内容正文:
第20讲 书面表达:环境保护(人与自然)
1.(2024·浙江杭州·模拟预测)假如你是李华,你的朋友Jimmy给你寄来一封邮件,请你根据邮件内容进行回复。邮件需包含表格中的内容,80—100词左右。
Dear Li Hua,
How’s it going? I went to the zoo and saw a panda last Sunday. It was so cute but I heard it was endangered. Can you tell me something about pandas? Why are they endangered? What can we do to protect them?
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Jimmy
写作要点提示:
Reasons
cut down trees to build more houses; kill them for fur, …
Ways
set up reserves (保护区)…
Hope
…
Dear Jimmy,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2.(24-25九年级上·浙江杭州·期中)假如你是“环保小卫士”李平,受到你的美国朋友Alice的邀请,到她的学校参加一个环保作品展(Environmental Protection Works Fair)。请你给她写一封信,内容包括:
1.简单介绍你将带去展示的“变废为宝”的作品(任选两项,可适当发挥);
2.谈谈你对于“变废为宝”的态度或看法的转变;
3.就此次参展向对方询问至少两个相关细节(如具体地点等)。
Turning Waste into Treasure
Works
Materials
Opinions
>a beautiful dress
> a vase (花瓶)
>a model plane
…
> waste paper
> plastic bottles
> used wood and glass
>…
> Before:
useless; a waste of time; ...
> Now:
save energy; build a greener future; …
注意:
①文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
②词数100词左右。首句已给,不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
Thank you for your invitation. I’m more than glad to attend the Environmental Protection Works Fair in your school.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ping
3.(24-25九年级上·浙江金华·阶段练习)假设你是李华,为提升学生的环保意识和动手能力,你校将于下周举办“旧物可循环,环境需守护”为主题的环保作品展 (Eco-friendly Works Exhibition)。请根据以下图示,用英文给你的交换生好友John写一封电子邮件,介绍这项活动并邀请他参加。
要求:
1. 短文必须思维导图中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 100 词左右,标题和开头都已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Eco-friendly Works Exhibition
Time and place: June 23rd in the school hall
Activities: ● listen to a speech
● enjoy the beautiful works made of waste
● …
Meanings:● develop students’
life skills
● …
Tips: ● bring your own works
● …
Dear John,
I am pleased to tell you that our school is going to hold the “Environmental Protection Exhibition”.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.(2024·浙江杭州·二模)假如你是李雷,上周参观了以“Working the Waste into Magic”为主题的环保作品展。请你根据以下信息,写一篇短文,在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。
What were on show
What they are made of/from
What you think
clothes
chairs
model planes
…
waste paper
plastic bottles
used wood and glass
…
creative
save …
…
注意:(1)短文须介绍至少两项展品,可以适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数:110字左右。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.(2022·浙江嘉兴·中考真题)假如你是李华,为营造更好的校园英语氛围,你班决定以学校花园为载体,开展“Create Our Outdoor Classroom”项目式学习(COOC Project),经过分组讨论,你们形成了Plan A与Plan B 两个实施方案(见下表)。请你选择其中一个方案,用英语写一篇短文,代表小组在英语拓展课上就你们所选方案的内容和优势进行回报。
注意:(1)短文必须包含表中你所选方案的所有信息,并适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(3)词数:80~100。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear classmates,
I’m very proud to share our plan with you today. The plan we choose is
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
8.(2022·浙江湖州·中考真题)假如你是李雷,上周参观了以“Working the Waste into Magic”为主题的环保作品展。请你根据以下信息,写一篇短文,在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。
What were on show
What they are made of/from
What you think
➢clothes
➢chairs
➢model planes
➢ …
➢waste paper
➢plastic bottles
➢used wood and glass
➢ …
➢creative
➢save …
➢ …
注意:
(1)短文须介绍至少两项展品,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数:80—100。短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about the show “Working the Waste into Magic” . _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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第20讲 书面表达:环境保护(人与自然)
1.(2024·浙江杭州·模拟预测)假如你是李华,你的朋友Jimmy给你寄来一封邮件,请你根据邮件内容进行回复。邮件需包含表格中的内容,80—100词左右。
Dear Li Hua,
How’s it going? I went to the zoo and saw a panda last Sunday. It was so cute but I heard it was endangered. Can you tell me something about pandas? Why are they endangered? What can we do to protect them?
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Jimmy
写作要点提示:
Reasons
cut down trees to build more houses; kill them for fur, …
Ways
set up reserves (保护区)…
Hope
…
Dear Jimmy,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Jimmy,
Everything goes smoothly with me. Pandas are indeed adorable creatures, but sadly, they are endangered due to several reasons.
One major reason is habitat loss. As human populations grow, more and more trees are cut down to make room for urban expansion and construction of residential areas. This leads to the destruction of panda habitats, making it difficult for them to find food and shelter. Additionally, pandas are threatened by poaching and illegal trade. They are often hunted for their fur, which is highly valued in some cultures.
To protect pandas, we can take several measures. One important step is to establish reserves where pandas can live safely without disturbance. Conservation efforts also involve raising awareness about the importance of protecting pandas, as well as enforcing laws to prevent poaching and illegal trade.
Hope we can work together to protect these beautiful creatures for future generations to enjoy.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据邮件中的问题及要点提示进行写作,可适当发挥,注意行文连贯,表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的近况并引出熊猫濒危的原因;
第二步,具体介绍熊猫濒危的原因及保护措施;
第三步,书写结语,表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①make room for腾出空间
②additionally另外
③the importance of……的重要性
[高分句型]
①They are often hunted for their fur, which is highly valued in some cultures. (which引导定语从句)
②Hope we can work together to protect these beautiful creatures for future generations to enjoy. (宾语从句)
2.(24-25九年级上·浙江杭州·期中)假如你是“环保小卫士”李平,受到你的美国朋友Alice的邀请,到她的学校参加一个环保作品展(Environmental Protection Works Fair)。请你给她写一封信,内容包括:
1.简单介绍你将带去展示的“变废为宝”的作品(任选两项,可适当发挥);
2.谈谈你对于“变废为宝”的态度或看法的转变;
3.就此次参展向对方询问至少两个相关细节(如具体地点等)。
Turning Waste into Treasure
Works
Materials
Opinions
>a beautiful dress
> a vase (花瓶)
>a model plane
…
> waste paper
> plastic bottles
> used wood and glass
>…
> Before:
useless; a waste of time; ...
> Now:
save energy; build a greener future; …
注意:
①文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
②词数100词左右。首句已给,不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
Thank you for your invitation. I’m more than glad to attend the Environmental Protection Works Fair in your school.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】例文:
Dear Alice,
Thank you for your invitation. I’m more than glad to attend the Environmental Protection Works Fair in your school. Two of my pieces are a beautiful dress made of waste paper and a vase made of plastic bottles. They can make our lives better. I used to think waste was useless, we were wasting our time by using it. And they can be bad for us. Now I know that if we make good use of them, we can not only save energy, but also build a green future. And we’ll save a lot of money. I also want to know the specific time and things we need to prepare for this work exhibition. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当发挥,完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,感谢邀请,并表示自己乐意参加她学校的环保作品展;
第二步,介绍自己的作品及使用材料;
第三步,谈谈自己对“变废为宝”的看法;
第四步,询问作品展的其他相关信息,并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be made of 由……制成
②be bad for 对……不好
③make good use of 好好利用
[高分句型]
①Now I know that if we make good use of them, we can not only save energy, but also build a green future. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②I also want to know the specific time and things we need to prepare for this work exhibition.(省略that的定语从句)
3.(24-25九年级上·浙江金华·阶段练习)假设你是李华,为提升学生的环保意识和动手能力,你校将于下周举办“旧物可循环,环境需守护”为主题的环保作品展 (Eco-friendly Works Exhibition)。请根据以下图示,用英文给你的交换生好友John写一封电子邮件,介绍这项活动并邀请他参加。
要求:
1. 短文必须思维导图中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 100 词左右,标题和开头都已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Eco-friendly Works Exhibition
Time and place: June 23rd in the school hall
Activities: ● listen to a speech
● enjoy the beautiful works made of waste
● …
Meanings:● develop students’
life skills
● …
Tips: ● bring your own works
● …
Dear John,
I am pleased to tell you that our school is going to hold the “Environmental Protection Exhibition”.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Dear John,
I am pleased to tell you that our school is going to hold the “Environmental Protection Exhibition”. I’d like to introduce it to you.
The exhibition will be held in the school hall on June 23rd. At the exhibition, we will listen to a speech. In addition, we will also enjoy the beautiful works made of waste. The activity aims to help develop students’ life skills and raise everyone’s awareness of environmental protection. I believe it will be a great opportunity for learning and communication.
I really hope you can join us. Remember to bring your own works if you come. By the way, I would suggest you take a bus to school on June 23rd. Parking your bicycle might not be very convenient on that day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时和一般将来时;
③提示:文章应该包括表格所列内容要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,告诉对方学校将举办环保作品展;
第二步,介绍作品展的时间、活动、意义等具体信息;
第三步,邀请对方参加,并提供一些建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be pleased to do很高兴做某事
②in addition此外
③aim to旨在
[高分句型]
①I believe it will be a great opportunity for learning and communication. (宾语从句)
②Remember to bring your own works if you come. (if引导的条件状语从句)
③Parking your bicycle might not be very convenient on that day. (动名词作主语)
4.(2024·浙江杭州·二模)假如你是李雷,上周参观了以“Working the Waste into Magic”为主题的环保作品展。请你根据以下信息,写一篇短文,在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。
What were on show
What they are made of/from
What you think
clothes
chairs
model planes
…
waste paper
plastic bottles
used wood and glass
…
creative
save …
…
注意:(1)短文须介绍至少两项展品,可以适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数:110字左右。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about the show “Working the Waste into Magic”.
A number of creative works were on show, including clothes made from waste paper and model planes made of used wood and glass. Another fascinating work is a chair that is made of plastic bottles. They are glued together and painted in different colors.
I was most interested in a backpack for computers. It is made out of a pair of old jeans! With the zipper of jeans on the top, two pockets on two sides, the backpack looks both useful and fashionable. It even has a logo!
I felt amazed at how waste could be put to such good use. It really helps to save energy and build a greener future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般过去时和一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,详细介绍一些展品的信息以及自己最感兴趣的展品;
第三步,介绍自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①a number of大量的
②be made of由……制成
③be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①A number of creative works were on show, including clothes made from waste paper and model planes made of used wood and glass. (过去分词作定语)
②Another fascinating work is a chair that is made of plastic bottles. (定语从句)
7.(2022·浙江嘉兴·中考真题)假如你是李华,为营造更好的校园英语氛围,你班决定以学校花园为载体,开展“Create Our Outdoor Classroom”项目式学习(COOC Project),经过分组讨论,你们形成了Plan A与Plan B 两个实施方案(见下表)。请你选择其中一个方案,用英语写一篇短文,代表小组在英语拓展课上就你们所选方案的内容和优势进行回报。
注意:(1)短文必须包含表中你所选方案的所有信息,并适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(3)词数:80~100。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear classmates,
I’m very proud to share our plan with you today. The plan we choose is
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】例文:
Plan A
Dear classmates,
I’m very proud to share our plan with you today. The plan we choose is naming the plants in English.
There are mainly two steps. We’ll first do a survey to find information about the plants. We can surf the Internet, or ask our teachers for help if we meet with difficulties. The second step is to design name cards. We’ll describe each kind of plants in English. To make the cards look prettier, a photo of the plant will be included in each card.
We believe this plan will make our school garden a better place to learn about nature and improve our English. I can’t wait to see it come into practice.
That’s all. Thank you!
Plan B
Dear classmates,
I’m very proud to share our plan with you today. The plan we choose is creating an English corner.
The first thing we’ll do is to choose an area for it. As you see in the map, the grassland makes a good choice. We’ll decorate it with several tables and chairs, so that we can have comfortable talks. A shelf of English books and magazines will also be put there. Then we’re going to make some rules. For example, we need to take care of things, and of course, speak English only.
I’m sure this corner will become a popular place for us to improve our spoken English, and make more friends as well.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Create Our Outdoor Classroom”为主题,结合提示内容,选择一个方案进行介绍。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:以Plan A为例,写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态综合使用一般现在时和一般将来时。作文可分为四段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍具体要怎么做;第三段介绍该计划预期的成果;第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
8.(2022·浙江湖州·中考真题)假如你是李雷,上周参观了以“Working the Waste into Magic”为主题的环保作品展。请你根据以下信息,写一篇短文,在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。
What were on show
What they are made of/from
What you think
➢clothes
➢chairs
➢model planes
➢ …
➢waste paper
➢plastic bottles
➢used wood and glass
➢ …
➢creative
➢save …
➢ …
注意:
(1)短文须介绍至少两项展品,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数:80—100。短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about the show “Working the Waste into Magic” . _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Possible version:
Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about the show “Working the Waste into Magic”.
A number of creative works were on show, including clothes made from waste paper and model planes made of used wood and glass. Another fascinating work is a chair that is made of plastic bottles. They are glued together and painted in different colors.
I was most interested in a backpack for computers. It is made out of a pair of old jeans! With the zipper of jeans on the top, two pockets on two sides, the backpack looks both useful and fashionable. It even has a logo!
I felt amazed at how waste could be put to such good use. It really helps to save energy and build a greener future.
【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示要点,介绍“变废为宝”的环保作品展的情况,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来,本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容;时态采用一般过去时;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。
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