2025年中考英语专项突破作文【10大考点20篇跟踪训练】

专项突破 中考英语 LOREM 2025年中考英语专项突破 作文 【10大考点+20篇跟踪训练】 4大考点汇总 考点一：个人情况篇 考点二：个人兴趣篇 考点三：家庭、朋友与周围的人篇 考点四：居住环境篇 考点五：日常情况篇 考点六：节假日活动篇 考点七：学校篇 考点八：购物、饮食篇 考点九：健康篇 考点十：方法与哲理篇 20篇跟踪训练 考点一：个人情况篇 1．不积跬步，无以至千里；不积小流，无以成江海。点滴付出，巨大进步。你校英文报社正开展以“Little Effort Makes a Difference”为主题的演讲比赛，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，结合个人经历谈谈你对这个主题的理解以及感悟。 要求： 1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80； 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 Little Effort Makes a Difference ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．每个人都有自己的闪光点，请以“My Shining Point”为题，写一篇不少于100词的英语短文。 要点： （1）讲述一个自己的故事； （2）你的感悟； 要求：适当增加细节，行文连贯；文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。 My Shining Point ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 考点二：个人兴趣篇 3．丰富多彩的课外活动有利于学生全面发展和健康成长。你校英文报将以“My favourite after-school activity”为题向同学们征稿。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 你最喜欢的一项课外活动名称（如音乐、绘画、舞蹈等）； 2. 本项课外活动的相关情况（如活动时间、活动过程等）； 3. 你喜欢的理由。 注意： 1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3. 词数80～120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 4. 短文开头： After-school activities are important for us middle school students. My favourite after-school activity After-school activities are important for us,middle school students. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．为了更好地开展2014年全民阅读活动，有关部门就如何为市民创造良好的阅读环境广泛征求意见，你班将举行一次英语主题班会来讨论这个话题。请你写一篇发言稿，提出自己的想法和建议。     要点提示： 1.阅读的好处； 2.你的建议(如：建更多小型图书馆, 经常性地介绍好书等)； 3.…… 要求：     1.词数：80词左右，开头已给出，入总词数。 2.文中不能出现自己的名字和所在学校的名称。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 考点三：家庭、朋友与周围的人篇 5．在你的初中学习生活中，你一定拥有一个相伴成长的好朋友。请以“My Best Friend”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的好朋友。内容包括： 1. 你最好的朋友是谁； 2. 介绍你朋友的基本信息 (外貌、性格等)； 3. 你喜欢和他 (她) 交朋友的原因。 注意： 1. 词数80—100，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 My Best Friend Everyone has his or her best friend. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．人生，分享快乐，快乐加倍；分享痛苦，痛苦减半。请以“Sharing”为题，根据下面的要求写一篇不少于80词的文章。 要求： (1)讲述一个自己的故事；   (2)表达你的感悟；   (3)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 考点四：居住环境篇 7．假如你是李华，请根据提示，结合自己小区的实际，以“Building a greener community”为题，用英文写一份倡议书。 参考词汇：垃圾分类sort out the rubbish；电动车motorbike 小区的现状 1. 乱扔垃圾； 2. 乱摆放单车和电动车； 3. 树倒下了，没有去维护、种植。 具体提议和做法 1. 垃圾分类，扔到正确的垃圾桶； 2. 单车和电动车摆放到专门地方。 …… (自行补充一至两点) 号召和呼吁 小区是我家，每个人行动起来，共建绿色小区 Building a greener community As we all know, green mountains and clear water are as good as mountains of gold and silver. It is important for everyone to protect the environment and build a beautiful China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．“和谐邻里，互助互爱”是中华民族的传统美德。最近，我的社区发生的一件事在当地传为佳话：半个月前，张大明八十五岁的父亲独自在家，他突然生病了，而张大明夫妇在离家很远的城市工作。幸亏邻居王先生的帮助，老人被及时送往医院，现已脱离危险。张大明十分感激。请根据上述材料，用英语写一篇短文，文章必须包括以下要点： 1．简述张大明父亲被救的经过； 2．你对这件事的感悟（拥有好邻居很重要……）； 3．如何成为好邻居（和睦相处……）。 注意： 1．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 2．词数80词左右，已给出的词不计入总词数。 “Enjoying a harmonious neighborhood” is one of our Chinese traditional virtues. What has happened in one community recently is a good example. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 考点五：日常情况篇 9．假如你是李斌，为弘扬中华传统文化，上周你校组织学生参加了“体验中国”活动。你的美国笔友Peter渴望对中国有更多的了解。请你根据以下表格提示，用英文给Peter写一封电子邮件，介绍一下中国并且分享此次活动的过程与感受。 Facts about China ●the biggest country in Asia ●a history of over 5,000 years Time last weekend Place Beijing Activities ●read Chinese stories ●visit places of interest （the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace,...） ●enjoy traditional Chinese food （Beijing duck） Feelings ... 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数） Dear Peter, How is everything going? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Bin 10．假如你是李涛，你们学校英语社团正在开展以“劳动（Labor）”为主题的征文活动。请你认真阅读以下通知，并按要求用英语写一篇短文，参加此次活动。 NoticeDear students, Taking part in labor activities is good for both our mind and body. Do you have an unforgettable labor experience? Please share it with us. The following questions may help you. ●What was the experience? ●How did you feel? ●What did you learn/get from it? We’re looking forward to your passage. The School English Club 参考词汇： make the bed, do the dishes, cook a meal, happy, proud, necessary,… 要求： 1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。 I am a good helper in my family. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 考点六：节假日活动篇 11．假如你是中学生李平，刚刚结束寒假进入新学期。你的英国笔友Peter想了解你的寒假生活，请根据以下提示，给他写一封回信，介绍你的寒假生活。 写作要求： 1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 100词左右。 参考词汇：school-related tasks 学业任务 Dear Peter, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．计划不仅有助于细化我们的各项决定，而且还能帮助我们高效完成目标。暑假即将来临，假如你们班进行了一次以“How to spend my summer holiday”为主题的班会，请你根据以下图示信息及写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你为暑假制定了哪些计划。 写作要求： 1)文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2)文中不得出现学生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3)词数100词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：ultimate 终极的；tiredness 疲劳；infinite 不计其数的 How to spend my summer holiday Our summer holiday is coming. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 考点七：学校篇 13．假如你是李华，英国交换生Amy即将来你校体验特色课程。请根据以下相关信息，写一封邮件，向她推荐一个合适的课程。 Traditional Chinese culture is amazing. I love to work with others. Chinese Kungfu Course    on the playground     in groups     learn the history and do kungfu Chinese Cooking Course    in the cooking room     in groups     cook Chinese food and share it 注意： 1.邮件需包含所选课程的至少两点相关信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； 3.词数80左右；邮件的首尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Amy, I am happy to know that you are coming to experience the special courses in my school. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 14． 假如你是在南京学习的英国交流学生Max，你的英国同学Simon给你写了一封电子邮件。请你根据邮件内容，用英语给Simon回一封电子邮件。 Hey Max,         I haven’t heard from you since you arrived in Nanjing. How are you getting on? Is everything OK with the school you study in? What are your English classes like? Write soon! Yours, Simon 注意： 1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 词数80~90，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Hi Simon, Sorry I haven’t written till now. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Max 考点八：购物、饮食篇 15．假如你是林涛，你们学校英语社团举办关于“How do you manage your pocket money?”的征文活动。征稿内容包括： 1. 你管理零花钱的方式及理由(至少2种)，如储蓄、购买学习用品等； 2. 现在流行用零花钱购买昂贵的运动鞋或衣服等，你是否会采用这种方式，为什么？ 要求： 1. 所写内容必须包括题目要求的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 词数不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。 How I Manage My Pocket Money I usually get some pocket money from my parents. Learning to manage it wisely is very important to students. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16．假设你是李华，今年端午节期间，你学习了包粽子（zongzi）。请结合以下表格内容提示，给你的朋友Peter写一封英文电子邮件，分享你学习包粽子的经历。 How I learned … How I made Ingredients & Tools ●rice, beans, dates (枣)… ●leaf (leaves), string (细绳), pot Steps wash... keep…in the water for hours make a cone shape (圆锥体) with… put…into the cone tie… boil…over low heat… How I felt … 要求： 1. 必须包含表格中所有提示信息，可适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯； 2. 词数80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Peter, How are you? I’d like to share an interesting experience with you. During the Dragon Boat Festival this year, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 考点九：健康篇 17．假如你是李明，在冬春交替之际，作为班长，你需要提醒同学们远离疾病，保持身体健康。请根据以下内容提示，写一封倡议书。 注意：文中不得透露真实信息，词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Keep healthy Importance (stay active, learn well) What to do (food, exercise…) Something more… Dear classmates, Winter has gone and spring comes. We should take care of ourselves to keep healthy. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! Li Ming 18．在阅读理解B部分七选五文章中提到了运动的诸多好处，运动可以增强体质、减轻压力、提高团队协作能力……请以“Sports make our life better”为题，用英文写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1. 你喜欢的运动项目和原因。 2. 它给你带来的好处。 3. 你的感受和期望。 要求： 1. 短文应包括全部的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3. 词数在80-120之间，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Sports make our life better As a saying goes,knowledge makes a wiser man,and sports make a stronger man. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 考点十：方法与哲理篇 19．假定你是李华，你在校园网站上看到了一封来自交换生Mark关于寻找诗词学伴的求助信。请你根据他的需求，用英文写一封邮件，表示愿意提供帮助。 Looking for a Chinese Poetry Study Buddy! Hi everyone! I’m Mark Smith, an exchange student from England. I love Chinese culture, especially old Chinese poems, but it’s difficult for me to understand them by myself. I’m looking for someone to help me read and learn poems by famous poets like Li Bai and Du Fu. We can meet weekly to read, discuss, and share ideas. I’ll also tell you about my culture! If you’re interested, email me at marksmith@gmail.com. Let’s learn together! Thanks! Mark 内容包括：你的意愿、优势、计划。 注意： 1.字数100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息； 4. 提示词：poetry n. 诗歌；buddy n. 伙伴。 Dear Mark, I am Li Hua, a student in Grade 9. I was excited when I knew you were looking for a poetry study buddy. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 20．假定你是 Diana，请阅读以下电子邮件并回复，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 To: Diana@mail. com Subject: Dub foreign films by using mobile apps! Hi Diana, I’m in trouble now. Yesterday I argued with my parents because they didn’t allow me to dub foreign films by using mobile apps. They thought that it would have a bad influence on my study and sleep. I broke their hearts and made them angry. I’m sorry for that but I really think it helpful to learn English by dubbing the foreign films. Now, I’m feeling worried. What should I do? Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Ping 注意： (1) 文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息。 (2) 词数：80~100。邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 (3) dub v. 配音 Hi Li Ping, I’m sorry to hear that you had an argument with your parents. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope things work out! Yours, Diana 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 参考答案 1．例文 Little Effort Makes a Difference As the saying goes, “A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.” Little efforts can indeed make a big difference. I still remember when I was learning to play the piano. At first, I found it extremely difficult and wanted to give up. But I decided to practice for just 15 minutes every day. Those small efforts added up over time. Eventually, I could play beautiful pieces smoothly. This experience taught me that every little effort counts. No matter how small it seems, continuous effort can lead to significant achievements. Just like drops of water forming an ocean, our tiny efforts can accumulate and bring about remarkable changes. In conclusion, as long as we keep making small efforts consistently, we will surely reach our goals and create a better future for ourselves. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：以一般现在时和一般过去时为主； ③提示：文章应该以“小小的努力能带来大的改变”为主题，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一和第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇引用名言“A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.”引出主题 “Little efforts can indeed make a big difference.”。 第二步，通过讲述自己学习钢琴的经历来具体阐述小小的努力如何积累并产生好的结果。 第三步，总结强调只要持续不断地付出小努力，就能达成目标创造美好未来。 [亮点词汇] ①extremely极其；非常 ②smoothly顺利地；平稳地 ③accumulate积累；积聚 ④remarkable显著的；非凡的 [高分句型] ①Just like drops of water forming an ocean, our tiny efforts can accumulate and bring about remarkable changes.（使用了类比和形象的比喻，将小努力比作水滴形成海洋，增强了论述的生动性和说服力。） ②This experience taught me that every little effort counts.（此句中“that”引导宾语从句，清晰地表达出经历所带来的感悟。） 2．例文 My Shining Point    I meet many excellent people every day and at the same time I also find myself really good. I can see the world with kind eyes. I find it important to have a positive attitude.     Last month, I was chosen to play a role in an English show. It was difficult for me to memorize the lines in a short time. However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English. So I made an effort to practice. Finally, I made it and received high praise.     In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题，有一个积极的态度很重要； 第二步，讲述一个自己的故事； 第三步，书写结语，介绍自己的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①at the same time同时 ②regard…as把……视为 ③make an effort做出努力 ④all the time一直 [高分句型] ①However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English. (which引导非限制性定语从句) ②In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time. (强调句) 3．例文： My favourite after-school activity After-school activities are important for us middle-school students. We take part in many kinds of after-school activities, such as painting, dancing, swimming and so on. However, my favorite after-school activity is painting. I started to learn painting from a young age. When I came into junior middle school, I attended two classes a week which are held on Mondays and Fridays from 4 p.m. to 5 p.m. I learned a lot in my painting class and won many prizes in school painting competition every year. I enjoy painting because it can make me grow better. Drawing allows me to express my emotions through pictures when words fail me. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作提示已给出，不要遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题。介绍自己最喜欢的课外活动是绘画； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详细介绍自己学习绘画的时间以及获奖情况等； 第三步，书写结语。介绍自己喜欢绘画的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in参加 ②enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事 [高分句型] ①When I came into junior middle school, I attended two classes a week which are held on Mondays and Fridays from 4 p.m. to 5 p.m.（when引导时间状语从句+which引导限制性定语从句） ②I enjoy painting because it can make me grow better.（because引导原因状语从句） 4．One possible version: Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading is very important to us. It can not only make us know about the world but also help us relax ourselves. To make people love reading, I have some good advice. First, we can build lots of small libraries in the city. Second, if new books can be introduced often, more people will be interested in reading. Third, if the seats in the libraries are very comfortable, people will enjoy reading there a lot. I hope my advice can work and more people will love reading. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：要求包含所有内容提示，并适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，阐述阅读的好处，引出自己的建议； 第二步，阐述自己的建议与想法； 第三步，表达期望。 [亮点词汇] ①not only...but also...不但……而且…… ②make sb. do sth.让某人做某事 [高分句型] ①Second, if new books can be introduced often, more people will be interested in reading. (if条件状语从句) ②I hope my advice can work and more will love reading. (宾语从句) 5．例文 My Best Friend Everyone has his or her best friend. Now, let me tell you something about my best friend. My best friend is Jack. He is tall and handsome. He has straight brown hair and wears glasses. He is so outgoing that he makes many friends in our school. He is also kind to others. I like making friends with him because he always gives me a hand when I am in need. Besides, he encourages everyone around him when they are upset. So, this is my best friend, Jack. How about yours? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括3个方面的提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出文章话题，为介绍自己最好的朋友做铺垫； 第二步，详细描述最好朋友杰克的外貌、性格特点以及他对作者和周围人的友好表现； 第三步，总结全文，再次点明主题，并引发读者的回应。 [亮点词汇] ①give sb. a hand 给某人帮助 ②in need 在困境中 [高分句型] ①Besides, he encourages everyone around him when they are upset. (when引导时间状语从句) ②He is so outgoing that he makes many friends in our school. (so … that …引导结果状语从句) 6．例文 Sharing is one of the most precious things in the world. For me, it is great relief that sharing brings to me. After I got into Grade Nine, I often felt stressed out even though I made an effort to study. I never told it to my parents or my friends, so my situation was getting worse and worse. One day, I couldn’t help crying when I got the test paper from the teacher. My world turned grey in my mind until my best friend put his hand on my shoulder. I decided to tell him how I felt. As soon as I shared my feelings with him, I felt extremely relaxed and his encouraging word brought back my confidence. Only then did I realize how important it was to share bad feedings with others! Sharing, which helps me feel better, brings me a lot. I believe that if we learn to share, the world will be a better place. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“写作要点”中包含的关键信息结合写作要求写短文介绍自己的分享经历。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍对分享的理解； 第二步，谈谈自己的分享经历； 第三部，谈谈自己的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①one of the most precious things 最珍贵的事物之一 ②make an effort to study努力学习 ③couldn’t help cryin情不自禁哭 [高分句型] ①As soon as I shared my feelings with him, I felt extremely relaxed and his encouraging word brought back my confidence. (as soon as引导的时间状语从句) ②Only then did I realize how important it was to share bad feedings with others! (倒装句) 7．例文: Building a greener community As we all know, green mountains and clear water are as good as mountains of gold and silver. It is important for everyone to protect the environment and build a beautiful China. And I think first we should build a greener community first. Our community has many problems now. First, it is not as green as before. Many people throw rubbish everywhere. Second, some people put bikes or motorbikes as they like, so our community looks a mess. Then, after the typhoon, many trees were down. But we don’t repair them or plant more trees. It is time for us to take action and solve these problems. First, we’d better sort out the rubbish at home, then we put the rubbish into the right rubbish bins in our community. I think it is easy for us to do that. Second, we can find an area and let all the bikes and motorbikes be here. Please put our bike or motorbike in the right area in order. Third, trees are very important to our environment. We should plant more trees and take care of the trees that were down on the typhoon. The community is our home. Everyone should take action and build a greener and more beautiful community. Let’s look forward to a greener community! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍小区现状； 第二步，介绍关于创建绿色社区的具体提议和做法； 第三步，书写结语。表达希望有一个绿色社区。 [亮点词汇] ①take action采取行动 ②important重要的 ③look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①And I think first we should build a greener community first. (宾语从句) ②We should plant more trees and take care of the trees that were down on the typhoon. (定语从句) 8．例文： “Enjoying a harmonious neighborhood” is one of our Chinese traditional virtues. What has happened in one community recently is a good example. Two weeks ago, Li Ming’s eighty-year-old father suddenly fell ill at home. Li Ming and his wife worked in a school far away from home. Thanks to the help of his neighbor Mr. Zhang, the old man was sent to the hospital in time and now he was out of danger. Li Ming was quite thankful to his neighbor. It’s important to have a kind-hearted neighbor. We should get on well with our neighbors. When anyone is in trouble, the others should offer a hand in time. In daily life, we should greet each other when meeting and say something kind to our neighbors in order to build a good relationship with them. We can create a harmonious neighborhood in this way. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文； ②时态：采用“一般过去时”； ③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍张大明父亲被救的经过； 第二步，阐述自己的感受； 第三步，阐述如何成为好邻居。 [亮点词汇] ①fall ill生病 ②Thanks to the help of多亏了……的帮助 ③in order to为了 [高分句型] ①When anyone is in trouble, the others should offer a hand in time.（when引导的时间状语从句） 9．例文 Dear Peter, How is everything going? I’d like to tell you something about China. China is the biggest country in Asia and has a history of over 5,000 years. It has rich and diverse culture. Last weekend, our school organized the students to take part in the “Experience China” activity in Beijing. We read Chinese stories and enjoyed traditional Chinese food like Beijing duck. Besides, we visited many places of interest, such as the Palace Museum. Through these activities, I deeply felt the charm of Chinese culture. I also realized the importance of inheriting and protecting our traditional culture. What a wonderful and meaningful experience! I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Bin 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍有关中国的事实情况； 第二步，具体描述上周的活动情况； 第三步，最后表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ① take part in参加 ② places of interest名胜古迹 ③ such as比如 [高分句型] What a wonderful and meaningful experience!（感叹句） 10．例文： I am a good helper in my family. Every day I make the bed and wash the dishes. Sometimes I look after my pet dog. Last Sunday, my parents didn’t come back home until it was dark. I stopped doing my homework and decided to cook a meal for my family. I surfed the Internet to learn how to do my mother’s favorite dishes. With the step-by-step directions, I managed to make my first dish. When my parents came back, they couldn’t believe their eyes. They were so satisfied with me. I think it is necessary for every family member to share housework. Doing housework is not only a way to reduce our parents’ burden at home, but also a way for us to prepare for an independent life in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己是家里的好帮手； 第二步，具体阐述自己的一次劳动经历； 第三步，表达自己对做家务的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①look after照顾 ②decide to do sth决定做某事 ③be satisfied with sb对某人感到满意 [高分句型] ①When my parents came back, they couldn’t believe their eyes. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②Doing housework is not only a way to reduce our parents’ burden at home, but also a way for us to prepare for an independent life in the future. (not only...but also句型) 11．例文 Dear Peter,   I hope this letter finds you well! I just finished my winter vacation and started a new semester. It was a meaningful break, filled with both school-related tasks and relaxation.   First, I focused on my school-related tasks. I completed all my homework and reviewed the lessons from last semester to prepare for the new one. This helped me feel more confident about my studies. Next, I took time to relax. I listened to my favorite music and watched some interesting movies which helped me relax and recharge. Finally, I celebrated the Spring Festival with my family. We had a big dinner, set off fireworks, and enjoyed traditional customs. It was a joyful time!   Overall, my winter vacation was both productive and enjoyable. How was your winter vacation? I’d love to hear about it!   Sincerely yours, Li Ping 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为以“一般过去时”为主“一般现在时”为辅； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏。注意使用正确的时态，避免语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，问候朋友并引出寒假生活； 第二步，重点介绍寒假是如何度过的； 第三步，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ① focus on 专注于 ② take time to do 花时间做某事 ③ celebrate the Spring Festival with 和某人一起庆祝春节 [高分句型] ① I hope this letter finds you well! (省略that的宾语从句) ② I listened to my favorite music and watched some interesting movies which helped me relax and recharge. (which引导定语从句) 12．例文 How to spend my summer holiday Our summer holiday is coming. As a teenager, I’m going to make myself a better person. First of all, I’m going to take exercise for about an hour every day. I will also eat more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food. It is important to live healthily. Also, I will develop a good relationship with my family. It is necessary to spend more time with them. And it’s my duty to share the housework with my parents. Besides, I’ll also read as many books as possible to open up my eyes. Last but not least, I plan to practice speaking in front of people. I am not supposed to be afraid to face strangers. I believe I can make myself better and better by doing these. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，用暑假来临直接点明如何度过暑假； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“锻炼、读书、培养良好的关系以及练习演讲”等方面具有阐述如何度过自己的暑假； 第三步，书写结语。表达自己通过暑假的计划能提升自己的美好祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①instead of代替 ②open up my eyes开阔眼界 [高分句型] ①It is necessary to spend more time with them. (it固定句式) ②I believe I can make myself better and better by doing these. (省略that的宾语从句) 13．例文 Dear Amy, I am happy to know that you are coming to experience the special courses in my school. Since you are fascinated by traditional Chinese culture and enjoy working with others, I would like to recommend the Chinese Cooking Course to you. In this course, you will have the opportunity to learn about Chinese cuisine in the cooking room, where you can cook delicious Chinese food under the guidance of experienced teachers. Moreover, you will learn the history behind each dish, which will deepen your understanding of Chinese culture. Working in groups will also allow you to interact with other students and share your cooking experiences. I believe you will enjoy this course and have a wonderful time learning about Chinese food and culture. Looking forward to seeing you soon! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：这是一封电子邮件。 ②时态：主要使用一般现在时。 ③提示：邮件中需要包含所选课程的至少两点相关信息，并且不能出现真实姓名和学校等信息。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头部分需要表达对Amy即将来校体验的欢迎和高兴之情，并引出推荐课程的主题； 第二步，主体部分详细描述推荐的课程并说明为什么这门课程适合Amy； 第三步，结尾部分再次表达对Amy的期待，希望她能享受这次课程体验，并附上友好的问候。 [亮点词汇] ①be fascinated by 对……着迷 ②under the guidance of 在……的指导下 ③deepen one’s understanding 加深某人的理解 ④interact with 与……互动 [高分句型] ①Since you are fascinated by traditional Chinese culture and enjoy working with others, I would like to recommend the Chinese Martial Arts Course to you.（原因状语从句） ②In this course, you will not only learn Chinese martial arts moves under the guidance of experienced teachers, but also deepen your understanding of Chinese culture by exploring the historical stories behind each move.（not only...but also...结构） 14．例文： Hi Simon, Sorry I haven’t written till now. I’m really busy with the courses and making new friends these days. I think people here are kind and friendly and I am getting on well with them. My school is large and beautiful. We have lessons on weekdays. School starts at 8 a.m. and finishes at 4:30 p.m. After school, we can do some sports to relax ourselves. English classes in China are not like those in Britain. The texts are easy. Sometimes we practice a lot in class. And sometimes we play games after class. I will send you some photos of my school next time. Take care! Yours, Max 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件 ②时态：主要采用 “一般现在时”； ③提示：分析邮件内容可知写作内容需包含近况、学校生活和英语课的描述。注意条理清晰和语法正确。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍在学校的适应情况； 第二步，介绍学校生活； 第三步，介绍英语课程； 第四步，表达祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①be busy with 忙于 ②get on well with sb. 与某人相处得好 ③relax ourselves放松自己 ④take care 保重 [高分句型] I think people here are kind and friendly and I am getting on well with them.  (宾语从句) 15．例文 How I Manage My Pocket Money I usually get some pocket money from my parents. Learning to manage it wisely is very important to students. Firstly, I always save 30% of my pocket money in a piggy bank. Saving helps me develop good financial habits and prepares me for unexpected needs. For example, last month I used my savings to buy a gift for my grandma’s birthday. Secondly, I spend 50% on necessary things like notebooks, pens and English magazines. These study tools improve my learning efficiency and broaden my knowledge. Nowadays, some students use pocket money to buy expensive sneakers or clothes. Personally, I won’t follow this trend. My pocket money is limited, and I’d rather spend it on meaningful things. For instance, I sometimes donate part of my savings to charity. Besides, expensive items can’t guarantee happiness. Simple clothes work just fine if they’re clean and tidy. By managing money properly, I’ve learned to value what I have and make wise decisions. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文为一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：要点内容已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍明智管理零花钱的重要性； 第二步，介绍自己管理零花钱的方式及理由； 第三步，表明自己不会用零花钱购买昂贵的运动鞋或衣服，并说明理由。 [亮点词汇] ① broaden my knowledge拓宽我的知识面 ② for instance例如 [高分句型] ① Saving helps me develop good financial habits and prepares me for unexpected needs.（动名词作主语） ② Simple clothes work just fine if they’re clean and tidy.（if引导的条件状语从句） 16．例文 Dear Peter, How are you? I’d like to share an interesting experience with you. During the Dragon Boat Festival this year, I learned how to make zongzi. To make zongzi, we needed to have rice, beans, dates, some leaves, some strings and a pot. How did we make zongzi? First, we washed the rice. Then, we kept it in the water for hours. Next, we made a cone shape with the leaves. After that, we put the rice, beans and dates into the cone. And then, we tied zongzi with strings. Finally, we boiled zongzi over low heat in a pot. Very soon, we enjoyed the delicious zongzi. It was really easy and interesting to make zongzi, so you can try to make zongzi by yourself. And don’t forget to share your experience with me. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：邮件开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接信件开头，引出话题； 第二步，根据要点逐步介绍包粽子的过程，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，抒发学习包粽子的感受并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①put sth into把某物放进 ②tie sth with sth用某物绑某物 [高分句型] ①It was really easy and interesting to make zongzi, so you can try to make zongzi by yourself.（so连接两个并列分句） 17．例文 Dear classmates, Winter has gone and spring comes. We should take care of ourselves to keep healthy. Staying healthy helps us study better and stay active. Here are some tips: First, eat balanced meals with more fruits and vegetables. Avoid junk food. Second, exercise daily, like running or playing sports. Also, drink enough water and get 8 hours of sleep. Finally, wash hands often and keep rooms ventilated. Dress properly as the weather changes. Let’s work together to stay away from illnesses! Thank you! Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，点明主题； 第二步，根据题干表格的要点，介绍保持健康的重要性，从运动，饮食，卫生和睡眠来说明如何保持健康； 第三步，书写号召语，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①stay active保持活跃 ②stay away from远离 [高分句型] ①Staying healthy helps us study better and stay active.（动名词作主语） ②Let’s work together to stay away from illnesses!（祈使句） 18．例文 Sports make our life better As a saying goes, knowledge makes a wiser man, and sports make a stronger man. Among various sports, I have a particular fondness for basketball. The thrill of the game, the camaraderie with teammates, and the joy of scoring a basket all contribute to my love for this sport. Playing basketball has brought me numerous benefits. It has not only improved my physical fitness but also taught me the importance of teamwork and cooperation. Additionally, it has fostered a sense of discipline and perseverance in me. In conclusion, sports have a profound impact on my life. They not only enhance my physical well-being but also enrich my mental state. I feel more alive and energized when I am involved in sports. I hope to continue enjoying the benefits of sports and inspire others to do so as well. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容包括”中的关键信息，可适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己喜欢的运动以及喜欢它的原因； 第二步，详细阐述这项运动给自己带来的好处； 第三步，书写结语，表明自己对运动的感受和期望。 [亮点词汇] ①have a particular fondness for 特别喜欢…… ②contribute to 有助于，促进 ③numerous 无数的 ④physical fitness 体能 ⑤Additionally 另外 ⑥have a profound impact on 对……有深远影响 ⑦am involved in... 参与…… ⑧inspire sb to do 鼓励某人做某事 [高分句型] ①The thrill of the game, the camaraderie with teammates, and the joy of scoring a basket all contribute to my love for this sport.(and连接的并列句) ②I feel more alive and energized when I am involved in sports. (when引导的时间状语从句)。 19．例文 Dear Mark, I am Li Hua, a student in Grade 9. I was excited when I knew you were looking for a poetry study buddy. I would be delighted to be a partner with you. I have a strong passion for ancient Chinese poetry and have spent considerable time studying their meanings and contexts. Additionally, I am good at both English and Chinese, which can help us communicate with each other well. As for our reading plan, I suggest we meet twice a week in the library to discuss and interpret poems together. This will not only enhance our understanding but also make the learning process enjoyable. Looking forward to your reply. Yours,                                                                                                                                             Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我想成为你的共读伙伴”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“自己的意愿、个人优势、共读计划”几个方面重点介绍； 第三步，书写结语。表达“希望收到回复”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①be delighted to do sth.很高兴做某事 ②have a strong passion有强烈的激情 ③spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事 [高分句型] ①Additionally, I am good at both English and Chinese, which can help us communicate with each other well. (定语从句) ②This will not only enhance our understanding but also make the learning process enjoyable. (not only...but also...句型) 20．例文： Hi Li Ping, I’m sorry to hear that you had an argument with your parents. I completely agree that it is a good way to learn English with interest. However, you shouldn’t make your parents angry because they are the ones who love you all the time. Don’t be so upset. Go straight to your parents and tell them you are sorry for that. Then, listen to your parents patiently, and you will understand what your parents are worried about. At last, you can talk to your parents about the advantages of dubbing foreign films by using mobile apps. Hope things work out! Yours, Diana 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据邮件中Li Ping的问题提出建议，注意用词恰当，语句通顺，语法正确。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表示理解，并予以安慰； 第二步，具体阐述给李明的建议； 第三步，表达期望。 [亮点词汇] ① have an argument with sb.和某人吵架 ② all the time一直 ③ be worried about担心…… [高分句型] ①I completely agree that it is a good way to learn English with interest.（宾语从句） ②Go straight to your parents and tell them you are sorry for that. （祈使句） 答案第1页，共2页 答案第1页，共2页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$