U5 Period 5 Writing-【优化探究】2025-2026学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第三册同步导学案配套PPT课件（外研版）

选择性必修第三册 Unit 5　Learning from nature Period 5　Writing 内容索引 NEIRONGSUOYIN 单元写作 能力提升 单元写作 能力提升 自然界启示类文章   观察自然界，感受其启示，获得灵感并写一篇启发性的作文，这类作文属于夹叙夹议文。写作时应该遵循下列步骤： 1．选取一个与自然界相关的具有生活意义、富有哲理的主题，如适应、生存、亲情、关爱、团结、毅力等。 2．描述某一个自然现象，如动植物的生活习性以及其为了生存而形成的本能和意识等。 3．阐述该自然现象给我们的生活启示，即我们应如何在生活中应用它。常用的由描写自然现象过渡到阐述启示的表达有similarly、likewise、in the same way、in the same manner、equally 等。 [常用开头句] 1．Nature can sometimes teach us a valuable lesson. 大自然有时会给我们上宝贵的一课。 2．Some small things in nature often give us some useful enlightenment. 自然界中的一些小事往往会给我们一些有用的启示。 3．I learned about a life lesson from ants. 我从蚂蚁身上学到了人生的一课。 [常用主体句] 1．I was jogging on the path when I happened to catch sight of a little bird. 我在小路上慢跑时，碰巧看见了一只小鸟。 2．I was wandering along the path of the farmland when I saw some ants. 我沿着农田小路漫步时，看到了一些蚂蚁。 3．Much to my amazement, it was still holding on. 让我非常吃惊的是，它仍然坚持着。 4．Catching sight of the scene, I stopped to see whether it would give up. 看到这个情景，我停了下来，看看它是否会放弃。 5．Just at that time, I couldn't help admiring its strong will. 就在那时，我不禁佩服它的坚强意志。 [常用结束句] 1．From my perspective, at no time should we ignore the importance of unity. 在我看来，在任何时候我们都不能忽视团结的重要性。 2．Accordingly, we should foster the consciousness of unity and always bear in mind that unity can create miracles no matter what obstacles we meet. 因此，我们应该培养团结的意识，并且将无论我们遇到什么样的困难，团结都能够创造奇迹永远铭记在心。 [写作要求] 某英语周报组织了有关“自然界给我们的启示”的故事评选。观察右面的图画，根据图画的内容写一篇短文投稿。 写作内容：1.图片内容；2.个人感想与感悟。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：蚂蚁ant；合作cooperate and collaborate [审题谋篇] 体裁 夹叙夹议文 话题 自然界给我们的启示 时态 一般过去时 人称 第一人称和第三人称 [词句推敲] 1．词汇 (1)乌云密布 ___________________________ (2)进入某人的视线 _______________________ (3)徒劳 ________________ (4)拿起 ________________ (5)设法做成 ________________ (6)个人 ________________ (7)获得，得到 ______________ be covered with dark clouds come into one's sight in vain pick up manage to do individual attain 2．句式 (1)完成句子 ①我正在爷爷奶奶的花园里休息。 I __________________in my grandparents' garden. was resting ②我看到天空乌云密布，这无疑是下雨的征兆。 I saw that the sky __________________________，this being a sure sign of rain. ③突然，一只蚂蚁进入了我的视线。 ___________________，an ant ________________________． was covered with dark clouds All of a sudden came into my sight ④这只小动物正努力把一小块面包带到它的窝里，但它的努力都白费了。 The tiny creature was trying hard to carry a tiny piece of bread to its nest，but _______________________________. its efforts were in vain ⑤蚂蚁每次捡起面包时，面包都会从它身上滚下来，然后掉到地上。 _____________________________________________，it rolled down its body and fell onto the ground. Each time the ant picked up the piece of bread ⑥当我想知道为什么蚂蚁如此努力地实现不可能的事情时，我看到更多的蚂蚁加入了进来。 While I was wondering ____________________________________ _________________________________，I saw it was joined by more ants. why the ant was trying so hard to achieve the impossible ⑦蚂蚁们一起工作，最终成功地把面包块带到了它们的巢穴。 The ants worked together，and eventually______________________ ___________________________. managed to carry the piece of bread to their nest ⑧有些事情对我们个人来说似乎是不可能做的。 Something ________________________ for us to do as individuals. ⑨但我们可以合作实现这一目标。 But we can _________________________________________. seems impossible cooperate and collaborate to attain it (2)句式升级 ⑩用when连接句①和句②。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ⑪用非限制性定语从句连接句③和句④。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I was resting in my grandparents' garden when I saw that the sky was covered with dark clouds，this being a sure sign of rain.　 All of a sudden，an ant came into my sight，which was trying hard to carry a tiny piece of bread to its nest，but its efforts were in vain. ⑫用省略句改写句⑥。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________⑬用what连接句⑧和句⑨。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ While wondering why the ant was trying so hard to achieve the impossible，I saw it was joined by more ants. We can cooperate and collaborate to attain what seems impossible for us to do as individuals. [妙笔成篇] A Lesson from Ants One day，I was resting in my grandparents' garden when I saw that the sky was covered with dark clouds，this being a sure sign of rain.All of a sudden，an ant came into my sight，which was trying hard to carry a tiny piece of bread to its nest，but its efforts were in vain.Each time the ant picked up the piece of bread，it rolled down its body and fell onto the ground.While wondering why the ant was trying so hard to achieve the impossible，I saw it was joined by more ants.The ants worked together，and eventually managed to carry the piece of bread to their nest. Similarly，we can cooperate and collaborate to attain what seems impossible for us to do as individuals.Just as the saying goes，unity is strength.To achieve our goal，we should work together. 假定你是李华，在学习了本单元后，你们班准备在周末举行一次主题为“Learning from Nature”的班会，要求各位同学发言。请你根据下表准备一篇发言稿。 背景 前一晚下了一场大雨，你在清晨早起锻炼。 事件 沿着山间小路慢跑时，你发现了一棵长在山坡的小树，它根部的土壤被昨夜的大雨冲走了，根系裸露在外面。你想它可能存活不下去了。 结局 小树的根找到了新的土壤并健康生长着。 启示 …… 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] After a heavy rain the night before, I got up early in the morning to exercise.I was jogging on the path when I happened to catch sight of a small tree growing on the slope of the hill.Its white roots were clearly exposed in the air because the covering earth had been washed away by the heavy rain.I had great pity on it, thinking it couldn't survive any longer. Much to my amazement, it was still alive about after half a month, with its roots finding their own way into the new soil under the tree.Just at that time, I couldn't help admiring its strong energy and enthusiasm. In the same way, we should also have positive attitude and hang on whatever hardship we may come across. $$