Unit3 Festivals across cultures 单元主题（跨文化节日）写作满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材）-2024-2025学年六年级英语下册重难点讲练全攻略（沪教版五四制2024）

2024-2025学年一线教师制作新教材同步精品系列资料，好题优选！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作新教材同步精品系列资料，好题优选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit3 Festivals across cultures 单元主题（跨文化节日）写作满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．我国有许多独具特色的传统佳节，如春节、中秋节、端午节等。你最喜欢哪个节日？假如你是Li Hua，你的英国笔友Emma对中国传统文化非常感兴趣，她想了解中国传统节日的相关情况，请阅读Emma的来信，并给她回复。 注意： 1. 文中须包含写作提示的全部要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名或校名； 3. 70词左右（文章开头句子已给出，请抄写到答题卡上，不计入总词数）。 Dear Li Hua, Long time no see. In your last letter, you told me something about Chinese traditions. They are so interesting. I’m also interested in Chinese traditional festivals. What’s your favorite one? When is it? How do you and your family usually celebrate it? Please write something about that. I can’t wait to read your letter. Yours, Emma Dear Emma, I’m glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals. ____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                                                           Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Emma, I’m glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals. Among all the festivals, my favorite one is the Mid-Autumn Festival. Now, let me tell you something about it. It’s on the 15th of the eighth month in the lunar calendar. On that day, we have a lot of activities. We usually eat a kind of traditional food, mooncakes, to celebrate the festival. At night, we usually have a big dinner with our family members and then eat different kinds of fruits to enjoy the bright and big moon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、承接已给的开头，引出话题； 第二步、介绍最喜欢的传统节日； 第三步、介绍该节日的时间以及自己和家人如何庆祝该节日。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in…对……感兴趣 ②the lunar calendar农历 ③a lot of很多 ④different kinds of不同种类的 [高分句型] ①I’m glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals.(that引导宾语从句) 2．端午节是我国的传统佳节之一。请你根据表格提示，用英文简单介绍你家乡端午节的情况。 端午节 节日时间 通常在每年的六月份 庆祝方式 1.家人聚会 2.吃特色食物粽子…… 3.观看龙舟赛…… 个人看法 1.非常精彩 2.玩得开心 要求： 1.表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译； 2.词数90左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。 思路点拨： 1.文体：记叙文； 2.时态：一般现在时； 3.人称：以第三人称为主。 写作提纲： Para. 1 总起全文，介绍你最喜爱的节日是端午节 I like…best. It’s an important... Para. 2 介绍端午节的时间和相关庆祝活动 It usually comes in... People get together... They have/eat... There are... Para. 3 介绍自己的感受 It is really... Everyone has... 妙笔生花: Of all the festivals, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Of all the festivals, I like the Dragon Boat Festival best. It’s an important traditional festival in China. It usually comes in June every year. Most Chinese families celebrate it. People get together with family members and have a big dinner. They eat a kind of special food—rice dumplings. There are different kinds of rice dumplings in my hometown. On that day, there are lots of activities, like watching dragon boat races. It is really wonderful. Everyone has a good time on that day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本题是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文用一般现在时； ③提示：介绍家乡端午节的情况，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，指明自己最喜欢的节日是端午节，引出下文； 第二步，介绍端午节期间的活动，包括家庭聚会，吃粽子，看龙舟比赛等，注意细节充分，三观正确； 第三步，表达自己的感受，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①like best最喜欢 ②a kind of一种 ③lots of许多 [高分句型] ①There are different kinds of rice dumplings in my hometown.（there be句型） 3．假如你是李华，请你根据以下图片信息给你的英国笔友David写信，介绍你和家人庆祝春节的方式及感受。 参考词汇：Spring Festival couplets 要求： （1）词数80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文章应包括所给内容要点，可适当增加细节，使文章连贯； （3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Dear David, The Chinese New Year is coming. I’d like to tell you how my family and I celebrate it in China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can spend the Spring Festival in China with us one day. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear David,    The Chinese New Year is coming. I’d like to tell you how my family and I celebrate it in China.     During the Spring Festival, my family and I clean the house to sweep away bad luck. We put up Spring Festival couplets and red lanterns to decorate the house. On New Year’s Eve, we sit together to enjoy a big family dinner. After that, children receive red envelopes with money from elders, which is really exciting. During the festival, we visit relatives and friends, exchange greetings, and enjoy various traditional performances such as lion dances.     I hope you can spend the Spring Festival in China with us one day.    Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图借用“告诉你一些关于中国春节的事情”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述李华和家人是如何过春节的； 第三步，表达自己的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①sweep away扫走 ②red envelopes红包 ③enjoy a big family dinner享受一顿丰盛的家庭晚餐 [高分句型] ①During the festival, we visit relatives and friends, exchange greetings, and enjoy various traditional performances such as lion dances. (and连接并列成分) ②After that, children receive red envelopes with money from elders, which is really exciting. (which引导的非限制定语从句) 4．春节对每一位华夏儿女来说都是非常重要的节日。请你根据表格中的信息写一篇英语短文，把中国的春节介绍给世界。 Festival the Chinese Spring Festival Time in January or February Activities 仅供参考：clean up the house, have a big dinner, wear new clothes... Your Feelings(感受) … 写作要求： 1.文中须包含表格中所提示的全部要点，适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名或校名； 3.词数80个左右。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Chinese Spring Festival is very important to Chines people. Let me tell you something about it. It is usually in January or February. There are many activities during the Chinese Spring Festival. We clean up the house and buy a lot of things. Children often wear new clothes. We usually have a big dinner with our family and say “Happy New Year!” to each other. Parents and relatives always give lucky money to children. We also buy presents or flowers to visit our friends or relatives. I like the Chinese Spring Festival best and I feel happy to get together with my family. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题，表明春节的重要性，并引出下文； 第二步，从“时间，活动”等方面来介绍春节； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①tell sb something about...告诉某人关于……的一些事情 ②clean up the house打扫房子 ③each other彼此 ④like...best最喜欢 [高分句型] ①I like the Chinese Spring Festival best and I feel happy to get together with my family.（并列句，不定式作原因状语） 5．Write at least 60 words about the topic “ My favourite festival”. (以“我最喜欢的节日”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) Suggested questions: What’s your favourite festival? Why? When is the festival? Why do people celebrate this festival? What do people usually do during this festival? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favourite festival Of all the Chinese festivals, I like Mid-autumn Festival best because it is a traditional Chinese festival. More importantly, it is the symbol of “family reunion” as well. Mid-autumn Festival falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month. On that day, all my family members get together to celebrate it. My parents and I go to visit my grandparents. My cousins and I are excited because we can play happily. We watch TV and play games together. We have delicious gather-together dinner. We also have fruit and moon cakes. After dinner, we enjoy the beautiful moon and talk about our life happily. What a wonderful time it is! I like Mid-autumn Festival. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为一般现在时； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“我最喜欢的节日及喜欢的原因，节日的时间，人们庆祝这个节日的原因，人们在这个节日里所做的事情”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“在所有的中国节日中，我最喜欢中秋节，因为它是中国的传统节日。”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“中秋节的意义，时间以及我和家人在中秋节所做的事情”重点介绍中秋节的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。表达“我喜欢中秋节。” [亮点词汇] ① lunar month农历 ② talk about谈论 [高分句型] ① Of all the Chinese festivals, I like Mid-autumn Festival best because it is a traditional Chinese festival.（because引导的原因状语从句） ② What a wonderful time it is!（what引导的感叹句） 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．假如你是林芳，为了宣传传统文化，你的学校将开展了解中国传统节日的活动。你准备向大家介绍象征团圆的中秋节。请你根据下面表格中的提示内容写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 The Mid-Autumn Festival (中秋节) 日期     活动     传统食物 感受 农历八月十五 吃团圆饭、赏月、吃月饼、谈论过去和将来 月饼 …… ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: The Mid-Autumn Festival The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important Chinese festivals. It takes place on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month. The festival means a break from work and happy family reunions. On the evening of the festival, we usually have a big family dinner. All the family try to come back for getting together. Then we can enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Eating mooncakes is a must during the festival because mooncakes are the special food for this festival. We can also look back on the past and look forward to the future together. I am happy at the Mid-Autumn Festival and I like it because the whole family can get together. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：为“一般现在时”； ③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何信息提示，可适当添加细节，使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，并介绍中秋节的日期； 第二步，介绍中秋节的活动、传统食物； 第三步，表达对中秋节的感受。 [亮点词汇] ① take place 发生 ② a big family dinner 一顿丰盛的家庭晚餐 ③ come back 回来 ④ look back on the past 回顾过去 ⑤ look forward to the future 展望未来 ⑥ get together 相聚 [高分句型] ① The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important Chinese festivals. (“one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数”的固定表达) ② Eating mooncakes is a must during the festival because mooncakes are the special food for this festival. (动名词作主语) ③ I am happy at the Mid-Autumn Festival and I like it because the whole family can get together. (because引导原因状语从句) 7．请根据汉语提示， 向你的外国朋友David介绍一下中国的传统节日端午节及相应的习俗，字数80-100字左右。 提示： 端午节Dragon Boat Festival 节日介绍 端午节起源于中国，是为了纪念屈原。人们吃粽子，赛龙舟(Dragon Boat race)。 粽子的制作过程 1. 原料：粽叶(bamboo leaves)、稻米、红枣(date) 2. 步骤：1）将稻米、红枣、粽叶洗干净； 2）将稻米、三颗红枣放在两片粽叶上； 3）用线将粽子绑好(Tie it up with a small and thin rope（细绳）)； 4）放在锅里高温煮50分钟 5）和家人一起享用 Dear David, I am glad to hear from you. Today I want to tell you some information about the Dragon Boat Festival. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear David, I am glad to hear from you. Today I want to tell you some information about the Dragon Boat Festival. There is a special holiday in China—Dragon Boat Festival. It is very famous because people want to remember the famous man called Qu Yuan. In our hometown, people usually eat zongzi and have Dragon Boat races on that day. Let me tell you how to make zongzi. We need some bamboo leaves, red dates and some rice. First, wash the rice, dates, bamboo leaves. Put some rice and three dates on two pieces of bamboo leaves. Next, tie it up with a small and thin rope. Then, put zongzi into a pot. And cook it at a very high temperature for about fifty minutes. When it is ready, serve it to your family members. I think if you come here on that day, you will like it. Li Hua 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求介绍端午节的起源和习俗，并讲述粽子的制作原料和具体过程。 2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述端午节的习俗，粽子的原料和具体制作过程，要叙述完整，条理清晰。 8．中国历史源远流长，中华文化灿若星河。作为21世纪的青少年，用英语讲好中国故事是我们的责任和义务。那么，中国有许多传统的节日和传统又美味的食品，你最喜欢什么呢？请写一篇短文，介绍一下你最喜欢的传统的食品。 1.要点提示 （1）简单说明你最喜欢的传统节日和食品。 （2）详细从形状、原材料、种类、口感和寓意等方面介绍这个食品。 （3）简单介绍一下你和你们家对它的感受。 2.注意事项 （1）90词左右。 （2）行文应连贯流畅。 （3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名。 提示词：flour 面粉 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 As China continues to develop, even foreigners are becoming fascinated with Chinese culture and traditional festivals. As for me, one festival in particular that I enjoy is the Mid-Autumn Festival. Mooncakes are the traditional food on this festival. Mooncakes are in the shape of a full moon on the Mid-Autumn night. They carry people’s wishes to the families they love and miss. Mooncakes in different parts have different styles and tastes. Some have soft layers of dough and lots of sugar and lard, making them available in sweet or salty tastes. Some are with common fillings of red bean paste and potato paste. My family love this festival because all the family members return home to get together. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍你最喜欢的传统的食品，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简单说明你最喜欢的传统节日和食品； 第二步，从不同方面方面介绍这个食品； 第三步，简单介绍一下你和你们家对它的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①in particular尤其 ②in the shape of以……的形状 [高分句型] ①As for me, one festival in particular that I enjoy is the Mid-Autumn Festival.(定语从句) ②My family love this festival because all the family members return home to get together. (原因状语从句) 9．假设你是李华，今年端午节期间，你学习了包粽子（zongzi）。请结合以下表格内容提示，给你的朋友Peter写一封英文电子邮件，分享你学习包粽子的经历。 How I learned … How I made Ingredients &amp; Tools ●rice, beans, dates (枣)… ●leaf (leaves), string (细绳), pot Steps wash... keep…in the water for hours make a cone shape (圆锥体) with… put…into the cone tie… boil…over low heat… How I felt … 要求： 1. 必须包含表格中所有提示信息，可适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯； 2. 词数80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Peter, How are you? I’d like to share an interesting experience with you. During the Dragon Boat Festival this year, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, How are you? I’d like to share an interesting experience with you. During the Dragon Boat Festival this year, I learned how to make zongzi. To make zongzi, we needed to have rice, beans, dates, some leaves, some strings and a pot. How did we make zongzi? First, we washed the rice. Then, we kept it in the water for hours. Next, we made a cone shape with the leaves. After that, we put the rice, beans and dates into the cone. And then, we tied zongzi with strings. Finally, we boiled zongzi over low heat in a pot. Very soon, we enjoyed the delicious zongzi. It was really easy and interesting to make zongzi, so you can try to make zongzi by yourself. And don’t forget to share your experience with me. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：邮件开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接信件开头，引出话题； 第二步，根据要点逐步介绍包粽子的过程，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，抒发学习包粽子的感受并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①put sth into把某物放进 ②tie sth with sth用某物绑某物 [高分句型] ①It was really easy and interesting to make zongzi, so you can try to make zongzi by yourself.（so连接两个并列分句） 10．节日是世界文化的重要组成部分，不同国家有着不一样的节日文化。假如你是李华，你参加了学校正在开展的“向世界展示中华传统文化”主题活动，你打算向你的英国笔友Tom介绍中国的传统节日——元宵节。请根据以下的提示内容，给Tom写一封电子邮件。 参考词汇：light 点亮，riddle 谜语，lunar 农历 要求： 1. 内容必须包括以上所有要点，须按照要求适当发挥，补充细节。 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整。 3. 不少于100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 4. 文中不得出现真实人名、地点或校名。 Dear Tom, I’m glad to tell you something about one of our traditional festival—The Lantern Festival. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can come to China and have a happy Lantern Festival with us. Love, Li Hua 【答案】 例文： Dear Tom, I’m glad to tell you something about one of our traditional festival—The Lantern Festival. The Lantern Festival is one of important festivals in China. It is always in February. At this time of year, family members get together and celebrate it happily in many ways. At the Lantern Festival, people eat tangyuan, this kind of food looks like a rice ball with something sweet inside. Children with their parents always light different lanterns at night to make the festival colorful. In some places, people like to watch lion dances, they hope this activity can bring them good luck for the whole year. Another interesting game is guessing riddles on the lanterns. Although some riddles are difficult, the game is great fun. All the family have a good time on that day. I hope you can come to China and have a happy Lantern Festival with us. Love, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“元宵节时间，活动，食物以及感受”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我很高兴告诉你一些关于我们传统节日之一——元宵节的事情。”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“元宵节的时间，庆祝活动，食物以及我的感受”重点介绍元宵节的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。表达“我希望你能来中国，和我们一起过一个快乐的元宵节。” [亮点词汇] ①get together聚在一起 ②have a good time玩得愉快 [高分句型] ①In some places, people like to watch lion dances, they hope this activity can bring them good luck for the whole year. (省略that的宾语从句) ②Although some riddles are difficult, the game is great fun. (although引导的让步状语从句) 能力综合实践5篇 11．假设你是李华，上周六，你陪同来自澳大利亚结对学校的中学生Peter体验中国文化。请根据以下信息，用英语写一篇短文向校刊English Journey投稿，介绍本次活动内容并分享感受。 Activities Feelings ✮Make zongzi ... ✮Visit a tea museum ✮Learn Chinese characters ... 注意： 1.短文必须包括表格中的所有内容，并表达感受，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息； 3.词数：80—100；短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。 Last Saturday, I took Peter, a student from Australia, to experience some Chinese cultures.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Last Saturday, I took Peter, a student from Australia, to experience some Chine cultures. Everything he experienced that day is a great attraction to him. In the morning, Peter and I went to visit a tea museum, where he learnt a lot about Chinese tea. After that, I took him home and taught him to make zongzi. Although it was a bit difficult, he still enjoyed it. In the afternoon, we had a Chinese class, learning the history of Chinese characters. He also tried to write some characters with a Chinese brush, and even lost himself in it. In the evening, we enjoyed a TV program called National Treasure, where lots of antiques and their relevant stories are presented. Peter kept saying “Amazing!”, which made me really proud of our rich cultures. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：主要采用“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作内容包括“陪同Peter体验的中国文化相关活动”和“各自的感受”。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，按时间顺序陈述体验的活动内容； 第二步，描述Peter的感受并表达自己的感情。 [亮点词汇] ① teach sb to do sth教某人做某事 ② lost oneself in沉迷于 ③ be proud of因……而自豪 [高分句型] ① In the morning, Peter and I went to visit a tea museum, where he learnt a lot about Chinese tea.（where引导的定语从句） ②Although it was a bit difficult, he still enjoyed it.（although引导的让步状语从句） 12．春节是中华民族的传统节日，对我们意义非凡。在这个节日里，每一个家庭都会团团圆圆，一起辞旧迎新！作为中国新一代好少年，我们有责任用英语向世界讲好中国故事。请用英文介绍你和你的家人是如何欢度蛇年春节的。 要求：1.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在的学校的名称。 My Spring Festival Celebrate the Spring Festival When January 28 this year Where to go home or other beautiful places What to do travel, visit, do cleaning, meet family members, have a big meal, play with fireworks, stay up late, watch the Spring Festival Gala … What to get red bags, new clothes, nice toys... How I feel … My Spring Festival The Spring Festival is a wonderful time for every Chinese. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Spring Festival The Spring Festival is a wonderful time for every Chinese. This year, it fell on January 28. Before the festival, my family and I did a thorough cleaning to sweep away bad luck. On New Year’s Eve, we had a big reunion dinner with lots of delicious traditional dishes. I got red bags from my parents and grandparents. Wearing new clothes, I felt extremely happy. After that, kids played with fireworks in the yard, filling the air with laughter. In the evening, we sat in front of the TV to watch the Spring Festival Gala and stayed up late. The next day, we visited our relatives and wished each other a happy new year. This Spring Festival was full of joy. Not only did it strengthen our family bond, but it also let me feel the strong atmosphere of traditional culture. I’m looking forward to the next one! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般过去时为主； ③提示：写作要点提示和开头已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引入话题，介绍春节的意义和今年的时间； 第二步，具体阐述春节期间的活动； 第三步，表达自己的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①thorough彻底的 ②sweep away扫除 ③reunion团圆 ④strengthen增强 ⑤atmosphere氛围 ⑥look forward to期待 [高分句型] ① Not only did it strengthen our family bond, but it also let me feel the strong atmosphere of traditional culture. (not only..., but also...倒装结构) 13．中国传统节日是中国文化的重要组成部分。春节、端午节、中秋节等都体现了我们对中国文化的传承。但是随着时代的变化，我们也有了新的庆祝方式。比如、很多人都选择在传统节日里全家出游，也有人做志愿者活动来庆祝，还有的人去博物馆、图书馆或文化展。请你结合生活中的经历，写一篇短文。 内容包括： Do you like celebrating these festivals in a traditional way or a new way? Share an unforgettable experience of celebrating a traditional festival. How can you let more foreigners know about traditional Chinese festival? 要求： 1.词数不少于80词。 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： When the traditional festival comes, everyone is excited about it. The meaning of the festivals is remembered by the old generation, but some young people may not know it. I think it is also good to celebrate a traditional festival in a new way. This Mid-autumn Day, a student in my class shot a video to ask some old people something about Mid-autumn festival. Another student shared some TV series telling about the myth of Hou Yi and his wife. I leaned many Chinese myths and legends from the shows. Not only did we enjoy the festival, but we learned the cultural background. More and more foreigners are interested in Chinese traditional festivals. We can teach them famous great old poems related to these festivals, sharing some old stories and legends with them. At the same time, we can introduce some great movies and videos to them. They can know about Chinese festivals in more interesting ways. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求对庆祝中国传统节日的方式发表看法，并讲述一次难忘的庆祝传统节日的经历，并介绍让外国人了解中国传统节日的方法。 2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，讲述难忘的庆祝传统节日的经历时要叙述完整，条理清晰。 14．中国有很多节日，如春节、中秋节、端午节等。请以“My favorite festival”为题，根据以下要点和要求写一篇英语短文。 要点：1.这个节日的名称是什么； 2.这个节日的基本情况是什么； 3.在这个节日里人们常做什么。 要求：1.文中不得出现你所在的学校和班级名称及其它个人信息； 2.词数70词左右。 My favorite festival _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My favorite festival As we all know, there are many festivals in China, such as the Spring Festival, the Mid-Autumn Festival, the Dragon Boat Festival and so on. Among them, I like the Spring Festival best. It falls on the eve of the lunar New Year. There are all kinds of activities taking place during the Spring Festival. To begin with, we clean up our houses and put up red couplets. And the parks and squares are decorated with red lanterns, ballons and flowers. What matters most is that all family members will return to their hometowns for a traditional family reunion and have a big dinner on the eve of the Spring Festival. In addition, there are also many other customs such as dragon dances and lion dances. While celebrating the Spring Festival, families can not only reunite but also experience and enjoy traditional culture. 【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“My favorite festival”为题，根据所给要点和要求写一篇英语短文。短文应涵盖节日名称、节日的基本情况及人们的庆祝活动等要点。 2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。文章可采用两段式：第一段引出节日名称；第二段介绍节日的基本情况及人们的庆祝活动。写作时要紧扣主题，切勿遗漏提示要点，行文要连贯，语言表达要准确，逻辑要清晰，力求无单词、语法错误。 15．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Dale发来电子邮件想了解中国文化，向你询问关于中国节日的事情。请你将中国三大传统节日中的端午节介绍给Dale。 提示： 1、端午节的时间：农历(lunar calendar)五月初五；活动：赛龙舟；传统食品：粽子。 2、意义：纪念(in memory of)伟大诗人(poet)屈原。 3、欢迎Dale来到中国了解更多的中国节日(中秋节、春节等)。 要求:1.邮件应包含提示中所有要点,条理清楚。行文连贯，可适当发挥。 2.邮件中不能出现学生的真实姓名和校名。 3.词数不少于60。开头和结尾已给出，不计入词总数。 Dear Dale, I’m glad to get your email. You say you love China very much. You really want to learn about Chinese culture. Now let me tell you something about the Dragon Boat Festival. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Dale, I’m glad to get your email. You say you love China very much. You really want to learn about Chinese culture. Now let me tell you something about the Dragon Boat Festival. The Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals of China. It falls on the fifth day of May in the lunar calendar. Chinese celebrate this festival in memory of the great poet, QuYuan, who jumped into the river for loving his country. On the festival, people make and eat delicious zongzi. People also have the dragon boat races in some areas. I like the festival. Welcome to China to know more about Chinese festivals, such as the Mid-autumn Festival, the Spring Festival and so on. Yours Li Hua 【详解】题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。写作时注意一定要紧紧围绕“介绍端午节”这一主题展开叙述。内容要包括谈论端午节的时间，端午节的庆祝活动，为什么要庆祝端午节，并欢迎对方来中国了解更多的中国传统文化，即题目要求的内容都要写到。内容要积极向上，条理要清晰。 写作指导：本文是书信，注意格式。写作时应该使用第一人称。时态应运用一般现在时和一般过去时。可以根据要求分三部分叙述。第一部分以回信的方式提出要阐述的问题；第二部分根据要求展开，分述端午节的时间，活动，意义，要具体清晰；第三部分表达感受，邀请对方来中国。 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 1 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作新教材同步精品系列资料，好题优选！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作新教材同步精品系列资料，好题优选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit3 Festivals across cultures 单元主题（跨文化节日）写作满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．我国有许多独具特色的传统佳节，如春节、中秋节、端午节等。你最喜欢哪个节日？假如你是Li Hua，你的英国笔友Emma对中国传统文化非常感兴趣，她想了解中国传统节日的相关情况，请阅读Emma的来信，并给她回复。 注意： 1. 文中须包含写作提示的全部要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名或校名； 3. 70词左右（文章开头句子已给出，请抄写到答题卡上，不计入总词数）。 Dear Li Hua, Long time no see. In your last letter, you told me something about Chinese traditions. They are so interesting. I’m also interested in Chinese traditional festivals. What’s your favorite one? When is it? How do you and your family usually celebrate it? Please write something about that. I can’t wait to read your letter. Yours, Emma Dear Emma, I’m glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals. ____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                                                           Yours, Li Hua 2．端午节是我国的传统佳节之一。请你根据表格提示，用英文简单介绍你家乡端午节的情况。 端午节 节日时间 通常在每年的六月份 庆祝方式 1.家人聚会 2.吃特色食物粽子…… 3.观看龙舟赛…… 个人看法 1.非常精彩 2.玩得开心 要求： 1.表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译； 2.词数90左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。 思路点拨： 1.文体：记叙文； 2.时态：一般现在时； 3.人称：以第三人称为主。 写作提纲： Para. 1 总起全文，介绍你最喜爱的节日是端午节 I like…best. It’s an important... Para. 2 介绍端午节的时间和相关庆祝活动 It usually comes in... People get together... They have/eat... There are... Para. 3 介绍自己的感受 It is really... Everyone has... 妙笔生花: Of all the festivals, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假如你是李华，请你根据以下图片信息给你的英国笔友David写信，介绍你和家人庆祝春节的方式及感受。 参考词汇：Spring Festival couplets 要求： （1）词数80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文章应包括所给内容要点，可适当增加细节，使文章连贯； （3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Dear David, The Chinese New Year is coming. I’d like to tell you how my family and I celebrate it in China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can spend the Spring Festival in China with us one day. Yours, Li Hua 4．春节对每一位华夏儿女来说都是非常重要的节日。请你根据表格中的信息写一篇英语短文，把中国的春节介绍给世界。 Festival the Chinese Spring Festival Time in January or February Activities 仅供参考：clean up the house, have a big dinner, wear new clothes... Your Feelings(感受) … 写作要求： 1.文中须包含表格中所提示的全部要点，适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名或校名； 3.词数80个左右。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．Write at least 60 words about the topic “ My favourite festival”. (以“我最喜欢的节日”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) Suggested questions: What’s your favourite festival? Why? When is the festival? Why do people celebrate this festival? What do people usually do during this festival? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．假如你是林芳，为了宣传传统文化，你的学校将开展了解中国传统节日的活动。你准备向大家介绍象征团圆的中秋节。请你根据下面表格中的提示内容写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 The Mid-Autumn Festival (中秋节) 日期     活动     传统食物 感受 农历八月十五 吃团圆饭、赏月、吃月饼、谈论过去和将来 月饼 …… ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．请根据汉语提示， 向你的外国朋友David介绍一下中国的传统节日端午节及相应的习俗，字数80-100字左右。 提示： 端午节Dragon Boat Festival 节日介绍 端午节起源于中国，是为了纪念屈原。人们吃粽子，赛龙舟(Dragon Boat race)。 粽子的制作过程 1. 原料：粽叶(bamboo leaves)、稻米、红枣(date) 2. 步骤：1）将稻米、红枣、粽叶洗干净； 2）将稻米、三颗红枣放在两片粽叶上； 3）用线将粽子绑好(Tie it up with a small and thin rope（细绳）)； 4）放在锅里高温煮50分钟 5）和家人一起享用 Dear David, I am glad to hear from you. Today I want to tell you some information about the Dragon Boat Festival. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 8．中国历史源远流长，中华文化灿若星河。作为21世纪的青少年，用英语讲好中国故事是我们的责任和义务。那么，中国有许多传统的节日和传统又美味的食品，你最喜欢什么呢？请写一篇短文，介绍一下你最喜欢的传统的食品。 1.要点提示 （1）简单说明你最喜欢的传统节日和食品。 （2）详细从形状、原材料、种类、口感和寓意等方面介绍这个食品。 （3）简单介绍一下你和你们家对它的感受。 2.注意事项 （1）90词左右。 （2）行文应连贯流畅。 （3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名。 提示词：flour 面粉 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．假设你是李华，今年端午节期间，你学习了包粽子（zongzi）。请结合以下表格内容提示，给你的朋友Peter写一封英文电子邮件，分享你学习包粽子的经历。 How I learned … How I made Ingredients &amp; Tools ●rice, beans, dates (枣)… ●leaf (leaves), string (细绳), pot Steps wash... keep…in the water for hours make a cone shape (圆锥体) with… put…into the cone tie… boil…over low heat… How I felt … 要求： 1. 必须包含表格中所有提示信息，可适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯； 2. 词数80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Peter, How are you? I’d like to share an interesting experience with you. During the Dragon Boat Festival this year, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 10．节日是世界文化的重要组成部分，不同国家有着不一样的节日文化。假如你是李华，你参加了学校正在开展的“向世界展示中华传统文化”主题活动，你打算向你的英国笔友Tom介绍中国的传统节日——元宵节。请根据以下的提示内容，给Tom写一封电子邮件。 参考词汇：light 点亮，riddle 谜语，lunar 农历 要求： 1. 内容必须包括以上所有要点，须按照要求适当发挥，补充细节。 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整。 3. 不少于100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 4. 文中不得出现真实人名、地点或校名。 Dear Tom, I’m glad to tell you something about one of our traditional festival—The Lantern Festival. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can come to China and have a happy Lantern Festival with us. Love, Li Hua 能力综合实践5篇 11．假设你是李华，上周六，你陪同来自澳大利亚结对学校的中学生Peter体验中国文化。请根据以下信息，用英语写一篇短文向校刊English Journey投稿，介绍本次活动内容并分享感受。 Activities Feelings ✮Make zongzi ... ✮Visit a tea museum ✮Learn Chinese characters ... 注意： 1.短文必须包括表格中的所有内容，并表达感受，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息； 3.词数：80—100；短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。 Last Saturday, I took Peter, a student from Australia, to experience some Chinese cultures.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．春节是中华民族的传统节日，对我们意义非凡。在这个节日里，每一个家庭都会团团圆圆，一起辞旧迎新！作为中国新一代好少年，我们有责任用英语向世界讲好中国故事。请用英文介绍你和你的家人是如何欢度蛇年春节的。 要求：1.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在的学校的名称。 My Spring Festival Celebrate the Spring Festival When January 28 this year Where to go home or other beautiful places What to do travel, visit, do cleaning, meet family members, have a big meal, play with fireworks, stay up late, watch the Spring Festival Gala … What to get red bags, new clothes, nice toys... How I feel … My Spring Festival The Spring Festival is a wonderful time for every Chinese. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．中国传统节日是中国文化的重要组成部分。春节、端午节、中秋节等都体现了我们对中国文化的传承。但是随着时代的变化，我们也有了新的庆祝方式。比如、很多人都选择在传统节日里全家出游，也有人做志愿者活动来庆祝，还有的人去博物馆、图书馆或文化展。请你结合生活中的经历，写一篇短文。 内容包括： Do you like celebrating these festivals in a traditional way or a new way? Share an unforgettable experience of celebrating a traditional festival. How can you let more foreigners know about traditional Chinese festival? 要求： 1.词数不少于80词。 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．中国有很多节日，如春节、中秋节、端午节等。请以“My favorite festival”为题，根据以下要点和要求写一篇英语短文。 要点：1.这个节日的名称是什么； 2.这个节日的基本情况是什么； 3.在这个节日里人们常做什么。 要求：1.文中不得出现你所在的学校和班级名称及其它个人信息； 2.词数70词左右。 My favorite festival _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Dale发来电子邮件想了解中国文化，向你询问关于中国节日的事情。请你将中国三大传统节日中的端午节介绍给Dale。 提示： 1、端午节的时间：农历(lunar calendar)五月初五；活动：赛龙舟；传统食品：粽子。 2、意义：纪念(in memory of)伟大诗人(poet)屈原。 3、欢迎Dale来到中国了解更多的中国节日(中秋节、春节等)。 要求:1.邮件应包含提示中所有要点,条理清楚。行文连贯，可适当发挥。 2.邮件中不能出现学生的真实姓名和校名。 3.词数不少于60。开头和结尾已给出，不计入词总数。 Dear Dale, I’m glad to get your email. You say you love China very much. You really want to learn about Chinese culture. Now let me tell you something about the Dragon Boat Festival. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 7 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$