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专题04 书面表达15篇 (南京中考真题+中考模拟) 中考真题练 1．（2023·江苏南京·中考真题）请根据英文校刊English Garden中Teens Talk栏目的征稿内容，用英语写一篇短文。 ARTICLES WANTED! In your life, you might meet with some difficulties. Choose one difficulty and write an article about how you dealt with it and what you have learnt from this experience. Please share your article with us and we will publish the best ones in our magazine. 注意：1. 内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺。 2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。 3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 I once met with a difficulty in my life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2022·江苏南京·中考真题）假如你是Amy，请根据以下信息，任选一个问题答复。 Amy works for a website, and her job is to answer questions young people ask about life and study. If you were Amy, how would you answer the questions? Choose one and give a reply. Questions for Amy No time for me I’m 15 and my brother is 3. I think my mum and dad love him more than me. They spend all their spare time playing with him. And they don’t even have time for my parents’ meeting. Friend lost My best friend, John, started playing online computer games last year. Since then he has lost all interest in everything else, even me and schoolwork. He gets angry if I talk to him about it. What should I do? 注意： 1. 词数80左右(已给出的开头不计入总词数)； 2. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息如校名、人名等。 Thank you for your question. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Amy 3．（2021·江苏南京·中考真题）某英文网站正在举办征文活动，请根据网站征文要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 This new global site is a place for students to share their ideas. We are looking for your beautiful school day to inspire（鼓舞）our readers. Did you help anyone at school? Did you enjoy a beautiful song in your art lesson? Did you have an amazing experience in the school lab? Your school life is full of beauty. Choose a beautiful school day. Write a passage to tell us what you did that day and why you think it was beautiful. Send your writing to us right now! 注意: 1. 内容涵盖要点, 全文连贯通顺。 2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头, 不计入总词数）。 3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息, 如校名、人名等。 My Beautiful School Day My school life is full of beauty. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2020·江苏南京·中考真题）假如你是李华，在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到招募夏令营营员的信息。请根据招募内容，用英语给校刊写一封信。 FUNLAND    Hi! This summer holiday we will have different camps for kids. Here are three popular ones. Join us! Make a choice and explain why you choose it. Reading Camp ●Chinese literature ●Western literature ●… Culture Camp●Western music ●Chinese art ●… Sports Camp●Ball games ●Water sports ●… Come and have fun! 注意： 1. 内容涵盖所有要点（理由不得少于两点），可适当发挥。 2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。 3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等. Dear Sir or Madam, Thanks for offering us such wonderful camps. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2019·江苏南京·中考真题）假如你是李华，在网上看到英国Britech公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件（app）征集网友建议。请根据网上的征集信息，用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件。 IDEAS NEEDED Britech is now designing an app that helps learners with their English writing. The app is to help learners explore ideas, organize them and write them down. Your ideas are needed! Here’s what to do: Write to share your ideas! Feel free to be creative! Please let us know: ●What’s the name of the app? ●What problem does the app solve? ●What does the app do?                          Contact us at appdesign@Britech.com 注意： 1. 内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。 2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。 3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Dear Sir or Madam, Thanks for designing an app for English writing. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 6．（2018·江苏南京·中考真题）书面表达 请根据你校校刊KIDS MAG中HAVE YOUR SAY栏目的征稿内容，用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。 Hi,      At KIDS MAG we like to share your ideas about our school. In my column, HAVE YOUR SAY, you can let other kids know what you think. This month we want you to have your say about Culture Week in our school:      ●what theme(主题)of Culture Week you like      ●why you like the theme      ●what activity/activities you can organize for the theme      Looking forward to hearing from you.      Sam Southland 注意： 1．对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。 2．词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 3．文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 I am glad to share my ideas about Culture Week in our school. ____________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2017·江苏南京·中考真题） KIDS HAVE AN OPINION TOO! Hi! I’m Sigmund Friend, the editor (编辑) of a new magazine KIDVOICE. We like hearing from kids. We know you’ve got things to say. We want to hear from you. Here is a topic you might have an opinion about. . . 注意： 1.对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。 2.词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Kids and Learning All kids want to be good at learning. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 中考模拟真题练 8．（2024·江苏南京·三模）假如你是刘明，你在英国的网友Peter得知你即将初中毕业，给你写了一封电子邮件。请你根据邮件内容，用英语给Peter回一封电子邮件。(部分信件内容省略) I know you will finish your junior high school. How’s your friendship? Can you tell me in details? What is your opinion of friendship? Please share with me. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 注意：1)文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2)语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3)词数80左右，内容涵盖所有要点。 9．（2024·江苏南京·二模）某英文报 Kids Voice 栏目正在征稿，请你根据要求用英语写一篇文章投稿， 谈谈你的想法。     Some teenagers have difficulty in finding a true friend. They make friends by following suit (随大流). That means they do the same as their friends, such as playing online games or saying bad words behind others, although they’re not willing to. Share your ideas about the topic.     1. What do you think about following suit to make friends?     2. How can teenagers make true friends?     Support your ideas with your experience as an example. 注意： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 词数 80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·江苏南京·模拟预测）假定你是李华,上周末你校英语社组织同学们观看了关于长城的纪录片,请你用英文为校报写一篇报道。 内容包括： 1. 活动概况； 2. 对长城的介绍； 3. 呼吁保护长城。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．（2024·江苏南京·三模）你收到了澳大利亚笔友Simon的来信，请根据来信内容给他回复。 Dear Li Hua, How are you doing? I am really happy to tell you that we’ re planning a two-day visit to China. I wonder which city you think is well worth a visit. Why do you recommend it? Have you been there before? Can you share something special you have experienced with us? Yours, Simon 注意: 1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 词数80左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Simon, Welcome to China! The city I want to recommend to you is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my recommendation is of great value to you! Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 12．（2024·江苏南京·二模）“阳光中学”学生会正开展一次以“More life skills, more colourful future”为主题的征文活动，对全校学生进行了问卷调查，下图是相关的统计结果。假设你是该校学生，请根据统计图中的信息，用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. What’s the result of the survey? 2. Which is the most important skill for you? Why? (At least 2 points) 注意： 1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3.词数不少于80，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 More life skills, more colorful future To have a more colorful future, we should have some life skills. According to the survey we carried out, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（2024·江苏南京·二模）英语俱乐部在学校网站发布通知，面向全体学生征集关于英语学习的体会。请你根据通知要求，用英语写一篇文章，表达你的想法。 Your voiceIn your opinion, is English easy or difficult to learn? Your article should include: Your opinion and reasons; Examples from your English learning experience; Your future plan for English learning. We are looking forward to your articles. The best articles will win a prize! Send your article to cnglishclub@163. com. Deadline: May 31, 2024 注意： 1. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。 2. 词数80左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 In my opinion, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．（2024·江苏南京·二模）望子成龙、望女成凤是很多父母的心愿。现在有一种类型的父母被称为直升机父母(helicopter parents) 。请根据学校的征稿要求, 用英语写一篇短文。 Helicopter parents are those who are always watching their children closely and offering help at any time. Please look at the picture and write a passage that includes: ●whether your parents are helicopter parents and the reason ● the influence helicopter parents have on teenagers ●your advice to helicopter parents. 注意： 1. 内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺。 2. 词数80 左右(已给 出的文 章开头 ，不计入总词数) 。 3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 To tell the truth, my parents _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．（2024·江苏南京·二模）你在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到 “Life in 2045” 的征稿启事。请根据图片内容，选择至少2个方面来写，畅想未来生活，并用英语写一篇短文投稿。 注意： 1. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。 2. 不少于80词 (已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数)。 3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Life in 2045 Life in 2045 will be quite different. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题04 书面表达15篇 (南京中考真题+中考模拟) 中考真题练 1．（2023·江苏南京·中考真题）请根据英文校刊English Garden中Teens Talk栏目的征稿内容，用英语写一篇短文。 ARTICLES WANTED! In your life, you might meet with some difficulties. Choose one difficulty and write an article about how you dealt with it and what you have learnt from this experience. Please share your article with us and we will publish the best ones in our magazine. 注意：1. 内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺。 2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。 3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 I once met with a difficulty in my life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I once met with a difficulty in my life. It is so special that I will never forget the experience that I overcame my shyness and become confident. I still remember when I came to the new school, things didn’t go on as smoothly as I expected. I was afraid to speak English in public. In order to solve this dilemma, I took part in English-speaking clubs which is meaningful. As time went by, I became outgoing than before and made many friends who have the same interest as me. As the saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” When you are in trouble, don’t give up! 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 时态：一般过去时。 提示：根据题目要求，描述一次遇到的困难、如何克服以及从中学到的经验。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出文章的主题； 第二部，描述遇到的困难并说明如何克服困难。 第三步，分享从中学到的经验。 [亮点词汇] ① be afraid to do sth. 害怕做某事 ② go by 流逝 ③ as the saying goes 俗话说 [高分句型] ① It is so special that I will never forget the experience that I overcame my shyness and become confident.（so ... that引导结果状语从句；that引导定语从句） ② Where there is a will, there is a way.（习语“有志者，事竟成”） 2．（2022·江苏南京·中考真题）假如你是Amy，请根据以下信息，任选一个问题答复。 Amy works for a website, and her job is to answer questions young people ask about life and study. If you were Amy, how would you answer the questions? Choose one and give a reply. Questions for Amy No time for me I’m 15 and my brother is 3. I think my mum and dad love him more than me. They spend all their spare time playing with him. And they don’t even have time for my parents’ meeting. Friend lost My best friend, John, started playing online computer games last year. Since then he has lost all interest in everything else, even me and schoolwork. He gets angry if I talk to him about it. What should I do? 注意： 1. 词数80左右(已给出的开头不计入总词数)； 2. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息如校名、人名等。 Thank you for your question. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Amy 【答案】例文一： Thank you for your question. I understand how you feel about John’s behavior. Losing interest in everything else and neglecting schoolwork is not healthy. However, it seems like John has lost himself in online computer games, which is a common problem nowadays. I highly suggest that you can talk to him calmly and express your concerns. Let him know that you care about him and want him to be healthy and happy. Encourage him to seek professional help if necessary. Remember, you can’t force him to change, but you can be there for him and support him. Amy 例文二： Thank you for your question. I understand how you feel, but having a younger brother or sister is not easy. It is common for older brothers or sisters to feel this way, just like you. However, younger children do need more care. As your little brother grows older, this will change and your parents will treat you the same. But for now, he will need a little more attention from your parents. Think of this as a chance to become more independent. You can learn to live without getting as much attention from your parents—you’ll move out of the home someday anyway, so you might get used to it as well. Amy 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：主体时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：本文要求根据所给的关于青少年生活和学习中遇到的问题进行答复，要注意给出的建议合理，不要泄露个人信息。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明对问题的态度，表达能理解朋友沉迷网络游戏的痛苦或对方不被父母爱； 第二步，对问题进行分析； 第三步，给出合理的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①professional help 专业帮助 ②healthy and happy 健康快乐 ③force sb. to do 强迫某人做某事 [高分句型] ①I highly suggest that you can talk to him calmly and express your concerns.（宾语从句） ②However, it seems like John has lost himself in online computer games, which is a common problem nowadays. (定语从句) 3．（2021·江苏南京·中考真题）某英文网站正在举办征文活动，请根据网站征文要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 This new global site is a place for students to share their ideas. We are looking for your beautiful school day to inspire（鼓舞）our readers. Did you help anyone at school? Did you enjoy a beautiful song in your art lesson? Did you have an amazing experience in the school lab? Your school life is full of beauty. Choose a beautiful school day. Write a passage to tell us what you did that day and why you think it was beautiful. Send your writing to us right now! 注意: 1. 内容涵盖要点, 全文连贯通顺。 2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头, 不计入总词数）。 3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息, 如校名、人名等。 My Beautiful School Day My school life is full of beauty. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Beautiful School Day My school life is full of beauty. I will never forget the day which makes me feel meaningful. My best friend Lucy and I always ride bikes together after school. One day, I waited a long time but didn’t see her. Then I searched for her in the corner of our school. She was crying at that time. She told me that she was nervous because she would have an English test. I decided to help her with English. That evening, I helped her review the key points and notes. Two days later, she told me that she passed it. I felt that helping others who are in need was very meaningful. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“我美丽的学校生活”写一篇短文。 2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时。分为两段式，第一段引出主题；第二段描述自己的经历，并发表自己的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。 4．（2020·江苏南京·中考真题）假如你是李华，在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到招募夏令营营员的信息。请根据招募内容，用英语给校刊写一封信。 FUNLAND    Hi! This summer holiday we will have different camps for kids. Here are three popular ones. Join us! Make a choice and explain why you choose it. Reading Camp ●Chinese literature ●Western literature ●… Culture Camp●Western music ●Chinese art ●… Sports Camp●Ball games ●Water sports ●… Come and have fun! 注意： 1. 内容涵盖所有要点（理由不得少于两点），可适当发挥。 2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。 3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等. Dear Sir or Madam, Thanks for offering us such wonderful camps. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Dear Sir or Madam, Thanks for offering us such wonderful camps. I do expect to join one of them. I like sports very much, especially basketball, so Sports Camp is my first choice. If I’m accepted, I think it’s a good chance to improve my basketball skills. I’ll have plenty of time to practice playing basketball and there must be many excellent coaches and players in this camp. Besides, I believe I’ll make some new friends who have common interests. That really sounds fantastic to me. I just can’t wait. Looking forward to your early reply! Yours Li Hi 【详解】1. 题干解读：文章是一篇书信作文。主要是看到校刊上招募夏令营营员的消息进行回信，可以选择其中比较感兴趣的一个夏令营活动进行具体的描述，要写明参加这个夏令营的原因以及自己通过这次活动要取得的成绩，要注意时态的应用。 2. 例文点评：文章分三段描写。第一段感谢提供这么多精彩的夏令营活动；第二段写自己要参加的夏令营以及原因；第三段写期待尽早收到回复。整个文章结构完整，思路清晰，语言表达准确，意思明确易懂。 3. 高分亮点： 短语：plenty of；practice doing sth.；make friends；look forward to。 句型：if引导的条件状语从句；I believe+宾语从句；who引导的定语从句。 5．（2019·江苏南京·中考真题）假如你是李华，在网上看到英国Britech公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件（app）征集网友建议。请根据网上的征集信息，用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件。 IDEAS NEEDED Britech is now designing an app that helps learners with their English writing. The app is to help learners explore ideas, organize them and write them down. Your ideas are needed! Here’s what to do: Write to share your ideas! Feel free to be creative! Please let us know: ●What’s the name of the app? ●What problem does the app solve? ●What does the app do?                          Contact us at appdesign@Britech.com 注意： 1. 内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。 2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。 3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Dear Sir or Madam, Thanks for designing an app for English writing. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Thanks for designing an app for English writing. I’d like to share my ideas here. Could its name be “Writing Made Easy”? Many of us have difficulty in writing. We don’t know how to organize ideas, use proper words, and so on. I hope it can solve these problems. Here is my advice on what the app does. First, it should provide some reading materials. The more we read, the better we write. Second, the app should have an online course so that we can develop our writing skills. Third, there should be an e-teacher who can correct mistakes and offer suggestions. I hope my advice is worth taking. 【详解】这是一篇根据英国Britech公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件（app）征集网友建议。请根据网上的征集信息，用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 重点句型：have difficulty in doing sth做某事有困难，The more we read, the better we write.读的越多，写的越好。so that目的是 6．（2018·江苏南京·中考真题）书面表达 请根据你校校刊KIDS MAG中HAVE YOUR SAY栏目的征稿内容，用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。 Hi,      At KIDS MAG we like to share your ideas about our school. In my column, HAVE YOUR SAY, you can let other kids know what you think. This month we want you to have your say about Culture Week in our school:      ●what theme(主题)of Culture Week you like      ●why you like the theme      ●what activity/activities you can organize for the theme      Looking forward to hearing from you.      Sam Southland 注意： 1．对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。 2．词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 3．文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 I am glad to share my ideas about Culture Week in our school. ____________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I am glad to share my ideas about Culture Week in our school. I like the theme about international cooking for our Culture Week, because this can help us better understand different cultures while enjoyed nice food. First, we will invite teachers and parents to give talks about international cooking. Then, we will hold a Cooking Festival. All the students can bring their own dishes and share them with each other. Near the end of the week, we will have a DIY competition. There will be a surprise in the end. I hope our Culture Week will be a great success! 【详解】写作要求对学校文化周的主题、活动内容等进行讨论、分享。从三个方面展开叙述：你喜欢什么文化周主题？你为什么喜欢这个主题？你可以为主题组织什么活动？要求将自己喜欢的主题，喜欢的原因及为此安排的活动叙述清楚，并适当发挥。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 7．（2017·江苏南京·中考真题） KIDS HAVE AN OPINION TOO! Hi! I’m Sigmund Friend, the editor (编辑) of a new magazine KIDVOICE. We like hearing from kids. We know you’ve got things to say. We want to hear from you. Here is a topic you might have an opinion about. . . 注意： 1.对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。 2.词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Kids and Learning All kids want to be good at learning. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Kids and Learning All kids want to be good at learning．Some children are good at learning，but some children are good at playing，and they are not good at learning，why？This is because some children know how to balance learning and studying． First，just as the saying goes"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy"，a good learner should know to play properly，if he or she plays happily，he will try to learning well．Besides，all learning decrease the interest of study．Second，students should make a proper time list，and try to follow the list．Last，parents and teachers should give tips to the students so that students can have a good knowledge of the study．All in all，only when we balance the relation between playing and learning，can we be good at learning． 【详解】本文属于图画作文，主要写一篇关于孩子和学习的作文。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。 【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如be good at, this is because, as the saying goes, All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, properly, follow, tip, knowledge, besides以及all in all等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起： 认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。 构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。 初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。 修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。 中考模拟真题练 8．（2024·江苏南京·三模）假如你是刘明，你在英国的网友Peter得知你即将初中毕业，给你写了一封电子邮件。请你根据邮件内容，用英语给Peter回一封电子邮件。(部分信件内容省略) I know you will finish your junior high school. How’s your friendship? Can you tell me in details? What is your opinion of friendship? Please share with me. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 注意：1)文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2)语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3)词数80左右，内容涵盖所有要点。 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, I am very glad to receive your letter. I made many friends in junior high school. We study and play together every day. When we are in trouble, we help each other. There are many kinds of friends. However, what is true friendship? As the popular saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” True friends are those who never desert you when you are in trouble. They will offer you practical help sincerely and unselfishly even at the cost of their own interests. What’s more, they will encourage you to stick to what is right and to avoid doing what is wrong or illegal. It is lucky enough for everyone to have some true friends. What is your opinion? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Liu Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为一般现在时； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示中”内容要点齐全这一点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。表明很开心收到邮件，告知自己的情况； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“学习、校园活动、生活”几个方面重点介绍自己初中学习生活的细节； 第三步，书写结语。表达期望收到回信的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ① in trouble 处于麻烦中 ② at the cost of 付出……代价 ③ stick to 坚持 [高分句型] ①When we are in trouble, we help each other.（when引导的时间状语从句） 9．（2024·江苏南京·二模）某英文报 Kids Voice 栏目正在征稿，请你根据要求用英语写一篇文章投稿， 谈谈你的想法。     Some teenagers have difficulty in finding a true friend. They make friends by following suit (随大流). That means they do the same as their friends, such as playing online games or saying bad words behind others, although they’re not willing to. Share your ideas about the topic.     1. What do you think about following suit to make friends?     2. How can teenagers make true friends?     Support your ideas with your experience as an example. 注意： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 词数 80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 It isn’t wise to follow suit to make friends. Firstly, following suit is against being yourself, which will make you unhappy. Even worse, you might forget who you really are while doing so. Secondly, you may do something terrible to others when following suit, like hurting others’ feelings. As for how to make true friends, I think being honest and polite is the best policy. Besides, be glad to offer your time and help when others are in need. When my classmate Jack failed his math test, I helped him review the lessons every day. Now, we are best friends. Last but not least, you should develop some hobbies which will help you find friends with similar interests. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总起引出话题； 第二步，讲述模仿他人交友是并不明智的； 第三步，讲述如何交到真正的好朋友。 [亮点词汇] ①Even worse更糟糕的是 ②be glad to do sth.很高兴做某事 ③help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事 ④Last but not least最后但同样重要的是 [高分句型] ①Firstly, following suit is against being yourself, which will make you unhappy. （which引导非限定性定语从句） ②When my classmate Jack failed his math test, I helped him review the lessons every day. （when引导时间状语从句） 10．（2024·江苏南京·模拟预测）假定你是李华,上周末你校英语社组织同学们观看了关于长城的纪录片,请你用英文为校报写一篇报道。 内容包括： 1. 活动概况； 2. 对长城的介绍； 3. 呼吁保护长城。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Last Sunday our English club offered us a documentary about the Great Wall in our lecture hall. Regarded as one of the greatest wonders of the world, the Great Wall is an important cultural heritage site. With a long history, the Great Wall demonstrates the combination of ancient Chinese people’s wisdom and innovation, which draws numerous tourists’ attention. Besides, it serves as a perfect place for the surveyors and archaeologists to conduct their researches. All in all, we need to preserve the Great Wall, presenting it to the future generations and letting our cultural imprint live on. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先介绍上周校英语社组织同学们观看了关于长城的记录片的活动； 第二步，具体介绍长城，例如它的重要性、其文化遗址的地位以及它对游客和研究人员的吸引力等； 第三步，书写结束语，呼吁大家保护长城。 [亮点词汇] ①regard as 视为 ②cultural heritage site 文化遗址 ③demonstrate 证明 ④the combination of ……的组合 ⑤innovation 创新 ⑥draw one’s attention 引起某人注意 ⑦archaeologist 考古学家 [高分句型] ①Regarded as one of the greatest wonders of the world, the Great Wall is an important cultural heritage site.（过去分词短语作状语） ②With a long history, the Great Wall demonstrates the combination of ancient Chinese people’s wisdom and innovation, which draws numerous tourists’ attention.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） 11．（2024·江苏南京·三模）你收到了澳大利亚笔友Simon的来信，请根据来信内容给他回复。 Dear Li Hua, How are you doing? I am really happy to tell you that we’ re planning a two-day visit to China. I wonder which city you think is well worth a visit. Why do you recommend it? Have you been there before? Can you share something special you have experienced with us? Yours, Simon 注意: 1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 词数80左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Simon, Welcome to China! The city I want to recommend to you is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my recommendation is of great value to you! Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Simon,      Welcome to China! The city I want to recommend to you is Shenyang. It is my hometown.Shenyang is in the northeast of China. It is the capital city of Liaoning Province. There are many famous scenic spots here, such as the Shenyang Palace Museum , Expo Garden, Qipan Scenic and so on. You can taste a lot of delicious food here, such as Li Liangui Smoked Pork Pancake, Laobian Dumplings, Cold Noodles, Pot Wrapped Pork, Shenyang Huitou, White Meat and Blood Sausage, Da La Pi, Shazhu Cuisine, Laoshanji Haicheng Pie, Majia Shaomai, etc. If you want to shop, you can go to Wuai City, where you can buy anything you want. If you visit here, you will be very happy. I hope you will have a good time in Shenyang.       I hope my recommendation is of great value to you! Best wishes!                                                                                                                                                Yours,                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：主要时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据所给内容要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明推荐城市； 第二步，介绍城市信息； 第三步，表达祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①scenic spots景点 ②such as比如 ③and so on等等 [高分句型] ①If you want to shop, you can go to Wuai City, where you can buy anything you want. （where引导非限制性定语从句） ②If you visit here, you will be very happy.（if引导条件状语从句） 12．（2024·江苏南京·二模）“阳光中学”学生会正开展一次以“More life skills, more colourful future”为主题的征文活动，对全校学生进行了问卷调查，下图是相关的统计结果。假设你是该校学生，请根据统计图中的信息，用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. What’s the result of the survey? 2. Which is the most important skill for you? Why? (At least 2 points) 注意： 1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3.词数不少于80，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 More life skills, more colorful future To have a more colorful future, we should have some life skills. According to the survey we carried out, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： More life skills, more colorful future To have a more colorful future, we should have some life skills. According to the survey we carried out, communication topped the list. 78% of the students think that the skill of communication is the most important. In addition, skills such as managing feelings and planning time ranked second and third, at 50 and 30 percent, respectively. The remaining 5% included some other skills that were not mentioned specifically. For me, communication is the most crucial skill. It’s important in two ways. First, effective communication is the foundation of any successful relationship, whether with family or friends. Additionally, it makes it easier for me to work with others and solve problems. We must continue practicing our communication skills and see how it can help us have a better life and learn more new things. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接上文，介绍调查结果； 第二步，讲述自己认为最重要的技能并说明原因； 第三步，鼓励大家坚持锻炼技能。 [亮点词汇] ①such as 例如 ②the foundation of sth. ……的基础 ③continue doing sth. 继续做某事 [高分句型] ①78% of the students think that the skill of communication is the most important. (that引导的宾语从句) ②The remaining 5% included some other skills that were not mentioned specifically. (that引导的定语从句) 13．（2024·江苏南京·二模）英语俱乐部在学校网站发布通知，面向全体学生征集关于英语学习的体会。请你根据通知要求，用英语写一篇文章，表达你的想法。 Your voiceIn your opinion, is English easy or difficult to learn? Your article should include: Your opinion and reasons; Examples from your English learning experience; Your future plan for English learning. We are looking forward to your articles. The best articles will win a prize! Send your article to cnglishclub@163. com. Deadline: May 31, 2024 注意： 1. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。 2. 词数80左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 In my opinion, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 In my opinion, it is easy to learn English. Because I remember as many words and useful sentences patterns as possible. I’d like to share my experience of learning. I believe the more we read, the better our English will be. So I spend much time reading English newspapers and magazines. Learning English not only increases my knowledge about foreign cultures but also helps me communicate with English-speaking people and make more new friends. In the future, I will insist on learning English very hard. I will read magazines and famous articles of English. At the same time, I would practice the spoken English and I catch the chance to chat with foreigners. I would tell them how great our country is. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，发表英语简单的看法； 第二步，具体阐述原因以及学习英语的经验和未来学习英语的计划； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①as many as possible尽可能多的 ②spend time doing花费时间做某事 ③insist on doing坚持做某事 [高分句型] ①Because I remember as many words and useful sentences patterns as possible.（because引导的原因状语从句） ② I would tell them how great our country is.（how引导的宾语从句） 14．（2024·江苏南京·二模）望子成龙、望女成凤是很多父母的心愿。现在有一种类型的父母被称为直升机父母(helicopter parents) 。请根据学校的征稿要求, 用英语写一篇短文。 Helicopter parents are those who are always watching their children closely and offering help at any time. Please look at the picture and write a passage that includes: ●whether your parents are helicopter parents and the reason ● the influence helicopter parents have on teenagers ●your advice to helicopter parents. 注意： 1. 内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺。 2. 词数80 左右(已给 出的文 章开头 ，不计入总词数) 。 3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 To tell the truth, my parents _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文   To tell the truth, my parents love me like Helicopter parents, even though they sometimes criticize me. It makes me unhappy that they often look through my personal things. Besides, if I chat with my friends online, they won’t allow me to use the computer, because they are afraid that I will be cheated.   Helicopter parents have a bad influence on their children. Helicopter parents don’t make their children encounter failure, which will kill the children’s confidence. Even worse, children don’t have many choices of their own and can’t be more independent when they grow up.   I am convinced that parents should allow children to have their own choices. Parents should help children to develop their independence and confidence, and give their more personal space. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③要点：写作时应围绕提示问题进行写作，注意不要遗漏信息，语句应通顺连贯有逻辑。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明自己的父母是否是“直升机”父母并说明原因； 第二步，描述“直升机”父母对青少年的影响； 第三步，对“直升机”父母的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①even though尽管 ②allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事 ③encounter failure遇到失败 [高分句型] ①To tell the truth, my parents love me like Helicopter parents, even though they sometimes criticize me.（even though引导的让步状语从句） ②Helicopter parents don’t make their children encounter failure, which will kill the children’s confidence.（定语从句） 15．（2024·江苏南京·二模）你在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到 “Life in 2045” 的征稿启事。请根据图片内容，选择至少2个方面来写，畅想未来生活，并用英语写一篇短文投稿。 注意： 1. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。 2. 不少于80词 (已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数)。 3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Life in 2045 Life in 2045 will be quite different. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Life in 2045 Life in 2045 will be quite different from today. First of all, my house will become very amazing. Imagine waking up in the morning and my smart kitchen has already prepared a tasty breakfast for me. The future house will know what I want and satisfy my needs. Secondly, getting around will be easier and faster because of future transport. The future cars will take us anywhere we want to go. Flying cars might even become a reality, making long-distance travel much quicker. These are just some of the exciting changes I can expect in 2045. I can’t wait to see what will happen in the future! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇图示作文； ②时态：时态为 “一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题，说明2045年的生活有何不同； 第二步，具体阐述2045年的生活，从“房子、购物、交通”等方面介绍； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①satisfy one’s need 满足某人的需求 ②can’t wait to do sth. 迫不及待做某事 [高分句型] The future house will know what I want and satisfy my needs.（what引导的宾语从句） 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$