专题08 书面表达-【大题精做】冲刺2025年高考英语大题突破+限时集训（北京专用）

大题08 书面表达 1. 紧扣社会热点与时代背景 作文题目常结合当年重大事件或国家发展主题。例如： 2020年：两道作文均围绕疫情，涉及“推荐外教”和“居家学习自律性调研”； 2024年：以新中国成立75周年为背景，建议外国友人撰写中国发展成就（如经济、科技、环保、文化等）。 其他高频主题包括：传统文化传承、家国情怀、科技前沿（如AI、5G）、环境保护、青少年成长与责任等。 2. 虚拟人物“李华”的延续性 北京卷长期以“红星中学李华”为虚拟身份，要求考生以学生视角完成应用文或情景作文，贴近校园生活与社会实践。 3. 国际化视角与跨文化交流 常涉及中外交流场景，如向外国友人介绍中国、解决跨文化问题（如推荐外教、解释文化现象）。 （2025高三·北京房山·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国朋友Jim获悉你校近期举办了主题为“劳动光荣”(All Labour Is Glorious)的活动，他发来邮件询问相关情况。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1. 活动的内容; 2. 活动的意义。 注意：1. 词数100左右; 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim， ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Jim,       I’m delighted to share with you the details of the activity themed “All Labour Is Glorious” held in our school recently.       The activity was rich and colorful. We had a speech contest where students shared stories about the value of labor. Also, there were practical labor sessions, like growing vegetables in the school garden and cleaning the campus.       This activity was of great significance. It not only deepened our understanding of the dignity of labor but also improved our practical skills. We realized that every kind of labor, no matter how small, contributes to society.       Hope you find it interesting! If you have any questions, feel free to let me know. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英文给外国朋友Jim介绍校近期举办了主题为“劳动光荣”(All Labour Is Glorious)的活动。其内容包括：活动的内容和活动的意义。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：delighted→glad 重要性：significance→importance 理解：understanding →comprehension 希望：hope→wish 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句： I’m delighted to share with you the details of the activity themed “All Labour Is Glorious” held in our school recently. 拓展句： I’m delighted to share with you the details of the activity which is themed “All Labour Is Glorious” held in our school recently. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 We had a speech contest where students shared stories about the value of labor.（运用了where引导的定语从句） 【高分句型2】 We realized that every kind of labor, no matter how small, contributes to society.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） 一、审题与结构规划 1. 精准审题，明确要求 北京高考作文常考应用文（书信、通知）和议论文。审题时需明确文体、写作目的、对象及核心要求，避免偏题。例如，议论文需在开头明确观点，应用文需注意格式规范（如书信的称呼、结尾署名）。 列提纲：用中文或英文草拟文章框架，确保逻辑清晰。例如，议论文可采用“总-分-总”结构，应用文按“背景-细节-总结”展开。 2. 合理分段与详略搭配 议论文分引言、主体（2-3段）、结论；应用文按功能分段落（如建议信分问题描述、建议措施、期望效果）。每段需有明确的主题句，支持句以具体例子或数据展开。 过渡词使用：如“firstly, moreover, however”等，增强段落间逻辑性。 二、语言表达与素材积累 1. 词汇与短语的精准运用 使用高频话题词汇（如环保类“sustainable development”、科技类“artificial intelligence”）和短语搭配（如“take measures to”“contribute to”），避免重复。推荐掌握“高中英语1.5万考点”中的高频词组，覆盖考试中98%的短语需求。 同义词替换：如“important”可替换为“crucial”“significant”，提升语言丰富度。 2. 句式多样化与语法准确性 混合使用简单句、并列句、复合句，避免单一结构。例如，用倒装句（Not only...but also...）或强调句（It is...that...）增加亮点。 重点检查时态、主谓一致、冠词等易错点，可通过工具如Grammarly辅助修改。 三、逻辑与内容深度 1. 论据充分，观点明确 议论文需提供具体例子（如环保议题引用“碳达峰”政策）或数据支持观点，避免空洞论述。应用文需细节具体，如建议信中的措施应具可操作性。 辩证思维：讨论争议性话题时（如“是否延长假期”），可从利弊两方面分析，并提出折中方案。 2. 开头与结尾设计 开头可用引言、反问或现象描述吸引注意，如：“With the rapid development of technology, artificial intelligence has become a heated topic...”。 结尾呼应开头，总结观点或提出呼吁，如：“In conclusion, only through joint efforts can we build a greener future.”。 四、书写规范与细节优化 1. 卷面整洁与书写工整 使用0.7mm签字笔，字母圆润清晰，避免连笔。段落间留空，增强可读性。 控制字数：议论文建议120-150词，应用文80-100词，避免超出要求。 2. 检查与修改 通读检查语法错误、拼写错误及逻辑漏洞。重点关注过渡词是否缺失、段落衔接是否自然。 Passage（1） （2025高三·北京顺义·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友 Jim 近期将来中国旅游，他对北京中轴线很感兴趣，想安排一天游玩，向你寻求游览建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1. 简要介绍北京中轴线; 2. 游览建议及理由。 注意：1. 词数100左右; 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数; 3. 提示词：北京中轴线 Beijing Central Axis。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】范文1： Dear Jim, I’m very glad to know that you’ll be visiting China soon. Beijing Central Axis is about 7.8 kilometers long. It runs through the heart of the city, featuring some of the most famous landmarks in Beijing. For your one-day tour, I suggest starting at Tiananmen Square and then visiting the Forbidden City to explore its beautiful palaces. After lunch, head to Jingshan Park for a complete view of the city, and wrap up your day at the Bell and Drum Towers to experience their historical significance. I believe this route will give you a great sense of Beijing’s culture! If you need any help, please let me know. Yours, Li Hua 范文2： Dear Jim, I’m excited to hear about your upcoming trip to China! The Beijing Central Axis is a 7.8-kilometer-long historic line that runs through the heart of the city, stretching from Yongding Gate in the south to the Bell and Drum Towers in the north. Along this route, you’ll find significant landmarks like Tiananmen Square and the Forbidden City. For the one-day tour, I recommend you explore the Central Axis by bike. Cycling allows you to see more sights at your own pace. It’s also a fantastic way to connect with the local culture as you ride through the dynamic streets. I believe you’ll be impressed by the sight of traditional architecture coexisting with contemporary life. Any specific landmarks or activities that you’ re particularly looking forward to experiencing? Feel free to tell me! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你的英国好友Jim近期将来中国旅游，他对北京中轴线很感兴趣，想安排一天游玩，向你寻求游览建议，要求考生用英文给他回复。 【详解】1. 词汇积累（以范文1为例） 高兴的：glad→delighted 建议：suggest→advise 整个的：complete→whole 景色：view→landscape/scenery 2. 句式拓展 简单句合并为复合句 原句：Beijing Central Axis is about 7.8 kilometers long. It runs through the heart of the city, featuring some of the most famous landmarks in Beijing. 拓展句：Beijing Central Axis, which is about 7.8 kilometers long, runs through the heart of the city, featuring some of the most famous landmarks in Beijing. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m very glad to know that you’ll be visiting China soon.(that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2] If you need any help, please let me know.(if引导的条件状语从句) Passage（2） （2025高三·北京朝阳·一模）假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你校外籍老师Jim计划不久回国，他想带回一份具有中国传统文化特色的礼物送给妈妈，写信向你咨询，请你给他回复邮件。内容包括： 1. 推荐礼物的名称及推荐理由； 2. 向他家人表示祝愿并祝他旅途愉快。 注意：1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Possible version: Dear Jim, Knowing that you’d like to select a Chinese gift for your mother before returning home soon, I’m writing to recommend you a silk dress as a gift. Silk is one of China’s greatest treasures and Chinese silk industry has the longest history. Therefore, the beautiful soft silk is one of the most popular handcrafts presenting China. Apart from its strong Chinese cultural characteristics, Chinese silk messes are also comfortable and elegant to wear. They are a favorite choice for ladies of your mother’s age. I’m sure your mother will definitely be glad to have one. Best wishes to your family and have a wonderful trip! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你校外籍老师Jim计划不久回国，他想带回一份具有中国传统文化特色的礼物送给妈妈，写信向你咨询，要求考生就此内容给他回复邮件。 【详解】1.词汇积累 选择：select→choose 因此：therefore →thus 除了：apart from→besides 确定地：definitely→ certainly 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Knowing that you’d like to select a Chinese gift for your mother before returning home soon, I’m writing to recommend you a silk dress as a gift. 拓展句：Because I know that you’d like to select a Chinese gift for your mother before returning home soon, I’m writing to recommend you a silk dress as a gift. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Apart from its strong Chinese cultural characteristics, Chinese silk messes are also comfortable and elegant to wear. （运用了介词短语作状语） 【高分句型2】Knowing that you’d like to  select a Chinese gift for your mother before returning home soon, I’m  writing to recommend you a silk dress as a gift.（运用了现在分词作状语） Passage（1） （2025高三·北京·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在你的朋友圈看到你校高三年级开展了“勇攀高峰，青春无悔”（Aim High，Give It All）的长城主题活动，很感兴趣，发来邮件询问。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 该活动的相关信息（如时间、内容. . . ）；2. 你参加该活动的感受。 注意： 1. 词数100左右；    2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, I’m thrilled to hear your interest in our recent activity at the Great Wall themed “Aim High, Give It All.” The event took place last Saturday, where all senior students were invited to hike along the Great Wall. This activity aimed to inspire us to challenge ourselves and push our limits, both physically and mentally. Participating in this event was truly memorable for me. The breathtaking views of the Great Wall combined with the spirit of perseverance taught me the value of determination. It was a perfect opportunity to bond with classmates and reflect on our goals. I believe this experience will motivate me in my future endeavors.   Yours,   Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，内容要求考生回复笔友Jim关于长城主题活动的信息。 【详解】1. 词汇积累：   兴趣：interest → curiosity   激励：inspire → motivate   挑战自我：challenge ourselves → push our boundaries   难忘的：memorable → unforgettable    2. 句式拓展：   简单句变复合句   原句：Participating in this event was truly memorable for me.   拓展句：It was truly memorable for me because participating in this event taught me valuable lessons. 【点睛】【高分句型一】The event took place last Saturday, where all senior students were invited to hike along the Great Wall.”(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型二】The breathtaking views of the Great Wall combined with the spirit of perseverance taught me the value of determination(运用了过去分词作定语) Passage（2） （2025高三·北京·二模）假定你是李华，从小练习国画，你的英国朋友Jim邀请你参加主题为Amazing Nature的青少年画展。请给他回复一封邮件，表示同意参加，内容包括： 1．感谢邀请； 2．作品简介。 注意：1．词数100左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Dear Peter, I am delighted to accept your invitation to the art exhibition themed “Amazing Nature”. Thank you for the fantastic opportunity and I am writing to give you a brief introduction of my work. The painting I created features the harmony of natural world. I am an enthusiast of both nature and art; therefore, my works are often full of elements of nature. You will be deeply impressed by the peaceful landscapes, elegant birds and delicate flowers in the paining, which is in line with the theme. Thanks again for the opportunity to demonstrate my passion for art and nature. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jim回复一封邮件，表示同意参加主题为Amazing Nature的青少年画展，表示感谢并简单介绍作品。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：delighted →glad 机会：opportunity → chance 充满：be full of → be filled with 展示：demonstrate → show 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I am delighted to accept your invitation to the art exhibition themed “Amazing Nature”. 拓展句：I am delighted to accept your invitation to the art exhibition whose theme is “Amazing Nature”. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The painting I created features the harmony of natural world.（运用了省略关系代词that/which的定语从句） 【高分句型2】You will be deeply impressed by the peaceful landscapes, elegant birds and delicate flowers in the paining, which is in line with the theme.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） Passage（3） （2025高三·北京通州·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校科技社团将要组织一次以“人工智能(AI)与未来生活”为主题的活动，请你用英文给你校交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加，内容包括： 1．活动时间和地点； 2．活动目的和内容。 注意：1．词数 100左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, How is everything going recently? Our school’s science and technology club will organize an event with the theme of “AI and Future Life” this Friday in the school hall. Learning that you are a great enthusiast of artificial intelligence, I’m writing to invite you to it. The purpose of the event is to stimulate students’ interest in technological. First, we will enjoy a special exhibition about AI. Not only can you witness robots that do housework, but you can also experience self-driving vehicles. What’s more, you can play the board game with Alpha Go, which is a computer program developed by Google. This event can make you realize AI will change people’s future life. I believe that you will be deeply impressed by it. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给你校交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加“人工智能(AI)与未来生活”为主题的活动。 【详解】1.词汇积累 爱好者：enthusiast→fan 目的：purpose→goal 激发：stimulate→motivate 欣赏：enjoy→admire 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Learning that you are a great enthusiast of artificial intelligence, I’m writing to invite you to it. 拓展句：Since you are a great enthusiast of artificial intelligence, I’m writing to invite you to it. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that you are a great enthusiast of artificial intelligence, I’m writing to invite you to it. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] The purpose of the event is to stimulate students’ interest in technological. (运用了不定式作表语) Passage（4） （2025高三·北京大兴·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim给你发邮件寻问你打算如何渡过即将到来的暑假。请用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1.假期安排； 2.说明其理由。 注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, I’m glad to hear from you. After the college entrance examination, I plan to have a colorful summer vacation. First, I’ll travel to some beautiful places to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. This can help me relieve the stress from the exam. Also, I want to learn a new skill which can develop my hobbies, such as playing a musical instrument or cooking. I think it’s a good way to enrich my life. Finally, I’ll read some interesting books to expand my knowledge. I believe this summer vacation will be very fulfilling and enjoyable. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim回复一封邮件，告知他打算如何渡过即将到来的暑假。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad→pleased 首先：first→above all 排遣：relieve→release 愉快的：enjoyable→cheerful 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：First, I’ll travel to some beautiful places to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. This can help me relieve the stress from the exam. 拓展句：First, I’ll travel to some beautiful places to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery, which can help me relieve the stress from the exam. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Also, I want to learn a new skill which can develop my hobbies, such as playing a musical instrument or cooking. (运用了which引导的定语从句) [高分句型2] I believe this summer vacation will be very fulfilling and enjoyable. (运用了省略that的宾语从句) Passage（5） （24-25高三上·北京朝阳·期中）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim在社交媒体上看到了含有流行语“Beijing, city or not city, ah?”的短视频。这些短视频生动展现了北京的独特活力。Jim对此很感兴趣，发来邮件询问相关情况。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1. 介绍北京的活力； 2. 简要说明理由。 注意：1. 词数100 左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词: 有活力的 vibrant Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, I’ve also noticed that videos using the catchphrase “Beijing, city or not city, ah?” have gone viral on social media, and I’d like to share more about how vibrant Beijing is. I think Nanluoguxiang perfectly embodies the vitality of Beijing. As you stroll through its narrow alleys, you’ll be greeted by a wide variety of cafés, bookstores, bars and boutique shops, each providing its own lively atmosphere. The buzz of conversation, the smell of freshly brewed coffee, and the laughter from people enjoying their time out make Nanluoguxiang a popular destination for both locals and visitors. This hutong is not just a place to shop or dine, it’s a vibrant community where people immerse themselves in the rich cultural heritage of Beijing. Come experience it! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。外国好友Jim在社交媒体上看到了含有流行语“Beijing, city or not city, ah?”的短视频。这些短视频生动展现了北京的独特活力，Jim对此很感兴趣，发来邮件询问相关情况，要求考生李华给其回信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 注意到：see→ notice 体现：reflect  → embody 欢迎，迎接：welcome →greet 使沉浸（于）：bury→ immerse 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Come experience it! 拓展句：I hope you can come and experience it! 【点睛】【高分句型1】As you stroll through its narrow alleys, you’ll be greeted by a wide variety of cafés, bookstores, bars and boutique shops, each providing its own lively atmosphere（运用了as引导的时间状语从句） 【高分句型2】 I’d like to share more about how vibrant Beijing is.（运用了how引导的宾语从句） Passage（1） （2024·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)建议投稿内容； (2)就以上建议简要说明理由。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article. To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view. Looking forward to reading your article! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 很好的：great →wonderful 成就：achievement→ accomplishment 建议：suggestion →advice 此外：In addition → what’s more 2.句式拓展 句式变换 原句：It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. 拓展句：It’s great to hear what you’re planning to write about is China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. 【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句） Passage（2） （2023·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)活动形式； (2)活动内容。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim， ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”. Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：suggestion→tip 提供：offer→provide 开展：carry out→conduct 主题：theme→topic 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. 拓展句：Since you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) Passage（3） （2022·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因； 2．交流时间和其他相关事项。 注意：1．词数100左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, How’s everything? I’m writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing. Our classmates seem to be weak in organisation. Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay? The talk will last about an hour, and you can decide on a date at your convenience. Please let me know which platform you’ll use. It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份电子邮件，邀请英国好友Jim为班级做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流 【详解】1.词汇积累 最近好吗：How’s everything → How’s it going 提供、给予：give → offer / provide 不擅长：be weak in → be bad at / be poor in 建议：suggestion → advice 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I’m writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing. 拓展句：I’m writing to ask if it is convenient for you to offer us an online talk on English writing. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay?(运用了疑问词+不定式作宾语) 【高分句型2】It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句) 7 / 10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 大题08 书面表达 1. 紧扣社会热点与时代背景 作文题目常结合当年重大事件或国家发展主题。例如： 2020年：两道作文均围绕疫情，涉及“推荐外教”和“居家学习自律性调研”； 2024年：以新中国成立75周年为背景，建议外国友人撰写中国发展成就（如经济、科技、环保、文化等）。 其他高频主题包括：传统文化传承、家国情怀、科技前沿（如AI、5G）、环境保护、青少年成长与责任等。 2. 虚拟人物“李华”的延续性 北京卷长期以“红星中学李华”为虚拟身份，要求考生以学生视角完成应用文或情景作文，贴近校园生活与社会实践。 3. 国际化视角与跨文化交流 常涉及中外交流场景，如向外国友人介绍中国、解决跨文化问题（如推荐外教、解释文化现象）。 （2025高三·北京房山·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国朋友Jim获悉你校近期举办了主题为“劳动光荣”(All Labour Is Glorious)的活动，他发来邮件询问相关情况。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1. 活动的内容; 2. 活动的意义。 注意：1. 词数100左右; 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim， ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 一、审题与结构规划 1. 精准审题，明确要求 北京高考作文常考应用文（书信、通知）和议论文。审题时需明确文体、写作目的、对象及核心要求，避免偏题。例如，议论文需在开头明确观点，应用文需注意格式规范（如书信的称呼、结尾署名）。 列提纲：用中文或英文草拟文章框架，确保逻辑清晰。例如，议论文可采用“总-分-总”结构，应用文按“背景-细节-总结”展开。 2. 合理分段与详略搭配 议论文分引言、主体（2-3段）、结论；应用文按功能分段落（如建议信分问题描述、建议措施、期望效果）。每段需有明确的主题句，支持句以具体例子或数据展开。 过渡词使用：如“firstly, moreover, however”等，增强段落间逻辑性。 二、语言表达与素材积累 1. 词汇与短语的精准运用 使用高频话题词汇（如环保类“sustainable development”、科技类“artificial intelligence”）和短语搭配（如“take measures to”“contribute to”），避免重复。推荐掌握“高中英语1.5万考点”中的高频词组，覆盖考试中98%的短语需求。 同义词替换：如“important”可替换为“crucial”“significant”，提升语言丰富度。 2. 句式多样化与语法准确性 混合使用简单句、并列句、复合句，避免单一结构。例如，用倒装句（Not only...but also...）或强调句（It is...that...）增加亮点。 重点检查时态、主谓一致、冠词等易错点，可通过工具如Grammarly辅助修改。 三、逻辑与内容深度 1. 论据充分，观点明确 议论文需提供具体例子（如环保议题引用“碳达峰”政策）或数据支持观点，避免空洞论述。应用文需细节具体，如建议信中的措施应具可操作性。 辩证思维：讨论争议性话题时（如“是否延长假期”），可从利弊两方面分析，并提出折中方案。 2. 开头与结尾设计 开头可用引言、反问或现象描述吸引注意，如：“With the rapid development of technology, artificial intelligence has become a heated topic...”。 结尾呼应开头，总结观点或提出呼吁，如：“In conclusion, only through joint efforts can we build a greener future.”。 四、书写规范与细节优化 1. 卷面整洁与书写工整 使用0.7mm签字笔，字母圆润清晰，避免连笔。段落间留空，增强可读性。 控制字数：议论文建议120-150词，应用文80-100词，避免超出要求。 2. 检查与修改 通读检查语法错误、拼写错误及逻辑漏洞。重点关注过渡词是否缺失、段落衔接是否自然。 Passage（1） （2025高三·北京顺义·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友 Jim 近期将来中国旅游，他对北京中轴线很感兴趣，想安排一天游玩，向你寻求游览建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1. 简要介绍北京中轴线; 2. 游览建议及理由。 注意：1. 词数100左右; 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数; 3. 提示词：北京中轴线 Beijing Central Axis。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage（2） （2025高三·北京朝阳·一模）假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你校外籍老师Jim计划不久回国，他想带回一份具有中国传统文化特色的礼物送给妈妈，写信向你咨询，请你给他回复邮件。内容包括： 1. 推荐礼物的名称及推荐理由； 2. 向他家人表示祝愿并祝他旅途愉快。 注意：1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage（1） （2025高三·北京·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在你的朋友圈看到你校高三年级开展了“勇攀高峰，青春无悔”（Aim High，Give It All）的长城主题活动，很感兴趣，发来邮件询问。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 该活动的相关信息（如时间、内容. . . ）；2. 你参加该活动的感受。 注意： 1. 词数100左右；    2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage（2） （2025高三·北京·二模）假定你是李华，从小练习国画，你的英国朋友Jim邀请你参加主题为Amazing Nature的青少年画展。请给他回复一封邮件，表示同意参加，内容包括： 1．感谢邀请； 2．作品简介。 注意：1．词数100左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage（3） （2025高三·北京通州·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校科技社团将要组织一次以“人工智能(AI)与未来生活”为主题的活动，请你用英文给你校交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加，内容包括： 1．活动时间和地点； 2．活动目的和内容。 注意：1．词数 100左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage（4） （2025高三·北京大兴·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim给你发邮件寻问你打算如何渡过即将到来的暑假。请用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1.假期安排； 2.说明其理由。 注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage（5） （24-25高三上·北京朝阳·期中）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim在社交媒体上看到了含有流行语“Beijing, city or not city, ah?”的短视频。这些短视频生动展现了北京的独特活力。Jim对此很感兴趣，发来邮件询问相关情况。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1. 介绍北京的活力； 2. 简要说明理由。 注意：1. 词数100 左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词: 有活力的 vibrant Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage（1） （2024·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)建议投稿内容； (2)就以上建议简要说明理由。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage（2） （2023·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)活动形式； (2)活动内容。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim， ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua Passage（3） （2022·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因； 2．交流时间和其他相关事项。 注意：1．词数100左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 7 / 10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$