内容正文:
选择性必修第三册
Unit 3 Back to the past
Period Ⅳ Writing
内容索引
NEIRONGSUOYIN
单元写作 能力提升
单元写作 能力提升
Part 1 单元写作任务:写一篇书评
[文体分析]
书评是写作文体中重要的一种形式,其内容主要是对某种书籍或文学作品展开介绍或评论。为了写好该种写作文体的文章,我们需要联系作者的写作背景并体会作者的写作风格,可以从“介绍”“梗概”“评价”三个方面展开。用英语写一篇书评,主要包括以下几点内容:
1.开篇先对书名、书的作者以及书籍的影响力等基本信息进行简单介绍。
2.正文部分要对作品的故事梗概(如故事发生的时间、地点、人物、故事情节以及结局等信息)进行介绍。
3.末段应对作品进行客观公正的论述,论述过程中可以结合自己的生活经验或联系生活实际以阐述从中学到的道理或者对本书的感悟。
[常用表达]
常用句式
1.The novel is set in...
该故事以……为背景。
2.The story goes about...
该故事是关于……
3.The novel is featured by...
该故事以……为特征。
4.The audience will be impressed with the...
读者将会对……留下深刻的印象。
5.The story happens in...
故事发生在……
6.The book tells a story concerning...
该书讲述了关于……
7.First of all, the plot of the story is appealing.
首先,故事情节引人入胜。
8.The main chapters show the true personality of the main character...
主要章节介绍了主人公的真正品质……
9.From the book I think we should learn...
我认为从该书中我们应该学会……
[写作要求]
假定你校英语角举办“我最喜欢的一本书”征文活动,目的是向同学们推荐值得一读的书,以鼓励同学们去发现阅读的快乐。请你针对自己曾经读过的一本书写一篇书评,词数80左右。内容包括:图书的基本信息、故事的情节或者你的感悟等。
[审题谋篇]
体裁 应用文
时态 一般现在时和一般过去时相结合
人称 第一人称和第三人称相结合
框架 本文可分为三个部分:
第一部分:写明自己最喜欢的书的名字;
第二部分:介绍书的内容或喜欢它的原因;
第三部分:总结读后感悟
[词句推敲]
1.词汇
①________________ 推荐
②________________ 最喜欢的
③________________ 鼓舞人心的
④________________ 失去希望
⑤________________ 动力
recommend
favourite
inspirational
lose hope
motivation
2.句式
(1)完成句子
①在所有曾经读过的书中,查尔斯·狄更斯的《雾都孤儿》是我最喜欢的。
Among all the books that I have read,Oliver Twist written by Charles Dickens is ______________________.
my favourite
②故事是以伦敦为背景,讲述一位名叫奥利弗的孤儿的悲剧人生。
The story __________ London, ____________ the tragic life of an orphan named Oliver.
is set in
telling
(2)句式升级
③用定语从句升级句②
________________________________________________________________________
The story is set in London, which tells the tragic life of an orphan named Oliver.
[妙笔成篇]
Among all the books that I have read,Oliver Twist written by Charles Dickens is my favourite.
The story is set in London, which tells the tragic life of an orphan named Oliver.However,no matter how hard the situation was, he still held hope and kindness.Therefore, he got help from many kind people.
Touched by this inspirational story, I think whatever happens to us, we should never lose hope, kindness or bravery, because it is these motivations that can encourage us to go on.
假定你是李华,要参加一个关于书评的征文活动,请你根据以下所给要点写一篇书评投稿。要点如下:
1.《阿甘正传》(Forrest Gump)是Winston Groom的小说;
2.主人翁阿甘虽然智商低,但他豁达坚强,最终获得成功——成为一名橄榄球(football)明星、战争英雄和百万富翁;
3.你对这本书的评价及感悟。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头已经给出,但不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Forrest Gump is written by Winston Groom that leaves a deep impression on me.
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[参考范文]
Forrest Gump is written by Winston Groom that leaves a deep impression on me.
Forrest Gump, the main character, was unfortunately born with a lower IQ, but he is an open-minded person with strong determination.It is unbelievable that he has achieved great success at last.Not only is he a football star, but he is also a war-hero and later a millionaire.
The book is filled with a tender feeling and kindness.Besides, the use of the language is striking, which also makes the book a success.What's more, it conveys a message that we should take a positive attitude towards life.No matter what difficulty we meet in life, we should not give up.
Part 2 读后续写日积月累
读后续写专练之动作描写“腿(leg)”
积累常诵 词汇 shaky/trembling legs 颤抖的双腿
tired legs 疲惫的双腿
cross one's legs 盘腿
drag one's heavy legs 拖着沉重的双腿
积累常诵 佳句 1.She crossed the finishing line on tired legs.她拖着疲惫的双腿穿过了终点线。
2.I dragged myself out of bed and into the bathroom.我吃力地下床走进浴室。
3.She sat cross-legged on the rock.她盘着腿坐在那块巨石上。
4.He was on his knees, searching for the missing ring.他跪在地上,寻找着丢失的戒指。
5.Suddenly her knees buckled/weakened and she fell to the floor.突然,她双膝一软,跌倒在地。
6.She tried to control the trembling in her legs.她竭力控制住颤抖的双腿。
按要求用与“leg”相关的表达补全以下各句
1.他继续挣扎着向终点跑去,他嘴巴干涩,腿开始发抖。
(普通表达)He struggled to run towards the finishing line.His mouth was dry and ______________________.
(高级表达)______________________________________________
____________________________________ (with复合结构)
his legs trembled
He struggled to run towards the finishing line, with his mouth dry and his legs trembling.
2.他摔倒了,背部着地,双腿叉开。(with复合结构)
He fell over, flat on his back _____________________.
3.他双腿颤抖地站了起来。
He _______________________________.
4.他拖着两条沉重的腿,疲惫不堪地回到了家。
He __________________________________, tired out.
with his legs wide
rose to his feet on shaky legs
dragged his heavy legs back home
5.他回到家中,盘着腿,用拳头支着下巴,陷入沉思。
He returned home,_______________ and rested his chin on one fist, lost in deep thought.
crossed his legs
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