UNIT 6 Section Ⅴ Writing——写一篇安全指南-【金版新学案】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第三册同步课堂高效讲义教师用书（外研版2019）

Section Ⅴ　Writing——写一篇安全指南 ◎ Hurricane Safety Guidelines Many people have no idea what to do when a disaster strikes.Being prepared is the best way to increase your chances of survival.Read these tips on hurricane safety so that you and your family can survive this common threat to coastal cities. Things to do before a hurricane ·Protect your property: close windows and tape them up, and bring indoors anything that could blow away. ·Make sure you have sufficient food, water, medicine and batteries for electrical appliances. ·If you cannot get home in time, find other shelter as soon as you can. Things to do during a hurricane ·Stay in the shelter. ·Stay away from windows. ·Listen to weather warnings. Things not to do during a hurricane ·Do not go outside. 学生用书第165页 ·Do not go near any glass structures. ·Do not assume the storm has passed even if the wind stops.Dangerous winds may return. ◎ 学语言 1．使用“疑问词＋动词不定式”结构，使表达简洁、明快。 2．使用so that引导目的状语从句，自然而然地引出此安全指南的目的。 3．全文基本上全部使用祈使句，表示劝告和警告，非常符合安全指南的写作语言特点。 4．使用条件状语从句对行为进行了适当、合理的假设，然后主句给出了合理的建议，表达非常诚恳。 知结构 首先：飓风安全指南的目的； 其次：飓风来临前要做的准备； 再次：飓风期间要做的事情； 最后：飓风期间不能做的事情。 [情境任务写作] 假定你是李华，请根据下列表格中的内容提示，给校报写一篇80词左右的地震安全指南。 地震 发生时 1．切勿恐慌，保持镇定。 2．室内的人应留在室内，躲到坚固的家具下面，远离玻璃或容易落下的物件。 3．在人多拥挤的地方，不要为寻找掩护或出口而奔跑。 地震 停止后 1．检查伤亡以及损毁情况，如有需要，立即寻求帮助。 2．切勿点燃火种或在现场打电话。 3．若建筑物严重损毁，余震可能使之倒塌，应尽快离开并向有关方面报告。 [仿写程序步骤] 1．一仿结构布局合理 第一段：点出哪种安全准则； 第二段：地震发生时的注意事项； 第三段：地震停止后的注意事项。 2．二仿语言规范美观 ①为避免地震对人们造成严重的伤害，以下是地震时的安全指南。 In order to avoid serious injuries that/which are caused to people by earthquakes，the following are safety guidelines for earthquakes. ②在人多拥挤的地方，不要为寻找掩护或出口而奔跑。 In a crowded place，don’t run for cover or exit. ③检查伤亡以及损毁情况，如有需要，立即寻求帮助。 Check for casualties and damage and seek immediate assistance if it is necessary. ④切勿点燃火种或在现场拨打电话。 Do not light a fire or make phone calls on the spot. 3．三仿句式高级表达 ⑤用过去分词作定语改写句① In order to avoid serious injuries caused to people by earthquakes，the following are safety guidelines for earthquakes. ⑥把句③改为省略句 Check for casualties and damage and seek immediate assistance if necessary. 4．四仿教材连句成篇 In order to avoid serious injuries caused to people by earthquakes，the following are safety guidelines for earthquakes. When an earthquake happens： Don’t panic. Keep calm. People indoors should stay indoors，hide under solid furniture，and stay away from glass or falling objects. In a crowded place，don’t run for cover or exit. After the earthquake stops： Check for casualties and damage and seek immediate assistance if necessary. Do not light a fire or make phone calls on the spot. If the building is seriously damaged，and the aftershocks may make it collapse，you should leave as soon as possible and report to the relevant authorities. [精彩素材积累] 1．People living in the low-lying areas should leave there to protect themselves from the flood. 生活在低洼地区的人们应该离开那里以保护自己免受洪水的侵袭。 2．Bend down to escape from the fire as soon as a fire breaks out. 一旦发生火灾，就弯腰从火中逃生。 3．Only by joining in regular first aid training can they improve their knowledge of first aid. 只有参加定期的急救培训，他们才能提高急救知识。 4．It takes us only 2 minutes and 45 seconds to gather at the playground. 我们只需要2分45秒就可以在操场集合。 5．After the earthquake，we should leave the dangerous area immediately in case of strong aftershocks. 地震发生后，我们应立即离开危险区域，以防有强烈余震。 学生用书第166页 [学以致用] 最近你所在的班级举行了一场关于发生火灾时的注意事项的讨论会。现请你写一篇有关火灾时的注意事项的文章，贴在班级的英语板报上。注意事项： 1．不要惊慌，保持冷静； 2．室内有浓烟时，应尽量使身体贴近地面，用湿毛巾捂住鼻子和嘴巴等待营救； 3．不要乘坐电梯或从高层跳下。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] When you are caught in a fire, don’t panic and keep calm. Follow the tips below to protect yourself from injuries. Firstly, call 119 and report it to the fire station at once. If you are in thick smoke, keep close to the ground and use a wet towel to cover your mouth and nose when waiting for rescue. Secondly, don’t take the lift or jump off a high building. You can fasten ropes to something fixed and then slide down the rope to the ground. Thirdly, don’t waste time collecting your money or other things. Just get away from the fire as quickly as you can. After all, life is the most important. 40分写作限时练(六) (时间：45分钟　满分：40分) (本栏目内容，在学生用书中以独立形式分册装订！) Ⅰ.应用文写作(满分15分) (2024·德州期末) 假定你是李华，你从电视新闻上得知你的美国朋友Tom所在的城市发生了地震。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1．对朋友Tom及家人表示关切； 2．得知该地震造成的后果感到很难过； 3．询问Tom及其家人是否安好； 4．愿意尽最大努力提供帮助。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Dear Tom， How are you doing? When I watched the news on TV, I learned that a terrible earthquake happened in your city.I am really concerned about you and your family. I’m so sorry to hear about the disaster, which caused six deaths and left more than five hundred persons injured.What’s more, 29 persons were missing and over 200 houses fell down.Please tell me what your life is like now.I hope that none of your family members were injured. Please don’t be worried.Everything will be fine.If you need any help, please let me know.As one of your best friends, I will do what I can to help you. Best wishes! Yours sincerely， Li Hua Ⅱ.读后续写(满分25分) (2024·临沂期末) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It is strange how a single moment can change a person’s life. It is incredible how one simple act of love can forever change one’s soul. My adult son walked to the table this morning for breakfast. He opened his arms to me, saying, “Good morning, Mom. I love you！” I opened my arms, too, responding, “Good morning, honey. I love you, too！” And I gave him a big hug just like I do every morning. Just at this time, a beautiful memory from many years ago came back to me. My Italian grandmother who lived in countryside liked hugging very much when I was a girl. But my mom had studied in the city and grown up in a more reserved environment. My mom hugged me sometimes, but less often as I grew into my teenage years. My dad also seemed to follow the gender roles of the day back then and didn’t hug me much as I got older. By the time I was a teenager, I didn’t hug anyone else except my grandmother. I clearly remembered that when I was sixteen, I left on a trip with a group of boys to tour a college in the middle west America. As we entered the college, we were greeted there by an old professor. He was over six and a half feet tall with huge arms and a powerful voice. And as he greeted us, he gave each one of us a huge hug. When my turn came, I felt scared but stepped forward and hugged him back. I felt warmth in my heart as he shared his loving kindness. I felt peace and joy in my spirit as well. It was amazing. Later that day, I began to wonder why I had ever stopped giving and receiving hugs when they brought so much joy. When my children were born, I decided to never stop hugging them and telling them I loved them, no matter how old they grew. As time went by, my children got used to my hugs and they learned to offer to hug me and others. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 I posted the story of my hug on the Internet.____________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Then I started a “Hug Me” activity with my friends. ______________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] I posted the story of my hug on the Internet. And it got a huge response from people. Many emailed me to tell me they felt the same way I did. They shared their hugging stories with me, saying that hugs gave them deep love and made them grow up healthily and happily. I selected 100 of the most moving stories and published a book with their permission. To my great amazement, the book became the best seller of the year, which encouraged me to go further. Then I started a “Hug Me” activity with my friends. We went to quite a few public places, such as supermarkets, squares, entrances to the cinema and so on, where we put up our boards to promote the power of hugging. We tried to inspire people to hug their family members, relatives and friends. We also hugged some strangers who were willing to give us a hug. I realized a little hug was a sign of deep love and could make a difference. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$