专题03 说明文(事物、问题方法和方位介绍)-【妙笔生花】2025年中考英语写作常考文体提分秘籍

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2025年中考英语写作常考文体讲练提分秘籍 专题03 说明文(事物、问题方法和方位介绍) 【题型分析】 说明文是中考英语书面表达比较常见的一种体裁,其特点是对事物或做事情的方法进行客观介绍。 其主要命题形式为图表式作文,有时也以图画式和提纲式作文来呈现写作材料。从内容上大致可分为三个类型:事物介绍、问题方法介绍、路线、方位介绍等。 写作特点:语言要简明扼要,通俗易懂,说明过程讲究层次性和条理性。 时态与人称:这种文体通常用第三人称,时态以一般现在时为主。 英语说明文的主要目的是解释、描述或阐明某个事物或现象的特征、性质、原理、功能、原因或影响等。为了达到这个目的,英语说明文通常需要遵循一定的结构。 写说明文宜采用三段式:第一段主要介绍要说明的对象及说明的目的; 第二段说明事物的主要特征或做事情的方法步骤; 第三段进行总结概括。时态通常用一般现在时。 【写作方法】 写作时应遵循以下几个步骤: 1.仔细审题,明确说明对象,抓住要说明的事物或事理的主要特征。 2.选择合理的说明顺序(时间顺序、空间顺序或逻辑顺序)分层次进行说明,注意条理清晰。 3.选择恰当的说明方法,比如定义法、举例法、比较法和细节描述法等,不要遗漏主要内容。 4.根据说明顺序及内容确定过渡词和恰当的句型结构。文字应客观、简洁、明了,不要追求华丽和加入太多个人观点。 (一)事物说明文 要写好事物说明文应注意以下几点: 1. 要善于抓住事物的特征 介绍事物,一定要抓住事物的特征。所谓特征,就是这一事物区别与其他事物的标志。只有抓住了事物的特征,才能将其状貌、性质、成因、功能和意义等说的明白、清楚。这种写作方法尤其适用于描写大家所熟悉的而又具有新的、与众不同的特征的事物。 2. 要遵循一定的顺序 介绍一件事物,目的是让读者清楚地了解事物本身的特点、性质以及用途等,因此更需要条理清楚。我们可以按以下三类顺序说明事物: (1)时间顺序,即按事物的发生、发展的先后顺序进行说明。 (2)空间顺序,即按事物空间位置的顺序,由上至下,由近及远或由里至外地进行说明。 (3)逻辑顺序,即按人们认识事物的规律进行说明,如由概括到具体,由整体到部分,由现象到本质,由表及里,由原因到结果,由主要到次要,由特点到用途等。 3. 运用恰当的语言 介绍事物,文字要力求简洁、明白、准确。除讲究语言平实准确的前提下,我们还可以运用描写的方法,来增添文章的可读性。 模板① (事物) is / lies (地理位置) . It has/ is (特征) . There are many places of interest here, for example, (景点介绍) . There are also many (人们的活动、风俗等) . I hope/ think (看法和感受) . 模板② The table below shows that (说明问题或现象) . (数据) percent (现象一) . (数据) percent (现象二) . (数据) percent (现象三) . In my opinion (自己的观点或感受) . (二)问题方法介绍说明文 常见的方式、方法说明文有学习方法指导、产品使用说明、操作程序介绍、计划安排等。 【常用单词】 1. 表示建议:should, had better do, suggest, advice, …is a good way… 2. 表示步骤:first of all, at last, and then, after that… 3. 表示计划:plan / prepare for/ to do, be going to, will… 【常用句型】 1. With the rapidly growing popularity of… 随着……的快速普及…… 2. It is quite clear that… 十分清楚的是…… 3. There are some reasons for … 关于……有以下理由。 4. A recent survey suggests that… 最近的一项调查显示…… 5. All we can do is to … 我们所能做的就是…… 【作文模板二 问题方法介绍】  In recent days, there has been a problem , which is becoming more and more serious.(说明问题及其现状) To begin with, __________________. What’ s more, __________________.(进一步阐释现状)We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, __________________. For another thing, ________. Finally,__________________.(列举解决该问题的方法) Personally, I believe that __________________/Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because __________________.(结尾段,归纳信心及理由) (3) 路线、方位介绍说明文 【写作素材】 一).介绍地理位置(location) be located in… be situated in… stretches itself lazily along lie in… 坐落于……脚下/顶部…stands at the foot of/ on the top of… 二).介绍人口(population): …has a large population of…, (a city) with a population of… 三).介绍面积(area) has/covers an area of…square kilometers (a city) with an area of…square kilometers the size of our city is … 四)介绍历史history …has a long history (of …years) with a long history (of …years) has witnessed too much coming and going in history 五)介绍交通transportation 交通便利…has convenient transportation (a city) with convenient transportation both on land and water 坐汽车、火车、飞机到… take a bus, a train or a plane to… go to …by bus/train/plane 六)介绍经济economy 经济迅速发展…economy has been developing rapidly 多次进入全国经济十强城市 …has been listed among the top ten strongest cities in economy several times 七)名胜古迹places of interest/ historical spots 1)The places around our city are rich in natural resources. 2)The city, known as…, attracts millions of visitors from all over the world. 3)The city is well-known / famous for its…/as… 4)The city is home to … 5) … is a must-see for tourists, as… 八)介绍天气 1.There is a variety of climate ( warm, dry, humid, cold, sunny, stormy, rainy…) 2.The average temperature of Hong Kong is about 22C . The rainy season is between May and July. 九).Surroundings (周边环境) 1) stands, 2) surrounded by, 3) faces… 4)with…on its east/west/left/right 5))at the back of在……的后面 6)in front of在……的前面 7)in the north of在……的北部(内部) 8)on the south of在……的南方(接壤) 9)to the east of在……的东面(相离) 【写作模板】 Located in the __________________(方位), _______________(某地)covers an area of_______________________(面积). Entering _______________(某地), you can see a big flower bed in front of you, and _____________________(建筑一)on your left. Walking on further, you’ll find_____________________(建筑二). ______________________(方位介词短语),there is__________(地点二). Behind it, there lies__________________(地点二). All the buildings are surrounding by trees and flowers. It’s really a beautiful school. 话题范文 1.假如你是李华,你在英语学习上遇到一些困难,打算向外教Ms. Miller求助。请你给她写一封邮件,提前沟通相关事宜。邮件须包含以下内容: 要求 : 1.格式正确,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整、规范; 2.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等); 3.词数:不少于70。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.你校将举办一次户外活动,为了更好地开展这次活动,校英语社团正在向学生征集意见。假设你是李华,请根据表格内容写一篇短文 (先介绍你喜欢的户外活动,再说明理由,最后就活动安排提出合理的建议),向社团投稿。 写作要点 参考句型 1. What outdoor activity do you like? We’d better... Maybe we can... It’ll be better if... ... 2. Why do you like it? 3. How do you arrange (安排) it? (when, where, what to do...) 要求: ①短文应包括提示内容中的所有要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥; ②不能出现真实的人名和地名; ③词数80词左右,短文开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Sir, I’m happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity in our school. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope my suggestions help. 3.你即将参加学校Less Stress, Better Life主题征文活动。请根据以下内容提示问题,用英文来描述你是如何从睡眠、沟通、课余时间安排来减轻压力的。 内容提示问题: How do you make sure of enough sleep? Who do you usually communicate with? Why? What do you do in your spare time? Something more about it. 注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数 100次左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。 Less Stress, Better Life  As for being less stressed out, I have something to say. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.你校将举办一次户外活动,为了更好地开展这次活动,校英语社团正在向学生征集意见。假设你是李华,请根据表格内容写一篇短文(先介绍你喜欢的户外活动,再说明理由,最后就活动安排提出合理的建议),向社团投稿。 写作要点 参考句型 1. What outdoor activity do you like? We’d better... Maybe we can ... It’ll be better if... ... 2. Why do you like it? 3. How do you arrange (安排) it? (when, where, what to do ...) 要求: ①短文应包括提示内容中的所有要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥; ②不能出现真实的人名和地名; ③词数80词左右,短文开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Sir, I’m happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity in our school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope my suggestions help. Yours, Li Hua 5.你的美国朋友 John计划暑假来中国旅游。请你根据以下图示, 用英语在 QQ 中给他留言,介绍并推荐我国南方城市福建,词数 100 词左右。 1. Location (位置) southeast of China 2. Capital city Fuzhou 3. Population over 38 million 4. Environment air, mountains... 5. Places of interest, Mount Wuyi, Gulang Island... 6. Others... 要求: 1.必须包含所有提示信息,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数; 2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范; 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名,校名及提示信息以外的地名。 Hi, John, I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I’d like to invite you to our southern city—Fujian for a visit. Fujian lies _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6.学校英文网站最近正在举行主题为“My favorite invention”的征文比赛。假设你是王华,打算参加这次比赛。请根据以下内容提示,写一篇英语短文,不少于80词。 light bulb Inventor Thomas Edison,美国发明家 Time 1879年10月21日 Material 玻璃和金属 Use 照明,让人们在夜晚工作或学习成为可能 Development 节能(save energy),环保,便宜 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7.一个月后,你即将结束初中学习,迎来期盼已久的暑假。请根据以下提示,为你的暑假制定一个休息和学习的假期计划。 1. What are you going to do in the summer vacation? 2. Why will you do it or them? 3. How will you prepare for your senior high school? Something more about it. 注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100词左右;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。 My Vacation Plan Our summer vacation is coming. I have many things to do. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8.假设你是李平,请对你的笔友Jim的邮件进行回复。 Hi, Li Ping! Senior high school entrance examination is coming. I have a lot of stress. I don’t want to eat anything. I can’t sleep well at night. I always feel tired. I can’t listen to my teacher carefully. I’m afraid of the exams. What should I do? I am looking forward for your answers. Thank you. Yours, Jim 要求: (1)请从饮食、运动、学习三个方面给出建议; (2)词数80词左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数; (3)文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名等信息。 Dear Jim, I’m sorry to hear that you have some problems now. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ping 9.毕业在即,为了了解同学们中考结束后两周内的计划,你校就此开展了一次问卷调查。假设你是李华,请你根据下表中的信息,给你的外国笔友 Tom 写一封英文电子邮件,并告诉他你的计划。 Activities Reasons 1. learn to make a dish                              2. learn to sing a song 3. learn to do a sport                                 4. practice handwriting 5. travel with classmates                          6. read a book 7. learn paper cutting                               8. stay with families 要求: 1. 你的邮件至少包含表格中提到的两项; 2. 文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名; 3. 词数80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, How are you going? Graduation is coming. Our school did a survey about our plans in two weeks after high school entrance examination. I’m writing to tell you mine. My plan is to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 10.Andy康复出院,医生嘱咐他仍需休养一段时间。假如你是Jim,为体现同学之间的关爱互助,请给他写封信,告诉他你能为他做些什么。 内容要点如下: 1. 得知Andy出院时,你的心情; 2. 为了舒缓Andy的情绪、尽快恢复健康回校上课,你能做哪些事; 3. 你的祝福和希望。 注意: 1. 词数80—100,开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数; 2. 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。 Dear Andy, I heard that you were at home now. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Jim 11.近年来,中国在全球舞台上展现出了令人瞩目的进步与变革。校园文化节即将到来,你所在的学校将举行以“Proud of My Motherland”为题的英语演讲比赛。假设你是李华,请你结合以下图文提示,写一篇英语演讲稿,简要阐述中国这些年在环境、科技以及传播中国文化等方面的发展与变化,并谈谈你的感受。 注意事项: 1.必须包含所给要点,可适当发挥; 2.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范; 3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名; 4.词数80词左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。 Proud of My Motherland Good morning, everyone. It’s my great honor to give a speech here. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for listening. 12.“保护文化遗产,守望精神家园”。上周末你校举办了“中国传统文化周”活动,请你为校广播台英文栏目写一篇活动报道,题目是Traditional Chinese Culture Week。内容包括: 1. 活动目的; 2. 活动内容(至少介绍两项活动); 3. 参与者的反应及其评价。 Traditional Chinese Culture Week ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13.你同学李华设计的“老年人助手机器人(Elderly Assistant Robot)”在“福建省科普创新比赛”中获奖。假定你是一名校园小记者,请你根据下列提示写一则新闻报道,介绍这款机器人的外观、功能并表达看法。词数80左右。 Look tall, cute, ... Functions give medicine, … do housework, … communicate with, … Opinions not replace, care the elderly (老年人), ... 注意事项: 1.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥; 2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名; 3.词数80左右。 Li Hua, a student from Fujian Province has won a prize in the Science Popularization and Innovation Competition with a creative elderly assistant robot. Here is a report about this robot. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14.你校学生会策划了主题为“Walk for Trees” 的十公里徒步活动。假设你是学生会成员,请写一篇英语短文,在校英语报上介绍该活动的内容、益处并给出相关建议。 内容要点提示如下: WALK FOR TREES Activities Benefits (益处) walk for 10 kilometres Raise money to plant more trees . . . Be good for health . . . Suggestions Wear comfortable shoes . . . 注意: 1. 表格中的内容要点必须使用,可以适当发挥;   2. 文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息 (人名和校名); 3. 词数:120左右。短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。 参考首句:On May 6th, we will have an activity called Walk for Trees. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15.年夜饭是中国文化中最重要的团圆饭。假定你是李华,请你以“Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve”为题,并结合以下图片提示,向你的外国笔友Mike介绍你自己家乡年夜饭的菜式和寓意,并邀请他明年来你家吃年夜饭。80词左右。 注意事项: (1) 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; (2) 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范; (3) 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 a symbol of wealth prosperity (繁荣) in the new year … Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve Dear Mike, I’d like to share with you something about the family dinner on Spring Festival Eve. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 16.随着中国文化的发展,越来越多的年轻人喜爱上了中国文化,并用中国文化中的特定元素与潮流的外型相结合,吸引了国内外的关注。假如你是深圳某一所国际学校的学生李华,你校将举办 China-Chic Cultural Festival(国潮文化节),用英文给他写一封邀请信。 内容包括: 1. 活动时间:6月16日下午2:00 2. 活动地点:学校操场 3. 活动内容: ①欣赏传统节目表演(京剧和武术表演); ②参加中华民俗活动(彩灯制作和剪纸); ③……(至少写一点) 4. 活动意义:①……;②……(至少写两点) 注意: 5. 词数为80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数); 6. 要点齐全,可适当增加细节; 7. 不得出现真实姓名和校名; 8. 条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯。 参考词汇:folk customs民俗;colorful lanterns彩灯;paper cuttings剪纸;martial art武术 Dear Jim, Here is good news for you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 17.为了调动同学们的学习积极性、提高学生的创造力,我校正在开展“师生同携手,作业我创新”主题活动,号召同学们设计出自己喜欢的,兼具趣味性、实效性、创新性的课后作业。请你结合英语学科的学习体验,设计三项作业。下面是你的“创新作业设计表”,请根据你自己的完整设计,以“My Homework, My Idea“为题,写一篇短文,阐述你设计的英语作业内容、设计意图和作用。 作业内容 设计意图和作用 Prepare for an English speech To express yourself in class, be more confident Draw a mind map To review English notes, … … … 写作要求: 1.内容必须包含给出的所有信息,并适当发挥; 2.结构完整,语句流畅,意思清楚、连贯; 3.使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构,书写规范; 4.文中不得透露个人信息,否则不予评分; 5.词数100左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。 My Homework, My Idea As students, we sometimes feel it boring to do homework every day, so doing creative homework can make us happier and more interested in English. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 18.中华文化源远流长,博大精深。传统文化有多种表现形式,如剪纸、国画、书法、古诗、传统服饰、传统节日等。假如你是李华,你校公众号计划做关于“传统文化”的系列推送。请你用英文给公众号投稿,谈谈你最喜欢的传统文化的表现形式是什么,原因是什么,以及你打算如何将传统文化传播到世界。 提示词语:paper cutting, calligraphy(书法), poem, symbol, treasure 提示问题: ·What’s your favorite form of traditional Chinese culture? ·Why do you like it? ·What can you do to spread traditional Chinese culture to the world? Traditional Chinese culture has a long history and it includes many excellent forms. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 22 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$ 2025年中考英语写作常考文体讲练提分秘籍 专题03 说明文(事物、问题方法和方位介绍) 【题型分析】 说明文是中考英语书面表达比较常见的一种体裁,其特点是对事物或做事情的方法进行客观介绍。 其主要命题形式为图表式作文,有时也以图画式和提纲式作文来呈现写作材料。从内容上大致可分为三个类型:事物介绍、问题方法介绍、路线、方位介绍等。 写作特点:语言要简明扼要,通俗易懂,说明过程讲究层次性和条理性。 时态与人称:这种文体通常用第三人称,时态以一般现在时为主。 英语说明文的主要目的是解释、描述或阐明某个事物或现象的特征、性质、原理、功能、原因或影响等。为了达到这个目的,英语说明文通常需要遵循一定的结构。 写说明文宜采用三段式:第一段主要介绍要说明的对象及说明的目的; 第二段说明事物的主要特征或做事情的方法步骤; 第三段进行总结概括。时态通常用一般现在时。 【写作方法】 写作时应遵循以下几个步骤: 1.仔细审题,明确说明对象,抓住要说明的事物或事理的主要特征。 2.选择合理的说明顺序(时间顺序、空间顺序或逻辑顺序)分层次进行说明,注意条理清晰。 3.选择恰当的说明方法,比如定义法、举例法、比较法和细节描述法等,不要遗漏主要内容。 4.根据说明顺序及内容确定过渡词和恰当的句型结构。文字应客观、简洁、明了,不要追求华丽和加入太多个人观点。 (一)事物说明文 要写好事物说明文应注意以下几点: 1. 要善于抓住事物的特征 介绍事物,一定要抓住事物的特征。所谓特征,就是这一事物区别与其他事物的标志。只有抓住了事物的特征,才能将其状貌、性质、成因、功能和意义等说的明白、清楚。这种写作方法尤其适用于描写大家所熟悉的而又具有新的、与众不同的特征的事物。 2. 要遵循一定的顺序 介绍一件事物,目的是让读者清楚地了解事物本身的特点、性质以及用途等,因此更需要条理清楚。我们可以按以下三类顺序说明事物: (1)时间顺序,即按事物的发生、发展的先后顺序进行说明。 (2)空间顺序,即按事物空间位置的顺序,由上至下,由近及远或由里至外地进行说明。 (3)逻辑顺序,即按人们认识事物的规律进行说明,如由概括到具体,由整体到部分,由现象到本质,由表及里,由原因到结果,由主要到次要,由特点到用途等。 3. 运用恰当的语言 介绍事物,文字要力求简洁、明白、准确。除讲究语言平实准确的前提下,我们还可以运用描写的方法,来增添文章的可读性。 模板① (事物) is / lies (地理位置) . It has/ is (特征) . There are many places of interest here, for example, (景点介绍) . There are also many (人们的活动、风俗等) . I hope/ think (看法和感受) . 模板② The table below shows that (说明问题或现象) . (数据) percent (现象一) . (数据) percent (现象二) . (数据) percent (现象三) . In my opinion (自己的观点或感受) . (二)问题方法介绍说明文 常见的方式、方法说明文有学习方法指导、产品使用说明、操作程序介绍、计划安排等。 【常用单词】 1. 表示建议:should, had better do, suggest, advice, …is a good way… 2. 表示步骤:first of all, at last, and then, after that… 3. 表示计划:plan / prepare for/ to do, be going to, will… 【常用句型】 1. With the rapidly growing popularity of… 随着……的快速普及…… 2. It is quite clear that… 十分清楚的是…… 3. There are some reasons for … 关于……有以下理由。 4. A recent survey suggests that… 最近的一项调查显示…… 5. All we can do is to … 我们所能做的就是…… 【作文模板二 问题方法介绍】  In recent days, there has been a problem , which is becoming more and more serious.(说明问题及其现状) To begin with, __________________. What’ s more, __________________.(进一步阐释现状)We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, __________________. For another thing, ________. Finally,__________________.(列举解决该问题的方法) Personally, I believe that __________________/Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because __________________.(结尾段,归纳信心及理由) (3) 路线、方位介绍说明文 【写作素材】 一).介绍地理位置(location) be located in… be situated in… stretches itself lazily along lie in… 坐落于……脚下/顶部…stands at the foot of/ on the top of… 二).介绍人口(population): …has a large population of…, (a city) with a population of… 三).介绍面积(area) has/covers an area of…square kilometers (a city) with an area of…square kilometers the size of our city is … 四)介绍历史history …has a long history (of …years) with a long history (of …years) has witnessed too much coming and going in history 五)介绍交通transportation 交通便利…has convenient transportation (a city) with convenient transportation both on land and water 坐汽车、火车、飞机到… take a bus, a train or a plane to… go to …by bus/train/plane 六)介绍经济economy 经济迅速发展…economy has been developing rapidly 多次进入全国经济十强城市 …has been listed among the top ten strongest cities in economy several times 七)名胜古迹places of interest/ historical spots 1)The places around our city are rich in natural resources. 2)The city, known as…, attracts millions of visitors from all over the world. 3)The city is well-known / famous for its…/as… 4)The city is home to … 5) … is a must-see for tourists, as… 八)介绍天气 1.There is a variety of climate ( warm, dry, humid, cold, sunny, stormy, rainy…) 2.The average temperature of Hong Kong is about 22C . The rainy season is between May and July. 九).Surroundings (周边环境) 1) stands, 2) surrounded by, 3) faces… 4)with…on its east/west/left/right 5))at the back of在……的后面 6)in front of在……的前面 7)in the north of在……的北部(内部) 8)on the south of在……的南方(接壤) 9)to the east of在……的东面(相离) 【写作模板】 Located in the __________________(方位), _______________(某地)covers an area of_______________________(面积). Entering _______________(某地), you can see a big flower bed in front of you, and _____________________(建筑一)on your left. Walking on further, you’ll find_____________________(建筑二). ______________________(方位介词短语),there is__________(地点二). Behind it, there lies__________________(地点二). All the buildings are surrounding by trees and flowers. It’s really a beautiful school. 话题范文 1.假如你是李华,你在英语学习上遇到一些困难,打算向外教Ms. Miller求助。请你给她写一封邮件,提前沟通相关事宜。邮件须包含以下内容: 要求 : 1.格式正确,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整、规范; 2.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等); 3.词数:不少于70。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Ms. Miller, Hello! This is Li Hua, one of your students in the English class. I’m writing to yot because I am having some problems with my English study and I hope you can help me. I find it really hard to express myself in English, especially in public. I often make mistakes in grammar when I speak English. And I feel like I don’t have enough words to express myself well. I really need your help. Can we meet at 4 p. m. this Tuesday in your office? Is that good for you? If not, please let me know. Thank you very much for your time and help, Ms. Miller. I’m looking forward to meeting you. Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一封电子邮件; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:学生向老师诉说英语学习的困难并请求帮助。 [写作步骤] 第一步,开头表明身份和写信目的。 第二步,中间具体阐述英语学习中遇到的表达和语法等问题。 第三步,结尾提出希望在特定时间和地点与老师见面,若不方便请老师告知。 [亮点词汇] ①express表达 ②especially尤其;特别 ③enough足够的 [高分句型] ①I find it really hard to express myself in English, especially in public.(使用“find+it+adj.+to do sth.”结构,it作形式宾语,真正的宾语是后面的动词不定式短语。) ②I’m looking forward to meeting you.(“look forward to doing sth.”为固定短语,“期待做某事”。) 2.你校将举办一次户外活动,为了更好地开展这次活动,校英语社团正在向学生征集意见。假设你是李华,请根据表格内容写一篇短文 (先介绍你喜欢的户外活动,再说明理由,最后就活动安排提出合理的建议),向社团投稿。 写作要点 参考句型 1. What outdoor activity do you like? We’d better... Maybe we can... It’ll be better if... ... 2. Why do you like it? 3. How do you arrange (安排) it? (when, where, what to do...) 要求: ①短文应包括提示内容中的所有要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥; ②不能出现真实的人名和地名; ③词数80词左右,短文开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Sir, I’m happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity in our school. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope my suggestions help. 【答案】范文: Dear sir, I’m happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity in our school. I like climbing mountains with my classmates. We can enjoy the beauty of nature. We can also make friends and help each other on the way. To make the activity more interesting, I hope to go to East Mountain on June 25th. Since it’s a little far, we’d better meet at the school gate at 7:30 a.m. and go there by bus. We can collect some history stories about the famous mountain so that we can share them together. It’ll be nice if we can try some local food for lunch there. In the afternoon, we can pick up the rubbish to protect the environment. Then we can go home at 4:30 p.m. We’re sure to have great fun. Hope my suggestions help. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇应用文; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍自己喜欢的户外活动。 第二步,具体说明理由。 第三步,就活动安排提出合理的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①the beauty of nature自然之美 ②hope to do希望做某事 ③pick up拾起,捡起 [高分句型] ①Since it’s a little far, we’d better meet at the school gate at 7:30 a.m. and go there by bus. (since引导原因状语从句) ②It’ll be nice if we can try some local food for lunch there. (if引导条件状语从句) 3.你即将参加学校Less Stress, Better Life主题征文活动。请根据以下内容提示问题,用英文来描述你是如何从睡眠、沟通、课余时间安排来减轻压力的。 内容提示问题: How do you make sure of enough sleep? Who do you usually communicate with? Why? What do you do in your spare time? Something more about it. 注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数 100次左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。 Less Stress, Better Life  As for being less stressed out, I have something to say. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Less Stress, Better Life As for being less stressed out, I have something to say. Firstly, ensuring enough sleep is crucial. I stick to a regular sleep schedule, going to bed and waking up at the same time every day, which helps regulate my body’s internal clock. Secondly, communication plays a vital role in stress management. I usually talk to my close friends and family members because they provide support and understanding. Sharing my thoughts and feelings with them often brings relief. In my spare time, I engage in activities that I enjoy, such as reading, painting, or taking a walk in nature. These activities help me relax and recharge. Additionally, practicing mindfulness and meditation has been beneficial in reducing stress. In conclusion, managing stress through proper sleep, effective communication, and enjoyable activities leads to a better life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:根据题干中的提示,介绍如何通过睡眠、沟通、课余时间安排来减轻压力,适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步,引出话题; 第二步,从睡眠、沟通、课余时间安排等方面来描述如何减轻压力; 第三步,总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①stick to坚持 ②internal clock生物钟 ③engage in参与 [高分句型] ①I stick to a regular sleep schedule, going to bed and waking up at the same time every day,which helps regulate my body’s internal clock. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②Sharing my thoughts and feelings with them often brings relief. (动名词作主语) 4.你校将举办一次户外活动,为了更好地开展这次活动,校英语社团正在向学生征集意见。假设你是李华,请根据表格内容写一篇短文(先介绍你喜欢的户外活动,再说明理由,最后就活动安排提出合理的建议),向社团投稿。 写作要点 参考句型 1. What outdoor activity do you like? We’d better... Maybe we can ... It’ll be better if... ... 2. Why do you like it? 3. How do you arrange (安排) it? (when, where, what to do ...) 要求: ①短文应包括提示内容中的所有要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥; ②不能出现真实的人名和地名; ③词数80词左右,短文开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Sir, I’m happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity in our school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope my suggestions help. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文: Dear Sir, I’m happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity in our school. My favorite outdoor activity is hiking. I like it because it allows me to enjoy the beauty of nature, breathe in fresh air, and also exercise my body. It’s a great way to relax and forget about school stress. We’d better choose a nearby mountain or hill for the hike, somewhere safe and scenic. Maybe we can set off early in the morning to avoid the midday heat. It’ll be better if we bring some snacks and water with us, and also a first-aid kit in case of any minor injuries. During the hike, we can have a small competition to see who reaches the top first, making it more fun and exciting. For the return journey, we should plan enough time to rest and ensure everyone is comfortable. Perhaps we can end the activity with a picnic at a scenic spot, sharing stories and laughter. Hope my suggestions help. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为投稿短文; ②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”,用于描述个人喜好、理由及建议; ③提示:写作要点已明确给出,包括喜欢的户外活动、喜欢的原因以及活动安排的建议。考生需围绕这些要点展开,注意条理清晰,适当发挥,确保内容完整且连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步,表明写作意图。通过“I’m happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity in our school.”引出自己对于学校即将举办的户外活动的积极态度,并表明自己愿意提供意见的意愿; 第二步,具体阐述写作内容。喜欢的户外活动;喜欢的原因;活动安排的建议; 第三步,书写结语。以“Hope my suggestions help.”表达希望自己的建议能对活动有所帮助的愿望,并结束全文。 [亮点词汇] ①outdoor activity 户外活动 ②enjoy the beauty of nature 欣赏自然美景 ③set off 动身,出发 ④in case of 假如,以防 ⑤first-aid kit 急救包 [高分句型] ①My favorite outdoor activity is hiking, which allows me to enjoy the beauty of nature, breathe in fresh air, and also exercise my body. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②We’d better choose a nearby mountain or hill for the hike, somewhere safe and scenic where we can fully immerse ourselves in nature. (where引导的定语从句) 5.你的美国朋友 John计划暑假来中国旅游。请你根据以下图示, 用英语在 QQ 中给他留言,介绍并推荐我国南方城市福建,词数 100 词左右。 1. Location (位置) southeast of China 2. Capital city Fuzhou 3. Population over 38 million 4. Environment air, mountains... 5. Places of interest, Mount Wuyi, Gulang Island... 6. Others... 要求: 1.必须包含所有提示信息,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数; 2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范; 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名,校名及提示信息以外的地名。 Hi, John, I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I’d like to invite you to our southern city—Fujian for a visit. Fujian lies _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hi, John, I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I’d like to invite you to our southern city—Fujian for a visit. Fujian lies in the southeast of China with Fuzhou as its capital city. It has a population of over 38 million. Because of the nice environment, it’s known as Refreshing Fujian, which attracts millions of tourists from home and abroad. If you come, you can enjoy fresh air, blue sky as well as beautiful mountains and clear rivers. Many famous places of interest like Mount Wuyi and Gulang Island are well worth visiting. Besides, you can taste various kinds of delicious food. I’m looking forward to meeting you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:一般现在时; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍福建的位置,省会及人口; 第二步,介绍福建的环境及名胜古迹; 第三步,表达美好的祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①lie in 位于 ②be known as...作为……出名 ③as well as和 [高分句型] ①Because of the nice environment, it’s known as Refreshing Fujian, which attracts millions of tourists from home and abroad.(which引导的定语从句) ②If you come, you can enjoy fresh air, blue sky as well as beautiful mountains and clear rivers.(if引导的条件状语从句) 6.学校英文网站最近正在举行主题为“My favorite invention”的征文比赛。假设你是王华,打算参加这次比赛。请根据以下内容提示,写一篇英语短文,不少于80词。 light bulb Inventor Thomas Edison,美国发明家 Time 1879年10月21日 Material 玻璃和金属 Use 照明,让人们在夜晚工作或学习成为可能 Development 节能(save energy),环保,便宜 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文: My favorite invention Hello, everyone! My name is Wang Hua. There are lots of great inventions in the world. They have changed our world a lot. However, my favorite invention is the light bulb. It was invented by Thomas Edison, a great American inventor. And it was invented on October 21, 1879. The first light bulb was made of glass and metal. It was used for providing people with light and the invention made it possible for people to work and study at night. Now the invention has been improved a lot. People are making better lighting products. They can help to save energy and protect the environment. What’s more, they are cheaper. I hope it will become more and more useful in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息,写短文介绍自己最喜欢的发明。 [写作步骤] 第一步,开门见山,点出自己最喜欢的发明是什么; 第二步,详细地介绍发明家,发明的时间、材料、用途及其发展; 第三步,提出自己的希望。 [亮点词汇] ①lots of 许多 ②be made of 由……制成 ③provide sb. with sth. 给某人提供某物 [高分句型] ①There are lots of great inventions in the world.(There be句型) ②I hope it will become more and more useful in the future.(省略that的宾语从句) 7.一个月后,你即将结束初中学习,迎来期盼已久的暑假。请根据以下提示,为你的暑假制定一个休息和学习的假期计划。 1. What are you going to do in the summer vacation? 2. Why will you do it or them? 3. How will you prepare for your senior high school? Something more about it. 注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100词左右;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。 My Vacation Plan Our summer vacation is coming. I have many things to do. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Vacation Plan    Our summer vacation is coming. I have many things to do. To have a fun and meaningful vacation, I’m going to take up a new hobby like painting to develop my creativity. In addition, I am really excited to travel with my parents, which makes me feel relaxed.     To prepare for high school, I’ll review the basic knowledge and preview the new courses. I feel confident by previewing high school knowledge so that I can fit in the new learning environment better. Meanwhile, I am quite eager to read some books. I will set my mind to make a study schedule, in the hope of ensuring that I can make good preparation for senior high school.     I’m looking forward to the summer holiday. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本题是一篇材料作文; ②时态:本文用一般将来时; ③提示:为暑假制定一个休息和学习的假期计划,需要遵照所给要求,信息覆盖全面,适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍自己的暑期计划,注意遵照所给提示,行文流畅; 第二步,介绍自己为了高中的学习和生活而做的准备,注意细节充分,三观正确; 第三步,表达期待,总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①take up a new hobby 培养一项新爱好 ②in addition 另外 ③be eager to do 迫不及待做某事 [高分句型] ①In addition, I am really excited to travel with my parents, which makes me feel relaxed.(定语从句) ②I feel confident by previewing high school knowledge so that I can fit in the new learning environment better.(目的状语从句) 8.假设你是李平,请对你的笔友Jim的邮件进行回复。 Hi, Li Ping! Senior high school entrance examination is coming. I have a lot of stress. I don’t want to eat anything. I can’t sleep well at night. I always feel tired. I can’t listen to my teacher carefully. I’m afraid of the exams. What should I do? I am looking forward for your answers. Thank you. Yours, Jim 要求: (1)请从饮食、运动、学习三个方面给出建议; (2)词数80词左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数; (3)文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名等信息。 Dear Jim, I’m sorry to hear that you have some problems now. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ping 【答案】例文 Dear Jim, I’m sorry to hear that you have some problems now. I know how you feel and I hope you can relax yourself. I’ll give you some advice. First, you should eat some fresh vegetables and fruits. They are good for your health. Second, don’t be nervous about the exam. Just try your best! If you feel tired, you can go out to do some sports. After some exercise, you will feel better. Third, don’t be afraid to ask your teachers or good friends for help. They will give you help. You should know what you are weak in and solve the problems. Everything will be OK. Come on! Yours, LiPing 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一封回复邮件,给朋友Jim提供关于缓解压力的建议。 ② 时态:文章使用“一般现在时”描述给出的建议和Jim的感受。 ③ 提示:文章从饮食、运动和学习三个方面给出具体的建议,旨在帮助Jim缓解考试压力,并鼓励他保持积极心态。 [写作步骤] 第一步,开篇表达对Jim的关心,并表示理解他的困境; 第二步,从饮食方面给出建议,帮助他保持良好的身体状态; 第三步,建议Jim进行运动来缓解疲劳并减轻压力; 第四步,鼓励Jim不要过于担心考试,鼓励他寻求帮助并解决学习中的困难; 第五步,结尾给予鼓励,表达积极向上的态度。 [亮点词汇] ① be good for 对……好 ② try one’s best 尽……的最大努力 ③ ask sb for something 向某人要某物 ④ be weak in 在……方面薄弱 ⑥ come on 加油 [高分句型] ① I know how you feel and I hope you can relax yourself. (并列句) ② If you feel tired, you can go out to do some sports. (条件状语从句) ③ You should know what you are weak in and solve the problems. (宾语从句) 9.毕业在即,为了了解同学们中考结束后两周内的计划,你校就此开展了一次问卷调查。假设你是李华,请你根据下表中的信息,给你的外国笔友 Tom 写一封英文电子邮件,并告诉他你的计划。 Activities Reasons 1. learn to make a dish                              2. learn to sing a song 3. learn to do a sport                                 4. practice handwriting 5. travel with classmates                          6. read a book 7. learn paper cutting                               8. stay with families 要求: 1. 你的邮件至少包含表格中提到的两项; 2. 文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名; 3. 词数80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, How are you going? Graduation is coming. Our school did a survey about our plans in two weeks after high school entrance examination. I’m writing to tell you mine. My plan is to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文: Dear Tom,     How are you going? Graduation is coming. Our school did a survey about our plans in two weeks after high school entrance examination. I’m writing to tell you mine.     My plan is to learn how to make a dish. When my parents are not at home, I can cook by myself. At the same time, I can cultivate my independence well. By cooking food, I can also help myself and parents eat healthily.     I also want to learn to do a sport. One of my favorite athletes is Malong, so I want to learn how to play table tennis. On the one hand, this sport can exercise my body and is good for my eye health. On the other hand, I can make more friends.     I’m looking forward to your vacation plans. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一封英文电子邮件; ②时态:时态以 “一般现在时” 为主; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、开篇点题,引出话题; 第二步、具体阐述自己的两项计划,并详细陈述理由; 第三步、最后结尾,期待对方的分享。 [亮点词汇] ①do a survey 做一个调查 ②at the same time 同时 ③On the one hand...On the other hand... 一方面……另一方面…… ④be good for...有益于…… ⑤look forward to... 期待…… [高分句型] ①When my parents are not at home, I can cook by myself.  (when引导的时间状语从句) 10.Andy康复出院,医生嘱咐他仍需休养一段时间。假如你是Jim,为体现同学之间的关爱互助,请给他写封信,告诉他你能为他做些什么。 内容要点如下: 1. 得知Andy出院时,你的心情; 2. 为了舒缓Andy的情绪、尽快恢复健康回校上课,你能做哪些事; 3. 你的祝福和希望。 注意: 1. 词数80—100,开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数; 2. 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。 Dear Andy, I heard that you were at home now. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Jim 【答案】例文 Dear Andy, I heard that you were at home now. I feel glad to know that. I also heard that the doctor told you to rest for several days at home. Don’t be worried about your schoolwork. I will help you. I will visit you after school every day and take notes for you. I’m good at English and math so I can help you with them. Besides, I will tell you everything that you need to know. Therefore, you won’t miss anything important. I hope you can get better and come back to school soon. Yours, Jim 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇书信作文; ②时态:主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”; ③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步,描述得知Andy出院时,你的心情; 第二步,阐述你能为Andy做哪些事; 第三步,表达你的祝福和希望。 [亮点词汇] ①be worried about担忧 ②take notes做笔记 ③miss错过 [高分句型] ①I also heard that the doctor told you to rest for several days at home.(that引导的宾语从句) ②Besides, I will tell you everything that you need to know.(that引导的定语从句) 11.近年来,中国在全球舞台上展现出了令人瞩目的进步与变革。校园文化节即将到来,你所在的学校将举行以“Proud of My Motherland”为题的英语演讲比赛。假设你是李华,请你结合以下图文提示,写一篇英语演讲稿,简要阐述中国这些年在环境、科技以及传播中国文化等方面的发展与变化,并谈谈你的感受。 注意事项: 1.必须包含所给要点,可适当发挥; 2.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范; 3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名; 4.词数80词左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。 Proud of My Motherland Good morning, everyone. It’s my great honor to give a speech here. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for listening. 【答案】One possible version: Hi, everyone. It’s my great honor to give a speech here. Great changes have taken place in China these years. For example, the environment has improved a lot. Clear rivers and blue sky return to our life. At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it. More and more foreigners come to China for a visit very year. What’s more, China has made great progress in its space industry. We have been successfully launched Shenzhou-19, making China’s space dream a reality. I’m proud of my motherland and I hope she’ll be better and better in the future. That’s all. Thanks for listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇演讲稿; ② 时态:文章使用“现在完成时”为主; ③ 提示:结合图文内容,简要讲述中国在环境、科技和文化传播方面的变化,并表达对祖国的自豪感;不要存在语法错误,注意上下文的衔接。 [写作步骤] 第一步,开篇表达荣幸并简述中国近年来的变化; 第二步,具体描述环境改善和文化传播等方面的进步; 第三步,讲述中国在科技领域特别是航天行业取得的成就; 第四步,总结并表达对祖国未来的美好祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①take place 发生 ②for example 例如 ③be proud of 以……为傲 ④in the future 在未来 [高分句型] ①Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it. (which引导非限制性定语从句) ②I’m proud of my motherland and I hope she’ll be better and better in the future. (and连接并列句;省略that的宾语从句) 12.“保护文化遗产,守望精神家园”。上周末你校举办了“中国传统文化周”活动,请你为校广播台英文栏目写一篇活动报道,题目是Traditional Chinese Culture Week。内容包括: 1. 活动目的; 2. 活动内容(至少介绍两项活动); 3. 参与者的反应及其评价。 Traditional Chinese Culture Week ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文: Traditional Chinese Culture Week Last weekend, our school organized the Traditional Chinese Culture Week. The purpose of this event was to make us know more about traditional Chinese culture. There were several activities. We had a paper-cutting competition. Many students cut beautiful patterns. And there was a story-telling activity about traditional Chinese myths and legends. Everyone listened carefully. The participants were very happy. They said these activities were interesting and helpful. They wanted to take part in more activities like this. This week was really wonderful and we all expect more such activities. This event was a great success and we all hope there will be more such activities in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态:时态为“一般过去时”。 ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意要点齐全,可适当补充。 [写作步骤] 第一步,表明写作意图。用“上周末,我们学校组织了中国传统文化周”引出下文介绍活动目的。 第二步,具体阐述写作内容。介绍活动内容以及参与者的反应及其评价。 第三步,书写结语。表达“我们都希望将来有更多这样的活动”,进行情感升华。 [亮点词汇] ①the purpose of ……的目的 ②competition 比赛 ③take part in 参加 [高分句型] ①The purpose of this event was to make us know more about traditional Chinese culture.(表语从句) 13.你同学李华设计的“老年人助手机器人(Elderly Assistant Robot)”在“福建省科普创新比赛”中获奖。假定你是一名校园小记者,请你根据下列提示写一则新闻报道,介绍这款机器人的外观、功能并表达看法。词数80左右。 Look tall, cute, ... Functions give medicine, … do housework, … communicate with, … Opinions not replace, care the elderly (老年人), ... 注意事项: 1.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥; 2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名; 3.词数80左右。 Li Hua, a student from Fujian Province has won a prize in the Science Popularization and Innovation Competition with a creative elderly assistant robot. Here is a report about this robot. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文     Li Hua, a student from Fujian Province has won a prize in the Science Popularization and Innovation Competition with a creative elderly assistant robot. Here is a report about this robot.     The robot is tall and looks very cute with big eyes. He looks like a friendly person, making it easier for the elderly to accept him.     The robot is of great use. First, he can give the elderly medicine on time when they are ill. He will also call for help at once if they meet danger. Besides, the robot can do some cooking and sweep the floor for the elderly, which makes their life easier. Last but not least, he is good at communicating with the elderly. He can tell stories and jokes, bringing joy and laughter into the life of the elderly.     Although robots can help us a lot, our love for the elderly can’t be replaced. Let’s take good care of the elderly with the help of robots, making sure they live happily. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,表明写作意图,介绍老年人助手机器人; 第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“外观、功能”等方面进行介绍机器人; 第三步,书写结语,提出自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①at once立刻 ②be good at擅长 ③take good care of好好照顾…… [高分句型] ①He will also call for help at once if they meet danger. (if引导条件状语从句) ②Besides, the robot can do some cooking and sweep the floor for the elderly, which makes their life easier.(which引导的非限制性定语从句) 14.你校学生会策划了主题为“Walk for Trees” 的十公里徒步活动。假设你是学生会成员,请写一篇英语短文,在校英语报上介绍该活动的内容、益处并给出相关建议。 内容要点提示如下: WALK FOR TREES Activities Benefits (益处) walk for 10 kilometres Raise money to plant more trees . . . Be good for health . . . Suggestions Wear comfortable shoes . . . 注意: 1. 表格中的内容要点必须使用,可以适当发挥;   2. 文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息 (人名和校名); 3. 词数:120左右。短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。 参考首句:On May 6th, we will have an activity called Walk for Trees. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: On May 6th, we will have an activity called Walk for Trees. To raise money to plant more trees, we will walk for kilometres. We can collect rubbish when we walk along the streets. We will make postcards by hand and sell them to make more people realise that we can do our part to make the world better. It’s a meaningful activity which can call on more people to protect our environment. And also, walking is good for our health. If we want to have a good experience, we should wear comfortable shoes. What’s more, we need to take enough water with us because it will take us at least three hours. I hope we will have a good time. 【详解】[总体分析] 题材:本文是一篇材料作文。 时态:一般现在时和一般将来时。 提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容,可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。 [写作步骤] 第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题,即将进行十公里徒步活动。 第二步,具体阐述写作内容,介绍活动内容和徒步的好处。 第三步,书写结语,给出该次活动的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①do one’s part尽自己的责任 ②What’s more更重要的是 [高分句型] If we want to have a good experience, we should wear comfortable shoes.(if引导的条件状语从句) 15.年夜饭是中国文化中最重要的团圆饭。假定你是李华,请你以“Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve”为题,并结合以下图片提示,向你的外国笔友Mike介绍你自己家乡年夜饭的菜式和寓意,并邀请他明年来你家吃年夜饭。80词左右。 注意事项: (1) 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; (2) 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范; (3) 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 a symbol of wealth prosperity (繁荣) in the new year … Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve Dear Mike, I’d like to share with you something about the family dinner on Spring Festival Eve. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文: The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve I would like to share something about the family dinner on Spring Festival Eve. It is the most important dinner in traditional Chinese culture. On Spring Festival Eve, family members get together to enjoy the dinner. There are all kinds of delicious food and drinks. Many of them usually have great meanings. For example, in my hometown, jiaozi is a symbol of wealth because of its shapes. Another dish is fish, which means prosperity in the new year. Children all like this family dinner. At dinner they receive not only best wishes but also lucky money from their parents. It is a Chinese tradition that we have kept for thousands of years. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇说明文,向外国朋友介绍中国的文化习俗; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:题干要求以“Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve”为题,向外国朋友介绍自己家乡的年夜饭,并适当地添加细节,让他们更好地了解中国丰富多样的文化习俗。 [写作步骤] 第一步,表明写作意图。借用“Spring Festival Eve”的重要性,引出重点介绍的内容; 第二步,具体阐述写作内容。包括食物的意义和活动等; 第三步,书写结语。表明“Spring Festival Eve”在我国的地位。 [亮点词汇] ①get together聚会,聚集 ②all kinds of各种各样的 ③for example例如 ④not only...but also...不但……而且…… ⑤thousands of成千上万的 [高分句型] ①Another dish is fish, which means prosperity in the new year.(which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②There are all kinds of delicious food and drinks.(There be句型) ③It is a Chinese tradition that we have kept for thousands of years.(that引导的限制性定语从句) 16.随着中国文化的发展,越来越多的年轻人喜爱上了中国文化,并用中国文化中的特定元素与潮流的外型相结合,吸引了国内外的关注。假如你是深圳某一所国际学校的学生李华,你校将举办 China-Chic Cultural Festival(国潮文化节),用英文给他写一封邀请信。 内容包括: 1. 活动时间:6月16日下午2:00 2. 活动地点:学校操场 3. 活动内容: ①欣赏传统节目表演(京剧和武术表演); ②参加中华民俗活动(彩灯制作和剪纸); ③……(至少写一点) 4. 活动意义:①……;②……(至少写两点) 注意: 5. 词数为80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数); 6. 要点齐全,可适当增加细节; 7. 不得出现真实姓名和校名; 8. 条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯。 参考词汇:folk customs民俗;colorful lanterns彩灯;paper cuttings剪纸;martial art武术 Dear Jim, Here is good news for you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Jim, Here is good news for you. With the development of Chinese culture, more and more young people have fallen in love with Chinese culture, and combined specific elements of Chinese culture with the appearance of the trend to design “national fashion items” which has attracted attention at home and abroad. Our school will hold China-Chic Cultural Festival at 2:00 p.m. on the school playground on June 16th, and I plan to invite you to join us. During this festival, we will enjoy traditional shows such as Beijing Opera and martial arts performances. We also take part in Chinese folk activities. We are beginners in making colored lanterns and paper-cutting. Finally, there will be a competition about Chinese traditional culture. The more we know about Chinese folk customs, the bigger prize we will get. We hope that through this activity, people around the world can fall in love with Chinese culture and carry forward Chinese culture. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] 题材:本文为书信作文。 时态:“一般现在时和一般将来时”为主。 提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍活动时间,地点及内容。 第二步,介绍活动意义。 [亮点词汇] ①with the development of随着……的发展 ②fall in love with爱上 ③invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事 ④take part in参加 [高分句型] ①With the development of Chinese culture, more and more young people have fallen in love with Chinese culture, and combined specific elements of Chinese culture with the appearance of the trend to design “national fashion items” which has attracted attention at home and abroad. (which引导的定语从句) ②We hope that through this activity,people around the world can fall in love with Chinese culture and carry forward Chinese culture. (that引导的宾语从句) ③The more we know about Chinese folk customs, the bigger prize we will get. (the+比较级,the+比较级句型的使用) 17.为了调动同学们的学习积极性、提高学生的创造力,我校正在开展“师生同携手,作业我创新”主题活动,号召同学们设计出自己喜欢的,兼具趣味性、实效性、创新性的课后作业。请你结合英语学科的学习体验,设计三项作业。下面是你的“创新作业设计表”,请根据你自己的完整设计,以“My Homework, My Idea“为题,写一篇短文,阐述你设计的英语作业内容、设计意图和作用。 作业内容 设计意图和作用 Prepare for an English speech To express yourself in class, be more confident Draw a mind map To review English notes, … … … 写作要求: 1.内容必须包含给出的所有信息,并适当发挥; 2.结构完整,语句流畅,意思清楚、连贯; 3.使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构,书写规范; 4.文中不得透露个人信息,否则不予评分; 5.词数100左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。 My Homework, My Idea As students, we sometimes feel it boring to do homework every day, so doing creative homework can make us happier and more interested in English. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 As students, we sometimes feel it boring to do homework every day, so doing creative homework can make us happier and more interested in English. I have many good ideas about creative English homework because English is my favorite subject. Firstly, we can prepare for an English speech. It is a good chance for us to express ourselves in class and we will be more confident if we can value the opportunity. Secondly, if we draw mind maps to review our English notes, we will remember them well. Thirdly, it’s also proud of us to make a video to introduce our traditional Chinese culture in English. We can post it online so that more foreigners can know about our great country. What’s more, we can learn to sing an English song and sing it in class. In this way, we can learn more words. I hope we can have more creative English homework in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主; ③提示:写作要点已给出,应注意不要遗漏“表格”中需要补充的内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,承接所给开头,引出主题——“我设计的创新性作业”; 第二步,从“作业内容”,“设计意图”和“作用”三方面进行具体介绍; 第三步,总结收尾,表达对“创新性作业”的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①prepare for为……做准备 ②be proud of为……感到自豪 ③What’s more此外 ④in this way用这种方式 [高分句型] ①I have many good ideas about creative English homework because English is my favorite subject.(because引导的原因状语从句) ②Secondly, if we draw mind maps to review our English notes, we will remember them well. (if引导的条件状语从句) ③I hope we can have more creative English homework in the future. (省略that的宾语从句) 18.中华文化源远流长,博大精深。传统文化有多种表现形式,如剪纸、国画、书法、古诗、传统服饰、传统节日等。假如你是李华,你校公众号计划做关于“传统文化”的系列推送。请你用英文给公众号投稿,谈谈你最喜欢的传统文化的表现形式是什么,原因是什么,以及你打算如何将传统文化传播到世界。 提示词语:paper cutting, calligraphy(书法), poem, symbol, treasure 提示问题: ·What’s your favorite form of traditional Chinese culture? ·Why do you like it? ·What can you do to spread traditional Chinese culture to the world? Traditional Chinese culture has a long history and it includes many excellent forms. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考例文 Traditional Chinese culture has a long history and it includes many excellent forms. Among them, my favourtie form of traditional Chinese culture is calligraphy. I like it because it is not only a form of art but also a way to express one’s inner world and emotions. Each stroke and every character carries the wisdom and beauty of ancient Chinese people. To spread traditional Chinese culture to the world, I plan to organize an online calligraphy exhibition. I will invite calligraphy lovers from different countries to participate and share their works. Through this platform, people can appreciate the beauty of Chinese calligraphy and understand the profound cultural connotations behind it. I believe that our traditional Chinese culture will become more and more famous in the world. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,承接短文开头,点明自己最喜欢的中华传统文化的表现形式是哪一种; 第二步,具体说明喜欢这种中华传统文化表现的原因; 第三步,介绍你打算如何将传统文化传播到世界,并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①not only…but also…不但……而且…… ②appreciate the beauty of Chinese calligraphy欣赏中国书法的美 ③the profound connotations behind it其背后深远的文化内涵 [高分句型] ①I like it because it is not only a form of art but also a way to express one’s inner world and emotions. (原因状语从句) 1 / 22 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$

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