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Section Ⅲ Integrated skills——写一篇调查报告
[文体感知]
本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于使用网络的调查报告。调查报告是一种以比较正式的风格提供信息的写作方式,属于应用文的范畴,旨在将调查结果真实、详细、有条理地呈现出来。有关调查报告的书面表达常以图表作文的形式呈现。题目往往让考生根据要求将图表信息以文字的形式进行转述。
图表类调查报告通常会采用三段式的写作模式:首段进行简单的介绍,点明调查报告的主题;第二段转述图表信息并进行分析;第三段得出结论并发表个人看法。
[常用表达]
1.首段的常用句式
I made a survey of... 我做了关于……的调查。
In order to work out/find out... , I made a survey... 为了弄明白……,我调查了……
Recently, a survey has been done about... 最近做了关于……的调查。
Recently, we’ve conducted a survey to find out... 最近我们进行了一次调查,旨在弄清楚……
2.主体段落的常用句式
As the survey/chart/diagram shows... 如调查表/图标/示意图所示……
According to the survey/chart/diagram... 根据调查表/图标/示意图……
Some students think... while others argue that... 有些同学认为……,而另一些同学则认为……
3.末段的常用句式
It can be seen/concluded that... 总之可以说……
We can make a conclusion that... 我们可以得出结论……
In conclusion... 总之……
I think that... 我觉得……
In my opinion... 在我看来……
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[典题示例]
某互联网消费调研中心对网络购物进行了调查,调查结果如下。请根据表格1所给出的信息描述人们选择网络购物的不同原因,并针对表格2中任意一个数据所反映的情况谈谈你的看法。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
表格1:网购吸引用户的几个方面
商品种类丰富
37%
商品价格合理
33%
不受时间、地域限制
30%
表格2:网购用户担心的几个方面
质量问题
55%
售后服务
27%
交易安全
18%
第一步 学会审题谋篇
写作类型
体裁:应用文——调查报告
人称时态
第三人称;一般现在时和现在完成时
写作要点
1.写作目的:利用报告发布正式信息。
2.介绍报告目的并能准确描述图表内容。
3.根据图表内容发表个人看法。
第二步 保基础分——会写基本句
1.最近进行了一次网上购物的网络调查。
Recently, a survey about online shopping has been conducted on the Internet.
2.图表1显示,37%的人觉得喜欢网点商品丰富多样。
Of all the people surveyed in Chart 1, 37% think that they like the varieties of products in online shops.
3.33%的人喜欢商品价格合理。
One third of them are in favor of the reasonable price.
4.30%的人喜欢它的便利。
30% of them prefer its convenience.
5.在表2所关注的问题中,产品质量问题引起了我的关注。
Among all the concerns in Chart 2, the quality of the products attracts my attention.
6.产品质量的比重最大,高达55%。
The quality of products accounts for as much as 55%.
7.我们网上购物前要确保商品的质量。
We should make sure the product is of good quality before making a purchase.
第三步 创设亮点——试写高级句
8.在句1和后文之间增加过渡内容。
Recently, a survey about online shopping has been conducted on the Internet. The results are as follows.
9.利用独立主格结构合并2,3,4句。
Of all the people surveyed in Chart 1, 37% think that they like the varieties of products in online shops,one third of them in favor of the reasonable price and 30% of them prefer its convenience.
10.利用定语从句合并5,6句。
Among all the concerns in Chart 2, the quality of the products,which accounts for as much as 55%, attracts my attention.
11.在第7句前增加表达个人观点的评注性状语。
Personally, we should make sure the product is of good quality before making a purchase.
第四步 衔接成篇得高分
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[参考范文]
Recently, a survey about online shopping has been conducted on the Internet. The results are as follows.
Of all the people surveyed in Chart 1, 37% think that they like the varieties of products in online shops, one third of them in favor of the reasonable price and 30% of them prefer its convenience. Among all the concerns in Chart 2, the quality of the products, which accounts for as much as 55%, attracts my attention.
Personally, we should make sure the product is of good quality before making a purchase.
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