内容正文:
选择性必修第三册
Unit 2 A life's work
Period 5 Writing
内容索引
NEIRONGSUOYIN
单元写作 能力提升
单元写作 能力提升
人物介绍类说明文
有关人物介绍的常见应用文写作的主题是:介绍同学、朋友、老师、父母、名人等。本单元侧重介绍大国工匠式人物。常见写作思路:
第一段:概括介绍人物的基本情况;
第二段:介绍人物品质,叙述生平事迹;
第三段:评价人物形象。
[常用表达]
(一)指明要介绍的人物
1.Thomas Edison, who was born in America, was a great scientist and inventor full of curiosity and imagination.
2.Stephen Hawking is one of the most famous scientists in the world.
3.In the rice-growing world, Yuan Longping, a great Chinese scientist, is a leading figure.
(二)说明人物的具体情况(如外表、性格、优点、贡献、成就等)
1.She is a tall slim woman with big round eyes and long black hair.
2.He is such an energetic young man with patience that everyone who knows him likes to make friends with him.
3.He leaves/makes a good impression on/upon me because of the great contributions made to our society.
4.I admire Helen because although she became deaf and blind when 19 months old, she was very optimistic about life, who set an excellent example to all of us.
5.Madame Curie achieved great success in discovering polonium and radium, which enabled her to become the only woman scientist to win the Nobel Prize in Physics as well as in Chemistry.
6.In addition to their great achievements, they showed diligence and patience.
(三)作出总结,给出自己对人物的看法
1.I want to learn from her and make contributions to our society.
2.He/She is such a diligent person that we all admire/respect him/her.
3.His modesty and diligence impress me a lot, and I hope to become a great journalist like him who devotes himself to his career.
4.Inspiring others to believe in themselves, he is living proof that what other people think of you does not have to influence what you become.
5.Through self-belief, hard work and perseverance, he has shown anything is possible.
[写作要求]
假定你是李华,请根据下面表格中的内容提示,为校报的英语园地写一篇英文短文,介绍你最崇拜的一位中国科学家。
姓名 梁建英 出生年份 1972年
身份 中国高铁装备行业唯一一位女总工程师
主要经历 1.1995年大学毕业后开始从事高铁研究工作;
2.研制出时速300~350千米的高速动车组
注意:1.词数 80 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:高速动车组 high-speed EMU
[审题谋篇]
体裁 说明文
话题 人物介绍
时态 一般过去时
人称 第三人称
[词句推敲]
1.词汇
(1)致力于 ________________
(2)对……的贡献 ________________
(3)在……中扮演……角色 ________________
devote oneself to
contributions to
play a/an...role in...
(4)因此 ________________
(5)为某人树立好榜样 ________________________
(6)坚持 ____________
as a consequence
set a good example to sb.
stick to
2.句式
(1)完成句子
①自1995 年毕业以来,她一直致力于中国高铁发展的研究。
Since she graduated in 1995, she _________________________ researching into the development of China's high-speed railway.
has been devoting herself to
②由于她对国家的杰出贡献,中国在世界高速铁路领域中正处于领先地位。
Because of her outstanding contributions to our country, China ________________________ high-speed railways all over the world.
③梁建英用她的勤奋和贡献为我们树立了一个好榜样。
Liang Jianying ________________________ through her hard work and dedication.
is playing a leading role in
has set a good example to us
④她的勤奋和贡献激励我们不断尝试,坚持我们的梦想。
Her hard work and dedication ______________________________
__________________.
inspire us to keep on trying and stick
to our dreams
(2)句式升级
⑤用强调句改写句②。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It is because of her outstanding contributions to our country that China is playing a leading role in high-speed railways all over the world.
⑥用非限制性定语从句的用法合并句③和句④。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Liang Jianying has set a good example to us through her hard work and dedication, which inspire us to keep on trying and stick to our dreams.
[妙笔成篇]
Liang Jianying, the only female chief engineer involved in the design of China's high-speed EMU, was born in 1972.Since she graduated in 1995, she has been devoting herself to researching into the development of China's high-speed railway.She developed the 300-350 km/h high-speed EMU, making it more convenient for us to get around quickly.It is because of her outstanding contributions to our country that China is playing a leading role in high-speed railways all over the world.
Liang Jianying has set a good example to us through her hard work and dedication, which inspire us to keep on trying and stick to our dreams.
假定你是李华,你校英文报将举办题为“My Favorite Chinese Scientist”的征文活动,请你写一篇文章投稿,要点包括:
1.该科学家的简介;
2.该科学家的贡献;
3.对你的影响。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.标题已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favorite Chinese Scientist
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
[参考范文]
My Favorite Chinese Scientist
My favorite scientist is Zhao Jiuzhang, who was a great physicist and also one of the designers of China's first man-made satellite.
In 1933, he graduated from Tsinghua University and two years later he went to study meteorology in Berlin.After three years' hard work, he received his doctor's degree.When he returned to China, he devoted all his life to physics and the research of climate, receiving a lot of awards.Besides, he was deeply concerned with the development of science and technology in China and helped train many excellent young scientists for the country.
He sets a good example to me, and he is such a great scientist that he will be remembered by people forever.
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