Module 3 Journey to space 单元话题（宇宙探索）写作满分范文15篇-2024-2025学年八年级英语下册重难点讲练全攻略（外研版）

2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新课程精品系列资料，名师精选！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新课程精品系列资料，名师精选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Module3 Journey to space 单元话题（宇宙探索）写作满分范文15篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．假如现在是2050年，你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。在火星上你们到处参观，举行聚会，与外星人(alien)通电话……总之，你们玩得很愉快。 请根据上述材料，以An Exciting Trip为题，以第一人称的形式描述一下你的火星之旅。要求表达准确，语法正确，行文连贯，可适当发挥，词数在80左右。 An Exciting Trip 2．假如你是一名宇航员，你曾乘坐宇宙飞船遨游太空，请描述一下你的经历及感受。词数在80左右。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假如你梦想着当一名宇航员去太空旅行。请你根据以下提示，以My dream为题写一篇英语短文，内容提示： 1. 在很小的时候你就对各种飞机感兴趣。 2. 从此之后，你经常在收看太空新闻，经常阅读关于太空旅行方面的书籍。 3. 10岁时你开始做宇宙飞机模型，现在你已经做了2个飞机模型，大家都说你做的模型很独特，新颖，去年你还参加了飞机模型比赛并获了一等奖。 可能用到的词汇：interested, news, space travel, make model planes, win the first prize 要求： 1.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。 2.词数80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数） My dream Everyone has a dream. My dream is to be an astronaut. 4．2023年9月21日下午，“天宫课堂”第四课开讲，神舟十六号宇航员们生动介绍了空间站梦天实验舱（Mengtian Lab Module）工作生活场景，并进行了太空科普授课。假如你是李华，你校英文报社开展了主题为“A Letter to Astronauts”的征文活动，请你根据下面图示信息，结合你对太空探索的看法，向校报投稿。 写作要求： 1.文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80-100（开头已给出，不计入总次数）。 Dear astronauts, How is everything going in space? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Li Hua 5．假如现在是2100年，由于科学与技术的高速发展，去火星旅行已经成为现实。请根据以下提示，并发挥你的想象力，以A Journey to Mars为题；写一篇关于火星旅行的短文。 提示： 1.乘坐航天飞机到达火星； 2.遇见了外星人（aliens）（两只红红的眼睛，两条腿，并留着长长的头发，用来抵御晚上的寒冷；非常友好，会讲英语） 3.环游火星，并拍了很多照片 4.… 要求： （1）词数：80—100左右（开头已经给出，不计入总数） （2）字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 （3）要包括给出的要点，可以适当增加内容。 A Journey to Mars With the development of the technology, we can travel into the space at any time. Last time I went to Mars with my family. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．随着天宫空间站的建设，在学校掀起了一阵航天热。假如你是Allen，你班同学也在热议并遐想未来能进入空间站的旅行，你班将举办一次主题为“My Journey to Tiangong Space Station”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据下列提示，发挥想象谈一下你的太空站之旅。 注意：1、短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2、不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； 3、词数80～100。 My Journey to Tiangong Space Station I dream of travelling to space. Now I’ve got a chance to make my dream come true. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．学校英文报征稿：2022年10月12日，神舟十四号航天员在太空授课，请给天宫空间站的宇航员写一封邮件。假如你是李华，对航空航天感兴趣并观看了此次授课，准备向学校英文报投稿。 内容要点： 写邮件的目的 表达感谢；对太空感兴趣 讲座收获 获得科学信息；了解天宫空间站 你的梦想 …… 注意： 1. 内容必须包含表格中的所有信息； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得透露个人信息。 4. 词数80左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：the Tiangong space station（天宫空间站） Dear astronauts, How is everything going in space? I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from Nanning.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 8．假如你是李华，你校英文报The Unknown World栏目向全校学生征稿，请你根据下面的提示，以“My Favourite Space Hero”为题，写一篇介绍航天员刘洋的稿件。 要点： 个人信息 1. 刘洋1978年10月出生于河南，1997年8月入伍； 经历与贡献 2. 2012年6月15日，刘洋作为中国首名女航天员，与景海鹏、刘旺乘坐神舟九号飞船进入太空，在太空停留了13天； 3. 2022年6月5日，刘洋与陈冬、蔡旭哲乘坐神舟十四号飞船进入太空，将在太空停留 180天； 你的感受 …… 要求： 1. 须包含所有提示信息，语言通顺，行文连贯，内容充实； 2. 词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇： join the army 入伍，female astronaut女航天员，Shenzhou 9 spacecraft 神舟九号飞船 My Favourite Space Hero Chinese astronauts have made great contributions to our country’s space industry. They are our heroes. Now I’d like to introduce my favourite space hero Liu Yang. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在指定位置上。 中国梦牵引航天梦，航天梦助推中国梦。为了更好地追求航天梦，我国专门将每年的4月24日定为中国航天日（Space Day of China），就是为了纪念中国航天事业的卓越成就，不断发扬中国航天精神。假如你也有一个航天梦，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文，谈谈你的梦想。 注意： 1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名； 3. 语句连贯，词数100左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Do you have a space dream? I have one. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am sure that I can make my dream come true! 10．假如你是李华，你的笔友Nick看了“神舟十七号”的成功发射后对宇航员充满了好奇，他给你发邮件询问宇航员将在太空中做什么以及如何才能有像宇航员一样的好身体。请你根据下面表格中的信息，用英语给他回一封电子邮件。词数80左右。 What will astronauts do in space? 1. do scientific experiments (科学实验) 2. take exercise to keep fit 3. Sometimes walk in space 4. … How to get a healthy body like astronauts? 1. Eating habits: … 2. Living habits: … 注意事项： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Nick, Great to hear from you. Let me tell you something about astronauts. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 能力综合实践5篇 11．假如你是玛丽，现在是2104年，你生活在火星上，你的朋友吉姆生活在地球上，不久他也将来火星生活。请根据以下表格提示，写一封email告诉他你在火星上的生活情况。要求80词左右，文中不得出现真实人名。 总体感觉 比地球生活更舒适、更有趣 学习方面 没有学校，通过电脑在网上学校学习 生活方面 有机器人帮助做大部分家务，有更多闲暇时间 环境方面 环境优美，处处是绿树鲜花，没有污染 生活设施 住宅附近有大型的超市，生活很方便 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．太空是浩瀚的、神秘的。人类对宇宙一直不断地探索，请根据你所学的太空知识，描述一下你心目中的宇宙。再结合你自己的感想，向同学们说说你未来的打算。可适当发挥。内容包括： (1) universe, galaxy, solar system, earth, moon; (2) scientists, do research about, Chinese space station; (3) astronaut, in the future. 作文要求： (1)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。 (2)语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everybody! It’s my turn to tell you something about the space. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．假如你是王治，从小就希望做一名宇航员。请看下面的思维导图并以“I Want to Be an Astronaut”为题，写一篇短文，内容包括你想做航天员的原因以及你打算如何去做。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I Want to Be an Astronaut Why How 1. walk in space like Nie Haisheng 2. … 1. study hard 2. … 要求： 1. 词数：80左右，开头已给出不计入总词数； 2. 行文连贯，可自由发挥。 I Want to Be an Astronaut I’m Wang Zhi. I want to be an astronaut when I grow up. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．近期，“玉兔二号”月球车在月球表面留下了月饼形状的图案，引发了广泛关注。你所在班级就“太空探索是否值得”进行了讨论。请根据下表信息，用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍讨论情况并表达你的个人观点。 观点 理由 30%反对 1.离我们的生活遥远 2.投入成本高 70%赞同 1.探索宇宙的奥秘 2.有助于科技进步 你的观点 …… 注意： (1)词数100左右； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：月球车lunar rover Is Space Exploration Worth It? Hello, everyone! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．最近你们班举行了一次班会，班会的主题是：是否应该太空探险？请结合下表内容，用英语写一篇100词左右的文章，客观地介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点。(开头已给出，不计入总词数) 一些同学赞同 一些同学反对 你自己的观点 获得新的知识 耗资巨大 …… 从太空取得新资源 宇航员的安全问题 扩大人类的生存空间 …… Outer Space Explorations, YES or NO? We had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 11 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新课程精品系列资料，名师精选！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新课程精品系列资料，名师精选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Module3 Journey to space 单元话题（宇宙探索）写作满分范文15篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．假如现在是2050年，你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。在火星上你们到处参观，举行聚会，与外星人(alien)通电话……总之，你们玩得很愉快。 请根据上述材料，以An Exciting Trip为题，以第一人称的形式描述一下你的火星之旅。要求表达准确，语法正确，行文连贯，可适当发挥，词数在80左右。 An Exciting Trip 【答案】例文： An Exciting Trip Today is the year of 2050. Our school organized a great trip to Mars a few days ago. We went to the Mars by spaceship. On Mars we visited everywhere. We found a lot of things different from our earth, such as big stones which can speak. It’s amazing. After that, we had a party. Many aliens took an active part in the party. Their songs were very nice. Finally, we made phone calls with aliens. We all have a good time on Mars. The trip was very interesting and I will never forget the trip. I hope to travel to the Mars again soon. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。假如现在是2050年，你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。要求以“An Exciting Trip”为题，以第一人称的形式描述一下你的火星之旅；内容包括在火星上举行聚会，与外星人(alien)通电话，以及你的所见所闻等；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般过去时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。 2．假如你是一名宇航员，你曾乘坐宇宙飞船遨游太空，请描述一下你的经历及感受。词数在80左右。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： I am an astronaut. I have ever been to space once. I went there by spacecraft. I went around the earth several times. I saw the earth, the sun and many other stars through the window of the spacecraft. They were very beautiful. I also walked in space. When I walked I felt as if I was flying. What an unforgettable experience! The space is very beautiful. I hope I can go into space again. I also hope to go to the moon one day. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求讲述自己作为一名宇航员乘坐宇宙飞船遨游太空的经历和感受。 2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述自己乘坐宇宙飞船遨游太空的经历和感受，要叙述完整，条理清晰。 3．假如你梦想着当一名宇航员去太空旅行。请你根据以下提示，以My dream为题写一篇英语短文，内容提示： 1. 在很小的时候你就对各种飞机感兴趣。 2. 从此之后，你经常在收看太空新闻，经常阅读关于太空旅行方面的书籍。 3. 10岁时你开始做宇宙飞机模型，现在你已经做了2个飞机模型，大家都说你做的模型很独特，新颖，去年你还参加了飞机模型比赛并获了一等奖。 可能用到的词汇：interested, news, space travel, make model planes, win the first prize 要求： 1.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。 2.词数80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数） My dream Everyone has a dream. My dream is to be an astronaut. 【答案】例文： My dream Everyone has a dream. My dream is to be an astronaut in the future. When I was very young, I was interested in different kinds of planes. Then I often watched the news about the space travel on TV and on the Internet. I like the shows very much. Sometimes I also read some books about the space travel, too. At the age of ten, I began to make model planes alone. I have made two model planes so far. Many people say they are quite unique and new. I feel very proud. Last year, I also entered a model plane competition. I also won the first prize for it. I decided to study harder to be an astronaut in the future. I hope that my dream will come true soon. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏要点，注意正确使用人称和时态。 [写作步骤] 第一步，概述自己的梦想； 第二步，结合自己的经历具体介绍对太空的热爱； 第三步，表达作者希望自己的梦想成真。 [亮点词汇] ①alone独自 ②so far到目前为止 ③different kinds of各种各样的…… ④begin to do sth开始做某事 [高分句型] ①I decided to study harder to be an astronaut in the future.（不定式结构“to be an astronaut”表达目的） ②I hope that my dream will come true soon.（that引导的宾语从句） 4．2023年9月21日下午，“天宫课堂”第四课开讲，神舟十六号宇航员们生动介绍了空间站梦天实验舱（Mengtian Lab Module）工作生活场景，并进行了太空科普授课。假如你是李华，你校英文报社开展了主题为“A Letter to Astronauts”的征文活动，请你根据下面图示信息，结合你对太空探索的看法，向校报投稿。 写作要求： 1.文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80-100（开头已给出，不计入总次数）。 Dear astronauts, How is everything going in space? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】范文： Dear astronauts, How is everything going in space? I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from Tongling. As one of your biggest fans, I’m writing to thank you for your wonderful class inside the Mengtian Lab Module on September 21, 2023. I’ve been interested in space since I was a little child. Thanks to the class, I’ve not only learned a lot about the Mengtian Lab Module, but also got some scientific information. I am so proud of our country’s achievements in space exploration that I decide to be an astronaut like you. I know it is difficult and will make lots of efforts, but I will try my best to make my dream come true. I believe one day I can also do something for our country like you! Wish you a successful mission and a comfortable journey! Sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，跟对方问候，介绍自己并指明写信的目的； 第二步，介绍自己在这次太空授课中的收获； 第三步，最后介绍自己的梦想。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②Thanks to多亏 ③not only…but also不仅……而且 ④be proud of为……感到骄傲 ⑤try my best to do sth.尽我最大的努力 ⑥come true实现 [高分句型] ①I’ve been interested in space since I was a little child.（since引导的时间状语从句） ②I am so proud of our country’s achievements in space exploration that I decide to be an astronaut like you.（so…that引导的结果状语从句） ③I believe one day I can also do something for our country like you!（省略that的宾语从句） 5．假如现在是2100年，由于科学与技术的高速发展，去火星旅行已经成为现实。请根据以下提示，并发挥你的想象力，以A Journey to Mars为题；写一篇关于火星旅行的短文。 提示： 1.乘坐航天飞机到达火星； 2.遇见了外星人（aliens）（两只红红的眼睛，两条腿，并留着长长的头发，用来抵御晚上的寒冷；非常友好，会讲英语） 3.环游火星，并拍了很多照片 4.… 要求： （1）词数：80—100左右（开头已经给出，不计入总数） （2）字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 （3）要包括给出的要点，可以适当增加内容。 A Journey to Mars With the development of the technology, we can travel into the space at any time. Last time I went to Mars with my family. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： A Journey to Mars With the development of the technology, we can travel into the space at any time. Last time I went to Mars with my family. We took the space shuttle there in the morning. We met the aliens on Mars. They have two red eyes and two legs. Their hair is really long because they need it to keep warm on the cold night. Though they look so strange, they are very friendly. They can speak English. We travelled around the whole Mars and took a lot of pictures. It was such a nice trip that we didn’t want to go back to the earth. But we finally went back and I think I’ll go there again. 【详解】1. 题干解读：文章属于材料作文，主要是介绍自己的太空之旅，内容按照题干中所给的信息描写，也可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：文章主要用一般过去时和一般现在时结合，人称用第三人称展开描述。主要是介绍太空之旅的经历，包括外星人的情况以及自己的所见所闻等。写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．随着天宫空间站的建设，在学校掀起了一阵航天热。假如你是Allen，你班同学也在热议并遐想未来能进入空间站的旅行，你班将举办一次主题为“My Journey to Tiangong Space Station”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据下列提示，发挥想象谈一下你的太空站之旅。 注意：1、短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2、不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； 3、词数80～100。 My Journey to Tiangong Space Station I dream of travelling to space. Now I’ve got a chance to make my dream come true. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Journey to Tiangong Space Station I dream of travelling to space. Now I’ve got a chance to make my dream come true. Next month, I’m going to take a trip to Tiangong Space Station with some of my classmates to learn more about space life. It will take about 6 hours by rocket. It will be fast and exciting. After I get onto the space station, I’m going to give some presents to the astronauts first. Then I’m going to have dinner with the astronauts and try space food. It must be delicious. After that, I’m going to visit the space station and take videos of the astronauts’ life on the space station. All in all, I believe it will be a wonderful trip. I can’t wait to start my trip. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为一般将来时； ③提示：根据提示内容并发挥想象谈一下你的太空站之旅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细介绍自己的太空站之旅； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①come true实现 ②all in all总的来说 ③can’t wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事 [高分句型] ①Next month, I’m going to take a trip to Tiangong Space Station with some of my classmates to learn more about space life. (动词不定式作目的状语) ②After I get onto the space station, I’m going to give some presents to the astronauts first. (after引导的时间状语从句) 7．学校英文报征稿：2022年10月12日，神舟十四号航天员在太空授课，请给天宫空间站的宇航员写一封邮件。假如你是李华，对航空航天感兴趣并观看了此次授课，准备向学校英文报投稿。 内容要点： 写邮件的目的 表达感谢；对太空感兴趣 讲座收获 获得科学信息；了解天宫空间站 你的梦想 …… 注意： 1. 内容必须包含表格中的所有信息； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得透露个人信息。 4. 词数80左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：the Tiangong space station（天宫空间站） Dear astronauts, How is everything going in space? I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from Nanning.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear astronauts, How is everything going in space? I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from Nanning. On October 12, 2022, you gave us a lecture in the Tiangong space station. Thank you for taking the space course for us. From the lecture, I learned about the information of Tiangong space station and got a lot of scientific information. I understood how great and proud it is to become an astronaut. Through this class, I am more and more interested in space. When I grow up, I also want to become a successful astronaut like you. So I will study hard from now on. At the same time, I will also do more exercise to strengthen my body and prepare for my dreams.                                       Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，指明写信的目的； 第二步，介绍自己在这次太空授课中的收获； 第三步，最后介绍自己的梦想。 [亮点词汇] ① thank you for doing sth因某事而感谢 ② grow up长大 ③ from now on从现在开始 [高分句型] ① When I grow up, I also want to become a successful astronaut like you.（when引导的时间状语从句） ② I understood how great and proud it is to become an astronaut.（宾语从句） 8．假如你是李华，你校英文报The Unknown World栏目向全校学生征稿，请你根据下面的提示，以“My Favourite Space Hero”为题，写一篇介绍航天员刘洋的稿件。 要点： 个人信息 1. 刘洋1978年10月出生于河南，1997年8月入伍； 经历与贡献 2. 2012年6月15日，刘洋作为中国首名女航天员，与景海鹏、刘旺乘坐神舟九号飞船进入太空，在太空停留了13天； 3. 2022年6月5日，刘洋与陈冬、蔡旭哲乘坐神舟十四号飞船进入太空，将在太空停留 180天； 你的感受 …… 要求： 1. 须包含所有提示信息，语言通顺，行文连贯，内容充实； 2. 词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇： join the army 入伍，female astronaut女航天员，Shenzhou 9 spacecraft 神舟九号飞船 My Favourite Space Hero Chinese astronauts have made great contributions to our country’s space industry. They are our heroes. Now I’d like to introduce my favourite space hero Liu Yang. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Favourite Space Hero Chinese astronauts have made great contributions to our country’s space industry. They are our heroes. Now I’d like to introduce my favourite space hero Liu Yang. Liu Yang was born in Henan province in October 1978 and joined the army in August 1997. On June 15th, 2012, Liu Yang, as China’s first female astronaut, went into space with Jing Haipeng and Liu Wang aboard the Shenzhou 9 spacecraft. They stayed in space for 13 days. On June 5th, 2022, Liu Yang, Chen Dong and Cai Xuzhe went into space aboard the Shenzhou 14 spacecraft and will stay in space for 180 days. I must also study hard and contribute my share to the construction of the country. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍航天员刘洋。 第二步，介绍刘洋的经历与贡献。 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①join the army参军 ②go into space进入太空 ③stay in space在太空停留 [高分句型] I must also study hard and contribute my share to the construction of the country. (and连接并列成分) 9．根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在指定位置上。 中国梦牵引航天梦，航天梦助推中国梦。为了更好地追求航天梦，我国专门将每年的4月24日定为中国航天日（Space Day of China），就是为了纪念中国航天事业的卓越成就，不断发扬中国航天精神。假如你也有一个航天梦，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文，谈谈你的梦想。 注意： 1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名； 3. 语句连贯，词数100左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Do you have a space dream? I have one. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am sure that I can make my dream come true! 【答案】例文 Do you have a space dream? I have one. My dream is to be an astronaut. I’m very interested in everything in space. When I am free, I enjoy reading books and watching movies about it. The space is full of things unknown to us and I really hope that I can help people learn more about it in the future. Space travel can’t be easy so I must work hard and get well prepared to make my dream come true. To begin with, I will do sports as often as I can because a strong and healthy body is a must for a good astronaut. What’s more, I will read more books about space. In this way, I can learn more about it and work well in it in the future. I am sure that I can make my dream come true! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的航天梦，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己想成为一名宇航员； 第二步，介绍为什么会有这个梦想； 第三步，介绍将如何为梦想努力。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②be full of充满 ③come true实现 [高分句型] ①When I am free, I enjoy reading books and watching movies about it.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②To begin with, I will do sports as often as I can because a strong and healthy body is a must for a good astronaut.（because引导的原因状语从句） ③I am sure that I can make my dream come true!（that引导的宾语从句） 10．假如你是李华，你的笔友Nick看了“神舟十七号”的成功发射后对宇航员充满了好奇，他给你发邮件询问宇航员将在太空中做什么以及如何才能有像宇航员一样的好身体。请你根据下面表格中的信息，用英语给他回一封电子邮件。词数80左右。 What will astronauts do in space? 1. do scientific experiments (科学实验) 2. take exercise to keep fit 3. Sometimes walk in space 4. … How to get a healthy body like astronauts? 1. Eating habits: … 2. Living habits: … 注意事项： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Nick, Great to hear from you. Let me tell you something about astronauts. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Nick, Great to hear from you. Let me tell you something about astronauts. In space, astronauts will do scientific experiments, take exercise to keep fit, and sometimes walk in space. They also need to observe many unknown planets carefully. To have a healthy body like astronauts, you should have good eating habits, such as eating more vegetables and fruit, and less junk food. Also, maintain good living habits, like getting enough sleep and exercising regularly. I hope this helps! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：一般现在时与一般将来时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，介绍宇航员将在太空中做什么； 第二步，介绍如何才能有像宇航员一样的好身体。 [亮点词汇] ①observe观察 ②junk food垃圾食品 ③maintain保持 [高分句型] To have a healthy body like astronauts, you should have good eating habits, such as eating more vegetables and fruit, and less junk food.（不定式表目的） 能力综合实践5篇 11．假如你是玛丽，现在是2104年，你生活在火星上，你的朋友吉姆生活在地球上，不久他也将来火星生活。请根据以下表格提示，写一封email告诉他你在火星上的生活情况。要求80词左右，文中不得出现真实人名。 总体感觉 比地球生活更舒适、更有趣 学习方面 没有学校，通过电脑在网上学校学习 生活方面 有机器人帮助做大部分家务，有更多闲暇时间 环境方面 环境优美，处处是绿树鲜花，没有污染 生活设施 住宅附近有大型的超市，生活很方便 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Jim， Now, I'm writing to you on Mars. It's really wonderful to live on Mars. I think life on Mars is more comfortable and more interesting than that on Earth. We have online schools instead of real ones. Most of our housework is done by robots so that we can have more time for our hobbies. Mars is very beautiful. There are green trees and fresh flowers everywhere, and there is no pollution here. We have supermarkets in our neighborhood. They make our life more convenient. Hope to see you soon. Good luck! Yours, Mary 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，写作时要注意电子邮件格式，开头先顶格写问候；正文开始要注意段首空两格；最后不要忘记了祝愿和落款，落款写在邮件右下角。 2.例文点评：例文采用两段式；用第一人称来叙述作者在火星的生活和感受；时态采用一般现在时为主；写作顺序是按照表格内容记叙，从总体感觉到学习到生活到再到环境最后到生活设施，让文章显得重点突出，条理清晰；最后结尾和收件人互动，增加读者代入感。 3.高分亮点： 短语：instead of；make sth. convenient；so that。 句型：It’s + adj. + to do sth.；so that引导的结果状语从句。 【点睛】书面表达是英语考试中占分比比较大的一个题目，同学们在做题时可以按照“审（审题，审人称、时态，审要点）——列（列单词、词组）——连（连词成句，连句成篇）——查（全文检查）”的步骤写作，避免考试中漏点，行文逻辑混乱，低级错误频出的现象。 12．太空是浩瀚的、神秘的。人类对宇宙一直不断地探索，请根据你所学的太空知识，描述一下你心目中的宇宙。再结合你自己的感想，向同学们说说你未来的打算。可适当发挥。内容包括： (1) universe, galaxy, solar system, earth, moon; (2) scientists, do research about, Chinese space station; (3) astronaut, in the future. 作文要求： (1)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。 (2)语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everybody! It’s my turn to tell you something about the space. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Hello, everybody! It’s my turn to tell you something about the space. As you know, the universe is very large. There are many galaxies in the universe. For example, the galaxy has billions of stars. The sun is one of them in the solar system. The earth goes round the sun and the moon goes round the earth. So far, scientists have done a lot of research about space. Especially, our Chinese astronauts have been to the space many times. We have built a great space station. Now, they are working in our own space station. I am very proud of our country. So I will study hard. I will be an astronaut in the future. What about you? Thanks. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”； ③ 提示：文章的要点是通过关键词的形式给出，因此考生应注意围绕中心和关键词来对要点进行拓展，并符合逻辑结构，重点突出。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，可用“轮到我来给你讲一下太空”来引出主题，即关于宇宙的介绍； 第二步，围绕关键词串联起科学家所做的事情，注意此处文章时态可以“现在完成时”为主； 第三步，结尾总结，表明自己想成为宇航员的意原，去探索宇宙。 [亮点词汇] ① billions of上十亿的 ② one of其中之一 ③ so far到目前为止 ④ be proud of为……自豪 [高分句型] ① It’s my turn to tell you something about the space.（it’s ones turn to do sth表示轮到某人做某事） ② The earth goes round the sun and the moon goes round the earth.（并列连词and连接的两个并列句子） 13．假如你是王治，从小就希望做一名宇航员。请看下面的思维导图并以“I Want to Be an Astronaut”为题，写一篇短文，内容包括你想做航天员的原因以及你打算如何去做。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I Want to Be an Astronaut Why How 1. walk in space like Nie Haisheng 2. … 1. study hard 2. … 要求： 1. 词数：80左右，开头已给出不计入总词数； 2. 行文连贯，可自由发挥。 I Want to Be an Astronaut I’m Wang Zhi. I want to be an astronaut when I grow up. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I Want to Be an Astronaut I’m Wang Zhi. I want to be an astronaut when I grow up. Because I want to walk in space like Nie Haisheng. I want to fly a spaceship to the moon. And I want to live on the moon. But I know I can’t do that without working hard. So I must study hard now. And I must do exercise every day. I hope my dream can come true one day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，写短文谈谈自己想成为一名宇航员的愿望、原因及如何做。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明想要成为一名宇航员，并谈谈有这个愿望的原因及打算为实现愿望做些什么； 第二步，希望梦想成真。 [亮点词汇] ①want to do sth. 想要做某事 ②work hard 努力工作 ③do exercise 做运动 [高分句型] But I know I can’t do that without working hard.（省略that的宾语从句） 14．近期，“玉兔二号”月球车在月球表面留下了月饼形状的图案，引发了广泛关注。你所在班级就“太空探索是否值得”进行了讨论。请根据下表信息，用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍讨论情况并表达你的个人观点。 观点 理由 30%反对 1.离我们的生活遥远 2.投入成本高 70%赞同 1.探索宇宙的奥秘 2.有助于科技进步 你的观点 …… 注意： (1)词数100左右； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：月球车lunar rover Is Space Exploration Worth It? Hello, everyone! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Is Space Exploration Worth It? Hello, everyone! Recently, “Yutu-2” lunar rover left a mooncake-shaped pattern on the moon, which has attracted wide attention. In our class, we had a discussion about whether space exploration is worth it. Thirty percent of my classmates are against it. They think space is too far away from our daily life and the cost is too high. However, seventy percent, including me, support it. We believe exploring the mysteries of the universe is exciting and it helps push scientific and technological progress. Personally, I think space exploration is valuable. It broadens our horizons and may bring benefits to humanity in the future. So, let’s keep exploring! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括两方观点（反对与赞同）及其理由，以及个人观点。考生应确保覆盖所有要点，并适当添加细节来支持各自的观点，同时清晰表达个人的立场。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题。通过“Hello, everyone!”开场，并提出讨论的主题“Is Space Exploration Worth It?”； 第二步，介绍讨论情况。先介绍反对方的观点（30%反对）及其理由（离我们的生活遥远、投入成本高），然后介绍赞同方的观点（70%赞同）及其理由（探索宇宙的奥秘、有助于科技进步）； 第三步，表达个人观点。在介绍了两方的观点后，明确提出自己的看法，并给出相应的理由或支持点。 [亮点词汇] ①lunar rover 月球车 ②mooncake-shaped pattern 月饼形状的图案 ③space exploration 太空探索 ④be against 反对 ⑤scientific and technological progress 科技进步 [高分句型] ①Recently, “Yutu-2” lunar rover left a mooncake-shaped pattern on the moon, which has attracted wide attention.（非限制性定语从句） ②Thirty percent of my classmates are against it, while seventy percent, including me, support it.（while表示对比，连接两个并列的句子） ③We believe exploring the mysteries of the universe is exciting and it helps push scientific and technological progress.（动名词作主语） 15．最近你们班举行了一次班会，班会的主题是：是否应该太空探险？请结合下表内容，用英语写一篇100词左右的文章，客观地介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点。(开头已给出，不计入总词数) 一些同学赞同 一些同学反对 你自己的观点 获得新的知识 耗资巨大 …… 从太空取得新资源 宇航员的安全问题 扩大人类的生存空间 …… Outer Space Explorations, YES or NO? We had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Outer Space Explorations, YES or NO? We had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day. Some of us thought it was important to research the outer space because, first of all, people could get a better understanding of the outer space. Second, we could find new resources for humans to use. Third, these explorations could possibly enlarge new living space for human beings. However, others thought very differently. They said this kind of exploration cost too much money. Besides, it was very dangerous for astronauts to do such work. In my opinion, people should research the outer space and such explorations into the outer space are worth trying out. 【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求我们以“是否应该太空探险”为主题，根据表格提示，介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点，必要时可进行适当发挥。 2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一、三人称和一般过去时为主来叙述，写作时承接开头，要写出同学们赞同或反对的理由，清楚地表明自己的看法，注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 1 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$