Unit 1 Music 单元主题写作满分范文16篇（紧贴新教材主题）-2024-2025学年七年级英语下册重难点讲练全攻略（沪教版五四制2024）

2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料，已编校！ Unit1 Music 单元主题写作满分范文16篇（紧贴新教材主题） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．假如你是李明，你的三个好朋友分别喜欢不同的音乐。请根据下面的表格中的内容写一篇英语短文。 Name Favourite music Favourite musician Reason Peter pop music Leehom Wang make people relaxed Linda classical music Lang Lang play the piano well Tim rock music Cui Jian make people excited _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming. I have three good friends. They like different kinds of music. Peter likes pop music best. He likes Leehom Wang because his music makes people relaxed. Linda’s favourite music is classical music. Her favourite musician is Lang Lang because he plays the piano well. Tim likes rock music. Of all the musicians, he likes Cui Jian, a famous Chinese rock singer, best. He thinks Cui Jian’s music can make people excited. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，介绍三个好朋友最喜欢的音乐类型、音乐人及喜欢的原因。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总写自己有三个好朋友，喜欢不同种类的音乐； 第二步，分别介绍三个好朋友喜欢的音乐类型、音乐人及喜欢的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①different kinds of 不同种类的 ②play the piano 弹钢琴 [高分句型] He likes Leehom Wang because his music makes people relaxed.（because引导原因状语从句） 2．动听的音乐就像是飞舞的蝴蝶在空中翩翩起舞，也像是叮咚的泉水在山间流淌，有时候，也像是璀璨的星辰，在夜空里闪烁。各种各样的音乐中，你最喜欢哪一种呢？请从country music, light music, classical music, folk music, pop music…中选择你最喜欢的音乐种类，以“My favorite music”为题，写一篇不少于60 词的作文。 提示： 1. What kind of music do you like best? 2. When do you usually listen to it? 3. Why is it your favorite?         4. Who is your favorite musician or singer?     要求： 1. 短文应包括以上要点，并适当发挥，使文章连贯； 2. 书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名。   My favorite music _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: My favorite music There are many kinds of music. I like soft music best. Before I go to sleep, I always listen to soft music. It can help me relax and have a good dream. My mother tells me that before I was born, she listened to soft music all the time, so I must be affected by her. My favorite musician is Matthew Lien. His goal is to arouse people’s awareness of protecting the environment by music. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主，还有“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示要点并适当进行发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明自己最喜欢的音乐类型和听音乐的时间； 第二步，说明喜欢这类音乐的原因； 第三步，介绍自己最喜欢的音乐家。 [亮点词汇] ①many kinds of许多种 ②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ③be affected by受……影响 ④arouse one’s awareness唤起某人的意识 [高分句型] ①My mother tells me that before I was born, she listened to soft music all the time, so I must be affected by her.（that引导的宾语从句） ②His goal is to arouse people’s awareness of protecting the environment by music.（动词不定式作表语） 3．请你以“My Favorite Singer”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 My Favorite Singer ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favorite Singer Zhou Jielun is my favorite singer, and I like him very much. His English name is Jay Chow. It sounds so funny in Chinese pronunciation. He is a talent boy because he can make music by himself, not by others. And he also knows a lot about the music, especially the Moderns and Hip-pop music. I can sing many songs of him, for example, Qinghuaci, Yifuzhiming, and Qianlizhiwai. This is my favorite singer. I hope I will be a singer like him one day. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作，为话题作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作主题已给出，写作时注意围绕主题介绍自己最喜欢的歌手的信息和原因等内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题介绍自己最喜欢的歌手是谁； 第二步，描写喜欢他/她的原因； 第三步，书写结语，做出总结。 [亮点词汇] ① especially尤其 ② for example例如 ③ by himself他自己 [高分句型] ① He is a talent boy because he can make music by himself, not by others. （because引导的原因状语从句） ② I hope I will be a singer like him one day.（hope后接省略引导词that的宾语从句） 4．伟大的音乐家洗星海曾经说过：“音乐，是人生最大的快乐；音乐，是生活中的一股清泉音乐，是陶冶性情的熔炉。” 某英文网站正在开展以“The most beautiful song I have ever heard”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你听到过的最美的歌曲并说一说你和这首歌的故事。 写作提示： 1. What is the most beautiful song you have ever heard? 2. When did you hear it for the first time? 3. How do you feel when you hear it now? 写作要求： 1. 词数：80左右； 2. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 The most beautiful song I have ever heard _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The most beautiful song I have ever heard I like listening to music, especially English songs. I think Do Re Mi is the most beautiful one I have ever heard. It is the theme song of the film The Sound of Music. I first heard it when I was five years old in the kindergarten. It was such a beautiful and fun song that I couldn’t help singing along. Now, I still often listen to it. Whenever I am under stress, I’ll listen to it because it can make me happy and relaxed. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：本文主要谈谈你听到过的最美的歌曲并说一说你和这首歌的故事，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己听过的最好听的歌曲是什么； 第二步，介绍自己第一次是什么时候听到的，现在听的时候有什么感受。 [亮点词汇] ①listen to听 ②couldn’t help doing sth.忍不住做某事 [高分句型] ①I think Do Re Mi is the most beautiful one I have ever heard. (省略关系词的定语从句) ②It was such a beautiful and fun song that I couldn’t help singing along. (such...that引导的结构状语从句) ③Whenever I am under stress, I’ll listen to it because it can make me happy and relaxed. (because引导的原因状语从句) 5．英语课上，老师和同学们正在讨论自己最喜欢的事物。请你加入他们的讨论，介绍一下你最喜欢的人或物，并写一篇题为 My Favorite…的作文。 要求：1.介绍自己最喜欢的人或物，并给出至少两个喜欢的原因，可适当发挥。 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名； 3. 字数不少于80词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Favorite Music I like enjoying music very much. I listen to music whenever I am free. My favorite music is Chinese folk music. I prefer Chinese folk music for the following reasons. First, as you know, Chinese folk music has a long history and it is sung widely, from north to south and east to west. Second, Chinese folk music is close to people and nature. In fact, Chinese folk music is created by Chinese working people themselves. Finally, Chinese folk music sounds beautiful and it is full of life atmosphere. I hope Chinese folk music can spread to the world and be loved by more and more people. 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍自己最喜欢的事物，首先要把题目补充完整，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．音乐是每个人生活中不可缺少的一个重要部分，它让我们的工作、学习和生活变得丰富多彩，像一个人的灵魂一样陪伴着我们，帮助我们放松，让我们充满激情，享受美好时光……请根据以下思维导图中的内容提示，以“Music in My Life”为题，和我们分享你的音乐趣事。 要求： 1．可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当增减、拓展信息； 2．不得在作文中出现真实校名及考生真实姓名； 3．语句连贯，80词左右。 Music in My Life ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】【参考范文】 Music in My Life Music is an important part in my life. Because of it, my life is colorful. It’s like a soul of a man, and it is also like a good friend always around me. Good music brings us comfort and peace of mind. There are all kinds of music in the world, such as pop music, rock music, classic music, drum music and so on. I love music for many reasons. Soft music can help me relax after tiring study. When I feel lonely, rock music can change my bad feelings and make me excited again. At the age of 8, I began to learn music. I used to play the guitar, but now I love playing the piano. I am very good at it. I’m a music fan, and different kinds of music can bring me different feelings. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍音乐在自己生活中的重要性； 第二步，介绍音乐的种类以及音乐对自己的帮助或影响； 第三步，最后介绍何时学习的音乐以及学习得如何。 [亮点词汇] ① because of因为 ② all kinds of各种各样的 ③ used to do过去常常做 [高分句型] When I feel lonely, rock music can change my bad feelings and make me excited again.（when引导的时间状语从句） 7．音乐是每个人生活中不可缺少的一个重要部分，它让我们的工作、学习和生活变得丰富多彩，像一个人的灵魂(soul)一样陪伴着我们，帮助我们放松，让我们充满激情，享受美好时光……请根据以下思维导图中的内容提示，以“Music in My Life”为题，和我们分享你的音乐趣事。 Music in My Life 认识音乐 音乐的重要性？ 音乐的种类？ 走进音乐 为什么喜欢它？ 对你有什么影响？ 学习音乐 何时开始学？ 学得怎么样？ 要求： 1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当增减、拓展信息； 2. 不得在作文中出现真实校名及考生真实姓名； 3. 语句连贯，80词左右。 Music in My Life ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Music in My Life Music is an important part in my life. Because of it, my life is colorful. It’s like a soul of a man, and it is also like a good friend always around me. Good music brings us comfort and peace of mind. There are all kinds of music in the world, such as pop music, rock music, classic music, drum music and so on. I love music for many reasons. Soft music can help me relax after tiring study. When I feel lonely, rock music can change my bad feelings and make me excited again. At the age of 8, I began to learn music. I used to play the guitar, but now I love playing the piano. I am very good at it. I’m a music fan, and different kinds of music can bring me different feelings. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍音乐在自己生活中的重要性； 第二步，介绍音乐的种类以及音乐对自己的帮助或影响； 第三步，最后介绍何时学习的音乐以及学习得如何。 [亮点词汇] ① because of因为 ② all kinds of各种各样的 ③ used to do过去常常做 [高分句型] When I feel lonely, rock music can change my bad feelings and make me excited again.（when引导的时间状语从句） 8．请根据以下提示以“Mozart”为题目介绍音乐家莫扎特的情况。 莫扎特是一位很重要的作曲家。他于1756年出生于奥地利。不到6岁就开始弹奏钢琴，还可以演奏小提琴。他的家人带着他在欧洲许多城市进行巡演。他谱写了几百首动听的乐曲。然而他变的很穷。并且在1791年，年仅35岁的莫扎特去世了。和施特劳斯父子一样，他是一位伟大的欧洲音乐家，许多人仍然认为他的曲子是完美的。 1.词数80左右； 2.文章要包含所有要点。不能有遗漏。 提示词：作曲家composer；奥地利Austria ；施特劳斯Johann Strauss Mozart __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： Mozart Mozart was a very important composer. He was born in Austria in 1756. Before he was six he played not only the piano, but also the violin. His family took him around Europe and he gave concerts in many cities. He wrote hundreds of beautiful pieces of music. But he became very poor and died in 1791 when he was only 35. Like Johann Strauss, father and son, he was a great European musician, and many people still think his music is perfect. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍莫扎特的相关信息。 2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时。从他的出生地，学习和演奏钢琴的经历，以及人们对他的评价等方面来进行描述。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 9．张涛在一所国际学校读书。新学期开学之际，作为音乐俱乐部的负责人，他忙于招新工作，现在想委托你根据下表帮他做一张海报张贴在学校公告栏，以鼓励同学们踊跃加入音乐俱乐部。 音乐俱乐部 1. 活动时间：每周一、五下午3:00—4:00 2. 教授课程：钢琴、吉他、唱歌和舞蹈 联系人 张涛 电话 733-6952 要求： 1. 海报内容须包含表格内的所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 不少于60词 Tittle: ________________________ Do you like music? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                                  Do you like music? Do you like music? If so, please come to our club. It is open from 3:00 to 4:00 p.m. on Monday and Friday. We can teach you to play the piano and guitar. We can also teach you how to sing and dance. Join us now. Please call Zhang Tao at 733-6952. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是根据所给的表格内容写一张海报，内容包括音乐俱乐部、联系人和电话。以此鼓励同学们踊跃加入音乐俱乐部。 2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第一人为主。写作时开头可以用一般疑问句引入，其次可以用祈使句邀请同学加入俱乐部。同时可以适当使用一些短语，使文章更出彩，确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。 10．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 中国音乐有着悠久的历史和深厚的积淀。作为中国文化的有机组成部分，它蕴含着中华民族的精神和思想。 假如你是李华,你校英语社团公众号计划做关于中国音乐的系列推送，现就 “My favourite Chinese music”这一题目在校内收集素材。请你用英语给公众号留言，谈谈你最喜爱哪种中国音乐，对其作简要介绍，并说明你喜爱这种音乐的理由。 提示词语： classical, long history, play, beautiful, learn 提示问题： 1. What kind of Chinese music do you like best? 2. What do you know about it? 3. Why do you like it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： My favourite Chinese music There are many kinds of music, such as pop music, rock music, folk music and so on. But I like Chinese classical music best. Chinese classical music has a long history. There are many well-known songs which have a lasting value. When listening to it, I can feel the beauty of Chinese culture and be proud of the treasure. And besides I can feel relaxed after a day’s hard work. 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求以“My favourite Chinese music”为题写一篇短文；要求包含所有提示内容。 2. 写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时为主；采用第一人称口吻；可采用2段落格式，第一段：引出自己喜欢的音乐类型；第二段：阐述对此类型音乐的了解和喜欢的理由。 能力综合实践6篇 11．以“I love music”为题写一篇70词左右的短文，内容包括： 1. 介绍你的音乐爱好； 2. 每天晚饭后弹半小时吉他； 3. 你最喜欢流行音乐，了解很多歌星，也能唱很多流行歌曲； 4. 有时去听音乐会。 I love music ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I love music I love music! I enjoy playing instruments, listening to music and singing songs. I play the guitar for half an hour after supper every day. Pop music is my favourite. I often listen to music on my way to school or home. I not only know many singers, but also can sing many popular songs. Sometimes my parents take me to concerts. Music makes me happy and relaxed. Music is really important to me. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍你的音乐爱好； 第二步，其次介绍你平时的活动； 第三步，谈谈自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①enjoy doing sth喜欢做某事 ②on one’s way to…在去……的路上 ③take sb to…带某人去…… [高分句型] ①I enjoy playing instruments, listening to music and singing songs.（enjoy doing sth喜欢做某事） ②I not only know many singers, but also can sing many popular songs.（not only…but also不仅……而且……） 12．假如你叫李华，是一名中学生，非常喜欢音乐，经常收听一档音乐节目。请你用英语给这档节目的主持人Philip写一封信，70词左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 提示： 1. 你喜欢这档节目，因为它使你感到轻松； 2. 每当感到疲劳时，音乐带给你力量（power），使你快乐； 3. 你喜欢英文歌曲，从英文歌曲里学会了很多单词； 4. 下次能不能播放你最喜欢的My Heart Will Go On这首歌。 要求： 1. 语法正确，书写工整； 2. 词数在70词左右。 Dear Philip, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Philip, I like your music programme so much, because it makes me feel relaxed. It can give me power when I am tired and it can make me happy when I am sad. I like the the English songs. I’m glad to tell you that I learned many English words from some English songs. My favorite song is My heart will go on. Could you please play this song next time? I really hope the programme will become more and more popular among our students. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍一档音乐节目的主持人写一封信，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，表示自己喜欢这档音乐节目； 第二步，详细介绍为什么喜欢这档音乐节目； 第三步，询问下次能不能播放你最喜欢的My Heart Will Go On这首歌； 第四步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①be glad to do sth.很高兴做某事 ②become more and more popular变得越来越受欢迎 [高分句型] ①I like your music programme so much, because it makes me feel relaxed.(because引导的原因状语从句) ②It can give me power when I am tired and it can make me happy when I am sad. I like the the English songs.(when引导的时间状语从句) 13．假如你叫刘成，是一名中学生，经常收听音乐节目。请你用英语给节目主持人写一封信。要点如下： ①你很喜欢这个节目，特别是其中播放的英语歌曲； ②学习很忙，疲劳的你会打开收音机收听这个节目； ③你希望能从英文歌曲中接触一些新单词； ④你最喜欢My Heart Will go on这首歌，希望能得到这首歌的歌词（words of the song）。 要求：80词左右 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear sir, I’m a middle school student. I often listen to your music program. I like it very much, especially the English songs. As a student, I’m busy with my studies. When I feel tired, I will turn on the radio and listen to your program. I hope I can learn some new words from the English songs. Of all the English songs, I like My Heart Will Go On best. Would you please give me the words of the song? Yours, Liu Cheng 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中自己喜欢的音乐节目的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“请你用英语给节目主持人写一封信。”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“很喜欢这个节目、原因、最喜欢My Heart Will go on这首歌等”几个方面重点介绍自己喜欢的音乐节目的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语，表达“你能告诉我这首歌的歌词吗”的请求。 [亮点词汇] ①listen to听 ②turn on打开 ③learn…from…从……中学习…… ④give sb sth给某人某物 [高分句型] When I feel tired, I will turn on the radio and listen to your program. (when引导的时间状语从句) 14．作家雨果说过：“开启人类智慧的钥匙有三把，一是字母，二是数字，三是音符。”但是，不同的人喜欢不同的音乐类型。假如你是Li Ming，你的家庭成员也对音乐很感兴趣，请根据内容提示，以My family’s favourite music为题，写一篇英语短文。 提示： Name Favourite music Reason (理由) parents classical music lively sisiter dance music beautiful brother rock music exciting… I … … 注意： 1. 内容必须积极向上，并包含要点内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得透露个人信息，否则不予评分； 3. 词数70左右，开头已给出。 参考词汇：enjoy 享受 My family’s favourite music Music is an important part of our life now. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My family’s favourite music Music is an important part of our life now. Different member of my family like different kinds of music. Now, I would like to share my family’s favourite music. My parents like classical music best. They think it is lively. My sister likes dance music. She thinks it is beautiful, and she likes dancing. My brother is a fan of rock music. It can make him excited when he is tired. I enjoy listening to pop music. I feel relaxed when I listen to it. Music makes us happy. Let’s enjoy music and enjoy life! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体说明家庭成员喜欢不同种类的音乐； 第二步，结合表格内容具体描述家人最喜欢的音乐； 第三步，最后表达总结。 [亮点词汇] ①different kinds of不同种类的 ②would like to do想要做 ③enjoy doing sth喜欢做某事 [高分句型] It can make him excited when he is tired.（when引导的时间状语从句） 15．假设你是李华，你想向你的外国朋友介绍一下中国的音乐。请根据以下提示，写一篇短文。 提示： 1. 中国有许多不同种类的音乐，如古典音乐、民间音乐、流行音乐等； 2. 古典音乐具有悠久的历史，能让人放松； 3. 民间音乐通常来自于民间故事，反映了人们的生活； 4. 流行音乐很受年轻人的欢迎，因为它很容易理解和演唱。 要求： 1. 词数不少于60； 2. 可适当发挥。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello! I am Li Hua, and I would like to tell you about Chinese music. China has many different kinds of music, such as classical, folk, and pop music. Classical music in China has a long history and it is very relaxing to listen to. Folk music often comes from stories of the people and reflects their daily lives. Pop music is very popular among young people because it is easy to understand and sing along with. Chinese music is diverse and full of emotions, which makes it really special. I hope you get a chance to enjoy it! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体说明中国有许多不同种类的音乐； 第二步，介绍古典音乐、民间音乐和流行音乐； 第三步，最后书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ① different kinds of 不同种类的 ② come from 来自 ③ sing along with 跟着唱 [高分句型] ①Pop music is very popular among young people because it is easy to understand and sing along with.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②Chinese music is diverse and full of emotions, which makes it really special. （which引导的定语从句） 16．假如你是张华，你的英国笔友 Mike是流行音乐的狂热爱好者，他给你发来邮件，询问你最喜爱的音乐类型和歌手。请你根据表格中的问题提示及要求，给Mike回一封邮件，告诉他相关情况。 与作要点 参考句型 1. What kind of music do you like best? 2. Why do you like it so much? 3. Who is your favorite singer? When I listen to …, I always feel… I can know more about their real life by… I hope to see him/her sing live one day. 要求： 1. 邮件要包括表格内所有提示要点，可适当拓展； 2. 邮件中不得出现与你自己相关的真实信息； 3. 词数不少于80，邮件的开头和结尾都已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, How is everything going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thanks! Yours, Zhang Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, How is everything going? I’m very glad to get your letter. Now let me tell you about my favorite music and singer. I know you’re a fan of pop music. I like pop music best, too. When I listen to pop songs, I always feel very relaxed. The song writers write down their experiences and feelings in the songs, so I can know more about their real life by listening to pop songs. Of all the singers, my favourite one is Li Jian. He has a beautiful voice. I’ve already listened to most of his songs and I hope to see him sing live one day. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thanks! Yours, Zhang Hua 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括表格中所列三个方面的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，问候对方；开门见山，引出话题：介绍自己最喜欢的音乐及歌手； 第二步，介绍自己喜欢的音乐类型、歌手及原因； 第三步，表达期待。 ［亮点词汇］ ① hear from sb.  收到某人的来信 ② write down 写下 ［高分句型］ ① When I listen to pop songs, I always feel very relaxed. (when引导时间状语从句) ②I know you’re a fan of pop music. (宾语从句) 16 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 21 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料，已编校！ Unit1 Music 单元主题写作满分范文16篇（紧贴新教材主题） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．假如你是李明，你的三个好朋友分别喜欢不同的音乐。请根据下面的表格中的内容写一篇英语短文。 Name Favourite music Favourite musician Reason Peter pop music Leehom Wang make people relaxed Linda classical music Lang Lang play the piano well Tim rock music Cui Jian make people excited _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．动听的音乐就像是飞舞的蝴蝶在空中翩翩起舞，也像是叮咚的泉水在山间流淌，有时候，也像是璀璨的星辰，在夜空里闪烁。各种各样的音乐中，你最喜欢哪一种呢？请从country music, light music, classical music, folk music, pop music…中选择你最喜欢的音乐种类，以“My favorite music”为题，写一篇不少于60 词的作文。 提示： 1. What kind of music do you like best? 2. When do you usually listen to it? 3. Why is it your favorite?         4. Who is your favorite musician or singer?     要求： 1. 短文应包括以上要点，并适当发挥，使文章连贯； 2. 书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名。   My favorite music _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．请你以“My Favorite Singer”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 My Favorite Singer ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．伟大的音乐家洗星海曾经说过：“音乐，是人生最大的快乐；音乐，是生活中的一股清泉音乐，是陶冶性情的熔炉。” 某英文网站正在开展以“The most beautiful song I have ever heard”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你听到过的最美的歌曲并说一说你和这首歌的故事。 写作提示： 1. What is the most beautiful song you have ever heard? 2. When did you hear it for the first time? 3. How do you feel when you hear it now? 写作要求： 1. 词数：80左右； 2. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 The most beautiful song I have ever heard _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．英语课上，老师和同学们正在讨论自己最喜欢的事物。请你加入他们的讨论，介绍一下你最喜欢的人或物，并写一篇题为 My Favorite…的作文。 要求：1.介绍自己最喜欢的人或物，并给出至少两个喜欢的原因，可适当发挥。 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名； 3. 字数不少于80词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．音乐是每个人生活中不可缺少的一个重要部分，它让我们的工作、学习和生活变得丰富多彩，像一个人的灵魂一样陪伴着我们，帮助我们放松，让我们充满激情，享受美好时光……请根据以下思维导图中的内容提示，以“Music in My Life”为题，和我们分享你的音乐趣事。 要求： 1．可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当增减、拓展信息； 2．不得在作文中出现真实校名及考生真实姓名； 3．语句连贯，80词左右。 Music in My Life ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．音乐是每个人生活中不可缺少的一个重要部分，它让我们的工作、学习和生活变得丰富多彩，像一个人的灵魂(soul)一样陪伴着我们，帮助我们放松，让我们充满激情，享受美好时光……请根据以下思维导图中的内容提示，以“Music in My Life”为题，和我们分享你的音乐趣事。 Music in My Life 认识音乐 音乐的重要性？ 音乐的种类？ 走进音乐 为什么喜欢它？ 对你有什么影响？ 学习音乐 何时开始学？ 学得怎么样？ 要求： 1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当增减、拓展信息； 2. 不得在作文中出现真实校名及考生真实姓名； 3. 语句连贯，80词左右。 Music in My Life ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．请根据以下提示以“Mozart”为题目介绍音乐家莫扎特的情况。 莫扎特是一位很重要的作曲家。他于1756年出生于奥地利。不到6岁就开始弹奏钢琴，还可以演奏小提琴。他的家人带着他在欧洲许多城市进行巡演。他谱写了几百首动听的乐曲。然而他变的很穷。并且在1791年，年仅35岁的莫扎特去世了。和施特劳斯父子一样，他是一位伟大的欧洲音乐家，许多人仍然认为他的曲子是完美的。 1.词数80左右； 2.文章要包含所有要点。不能有遗漏。 提示词：作曲家composer；奥地利Austria ；施特劳斯Johann Strauss Mozart __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．张涛在一所国际学校读书。新学期开学之际，作为音乐俱乐部的负责人，他忙于招新工作，现在想委托你根据下表帮他做一张海报张贴在学校公告栏，以鼓励同学们踊跃加入音乐俱乐部。 音乐俱乐部 1. 活动时间：每周一、五下午3:00—4:00 2. 教授课程：钢琴、吉他、唱歌和舞蹈 联系人 张涛 电话 733-6952 要求： 1. 海报内容须包含表格内的所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 不少于60词 Tittle: ________________________ Do you like music? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 中国音乐有着悠久的历史和深厚的积淀。作为中国文化的有机组成部分，它蕴含着中华民族的精神和思想。 假如你是李华,你校英语社团公众号计划做关于中国音乐的系列推送，现就 “My favourite Chinese music”这一题目在校内收集素材。请你用英语给公众号留言，谈谈你最喜爱哪种中国音乐，对其作简要介绍，并说明你喜爱这种音乐的理由。 提示词语： classical, long history, play, beautiful, learn 提示问题： 1. What kind of Chinese music do you like best? 2. What do you know about it? 3. Why do you like it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 能力综合实践6篇 11．以“I love music”为题写一篇70词左右的短文，内容包括： 1. 介绍你的音乐爱好； 2. 每天晚饭后弹半小时吉他； 3. 你最喜欢流行音乐，了解很多歌星，也能唱很多流行歌曲； 4. 有时去听音乐会。 I love music 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12．假如你叫李华，是一名中学生，非常喜欢音乐，经常收听一档音乐节目。请你用英语给这档节目的主持人Philip写一封信，70词左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 提示： 1. 你喜欢这档节目，因为它使你感到轻松； 2. 每当感到疲劳时，音乐带给你力量（power），使你快乐； 3. 你喜欢英文歌曲，从英文歌曲里学会了很多单词； 4. 下次能不能播放你最喜欢的My Heart Will Go On这首歌。 要求： 1. 语法正确，书写工整； 2. 词数在70词左右。 Dear Philip, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 13．假如你叫刘成，是一名中学生，经常收听音乐节目。请你用英语给节目主持人写一封信。要点如下： ①你很喜欢这个节目，特别是其中播放的英语歌曲； ②学习很忙，疲劳的你会打开收音机收听这个节目； ③你希望能从英文歌曲中接触一些新单词； ④你最喜欢My Heart Will go on这首歌，希望能得到这首歌的歌词（words of the song）。 要求：80词左右 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．作家雨果说过：“开启人类智慧的钥匙有三把，一是字母，二是数字，三是音符。”但是，不同的人喜欢不同的音乐类型。假如你是Li Ming，你的家庭成员也对音乐很感兴趣，请根据内容提示，以My family’s favourite music为题，写一篇英语短文。 提示： Name Favourite music Reason (理由) parents classical music lively sisiter dance music beautiful brother rock music exciting… I … … 注意： 1. 内容必须积极向上，并包含要点内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得透露个人信息，否则不予评分； 3. 词数70左右，开头已给出。 参考词汇：enjoy 享受 My family’s favourite music Music is an important part of our life now. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．假设你是李华，你想向你的外国朋友介绍一下中国的音乐。请根据以下提示，写一篇短文。 提示： 1. 中国有许多不同种类的音乐，如古典音乐、民间音乐、流行音乐等； 2. 古典音乐具有悠久的历史，能让人放松； 3. 民间音乐通常来自于民间故事，反映了人们的生活； 4. 流行音乐很受年轻人的欢迎，因为它很容易理解和演唱。 要求： 1. 词数不少于60； 2. 可适当发挥。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16．假如你是张华，你的英国笔友 Mike是流行音乐的狂热爱好者，他给你发来邮件，询问你最喜爱的音乐类型和歌手。请你根据表格中的问题提示及要求，给Mike回一封邮件，告诉他相关情况。 与作要点 参考句型 1. What kind of music do you like best? 2. Why do you like it so much? 3. Who is your favorite singer? When I listen to …, I always feel… I can know more about their real life by… I hope to see him/her sing live one day. 要求： 1. 邮件要包括表格内所有提示要点，可适当拓展； 2. 邮件中不得出现与你自己相关的真实信息； 3. 词数不少于80，邮件的开头和结尾都已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, How is everything going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thanks! 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