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学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
Unit1 Helping those in need
单元话题写作满分范文18篇
说明:此专题分三个难度层次,基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践,老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。
基础入门训练6篇
1.(23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期中)上周六,你们班在阳光老年之家 (Sunny House Old People’s Home) 做了义工活动。请根据以下提示,适当发挥,写一篇英语短文,介绍此次活动。
活动目的:弘扬尊老的优良传统;
活动内容:
1.给老人泡茶和整理床铺;
2.陪老人下棋;
3. ……(至少补充一点)
活动感受:……
要求:
1.80词左右(给出部分不计入总词数);
2.要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3.条理清晰,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范;
4.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
参考: carry forward 弘扬 respect 尊敬 fine 优良的 make tea 泡茶
Last Saturday, we did voluntary work in Sunny House Old People’s Home. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.(23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期末)假如你是李华,你在动物救助网站上看到工作人员为流浪狗Oscar寻找领养人。请你用英语给负责人Tom写一封邮件,申请领养。
要点:
1. 个人优势
①乐于助人,每周去养老院做义工;
②喜欢动物,认为养宠物能给人带来快乐;
③……(自行补充一点)
2. 介绍养狗计划:①有充足时间,能够每天遛狗;②…… (自行补充一点)
3. 表达期待,希望获得机会。
注意要求:
1. 词数为80 左右 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 内容应包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4. 条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。
参考词汇:adopt 领养 apply 申请
Dear Tom,
I am Li Hua, a Junior 2 student. I am writing this letter to adopt Oscar.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
3.(23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期中)假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Jack来信询问你最近的课外活动情况。请你根据以下提示,给他写一封回信,介绍你上周参加的一次志愿活动。
要点
1.活动形式:为社区老人服务的志愿活动;
2.活动内容:
①与老人一起学习了传统技能,如剪纸、制作中国结等;
②陪老人观看粤剧;
③……
④……
3.你的感受
要求:
1.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范:
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名:
3.要点齐全、可适当发挥;
4.字数80左右(不含开头结尾给出的词数)。
参考词汇:Chinese knot中国结 Cantonese Opera粤剧
Dear Jack,
I hope this letter finds you well. Last week, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to hearing about your recent adventures.
Best regards,
Li Hua
4.(23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期中)假如你是李明,你有一个美国笔友Lucy来深圳游玩。你打算邀请她一起参加下个月的深圳博物馆中国传统艺术展览的志愿者工作,请你介绍展览基本内容,并说明你也想参加的原因,并邀请她一起做志愿者。
1)展览内容
欣赏中国传统艺术作品
观看皮影戏 (shadow puppet plays)
……(自行补充一个活动内容)
2)参加原因
热衷于参加志愿者工作
非常热爱中国传统文化
3)邀请Lucy一起到深圳博物馆做志愿者。
写作要求:
1)不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3)字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4)至少80词。
Dear Lucy,
How are you doing?
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming
5.(23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期中)深圳博物馆举办“润物有声:大唐盛世展”。你校上周成立了志愿服务队,在该展览开展志愿者服务活动。假定你是校英语报的小记者,请你写一篇新闻报道,介绍这次活动。
要点:
1. 活动目的;
2. 活动内容:①在咨询台分发宣传册②在展厅做唐诗讲解③…… (补充一点);
3. 活动收获。
要求:
1. 80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数内;
2. 可适当加入细节,以使内容充实,行文连贯;
3. 标点正确,书面整洁。
参考词汇: brochure (n. 宣传册) exhibition hall (n. 展厅)
When Art Speaks:Treasures of Tang Dynasty Exhibition Held in Shenzhen. On April 20th, a group of volunteers in Futian Foreign Language School went to
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6.(23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期中)“赠人玫瑰,手留余香”,志愿者服务是新时代的雷锋精神的重要体现。因此,你所在学校打算本周六组织学生拜访敬老院。假如你是八年级一班班长李明,需要通知因事缺勤的交换生 Billy 参加活动。请根据下面的内容提示,用英语写一封电子邮件告知其相关信息。
内容提示如下:
时间
周六上午9点到12点
集合地点
学校大门
活动
1.帮助老人们整理房间;
2.李奶奶向大家介绍中国传统文化一剪纸,和老人们一起完成剪纸作品;
3.……(补充一项活动)
注意事项
1.穿校服;
2.携带剪纸需要的工具,例如剪刀;
3.见到老人要挥手问好,不在敬老院大声喧哗。
作文要求:
1. 包括以上全部要点,适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3. 条理清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
4. 不少于80词 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Billy,
We are going to visit old people’s home. Here is some information you need to know.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
进阶拓展训练6篇
7.(23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期末)假如你是八年级学生李华,你校将和社区合作举办“传统文化进社区“Welcome Traditional Chinese Culture into Communities”的活动,为了让外国友人更好地了解中国传统文化,学生会正在招募一批活动志愿者,请根据以下要求写一封申请信。
要点:
申请理由
1. 有志愿者工作经验,有团队合作精神;
2. 英语口语好,可以与外国友人流利沟通;
3. 会剪纸,可以在现场进行展示和讲解;
4. ……(补充一点理由)
你对志愿者工作的看法(至少两点看法)
要求:
1. 要点齐全,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清晰,语句迹顺,意义连贯,书写规范;
3. 80—100 词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
参考词汇:team spirit 团队合作精神 fluently 流利地
Dear Student Union,
I am Li Hua, an eighth grader. I am writing to apply to be a volunteer for the activity—Welcome Traditional Chinese Culture into Communities.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
8.(23-24八年级下·广东广州·期中)五一劳动节快要到了,学校学生会计划举行一次“Volunteer Day”活动。活动当天将有一系列的志愿活动供同学们参与。假设你是该活动的负责人,请根据以下内容和提示写一篇英语短文,为同学们介绍下列志愿工作。
要求:
志愿者日
活动内容
活动情况
教七年级学生做剪纸
制作漂亮的剪纸
为义卖 (charity sale) 筹款
和八年级学生一起做彩绘
制作有趣的漫画
…… (请你补充)
(请你补充)
…… (请你补充)
…… (请你补充)
1. 词数100字左右 (文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 包含表格中所有信息,补充内容,适当拓展。
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
The Volunteer Day is coming. For all our fellow students, I would like to introduce some of our voluntary work to you.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.(23-24八年级下·广东广州·期中)学校学生会正在招募“手拉手”活动的志愿者,为外国来访学生展示传统手工制作(例如剪纸、风筝、灯笼等),以弘扬中华传统文化。假如你是李欣,请你用英文给学校学生会写一封自荐信,在信中说明你申请成为志愿者的理由以及你会做什么。
内容提示:
(1)Why would you like to be a volunteer?
(2)What do you think of traditional Chinese culture?
(3)What can you do as a volunteer?
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100—120;文中已给出内容不计入总数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Learning that the student union is looking for volunteers, I’m writing to apply to become a volunteer. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Xin
10.(23-24八年级下·广东广州·期中)假设你所就读的国际学校要推广志愿活动,你作为“志愿者社团(Volunteer Club)”的成员需要向校长申请开展志愿活动。请你根据以下要点,用英语写一封申请信。
活动时间
本周末
目的
帮助有需要的人
校外活动
1、去附近的儿童医院讲故事
2、去敬老院,……(活动自拟)
校内活动
开展……筹款活动(活动自拟)
给有需要的人买健康的食物、衣服、书籍和玩具
意义
振奋他们的精神,……(请你补充1点)
要求:
(1)词数不少于80词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(2)可适当发挥,但要注意语言通顺、流畅、准确。
Dear Mr. White,
We are writing to ask permission for organizing some voluntary activities in our school. We would like to
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Yours sincerely,
Marco
11.(23-24八年级下·广东广州·期中)上周你参加了学校的志愿活动,你们去探访了“春蕾学校”的孩子们,并开展了一系列活动。请根据以下内容提示,写一篇英语报道介绍这次活动,并谈谈自己对这次活动的感受。
Activities
Purposes (目的) of the activities
play cartoons, do the voices
raise spirits; make...colourful
discuss how to use body language
know the importance of...;
become more confident
learn about Chinese traditional skills—making dough toys, making Chinese knots (中国结)
...
(请你补充)
(请你补充)
You opinion(s): …
1、全文100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2、文章中不得出现真实姓名、校名等任何个人信息;
3、文章必须包含上图所提供的所有信息,可以适当增加细节,使行文更连贯。
Last week, we visited a Spring Bud School and held some activities for the children there. Here I would like to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12.(23-24八年级下·广东广州·期中)为弘扬互助友爱的“雷锋精神”,三月份学校学生会举办了一系列的志愿活动。请根据以下内容和提示写一篇英语短文,介绍下列志愿活动的情况,并谈谈你对这次活动的心得体会。
Where
What
Why
老人院(nursing home)
和老人们一起剪纸,玩游戏
*可以用来装饰(decorate)老人院
*给老人们带去欢乐
图书馆
作演讲: 介绍肢体语言的重要性
帮助人们提升交往沟通能力
新华小学
教学生用英语为卡通人物配音(dub)
?
你的体会?
注意:
1.补充表格,按照所给内容要点进行描述,可根据要点适当拓展;
2. 不得出现姓名、学校等真实的个人信息;
3. 词数80词左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Voluntary Work
To carry forward the Spirit of Lei Feng, the Students’ Union held some voluntary work last month. I would like to introduce some of our voluntary work to you.
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能力综合实践6篇
13.(23-24八年级下·全国·课后作业)假如你是学生会主席苏明,你校师生想在校内举办书籍义卖,为开展环保宣传活动筹集资金。请你根据以下内容提示,给王校长写一封信,征得他的同意。词数80左右。
要点:1.活动原因:全校师生打算在超市附近举办环保宣传晚会,但是资金不足。
2.活动内容:举办一次书籍义卖,筹集资金。
3.时间和地点:下周一下午3点,学校操场。
4.参加人员:全校师生。
Dear Mr Wang,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Su Ming
14.(23-24八年级下·广东深圳·单元测试)假如你是志愿者Li Hua,现学校将组织帮助如下三类需要帮助的人群:残疾人,社区里的老人以及孤儿。请你选择一类你将要帮助的人群,写一篇短文, 80词左右。
短文必须包括如下提示(也可稍加拓展)
1. 你成为志愿者多久了?
2. 你将帮助哪类人群?
3. 这类人群有哪些困难?
4. 你将如何帮助他们?
5. 你会继续帮助他们吗?
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15.(22-23八年级下·广东深圳·期末)假如你是阳光中学的学生李华,为帮助贫困山村的学生,你校举办了“Your kindness matters”的主题慈善活动。请你根据以下图文要点提示和要求,写一篇英文短文来介绍此次活动并分享你的感受。
要求:
(1)80 — 100词,开头已给出,不计入总词数内;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
(3)可适当增加细节,以使条理清楚、行文连贯;
(4)标点正确,书面整洁。
参考词汇:
central square 中心广场;charity sale 义卖
In order to help students in poor villages, Sunshine Middle School __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
16.(22-23八年级下·广东深圳·期中)假设你是鹏城中学的李华,你的学校打算组织一次慈善义卖活动(charity fair),请你以学生会(the Students’ Union)的名义,用英语为这次活动写一份倡议书,号召同学们积极参与本次活动。
要点:
1. 时间:本周六上午9:00—11:00;
2. 地点:学校操场;
3. 目的:帮助贫困山区儿童负担学费、购买学习用品和日常用品;
4. 义卖物品可以是书、文具(stationery)和玩具等,定价合理;
5. 钱款流向:希望工程(Project Hope)。
要求:
1. 须包含以上所给要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 条理清楚,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 80词左右,文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear students,
We will hold a charity fair_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Welcome to join us!
the Students’ Union
17.(22-23八年级下·广东深圳·期中)“赠人玫瑰,手留余香”,志愿者服务是新时代的雷锋精神的重要体现。因此, 你所在学校打算本周六组织学生拜访敬老院。假如你是八年级一班班长李明,需要通知因事缺勤的交换生Billy参加活动。请根据下面的内容提示,用英语写一封电子邮件告知其相关信息。内容提示如下:
时间
周六上午9点到12点
集合地点
学校大门
交通方式
校车
活动
1.帮助老人整理房间
2.李奶奶向大家介绍中国传统文化—剪纸,和老人一起完成一幅剪纸作品
3.……
注意事项
1.穿校服,运动鞋
2.携带剪纸需要的工具
3.不在敬老院大声喧哗
参考词汇:剪刀scissors
作文要求:
1.包括以上全部要点,适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.条理清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范:
4.不少于80词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Billy,
We are going to visit old people’s home.Here is some information you need to know.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
18.(23-24八年级下·广东广州·期中)假如你在上周和去儿童医院参加了一次志愿活动。 请根据下面的内容提示,用英语写简短文,并向学校英文报投稿。
要求:
1. 词数80左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 不得透露学校、 姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Last weekend, I went to visit the children at the Children’s Hospital..._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料,已编校!
2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料,已编校!
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
Unit1 Helping those in need
单元话题写作满分范文18篇
说明:此专题分三个难度层次,基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践,老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。
基础入门训练6篇
1.(23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期中)上周六,你们班在阳光老年之家 (Sunny House Old People’s Home) 做了义工活动。请根据以下提示,适当发挥,写一篇英语短文,介绍此次活动。
活动目的:弘扬尊老的优良传统;
活动内容:
1.给老人泡茶和整理床铺;
2.陪老人下棋;
3. ……(至少补充一点)
活动感受:……
要求:
1.80词左右(给出部分不计入总词数);
2.要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3.条理清晰,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范;
4.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
参考: carry forward 弘扬 respect 尊敬 fine 优良的 make tea 泡茶
Last Saturday, we did voluntary work in Sunny House Old People’s Home. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Last Saturday, we did some voluntary work for Sunny House Old People’s Home.
To carry forward the fine tradition of respecting old people, we did a lot of things on Saturday. In the morning, some of us made tea for old people. Besides, we also made beds for them. In the afternoon, we played chess with some old people. And then, we enjoyed a wonderful concert together. In the evening, we cooked a delicious meal for them. Our teachers told funny jokes to make them laugh after dinner. What’s more, we raised lots of money for Sunny House Old People’s Home.
Although we were really tired, we felt so happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点提示已给出,考生应按要求进行写作,适当增加细节,完善作文内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题,开头已给出;
第二步,介绍此次活动的内容;
第三步,阐述参加此次活动的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①make beds 整理床铺
②play chess 下棋
③tell jokes 讲笑话
④what’s more 此外
⑤raise money 筹款
[高分句型]
①To carry forward the fine tradition of respecting old people, we did a lot of things on Saturday. (不定式作目的状语)
②Although we were really tired, we felt so happy. (although引导让步状语从句)
2.(23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期末)假如你是李华,你在动物救助网站上看到工作人员为流浪狗Oscar寻找领养人。请你用英语给负责人Tom写一封邮件,申请领养。
要点:
1. 个人优势
①乐于助人,每周去养老院做义工;
②喜欢动物,认为养宠物能给人带来快乐;
③……(自行补充一点)
2. 介绍养狗计划:①有充足时间,能够每天遛狗;②…… (自行补充一点)
3. 表达期待,希望获得机会。
注意要求:
1. 词数为80 左右 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 内容应包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4. 条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。
参考词汇:adopt 领养 apply 申请
Dear Tom,
I am Li Hua, a Junior 2 student. I am writing this letter to adopt Oscar.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I am Li Hua, a Junior 2 student. I am writing this letter to adopt Oscar. I am a helpful person, volunteering every week at the nursing home. I love animals and believe that having pets brings joy. Additionally, I have a responsible nature and always keep my promises. I have plenty of time to walk the dog daily and plan to create a comfortable space for Oscar at home. I am eager to provide him with a loving environment. I hope to have this opportunity.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,借用文章开头表达想收养Oscar的意图;
第二步,根据题干中的要点,描述自己的优势和养狗计划;
第三步,表达希望自己能够成功收养Oscar,并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①plenty of大量
②plan to do计划做某事
[高分句型]
①I love animals and believe that having pets brings joy.(宾语从句)
②Additionally, I have a responsible nature and always keep my promises.(and表并列)
3.(23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期中)假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Jack来信询问你最近的课外活动情况。请你根据以下提示,给他写一封回信,介绍你上周参加的一次志愿活动。
要点
1.活动形式:为社区老人服务的志愿活动;
2.活动内容:
①与老人一起学习了传统技能,如剪纸、制作中国结等;
②陪老人观看粤剧;
③……
④……
3.你的感受
要求:
1.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范:
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名:
3.要点齐全、可适当发挥;
4.字数80左右(不含开头结尾给出的词数)。
参考词汇:Chinese knot中国结 Cantonese Opera粤剧
Dear Jack,
I hope this letter finds you well. Last week, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to hearing about your recent adventures.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Jack,
I hope this letter finds you well. Last week, I had the opportunity to take part in volunteer activity for the elderly in our community. We learned some traditional skills together, such as paper cutting and making Chinese knots. We also watched Cantonese Opera, which was fun and educational. What’s more, I taught them how to use smartphones to make video calls with their families. Finally, we had an art exhibition to display the artwork created during the activities, bringing them joy and peace.
This experience not only brought joy to the elderly but also left a lasting impression on me. I am grateful to connect with them and create unforgettable memories.
Looking forward to hearing about your recent adventures.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示中重点信息,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍上周参加的志愿者活动。
第二步,具体阐述,从活动形式、内容及参加完的感受进行介绍;
第三步,书写结语,期待来信。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②traditional传统的
③educational有教育意义的
④make video calls打视频电话
⑤have an art exhibition有一个艺术展
⑥connect with sb.与某人联系
[高分句型]
①We also watched Cantonese Opera, which was fun and educational. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②This experience not only brought joy to the elderly but also left a lasting impression on me. (not only…but also…句型)
4.(23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期中)假如你是李明,你有一个美国笔友Lucy来深圳游玩。你打算邀请她一起参加下个月的深圳博物馆中国传统艺术展览的志愿者工作,请你介绍展览基本内容,并说明你也想参加的原因,并邀请她一起做志愿者。
1)展览内容
欣赏中国传统艺术作品
观看皮影戏 (shadow puppet plays)
……(自行补充一个活动内容)
2)参加原因
热衷于参加志愿者工作
非常热爱中国传统文化
3)邀请Lucy一起到深圳博物馆做志愿者。
写作要求:
1)不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3)字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4)至少80词。
Dear Lucy,
How are you doing?
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文:
Dear Lucy,
How are you doing? I know you are passionate about volunteering and have a great passion for traditional Chinese culture. So I plan to invite you to volunteer for the Chinese Traditional Art Exhibition at the Shenzhen Museum next month. We can appreciate traditional Chinese art works and watch shadow puppetry. At the same time, we can also make some simple traditional arts such as Paper Cuttings. I hope to volunteer with you at the Shenzhen Museum. I am looking forward to receiving your reply.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接说明要邀请她一起做志愿者;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍展览内容及你也想参加的原因;
第三步,书写结语。表达希望和她一起做志愿者。
[亮点词汇]
①passionate热爱的
②appreciate欣赏
[高分句型]
①I know you are passionate about volunteering and have a great passion for traditional Chinese culture. (宾语从句)
5.(23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期中)深圳博物馆举办“润物有声:大唐盛世展”。你校上周成立了志愿服务队,在该展览开展志愿者服务活动。假定你是校英语报的小记者,请你写一篇新闻报道,介绍这次活动。
要点:
1. 活动目的;
2. 活动内容:①在咨询台分发宣传册②在展厅做唐诗讲解③…… (补充一点);
3. 活动收获。
要求:
1. 80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数内;
2. 可适当加入细节,以使内容充实,行文连贯;
3. 标点正确,书面整洁。
参考词汇: brochure (n. 宣传册) exhibition hall (n. 展厅)
When Art Speaks:Treasures of Tang Dynasty Exhibition Held in Shenzhen. On April 20th, a group of volunteers in Futian Foreign Language School went to
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
When Art Speaks: Treasures of Tang Dynasty Exhibition Held in Shenzhen. On April 20th, a group of volunteers in Futian Foreign Language School went to the Shenzhen Museum, where Treasures of Tang Dynasty Exhibition was held, to develop students’ interest in passing on Chinese tradition and to broaden their horizons as well.
There were different kinds of activities during this exhibition. We students sent out some brochures in the consulting office. Meanwhile, the interpretation and appreciation of Tang poetry was held in the exhibition hall. What’s more, we organized a custom play to act out some classic scenes through the whole exhibition.
We students all had a good time during Treasures of Tang Dynasty Exhibition and we learned a lot about various glamorous poems and intriguing stories from it. And we looked forward to taking part in it next time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“深圳博物馆举办了‘润物有声:大唐盛世展’活动”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——活动目的、活动内容及收获等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。表达“我们期待着下次参加”的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①what’s more除此之外
②look forward to期待
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①Meanwhile, the interpretation and appreciation of Tang poetry was held in the exhibition hall. (一般过去时的被动语态)
②What’s more, we organized a custom play to act out some classic scenes through the whole exhibition. (动词不定式作目的状语)
6.(23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期中)“赠人玫瑰,手留余香”,志愿者服务是新时代的雷锋精神的重要体现。因此,你所在学校打算本周六组织学生拜访敬老院。假如你是八年级一班班长李明,需要通知因事缺勤的交换生 Billy 参加活动。请根据下面的内容提示,用英语写一封电子邮件告知其相关信息。
内容提示如下:
时间
周六上午9点到12点
集合地点
学校大门
活动
1.帮助老人们整理房间;
2.李奶奶向大家介绍中国传统文化一剪纸,和老人们一起完成剪纸作品;
3.……(补充一项活动)
注意事项
1.穿校服;
2.携带剪纸需要的工具,例如剪刀;
3.见到老人要挥手问好,不在敬老院大声喧哗。
作文要求:
1. 包括以上全部要点,适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3. 条理清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
4. 不少于80词 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Billy,
We are going to visit old people’s home. Here is some information you need to know.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Billy,
We are going to visit old people’s home. Here is some information you need to know.
It is organized from 9 a.m. to 12 a.m. on Saturday. We will gather at the school gate on Saturday morning at 8 o’clock. Then we will take the school bus to go there. We will help the elderly tidy up their rooms. Then Grandma Li will introduce the traditional Chinese culture—Paper Cutting, and we are going to work with the elderly to complete a Paper Cutting work. We will also plan to have lunch with them at noon. Remember to wear school uniforms and sports shoes. Carry the tools needed for Paper Cuttings. Don’t make a loud noise the nursing home and greet the elderly when meeting them.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,写电子邮件告知Billy关于周六拜访敬老院的相关活动信息;
②时态:一般将来时;
③提示:题目给出了内容要点,必须写出所给内容,可以适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明写邮件的原因,告知其本周六的活动;
第二步,介绍集合的时间地点和交通方式;
第三步,介绍到敬老院以后的活动计划,具体做哪些事情;
第四步,提醒一些活动过程中的注意事项和需要带的东西。
[亮点词汇]
①remember to do记得要做某事
②tidy up整理
[高分句型]
Carry the tools needed for Paper Cuttings. (过去分词作后置定语)
进阶拓展训练6篇
7.(23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期末)假如你是八年级学生李华,你校将和社区合作举办“传统文化进社区“Welcome Traditional Chinese Culture into Communities”的活动,为了让外国友人更好地了解中国传统文化,学生会正在招募一批活动志愿者,请根据以下要求写一封申请信。
要点:
申请理由
1. 有志愿者工作经验,有团队合作精神;
2. 英语口语好,可以与外国友人流利沟通;
3. 会剪纸,可以在现场进行展示和讲解;
4. ……(补充一点理由)
你对志愿者工作的看法(至少两点看法)
要求:
1. 要点齐全,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清晰,语句迹顺,意义连贯,书写规范;
3. 80—100 词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
参考词汇:team spirit 团队合作精神 fluently 流利地
Dear Student Union,
I am Li Hua, an eighth grader. I am writing to apply to be a volunteer for the activity—Welcome Traditional Chinese Culture into Communities.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Student Union,
I am Li Hua, an eighth grader. I am writing to apply to be a volunteer for the activity—Welcome Traditional Chinese Culture into Communities. I have volunteer work experience, so I know how to communicate with others. I’m also a team player and I know how to do things better. My spoken English is very good, so I can communicate fluently with foreign friends. I can make paper cutting. I can show and explain on the spot so that foreign friends can have a better understanding of Chinese traditional culture. Besides, I hope to spread Chinese culture.
I think volunteer work is great, it can make the world a better place.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:本文要求以李华的名义,写一封信自荐成为“Welcome Traditional Chinese Culture into Communitie”的活动志愿者。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时为主;人称以第一人称叙述;本文可分为两段式:第一段承接开头,具体从几个方面阐述自己成为志愿者的理由。第二段阐述自己对志愿者工作的看法。在写作时要做到无标点和语法错误,力求语句通顺,逻辑清晰。
8.(23-24八年级下·广东广州·期中)五一劳动节快要到了,学校学生会计划举行一次“Volunteer Day”活动。活动当天将有一系列的志愿活动供同学们参与。假设你是该活动的负责人,请根据以下内容和提示写一篇英语短文,为同学们介绍下列志愿工作。
要求:
志愿者日
活动内容
活动情况
教七年级学生做剪纸
制作漂亮的剪纸
为义卖 (charity sale) 筹款
和八年级学生一起做彩绘
制作有趣的漫画
…… (请你补充)
(请你补充)
…… (请你补充)
…… (请你补充)
1. 词数100字左右 (文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 包含表格中所有信息,补充内容,适当拓展。
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
The Volunteer Day is coming. For all our fellow students, I would like to introduce some of our voluntary work to you.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
The Volunteer Day is coming. For all our fellow students, I would like to introduce some of our voluntary work to you.
First, we are going to teach seventh graders to make beautiful paper cuttings so that we are able to sell them to raise money for the charity sale. Second, we will work with eighth grade students to create interesting comics. Because interesting comics can bring joy to kids with autism. Besides, we will meet ninth graders and share the interview experience with them. Also, remind them to pay attention to body language. Finally, we we are going to make small files for endangered animals, which can help students know more about endangered animals.
The voluntary work is meaningful and valuable.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,具体阐述提示给出的每项活动内容;
第二步,介绍增加的其他内容。
[亮点词汇]
①raise money for为……筹款
②share sth. with sb.与某人分享某物
③pay attention to注意
[高分句型]
Finally, we will make small files for endangered animals, which can help students know more about endangered animals.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
9.(23-24八年级下·广东广州·期中)学校学生会正在招募“手拉手”活动的志愿者,为外国来访学生展示传统手工制作(例如剪纸、风筝、灯笼等),以弘扬中华传统文化。假如你是李欣,请你用英文给学校学生会写一封自荐信,在信中说明你申请成为志愿者的理由以及你会做什么。
内容提示:
(1)Why would you like to be a volunteer?
(2)What do you think of traditional Chinese culture?
(3)What can you do as a volunteer?
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100—120;文中已给出内容不计入总数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Learning that the student union is looking for volunteers, I’m writing to apply to become a volunteer. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Xin
【答案】例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
Learning that the student union is looking for volunteers, I’m writing to apply to become a volunteer.
I am Li Xin, a boy from Class 2, Grade 9. I have been a volunteer since I was a middle school student. I have learned a lot from my volunteer work. For example, I know how to communicate well with others. The reason why I want to be a volunteer of the program is that I love Chinese culture very much and I want to spread Chinese culture. Besides, My English is very good, so I can communicate with them very easily. I think traditional Chinese culture is important and useful. I am going to show the traditional handicrafts, such as paper cutting, kites, lanterns and so on to spread the traditional Chinese culture. If I have the chance, I can make videos to tell international students the history of kites and teach them to make kites. I’m sure they will be very interested in it.
I’m looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Xin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:主要是一般现在时;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意不要漏写对中国传统文化的看法,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,由于开头已给出,故接下来具体介绍你自己;
第二步,阐述你申请成为志愿者的理由和对中国传统文化的看法;
第三步,阐述作为志愿者你会做什么。
[亮点词汇]
①learned a lot from...从……中学到很多
②besides此外
③spread传播
④be interested in...对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①The reason why I want to be a volunteer of the program is that I love Chinese culture very much and I want to spread Chinese culture.(why引导的定语从句,that引导的表语从句)
②I think traditional Chinese culture is important and useful.(省略that的宾语从句)
③If I have the chance, I can make videos to tell international students the history of kites and teach them to make kites. (if引导的条件状语从句)
10.(23-24八年级下·广东广州·期中)假设你所就读的国际学校要推广志愿活动,你作为“志愿者社团(Volunteer Club)”的成员需要向校长申请开展志愿活动。请你根据以下要点,用英语写一封申请信。
活动时间
本周末
目的
帮助有需要的人
校外活动
1、去附近的儿童医院讲故事
2、去敬老院,……(活动自拟)
校内活动
开展……筹款活动(活动自拟)
给有需要的人买健康的食物、衣服、书籍和玩具
意义
振奋他们的精神,……(请你补充1点)
要求:
(1)词数不少于80词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(2)可适当发挥,但要注意语言通顺、流畅、准确。
Dear Mr. White,
We are writing to ask permission for organizing some voluntary activities in our school. We would like to
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Yours sincerely,
Marco
【答案】Dear Mr. White,
We are writing to ask permission for organizing some voluntary activities in our school. We would like to tell you about the voluntary activities.
To help children in need, we are planning to do some voluntary work this weekend. We will go to the children’s hospital close to our school. We will tell stories to the children there. What’s more, we can visit the old people’s home to sing songs and play games with them. In order to help them more, we should have some activities to raise money. A book fair will be held in the playground. The students will sell their old books and magazines. We can use the money for buying healthy food, clothes, books and toys for the children.
We think our voluntary work can raise their spirits and help them to live a happy life. Could you please give us permission to have these activities? We are looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Marco
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出本文主题;
第二步,介绍志愿活动的情况;
第三步,希望得到对方的许可。
[亮点词汇]
①in need有需要
②what’s more并且
③in order to为了
[高分句型]
①To help children in need, we are planning to do some voluntary work this weekend.(动词不定式作目的状语)
②A book fair will be held in the playground. (一般将来时被动语态结构)
11.(23-24八年级下·广东广州·期中)上周你参加了学校的志愿活动,你们去探访了“春蕾学校”的孩子们,并开展了一系列活动。请根据以下内容提示,写一篇英语报道介绍这次活动,并谈谈自己对这次活动的感受。
Activities
Purposes (目的) of the activities
play cartoons, do the voices
raise spirits; make...colourful
discuss how to use body language
know the importance of...;
become more confident
learn about Chinese traditional skills—making dough toys, making Chinese knots (中国结)
...
(请你补充)
(请你补充)
You opinion(s): …
1、全文100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2、文章中不得出现真实姓名、校名等任何个人信息;
3、文章必须包含上图所提供的所有信息,可以适当增加细节,使行文更连贯。
Last week, we visited a Spring Bud School and held some activities for the children there. Here I would like to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Last week, we visited a Spring Bud School and held some activities for the children there. Here I would like to share the memorable day with you.
First of all, we played cartoons to the children and we cooperated with each other to do the voices. This could raise their spirits and make the day colourful. Second, we discussed how to use body language. And we all knew the importance of using proper body language when we communicated with others. It made the children there become more confident. Then, we learned about some traditional Chinese skills together, such as making dough toys and Chinese knots. At the same time, they knew more about traditional culture. Finally, we told them some interesting stories. Therefore, the kids understood the world was full of joy.
In my opinion, it is very meaningful for us to hold this activity. It can help them grow up better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要是一般过去时;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意至少要补充一个活动及其目的,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,补充完整第一段的内容;
第二步,具体阐述开展的一系列活动及其目的;
第三步,谈谈自己对这次活动的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①memorable难忘的,值得纪念的
②cooperate合作
③at the same time同时
④in my opinion在我看来
⑤grow up成长
[高分句型]
①And we all knew the importance of using proper body language when we communicated with others.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②Therefore, the kids understood the world was full of joy.(省略that的宾语从句)
12.(23-24八年级下·广东广州·期中)为弘扬互助友爱的“雷锋精神”,三月份学校学生会举办了一系列的志愿活动。请根据以下内容和提示写一篇英语短文,介绍下列志愿活动的情况,并谈谈你对这次活动的心得体会。
Where
What
Why
老人院(nursing home)
和老人们一起剪纸,玩游戏
*可以用来装饰(decorate)老人院
*给老人们带去欢乐
图书馆
作演讲: 介绍肢体语言的重要性
帮助人们提升交往沟通能力
新华小学
教学生用英语为卡通人物配音(dub)
?
你的体会?
注意:
1.补充表格,按照所给内容要点进行描述,可根据要点适当拓展;
2. 不得出现姓名、学校等真实的个人信息;
3. 词数80词左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Voluntary Work
To carry forward the Spirit of Lei Feng, the Students’ Union held some voluntary work last month. I would like to introduce some of our voluntary work to you.
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【答案】例文
Voluntary Work
To carry forward the Spirit of Lei Feng, the Students’ Union held some voluntary work last month. I would like to introduce some of our voluntary work to you.
We went to the nursing home. We cut paper and played games with the old people. We could decorate the old people’s home and bring joy to the old people. We also went to the library. We gave a talk about the importance of body language. It can help people improve their communication skills. We finally went to Xinhua Primary School to teach students to dub cartoon characters in English. They learned the joy of voice acting. These activities not only cultivate our ability to help others, but also make us feel happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据开头提示,具体阐述提示给出的每项活动内容;
第二步,介绍增加的其他内容;
第三步,表达自己的体会。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth.想做某事
②give a talk发表演讲
③the importance of……的重要性
④make sb. do sth.使某人做某事
[高分句型]
①We could decorate the old people’s home and bring joy to the old people.(and并列连词)
②These activities not only cultivate our ability to help others, but also make us feel happy.(not only…but also…不但……而且……)
能力综合实践6篇
13.(23-24八年级下·全国·课后作业)假如你是学生会主席苏明,你校师生想在校内举办书籍义卖,为开展环保宣传活动筹集资金。请你根据以下内容提示,给王校长写一封信,征得他的同意。词数80左右。
要点:1.活动原因:全校师生打算在超市附近举办环保宣传晚会,但是资金不足。
2.活动内容:举办一次书籍义卖,筹集资金。
3.时间和地点:下周一下午3点,学校操场。
4.参加人员:全校师生。
Dear Mr Wang,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Su Ming
【答案】例文:
Dear Mr Wang,
I am writing to ask your permission to hold a book fair at our school. We plan to have a party near the supermarket to ask people to protect the environment. However, we are short of money. So we are going to hold a book fair to raise some money. We would like to begin this activity at 3:00 p.m. next Monday on the playground. At that time, all the students and teachers at our school will take part in it.
Could you please give us the permission to hold these activities? We are looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Su Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信;
②时态:时态为一般现在时和一般将来时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍活动的相关信息,并征求校长的同意,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍写信的目的;
第二步,介绍活动原因、活动内容、活动时间和地点以及参加人员;
第三步,征求校长的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①ask sb. to do sth.要求某人做某事
②be short of缺乏
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
So we are going to hold a book fair to raise some money. (动词不定式作目的状语)
14.(23-24八年级下·广东深圳·单元测试)假如你是志愿者Li Hua,现学校将组织帮助如下三类需要帮助的人群:残疾人,社区里的老人以及孤儿。请你选择一类你将要帮助的人群,写一篇短文, 80词左右。
短文必须包括如下提示(也可稍加拓展)
1. 你成为志愿者多久了?
2. 你将帮助哪类人群?
3. 这类人群有哪些困难?
4. 你将如何帮助他们?
5. 你会继续帮助他们吗?
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My name is Li Hua. I am a helpful middle school student, and I have been a volunteer for 2 years. As a volunteer, I am going to help the elderly in the community. Many elderly people not only feel lonely but also have difficulty moving. So I plan to visit the elderly every weekend to help them wash clothes and clean up. I believe they no longer feel lonely with my help. In addition, I will learn a lot of knowledge that books cannot learn. I think this job is very meaningful because it will improve my social skills and make me happy. In my spare time, I will continue to help them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”、“现在完成时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要求已给出,学生不要遗漏题目中的要点,适当添加细节,写作时保持主谓一致,注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先介绍自己的基本信息,以及成为志愿者的时间;
第二步,具体阐述将帮助哪类人群,以及这类人群有哪些困难;
第三步,谈谈如何帮助他们,以及是否会继续帮助他们。
[亮点词汇]
①be going to do sth打算做某事
②have difficulty doing sth做某事有困难
③not only…but also…不仅……而且……
④In addition此外
⑤continue to do sth继续做某事
[高分句型]
①I believe they no longer feel lonely with my help.(宾语从句)
②I think this job is very meaningful because it will improve my social skills and make me happy.(原因状语从句)
15.(22-23八年级下·广东深圳·期末)假如你是阳光中学的学生李华,为帮助贫困山村的学生,你校举办了“Your kindness matters”的主题慈善活动。请你根据以下图文要点提示和要求,写一篇英文短文来介绍此次活动并分享你的感受。
要求:
(1)80 — 100词,开头已给出,不计入总词数内;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
(3)可适当增加细节,以使条理清楚、行文连贯;
(4)标点正确,书面整洁。
参考词汇:
central square 中心广场;charity sale 义卖
In order to help students in poor villages, Sunshine Middle School __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
【答案】例文
In order to help students in poor villages, Sunshine Middle School held a charity activity with the theme of “Your kindness matters” in the central square of our school on May 30th. Our event mainly accepted everyone to donate books and raised money for them. We also accepted clean clothes. In the activity, some of our students performed singing and dancing. Through this activity, we not only felt the joy of helping others, but also made us understand the hardships of life. We should cherish the good life now and study hard.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,先介绍本次活动的目的、主题、地点和时间;
第二步,具体介绍本次活动的内容,例如鼓励大家捐书、捐钱、捐衣服等;
第三步,书写结束语,表达参加此次活动的感受,例如帮助他人使人快乐;让我们理解了生活的不易;我们应该珍惜现在的生活并且好好学习等。
[亮点词汇]
① in the central square在中央广场
② not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
③ make sb do 使某人做某事
④ the hardships of life 生活的艰辛
⑤ cherish 珍惜
⑥ study hard 努力学习
[高分句型]
① Our event mainly accepted everyone to donate books and raised money for them.(and连接两个并列句)
② Through this activity, we not only felt the joy of helping others, but also made us understand the hardships of life.(not only...but also...句型)
16.(22-23八年级下·广东深圳·期中)假设你是鹏城中学的李华,你的学校打算组织一次慈善义卖活动(charity fair),请你以学生会(the Students’ Union)的名义,用英语为这次活动写一份倡议书,号召同学们积极参与本次活动。
要点:
1. 时间:本周六上午9:00—11:00;
2. 地点:学校操场;
3. 目的:帮助贫困山区儿童负担学费、购买学习用品和日常用品;
4. 义卖物品可以是书、文具(stationery)和玩具等,定价合理;
5. 钱款流向:希望工程(Project Hope)。
要求:
1. 须包含以上所给要点,并可适当发挥;
2. 条理清楚,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 80词左右,文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear students,
We will hold a charity fair_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Welcome to join us!
the Students’ Union
【答案】例文
Dear students,
We will hold a charity fair on the playground from 9 a.m. to 11 a.m. this Saturday morning. The aim of the activity is to help some poor children afford their tuition fee, some stationery and necessary daily items. Students who want to join in the charity fair can bring some old books, and stationery such as rulers, pens and pencil boxes. You can sell your old toys as well. Whatever you sell, you should give a reasonable price to it. After the charity fair, we will count the money and donate it to Project Hope.
It will be a meaningful activity because we will do what we can to help others.
Welcome to join us!
the Students’ Union
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”;
③提示:根据提示内容为学校即将组织的慈善义卖活动写一份倡议书,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍活动的时间、地点及目的;
第二步,介绍义卖的物品及钱款流向;
第三步,书写结语,表达活动的意义并号召大家加入该活动。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
②join in参加
③as well也
[高分句型]
①Students who want to join in the charity fair can bring some old books, and stationery such as rulers, pens and pencil boxes.(who引导定语从句)
②Whatever you sell, you should give a reasonable price to it.(whatever引导让步状语从句)
17.(22-23八年级下·广东深圳·期中)“赠人玫瑰,手留余香”,志愿者服务是新时代的雷锋精神的重要体现。因此, 你所在学校打算本周六组织学生拜访敬老院。假如你是八年级一班班长李明,需要通知因事缺勤的交换生Billy参加活动。请根据下面的内容提示,用英语写一封电子邮件告知其相关信息。内容提示如下:
时间
周六上午9点到12点
集合地点
学校大门
交通方式
校车
活动
1.帮助老人整理房间
2.李奶奶向大家介绍中国传统文化—剪纸,和老人一起完成一幅剪纸作品
3.……
注意事项
1.穿校服,运动鞋
2.携带剪纸需要的工具
3.不在敬老院大声喧哗
参考词汇:剪刀scissors
作文要求:
1.包括以上全部要点,适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.条理清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范:
4.不少于80词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Billy,
We are going to visit old people’s home.Here is some information you need to know.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear Billy,
We are going to visit old people’s home. Here is some information you need to know. The time of this event is from 9 am to 12 am on Saturday. We will gather at the school gate on Saturday morning at 8 o’clock. Then we will take the school bus to go there. We will help the elderly organize their rooms. Then Grandma Li will introduce the traditional Chinese culture—Paper Cuttings, and we will work with the elderly to complete a Paper Cutting work. We will also have lunch with them at noon. Remember to wear school uniforms and sports shoes. Carry the tools needed for Paper Cuttings. Don’t make a loud noise in the nursing home.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,写电子邮件告知Billy关于周六拜访敬老院的相关活动信息;
②时态:一般将来时;
③提示:题目给出了内容要点,必须写出所给内容,可以适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明写邮件的原因,告知其本周六的活动;
第二步,介绍集合的时间地点和交通方式;
第三步,介绍到敬老院以后的活动计划,具体做哪些事情;
第四步,提醒一些活动过程中的注意事项和需要带的东西。
[亮点词汇]
①remember to do记得要做某事
②organize the rooms整理房间
[高分句型]
①Carry the tools needed for Paper Cuttings. (过去分词作后置定语)
18.(23-24八年级下·广东广州·期中)假如你在上周和去儿童医院参加了一次志愿活动。 请根据下面的内容提示,用英语写简短文,并向学校英文报投稿。
要求:
1. 词数80左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 不得透露学校、 姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Last weekend, I went to visit the children at the Children’s Hospital..._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Last weekend, I went to visit the children at the Children’s Hospital. The children there are lonely. Some of them are disabled, while some of them suffer from serious illnesses.
I spent time with them, doing a series of activities. I taught them to draw comics to help them express their feelings through pictures and stories. Then, I made paper cuttings with them. The paper cuttings were put on the walls of their rooms and made the rooms warm and beautiful. At the end of the visit, we sang songs together because music can bring them joy and peace.
This unforgettable visit is interesting and meaningful. It raised the children’s spirits. It also offered me a good chance to realize how much I can do to help others. I will continue to do voluntary work in the future.
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求根据内容提示,写一篇英语短文;要求包含志愿活动的所有信息。
2.写作指导:此作文时态宜用一般过去时和一般现在时;采用第一人称口吻。此作文可采用3段落格式,第一段阐述探访对象;第二段阐述活动内容;第三段阐述活动意义。
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