专题16 书信邮件类之建议信-【妙笔生花】2025年中考英语写作常考文体提分秘籍

2025年中考英语写作常考文体讲练提分秘籍 专题16 书信邮件类之建议信 【题型分析】 建议信是向收信人针对某事提出自己的建议或忠告，以便让对方接受自己的想法，主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人，针对遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点，也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。 【高分技巧】 建议信通常包括三部分内容： 1. 写信目的； 2. 介绍详情、说明原因； 3. 提出建议。 话题词汇/金句 常用词汇 1.give/offer sb. some advice(on) 给某人提建议 2.ask sb. for advice 向某人征求意见 3.as follows 如下 4.in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view  在我看来 5.take part in/participate in... 参加 6.follow/take one's advice 采纳某人的建议 7.in this regard 在这点上/在这方面 8.share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某事 9.with time going on  随着时间的推移 10. Be faced with 面临 11.take sth. seriously 重视；认真对待 建议信常用句型 1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble ...很遗憾听说你在...有困难。 2. I have received your letter saying you plan to...我已经收到了你的来信。信上说。。。 3. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to ..很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何。。。。 4. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to ...很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在。。。，我写信给你一些建议。 5.Whatever you decide to do，good luck with your studies/work. 不管你做怎么决定，祝你学业/工作好运！ 6.I hope these ways are of some use to you, and I believe everything will be going well again soon! 我希望这些方法对你有用，并且我相信一些都会很快好起来的。 【真题剖析】 1．（2024·青海西宁·中考真题）假如你是Dr. Know，请根据表格中的要点，给她写一封80词左右的英文回信，帮她解决困扰。可适当发挥，首句已给出，不计入总词数，文中不得出现真实校名和姓名。 建议 原因 帮助他人 使人快乐受到欢迎 结交朋友 互诉烦恼变得开朗 参与活动 展示自我自信满满 …… …… Dear Jenny,                                                                                                                                     I’m very sorry to hear your problems. Here are my suggestions for you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dr. Know 【话题范文】 1．（2024·湖北·模拟预测）每年的6月6日是我国的“爱眼日”。你校将在本周举行一场“爱眼日”公益活动，号召大家保护视力。请你结合自身实际和活动内容要求，用英语写一篇倡议书。 The Main Content (内容) Eyes are the windows to the soul! What’s the importance of protecting our eyes? What’s the advice on protecting our eyes? You can talk about them. 要求： （1）短文须包含内容要求中所给的提示； （2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名； （3）词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear friends, June 6 is our country’s Sight Day. As we know, “Eyes are the windows to the soul”. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Follow my advice and form good habits. Let’s say goodbye to thick glasses. Thank you! 2．（2024·吉林长春·模拟预测）假如你是李华，你的朋友Lucy是一名初三学生。考试将至，她来信询问你如何缓解学习压力，希望得到你的帮助。请写封回信，内容包括： 1.表示理解和安慰 2.提出三条建议 3.表达祝愿 要求：要点齐全，表述准确，简洁得体，不少于40词。 Dear Lucy, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3．（2023·湖北随州·一模）下面是九年级学生王云在你校“英语学习网”留言板发布的一条求助信息。假如你是李华，请你根据下面的要点提示，用英语写一篇短文回复他的留言。 I’m poor in English writing and I want to improve it. First, I don’t know what to write about. Second, there are always lots of grammar mistakes in my writing. Could you please give me some advice? Many thanks. Wang Yun Class 3 Grade 9 要点提示： 1.多阅读，扩大词汇量； 2.养成写作的习惯； 3.…… 要求： 1.内容须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯； 3.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 参考词汇：vocabulary词汇 Dear Wang Yun, To help you improve your writing, I’d like to give you some advice. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice is useful and you’ll make great progress in your writing. Yours, Li Hua 4．（2024·广东深圳·三模）深圳中小学已独立开设劳动教育必修课，假如你是校学生会主席李华，请代表广大学生给校长写一封关于提升劳动教育课程的信件，谈谈你对开设劳动课程的建议和理解。 要点提示： 1. 课程内容建议： ①……  ②……  ③…… 2. 开设课程的意义：（至少写3点意义）。 要求： 1. 必须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 条理清楚，行文连贯，标点正确，书写规范。 提示词： 开设run；课程course；木工woodworking；屋顶农场rooftop farm；光荣的glorious Dear headmaster, I am Li Hua, the chairman of the Student Union. I am writing to ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2023·陕西西安·模拟预测）假如你是Amy，你的中国朋友张亮在学习的过程中遇到了很多困难并给你写信求助。请你根据下面的提示信息给张亮写一封英文信，给他一些学习英语的建议。 提示：1．Zhang liang’s problems: few words, poor grammar, can’t speak English well, …； 2．learn to use the dictionary, read more English books, …； 3．do more exercise, make sentences, new words, …； 4．join the English club, talk with others in English, open, mouth, … 要求：1．参考提示信息，可适当发挥； 2．语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3．文章不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4．词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。） Dear Zhang Liang, I have received your letter and known your problems in your English study. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope your English will be better and better! Best wishes! Yours, Amy 6．（2024·湖北宜昌·三模）校园霸凌时有发生，Jimmy 在学校也曾被霸凌过。请你认真读他的信并给他回复 Dear Li Hua ,      How is it going? I was stopped to ask for some money by some bad students on my way home last Wednesday. They are much taller and stronger than me. I was too afraid to refuse. Besides, they warned me not to tell what happened to my teachers or parents. Have you ever experienced such a thing? How did you deal with it? What should I do if I am bullied again? Can you give me some advice? Look forward to your reply.                                    Jimmy 要求：1：短文必须包括所给所有要点，可适当发挥。       2：文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名。       3：词数80左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jimmy,      It’s not easy being our easy to deal with such a thing. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（22-23八年级下·湖北襄阳·期末）为缓解学习压力，你的好友Frank 沉迷于电脑游戏，每晚玩游戏到很晚，上课无心听讲，学习直线下降，你看在眼里，急在心里，作为好朋友，请你给Frank写一封信，动之以情，晓之以理，劝他正确处理学习压力和娱乐的关系。 要点提示如下： (1) 简要表达你对Frank现状的担忧； (2) 结合Frank的情况重点阐述玩游戏的利弊； (3) 给出1-2条缓解压力的合理化建议。 写作要求： 90词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；文中不得出现真实姓名或校名；行文连贯，条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。 Dear Frank, As your good friend, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope everything will be better with you. Yours, xxx 8．（2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·三模）假如你是王平，上周你的班级召开了以“如何利用时间”为主题的班会。你的朋友Mike对此很感兴趣，来信询问。请你根据以下信息给他写一封回信，并告诉他如何做一名自律的学生。 写作要点： 1．班会的主题是：如何利用时间 2．同学们的做法： （1）李梅：利用课间的休息时间看喜欢的书； （2）张明：坚持每天做练习题，发现问题； （3）我：严格执行自己的学习计划。 3．告诉他如何做一名自律的（self-disciplined）学生。 写作要求： 1．不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3．字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4．至少80词。 Dear Mike, How is everything going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Wang Ping 9．（2024·湖南长沙·三模）假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom来信，告诉你他最近经常学习到很晚，睡眠不好，成绩也没提高，学习压力较大。请你根据下面的提示，给他回一封信，帮助他解决问题。 要求： 1. 请结合生活实际，自行补充第三点建议； 2. 要涵盖表格中的要点，可适当增加细节； 3. 字数80词左右 (开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 4. 文中不能出现本人真实姓名和班级。 Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear that you have much stress these days. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 10．（2024·宁夏银川·二模）假设你是某英语报社的编辑Rina，收到Li Wei同学的来信，诉说了因为肥胖常遭到同学嘲笑的苦恼，并向你寻求建议。请你根据以下提示给Li Wei回信。 要求： 1.须包括所有要点提示并适当补充，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2.词数：80词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇：laugh at; care about; high-fat food (高脂肪食物); the more; the healthier. Dear Li Wei, I’ve received your letter and I can understand you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Rina 11．（2024·湖南常德·二模）你是英语校报编辑李华，校报收到初三学生Angela的来信，她提出了最近所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，针对Angela的问题，提出你的建议并阐述理由。 Angela’s problems Your advice and reasons problems with parents 1. listen and communicate—know each other better 2. (请补充) 压力山大 1. live a healthy life—take care of your body 2. (请补充) 注意： 1.要点包括图表中的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2.词数：不少于 80词 (短文的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等个人真实信息。 Dear Angela, I am sorry to hear that you are having a bad time now. In your letter you said that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Good luck with everything! Yours, Li Hua 12．（2024·山东菏泽·二模）假如你是校刊Teenagers的主编李华，学生Grace向你诉说她进入初三后面临的压力，请根据以下思维导图，给该同学回信提供建议。 要点如下： 1. 学生 Grace 向你诉说她进入初三后面临的压力。 2. 给该学生回信提供建议。 要求： (1) 全面反映图表信息； (2) 应包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使图文连贯； (3) 文中不能出现真实的学校和姓名； (4) 词数：100左右。 Dear Grace, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 1 / 22 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2025年中考英语写作常考文体讲练提分秘籍 专题16 书信邮件类之建议信 【题型分析】 建议信是向收信人针对某事提出自己的建议或忠告，以便让对方接受自己的想法，主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人，针对遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点，也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。 【高分技巧】 建议信通常包括三部分内容： 1. 写信目的； 2. 介绍详情、说明原因； 3. 提出建议。 话题词汇/金句 常用词汇 1.give/offer sb. some advice(on) 给某人提建议 2.ask sb. for advice 向某人征求意见 3.as follows 如下 4.in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view  在我看来 5.take part in/participate in... 参加 6.follow/take one's advice 采纳某人的建议 7.in this regard 在这点上/在这方面 8.share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某事 9.with time going on  随着时间的推移 10. Be faced with 面临 11.take sth. seriously 重视；认真对待 建议信常用句型 1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble ...很遗憾听说你在...有困难。 2. I have received your letter saying you plan to...我已经收到了你的来信。信上说。。。 3. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to ..很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何。。。。 4. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to ...很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在。。。，我写信给你一些建议。 5.Whatever you decide to do，good luck with your studies/work. 不管你做怎么决定，祝你学业/工作好运！ 6.I hope these ways are of some use to you, and I believe everything will be going well again soon! 我希望这些方法对你有用，并且我相信一些都会很快好起来的。 【真题剖析】 1．（2024·青海西宁·中考真题）假如你是Dr. Know，请根据表格中的要点，给她写一封80词左右的英文回信，帮她解决困扰。可适当发挥，首句已给出，不计入总词数，文中不得出现真实校名和姓名。 建议 原因 帮助他人 使人快乐受到欢迎 结交朋友 互诉烦恼变得开朗 参与活动 展示自我自信满满 …… …… Dear Jenny,                                                                                                                                     I’m very sorry to hear your problems. Here are my suggestions for you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dr. Know 【答案】A possible version: Dear Jenny, I’m very sorry to hear your problems. Here are my suggestions for you. To begin with, you need to help others because helping others is helping yourself. You can get much joy and will be popular. Secondly, you’d better try your best to make friends and learn to share. It can double your happiness and half your problems. The most important thing is to be a good listener. Then you will not feel lonely and become outgoing. Thirdly, join some clubs actively. If you show yourself bravely in the clubs, it can deal with your shyness. You can have more chances to practise speaking in public and believe yourself more. Last but not least, try new things and share them with friends. They are thirsty for new things. In a word, you don’t have to care too much about what others think of you, just improve yourself. I believe you can do it well. Hope what I said can help you be better soon. Dr. Know 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据表格中的要点提示完成写作，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题，引出下文； 第二步，从“帮助他人、结交朋友、参与活动”等方面给出建议； 第三步，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①to begin with首先 ②try one’s best to尽力去做某事 ③make friends交朋友 ④care too much about过于在意 ⑤think of考虑到 [高分句型] ①To begin with, you need to help others because helping others is helping yourself.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②If you show yourself bravely in the clubs, it can deal with your shyness.（if引导的条件状语从句） 【话题范文】 1．（2024·湖北·模拟预测）每年的6月6日是我国的“爱眼日”。你校将在本周举行一场“爱眼日”公益活动，号召大家保护视力。请你结合自身实际和活动内容要求，用英语写一篇倡议书。 The Main Content (内容) Eyes are the windows to the soul! What’s the importance of protecting our eyes? What’s the advice on protecting our eyes? You can talk about them. 要求： （1）短文须包含内容要求中所给的提示； （2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名； （3）词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear friends, June 6 is our country’s Sight Day. As we know, “Eyes are the windows to the soul”. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Follow my advice and form good habits. Let’s say goodbye to thick glasses. Thank you! 【答案】 Dear friends,    June 6 is our country’s Sight Day. As we know, “Eyes are the windows to the soul”. However, more and more students are suffering from poor eyesight. It’s really important to protect our eyes.     Here are some suggestions on how to protect our eyes. First, don’t use electronic products for too long. When reading or writing, keep the right posture and proper distance. Second, take regular breaks during study, and look at green plants or distant objects. Third, do eye-protecting exercises and take part in outdoor activities to relax your eyes.     Follow my advice and form good habits. Let’s say goodbye to thick glasses.    Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为倡议书。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中保护视力重要性的认识和建议的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，讲述保护视力的重要性； 第二步，具体阐述如何保护视力； 第三步，书写结语，表达感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①suffer from遭受 ②take part in参加 ③take regular breaks定期休息 [高分句型] ①Here are some suggestions on how to protect our eyes. (Here be句型) ②Second, take regular breaks during study, and look at green plants or distant objects. (祈使句) 2．（2024·吉林长春·模拟预测）假如你是李华，你的朋友Lucy是一名初三学生。考试将至，她来信询问你如何缓解学习压力，希望得到你的帮助。请写封回信，内容包括： 1.表示理解和安慰 2.提出三条建议 3.表达祝愿 要求：要点齐全，表述准确，简洁得体，不少于40词。 Dear Lucy, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Lucy, I understand how you feel. It’s normal to feel stressed before exams. Here are some suggestions to help you. First, take regular breaks during your study time. Go for a walk or do some simple exercise. Second, talk to your friends or family about your feelings. Sharing can make you feel better. Third, listen to some soft music to relax. I wish you good luck in your exams. Believe in yourself and you’ll do well. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示信息进行写作，注意要点齐全，表述准确并突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表示理解及安慰； 第二步，就如何缓解学习压力给出自己的三条建议； 第三步，表达自己的祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①take regular breaks定期休息 ②go for a walk去散步 ③talk to sb.和某人交谈 [高分句型] ①Sharing can make you feel better. (动名词作主语) ②Believe in yourself and you’ll do well. (并列句) 3．（2023·湖北随州·一模）下面是九年级学生王云在你校“英语学习网”留言板发布的一条求助信息。假如你是李华，请你根据下面的要点提示，用英语写一篇短文回复他的留言。 I’m poor in English writing and I want to improve it. First, I don’t know what to write about. Second, there are always lots of grammar mistakes in my writing. Could you please give me some advice? Many thanks. Wang Yun Class 3 Grade 9 要点提示： 1.多阅读，扩大词汇量； 2.养成写作的习惯； 3.…… 要求： 1.内容须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯； 3.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 参考词汇：vocabulary词汇 Dear Wang Yun, To help you improve your writing, I’d like to give you some advice. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice is useful and you’ll make great progress in your writing. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Hi, Wang Yun, To help you improve your writing, I’d like to give you some advice. To begin with, you don’t know what to write about. I think you should read more. By reading you can increase your vocabulary. If you have a large vocabulary, it is easier to express yourself in writing. Also reading is a great way to help you experience different kinds of writing. What’s more, why don’t you fall into the habit of writing? Write something every day. As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” You could begin by writing short ones about everything you’re interested in. Then, there are always lots of grammar mistakes in your writing. Don’t worry about it. I advise you to do lots of grammar exercises in your free time. By doing so, you’ll improve your grammar. I hope my advice is useful and you’ll make great progress in your writing. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：这是一篇书信作文。 ②时态：主要使用一般现在时。 ③提示：作文需要包含三个要点，其中两个已给出（多阅读，扩大词汇量；养成写作的习惯），还需要补充一个要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头引出话题； 第二步，中间部分详细阐述每个建议，并适当增加细节； 第三步，结尾总结，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①a large vocabulary 丰富的词汇量 ②fall into the habit of 养成……的习惯 ③in your free time 在你的空闲时间 [高分句型] ①If you have a large vocabulary, it is easier to express yourself in writing.（条件状语从句） ②As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.”（引用谚语，增强了文章的说服力） ③By doing so, you’ll improve your grammar.（介词短语作方式状语） 4．（2024·广东深圳·三模）深圳中小学已独立开设劳动教育必修课，假如你是校学生会主席李华，请代表广大学生给校长写一封关于提升劳动教育课程的信件，谈谈你对开设劳动课程的建议和理解。 要点提示： 1. 课程内容建议： ①……  ②……  ③…… 2. 开设课程的意义：（至少写3点意义）。 要求： 1. 必须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 条理清楚，行文连贯，标点正确，书写规范。 提示词： 开设run；课程course；木工woodworking；屋顶农场rooftop farm；光荣的glorious Dear headmaster, I am Li Hua, the chairman of the Student Union. I am writing to ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear headmaster, I am Li Hua, the chairman of the Student Union. I am writing to share some suggestions on running the course. First, the school can offer paper-cutting and woodworking classes. Second, we can build a rooftop farm on one of the buildings, and teachers can teach us how to plant vegetables and fruits in the farm. Finally, holding some competitions like cooking competition will be a nice choice. We can also invite parents to join in these activities. Through this course, we students can not only learn some life skills but also take part in social activities. Meanwhile, our school life will become more colourful and meaningful! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，并突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题，表明写信的目的是提供一些开设课程的建议； 第二步，具体介绍课程内容的建议； 第三步，介绍开设课程的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①hold some competitions举办一些比赛 ②take part in参加 ③invite sb to do sth邀请某人做某事 ④meanwhile同时 [高分句型] ①Second, we can build a rooftop farm on one of the buildings, and teachers can teach us how to plant vegetables and fruits in the farm. (and连接的并列句) ②Finally, holding some competitions like cooking competition will be a nice choice. (动名词作主语) 5．（2023·陕西西安·模拟预测）假如你是Amy，你的中国朋友张亮在学习的过程中遇到了很多困难并给你写信求助。请你根据下面的提示信息给张亮写一封英文信，给他一些学习英语的建议。 提示：1．Zhang liang’s problems: few words, poor grammar, can’t speak English well, …； 2．learn to use the dictionary, read more English books, …； 3．do more exercise, make sentences, new words, …； 4．join the English club, talk with others in English, open, mouth, … 要求：1．参考提示信息，可适当发挥； 2．语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3．文章不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4．词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。） Dear Zhang Liang, I have received your letter and known your problems in your English study. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope your English will be better and better! Best wishes! Yours, Amy 【答案】Dear Zhang Liang, I have received your letter and known your problems in your English study. Here are some suggestions for you. First, you should learn to use the dictionary to look up new words. Reading more English books can also help you improve your vocabulary and grammar. Second, do more exercise and try to make sentences with new words you learn. Joining the English club is a good idea, where you can talk with others in English. Don’t be afraid to open your mouth and speak. Practice makes perfect. Hope your English will be better and better! Best wishes! Yours, Amy 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示中的重要信息，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，给对方提出建议； 第二步，具体阐述建议，从使用字典、阅读英语书籍、做练习、加入英语俱乐部等几个方面重点介绍； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①look up 查找 ②make sentences 造句 ③join the English club 加入英语俱乐部 ④open your mouth 开口 [高分句型] ①Reading more English books can also help you improve your vocabulary and grammar. (动名词作主语) ②Don’t be afraid to open your mouth and speak. (祈使句) ③Joining the English club is a good idea, where you can talk with others in English.（定语从句） 6．（2024·湖北宜昌·三模）校园霸凌时有发生，Jimmy 在学校也曾被霸凌过。请你认真读他的信并给他回复 Dear Li Hua ,      How is it going? I was stopped to ask for some money by some bad students on my way home last Wednesday. They are much taller and stronger than me. I was too afraid to refuse. Besides, they warned me not to tell what happened to my teachers or parents. Have you ever experienced such a thing? How did you deal with it? What should I do if I am bullied again? Can you give me some advice? Look forward to your reply.                                    Jimmy 要求：1：短文必须包括所给所有要点，可适当发挥。       2：文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名。       3：词数80左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jimmy,      It’s not easy being our easy to deal with such a thing. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Jimmy, It’s not easy to deal with such a thing. I’m sorry to hear about what happened to you. I have experienced something similar before. Here is my advice: First, always stay calm and try to remember their faces or any details about them. Second, avoid going home alone. You walk with friends or take different routes. Third, it’s very important to tell your parents or teachers about this. They can help you find ways to protect yourself. Lastly, if it happens again, don’t give them money. Instead, shout for help or run to a safe place. Stay strong, Jimmy. You are not alone in this. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据Jimmy的信件，提炼出写作要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，对Jimmy的遭遇表示同情，并表示自己有类似的经历； 第二步，就如何应对校园霸凌给出自己的建议； 第三步，鼓励Jimmy并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①deal with处理 ②stay calm保持冷静 ③avoid doing sth.避免做某事 [高分句型] Lastly, if it happens again, don’t give them money. (if引导的条件状语从句) 7．（22-23八年级下·湖北襄阳·期末）为缓解学习压力，你的好友Frank 沉迷于电脑游戏，每晚玩游戏到很晚，上课无心听讲，学习直线下降，你看在眼里，急在心里，作为好朋友，请你给Frank写一封信，动之以情，晓之以理，劝他正确处理学习压力和娱乐的关系。 要点提示如下： (1) 简要表达你对Frank现状的担忧； (2) 结合Frank的情况重点阐述玩游戏的利弊； (3) 给出1-2条缓解压力的合理化建议。 写作要求： 90词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；文中不得出现真实姓名或校名；行文连贯，条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。 Dear Frank, As your good friend, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope everything will be better with you. Yours, xxx 【答案】Dear Frank, As your good friend, I’m really worried about you. Playing computer games too much has many disadvantages. It makes you sleep late and you have no energy to listen to the teacher in class, which leads to your poor grades. You don’t have enough time to review and do your homework. Moreover, it can also have a negative impact on your eyesight and physical health. But on the other hand, playing games can relax you for a short time. However, it should be controlled. To deal with the study pressure, you can do some sports like running or playing basketball. These activities can not only help you relieve stress but also keep you fit. Or you can listen to music to calm down. Maybe you can also talk to your parents or teachers about your troubles. Hope you can balance study and entertainment well. Hope everything will be better with you. Yours, xxx 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封建议信。 ②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中涉及的对现状的担忧、利弊分析及合理化建议等方面的表述，适当添加连接词，使行文连贯、通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，指出担忧并概述过度玩游戏的弊端； 第二步，提供减压及提升学习状态的积极建议； 第三步，表达期望与祝福。 [亮点词汇] ①have many disadvantages有许多缺点 ②lead to导致 ③negative impact负面影响 ④relieve stress缓解压力 ⑤keep fit保持健康 [高分句型] ①Playing computer games too much has made you sleep late and lose focus in class. (动名词短语作主语) ②It makes you sleep late and you have no energy to listen to the teacher in class, which leads to your poor grades.(and连接并列句；which引导非限制性定语从句) ③To deal with the study pressure, you can do some sports like running or playing basketball. ( 动词不定式作目的状语) 8．（2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·三模）假如你是王平，上周你的班级召开了以“如何利用时间”为主题的班会。你的朋友Mike对此很感兴趣，来信询问。请你根据以下信息给他写一封回信，并告诉他如何做一名自律的学生。 写作要点： 1．班会的主题是：如何利用时间 2．同学们的做法： （1）李梅：利用课间的休息时间看喜欢的书； （2）张明：坚持每天做练习题，发现问题； （3）我：严格执行自己的学习计划。 3．告诉他如何做一名自律的（self-disciplined）学生。 写作要求： 1．不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3．字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4．至少80词。 Dear Mike, How is everything going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Wang Ping 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, How is everything going? Last week, I’m writing to tell you something about the class meeting held last week. The theme of the class meeting is how to make use of time. Here are the opinions of several students in our class. Li Mei often spends her break time reading books that she is interested in. She thinks it is very interesting. Zhang Ming keeps doing exercises every day. When he finds problems, he will ask the teacher for help. I always carry out my study plan strictly. I think you should be a self-disciplined student. First of all, you should follow school rules and get on well with your classmates at school. Secondly, you should finish our homework on time and help our parents with housework at home.     Best wishes! Yours, Wang Ping 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍同学们是如何利用时间的，并告诉他如何做一名自律的学生，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍同学们是如何利用时间的； 第三步，告诉他如何做一名自律的学生。 [亮点词汇] ①make use of利用 ②spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事 ③carry out执行 ④get on well with sb.和某人和谐相处 [高分句型] ①Li Mei often spends her break time reading books that she is interested in. (that引导的定语从句) ②When he finds problems, he will ask the teacher for help. (when引导的时间状语从句) 9．（2024·湖南长沙·三模）假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom来信，告诉你他最近经常学习到很晚，睡眠不好，成绩也没提高，学习压力较大。请你根据下面的提示，给他回一封信，帮助他解决问题。 要求： 1. 请结合生活实际，自行补充第三点建议； 2. 要涵盖表格中的要点，可适当增加细节； 3. 字数80词左右 (开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 4. 文中不能出现本人真实姓名和班级。 Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear that you have much stress these days. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Tom,   I’m sorry to hear that you have much stress these days. It is normal to have a lot of pressure for teenagers. I would like to share some ways to lower stress with you. First of all, you had better make a good study plan. A good plan can make you study efficiently. Besides, you should get enough sleep so that you have much enenrgy to learn knowledge in class. Remember that you shouldn’t play games or your phone before bedtime. Last but not least, do some exercise to relax yourself every day. Hopefully, my suggestions are of great help to you. Please let me know if you have any problems. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作开头以及要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，对别人的问题表达同情，并引出主题； 第二步，从要点提示的三个方面具体介绍自己给出的建议； 第三步，总结全文，希望自己的建议有用。 [亮点词汇] ①make sb do sth让某人做某事 ②be of great help to sb对某人非常有用 [高分句型] ①Besides, you should get enough sleep so that you have much enenrgy to learn knowledge in class. （目的状语从句） ②Remember that you shouldn’t play games or your phone before bedtime.（宾语从句） 10．（2024·宁夏银川·二模）假设你是某英语报社的编辑Rina，收到Li Wei同学的来信，诉说了因为肥胖常遭到同学嘲笑的苦恼，并向你寻求建议。请你根据以下提示给Li Wei回信。 要求： 1.须包括所有要点提示并适当补充，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2.词数：80词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇：laugh at; care about; high-fat food (高脂肪食物); the more; the healthier. Dear Li Wei, I’ve received your letter and I can understand you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Rina 【答案】例文： Dear Li Wei, I’ve received your letter and I can understand you. You must feel bad when being laughed at use of your over-weight. Here is my advice for you. Firstly, there is no need to care about what others think of you. The most important thing is to be confident, as it will help you have courage to face and overcome your trouble. Secondly, try to eat healthily. Keep away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very important for losing weight. Thirdly, I strongly advise you to exercise more often. You’d better get up early in the morning and do some sports regularly. The more you exercise, the healthier you’ll be. I hope my advice will be helpful to you. Yours, Rina 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，表明写作意图。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“变得自信”、“健康饮食”以及“适当运动”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。 第三步，书写结语，表达期望。 [亮点词汇] ①laugh at嘲笑 ②over-weight过度肥胖 ③need to do sth.需要做某事 ④care about关心 ⑤help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事 ⑥try to do sth.尝试做某事 ⑦advise sb. to do sth.建议某人做某事 [高分句型] ①Firstly, there is no need to care about what others think of you. (there be句型) ②The most important thing is to be confident, as it will help you have courage to face and overcome your trouble. (as引导的原因状语从句) ③Keep away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead. (祈使句) ④I hope my advice will be helpful to you. (省略that的宾语从句) 11．（2024·湖南常德·二模）你是英语校报编辑李华，校报收到初三学生Angela的来信，她提出了最近所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，针对Angela的问题，提出你的建议并阐述理由。 Angela’s problems Your advice and reasons problems with parents 1. listen and communicate—know each other better 2. (请补充) 压力山大 1. live a healthy life—take care of your body 2. (请补充) 注意： 1.要点包括图表中的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2.词数：不少于 80词 (短文的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等个人真实信息。 Dear Angela, I am sorry to hear that you are having a bad time now. In your letter you said that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Good luck with everything! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Angela, I am sorry to hear that you are having a bad time now. In your letter you said that you have problems with parents and much study stress. Here is some helpful advice for you. As for the problems with your parents, you should try to listen to them and communicate with them more often. In this way you may know each other better. It’s also a good idea to take a walk with them or help them with housework. As for your study, don’t put too much pressure on yourself. You should live a healthy life so that you can take care of your body, which is the most important thing to you. You’d better have a healthy diet, have enough sleep and keep exercising every day. What’s more, why don’t you listen to your favorite music to make yourself relaxed when you’re tired or unhappy? Good luck with everything!   Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据开头提示，明确对方的问题； 第二步，针对问题提出建议； 第三步，表达祝福。 [亮点词汇] ①as for至于 ②try to do sth试着做某事 ③what’s more另外 [高分句型] ①It’s also a good idea to take a walk with them or help them with housework. (it固定句型) ②As for your study, don’t put too much pressure on yourself. (否定祈使句) 12．（2024·山东菏泽·二模）假如你是校刊Teenagers的主编李华，学生Grace向你诉说她进入初三后面临的压力，请根据以下思维导图，给该同学回信提供建议。 要点如下： 1. 学生 Grace 向你诉说她进入初三后面临的压力。 2. 给该学生回信提供建议。 要求： (1) 全面反映图表信息； (2) 应包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使图文连贯； (3) 文中不能出现真实的学校和姓名； (4) 词数：100左右。 Dear Grace, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Grace, I’m sorry to hear that you have so many problems. Here is my advice. First, you needn’t care too much about the results of the exams, but most importantly try to find out why you failed and avoid making the same mistakes again. Moreover, you must understand the expectations from your parents who love you so much and hope you can have a bright future. So I think you should communicate with your parents. And proper homework can help you review what you are taught in class and master it better. It is a good way to find ways to relax. Besides, you can take a glass of milk before going to bed, which can guarantee you a sound sleep. Wish you all the best! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应根据题干思维导图，给该同学回信提供建议并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表示自己的同情； 第二步，结合思维导图给出建议； 第三步，希望对方能够好转并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①find out找到 ②communicate with与……沟通 [高分句型] ①Moreover, you must understand the expectations from your parents who love you so much and hope you can have a bright future. （who引导的定语从句） ②And proper homework can help you review what you are taught in class and master it better.（that引导的宾语从句） 1 / 22 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$