UNIT 1 Section Ⅴ Writing——写一篇寓言读后感-【金版新学案】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第三册同步课堂高效讲义教师用书（外研版2019）

Section Ⅴ　Writing——写一篇寓言读后感 ◎ The Porcupine Dilemma is written by German philosopher Schopenhauer. The fable describes a group of porcupines gathering together to keep warm. If they get too close, their quills hurt each other, while if they move apart they feel cold. After trying several times, they find the ideal distance. The fable teaches us that there should be boundaries in interpersonal relationships. Though it is an old fable, it casts a light on us even today. We all value friendship, but have you considered that we need boundaries with our friends? One example from real life is like this. Once I thought friends should get close to each other, the closer the better. Ma Jing is the first friend I made at senior high. At first, I thought since we were friends, she had to share the same ideas as mine. So I always followed her, wanted to know her opinion on everything and tried to persuade her when she had a different idea. Soon, we started quarrelling.“Youʼre so annoying！” she shouted angrily after a quarrel. How could I become annoying？I felt hurt and discussed it with another friend. Then I realised it was my problem. I had been getting too close to her and leaving her no room for herself. Since then, I stopped following her so much and I found our friendship repaired. Now I have realised that friends need to have boundaries and respect each other, no matter how close we are. In conclusion, in order to make our friendship last long, we have to find the proper distance between us and our friends, close enough to understand each other, far enough to respect each other. ◎ 学语言 1．使用连词while(然而)引出“如果分开，它们会感觉很冷”，与上文形成对比，使表达更加形象。 2．使用宾语从句总结出这则寓言的寓意，表达非常简洁、明了。 3．使用从属连词Though引导的让步状语从句，引出自己的观点，使下文的举例更加自然。 4．使用At first, Soon, Then, Since then, Now等过渡性词语，使故事的叙述更有逻辑。 5．no matter how... 让步状语从句的使用，强调了不管我们多么亲密，朋友之间都应该有界限，应该互相尊重。 6．文章末段用介词短语In conclusion对本文进行了总结，使文章结构紧凑合理。 知结构 引言：原作者和寓言的概要 主体：现实生活中的观点和例证 结论：总结道理运用到实际中 学生用书第23页 [情境任务写作] 最近你校就《鸽子和蚂蚁》这则寓言故事及其寓意展开讨论，大家踊跃发表各自的看法。请你根据下面所给的要点，给《中学生英语报》的“Your Words” 栏目写一篇英文稿件。内容包括： 1．这则寓言故事的总体概括； 2．你的观点并举例说明； 3．总结并思考。 鸽子和蚂蚁 一只蚂蚁到河边饮水，却不幸掉入河中。一只鸽子看见，扔下一截树枝，将它救起，蚂蚁为了感谢鸽子，询问鸽子自己是否可以为它做些什么。鸽子说道：“不用谢了，你这么小，能帮我做什么呢？”说完就飞走了。过了不久，蚂蚁看见猎人正在拿枪瞄准鸽子，就狠狠地朝他脚上咬了一口，没让他打中。鸽子非常感激蚂蚁，从此它们成了好朋友。 [仿写程序步骤] 1．一仿结构布局合理 第一段：对于《鸽子和蚂蚁》寓言故事的总体概括； 第二段：陈述自己的观点并举出实际生活中的例子； 第三段：总结并深化主题。 2．二仿语言规范美观 ①这则寓言讲述了蚂蚁和鸽子之间的故事。 The fable describes a story between an ant and a dove. ②它们俩通过互相帮助成了好朋友。 The two became good friends by helping each other. ③这则寓言告诉我们，一些被认为不重要的人可能会在我们遇到困难时帮助我们。 The fable teaches us that some people who are considered unimportant can help us out when weʼre in trouble. ④在我们的现实生活中，我们不应该看不起别人，而是平等地对待他们。 In our real life，we shouldnʼt look down on others but treat them equally. ⑤当他们需要帮助时，我们应该尽我们所能去帮助他们。 When they are in need of help, we should do all that we can to help them. ⑥作为报答，他们将不遗余力地帮助我们。 In return，they will spare no effort to help us. ⑦总之，只有当我们持有这样的态度，我们才能交到更多的朋友。 In conclusion，only when we have such an attitude can we make more friends. 3．三仿句式高级表达 ⑧把句③和句④合并成一句 The fable teaches us that some people who are considered unimportant can help us out when weʼre in trouble，so in our real life，we shouldnʼt look down on others but treat them equally. 4．四仿教材连句成篇 The fable describes a story between an ant and a dove. The two became good friends by helping each other. The fable teaches us that some people who are considered unimportant can help us out when weʼre in trouble，so in our real life，we shouldnʼt look down on others but treat them equally. When they are in need of help，we should do all that we can to help them. In return，they will spare no effort to help us. In conclusion，only when we have such an attitude can we make more friends. [精彩素材积累] 常用开头句 1．The fable tells us that there should be boundaries in interpersonal relationships. 这个寓言告诉我们人际关系应该有界限。 2．A little Horse Crosses the River is one of the most popular fables I have ever read, which impressed me a lot then. 《小马过河》是我读过的最受欢迎的寓言之一，当时给我留下了深刻的印象。 学生用书第24页 3．Almost all of us heard the story “Here Comes the Wolf” when we were little kids. 当我们还是小孩子的时候，几乎所有人都听说过《狼来了》这个故事。 4．What we can learn from the story is that we must be honest and telling a lie is terrible. 我们可以从这个故事中学到的是，我们必须诚实，说谎是可怕的。 常用中间句 1．One example from my real life is like this. 我的现实生活中有像这样的一个例子。 2．Once I thought friends should get close to each other, the closer the better. 我曾经认为朋友之间应该彼此亲近，越亲近越好。 3．Since then, I stopped following her so much and I found our friendship repaired. 从那以后，我不再那么频繁地跟踪她，我发现我们的友谊得到了修复。 4．If we promise to do something, we should keep our word and try our best to do it well. 如果我们承诺做某事，我们应该遵守诺言，尽最大的努力把它做好。 常用结束句 1．As far as Iʼm concerned, honesty is a good virtue. 在我看来，诚实是一种美德。 2．People who are honest can always gain othersʼ respect. 诚实的人总能赢得别人的尊重。 3．You cannot please everyone. 你不可能取悦所有人。 4．Only in an honest way are we able to make more friends and gain their cooperation to achieve our goals. 只有通过诚实的方式，我们才能交到更多的朋友，获得他们的合作来实现我们的目标。 5．In conclusion, in order to make our friendship last long, we have to find the proper distance between us and our friends. 总之，为了使我们的友谊持久，我们必须在我们和朋友之间找到适当的距离。 [学以致用] 假定你是李华，最近阅读了寓言故事《龟兔赛跑》，请根据下面的提示写一篇小品文。 1．乌龟和兔子赛跑，兔子由于自满和大意输给了乌龟； 2．表明你的观点并列举生活中的例子； 3．总结这个故事说明的道理。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。 One day，a hare and a tortoise had a race. _________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] One day, a hare and a tortoise had a race. The hare was very confident because he was much faster than the tortoise. However，he lost the race because he became proud and careless. I think this story tells us that we should not be proud and careless. For example, when we achieve success, we should not become overconfident and ignore our opponents. In addition, we should always be humble and work hard to improve ourselves. In conclusion, this story tells us that pride and carelessness can lead to failure, while humility and hard work can lead to success. 40分写作限时练(一) (时间：45分钟　满分：40分) (本栏目内容，在学生用书中以独立形式分册装订！) Ⅰ.应用文写作(满分15分) (2024·鞍山期末) 假定你是李华，你的笔友Steven来信说他和同学因为小事发生了争执，不愿相互理睬，他想知道如何与同学和睦相处。请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信： 1．表示安慰； 2．如何解决该矛盾； 3．如何与同学和睦相处。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Dear Steven， ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely， Li Hua [参考范文] Dear Steven， I hope you donʼt feel very sad and angry after having a conflict with your classmate. People often have different views on things, which can normally cause conflicts. First, I think you should calm down and communicate with your classmate to clear up the misunderstanding between you. To get along well with your classmates, you should be kind and friendly to them. Whatʼs more, youʼd better learn to control your emotion. In my opinion, if you put yourself in othersʼ shoes, you would understand them better. I hope the advice above will be helpful to you and wish you a happier time at school. Yours sincerely， Li Hua Ⅱ.读后续写(满分25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·无锡期末) One sunny morning, the sun began to rise, casting a warm golden glow over the park. Two young men named Tom and Jerry, who were lost in their own books, found themselves sitting on opposite ends of a bench. The air was filled with the sweet scent of blooming flowers and the distant sound of children playing. Their eyes met for a brief moment before they both bent down to pick up their pens. It seemed as if they had known before. They quickly became friends and then began to spend many happy times together. They played basketball, watched movies, and spent many unforgettable days together. However, as time went on, their lives changed, and their friendship was put to the test. A few years later, Tom became a successful lawyer, while Jerry chose a different path and became an artist. Despite different kinds of changes in their lifestyles, they still kept in touch and would gather together every once in a while to recall the good old days. One day, Tom received a letter from Jerry. The letter said, “Dear Tom, I hope you can come and visit my art exhibition. I know you may not be interested in art, but I think you will like these works. They are all paintings I made during the days we spent together. I hope you can feel the friendship between us.” After reading the letter, Tom immediately decided to attend Jerryʼs art exhibition. He bought a bunch of flowers as a gift and arrived at the exhibition site. When he walked into the exhibition hall, he was shocked by what he saw. The walls were filled with Jerryʼs works, each painting full of life and emotion. He saw scenes of them playing basketball in the park, watching movies together, and walking in the rain. These paintings made him feel the deep friendship between them. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 At the exhibition, Tom met many old friends. ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ With the bunch of flowers, Tom still kept looking for Jerry. ________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] At the exhibition, Tom met many old friends. They all came to support Jerry, and they were all impressed by Jerryʼs works. Tom felt happy and proud to see how much Jerry had accomplished. They spent the whole day at the exhibition, talking and laughing, recalling the good old days they had spent together. Some of Jerryʼs paintings reminded Tom of specific memories, and he shared those stories with their friends, making everyone laugh. With the bunch of flowers, Tom still kept looking for Jerry. He finally found Jerry in a corner, busy signing autographs for his fans. Jerry looked up and saw Tom, his eyes widened with surprise and delight. Tom walked up to Jerry and handed him the flowers, saying, “Congratulations, Jerry. Your works are amazing.” Jerry thanked him and hugged him tightly. They stood there for a moment, enjoying the warmth of their friendship. Before leaving, Tom promised Jerry that he would always be there for him, no matter what. Jerry smiled and thanked him once again, knowing that their friendship would always be a source of strength and inspiration for both of them. 学生用书第25页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$