UNIT 11 Section Ⅵ WRITING WORKSHOP & READING CLUB-【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第四册（北师大版2024）

UNIT 11 CONFLICT AND COMPROMISE Section VI WRITING WORKSHOP READING CLUB 写作精析提升表达能力 答案精解P 以读促写 Step1品教材课文 Step2析写作手法 Should TV Advertisements for Unhealthy Products Be Banned? 【学表达】 In many countries,there are already laws []which do not [1]which引导定语从句，修饰先行词laws。 allow advertising for tobacco products like cigarettes.[2]In my [2]1 a my opinion'“在我看来”，陈述观点， opinion,we should go further and ban advertisements for any [3]副词Undoubtedly作状语 unhealthy products such as alcohol and fried food. [4It作形式主语，动词不定式短语o limit [3]Undoubtedly,unhealthy products harm our health. 为真正的主语。本句再次说明自己的立场。 [4]It is clearly desirable to limit TV advertisements for fast [5]解释原因，支持论点。 food.[5]The rate of obesity has increased greatly.In some [6]说明因肥胖而死亡的人数之多 countries.[6]it is second only to smoking as a eause of death. [7]In addition“除…以外（还）”，进一步解释 [7]In addition,drinking alcohol results in a wide range of 原因， diseases.If children see fewer advertisements on TV of people [8]why引导定语从句，that引导表语从句，本 doing these activities,they are much less likely to try to copy 句用反方观点再次引出自己的论证， their behaviour. [9]However之后为作者真正想要表达的内容。 [8]A reason why people are against the idea is that [10 To conclude“总之”，得出结论，再次声明 making the products creates jobs and brings in large amounts 自己的观点。 of tax.[9]However,surely this is a false argument.The 【学结构】 money invested in making these unhealthy products could be 第一部分：提出论点，并表达自己的观点： used for more worthwhile businesses,such as those that In my opinion... improve our environment.Furthermore,it is not right to make 第二部分：解释原因： money from activities which harm human health. ..unhealthy products harm our health. [10]To conelude,laws to ban TV advertisements for ...it is not right to... unhealthy products are beneficial to society.They help to save 第三部分：对所述观点进行总结。 lives and improve the health of a nation. ...are beneficial to society. 须有论点，论据和论证三要素，在结构上要有 素材积累 引言、正文和结论三部分。 1.文体特点 (l)引言(introduction)。由于英语作文受时间、 本单元的写作任务是写一篇观点分析利 字数的限制，因此，审清题意之后在引言段中作 弊类的议论文，议论文是高考书面表达常考体 者就必须简单解释要讨论的问题，并明白地亮出 裁，文章以议论为主，通过摆事实、讲道理等方 自己的观点，如提倡什么、支持什么、反对什么。 法，对客观事物进行评述或议论，以阐明作者 (2)主体段(main body)。主体段是议论的过 的观点与主张，说服别人。议论文在内容上必 程，作者必须有足够的证据(adequate proofs) ·49· 英语选择性必修第四册课堂学案(BS) 来论证自己的观点。一般可提出一个或两个 It is obvious that its disadvantages outweigh 论据，并对此用一两句话分别进行阐述 its advantages.很明显，它的缺点大于优点。 (3)结论(conclusion)。结论段可以用一两句 (3)结尾 话来结束文章。同时要注意与引言段呼应，但 To sum up,only in this way can we solve 不能照搬前面的原话。 the problem. 2.话题词汇 总而言之，只有这样我们才能解决这个问题。 ①concern n.&t.关心：担忧 Therefore.we can draw the conclusion that ②phenomenon n.现象 practice makes perfect. ③ignore .忽略，忽视 因此，我们可以得出这样的结论：熟能生巧。 ④deny .否认 All in all,taking more exercise is of benefit ⑤undoubtedly adu.毋庸置疑地 to health.总之，多运动对健康有好处。 ⑥advisable adj,明智的，可取的 ⑦unwise ad.不明智的 佳作构建 ⑧desirable ad.可取的，值得做的 【写作要求】 ⑨worthwhile adi.值得的 当今，很多人认为高文凭就等于高能力，像 ⑩in my opinion/view 我认为 考研人数的增加就可以说明这一点，请你写一篇 ①in favor of 支持，赞同 80词左右的短文发表自己的观点。 ②with the development of随着…的发展 参考词汇：高文凭high diploma Bto conclude/to sum up/in conclusion all in all 'on balance 总而言之 3.话题句式 (1)开头 Nowadays.it is common to advertise products on television. 现在，在电视上为产品做广告很普遍。 As far as I'm concerned.it's desirable advisable to limit the time online. 【四步成文】 我认为，限制上网时间是可取的明智的。 第一步：合理布局，精心谋篇 The reasons are listed as follows.理由如下. 第一段：引出话题，表达自己的论点： (2)正文 第二段：对自己的观点进行论述： As is known to all,a proper amount of 第三段：对所述观点进行总结 exercise contributes to our health. 第二步：遣词造句，规范得体 众所周知，适当的锻炼有益于我们的健康 1,目前，有很多人认为高文凭等于高能力。 There is no denying the fact that paying by mobile phone has become very common. 不可否认的事实是，用手机支付已经很普遍了。 2.事实上，高文凭并不能决定一个人的能力。 However.that's not the case. 然而，那不是事实。 50 UNIT 11 CONFLICT AND COMPROMISE 3.能力是学校教育、经验和灵活性的综合。 8.用短语升级句2。 4.如果不把知识适当地应用到实践中，文凭就毫 9.用状语从句的省略改写句5。 无意义。 第四步：检查誊写，连句成篇 5,如果不给他们机会，高学历的人可能永远不会 展示他或她的能力。 6.我们应该培养自己的综合能力，并把书本知识 应用到社会实践中去。 第三步：恰当衔接，自然过渡 7.用同位语从句改写句1。 阅读体验深化理解能力 答案精解Pm Reading Clubs 1 2 I.阅读SHOULD PEOPLE IN COMAS BE KEPT Ⅱ.阅读TO SUE OR NOT TO SUE?,回答下面的问题 ON LIFE SUPPORT MACHINES?,补全下面 Suppose you were shopping in a supermarket, 的信息 you suddenly fell down because of some water on 15 years ago.she fell into a coma the floor,breaking your ankle.Would you sue if because her (1) was this happened to you?Why or why not? Terri oxygen-starved.After 15 years, she was taken off (2) People can fall into comas due 44444 to(3) like cancer and head injuries.Coma patients' brain remains (4) comas and cannot be woken up.The longer coma patients stay in a coma,the chances of recovery (5) ·51 英语选择性必修第四册课堂学案(S) Ⅲ.摘录以上文章中的佳句，并补全汉语意思 虽然医生们不完全了解昏迷和恢复的过程，但 1.Others claimed that life is sacred,which no ,病人昏迷的时间越 one has the right to end,but many would say 长，恢复的机会就越低。 it was the right thing to do for Terri. 4.Perhaps it's not surprising that Roslyn Darch 其他人声称生命是神圣的，没有人有权结束生 of Houston felt annoyed when she tripped 命，但很多人会说 over a little kid running around a furniture 2.Terri fell into a coma when a heart attack robbed store.and broke her ankle. her brain of oxygen,causing permanent harm. 休斯顿的罗斯林·达奇在一家家具店里被一 特丽 而陷入昏迷， 个在商店里跑来跑去的小孩绊倒，摔断了脚 造成永久性伤害。 踝，她对此感到恼火， 3.Although doctors don't fully understand comas and 5.And it's not only claims for physical injuries the process of recovery,it is generally agreed that are keeping the lawyers busy. that a patient's chances of recovery decline the 让律师们忙得不可开交的 longer they stay in a coma. 语基输入助力语言输出 答案精解Pm ①（教材Pn)In my opinion,we should go further (3)The government put a ban the and ban advertisements for any unhealthy products sale of that drug. such as alcohol and fried food. [习作练笔]—补全句子 在我看来，我们应该更进一步禁止任何不健康 (4)图书馆规定禁止大声说话，以保持安静的环境。 产品的广告，如酒和油炸食品。 The library rules ●ban vt..禁止，取缔n.禁令，禁止 to maintain a quiet environment. ①ban(doing)sth 禁止（做）某事 2(P)Undoubtedly,unhealthy products harm ban sb from(doing)sth禁止某人（做）某事 our health.毫无疑问，不健康的产品损害我们的健康。 ②put/place a ban on 禁止… 。harm vt..伤害n.损害，危害 a ban on/against… 对…的禁令 (Ddo harm to sb sth=do sb sth harm Many cities have placed a ban on plastic bags to 对某人/某物有害 promote eco-friendly practices. 许多城市已经禁止使用塑料袋，以推广环保行 there is no harm(in)doing sth做某事无害处 为。（应用文写作之演讲稿） ②harmful adj.有害的 [点津]ban作动词时，过去式和过去分词均为 be harmful to 对…有害 banned,现在分词为banning。 ③harmless adi.无害的 [融会练通]一单句语法填空 (1)There should be a ban talking As far as I am concerned,playing computer games and eating loudly in cinemas. not only wastes much time but also harms our (2)Citizens under 18 are banned health.就我而言，玩电脑游戏不仅浪费很多时间， driving in China. 而且对我们的健康有害。（应用文写作之演讲稿） ·52 UNIT 11 CONFLICT AND COMPROMISE [融会练通]— 单句语法填堂 (4)It is no longer desire for (1)As parents,they have responsibility to make adult children to live with their parents. sure their children won't (harm). [习作练笔] 同义句转换 (2)The air pollution is very serious.so taking (5) outdoor exercise may be (harm) [把句(3)转换成复合句] to our health. 4(教材P)To concude,laws to ban TV advertisements [习作练笔]—一句多译 for unhealthy products are beneficial to society. (3)众所周知，这类化学物质对环境有害。 最后，法律禁止不健康产品的电视广告的法律 --This group of chemicals is known to 对社会是有益的。 (harm vt. conclude vt.作出结论，推断出 .This group of chemicals is known to (harmful adj. ①Dconclude..with. 以…结束… This group of chemicals is known to conclude sth by doing sth以做某事结束某事 (harm n.) from… 从…中推 conclude 3(教材Po)It is clearly desirable to limit TV from…that 断出… advertisements for fast food. to conclude 最后 限制快餐的电视广告显然是可取的。 ②conclusion n.结论：结束 ●desirable adj.理想的，值得拥有的：值得做的 come to reach/draw a conclusion得出结论 in conclusion 最后，总而言之 ①desire n.渴望：欲望vi,&L.渴望：期望 (to do sth迫切想要做某事 To conclude.I would like to thank everyone have a strong desire for sth非常渴望得到某物 who helped to make this event possible.最后， ②desire to do sth 渴望做某事 我要感谢所有帮助使这一活动成为可能的人。 desire sb to do sth 希望某人做某事 [融会练通]一单句语法填空 desire that..(should)do sth希望…做某事 (1)When the group discussion is nearing its Looking up at me,he finally answered his strong end,make sure to conclude it desire to join the race.I told him that I would important points. keep his company beside the track,他抬头看着 (2)We can't draw conclusion without 我，终于回答了参加比赛的强烈愿望。我告诉 having a wide investigation into the matter. 他，我会在赛道旁边陪伴他。（神情、动作描写） (3) conclusion,walking is a safe, [融会练通]—单句语法填空 enjoyable and readily available form of exercise. (1)The boy has a desire a smartphone (4)I would like to conclude saying with a large internal memory. that I do enjoy your magazine. (2)Many an exchange student has a desire [习作练笔]—补全句子 (learn)Chinese culture. (5)我从我自己的经历中得出结论：有志者，事竟成。 (3)His mother desired him (become) my own an architect after he grew up. experiences that where there is a will,there is a way. ·53 英语选择性必修第四册课堂学案(BS) beneficial adj.有利的，有帮助的，有用的 Hearing the boy's small but sincere request,the father couldn't hold back his tears..听到男孩小而真 ①be beneficial to…=be of benefit to… 诚的请求，父亲忍不住流下了眼泪。（动作描写） 对…有益：对…有利 [点津]动词request后的宾语从句以及名词 ②benefit n.益处：利益t.使受益 request后的表语从句、同位语从句都要用虚拟语 i.得益于 气，即从句中的谓语动词用“(should-十)动词原形”。 for the benefit of=for one's benefit [融会练通]一单句语法填空 为了某人的利益 (1)Our travel agency offers several package tours ③benefit sb.'sth 使某人/某物受益 the request of tourists. benefit from/by... 从…中受益：得益于 (2)They requested all the visitors not (take)pictures of the exhibitions. Garbage classification is beneficial to environmental [习作练笔] 句型转换[根据要求转换句(2)] protection. (3) 垃圾分类有利于环保。（应用文写作之演讲稿） (动词request十宾语从句) [融会练通]—单句语法填空 (4) (6)The doctor considered that the change would (动词request十主语从句) be (benefit)to her health. (5) (7)It is known to us all that doing eye exercises (名词request-十表语从句) (benefit)our eyes,and that is to say, ⑥（教材Pa).it is generally agreed that a patient's our eyes can benefit doing eye exercises. chances of recovery decline the longer they stay (8)The soldier lost his life the in a coma..…人们普遍认为，病人昏迷的时间 benefit of his motherland. 越长，康复的机会就越小」 [习作练笔]—一句多译 Q句型公式：Itis十过去分词+that从句 (9)每天做运动对健康很有好处。 It is said that... 据说…… -Doing exercise every day It is reported that... 据报道… -Doing exercise every day It is known to all that... 众所周知… 互（教材Ps)Staff at a famous company is used It is hoped that... 人们希望… to dealing with requests for compensation following It is thought that... 人们认为… poor weather,cancelled flights and lost luggage... It is suggested that... 人们建议… 一家著名公司的员工已经习惯了处理因恶劣天气、 航班取消和行李丢失而提出的赔偿要求… It is generally agreed that we should eat less fat and more vegetables..人们普遍认为，我们应该 request n.&vt.请求，要求 少吃肥肉多吃蔬菜。（应用文写作之建议信） ①make a request for sth that… 请求：要求 [习作练笔]一 补全句子 at one's request (1)众所周知，均衡饮食对保持身体健康至关重要。 应某人的要求 at the request of] a balanced diet is ②request sb to do sth 要求某 crucial for maintaining good health. request that sb (should)do sth 人做 (2)建议我们应该经常锻炼以保持健康。 we should exercise It is requested that sb(should)do sth某事 regularly to stay fit. 54 UNIT 11 CONFLICT AND COMPROMISE (3)据报道，这种濒危物种已经在野外被发现。 Whatever difficulties you encounter,you should the endangered always keep a positive attitude.无论你遇到什么 species has been spotted in the wild. 困难，你都应该始终保持积极的态度。（应用文 ⑦（教材Pu)hatever you think,the compensation 写作之建议信) culture which has emerged in recent years is [习作练笔]一补全句子 spreading,and it will affect all of us. (1)无论任务看起来有多难，我们都绝不能放弃。 不管你怎么想，近年来出现的薪酬文化正在蔓 延，它将影响我们所有人。 ·句型公式：wh-+ever引导让步状语从句 we should never give up. (2)无论你选择哪条路线，都将是一段漫长的驾驶。 ①whatever,whoever,whichever,whomever既 可以引导名词性从句，又可以引导让步状 it's going to be a long drive. 语从句，在引导让步状语从句时，相当于 (3)无论谁获得自行车比赛的第一名，都会被授 no matter what who/which/whom. 予金牌。 ②no matter十wh只能引导让步状语从句，不 能引导名词性从句，其含义相当于wh十 The gold medal will be awarded to ever,意为“不管，无论”，其位置可在主句 in the bicycle race. 前，也可在主句后。 友，提示完成P:课时作业（九） 单元回扣·落实语言基础 答案精解Pw 一，核心单词写对 1,根据首字母或汉语提示写出正确单词 1. .发现，察觉（尤指不易觉察到的事物） 1.It is said that the (偏远的) 2 adu.有点，有几分 country is abundant in natural resources. 3. .监督；监视：监测，检测 2.On his (起程)for the .显示器，监视器 airport,I found his passport and his 4. n.自制力：自我控制 wallet left on the table. 5. n.(储存液体或气体的)箱，罐 3.Burying his face in his hands,he tried 6. .把…塞住，堵塞：填塞 to control his (哭泣) 7. i.&t.打包n.包，包裹 4.At their (请求)，I made 8. n.投票（指行为）：票数 9 i.&.停止，终止，结束 a presentation to show them how to 10. 儿.房产：所有物：财产 make tea. 11. .齐声：副歌：合唱团 (回t忆起)what had happened 12. ad.愤愤不平的：带来痛苦的，令人难 to him,he felt ashamed of treating the 过的：苦的 poor boy badly. 13. adu.(非正式)尽管如此：至少 6.We're (祈祷)for good 14. n.边缘，外围 weather for tomorrow's game. ·55Section V WRITING WORKSHOP think the supermarket is to blame.On the other hand,I should watch my steps while shopping.So I should also take READING CLUB some responsibility. 写作精析提升表达能力 Ⅲ.1.这样做对特丽是正确的 佳作构建 2.因心脏病发作导致大脑缺氧 第二步：遣词造句，规范得体 3.人们普遍认为 1.At present.there are a large number of people who believe 4.这也许并不奇怪 that a high diploma equals to high ability. 5.不仅仅是身体伤害的索黯 2.As a matter of fact,a high diploma can not decide one's competence. 语基输入助力语言输出 3.Competence is a comprehensive combination of schooling. 1.(1)on against (2)from (3)on (4)ban talking loudly experience and flexibility. 2.(1)be harmed (2)harmful (3)harm the environment:be 4.Without proper application of knowledge into practice,a diploma harmful to the environment:do harm to the environment accounts for nothing. 3.(1)for (2)to learn (3)to become (4)desirable 5.If they are not given the opportunity.people with a high (5)His mother desired that he (should)become an architect after diploma may never show his or her ability. he grew up. 6.We should develop our comprehensive competence and put 4.(1)with(2)a(3)ln(4)by book knowledge into social practice. (5)concluded/drew a conclusion from (6)beneficial (7)benefits:from (8)for 第三步：恰当衔接，自然过渡 (9)is very beneficial to health:is of great benefit to health 7.At present,a large number of people who hold the belief that 5.(1)at (2)to take (3)They requested that all the visitors a high diploma equals to high ability. (should)not take pictures of the exhibitions. 8.As a matter of fact,a high diploma can not have a final say in (4)It is requested that all the visitors (should)not take one's competence. pictures of the exhibitions. 9.If not given the opportunity,people with a high diploma may (5)Their request was that all the visitors (should)not take never show his or her ability. pictures of the exhibitions. 第四步：检查誊写，连句成篇 6.(1)It is known to all that (2)It is suggested that One possible version: (3)It is reported that At present,a large number of people who hold the belief 7.(1)However No matter how hard the task may seem that a high diploma equals to high ability.As a matter of fact. (2)Whichever No matter which route you take high diploma can not have a final say in one's competence.There (3)whoever wins first place are a dozen of reasons behind this argument. 单元回扣落实语言基础 For one thing,competence is a comprehensive combination 一、核心单词写对 of schooling,experience and flexibility.For another,without 1.detect 2.somewhat 3.monitor 4.self-control 5.tank proper application of knowledge into practice,a diploma accounts for 6.plug 7.pack 8.vote 9.cease 10.property 11.chorus nothing.Last but not least.if hot given the opportunity,people 12.bitter 13.anyhow 14.edge 15.arrest 16.tailor with a high diploma may never show his or her ability. 17.pleasant 18.literally 19.keen 20.unsuspecting All in all,we should develop our comprehensive competence 21.bother 22.soldier 23.bomb 24.general 25.frontier and put book knowledge into social practice. 26.border 27.civilian 28.surgeon 29.sacred 30.loose 阅读体验深化理解能力 1,根据首字母或汉语提示写出正确单词 I.(1)brain (2)life support machines (3)terminal illnesses 1.remote 2.departure 3.weeping 4.request 5.Recalling (4)unconscious (5)decline 6.praying 7.incidents 8.display 9.panic 10.banned I. I would sue the supermarket and ask for some 11.dozen compensation,but the payout wouldn't be too much.The 二、拓展单词用活 reason is that the supermarket should have some people in 1.negotiate 2.inquire 3.resolve 4.inconvenience charge of cleaning the floor in case such things happen.So I 5.annoyed 6.ashamed 7.maturity 8.assign 9.complaint ·139·