to provide some comfort, she stepped close and threw her arms around me tightly, whispering soothing words and hoping to ease my pain. Then she added, “Sometimes we should be open to a different perspective.” It was those words that touched a string in my heart and drew my attention back to the right track. Lost in thought, I tried to make out what Mark’s companionship meant to me.      After a while, I suddenly realized that Mark hadn’t just left me. He had taught me what responsibility meant, which I learned through feeding him and cleaning his bowl. To my nine-year-old self, this was a great achievement that I would value for a lifelong time. Slowly, a smile crossed my face. Even though Mark was gone, the lessons he taught me would forever be carved into my memory. Not only had Mark given me companionship, but also taught me about responsibility, love, loss and the importance of cherishing every moment. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者九岁时与宠物鱼Mark的短暂陪伴经历，细腻刻画了孩童对生命责任的初识、失去伙伴的悲痛以及从中领悟的成长真谛。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“就在这时，妈妈走进了我的房间。”以及第二段首句内容“过了一会儿，我突然意识到，Mark不只是离开了我。”可知，第一段可描写作者看到妈妈后难掩悲痛，妈妈安慰作者应该从不同的视角看待问题。 ②由第二段首句内容“过了一会儿，我突然意识到，Mark不只是离开了我。”可知，第二段可描写作者意识到Mark的存在教会了自己责任的意义，让作者得到了成长。 2.续写线索：妈妈走进了作者的房间，作者再也无法掩饰内心的悲痛，哭了出来——妈妈抱着作者，安慰着作者——她建议作者从不同的视角看待问题——作者陷入了沉思，开始思考Mark的存在——片刻后，作者意识到Mark的陪伴让自己有了责任心——慢慢地，作者开始露出微笑，因为作者明白了Mark不仅陪伴了自己，还让作者得到了成长 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①开始：start/begin ②努力：try to/make every effort to ③缓解：ease/relieve 情绪类 ①控制不住地：uncontrollably/irrepressible ②使感动：touch/move 【点睛】【高分句型1】I turned around as tears started to well in my eyes.（运用了as引导的状语从句） 【高分句型2】It was those words that touched a string in my heart and drew my attention back to the right track.（运用了强调句型） 【调研4】（2024·福建泉州·三模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 My Uncle Joe had a farmland in the countryside. Every summer, I would spend a few weeks there, playjing around and doing some help. his farmland is often visited by crows (乌鸦). I discovered that they were so intelligent. They would drop nuts onto roads to be broken open by passing cars and even could use their sharp beaks (鸟喙) to open cups of bottles. That day was the hottest day of the year. Even the birds would rest in the shades of our yard to cool themselves. Uncle Joe was wiping sweat off his face when he came into the house. “Ken, did you let the air out of two tyres on my old truck?” he asked me. And I denied. “I guess I must have run over some nails,” Uncle Joe said. I helped him pump (打气)some air into the tyres so we could drive to the garage. The garage man couldn’t find any nails, It seemed it was due to the opening of the tyre valves (阀门). “Maybe, Ken, here, was playing a trick,” he told Uncle Joe. “I wouldn’t do that!” I said with red face, “Flattyres aren’t funny.” “But there are only three others who live nearby, and they’re on vacation,” Uncle Joe said. “It’s a mystery.” The next morning was even hotter. Uncle Joe stormed into the house, shouting at me, “Now three tyres are flat! Who else could be pulling such a trick?” We pumped up the tyres again. When Uncle Joe went back inside, I decided to solve this mystery myself. I hid behind a bush, keeping an eye on the truck. Maybe some kid who is visiting one of our neighbors is doing it, I thought. The sun got hotter and hotter. I got sleepier and sleepier. Suddenly I heard a ssst, ssst hissing sound. My eyes flew open, and I stared at the strangest sight I’d ever seen. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2，请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I noticed a crow standing beside Uncle Joe’s back tyre. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Seeing the crow cooling from tyre’s air, I rushed to find Uncle Joe. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】      I noticed a crow standing beside Uncle Joe’s back tyre. Swiftly hopping around the valve, it was occupied in some work. Full of curiosity, I covered myself behind the branches, trying not to make a sound. What did it try to do? Then, my question was answered as it pressed against the tyre with its sharp yellow beak. Sssst! The valve was loosened and my jaw nearly dropped. The key was the air, which was immediately released and rushed to the clever creature. Its rolling eyes and flapping wings seemed to indicate its pleasure.     Seeing the crow cooling from tyre’s air, I rushed to find Uncle Joe. Without hesitation, I told him what I discovered. Following me, Uncle Joe came to the spot, where only some black feathers were left. The “criminal” seemed to have escaped. Uncle Joe smiled and patted me on the shoulder, apologizing for his previous misunderstanding. I waved my hands, saying it was OK and truly excited about solving the mystery. Later, we decided to place an electric fan outside the yard, not only to protect the truck but also to bring coolness to the intelligent visitor. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在乡下叔叔的农场度假时，发现叔叔的卡车轮胎莫名其妙地瘪了。经过观察，作者发现是一只乌鸦利用其锋利的喙打开轮胎的气阀，释放出气体来给自己降温。最后，作者和叔叔决定在院子里放置一个电风扇，既保护卡车，又给聪明的乌鸦带去凉爽。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我注意到一只乌鸦站在乔叔叔的后轮旁边。”可知，第一段可描写作者发现的真相即乌鸦用其锋利的喙打开轮胎的气阀，释放出气体来给自己降温。 ②由第二段首句内容“看到乌鸦从轮胎的空气中冷却下来，我冲去找乔叔叔。”可知，第二段可描写作者找到乔叔叔，让叔叔来到现场别发现真相，叔叔因为自己的误会向作者道歉，定在院子里放置一个电风扇，既保护卡车，又给聪明的乌鸦带去凉爽。 2.续写线索：作者躲在树丛后面——发现真相——告诉乔叔叔事实——叔叔来到现场发现真相并向作者道歉——最终解决谜题——在院中安装电风扇 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①躲藏树枝后：cover/hide oneself behind the branches ②.释放：release/set off ③.表明：indicate/show 情绪类 ①.感到惊讶：my jaw nearly dropped/felt extremely shocked ②.感到激动的：feel excited/thrilled/exhilarated 【点睛】[高分句型1]. Full of curiosity, I covered myself behind the branches, trying not to make a sound. （使用现在分词作伴随状语） [高分句型2]. Following me, Uncle Joe came to the spot, where only some black feathers were left. （由where引导非限制性定语从句） 【调研5】（2024·江西鹰潭·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The Making of a Believer It was Christmas Eve morning, and I awoke with a mission: to find my lost cat, Baby-Girl, who is chubby and cute, fond of sitting in her one-and-only spot near the nearth (壁炉). AS I got ready, I could hear icy rain pouring down. I said a quick prayer for Baby-Girl. She was out there somewhere in the storm, I could just feel it. Sure, it had been six months since she’d gone missing, but I still had faith. It was the season for miracles, after all. That summer, my sweet cat had disappeared from my parents’ house in Indiana. Baby-Girl had been staying with them. At the time, I lived and worked in Washington, D．C． Baby-Girl had gotten out of my parents’ house three days before I was set to fly back home to pick her up. My dad and I spent that entire visit searching for her. Dad was the family’s resident “realistic”, which mean the spent a whole lot of time trying to prepare me for the worst. She’s either been hit by a car or been taken in by someone who found her” he said. I rolled my eyes. Dad always supported me, but he was so skepticat. He could do with a little more faith! Besides, though I couldn’t explain it, I knew I’d see her Baby-Girl again. If any cat could do the impossible, it was my Baby-Girl. Even after T returned to D．C． without her and the weeks stretched into months, deep down I had this feeling that we’d be reunited. How, home again for the holidays, I was de tem mined to pick up my search. I grabbed Baby-Girl’s cat carrier and loaded it into the car, then persuaded Dad to drive me to the shelter, hoping she’d been found. “Sharon, you have to be realistic,” my dad said as we headed to the garage. “She’s been gone too long. You’re not going to find her.” “Well, I just have a feeling,” I said Dad raised an eyebrow a she climbed into the driver’s seat to take me to the shelter. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 We were led to the room where the abandoned cats lived. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Shortly after, my shocked Dad drove us back home. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 We were led to the room where the abandoned cat lived. I tiptoed into the room with a strong feeling of anticipation. Out of nowhere, I heard a familiar meow, which absorbed my prompt attention suddenly. My eyes zeroed in on a little cat caged in the corner. She was skinnier than I remember, but it was my Baby-Girl all right! Overwhelmed with extreme excitement and delight, I opened the cage door. Baby-Girl practically jumped into my arms. I held her close, with my eye swelling up tears, as my Dad looked on, his jaw dropping wide with shock. Soon after, my shocked Dad drove us back home. The instant we dropped Baby-Girl off, freeing her from the carrier, she immediately dashed to the hearth, seeking her favourite spot. On seeing this scene, we all roared with laughter, signaling that my Dad’s doubts were removed as well. Against all odds, my cat was home again, right before Christmas. It was such a miracle that my heart was filled with gratitude, feeling blessed with Baby-Girl’s long-awaited companion. As for my dear father who always support me, it turned out that Baby-Girl’s return made him a man of a believer. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者寻找失踪猫咪Baby-Gir的经历。在圣诞节前夜，作者醒来时决心要找到失踪的猫咪，相信它仍在暴风雨中的某个地方。虽然已经过去了几周，但作者仍然有信心。在之前的探访中，作者和父亲一起寻找Baby-Girl。但父亲是一个“现实主义者”，他试图让作者为最坏的情况做好准备。作者深信，如果有任何一只猫咪能够完成不可能的任务，那就是她的Baby-Girl。尽管作者未能在动物收容所中找到她，但她仍然相信她们将有一天能与所爱的宠物重聚。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我们被带到了被遗弃的猫住的房间。”可知，第一段可描写作者进入一所房子，听到了熟悉的猫叫声，找到了她的Baby-Girl ②由第二段首句内容“不久之后，我震惊的爸爸开车送我们回家。”可知，第二段可描写作者和父亲一起把猫咪带回家，猫咪非常开心，作者心中充满感激。 2.续写线索：走进房间——听到猫叫声——找到猫咪——喜悦——回家——开心——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①吸引：absorbed/captivated/engrossed/immersed ②专注于：zeroed in on/focused/concentrated/fixed ③冲向：dashed/rushed/sprinted/bolted 情绪类 ①兴奋：excitement/thrill/exhilaration/elation ②感激：gratitude/thankfulness/appreciation/indebtedness 【点睛】[高分句型1]Out of nowhere, I heard a familiar meow, which absorbed my prompt attention suddenly.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] It was such a miracle that my heart was filled with gratitude, feeling blessed with Baby-Girl’s long-awaited companion. (运用了such…that引导的结果状语从句) 【调研6】（2025·山东潍坊·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was one of those freezing nights we got here in Minnesota in the middle of winter. The dampness in the air got trapped and a curtain of fog sank all around, mixing with the snow on the ground and the strong snow falling from the sky to white out everything. Normally I wouldn’t drive in that kind of weather, but I’d been at a Tupperware party all evening, and I was so exhausted. The desire to be in the comfort of my own home beat my better judgment. However never had I imagined my little act could save my life on such a night. I was only on the road for a minute before I regretted my decision not to stay put. The winding country road was totally deserted. My car’s headlights could barely cut through the heavy fog. The snow was getting heavier. A lot heavier. Everything beyond a few feet in front of me was a mystery. I drove slowly. I wasn’t quite sure where I was, though I knew there were railways specifically built for freight (货运) trains in this area. But in such weather, it was impossible to spot the tracks or any signs of an approaching train. Trembling with cold, I turned up the heat. The loud blowers did their work, sheltering me from the bitter cold and the sound outside. Seemingly, everything went smoothly as I inched forward. All at once, my headlights shone on a small animal in front of me, right at the farthest point they could reach. I hit the brakes-tires screeched (发嘎吱声) against the snow as the car was coming to a stop. When the world stopped spinning, taking a closer look, I found it was a brown rabbit, its fur covered with ice crystals in the headlights. I tapped the horn, no response. I tried again, yet the little creature remained rooted-it appeared unwilling to get out of the way. Curiously, I got out of the car and made my way toward it. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Getting near, I found its leg stuck in a trap. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Just as I was freeing the rabbit from the trap, a train whooshed(呼啸)by. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Getting near, I found its leg stuck in a trap. Its eyes locked onto mine—wide and desperate, and its nose twitched in panic, as if begging for help. Despite the freezing wind biting through my coat, I knelt down. “Hold on,” I whispered, trying to loosen the trap with numb fingers. The little creature stopped struggling, staring at me with a mix of fear and hope. My gloves were already wet, but I ignored. I determined to save this little life, forgetting about everything around. Just as I was freeing the rabbit from the trap, a train whooshed (呼啸) by. The fog swirled, and the train’s dark shape with faint light was briefly visible before disappearing into the heavy fog, leaving only the steam behind. In that split second, I realized: had I not stopped for the rabbit, my car would have been on those hidden tracks. My heart pounded violently. After pulling myself together, I finally loosened the trap and the rabbit hopped away. This encounter became a constant reminder that in a world with uncertainties, kindness has its own reward. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在一个寒冷、多雾且大雪纷飞的夜晚开车回家，在行驶过程中，由于大雪和浓雾，道路能见度极低，作者行驶得十分缓慢且不确定自己的位置。当作者的车灯照到前方一只被冰雪覆盖的棕色兔子时，作者紧急刹车。尽管按喇叭示意，兔子却没有移动。出于好奇，作者下车走向兔子。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“走近时，我发现它的腿卡在陷阱里了。”可知，第一段可描写作者发现兔子被困并试图解救它的情景。 ②由第二段首句内容“正当我把兔子从陷阱里解救出来时，一列火车呼啸而过。”可知，第二段可描写作者在解救兔子时遇到火车的惊险经历，以及这一经历带给他的深刻感悟和认识。 2.续写线索：兔子似乎在乞求帮助——作者开始帮助兔子——作者下定决心救兔子——火车消失——作者意识到自己差点被火车撞——救出兔子——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①乞求：beg/implore ②救：save/rescue ③跳走：hop away/jump away 情绪类 ①绝望：desperate/despairing ②害怕：fear/fright 【点睛】[高分句型1] Its eyes locked onto mine—wide and desperate, and its nose twitched in panic, as if begging for help. (由as if引导的方式状语从句和省略) [高分句型2] This encounter became a constant reminder that in a world with uncertainties, kindness has its own reward. (由that引导的同位语从句) 【调研7】（2025·辽宁大连·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 We purchased our first home about six years ago. We had fallen in love immediately with a bank-owned, three-floor log cabin in a lake community. We promised the universe that day that if we got the house, we’d rescue one dog that needed it most. It would move in with us the same day we moved in and become part of the family. We didn’t want a puppy; we wanted an unwanted dog, a large one. Those are the ones that usually get left behind in the animal rescue stands, anyway, but I wanted a large dog. It would be a companion for the kids and me because my husband worked far away during the day. The dog would watch over us. I reached out to a rescue group, and we started the paperwork. They approved us and were very excited to have adopters like us. Three days before moving day, we got the call. They had rescued a twelve-year-old German Shepherd called Misty. She had heartworm, suffered from malnutrition (营养不良) and had lost most of her chest hair. According to them, she certainly wasn’t what most adopters considered pretty. She wouldn’t need much just a home to live out her days. We fell in love with Misty before we even met her. Moving day came, and just as the last truck was unloaded, the rescue arrived. Friends watched eagerly, excited to meet Misty. She was more beautiful than I could have imagined. She moved with a senior grace, her cloudy eyes taking in her new home and family. She was underweight at eighty pounds, but she was aware of where every inch of her was. She was led over to where my infant (婴幼儿) daughter was stretched out, cooing on a blanket. We held Misty while she sniffed the baby’s head and then cautiously lay next to her without touching her blanket. Misty was given the best of everything. She enjoyed the companionship of her doggy brother and sister as much as she adored her human brother and sister. A day before Thanksgiving, I had begun cooking a series of three turkeys so we’d have enough food for everyone. I left the first one cooling on the back of the stove as I stepped out for a short break to have coffee with the neighbor. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When I returned, only a few bones remained. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ My heart broke because she was terrified by her own behavior. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 When I returned, only a few bones remained. Misty must have found that turkey too much of a temptation. While I was gone, she must have climbed onto the stove and helped herself to a feast. The remaining bones scattered about the kitchen and everywhere was a mess. But what pierced my heart was the posture of Misty—Curling in the corner, she guarded my sleeping daughter’s blanket with her ears flattened in shame. Misty guiltily gazed at me with those cloudy eyes as if she was aware of her terrible mistake. My heart broke because she was terrified by her own behavior. With her body trembling, this gentle giant who shared her food bowl with stray cats even wept when I approached, expecting punishment. Instead, I knelt and buried my face in her thinning hair. “You’ve earned this feast,” I comforted Misty in whisper, remembering the shelter’s report of her surviving on the leftover from the dustbin. Stroking her head softly, I promised she would always be bathed in love and warmth from then on. That night, Misty slept by the blanket safe and sound, seemingly dreaming of endless turkey feasts. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者搬到了新家，并且联系救援组织，领养了一只德国牧羊犬，取名Misty。感恩节的前一天，作者做好了火鸡放在炉子后面冷却，结果被Misty吃光了。作者发现后，Misty十分害怕，但是作者没有责备Misty，而是安慰了它。并且保证以后会用爱和温暖照顾Misty。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“当我回来时，只剩下几块骨头”可知，第一段可描写作者发现Misty吃光了火鸡，Misty十分害怕。 ②由第二段首句内容“我的心都碎了，因为她被自己的行为吓坏了”可知，第二段可描写作者安慰Misty承诺以后好好照顾Misty。 2.续写线索：Misty吃光火鸡——作者发现——Misty害怕——作者安慰Misty——承诺照顾Misty——Misty放心睡去 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①守护：guard/keep one's eyes on ②预料：expect/anticipate ③靠近：approach/get close to 情绪类 ①温柔地：softly/gently ②爱：love/affection 【点睛】[高分句型1] Misty must have found that turkey too much of a temptation. (由that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] With her body trembling, this gentle giant who shared her food bowl with stray cats even wept when I approached, expecting punishment. (由when引导时间状语从句) 【调研8】（24-25高三上·四川南充·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Puppies for Sale A shop owner placed a sign above his door that read, “Puppies for Sale.” As we know, signs like this always have a way of appealing to young children, and to no one’s surprise, a little boy appeared by the shop owner’s sign and approached the owner. “Excuse me, how much are you going to sell the puppies for?” he asked. The shop owner replied, “For anything between $30 and $50.” The little boy reached in his pocket and pulled out some change from it. “I have $2. 37 on me,” he said in a low voice. “Can I please look at them?” The shop owner smiled and whistled. Out of the doghouse came the mother dog, who ran down the passage of his shop, followed by five tiny ball of fur. One puppy was moving slowly and fell behind. In no time the little boy picked out the slow puppy and asked, “What’s wrong with that little dog?” The shop owner explained that the vet had examined the little puppy and had discovered that one of his back legs was injured. He would always walk slowly and with difficulty. He would be lame (瘸的). Hearing what the shop owner had said, the little boy became excited, “That is the little puppy I want to buy.” The shop owner said, “No, you don’t want to buy that little dog. If you really want him, I’ll just give him to you.” The little boy got quite upset. He looked straight into the shop owner’s eyes and said, “I don’t want you to give him to me. That little dog is worth every bit as much as all the other dogs and I’ll pay full price. As a matter of fact, I’ll give you $2. 37 right now, and 50 cents a month until I have him paid for.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The shop owner shook his head and declined the little boy. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ All of a sudden, the little boy reached down and rolled up one leg of his pants. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】      The shop owner shook his head and declined the little boy. He said, “You really don’t need to buy this little dog. He is never going to be able to run, jump and play with you like the other puppies.” The little boy stood his ground, determined to pay for the limping puppy. He looked at the store owner with unwavering confidence and replied, “He may not be perfect, but that doesn’t make him any less deserving of a loving home.” All of a sudden, the little boy reached down and rolled up one leg of his pants. A badly twisted, crippled left leg supported by a big metal brace came into sight. The boy looked up at the shop owner and softly replied, “Well, I don’t run so well myself, and the little puppy will need someone who understands!” Tears sparkling in eyes, the owner handed over the lame puppy to the boy. It always feels so great to have someone who understands you and cares for your heart and soul. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了小男孩到一家卖小狗的店里买狗，却看中了一只后腿受伤走路一瘸一拐的小狗，店主说可以把狗送给他，虽然小男孩钱不够，但是他坚持要分期付款。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“店主摇了摇头，拒绝了小男孩。”可知，第一段可描写店主描述反对的原因以及小男孩说明自己坚持付钱的原因。 ②由第二段首句内容“突然，小男孩伸手卷起一条裤腿。”可知，第二段可描写小男孩展示自己腿上的残疾，店主深受感动，把狗交给小男孩。 2.续写线索：店主解释——小男孩坚持付钱并说明原因——小男孩展示残疾——店主流泪——店主把狗交给小男孩 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①购买：buy/purchase ②回答：reply/answer ③映入眼帘：come into sight/come into view 情绪类 ①流泪：tears sparkling in eyes/tears welling up in the eyes ②关心：care for/be concerned about 【点睛】[高分句型1]Tears sparkling in eyes, the owner handed over the lame puppy to the boy. （运用了独立主格结构） [高分句型2] It always feels so great to have someone who understands you and cares for you heart and soul. （由关系代词who引导定语从句） 【调研9】（24-25高二下·河北保定·开学考试）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a gloomy afternoon, with dark clouds hanging low in the sky, making the already old-fashioned campus seem even more deserted. After the last class of the day, I walked across the campus with my close classmate, Tom. As we neared a quiet corner beside the old library, a series of faint meowing sounds (猫叫声) pierced the stillness. Our curiosity piqued, we exchanged a glance and immediately traced the source of the noise. Behind a messy stack of old boxes, we discovered a minuscule, emaciated cat. Its once-soft fur was now caked with dirt, and its small body trembled ever so slightly, a clear indication that it had suffered from days of hunger and cold. A profound sense of pity welled up within us. Tom bent down slowly, his hand extended gently, his voice soft as he tried to lead the frightened animal out. At first, the cat was frightened, its wide-eyed gaze fixed on us in fear. But gradually, after a few moments of cautious sniffing (嗅), it timidly stepped out from its hiding spot. We knew we couldn’t abandon this helpless creature. Tom proposed taking it to the school infirmary (医务室), believing the school doctor might be able to assess its condition. I nodded in instant agreement, yet a tinge of worry crept in as we pondered how the school authorities would respond to us bringing a cat into the infirmary. Just at that moment, Lily, a classmate with a kind heart and a skill of animal care, happened to pass by. The moment she laid eyes on the pitiful cat in our arms, her expression softened. She informed us that she had experience in dealing with stray (走失的) animals and eagerly offered her assistance. With Lily on board, our determination to save the cat grew tenfold. We held the cat gently and made our way towards the infirmary, filled with hope and a touch of nervousness. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸相应位置作答。 On reaching the infirmary, the school doctor greeted us with a surprised look. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Over the next few days, we took turns to take care of the cat. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 On reaching the infirmary, the school doctor greeted us with a surprised look. However, after listening to our earnest plea and the cat’s tragic situation, her expression softened. She quickly got to work, conducting a thorough examination. She told us the cat was severely malnourished and had a respiratory infection. While treating the cat, she patiently explained to us the care it needed. We listened intently, absorbing every word, grateful for her expertise. With the doctor’s professional treatment, the cat’s breathing gradually became more stable, and we felt a glimmer of hope. Over the next few days, we took turns to take care of the cat. We divided the tasks among us. I was in charge of bringing fresh food and water every morning, Tom cleaned the cat’s temporary shelter, and Lily monitored its health closely. As the days passed, the cat’s condition improved remarkably. Its fur became smoother, and its eyes sparkled with newfound vitality. It even started to play with a small ball we brought for it. This experience not only saved a life but also strengthened the bond between us classmates. We realized that with unity and compassion, we could make a difference. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和同学们如何发现并救助一只流浪小猫的过程，以及这一经历给他们带来的感悟和成长。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“到达医务室后，校医用惊讶的眼神迎接了我们。”以及第二段首句内容“在接下来的几天里，我们轮流照顾这只小猫。”可知，第一段可描写了解了情况后，校医救治了小猫。 ②由第二段首句内容“在接下来的几天里，我们轮流照顾这只小猫。”可知，第二段可描写作者和同学们轮流照顾小猫，并深有感触。 2.续写线索：校医非常惊讶地看着小猫——了解了情况后， 校医立刻开始检查猫的健康状况——校医发现小猫营养不良，并告知了作者如何照顾小猫——于是，作者和同学们开始轮流照顾小猫——他们分工明确，密切关注小猫的情况——随着时间的推移，小猫的情况越来越好，而作者和同学们之间的情谊也日益密切 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①解释：explain/make an explanation ②负责：be in charge of/take charge of ③提高：improve/enhance 情绪类 ①专心地：intently/closely/attentively ②感激的：grateful/thankful 【点睛】【高分句型1】She told us the cat was severely malnourished and had a respiratory infection.（运用了省略that的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】As the days passed, the cat’s condition improved remarkably.（运用了as引导的状语从句） 【调研10】（24-25高一下·江西·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Tiffany Massey had just moved to the state of Maine last year and lived alone. She enjoyed the beach near the neighbourhood and jogging (慢跑) around in the evenings. It was during one of those evenings that she noticed Mrs Johnson. She’d never forget their first meeting. Mrs Johnson had a dog named Max. Max almost attacked her one evening if it hadn’t been for Mrs Johnson. “Stop now, or you won’t get any food tonight!” she yelled at the dog from a distance. “I’m sorry. Max didn’t mean it. He just doesn’t like strangers! You’d better stay away from him!” Mrs Johnson apologized, walking up to her. “Well...” Before Tiffany could say anything, the elderly woman and the dog walked away. Days later, she was jogging along the beach again when Max barked (狗叫) at her like their first meeting. Tiffany tried to change her route (路线) to escape him. This happened even every time she went for a jog later, and Tiffany had had enough of him! With weeks flying, things changed a bit as they met more often. Max no longer barked at Tiffany but followed her instead, obviously friendly. Gradually, Tiffany got used to jogging on the beach with Max running after her, and Mrs Johnson watching them run. And they began their conversation and Tiffany began to know about Mrs Johnson, who was in her late seventies and lived alone as well. Or rather, with Max, she was not alone. One day, Tiffany went for her usual jog, but she didn’t see Max. She felt a bit upset that he wasn’t following her. However, in the following days, Mrs Johnson and Max still didn’t show up on the beach. “Where has he gone? Did they move somewhere?” Tiffany wondered. Mrs Johnson and Max had become a part of her daily routine, and their sudden absence left her uneasy. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 With curiosity, Tiffany decided to figure out what had happened. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Tiffany offered to take care of Max until Mrs Johnson recovered. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： With curiosity, Tiffany decided to figure out what had happened. The next day, she went to knock Mrs Johnson’s door, however, receiving no response. Feeling more concerned, she then asked around the neighborhood. A neighbour mentioned that Mrs Johnson suffered a heart attack several days ago and had been brought to hospital. Tiffany’s heart sank. She quickly called the local hospital and finally found Mrs Johnson, who was resting in her hospital bed, looking weak but delighted to see Tiffany. Mrs Johnson said she missed Max terribly, who had to be left at home alone. Tiffany offered to take care of Max until Mrs Johnson recovered. Mrs Johnson was more than grateful for her kindness. Over the next few weeks, Tiffany balanced her daily routine with caring for Max. She walked him to the beach, and he quickly connected with Tiffany. She even brought Max to visit Mrs Johnson, whose health gradually improved. When Mrs Johnson finally returned home, Tiffany and Max were there to welcome her. After that, Tiffany, Mrs Johnson and Max were often seen walking along the beach together. Tiffany realized that her move to Maine had brought her more than just a change of scenery — it had given her a new family. 【导语】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了Tiffany从初到Maine时对Max的害怕，到逐渐习惯Max的陪伴，再到最后主动帮助生病的Mrs Johnson照顾Max的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①根据第一段首句“出于好奇，蒂芙尼决定弄清楚发生了什么事。”可知，下文可描写Tiffany敲Mrs Johnson的门没有得到回应，询问邻居得知Mrs Johnson生病住院了，于是去医院看望她，得知Max被独自留在家中。 ②根据第二段首句“蒂芙尼主动提出照顾马克斯，直到约翰逊夫人康复。”可知，下文可描写Tiffany如何照顾Max，包括带Max散步、去医院看望Mrs Johnson，以及Mrs Johnson康复回家后Tiffany和Max一起去迎接她，最后表达Tiffany的感悟。 2.续写线索：好奇想要了解——敲门无回应——询问邻居得知生病——去医院看望——得知Max独自在家——主动提出照顾Max——带Max散步、去医院——迎接Mrs Johnson回家——感悟 3.词类激活 行为类： ①询问：ask/enquire ②照顾：care for/take care of ③探望：visit/pay a visit to ④意识到：realize/be aware of 情绪类： ①担心的：concerned/worried ②开心的：delighted/joyful ③感激的：grateful/thankful 【点睛】[高分句型1]Feeling more concerned, she then asked around the neighborhood.（运用了现在分词作状语） [高分句型2]She even brought Max to visit Mrs Johnson, whose health gradually improved.（运用了whose引导的定语从句） $$