U3 Period Ⅳ　Writing-【优化探究】2025-2026学年新教材高中英语必修第三册同步导学案配套PPT课件（译林版）

必修第三册 UNIT 3　The world online Period Ⅳ　Writing 内容索引 NEIRONGSUOYIN 单元写作 能力提升 单元写作 能力提升 Part 1　单元写作任务：调查报告 [文体分析] 　　调查报告属于应用文的范畴，旨在真实、详细、有条理地将调查结果呈现出来。有关调查报告的写作多以图表作文的形式呈现，即学生要根据要求将图表信息以文字的形式转述出来。 图表式命题作文类似于文字提纲式命题作文，其信息的提供只不过是以图表的形式呈现出来；图表作文是高考写作较常见的考查形式之一，要求学生通过对数据、文字内容进行分析，对前后变化、正反观点进行对比，或者对某产品进行介绍，系统而准确地表达出图表所示内容，并得出令人信服的结论，或者分析导致某现象、趋势或问题的原因或可能带来的结果和影响。 图表作文分为表格式、图画式两种题型。表格式写作就是将统计数据或被说明的事物直接以统计表的形式呈现出来。这类题目往往是介绍某种情况或辩论某种观点与看法。图画式主要有三种形式：表示数据变化的曲线图；表示数据大小或数量之间差异的柱状图；表示总体结构变化的饼状图。 1.写作步骤(三段论)： (1)开门见山，点明图表要反映的主题。 (2)中间段落对图表的内容进行分析，可采用分类或对比来表现主题，并阐明必要的理由。在叙述中切忌反复使用同一句型，忌反复出现图表中的数据。 (3)发表自己的观点，对全文进行小结。 　　2.注意事项 (1)认真阅读和掌握图表提供的信息，弄清设计者想通过图表来反映的信息、问题或现象。对于曲线图形式，要认真观察坐标系所显示的数据信息，并密切注意交汇在坐标横轴和纵轴上的数字及单位；对于柱状图和饼状图，要通过宽度相等的柱形的高度差别和各部分所占比例来判断事物的动态发展趋势，关注坐标线的刻度单位及图表旁边的提示说明。 (2)在掌握了全部信息的基础上，着手分析这些信息或数据，通过分析对比，找出不同点和相似点。 [常用表达] 1.As is apparently shown in the pie chart/graph/table above... 正如上面饼状图/曲线图/表格所明显呈现的…… 2.As far as...is concerned， much progress has been made. 就……而言，已经取得了很大进步。 3.There is an increase of about...percent，compared with... 与……相比较，大约增加了百分之…… 4.50％ of the people surveyed express the satisfaction with...， while only 40％ of them are satisfied with... 在调查中有50％的人对……满意，而仅有40％的人对……满意。 5.By comparison with...， it decreased/increased from...to... 和……相比，从……减少/增加到…… 6.It is obvious from the graph/chart that...rank(s) the first/highest， while...turn(s) out to be the lowest. 图中清楚显示……是排在第一位/最高的，而……结果最低。 7.The reason why/for...is that... ……的原因是…… 8.One may think of the change as a result of... 人们可能把这种变化认作……的结果。 9.The change in...largely results from the fact that... 在……上的变化很大程度上是由……的事实造成的。 10.First/Firstly/To begin with...； second/secondly/and then/next...； finally/last but not least/apart from the above reasons... 首先……；其次……；最后/最后但同样重要的是/除了上述原因…… 11.It is because of...that... 由于……才…… 12.in a word总之；in short简而言之；generally speaking总的说来；to sum up总之，概括地说；in conclusion总之，最后；in summary总之 13.From what has been discussed above， we can draw the conclusion that... 从以上讨论，我们可以得出结论…… 14.Obviously/Apparently， if we want to...，it is necessary to do/that... 很明显，如果我们想……，……是有必要的。 15.There is no doubt that attention must be paid to... 毫无疑问，我们必须注意…… 16.I suggest the government take effective measures to... 我建议政府应该采取有效措施来…… 17.All in all，it is...that leads to the phenomenon. 总而言之，是……导致了这种现象。 　　某互联网消费调研中心对网络购物进行了调查，调查结果如下。请根据表格所给出的信息描述人们选择网络购物的不同原因，并谈谈你的看法。 　　注意：1.词数80左右； 　　2.文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 网络购物吸引用户的几个方面 37％ 商品种类丰富 33％ 商品价格合理 30％ 不受时间、地域限制 　　Recently， a survey about online shopping has been conducted on the Internet.The results are as follows._______________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [审题谋篇] 体裁 应用文(图表类调查报告) 时态 一般现在时为主 人称 第三人称为主 框架 首段总体介绍调查的内容； 第二段针对表格内容进行介绍； 第三段阐述个人看法 [词句推敲] 1.词汇 ①____________________选择网络购物 ②________________________各种各样的产品 ③________________合理的价格 ④_____________________表达某人的担忧 ⑤_____________占比例 ⑥________________________高质量的产品 choose to shop online a wide variety of products reasonable price express one’s concerns account for the products of high quality 2.句式 (1)完成句子 ①图表显示了人们选择网络购物的原因。 The chart shows _______________________________________. ②网络上有各种各样的产品。 _______________________________ online. the reasons why people choose to shop online There is a wide variety of products ③网络购物很方便。 Online shopping __________________. ④消费者可以随时随地购买任何他们想买的东西。 Consumers can buy __________________________________. is very convenient what they want anytime and anywhere (2)句式升级 ⑤用so...that...句式连接句③和句④ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Online shopping is so convenient that consumers can buy what they want anytime and anywhere. [妙笔成篇] ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　The chart shows the reasons why people choose to shop online.Of those surveyed， 37％ think there’s a wide variety of products in online shops.About one third of them say the reasonable 　　Recently， a survey about online shopping has been conducted on the Internet.The results are as follows. price is most appealing to them.And 30％ of them hold that online shopping is so convenient that consumers can buy what they want anytime and anywhere. 　　Personally， even though it is convenient to buy things online， we should make sure the products are of high quality before making a purchase. 　　请简要描述图片，并结合生活实际(自身或他人的例子)，谈谈你对“舒适圈”的看法。 　　注意：词数80左右。 [参考范文] 　　As is shown in the picture， some people like to be in the comfort zone，which means they have a sense of security，have confidence，and are familiar with the surroundings，and are satisfied with everything.The comfort zone is so comfortable that we are unwilling to leave it. 　　However，there is no doubt that the comfort zone will limit our development.We will be content to sit there enjoying the current situation. 　　From my point of view，only if you jump out of the comfort zone and accept new challenges will magic happen.It can better stimulate our potential，so that we can keep growing. Part 2　读后续写日积月累 读后续写专练之“感激”和“感动” 积累常诵 thank，thankful，gratitude，gratefulgratefully，move，moving， moved，touch，touching，touched，appreciation，appreciate， tears of gratitude/appreciation，be grateful to sb.for sth.，be overwhelmed with gratitude，express one’s gratitude/thanks to 增补素材——用表示“感激、感动”的表达补全下面各句 ①彼得差点撞上一辆过路的汽车，这时一位过路人把他推到了安全的地方。 Peter __________________________________________ a passer-by pushed him to safety. was nearly knocking into a passing car when ②感激的泪水顺着彼得的脸颊流下，他感激地说：“今天你救了我。我对你感激不尽。” (普通表达)_____________________________________ his cheeks.Peter said thankfully， “You’ve saved me today.I couldn’t thank you enough.”(高级表达)__________________________________________ _____________，Peter said thankfully，“You’ve saved me today.I couldn’t thank you enough.” (with复合结构) Tears of gratitude/appreciation rolled down With tears of gratitude/appreciation rolling down his cheeks ③看到陌生人之间这般彼此关照，实在令人感动。(it作形式主语) _______________________ how much strangers could care for each other. ④当他接过一个小男孩给的鲜花时，他感激地微笑起来。 He smiled ______________ as he accepted the flowers given by a small boy. It was very moving to see with gratitude ⑤人群被深深地感动了，于是更大声地拍手。(分词短语作状语) _____________________，the crowd clapped their hands even more loudly. ⑥了解事情的经过后，他的母亲流下了喜悦和感激的泪水。 Knowing what had happened， his mother _____________________ __________. Touched/Moved deeply shed tears of joy and gratitude $$