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Section Ⅳ Writing——介绍艺术品的说明文
本单元的写作任务是介绍一件艺术品。介绍艺术品的文章属于说明文,其主体时态通常是一般现在时,内容一般包括该艺术品的作者、创作时间、特点、影响等。但是一定要抓住该艺术品的主要特色,这样才能给读者留下深刻的印象。
【写作指导】
Ⅰ.谨记写作范式
Ⅱ.积累话题素材
[常用词汇]
①one's masterpiece 某人的杰作
②be awarded sth.被授予……
③best loved and worldfamous painter最受喜爱和闻名世界的画家
④highly respected and wellknown master备受尊敬和享誉世界的大师
⑤attract/catch one's attention 引起某人的注意
⑥be impressed by 对……印象深刻
⑦give a vivid description of 生动描述……
⑧give/award a prize to...授予……奖
⑨one of the most important...最重要的……之一
⑩in the Chinese traditional style 按照中国传统风格
⑪to one's surprise 令某人惊讶的是
⑫be good at/do well in...在……方面擅长
[出彩佳句]
①The painting is known for its accurate images of people and scenery.
这幅画以对人物和风景的精确描绘而闻名。
②The painting describes the traditional Spring Festival scenery.
这幅画描述了传统春节的场景。
③The sculptor is good at/does well in an elephant sculpture.
这位雕塑家擅长大象雕塑。
④The masterpiece shows that people lived a hard life in ancient times.
这部杰作表现了人们在古代过着艰难的生活。
⑤Seal cutting is one of the most important creations in the history of China.
篆刻是中国历史上最重要的发明之一。
⑥To our surprise, his work has won the first prize in the competition.
令我们惊讶的是,他的作品在比赛中获得了一等奖。
⑦It is reported that his most famous painting was kept in the National Museum.
据报道,他最有名的画作被保存在国家博物馆。
⑧There is no doubt that the masterpiece plays an important role in the development of sculpture.
毫无疑问,这部杰出的作品在雕塑发展史上起着重要的作用。
【实战演练】
《清明上河图》(The Riverside Scene at Qingming Festival)是中国十大传世名画之一,是北宋画家张择端的一幅风俗画,请根据下列提示写一篇80词左右的文章。
1.北宋画家张择端的传世精品,宽24.8厘米,长528.7厘米。
2.描绘了清明时节各阶层人民的生活状况。
3.画中有800多位人物,令人惊叹。
Step 1 审题谋篇·定框架
定人称
以第三人称为主
定时态
以一般现在时为主
定框架
第一段:简单介绍作品;
第二段:介绍作品细节;
第三段:作品的价值和意义。
Step 2 要点翻译·用佳句
1.《清明上河图》是北宋画家张择端的作品。
The Riverside Scene at Qingming Festival was painted by the Northern Song Dynasty painter Zhang Zeduan.
2.这幅画是一幅宽24.8厘米,长528.7厘米的国宝级文物。
The painting, a national treasure,is 24.8 cm wide and 528.7 cm long.
[升级] 用过去分词作定语将1、2句合并
The Riverside Scene at Qingming Festival,painted by the Northern Song Dynasty painter Zhang Zeduan, is a national treasure with a width of 24.8 cm and length of 528.7 cm.
3.这幅画描述了清明时节各行各业人民的日常生活。
The painting depicts people's daily life of all walks of life during the Tombsweeping Festival.
4.令我们惊讶的是,画中有800多位人物。
To our surprise,there are more than 800 people in the painting.
5.如果你全身心投入到这幅画中,你会发现人和动物都栩栩如生,甚至似乎能听到他们的谈话。
If you put your heart into the painting, you will find people and animals alive and even seem to hear their talk.
6.据说,这幅画不仅是古代中国最著名的画作之一,也是世界上最杰出的艺术作品之一。
It is said that the painting is not only one of the most famous ancient Chinese paintings, but also one of the most outstanding artworks in the world.
Step 3 连句成篇·达美文
The Riverside Scene at Qingming Festival
The Riverside Scene at Qingming Festival, painted by the Northern Song Dynasty painter Zhang Zeduan, is a national treasure with a width of 24.8 cm and length of 528.7 cm.
The painting describes people's daily life of all walks of life during the Tombsweeping Festival.To our surprise,there are more than 800 people in the painting.In addition, if you put your heart into the painting, you will find people and animals alive and even seem to hear their talk.What an awesome painting it is!
It is said that the painting is not only one of the most famous ancient Chinese paintings, but
also one of the most outstanding artworks in the world.
人物
描写
①elegant adj.优雅的
②lack vt.缺乏,没有
动作
描写
①sponsor v.资助
②greet v.问候,迎接,招呼
③fold v.折起
④stimulate v.刺激;促进;促使
⑤demonstrate v.示范,演示
心理
描写
①get a load of... 注意,仔细看(表示惊讶或羡慕)
②be fond of 喜欢
[语段情景用] Clair说她缺乏自信。更糟糕的是,想提高社会地位的丈夫认为他们的家不够高雅。Tony安慰Clair,并承诺让她更漂亮,让她的房子更高雅……
Clair said that 1.she lacked confidence (她缺乏自信).What's worse,her husband who wanted to improve his social status thought 2.their home wasn't elegant enough (他们的家不够高雅).Tony comforted her and promised to help Clair make her more beautiful and her house more elegant.He made it.A few days later,Clair invited her friends to her house.Tony 3.greeted them with a broad smile (面带微笑地迎接他们),standing up straight with his arms folded.All of them 4.were fond of Clair's house (喜欢Clair的房子) and envied her having Tony,who in fact was a robot 5.sponsored by a company (由一家公司赞助).
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