内容正文:
2025年中考英语写作常考文体讲练提分秘籍
专题19 材料作文
【题型分析】
材料作文,顾名思义,需要首先对材料进行理解与提炼,对其主题、细节等有一定程度的把握,在此基础上,方能写好文章。同时,在写作中切忌抄袭原材料,在引用时需有相应变化。-般而言,其写作顺序是:引用材料提出观点或想法一论述总结。
【高分技巧】
第一步:认真审题,明确要求。
审题是写好书面表达题的关键。通读试题所给的每一个字,观察所给的每一幅图画,从而明确该文的题目要求,判断作文的类型、特点,了解作文的重要内容,力求写作切中题意
1.确定主题。通过仔细观察、认真分析,确定文章的主题,然后再围绕主题进行写作,以满足中考“切中题意”的要求。
2.确定格式。文体不同,格式也不一样。书信有书信的格式,便条有便条的格式。同样都是通知,口头通知与书面通知格式也不相同。因此,应根据不同的文体来确定写作时所采用的相应格式。
3.确定人称。因搞错人称而失分,实在令人可惜。所以,在动笔之前应先确定是使用第一、二人称还是第三人称。
4.确定时态。
第二步:依据要点,草拟提纲。
根据内容提示,在草纸上列出各要点所用的单词、短语以及句式等。注意这是组织语言、形成短文的基础步骤。
这一步骤的要求是:根据内容提示简单地列出提纲,将所需的语言材料准备好。可以只列出主要的词、词组、短语及句型;暂不考虑动词的时态、语态、第三人称单数等词形变化。
第三步:扩展成句,连句成篇。
将上述所列出的单词、短语等扩展成句。注意时态、语态的正确运用,并适当使用一些连接词将所列的语句连成完整的语篇。全文应结构紧凑,前后连贯。
第四步:仔细检查,认真修改。
检查修改是书面表达解题过程中必不可少的一个重要环节。检查修改的原则是大处着眼,小处着手。具体应从词法、句法、语篇三个方面入手仔细检查并认真修改。
1. 从词法角度。主要检查词汇的运用是否妥当;拼写是否有误;名词、代词的数和格是否正确;词性是否混淆;词与词之间是否“搭配不当”;用词是否重复等。
2.从句法角度。主要检查句子结构是否完整;动词时态、语态是否正确;主谓是否一致等。3.从语篇角度。主要检查文体格式是否正确;字数是否符合要求;要点是否齐全;语句是否
简洁;上下文是否连贯、符合逻辑等。
第五步:认真书写,讲究规范。
中考书面表达对答卷的书写问题有明确具体的要求。因此,在考试中同学们应注意书写的美观性,千万不能因为书写问题影响自己的得分。另外,整洁干净的卷面,规范、美观的字体会给阅卷者好的印象,可以得到“印象分”
【话题范文】
1.(2025·河北邯郸·一模)为了丰富学生的校园生活,李华的学校增加了“最美大课间”。请你以李华的名义,根据下面四幅图片及文字提示用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下李华学校的“最美大课间”的活动,并谈谈你的看法。
提示:
(1) Introduce the class break activities.
(2) Express your ideas about the big class break.
注意:
(1)短文须包括每幅图片的主要信息及提示中的所有内容,可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Our school has a big class break this term. It’s an hour long in the afternoon.
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2.(24-25九年级下·重庆·开学考试)勤俭节约是我们中华民族的优良传统。你校最近发起“倡导绿色生活,创建节约型校园”活动,请你给校刊“English Corner”写一篇英文稿件,谈谈作为一名中学生,你在日常生活中是如何厉行节约、杜绝浪费的。
注意:
1. 文中不得出现姓名、学校等真实信息;
2. 80~120词左右。
Save Everything in Our Lives
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3.(2025·江西·一模)国际数学日就要到了,校报英语版块正在就“我与数学的故事”进行征文。请你写一篇英语短文去投稿,先说说你是否喜欢数学及其原因,再描述你学习数学的一段难忘经历,最后谈谈你将如何学习数学。
写作要点:
1. Do you like math? Why or why not?
2. What was the unforgettable experience of learning math?
3. How are you going to learn math?
要求:
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3. 词数80—120,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Teachers always say that math is very important.
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4.(2025·甘肃定西·一模)以“My Family’s Spring Festival”为题目,写一篇不少于80词的短文。
内容提示:
1. 介绍春节和春节日期;
2. 介绍春节传统食品和你们家的过节方式;
3. 你的家人们一起过春节的情景……
要求:
1. 内容包括提示中的所有要点;
2. 条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、学校等信息。
My Family’s Spring Festival
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5.(24-25九年级下·河南·开学考试)在2024年12月4日这个意义非凡的日子里,“春节——中国人庆祝传统新年的社会实践”成功入选联合国教科文组织人类非物质文化遗产代表作名录。作为新时代的青少年,我们肩负着传承与弘扬中华优秀传统文化的神圣使命。请你以“The Spring Festival”为题介绍春节,根据要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。
1. 要点:
1)When is it celebrated?
2)How do people celebrate the festival?
3)What do you think of the festival?
2. 要求:
1)文中不得出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名。
2)短文不少于100词。
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6.(2025·陕西·模拟预测)假如你是李明,你校英语报正在开展以“团队合作”为主题的征文活动。请你认真阅读以下通知,并按照要求用英语写一篇短文,参加此次活动。
NoticeDear students,
Teamwork is very necessary in modern society. We all need teamwork in work, study and life. So our newspaper holds a writing competition about teamwork. It aims to explore how teamwork influences you and your life. Write a short passage to send to us!
Here are some questions to help you.
●What is your understanding of teamwork?
●Do you have any experience about teamwork? What’s it?
●What does that experience mean to you?
We are looking forward to your passage.
School English Newspaper
要求:
1. 短文必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等) ;
4. 词数:不少于70。 (开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Teamwork is very important.
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7.(2024·江西九江·模拟预测)在阅读理解B部分七选五文章中提到了运动的诸多好处,运动可以增强体质、减轻压力、提高团队协作能力……请以“Sports make our life better”为题,用英文写一篇短文。
内容包括:
1. 你喜欢的运动项目和原因。
2. 它给你带来的好处。
3. 你的感受和期望。
要求:
1. 短文应包括全部的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3. 词数在80-120之间,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Sports make our life better
As a saying goes,knowledge makes a wiser man,and sports make a stronger man.
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8.(2024·湖北武汉·模拟预测)作家列夫·托尔斯泰曾说过:“梦想是指路明灯。没有梦想,就没有坚定的方向;没有方向,就没有生活。” 作为新时代的青少年,你的梦想是什么呢?某英文报社正在举办以”梦想”为主题的征文活动,请以”My Dream”为题,根据以下内容提示写一篇英语短文投稿。
What do you want to be in the future?
What makes you have the dream?
What are you going to do to realize your dream?
Something more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数 100 词左右;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Dream Dreams are different from person to person. Some people want to be writers, while others want to be doctors.
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9.(2024·湖北荆门·模拟预测)根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于80词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和真实姓名。
初中生活已接近尾声,在这3年里,是否有这样一个人,比如,你的师长,你的学友,或者网红董宇辉……在你迷茫时引领你一路前行,成为你学习的榜样。假如你是李华,你校英语社团公众平台计划做一期主题为“榜样人物”的系列推送。请你用英语写一篇文章,推荐你心中的一位榜样,并写明推荐理由。
提示词语:admire, patient, face the difficulty, encourage, advice
提示问题:
• Who is your role model?
• Why do you want to recommend (推荐) him/her?
Everyone has a role model in his heart.
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10.(2024·湖北襄阳·二模)三年的初中学习生活就要结束了,暑假即将来临,你有什么计划吗?学校英语广播站正在面向九年级举行以“My summer vacation plan”为题的征文比赛活动,请你积极参加此项活动,根据要求写一篇英语短文。
Notice
Summer vacation is coming, every one of you must be very excited. During the summer vacation, what will you do to keep healthy? What hobbies will you take up to relax? What housework will you do to help your parents? What subjects do you want to study by yourself before entering high school?
Look forward to your sharing.
School English Club
要求:
1. 你的计划要包含黑体部分的内容,可适当发挥。
2. 90词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
My summer vacation plan
The summer vacation is coming, Here are my plans for it.
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11.(2024·湖北十堰·模拟预测)人生是一场充满挑战和意外的旅行。当遇到挑战时,我们应该怎么办呢?每个人都会遇到困难,你曾经是如何面对挑战的?你校英语报社正在举办以“How I Face Challenges”为主题的征文活动,请你结合自身经历用英语写一篇短文向其投稿。
要点提示:
1. What challenges did you meet?
2. How did you deal with them?
3. What can you learn from the challenges?
要求:
1. 你的短文必须包含以上要点;
1. 文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
2. 词数80词左右,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How I Face Challenges
Life is full of challenges, and we all will meet all kinds of challenges.
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12.(2024·湖北武汉·模拟预测)身边有许多人在初中学习生活中让你感动,也许是你的父母,也许是你的老师,也许是你的朋友,请你以“________ Touched Me Most”为题, 根据以下内容提示用英文写一篇短文。内容提示:
What does the person who touched you most look like?
Why did he/she have greatest influence on you?
What have you learned from him/her?
Something more about the person.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100词左右;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
________ Touched Me Most
Some people had a great influence on me during my study and life in middle school
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13.(2024·浙江杭州·模拟预测)某校学生会策划了主题为“Walk for Trees”的十公里徒步活动。假设你是该学生会成员,请写一篇英语短文,在校英语报上介绍该活动的内容、益处并给出相关建议。
要点提示如下:
WALK FOR TREES
Activities
Benefits (益处)
Suggestions
●walk for 10 kilometers
●raise money to plant more trees
● …
●be good for health
●…
●wear comfortable shoes
●…
注意:
1.短文必须包含表中所有信息,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 词数:80—100;短文首句仅供参考选择使用,不计入总词数。
On May 6th, we will have an activity called Walk for Trees.
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14.(2023·浙江金华·模拟预测)学校、家庭和青少年自身越来越重视各种技能的培养和学习。某英语网站正在举办以“我的新技能”为主题的征文活动。假如你是Daming,请你写一篇题为“My new skill”的短文,介绍你的一项新技能、学习过程以及学到新技能后的感受,用于投稿。
注意:
1. 文中必须包含三个方面的内容要点,可适当发挥;参考词汇供选择使用;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数:80~100。
内容要点
参考词汇
What I learnt
…
How I learnt
learn from…, take a long time to…, practise, ….
My feelings
proud , useful, …
My new skill
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15.(2024·吉林长春·模拟预测)诚实,是中华民族的传统美德,更是为人处事的基本原则。某英文网站正在进行关于“Honesty”的征文活动,请你准备一篇英语短文参加此活动。
要点:
1. 描述与诚实有关的事件;
2. 谈谈你对于诚实的理解与感悟。
要求:
1. 不少于80词;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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16.(2023·江苏常州·一模)Everyone has ever received a gift. It may be a book, a card, a basketball or something else. What is the best gift that you have ever received? Please introduce the unique (独一无二的) story behind it.
注意:
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
3.词数不少于100.
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17.(2024·浙江宁波·模拟预测)三年的初中生活即将结束,你一定对初中生活留下了很多美好的回忆。下周五你班要召开毕业班会,请根据下面的英文提示,并适当发挥,以“I Remember”为题,写一篇90词左右的短文,分享你校园生活中的一次活动或经历。
要点如下:
1.What’s the event?
2.When and where did it happen?
3.How did you feel at that moment?
4.How has the event changed your life?
注意:
1.短文需包含以上要点,并适当发挥。
2.短文中已给出的部分,不计入总词数。
3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息。
I Remember
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18.(2023·辽宁沈阳·模拟预测)假定你是学生李华,你所在的城市于昨天晚上发生了地震。请你以“A Big Earthquake”为题给英语周报写一篇新闻报道,内容包括:
受灾情况:1.损失严重,房屋被毁;2.死伤4, 000多人,8, 000人无家可归,许多人失踪;3.水、电等设施被毁坏。
急缺物资:淡水、食物、药品
赈灾措施:1.军人帮助挖掘,寻找幸存者;2.号召志愿者支援灾区,积极捐钱和献血。
注意:
1.词数80~100,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
A Big Earthquake
Last night a big earthquake hit my city.
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19.(2024·江苏南通·模拟预测)近年来,在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象。为此,国家最近印发了《关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》。请你根据思维导图,结合实际,就如何培养劳动精神,以“How to Get Working Spirit”为题,给校报英语专栏写一篇短文。
要求:
1. 内容应包含思维导图中的主要内容,语句通顺,意思连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名;
3. 词数80~100词,短文开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:指导方针 guideline;劳动课 a hardworking spirit class
How to Get Working Spirit
A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit.
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20.(2024·浙江·模拟预测)随着网络的发展,“网购”已成为一种时尚,越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体当中。请你根据下表提示,为校刊TEENS 写一篇关于网上购物的文章。
Advantages
●buy things without going outdoors
●not tired
●avoid being trapped in the crowded people
●save time
●more kinds of goods
●…
Disadvantages
●only see the goods from the pictures
●hard to check the qualities
●a waste of money
●…
注意:(1)所表达的内容必须包含表格中的所有信息,并进行适当拓展,使行文流畅。
(2)词数100左右,文章的开头已给出,供选择使用。
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping online has many advantages.
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2025年中考英语写作常考文体讲练提分秘籍
专题19 材料作文
【题型分析】
材料作文,顾名思义,需要首先对材料进行理解与提炼,对其主题、细节等有一定程度的把握,在此基础上,方能写好文章。同时,在写作中切忌抄袭原材料,在引用时需有相应变化。-般而言,其写作顺序是:引用材料提出观点或想法一论述总结。
【高分技巧】
第一步:认真审题,明确要求。
审题是写好书面表达题的关键。通读试题所给的每一个字,观察所给的每一幅图画,从而明确该文的题目要求,判断作文的类型、特点,了解作文的重要内容,力求写作切中题意
1.确定主题。通过仔细观察、认真分析,确定文章的主题,然后再围绕主题进行写作,以满足中考“切中题意”的要求。
2.确定格式。文体不同,格式也不一样。书信有书信的格式,便条有便条的格式。同样都是通知,口头通知与书面通知格式也不相同。因此,应根据不同的文体来确定写作时所采用的相应格式。
3.确定人称。因搞错人称而失分,实在令人可惜。所以,在动笔之前应先确定是使用第一、二人称还是第三人称。
4.确定时态。
第二步:依据要点,草拟提纲。
根据内容提示,在草纸上列出各要点所用的单词、短语以及句式等。注意这是组织语言、形成短文的基础步骤。
这一步骤的要求是:根据内容提示简单地列出提纲,将所需的语言材料准备好。可以只列出主要的词、词组、短语及句型;暂不考虑动词的时态、语态、第三人称单数等词形变化。
第三步:扩展成句,连句成篇。
将上述所列出的单词、短语等扩展成句。注意时态、语态的正确运用,并适当使用一些连接词将所列的语句连成完整的语篇。全文应结构紧凑,前后连贯。
第四步:仔细检查,认真修改。
检查修改是书面表达解题过程中必不可少的一个重要环节。检查修改的原则是大处着眼,小处着手。具体应从词法、句法、语篇三个方面入手仔细检查并认真修改。
1. 从词法角度。主要检查词汇的运用是否妥当;拼写是否有误;名词、代词的数和格是否正确;词性是否混淆;词与词之间是否“搭配不当”;用词是否重复等。
2.从句法角度。主要检查句子结构是否完整;动词时态、语态是否正确;主谓是否一致等。3.从语篇角度。主要检查文体格式是否正确;字数是否符合要求;要点是否齐全;语句是否
简洁;上下文是否连贯、符合逻辑等。
第五步:认真书写,讲究规范。
中考书面表达对答卷的书写问题有明确具体的要求。因此,在考试中同学们应注意书写的美观性,千万不能因为书写问题影响自己的得分。另外,整洁干净的卷面,规范、美观的字体会给阅卷者好的印象,可以得到“印象分”
【话题范文】
1.(2025·河北邯郸·一模)为了丰富学生的校园生活,李华的学校增加了“最美大课间”。请你以李华的名义,根据下面四幅图片及文字提示用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下李华学校的“最美大课间”的活动,并谈谈你的看法。
提示:
(1) Introduce the class break activities.
(2) Express your ideas about the big class break.
注意:
(1)短文须包括每幅图片的主要信息及提示中的所有内容,可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Our school has a big class break this term. It’s an hour long in the afternoon.
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【答案】例文
Our school has a big class break this term. It’s an hour long in the afternoon. We have many activities.
Boys usually play basketball or football during the break. Students can also run and cheer for each other. Sometimes, our teachers play and run with us. We can also play chess in the classroom and I often play it with my classmates. What’s more, students who love music can sing and dance during the break. That’s a good chance to develop our hobbies and make new friends.
All in all, the big class break not only makes our school life colorful, but also helps us stay healthy in both mind and body. I love it very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作要点已明确给出,包括介绍大课间的活动内容和个人对大课间的看法。考生应确保这些要点都得到涵盖,并可以适当添加细节,使描述更加生动。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍大课间的基本情况。可以通过“Our school has a big class break this term. It’s an hour long in the afternoon”等表述来引出接下来要介绍的内容;
第二步,具体描述大课间的活动。首先介绍男生通常进行的体育活动,如打篮球或踢足球;然后提到学生可以跑步和互相加油;接着提到老师也会参与其中;再介绍在教室里下棋的活动;最后提到喜欢音乐的学生可以唱歌跳舞;
第三步,表达个人看法。可以提到大课间不仅丰富了校园生活,还有助于身心健康,并表达对大课间的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①play basketball打篮球
②cheer for each other互相加油
③play chess下棋
④develop our hobbies发展我们的爱好
⑤stay healthy保持健康
[高分句型]
①What’s more, students who love music can sing and dance during the break.(定语从句)
②All in all, the big class break not only makes our school life colorful, but also helps us stay healthy in both mind and body.(并列句)
2.(24-25九年级下·重庆·开学考试)勤俭节约是我们中华民族的优良传统。你校最近发起“倡导绿色生活,创建节约型校园”活动,请你给校刊“English Corner”写一篇英文稿件,谈谈作为一名中学生,你在日常生活中是如何厉行节约、杜绝浪费的。
注意:
1. 文中不得出现姓名、学校等真实信息;
2. 80~120词左右。
Save Everything in Our Lives
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【答案】
Save Everything in Our Lives
Nowadays, our country practises strict economy and combats waste. As middle school students, we are supposed to develop some good habits.
First, I always save water and reuse water if it is possible. For example, after washing hands, I use water to water flowers. When I brush my teeth, I turn off the tap. What’s more, saving food is also a traditional culture for us to follow. When my parents and I go out to eat, we don’t order too much food. As the technology develops, the energy waste is more and more serious. To reduce it, I always turn off lights when I leave the room.
Everyone can try his best to play a role in creating a better society. Let’s save everything in our lives.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章写作要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。引出勤俭节约的话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。举例说明自己在日常生活中如何厉行节约,杜绝浪费的;
第三步,书写结语。呼吁大家尽自己最大努力为创造美好社会发挥作用。
[亮点词汇]
①be supposed to do sth. 应该做某事
②develop good habits 养成好习惯
③turn off the tap 关掉水龙头
[高分句型]
First, I always save water and reuse water if it is possible. (if引导条件状语从句)
When I brush my teeth, I turn off the tap. (when引导时间状语从句)
3.(2025·江西·一模)国际数学日就要到了,校报英语版块正在就“我与数学的故事”进行征文。请你写一篇英语短文去投稿,先说说你是否喜欢数学及其原因,再描述你学习数学的一段难忘经历,最后谈谈你将如何学习数学。
写作要点:
1. Do you like math? Why or why not?
2. What was the unforgettable experience of learning math?
3. How are you going to learn math?
要求:
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3. 词数80—120,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Teachers always say that math is very important.
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【答案】例文
Teachers always say that math is very important. And I couldn’t agree more. I like math because it’s like solving puzzles. Every problem is a challenge, and finding the solution gives me a great sense of achievement.
An unforgettable experience was in junior high. We had an extremely difficult math problem in class. At first, it seemed insolvable. I spent hours trying different ways and finally solved it on my own. I was so excited!
To learn math better, I’ll do more exercises. Also, I’ll join a study group to discuss problems with others. This way, I can improve my math skills.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”与“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接上文,说明自己喜欢数学引出下文;
第二步,具体介绍喜欢数学的原因以及学习数学的一段难忘经历;
第三步,书写结语,说明学习数学的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①solution解决办法
②extremely极其地
③insolvable不能解决的
[高分句型]
①I like math because it’s like solving puzzles.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②To learn math better, I’ll do more exercises.(不定式表目的)
4.(2025·甘肃定西·一模)以“My Family’s Spring Festival”为题目,写一篇不少于80词的短文。
内容提示:
1. 介绍春节和春节日期;
2. 介绍春节传统食品和你们家的过节方式;
3. 你的家人们一起过春节的情景……
要求:
1. 内容包括提示中的所有要点;
2. 条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、学校等信息。
My Family’s Spring Festival
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【答案】例文
My Family’s Spring Festival
The Spring Festival, China’s most significant traditional holiday, falls on the first day of the first lunar month. It marks the beginning of a new year and serves as a cherished occasion for families to reunite.
Traditional food plays a crucial role during this time. Dumplings, which symbolize wealth and prosperity, are an absolute must. On New Year’s Eve, my family gathers to make them together. We chat and laugh while we are preparing the fillings, creating a joyful atmosphere. The next morning, we dress in new clothes for good luck and visit our relatives. The children eagerly receive red envelopes filled with joy and blessings. In the evening, we gather around to watch the Spring Festival Gala, enjoying the performances and sharing laughter together.
The Spring Festival not only strengthens our family bonds but also fills our hearts with warmth and happiness.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括3个方面的提示要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,介绍春节和春节的时间;
第二步,详细描述家庭过春节时的具体活动;
第三步,总结升华,强调春节对家庭的重要作用。
[亮点词汇]
①mark the beginning of a new year 标志着新年的开始
②play a role 起作用
[高分句型]
①Dumplings, which symbolize wealth and prosperity, are an absolute must. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②We chat and laugh while we are preparing the fillings, creating a joyful atmosphere. (while引导的时间状语从句)
5.(24-25九年级下·河南·开学考试)在2024年12月4日这个意义非凡的日子里,“春节——中国人庆祝传统新年的社会实践”成功入选联合国教科文组织人类非物质文化遗产代表作名录。作为新时代的青少年,我们肩负着传承与弘扬中华优秀传统文化的神圣使命。请你以“The Spring Festival”为题介绍春节,根据要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。
1. 要点:
1)When is it celebrated?
2)How do people celebrate the festival?
3)What do you think of the festival?
2. 要求:
1)文中不得出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名。
2)短文不少于100词。
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【答案】范文:
The Spring Festival
The Spring Festival is celebrated on the first day of the first lunar month in the Chinese lunar calendar. It usually falls between late January and mid-February in the Gregorian calendar. The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival in China.
Before it, people who are away from their hometowns all go back home. We clean the houses and decorate them with red couplets and lanterns. During the festival, families get together to enjoy a big meal, especially dumplings. Kids get lucky money in red envelopes. We also watch the Spring Festival Gala and set off fireworks. Then in the following days, we visit friends and relatives.
The Spring Festival brings joy and warmth, strengthens family bonds and makes us feel the charm of traditional culture. It’s a wonderful time!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明春节的时间以及春节是中国最重要的节日;
第二步,根据题干的要点,详细介绍春节期间人们做什么;
第三步,介绍自己对春节的感受,并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①away from离开
②set off引爆
[高分句型]
①Before it, people who are away from their hometowns all go back home.(定语从句)
6.(2025·陕西·模拟预测)假如你是李明,你校英语报正在开展以“团队合作”为主题的征文活动。请你认真阅读以下通知,并按照要求用英语写一篇短文,参加此次活动。
NoticeDear students,
Teamwork is very necessary in modern society. We all need teamwork in work, study and life. So our newspaper holds a writing competition about teamwork. It aims to explore how teamwork influences you and your life. Write a short passage to send to us!
Here are some questions to help you.
●What is your understanding of teamwork?
●Do you have any experience about teamwork? What’s it?
●What does that experience mean to you?
We are looking forward to your passage.
School English Newspaper
要求:
1. 短文必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等) ;
4. 词数:不少于70。 (开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Teamwork is very important.
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【答案】例文
Teamwork is very important. For me, it means working together with others to achieve a common goal.
I had a wonderful experience with teamwork during an English class project. Our task was to create a short film in English. At first, we had different opinions, which caused some problems. However, we got over them by listening to each other. We designed different roles for each member, such as writer, director and actor. We also communicated to make sure everyone was on the same page. Finally, we created a great short film that received high praise. We know that all this success is the result of our team’s hard work.
This experience made me realize that through teamwork, we can learn from each other, improve our skills and achieve more.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏通知中的关键信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你对团队合作的理解;
第二步,谈谈你有关于团队合作的经验;
第三步,谈谈你的经历对你来说学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①got over克服
②each other互相
③make sure确保
[高分句型]
①We know that all this success is the result of our team’s hard work.(宾语从句)
7.(2024·江西九江·模拟预测)在阅读理解B部分七选五文章中提到了运动的诸多好处,运动可以增强体质、减轻压力、提高团队协作能力……请以“Sports make our life better”为题,用英文写一篇短文。
内容包括:
1. 你喜欢的运动项目和原因。
2. 它给你带来的好处。
3. 你的感受和期望。
要求:
1. 短文应包括全部的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3. 词数在80-120之间,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Sports make our life better
As a saying goes,knowledge makes a wiser man,and sports make a stronger man.
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【答案】例文
Sports make our life better
As a saying goes, knowledge makes a wiser man, and sports make a stronger man. Among various sports, I have a particular fondness for basketball. The thrill of the game, the camaraderie with teammates, and the joy of scoring a basket all contribute to my love for this sport.
Playing basketball has brought me numerous benefits. It has not only improved my physical fitness but also taught me the importance of teamwork and cooperation. Additionally, it has fostered a sense of discipline and perseverance in me.
In conclusion, sports have a profound impact on my life. They not only enhance my physical well-being but also enrich my mental state. I feel more alive and energized when I am involved in sports. I hope to continue enjoying the benefits of sports and inspire others to do so as well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“内容包括”中的关键信息,可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己喜欢的运动以及喜欢它的原因;
第二步,详细阐述这项运动给自己带来的好处;
第三步,书写结语,表明自己对运动的感受和期望。
[亮点词汇]
①have a particular fondness for 特别喜欢……
②contribute to 有助于,促进
③numerous 无数的
④physical fitness 体能
⑤Additionally 另外
⑥have a profound impact on 对……有深远影响
⑦am involved in... 参与……
⑧inspire sb to do 鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①The thrill of the game, the camaraderie with teammates, and the joy of scoring a basket all contribute to my love for this sport.(and连接的并列句)
②I feel more alive and energized when I am involved in sports. (when引导的时间状语从句)。
8.(2024·湖北武汉·模拟预测)作家列夫·托尔斯泰曾说过:“梦想是指路明灯。没有梦想,就没有坚定的方向;没有方向,就没有生活。” 作为新时代的青少年,你的梦想是什么呢?某英文报社正在举办以”梦想”为主题的征文活动,请以”My Dream”为题,根据以下内容提示写一篇英语短文投稿。
What do you want to be in the future?
What makes you have the dream?
What are you going to do to realize your dream?
Something more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数 100 词左右;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Dream Dreams are different from person to person. Some people want to be writers, while others want to be doctors.
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【答案】例文
My Dream
Dreams are different from person to person. Some people want to be writers, while others want to be doctors. As for me, I have a dream that one day I will be a scientist. Here are some reasons.
For one reason, I prefer science to other subjects. It is my favorite subject at school. For another, I am curious and I love exploring the unknown.
To realize my dream, I am going to study hard to enter a university to learn more about science. What’s more, I’ll make full use of my spare time to read different kinds of books. I will stick to my dream no matter how difficult it is.
I am sure that my dream will come true one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“人与人之间的梦想不同。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——你的梦想、有这个梦想的原因、实现梦想所要做的事情等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be different from不同于
②come trure实现
③What’s more而且
[高分句型]
①I am sure that my dream will come true one day. (宾语从句)
②To realize my dream, I am going to study hard to enter a university to learn more about science. (动词不定式作目的状语)
9.(2024·湖北荆门·模拟预测)根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于80词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和真实姓名。
初中生活已接近尾声,在这3年里,是否有这样一个人,比如,你的师长,你的学友,或者网红董宇辉……在你迷茫时引领你一路前行,成为你学习的榜样。假如你是李华,你校英语社团公众平台计划做一期主题为“榜样人物”的系列推送。请你用英语写一篇文章,推荐你心中的一位榜样,并写明推荐理由。
提示词语:admire, patient, face the difficulty, encourage, advice
提示问题:
• Who is your role model?
• Why do you want to recommend (推荐) him/her?
Everyone has a role model in his heart.
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【答案】例文
Everyone has a role model in his heart. The person I admire most is the monitor of my class. He spends much time and energy on study. He is always active in class and finishes his homework on time, so he can get good grades. He is thought to be helpful and selfless because he is willing to share his learning experience with us. He was also very caring and understanding. Whenever I felt uneasy, he listened patiently to me and put himself in my shoes. When I meet problems, he encourages me to face the difficulties and helps me find the solutions. He always gives me a lot of helpful advice.
With his help and guidance, I improved myself little by little. I am proud to have such a good friend. He is a role model in my mind.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍自己的榜样;
第二步,具体介绍为什么他是你的榜样;
第三步,介绍榜样对自己的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time on sth.花时间做某事
②encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
③a lot of很多
[高分句型]
①He is thought to be helpful and selfless because he is willing to share his learning experience with us. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②When I meet problems, he encourages me to face the difficulties and helps me find the solutions. (when引导的时间状语从句)
10.(2024·湖北襄阳·二模)三年的初中学习生活就要结束了,暑假即将来临,你有什么计划吗?学校英语广播站正在面向九年级举行以“My summer vacation plan”为题的征文比赛活动,请你积极参加此项活动,根据要求写一篇英语短文。
Notice
Summer vacation is coming, every one of you must be very excited. During the summer vacation, what will you do to keep healthy? What hobbies will you take up to relax? What housework will you do to help your parents? What subjects do you want to study by yourself before entering high school?
Look forward to your sharing.
School English Club
要求:
1. 你的计划要包含黑体部分的内容,可适当发挥。
2. 90词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
My summer vacation plan
The summer vacation is coming, Here are my plans for it.
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【答案】例文:
My summer vacation plan
The summer vacation is coming. Here are my plans for it.
First, it’s important to have healthy eating habits. I’ll eat more fruit and vegetables, and try to eat less junk food. At the same time, I’ll keep exercising and get enough sleep every day. Second, I plan to take up some hobbies, like taking photos or playing the guitar. Besides, I’ll spend more time reading books to improve myself. If possible, I’ll travel with my friends. Lastly, I’m going to help my parents with housework, such as doing the dishes and sweeping the floor.
All in all, I’m looking forward to spending a happy summer vacation.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题;
第二步,具体介绍自己的暑假计划;
第二步,书写结语。表达希望有个快乐的暑假的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①take up开始从事,喜欢上
②improve 改善
③such as例如
[高分句型]
①Besides, I’ll spend more time reading books to improve myself. (动词不定式表目的)
11.(2024·湖北十堰·模拟预测)人生是一场充满挑战和意外的旅行。当遇到挑战时,我们应该怎么办呢?每个人都会遇到困难,你曾经是如何面对挑战的?你校英语报社正在举办以“How I Face Challenges”为主题的征文活动,请你结合自身经历用英语写一篇短文向其投稿。
要点提示:
1. What challenges did you meet?
2. How did you deal with them?
3. What can you learn from the challenges?
要求:
1. 你的短文必须包含以上要点;
1. 文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
2. 词数80词左右,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How I Face Challenges
Life is full of challenges, and we all will meet all kinds of challenges.
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【答案】例文
How I Face Challenges
Life is full of challenges, and we all will meet all kinds of challenges. Last term, I faced a big challenge in math. The new knowledge was so difficult that I often failed in exams.
At first, I was very worried. But I didn’t give up. I decided to work harder. I asked my teacher for help after class and did more exercises. Also, I joined a study group with my classmates. We discussed problems together.
After months of hard work, I finally made great progress. From this experience, I learned that as long as we face challenges bravely and keep trying, we can surely overcome them.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山。介绍你遇到的挑战是什么,引出下文;(开头已给出)
第二步,具体阐述。讲述你是如何应对挑战的;
第三步,书写结语。介绍你从挑战中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
① give up 放弃
② ask sb. for help 向某人寻求帮助
③ make great progress 取得巨大进步
④ as long as 只要
[高分句型]
① The new knowledge was so difficult that I often failed in exams. (结果状语从句)
② From this experience, I learned that as long as we face challenges bravely and keep trying, we can surely overcome them. (宾语从句、条件状语从句)
12.(2024·湖北武汉·模拟预测)身边有许多人在初中学习生活中让你感动,也许是你的父母,也许是你的老师,也许是你的朋友,请你以“________ Touched Me Most”为题, 根据以下内容提示用英文写一篇短文。内容提示:
What does the person who touched you most look like?
Why did he/she have greatest influence on you?
What have you learned from him/her?
Something more about the person.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100词左右;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
________ Touched Me Most
Some people had a great influence on me during my study and life in middle school
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【答案】例文
Mrs. Liu Touched Me Most
Some people had a great influence on me during my study and life in middle school. Of them, Mrs. Liu, my English teacher, touched me most. Mrs. Liu has long straight hair and is of medium height, always wearing a smile. During the past three years, she has given me lots of help and encouragement. Whenever I got bad grades, she tried her best to help me with my English and my study habits. Every time I had a problem, she always said “You can make it.”
I really thank my English teacher. From her, I have got to know I must face any challenge confidently and I should offer others help when in need. Mrs. Liu is such a responsible teacher that I will never forget her.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,指出在中学学习生活中最触动自己的人;
第二步,具体介绍该人物;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①try one’s best尽某人最大的努力
②help sb. with sth.在某方面帮助某人
③in need在困难中
[高分句型]
①Every time I had a problem, she always said “You can make it.” (every time引导的时间状语从句)
②Mrs. Liu is such a responsible teacher that I will never forget her. (such ... that引导的结果状语从句)
13.(2024·浙江杭州·模拟预测)某校学生会策划了主题为“Walk for Trees”的十公里徒步活动。假设你是该学生会成员,请写一篇英语短文,在校英语报上介绍该活动的内容、益处并给出相关建议。
要点提示如下:
WALK FOR TREES
Activities
Benefits (益处)
Suggestions
●walk for 10 kilometers
●raise money to plant more trees
● …
●be good for health
●…
●wear comfortable shoes
●…
注意:
1.短文必须包含表中所有信息,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 词数:80—100;短文首句仅供参考选择使用,不计入总词数。
On May 6th, we will have an activity called Walk for Trees.
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【答案】例文
On May 6th, we will have an activity called Walk for Trees. During this event, we will walk for 10 kilometers and raise money to plant more trees around our city. As we all know, walking is not only beneficial for our health because it helps enhance our endurance, but also raises environmental protection awareness among students. In order to ensure a pleasant experience, participants are advised to wear comfortable shoes. What’s more, it is recommended to bring enough water. One last thing, avoid overeating before the walk.
Join us and make a difference for our planet!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我们将举办‘为树而行’活动”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“活动、好处、建议等”几个方面重点介绍;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①raise money筹钱
②In order to为了
[高分句型]
Join us and make a difference for our planet!(祈使句)
14.(2023·浙江金华·模拟预测)学校、家庭和青少年自身越来越重视各种技能的培养和学习。某英语网站正在举办以“我的新技能”为主题的征文活动。假如你是Daming,请你写一篇题为“My new skill”的短文,介绍你的一项新技能、学习过程以及学到新技能后的感受,用于投稿。
注意:
1. 文中必须包含三个方面的内容要点,可适当发挥;参考词汇供选择使用;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数:80~100。
内容要点
参考词汇
What I learnt
…
How I learnt
learn from…, take a long time to…, practise, ….
My feelings
proud , useful, …
My new skill
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【答案】例文
My new skill
I enjoy learning new skills. One of the most useful skills I have learnt is cooking.
The first dish I tried was cola chicken wings. I bought chicken wings and some cola from the supermarket. And then I found the recipe on the Internet. To my surprise, it was easier than I thought. I learnt how to cook step by step by following the recipe. As a result, it was a big success.
Now I can cook not only for myself but also for my parents. I am really proud of the wonderful skill!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要运用一般现在时和一般过去时;
③主题:作者讲述了自己学习烹饪这一新技能的经历。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇表明自己喜欢学习新技能,并指出学会的最有用技能之一是烹饪。
第二步,详细叙述自己首次尝试做可乐鸡翅的过程,包括食材准备、获取食谱的途径以及烹饪步骤。
第三步,结尾说明自己现在不仅能为自己做饭,还能为父母做饭,并为此感到自豪。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy喜欢;享受
②useful有用的
③recipe食谱;配方
④proud自豪的
[高分句型]
The first dish I tried was cola chicken wings.(定语从句)
15.(2024·吉林长春·模拟预测)诚实,是中华民族的传统美德,更是为人处事的基本原则。某英文网站正在进行关于“Honesty”的征文活动,请你准备一篇英语短文参加此活动。
要点:
1. 描述与诚实有关的事件;
2. 谈谈你对于诚实的理解与感悟。
要求:
1. 不少于80词;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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【答案】例文
It’s one of our traditional virtues to be honest. Honesty is a great virtue which is traditionally encouraged by Chinese people. It’s really important for us to be honest in our life.
As for me, I consider honesty to be one of the most important rules that should be followed. I never tell a lie to others. If I do something wrong in life, I usually choose to tell the truth, even if it brings me some trouble. Once I make a promise, I will try my best to keep it.
Being honest helps us have more confidence in people around us. All in all, honesty makes the world more trustworthy and a better place to live in.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:根据所给话题完成写作,写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍诚实守信的重要性;
第二步,列举出日常生活中自己能诚实守信做的事情;
第三步,谈谈自己诚实守信的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①traditionally传统上
②as for至于
③tell a lie说谎
④tell the truth说实话
⑤make a promise作出承诺
⑥trustworthy值得信赖的
⑦all in all总之
[高分句型]
①Honesty is a great virtue which is traditionally encouraged by Chinese people. (which引导定语从句)
②If I do something wrong in life, I usually choose to tell the truth, even if it brings me some trouble. (if引导条件状语从句)
16.(2023·江苏常州·一模)Everyone has ever received a gift. It may be a book, a card, a basketball or something else. What is the best gift that you have ever received? Please introduce the unique (独一无二的) story behind it.
注意:
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
3.词数不少于100.
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【答案】例文
The Best Gift I have Received
So far, I have received many gifts from people around me. Among them, the best one is a hand-made car. My grandfather gave the car to me on my tenth birthday. It was made of wood, and it took my grandfather almost a month to make it. After it was finished, my grandfather painted it blue and red carefully. It looked very cool. When I received it, I was too excited to say a word, because cars are always my favorite toys. I often take it out and have a careful look at it when I think of my grandfather. I will keep it forever because it’s full of my grandpa’s love.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为”一般过去时”和”一般现在时”;
③提示:材料所给内容不得遗漏,可适当发挥,语意要通顺,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己收到最好的礼物;
第二步,具体介绍礼物的来历;
第三步,详细介绍自己和礼物之间的故事。
[亮点词汇]
①be made of由……制作
②think of想起
③be full of充满
[高分句型]
①It was made of wood, and it took my grandfather almost a month to make it. (it固定句型)
②When I received it, I was too excited to say a word, because cars are always my favorite toys. (when引导时间状语从句;because引导原因状语从句)
17.(2024·浙江宁波·模拟预测)三年的初中生活即将结束,你一定对初中生活留下了很多美好的回忆。下周五你班要召开毕业班会,请根据下面的英文提示,并适当发挥,以“I Remember”为题,写一篇90词左右的短文,分享你校园生活中的一次活动或经历。
要点如下:
1.What’s the event?
2.When and where did it happen?
3.How did you feel at that moment?
4.How has the event changed your life?
注意:
1.短文需包含以上要点,并适当发挥。
2.短文中已给出的部分,不计入总词数。
3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息。
I Remember
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【答案】例文
I Remember
How time flies, my junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of memories during the three years’ study. What impressed me most is the school charity sale.
When I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas. We prepared well for the activity. We made some postcards, bookmarks, and even some kites in our spare time.
Finally, the big day came. The charity sale was held on our playground. We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join us. They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited. Everything went well. Our class got nearly 800 yuan in the end. Then we sent the money to Project Hope to help those poor children.
It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience and I’ve learned a lot from the activity. If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般过去时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,不要遗漏要点,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,详细介绍你校园生活中的一次活动或经历;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①prepare for为……做准备
②at first首先
③give a helping hand伸出援助之手
[高分句型]
①When I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas. (时间状语从句)
②If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much better. (条件状语从句)
18.(2023·辽宁沈阳·模拟预测)假定你是学生李华,你所在的城市于昨天晚上发生了地震。请你以“A Big Earthquake”为题给英语周报写一篇新闻报道,内容包括:
受灾情况:1.损失严重,房屋被毁;2.死伤4, 000多人,8, 000人无家可归,许多人失踪;3.水、电等设施被毁坏。
急缺物资:淡水、食物、药品
赈灾措施:1.军人帮助挖掘,寻找幸存者;2.号召志愿者支援灾区,积极捐钱和献血。
注意:
1.词数80~100,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
A Big Earthquake
Last night a big earthquake hit my city.
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【答案】Possible version:
A Big Earthquake
Last night a big earthquake hit my city. The earthquake caused much damage to my city and many tall buildings were badly destroyed. At least 4, 000 people were killed or injured in the disaster and 8, 000 lost their homes. Even many more people were still missing.
The electricity and water supply in my city were also destroyed. The people now are in great need of fresh water, food and medicine. Luckily, the soldiers have been sent to my city to help to dig for the survivors.
I call on more volunteers to come to the disaster area to give a hand. I hope that more and more people can donate your money and blood for the disaster people.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“昨晚,一场大地震袭击了我的城市。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——受灾情况、急缺物资和赈灾措施等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①at least至少
②caused much damage造成了很多损害
[高分句型]
①I hope that more and more people can donate your money and blood for the disaster people. (宾语从句)
19.(2024·江苏南通·模拟预测)近年来,在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象。为此,国家最近印发了《关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》。请你根据思维导图,结合实际,就如何培养劳动精神,以“How to Get Working Spirit”为题,给校报英语专栏写一篇短文。
要求:
1. 内容应包含思维导图中的主要内容,语句通顺,意思连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名;
3. 词数80~100词,短文开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:指导方针 guideline;劳动课 a hardworking spirit class
How to Get Working Spirit
A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit.
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【答案】例文
How to Get Working Spirit A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit. As a middle school student, I welcome it warmly.
Firstly, we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some basic life skills at school every week. Secondly, we can take part in out-of-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables to enrich our real-world work experience. Also, we need to try to do some chores at home, like tidying rooms, washing clothes or cooking some dishes. Last but not least, we could form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience.
In a word, the hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,引出话题;
第二步,介绍如何培养劳动精神的具体方法或建议;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了
②take part in参加
③such as例如
④try to do sth.尽力做某事
⑤last but not least最后但同样重要的是
⑥in a word总而言之
[高分句型]
Firstly, we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some basic life skills at school every week. (动词不定式作目的状语)
20.(2024·浙江·模拟预测)随着网络的发展,“网购”已成为一种时尚,越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体当中。请你根据下表提示,为校刊TEENS 写一篇关于网上购物的文章。
Advantages
●buy things without going outdoors
●not tired
●avoid being trapped in the crowded people
●save time
●more kinds of goods
●…
Disadvantages
●only see the goods from the pictures
●hard to check the qualities
●a waste of money
●…
注意:(1)所表达的内容必须包含表格中的所有信息,并进行适当拓展,使行文流畅。
(2)词数100左右,文章的开头已给出,供选择使用。
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping online has many advantages.
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【答案】One possible version:
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping online has many advantages. You can buy things on the Interne without going outdoors. What’s more, you can avoid being tired and being trapped in the crowded people and save much time. While shopping online, you can choose from more kinds of goods. And the prices of the goods are usually lower.
However, it has many disadvantages, too. Firstly, you can only see the goods from the pictures.so it’s hard to check their qualities. Secondly, shopping online causes people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.
Besides, some people find it boring to stay indoors shopping online.
What do you think about shopping online?
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
② 时态:文章主要使用“一般现在时”来描述网上购物的特点和个人观点。
③ 提示:文章应全面介绍网上购物的优缺点,并适当进行拓展和评价,使文章内容丰富且条理清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇引出网上购物的普及并简要描述其流行;
第二步,列举网上购物的优点,包括省时、避免拥挤、更多商品选择等;
第三步,分析网上购物的缺点,如只能通过图片看商品、质量难以检验、容易浪费金钱等;
第四步,总结对网上购物的看法,可能包含对其优缺点的权衡。
[亮点词汇]
① on the Internet 在网上
② What’s more 更重的是
③ waste of money 浪费钱
⑤ think about 考虑
[高分句型]
① While shopping online, you can choose from more kinds of goods. (时间状语从句)
② Secondly, shopping online causes people to buy goods that are not badly needed. (定语从句)
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