内容正文:
Write about a sporting moment
Writing
Ms.Zhang
summarize the structure and features of a narrative writing(记叙文写作);
analyze the passage to get some useful tips and expressions;
complete a writing about sport.
In today’s lesson,you will be able to:
1 What event is described?
2 When and where did the event take place?
Read for information
3 What did the author see?
Read the passage on your book and find answers to the following quesions.
4 What did the author hear?
5 How did the author feel?
1 What event is described?
The final of the 4×100-metre relay.
2 When and where did the event take place?
Last Saturday, at the school playground.
3 What did the author see?
All the audience stood up when the runners set off…The runners strained to run as fast as they could....
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4 What did the author hear?
Shouting and cheering.
5 How did the author feel?
Caught up in the excitement, as if the author’s lungs would burst. It was so wonderful to be part of this sporting moment and enjoy its speed and passion.
Read for information
Read for genre and structure
What is the genre(体裁) of the passage?
narration:
Other features:
person:
tense :
Who, when, where
What, why, how
the first person
simple past tense
Read for the structure
Read and find out what is written in each part
part 1
introduction
part 2
What he saw and heard
before the event
during the event
after the event
part 3
How he felt
when where who what
body
conclusion
Read for the language and writing techniques(写作手法)
1. 比赛开始之前,每个人都是安静和沉着的。
当运动员开跑之时,所有人都变得兴奋狂热。
It was like being hit by a huge wave of excitement.
comparison
simile(明喻)
I was also caught up in the excitement and cheered
so hard that I thought my lungs would burst.
hyperbole夸张
Before the race,everyone was quiet and still.
When the runners set off,everyone went wild.
2.就像是被一股巨大的兴奋浪潮击中一样
3.我也被激动的情绪吸引和欢呼得很用力以至于我觉得我的肺都要炸了!
Read for the language
4. 我从未想过比赛项目地氛围会这么紧张!
I had never imagined that the atmosphere at a sports event could be so intense.
5.The atmosphere here at...is electric.
在这里的氛围是扣人心弦的。
6.we see the Chinese players embracing,with tears of happiness in their eyes...
中国运动员带着欢乐的泪水拥抱在一起。
It’s your time to write
Think about a sporting moment about basketball you have experienced to write a passage.
Writing task
structure clear and well-organized?
language simple past tense?
figures of speech?
the sentences to convey tension and excitement from the reading passage?
attitude positive?
handwriting neat and beautiful?
Faster, higher, stronger
Summary
According to the checklist to polish your writing.
Assignment
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