U2 Period Ⅳ Writing-【优化探究】2025-2026学年新教材高中英语必修第二册同步导学案配套PPT课件（译林版）

必修第二册 Unit 2　Be sporty， be healthy Period Ⅳ　Writing 内容索引 NEIRONGSUOYIN 单元写作 能力提升 单元写作 能力提升 Part 1　单元写作任务：写一封建议信   [文体分析] 本单元的写作任务是写一封建议信。建议信是指针对某个现象或者某个事物的不足之处给出相应的建议，以改进该现象或事物，从而解决他人的烦恼。建议信要注意写得及时，语气真挚，所提的建议要具有可行性。 常用表达： ◆首段常用语 1．I am writing to express my views concerning the book management in the English classroom.我写信是想表达我对英语教室中图书管理的看法。 2．You have asked me some questions about how to learn English well and I will make some suggestions.你问了我一些如何学好英语的问题，下面我来给你一些建议。 3．I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adjusting to the new school.Such problems are quite normal.Perhaps the following suggestions may be helpful.听说你在适应新学校方面遇到了困难，对此我深表遗憾。这样的问题很正常。或许下面的建议会对你有所帮助。 ◆中心段常用语 1．The problem you are facing is common among teenagers.你正在遇到的问题在青少年中很普遍。 2．I think it would be more beneficial if you could hand in your paper ahead of time.如果你能提前提交你的论文会对你更有好处。 3．If I were you, I would ask my teachers for help.如果我是你，我会向我的老师求助。 4．You can/had better/should adjust yourself by communicating more with others.你可以/最好/应该通过多与人交流来调整自己。 5．The following are the reasons for my suggestion.First， ...Besides，...Last but not least，...我建议的理由如下： 首先，……其次，……最后但同样重要的是，…… ◆结尾段常用语 1．I hope you will find these suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.我希望你会发现这些建议很实用/有用/有帮助。 2．I will be more than happy to see improvements in this respect.我很高兴看到这方面的改进。 3．If you need more information, just let me know.如果你还需要更多信息，请告诉我。 [写作要求] 假定你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友Jenny的来信。她在信中说，由于她刚进入高中，不知道如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪很低落。请你根据以下内容给她回信： 1．表示问候和慰问； 2．提出以下建议： (1)放学后邀请同学一起参加活动； (2)当同学遇到麻烦时，去帮助他们； (3)当自己遇到困难时，向同学求助。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jenny， I'm really sorry to hear that ______________________________ ________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua [审题谋篇] 体裁 建议信 时态 以一般现在时为主 人称 以第一人称和第二人称为主 框架 本文可分为三个部分： 第一段：表明目的； 第二段：提出建议并阐述理由； 第三段：结束语 [词句推敲] 1．词汇 ①做某事有困难 ___________________________ ②向某人推荐某事 _____________________ ③改变这种情况 __________________________ ④参加 ________________ ⑤对……感到困惑 ________________ ⑥与……进行争论 ________________ have trouble (in) doing sth. recommend sth.to sb. improve this situation take part in be confused about debate with 2．句式 (1)完成句子 ①事实上，你可以做一些事情来改变这种情况。 In fact, you can do something ______________________________． ②当你的同学对功课感到困惑时，你要尽量帮忙。 Try to help your classmates when _____________________________ ______________． in order to improve this situation they are confused about their lessons ③这样做有助于你交到更多的朋友。 This will help you _________________________． ④尽量避免和同学因为小事争论。 Try to avoid ____________________________ over small things. (to) make more friends debating with your classmates (2)句式升级 ⑤用定语从句改写句①。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In fact, there is something (that) you can do to improve this situation. ⑥根据要求连接句②和句③。 a．_________________________________________________________________________________________________ (并列句) b．_______________________________________________________________________________________________ (定语从句) Try to help your classmates when they are confused about their lessons and this will help you make more friends. Try to help your classmates when they are confused about their lessons，which will help you make more friends. [妙笔成篇] Dear Jenny， I'm really sorry to hear that you have trouble making friends with others after entering senior high school.I'd like to recommend some advice to you. In fact, there is something you can do to improve this situation.First, it is a good solution for you to invite your classmates to take part in some activities after school, such as being volunteers.Then, try to help your classmates when they are confused about their lessons, which will help you make more friends.Third, try to avoid debating with your classmates over small things.I believe you will make many new friends and have a happy school life there. Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua 假定你是李华，由于月考考试临近，你的好友王平感到前所未有的焦虑和压力。请你结合以下要点，给他写一封信，给出一些缓解压力的建议并鼓励他。 1．保持良好的心态，对自己有信心； 2．缓解压力的办法： 听音乐、体育锻炼以及和家人或朋友交流； 3．一次考试的成败并不重要。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Wang Ping， I'm sorry to hear that you are suffering from heavy pressure and anxiety from the coming monthly exam.________________________ ________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua [参考范文] Dear Wang Ping， I'm sorry to hear that you are suffering from heavy pressure and anxiety from the coming monthly exam.I'm writing to give you some suggestions to help you. Firstly, I think it would be better if you can keep a good state of mind and have confidence in yourself.Secondly, you can do the following things to help you get rid of pressure, such as listening to music, taking exercise and communicating with your family or friends.Last but not least, I must tell you that it doesn't make much difference whether you win or lose in an exam.What really matters is to face challenges bravely and never give up. Yours， Li Hua Part 2　读后续写日积月累 读后续写专练之“有关景色描写的表达” 朗读·体会·积累 1.那座山在天空的衬托下显得轮廓分明。 The mountain was sharply defined against the sky. 2.湖面映照着上方的天空，它们都是湛蓝色的，并且闪闪发光。 The lake mirrored the sky above; both of them were blue and shimmering. 朗读·体会·积累 3.空气清新，天空碧蓝。 The air was crisp and clear and the sky was blue. 4.草地像一片绿色的海洋在山上流淌。两英尺长的草在微风中摇曳。 The meadow flowed like a sea of green over the hill.The two feet long grass waved in the breeze. 试做·补全·背诵 1.广阔的蓝色海水从四面八方绵延到地平线，翻腾的海浪拍打着沙滩。 The expanse of blue water stretched , with frothy waves lapping at a sand beach. 2.这棵树沐浴在一束亮光中，从风景的其他部分中脱颖而出。 The tree stood out from the rest of the landscape, ________________ _______． in every direction to the horizon bathed in a bright light 试做·补全·背诵 3.草地上长了一大片绚丽的花花草草，草在微风中轻轻地沙沙作响。 The meadow was a glorious expanse of grass and wild flowers, ． grass rustling gently in the breeze 增补素材——“景色描写”之多样表达 1．rough seas风大浪急的海 2．a steep-sided valley陡峭的峡谷 3．towering walls of rock高耸的岩壁 4．the peaceful lake宁静的湖泊 5．curving rivers弯弯曲曲的河 6．the springy grass松软的草地 7．the cloudless sky无云的天空 8．a dense forest茂密的森林 9．stars twinkle their eyes星星眨眼 10．the starry sky满天繁星的天空 11．rough, stony ground崎岖不平、多石的土地 12．a mountain track山间小路 13．beautiful and curiously shaped lakes美丽而形状奇特的湖泊 $$