专题16.书面表达解题技巧及20篇训练-2025年福建省中考英语讲义

书面表达解题技巧及20篇训练 中考“书面表达”评分标准如下： 档次 分值 评分标准 第五档 13—15 包含所有信息，内容完整，语句通顺，意思连贯。没有或基本没有语法、拼写错误，书写规范，词数符合要求。 第四档 10—12 包含大部分信息，内容较完整，表达基本清楚，语句较通顺，有少量语法、拼写错误，书写规范，词数基本符合要求。 第三档 7—9 写出基本信息，语句基本通顺，但句子较简单，表达不够清楚，有部分语法、拼写错误。书写基本规范。 第二档 4—6 写出部分信息，表达不清楚，有较多语法、拼写错误。。 第一档 1—3 仅能传递个别信息，通篇只有个别句子可读。 0分 只字未写，或写的内容与所要求的内容无关。 第一步，审题。 拿到题目后，看清题目的要求是什么、要点是什么、特殊要求是什么。如你是叫李华，还是叫其他名字，写议论文还是记叙文等等。诸如此类的硬性要求，都最好用铅笔做个记号，以免出错。 第二步，打草稿。 有的同学怕出错，全文都打草稿再眷写，这种做法不太可取，毕竟考试时间宝贵。还有的同学不打草稿，这种做法更不可取。一来容易出错，二来边写边想会造成思维不连贯，即使思维连贯也无法斟词酌句，完美地表达自己的观点。 草稿怎么打? 1.结构:即你打算分几段写，每段都写什么?哪段起，哪段承，哪段转合，心里都要有数。 2.关键词:结构拟定后，迅速在草稿纸上写下这篇作文可能用到的一些关键词，比如你在作文题目中可能看到“聪明”这个关键词，你最初写下的往往是clever,再仔细想想，你是不是又想到了smart,diligent等词。你可以挑个最合适的用。 3.句式:先用最普通的陈述句把语句在头脑中过一遍，然后看看都能改成什么句式。能不能把一句陈述句改成问句，能不能用上一个双重否定句，能不能用一个主语从句套定语从句的长句，能不能用一个插入语等等，第三步，正式写。 草稿打完后，就要正式写了。注意，英语作文的卷面很重要，一定要把字写整第三步，正式写。 草稿打完后，就要正式写了。注意，英语作文的卷面很重要，一定要把字写整齐，写清楚。没有把握的词和句子不要用。 第四步，检查。注意，最最重要的一步来了。尽管很小心，可是学生写英语作文时还是会犯下很多错误。即使时间再紧，请务必留下1~2分钟检查作文的时间，消除隐性错误。需要说明的是，英语的开头和结尾是最关键的，尤其是开头。基本上，写的作文不跑题，遵守题目要求，有一个漂亮的开头和一个还过得去的结尾，2~3个高级词汇，1~2个漂亮的句子，再加上整齐的字迹，作文的得分档次就提高了。 一般来说，掌握的词汇越多，运用英语的能力也会越强。同学们可以选择适合自己的多种英语书籍、报刊来阅读。在阅读过程中，由于单词、词组的反复出现，同学们就能反复接触到这些单词和词组，从而巩固所记的词汇。另外通过文章学习词汇和短语，对词汇和短语的意义、用法能理解得更深、更全面，这样也会更容易记忆。要学会用熟悉的词来表达自己的思想。用词组还是句子往往没有统一的标准，但要注意区分书面用语与口语。 一、基本词语的灵活选用 首先，注意句中关键词汇的运用要符合英语语言习惯，有时过于书面化，还不如用常用语。 样句1一大早我们买了些圣诞礼物。 Early in the morning we purchased some Christmas presents. (purchased太过于书面化，改为bought更常用)其次，在用词正确的前提下，多用生动形象的词语，以增强语言的表现力和感染力。全部资料电子版在公众号:逆袭墙 样句2他家的墙壁非常白。 The wall of his house is as white as snow. 二、高级词汇的合理使用 高级词汇主要是指《考试大纲》中没有列入的，但在实际运用中使用较频繁的词汇。大纲中较常用词汇通过构词法形成的词汇也属于高级词汇。 1.挖掘考纲外词汇。 有些单词在英语《考试大纲》中确实未曾出现，但在阅读时经常碰到。如:annoyed,currently等。 样句He was annoyed that she had forgotten his birthday.(annoyed比angry高级) 2.挖掘可替代词汇。 使用词组、习语来代替简单枯燥的词汇。如:用make full use of代替use,用look forward to代替hope等。 样句1 We had better make full use of something inexpensive.(make full use of比use高级) 样句2 I'm looking forward to your visit next week.(look forward to 高级) 有的单词很常见，且“洋味”十足，表达地道，非常有“味感”,这类词也被视为高级词汇。如share,view等。 样句1 We all share one and the same planet.(share比live in更有“味感”)样句2 We can view the problem in many ways.(view比look at更有内涵) 1.句子要完整。完整是好句子的第一要点。 2.句子要连贯。所谓连贯，一是指意思上的连贯;二是指结构上的连贯。也就是说一个句子不仅要做到遣词造句的和谐，还要做到思想内容的和谐。例如:Tell my friend if she is at home,I will go to see her.该句因语序的关系，使意思不明确。如果my friend与she是同一个人，我们应该说:If my friend is at home,tell her I will go to see her,如果不是同一个人，就应说:Tell my friend I will go to see her if she is at home. 3.句子须简洁。句中不应有任何不必要的词。只要意思表达充分，用词越少越好用词过多只会使意思更加模糊不清，而不是更加清楚。 4.句子要重点突出。凡是重要的意思都应在表达时予以强调。我们可以使用倒装、感叹、重复、反问等方法对应该强调的词语或句子加重语气。一般情况下，一个句子的开头和末尾是最引人注目的地方。全部资料电子版在公众号:逆袭例如:There was an old woman at the head of the queue.这是一般的表达方式。但可改成倒装句:At the head of the queue was an old woman.通过这种改变分别突出了at the head of the queue以及an old woman,这样句子就显得生动有力。 5.句子要多样化。句型的多样化，对好的文章来说是必不可少的。为多样化起见，短句和长句，简单句、并列句和复合句等都应交替使用。也可偶尔用一个问句、祈使句或感叹句，但是不要只是为了多样化而频频变换句型。 6.句子要一致。一个句子无论长短应当只有一个中心思想。 例如:Class Three have a map,and the map is on the wall of their classroom,and it's a map of China.此句在语法和词汇上都没有什么错，但由于东拼西凑，让人不知所云。如果将这一句改为三个短句，使每句都有一个中心思想，那么就条理清楚，意义明确了。 试比软:Class Three have a map.The map is on the wall of their classroom. It's a map of China. 1.语序错误。句子语序有自然语序和倒装语序两种，一不注意就会出错。 例如:(误)Could you tell me where is the park?-(iE) Could you tell me where the park is? 2.句子中时态、语态的错误。英语中常用时态有现在时、进行时和完成时。语态有主动语态和被动语态，一定要正确使用。 例如:(误)The house has been built five years ago.-(iE)The house was built five years ago.(误)The bike hasn't returned yet, (E)The bike hasn't been returned yet. 3.句子中出现不平行结构。平行结构类似汉语的排比句式，它常常用同样的格式表达两个以上平行内容。例如: (误)We can get there either by car or taking a bus. (iE)We can get there either by car or by bus. (误)She likes studying English but she doesn't like English grammar.-(iE)She likes studying English but she doesn't like studying English grammar. 4.汉语式英语。英汉两种语言在表达习惯上有很大差异，要注意别犯汉语式英语错误。例如: (诶)Although he is over 60,but he is very healthy.→(iE) He is over 60, but he is very healthy./Although he is over 60,he is very healthy.第三章不同形式的写作模板 (一)记叙文 记叙文是以叙述人物的经历或事物全部资料电子版在公众号:逆袭墙的发展变化过程为主的一种文体。它分为记人和记事两种。记叙文的几个要点: 1.时间、地点、人物、事件，这几个要素在写作时要交代清楚, 2.人称:记叙文一般有第一人称和第三人称两种叙事方式。3.记叙文的线索一般为时间，即按照事件的发展顺序来写。也可以按照地点的线索来写，即以地点的转移为顺序。 4.重点突出，层次分明，详略得当。 5.注意文章的完整性。 6.所用的时态通常为一"般过去时。 记叙文写作模板 记叙文通常分为三段: 第一段，开篇点题。交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点等。 第二段，具体叙述。讲述事件发生的原因、经过和结果。 第三段，总结感受。根据写作要点进行取舍。 经典范文欣赏 Last weekend,I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe.On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents,I searched the Internet for the train schedule,the weather in Beidaihe,and some hotel information.In the afternoon,I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue.After dinner,I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents need,such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella,and a map,The next morning,I went to the station to see them off.Waving goodbye to them on the platform,I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey. （2024福建中考） 假设你是李华，学校上周五开展了为期一天的实践活动。你的笔友Henry对这次活动很感兴趣。请你结合以下提示，用英语给他写一封信，谈谈活动过程及你的感想。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Henry, I’m glad that you’re interested in our school study tour last Friday. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua (2022福建中考) 假定你是李华,近日你校开展了以“热爱劳动,珍爱粮食”为主题的实践活动。请你结合以下图示,用英语给笔友John写一封信,分享活动过程和感受。词数80左右。 注意事项: 1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范; 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (二)议论文 要点: 1.观点鲜明，文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。 2.层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，不同层次之间要分明，过渡清晰自然。 3.最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。 4.时态一般采用一般现在时。 5.语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。 A.对比观点型议论文写作模板 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1.有一些人认为…… 2.另一些人认为…… 3.我的看法……Recently we have had a heated discussion on(主题).Some students think it's a good idea...because(支持A的理出一).Besides,(理出二).On the contrary,other students are against....In their opinions,(支持B的理由一).What is worse,(理由二). From my point of view,I think(我的观点).The reason is that(原因). 经典范文赏析 Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities. Some students think it's a good idea to keep pets because many old people who live alone at home can get some comfort from pets.Besides, getting along well with animals will make our life interesting.On the contrary, the other students are against the idea.In their opinions,if too many people keep pets at home,it is bad for the environment. What is worse,pets may make too much noise and even attack people.I like animals,so I don't think it's bad to keep pets at home.But we must take some measures to prevent them from polluting our environment. （2024河南中考） 在日常学习中，有的学生喜欢独自学习，有的则喜欢和大家一起学习。你更喜欢哪一种学习方式？校刊英语专栏正在以“Studying alone or studying with a group?”为题开展征文活动，请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，从以下两种学习方式中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文，陈述你的理由，向专栏投稿。 Studying alone Studying with a group solve problems on my own get help from others keep my mind on schoolwork share ideas with group members 写作要求： 1．文中须包含所选学习方式的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2．文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3．词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ B.社会现象型议论文写作模板 1.列出具体的社会问题或者现象。 2.分析产生的原因及其影响。 3.提出解决办法。It is known to us(现象).On one hand,(原因/影响一).On the other hand,(原因/影响二).In my opinion(我的观点).We should(解决办法). In a word(总结). 经典范文欣赏 My opinions on cheating in examinations It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. On one hand, as students,we often take examinations at school,but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us.0n the other hand, some of us are lazy and don't work hard at their lessons.So when taking examinations,they some-times cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.In my opinion,it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools.We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. What's more,we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations. In a word,it is wrong to cheat in examinations. （2024吉林中考） 当我们遇到自己无法解决的问题或烦恼时，应该学会积极向他人寻求帮助。请以“Asking for Help”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括： （1）积极应对问题或烦恼的必要性； （2）寻求帮助的益处； （3）结合生活经历，简述你或他人寻求帮助的一个事例； （4）提供寻求帮助的方法(至少两个)。 写作要求： （1）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； （2）词数90—100，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数； （3）书写规范，卷面整洁； （4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 Asking for Help ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2024成都中考） 你校英语报就“团队合作”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示，以“Be a Good Team Member”为题投稿。 Be a Good Team Member 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Be a Good Team Member ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (三)说明文 A.介绍事物说明文 以简明的文字介绍事物的形状、性质、构造、变化、功用、特征等的文章。写好说明文的关键是抓住事物的特征，说明事物的顺序要有一定的逻辑性。说明文常见的顺序有时间顺序、空间顺序、逻辑顺序等。 假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友David 对中医很感兴趣。请你结合以下图示,用英语写一封电子邮件,向他推荐即将在你校举办的“传统中医进校园”的宣传日活动,说明推荐理由,并请他关注线上相关信息。词数80左右。 注意事项: 1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范; 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear David,  I’m pleased to know that you’re interested in Chinese medicine. Now, I’d like to share with you some information about Traditional Chinese Medicine Day in our school, which is going to take place on July 31, 2020.  On that day, a famous doctor will give us a talk on Chinese medicine. And there will be a show about its development. Also, the film Li Shizhen will be on. I’m sure the activities would be very helpful to you. I hope you can visit www.intelschool.com and have a better understanding of traditional Chinese medicine. Best wishes. （2024安徽中考） 假设你是李辉，上周你在学校举行的 “消防安全日” 活动中学会了灭火器的使用方法。请结合下图信息，写一篇英语短文，给校英文报投稿。 要点: 1. 活动目的； 2. 灭火器的使用方法； 3. 你的体会。 注意: 1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80~100（首句已为你写好，不计入总词数） ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ B.分析利弊型说明文写作模板 这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物不身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度或对事物前景提出预测。 1.说明事物现状。 2.事物本身的优缺点(或一方面) 3.你对现状(或前景)的看法。 Nowadays many people prefer(现状)because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally,its advantages can be seen as follows.First(现状的优点一).Besides(优点二). But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that(现状的缺点一).To make matters worse,(缺点二). Through the above analysis,I believe that the positive aspects overweight the negative ones.Therefore,I would like to(我的看法). 经典范文赏析 Nowadays many youngsters prefer to go online in their spare time.Generally,its advantages can be seen as follows:first, through the Internet, they can gain new knowledge and the latest news at home and abroad.Besides, network offers them a convenient way to communicate with each other.The Internet makes their life outside class colorful. But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.0neof the important disadvantages is that some students prefer to play computer games instead of studying their lessons,To make matters worse, there are some students who are often absent from school for days.Through the above analysis,I think we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in,Only in this way can we make full use of it.As for me,I would like to go online in my spare time. (四)常考应用文 一．建议信写作模板 Dear(对方的称呼)，You have asked me for my advice with regard to(问题),and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions:(建议的内容). I hope you(祝愿). Yours sincerely, Li Ming 经典范文欣赏 Hi Worried,I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment.The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong,so you don't have to worry so much.The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you'll regret.Here are three useful tips. First,talk to someone you trust about how you feel.This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger,And third,remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal. Yours, Jamie （2024常州中考） 假如你是李平，收到英国笔友 Peter的求助信，请你根据来信，按照要求写一封英文回信。 Dear Li Ping These days I’m going crazy! My teacher requires me to run for half an hour every morning. But I don’t like sports at all. I think it’s meaningless. What do you think of it? Could you share your sports experience and tell me what you have learned from it? Please give me some advice as well. Yours, Peter 注意： 1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 二．求职(申请)信写作模板 Dear Sir or Madam, I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in(报纸名称)on(广告发布时间). Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but I also have the right personality for a(职位名称).0n the one hand,(第一个原因).On the other hand,(另一个原因). Should you grant me a personal interview,I would be most grateful.If you need to know more about me,please feel free to contact me at any time at(电话号码). Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 经典范文欣赏 Dear Sir or Madam, I'm Li Hua,a middle school student from China.I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it.I've been learning English for l0 years,and I speak fluent English.What is more, I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well.I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to your reply! Regards, Li Hua （2023福建中考） 某地“美丽乡村（Beautiful Village）”项目吸引了不少外宾，暑假期间需要数名擅长英语的小导游。假定你是李华，希望成为其中的一员。请你结合以下表格提示，给该项目的外事负责人王先生写一封英文自荐信。词数80左右。 What kind of person you are friendly, active… What you are good at speak English, tell stories… What you can do introduce local culture, help foreigners… 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．邀请信写作模板 Dear(对方的称呼) There will a(内容)at/in(地点)on(时间).We would be honored to have you there with us.The occasion will start at(具体时间).This will be followed by a(进一步的安排).At around(时间),(另一个安排). I really hope you can make it.RSVP before (通知你的最后期限). Yours sincerely, Li Ming 经典范文欣赏 Hi Susan We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming's birthday.We'd like to invite you to the party,We want to give him a surprise, so please keep secret about it.We'll gather at the Students' Club at 8 pm this Friday,after the evening classes,And it's going to last about an hour.We each will prepare a little present.When he come,we'll light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday" together for him.Then the cake will be cut and we'll sing songs and play games.It'll be nice to see how excited he will be.I'm sure you'll have a good time at the party,too. Yours, Li Hua （2023北京中考） 假设你是李华。你们班想在毕业之前为学校做一件有意义的事，如种植纪念树、去校图书馆整理图书等。你打算邀请交换生Peter参加这次活动。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动内容、意义及安排。 提示词语：invite, plant, meaningful, beautiful, library 提示问题：What activity do you plan to do? Why do you want to organize this activity? When and where will you have this activity? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 四．演讲(发言)稿写作 演讲稿首先要开门见山，既要一下子抓住听众，又要提出你自己的观点。中间要用各种方法和所准备的材料说明、支持你的观点，以达到感染听众的效果。然后在结尾强调说明观点或得出结论，结束演讲。 演讲稿写作模板Good morning,everyone!(开头称呼)I'm(自我介绍).The topic of my speech is(提出主题). As is know to all(对现象进行具体的分析). How can we solve this problem?In my opinion(给出建议). For one thing(理由一).For another(理由二).What's more (理由三)Therefore/All in all/Above all(总结). That's all.Thank you(for listening)!(结束语) 经典范文欣赏 Good morning,everyone. I'm Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School.The topic of my speech is “Let's ride bicycles”. As is known to all,with the improvement of people's living standards,cars have become a popular means of transport,bringing great convenience to our life.However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. How can we solve the problem then?As far as I'm concerned,riding bicycles is a good solution,For one thing,bicycles don't need any petrol and they are energy saving.For another,bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won't give off waste gas. What's more,riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health. Therefore, let's take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles.Come on and join us! Thank you! （2024宿迁中考） 唯有不断成长，才能遇见更好的自己。你校正在开展主题为“做更好的自己”的演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请以“To be a better self”为题写一篇演讲稿，从懂感恩、亲自然、爱自己三个方面谈一谈自己的理解。 To be a better self 懂感恩 敬爱父母；服务社区…… 亲自然 保护环境；关爱动物…… 爱自己 健康生活；培养兴趣…… 注意事项： 1．内容必须包括表格中的要点，并适当发挥1-2点； 2．词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。 To be a better self ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1．（2024·福建厦门·一模）假如你是李华，你校正在举办英语读书节活动。作为组织者，你遇到了一些困难。请你根据下列提示，给学校的外教Mr. White写一份电子邮件，请求他给予帮助。词数80左右。 The English Reading Festival Time: June 2, 2024 Activities: read English books, have an English speech contest (竞赛) Difficulties: have no experience in organizing, activities,… 注意事项: （1）必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； （3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。 Dear Mr. White, How is everything going? I am writing to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Look forward to your earliest reply. Yours, Li Hua 2．（2024·福建福州·一模）福州烟台山(Yantai Hill)旅游项目吸引了许多外来游客，暑假期间需要数名擅长英语的小导游，假设你是康康，你想要向该项目的负责人推荐自己好友李华。请你写一封介绍信，推荐李华。 注意：1）必须包括要点内容，可适当拓展； 2）词数80左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3）文章不得透露真实个人姓名和学校名称。 What kind of person Grade Nine, outgoing, ... What he is good at English, communicate, local stories What he can do Introduce... , show. around Dear sir, I am Kangkang from Fuzhou, I am happy to know that you are in need of some tour guides for Yantai Hill tourism this year, so I’d like to recommend my good friend Li Hua for this job. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Kangkang 3．（2024·福建福州·二模）假设你是李华，你所在的班级将举行一次跑步捡垃圾 (plogging) 的活动，你想邀请你们班外教Steve参加，请你结合下面的思维导图写一封邀请邮件。词数80左右。 Plogging When April 27th, 2024 Meeting place the school playground Route (路线) from our school to West Lake What to take white gloves, a rubbish bag Purposes healthy… Your opinion … 注意事项： ●必须包含思维导图的信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； ●意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； ●文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 Dear Steve, Our class will hold an activity called “plogging”. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Lihua 4．（2024·福建泉州·二模）假如你是李华，法国学生Sophie将要来你校做交流。她发来邮件向你询问如何在中国举止得当。请你结合以下图文提示，给Sophie 回一封邮件。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数： 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Sophie, I’m glad to hear you’ll be joining us for an exchange program! Don’t worry about the dos and don’ts in China. I’ll give you some important tips on etiquette (礼仪). ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope these tips help you feel prepared for your visit. Can’t wait to meet you in person! Yours, Li Hua 5．（2024·福建福州·二模）现我校将兴建新图书馆，学校英文报以“My Green School Library”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿，介绍你所设计（design）的绿色图书馆。词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）。 注意事项： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 My Green School Library I want to design a green school library.   __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2022·福建莆田·一模）假设你是李华，你校将举办“感受中国传统文化”的活动，请你结合提示，给在外国的朋友 Jim 写一封电子邮件，邀请他前来参加，词数 80 左右。 要求： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。 3.请勿在文中使用真实姓名学校及提示信息以外的地名。 Dear Jim, I heard that you are a fan of Chinese culture. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 7．（2024·福建莆田·一模）假定你是李华，你参加了你校开展的主题为“创新体验，快乐成长”的科技节活动。请结合如图所示，分享此次活动的过程和感受。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear John, How is everything going? Our school’s science and technology festival was a great success. Let me tell you something about it. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 8．（2024·福建南平·一模）新课标对学生的英语课外阅读提出了更高的要求，培养阅读习惯变得更为重要。目前，许多中学生课外阅读量很少。请你结合以下表格提示，写一篇英语短文，对这一现状进行分析并提出合理的建议。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 At present many students do little reading after class. Here are several reasons. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·福建三明·一模）汉语在国际交往中发挥着越来越重要的作用，学习和研究汉语的人也越来越多。你的英国朋友Anna的学校即将开设特色选修课程，她在考虑是否选修汉语，来信询问你的建议。假设你是李华，请你根据以下提示给她写封回信。 要求： 1.必须包含以上要点，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 3.词数100词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Anna, I’m so glad to hear from you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice can help you. Yours, Li Hua 10．（2023·福建福州·模拟预测）5月20日，教育部召开了全国中小学“五项管理”落实推进视频会议，青少年的手机、睡眠、作业、读物、体质等问题再次引起了广泛关注。最近，你们班就同学们在英语阅读方面存在的问题进行了一次调查并展开了讨论。请你根据表格内容写一篇调查报告，并提出一些建议。 注意： 1. 文章必须包括表格中的全部内容； 2. 建议可面向学生、老师或者学校； 3. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 词数80左右。 英语阅读现状 你的建议 1. 对英语阅读不感兴趣(23%) 2. 作业太多，没时间阅读(40%) 3. 阅读有困难，缺乏正确的方法(35%) 4. 没有合适的阅读材料(50%) …… （至少两点）     Recently, we have done a survey of students’ English reading status in our class, but the results are not pleasing. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．（2023·福建·厦门三模）假如你是李明，你的美国朋友David 向你了解暑假社会实践活动的计划，请结合下表内容写一封邮件向他介绍你的计划。 Social Practice Plan What to do Why to do so ●volunteer to do... ●make a survey about... ●have a graduation trip to... ●… ●be helpful... ●learn more about... ●open one’s eyes... ●… 注意： 1）文中必须包含至少两项活动的内容要点，可适当发挥； 2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； 3）词数：80~ 100；邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear David, Glad to share my social practice plan with you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Ming 12．（2023·福建厦门·模拟预测）成长是一种蜕变，在跌跌撞撞中成就更好的自己。你可能学会了一项新技能，或者掌握了新知识，也可能是养成了一种好习惯。请选择一个方面谈谈你成长改变的经历以及收获。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1.必须包含所有的内容要点； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（2023·福建福州·模拟预测）假如你是李华，上周末你们学校组织学生去一所盲人学校帮助盲人学生。你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一篇短文介绍此次活动，并谈谈感受。词数80左右。 Time last weekend Place at a blind school Activities do the cleaning, read books, play games... Feeling(s) ... 注意事项： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚， 表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．（2023·福建福州·模拟预测）2023年5月30日，神舟十六号载人飞船的成功发射，是我国航天事业的又一重大里程碑。它不仅标志着我国航天业的飞速发展，更让我们对未来的探索和发展充满了期待和信心。假如你校将举办一场主题为“My Space Dream”的英语演讲比赛，请根据下列提示写一篇演讲稿，简单阐述近年来我国航天事业的发展情况并谈谈你为实现航天梦将做何准备。 提示： （1）What do you think of our space industry? （2）What do you think of flying to the moon? （3）What are you going to do? Why? 注意： （1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； （2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （3）词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：take exercise，get knowledge Good morning, everyone. I’m glad to stand here to give a speech. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening! 15．（2023·福建厦门·模拟预测）假定你是李华，受邀参加学校组织的健身经验活动分享。请你结合以下图示，写一篇英文演讲稿，通过自己的亲身经历，分享锻炼建议，号召同学们积极参与体育运动，保持身体健康。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有要求的内容，可适当发挥; 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范; 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Ladies and gentlemen, It’s my great honor to have a chance to give a speech here. I’m a huge fan of sports. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16．（2023·福建漳州·模拟预测）某英文网站开展关于“美丽校园，健康生活”的征稿活动。请根据以下思维导图内容积极投稿，倡导同学们“爱护校园环境，健康快乐生活”。字数80左右。 注意事项： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Students need to have a healthy school life. What can we do to make it? Here I’ve got some ideas to share with you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 17．（2023·福建福州·模拟预测）上周英语老师要求小组就“你最想做的志愿服务”对同学们进行问卷调查，下图是你们小组的相关统计结果。请你根据以下图片及文字提示用英语写一篇短文，准备做小组汇报，并汇报你们小组的计划以及原因。 注意: (1) 须包括提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥。(2) 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。(3) 词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 We did a survey about students’ favourite volunteering work last weekend. Here are the results. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 18．（2022·湖南怀化·中考真题）国家提出将“劳动教育（labor education）”纳入中小学国家课程方案，请结合自身的劳动经历，谈谈你对劳动教育的看法。内容包括： 1. 你对劳动教育的看法 be good for health; relax from the hard study… 2. 你自身的劳动经历及感受 at home: do the dishes; sweep the floor… at school: clean the classroom; water flowers… 3. 你对劳动教育课程的建议 offer different kinds of labor classes; hold competitions about labor skills… 要求: 1. 文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名； 2. 包含以上表格内所有信息，可适当发挥； 3. 词数：80词左右；文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 It’s reported that labor education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 19．（2023·福建泉州·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校今年暑假将为外国学生举办一场汉语夏令营活动（Chinese Summer Camp）。请你根据下面海报的内容，用英语给你的笔友David写一封电子邮件，介绍本次活动并邀请他参加。词数80左右。 Welcome to Chinese Summer Camp Time：July 18th—July 28th, 2023 Place：No.8 Junior High School Activities：★Study Chinese daily expressions ★Know about Chinese history and culture ★Visit the museum ★... Sign up (报名): Before July 2nd, on the school website 注意事项： （1）必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； （3）请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。 Dear David,   I’m glad to know that you are interested in Chinese culture. Here is a piece of good news. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours,   Li Hua 20．（2023·福建·三模）又是一年毕业季。为了给学生提供”感谢师恩”的平台，某英文报以”Thank you, …”为题，向广大学生征文。请你根据以下思维导图，并结合自身的经历，用英语写一篇短文应征。词数80左右。 Introduction（looks；personalities（性格）；...） Experience（example/story） Influence on me（…） 注意事项: 1.必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Thank you, ________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 书面表达解题技巧及20篇训练 中考“书面表达”评分标准如下： 档次 分值 评分标准 第五档 13—15 包含所有信息，内容完整，语句通顺，意思连贯。没有或基本没有语法、拼写错误，书写规范，词数符合要求。 第四档 10—12 包含大部分信息，内容较完整，表达基本清楚，语句较通顺，有少量语法、拼写错误，书写规范，词数基本符合要求。 第三档 7—9 写出基本信息，语句基本通顺，但句子较简单，表达不够清楚，有部分语法、拼写错误。书写基本规范。 第二档 4—6 写出部分信息，表达不清楚，有较多语法、拼写错误。。 第一档 1—3 仅能传递个别信息，通篇只有个别句子可读。 0分 只字未写，或写的内容与所要求的内容无关。 一．解题步骤 第一步，审题。 拿到题目后，看清题目的要求是什么、要点是什么、特殊要求是什么。如你是叫李华，还是叫其他名字，写议论文还是记叙文等等。诸如此类的硬性要求，都最好用铅笔做个记号，以免出错。 第二步，打草稿。 有的同学怕出错，全文都打草稿再眷写，这种做法不太可取，毕竟考试时间宝贵。还有的同学不打草稿，这种做法更不可取。一来容易出错，二来边写边想会造成思维不连贯，即使思维连贯也无法斟词酌句，完美地表达自己的观点。 草稿怎么打? 1.结构:即你打算分几段写，每段都写什么?哪段起，哪段承，哪段转合，心里都要有数。 2.关键词:结构拟定后，迅速在草稿纸上写下这篇作文可能用到的一些关键词，比如你在作文题目中可能看到“聪明”这个关键词，你最初写下的往往是clever,再仔细想想，你是不是又想到了smart,diligent等词。你可以挑个最合适的用。 3.句式:先用最普通的陈述句把语句在头脑中过一遍，然后看看都能改成什么句式。能不能把一句陈述句改成问句，能不能用上一个双重否定句，能不能用一个主语从句套定语从句的长句，能不能用一个插入语等等，第三步，正式写。 草稿打完后，就要正式写了。注意，英语作文的卷面很重要，一定要把字写整第三步，正式写。 草稿打完后，就要正式写了。注意，英语作文的卷面很重要，一定要把字写整齐，写清楚。没有把握的词和句子不要用。 第四步，检查。注意，最最重要的一步来了。尽管很小心，可是学生写英语作文时还是会犯下很多错误。即使时间再紧，请务必留下1~2分钟检查作文的时间，消除隐性错误。需要说明的是，英语的开头和结尾是最关键的，尤其是开头。基本上，写的作文不跑题，遵守题目要求，有一个漂亮的开头和一个还过得去的结尾，2~3个高级词汇，1~2个漂亮的句子，再加上整齐的字迹，作文的得分档次就提高了。 二．英语写作中的选词和造句 一般来说，掌握的词汇越多，运用英语的能力也会越强。同学们可以选择适合自己的多种英语书籍、报刊来阅读。在阅读过程中，由于单词、词组的反复出现，同学们就能反复接触到这些单词和词组，从而巩固所记的词汇。另外通过文章学习词汇和短语，对词汇和短语的意义、用法能理解得更深、更全面，这样也会更容易记忆。要学会用熟悉的词来表达自己的思想。用词组还是句子往往没有统一的标准，但要注意区分书面用语与口语。 一、基本词语的灵活选用 首先，注意句中关键词汇的运用要符合英语语言习惯，有时过于书面化，还不如用常用语。 样句1一大早我们买了些圣诞礼物。 Early in the morning we purchased some Christmas presents. (purchased太过于书面化，改为bought更常用)其次，在用词正确的前提下，多用生动形象的词语，以增强语言的表现力和感染力。全部资料电子版在公众号:逆袭墙 样句2他家的墙壁非常白。 The wall of his house is as white as snow. 二、高级词汇的合理使用 高级词汇主要是指《考试大纲》中没有列入的，但在实际运用中使用较频繁的词汇。大纲中较常用词汇通过构词法形成的词汇也属于高级词汇。 1.挖掘考纲外词汇。 有些单词在英语《考试大纲》中确实未曾出现，但在阅读时经常碰到。如:annoyed,currently等。 样句He was annoyed that she had forgotten his birthday.(annoyed比angry高级) 2.挖掘可替代词汇。 使用词组、习语来代替简单枯燥的词汇。如:用make full use of代替use,用look forward to代替hope等。 样句1 We had better make full use of something inexpensive.(make full use of比use高级) 样句2 I'm looking forward to your visit next week.(look forward to 高级) 3.挖掘“味感”词汇。 有的单词很常见，且“洋味”十足，表达地道，非常有“味感”,这类词也被视为高级词汇。如share,view等。 样句1 We all share one and the same planet.(share比live in更有“味感”)样句2 We can view the problem in many ways.(view比look at更有内涵) 三、怎样写出好句子 1.句子要完整。完整是好句子的第一要点。 2.句子要连贯。所谓连贯，一是指意思上的连贯;二是指结构上的连贯。也就是说一个句子不仅要做到遣词造句的和谐，还要做到思想内容的和谐。例如:Tell my friend if she is at home,I will go to see her.该句因语序的关系，使意思不明确。如果my friend与she是同一个人，我们应该说:If my friend is at home,tell her I will go to see her,如果不是同一个人，就应说:Tell my friend I will go to see her if she is at home. 3.句子须简洁。句中不应有任何不必要的词。只要意思表达充分，用词越少越好用词过多只会使意思更加模糊不清，而不是更加清楚。 4.句子要重点突出。凡是重要的意思都应在表达时予以强调。我们可以使用倒装、感叹、重复、反问等方法对应该强调的词语或句子加重语气。一般情况下，一个句子的开头和末尾是最引人注目的地方。全部资料电子版在公众号:逆袭例如:There was an old woman at the head of the queue.这是一般的表达方式。但可改成倒装句:At the head of the queue was an old woman.通过这种改变分别突出了at the head of the queue以及an old woman,这样句子就显得生动有力。 5.句子要多样化。句型的多样化，对好的文章来说是必不可少的。为多样化起见，短句和长句，简单句、并列句和复合句等都应交替使用。也可偶尔用一个问句、祈使句或感叹句，但是不要只是为了多样化而频频变换句型。 6.句子要一致。一个句子无论长短应当只有一个中心思想。 例如:Class Three have a map,and the map is on the wall of their classroom,and it's a map of China.此句在语法和词汇上都没有什么错，但由于东拼西凑，让人不知所云。如果将这一句改为三个短句，使每句都有一个中心思想，那么就条理清楚，意义明确了。 试比软:Class Three have a map.The map is on the wall of their classroom. It's a map of China. 四、写作时的常见错误 1.语序错误。句子语序有自然语序和倒装语序两种，一不注意就会出错。 例如:(误)Could you tell me where is the park?-(iE) Could you tell me where the park is? 2.句子中时态、语态的错误。英语中常用时态有现在时、进行时和完成时。语态有主动语态和被动语态，一定要正确使用。 例如:(误)The house has been built five years ago.-(iE)The house was built five years ago.(误)The bike hasn't returned yet, (E)The bike hasn't been returned yet. 3.句子中出现不平行结构。平行结构类似汉语的排比句式，它常常用同样的格式表达两个以上平行内容。例如: (误)We can get there either by car or taking a bus. (iE)We can get there either by car or by bus. (误)She likes studying English but she doesn't like English grammar.-(iE)She likes studying English but she doesn't like studying English grammar. 4.汉语式英语。英汉两种语言在表达习惯上有很大差异，要注意别犯汉语式英语错误。例如: (诶)Although he is over 60,but he is very healthy.→(iE) He is over 60, but he is very healthy./Although he is over 60,he is very healthy.第三章不同形式的写作模板 五．写作类型 (一)记叙文 记叙文是以叙述人物的经历或事物全部资料电子版在公众号:逆袭墙的发展变化过程为主的一种文体。它分为记人和记事两种。记叙文的几个要点: 1.时间、地点、人物、事件，这几个要素在写作时要交代清楚, 2.人称:记叙文一般有第一人称和第三人称两种叙事方式。3.记叙文的线索一般为时间，即按照事件的发展顺序来写。也可以按照地点的线索来写，即以地点的转移为顺序。 4.重点突出，层次分明，详略得当。 5.注意文章的完整性。 6.所用的时态通常为一"般过去时。 记叙文写作模板 记叙文通常分为三段: 第一段，开篇点题。交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点等。 第二段，具体叙述。讲述事件发生的原因、经过和结果。 第三段，总结感受。根据写作要点进行取舍。 经典范文欣赏 Last weekend,I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe.On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents,I searched the Internet for the train schedule,the weather in Beidaihe,and some hotel information.In the afternoon,I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue.After dinner,I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents need,such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella,and a map,The next morning,I went to the station to see them off.Waving goodbye to them on the platform,I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey. （2024福建中考） 假设你是李华，学校上周五开展了为期一天的实践活动。你的笔友Henry对这次活动很感兴趣。请你结合以下提示，用英语给他写一封信，谈谈活动过程及你的感想。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Henry, I’m glad that you’re interested in our school study tour last Friday. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Henry, I’m glad that you’re interested in our school study tour last Friday. Let me tell you something about it. In the morning, we visited the History Museum. We learned about the history of the Long March. Then we listened to the stories of the Red Army, which greatly touched us. After lunch, we went to the Folk Culture Center, where we enjoyed paper cutting art. We also watched local opera performances that are educational. The tour not only deepens our love for our country but also enriches our understanding of Chinese traditional art! Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua (2022福建中考) 假定你是李华,近日你校开展了以“热爱劳动,珍爱粮食”为主题的实践活动。请你结合以下图示,用英语给笔友John写一封信,分享活动过程和感受。词数80左右。 注意事项: 1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范; 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear John,  　　How is everything going? I’m glad to tell you my one⁃day experience in rice fields.  　　On June 18, my classmates and I went to the community farm. When we arrived,we visited the farm and watched videos on farming. Then we worked together with farmers. Some learnt to harvest rice. Some helped to carry rice while others picked ears of rice from the fields. Through the activity, I’ve got the pleasure of hard work and learnt to value each grain. 　　Have you had any experience of this kind? Yours, Li Hua  (二)议论文 要点: 1.观点鲜明，文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。 2.层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，不同层次之间要分明，过渡清晰自然。 3.最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。 4.时态一般采用一般现在时。 5.语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。 A.对比观点型议论文写作模板 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1.有一些人认为…… 2.另一些人认为…… 3.我的看法……Recently we have had a heated discussion on(主题).Some students think it's a good idea...because(支持A的理出一).Besides,(理出二).On the contrary,other students are against....In their opinions,(支持B的理由一).What is worse,(理由二). From my point of view,I think(我的观点).The reason is that(原因). 经典范文赏析 Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities. Some students think it's a good idea to keep pets because many old people who live alone at home can get some comfort from pets.Besides, getting along well with animals will make our life interesting.On the contrary, the other students are against the idea.In their opinions,if too many people keep pets at home,it is bad for the environment. What is worse,pets may make too much noise and even attack people.I like animals,so I don't think it's bad to keep pets at home.But we must take some measures to prevent them from polluting our environment. （2024河南中考） 在日常学习中，有的学生喜欢独自学习，有的则喜欢和大家一起学习。你更喜欢哪一种学习方式？校刊英语专栏正在以“Studying alone or studying with a group?”为题开展征文活动，请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，从以下两种学习方式中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文，陈述你的理由，向专栏投稿。 Studying alone Studying with a group solve problems on my own get help from others keep my mind on schoolwork share ideas with group members 写作要求： 1．文中须包含所选学习方式的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2．文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3．词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 【答案】Possible version 1: Studying alone or studying with a group? Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I like studying alone better. Firstly, studying alone helps me learn to solve problems on my own. Most of the time, I need to think hard about them all by myself. So my thinking ability is improved at the same time. Secondly, when I study alone, I can keep my mind on what I’m doing. With a clear head, I am able to finish my homework quickly. In this way, I will gradually develop a good learning habit. I think studying alone is really a good way and it will benefit me a lot in my life. Possible version 2: Studying alone or studying with a group? Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I prefer to study with a group. As the saying goes, “Two heads are better than one.” With a group, I can learn a lot from others. Whenever I have some questions, they are always ready to help. With their help, I become more and more confident in my study. Also, when I study with my classmates, we can discuss whatever puzzles me face to face. Through discussion, we can share different ideas and get to know more about each other. All in all, I think studying with a group provides many chances to improve myself and helps me to be a better person. B.社会现象型议论文写作模板 1.列出具体的社会问题或者现象。 2.分析产生的原因及其影响。 3.提出解决办法。It is known to us(现象).On one hand,(原因/影响一).On the other hand,(原因/影响二).In my opinion(我的观点).We should(解决办法). In a word(总结). 经典范文欣赏 My opinions on cheating in examinations It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. On one hand, as students,we often take examinations at school,but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us.0n the other hand, some of us are lazy and don't work hard at their lessons.So when taking examinations,they some-times cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.In my opinion,it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools.We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. What's more,we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations. In a word,it is wrong to cheat in examinations. （2024吉林中考） 当我们遇到自己无法解决的问题或烦恼时，应该学会积极向他人寻求帮助。请以“Asking for Help”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括： （1）积极应对问题或烦恼的必要性； （2）寻求帮助的益处； （3）结合生活经历，简述你或他人寻求帮助的一个事例； （4）提供寻求帮助的方法(至少两个)。 写作要求： （1）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； （2）词数90—100，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数； （3）书写规范，卷面整洁； （4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 【答案】例文 Asking for Help There might be some problems or worries in life. When we encounter problems or troubles that we cannot solve ourselves, we should learn to actively seek help from others. It’s important to ask for help, and it will help you relax. Last year, my English grammar was weak. Because of this problem, my English was not good. So I went to ask my English teacher for help. With the help of my teacher and my own efforts, my English score has gradually improved. Now I’ve really learned how to learn lessons myself. In a word, it is normal to have problems. When we meet problems, we can ask people around us for help, such as teachers, classmates or parents. In addition, we can also search the Internet for solutions. （2024成都中考） 你校英语报就“团队合作”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示，以“Be a Good Team Member”为题投稿。 Be a Good Team Member 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 【答案】例文 Be a Good Team Member There is an old saying in China, “Unity is strength.” It tells people the importance of teamwork. By discussing with members in the team, we can come up with the better ideas. But how to be a good team member? Here are some tips for you. First, communicate more with each other. There is no doubt that communication can help us know more about our teammates. We should listen to other people actively and express ourselves bravely. Second, work together on projects. When everybody adds fuel, the flames rise high. Finally, trust your teammates. All in all, teamwork plays an important role in our daily life. Let’s work together to build a brighter future. (三)说明文 A.介绍事物说明文 以简明的文字介绍事物的形状、性质、构造、变化、功用、特征等的文章。写好说明文的关键是抓住事物的特征，说明事物的顺序要有一定的逻辑性。说明文常见的顺序有时间顺序、空间顺序、逻辑顺序等。 假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友David 对中医很感兴趣。请你结合以下图示,用英语写一封电子邮件,向他推荐即将在你校举办的“传统中医进校园”的宣传日活动,说明推荐理由,并请他关注线上相关信息。词数80左右。 注意事项: 1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范; 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear David,  I’m pleased to know that you’re interested in Chinese medicine. Now, I’d like to share with you some information about Traditional Chinese Medicine Day in our school, which is going to take place on July 31, 2020.  On that day, a famous doctor will give us a talk on Chinese medicine. And there will be a show about its development. Also, the film Li Shizhen will be on. I’m sure the activities would be very helpful to you. I hope you can visit www.intelschool.com and have a better understanding of traditional Chinese medicine. Best wishes. （2024安徽中考） 假设你是李辉，上周你在学校举行的 “消防安全日” 活动中学会了灭火器的使用方法。请结合下图信息，写一篇英语短文，给校英文报投稿。 要点: 1. 活动目的； 2. 灭火器的使用方法； 3. 你的体会。 注意: 1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80~100（首句已为你写好，不计入总词数） 【答案】例文： Last week, our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities. The purpose was to draw our attention to fire safety. Among the activities, how to use a fire extinguisher interested me most. When we use a fire extinguisher, we should first shake it after picking it up, and then pull off the safety pin quickly. As soon as we point the tube at the root of the fire, we are expected to press down on the handle until we put out the fire. During the period, we should be careful enough not to get hurt. From the activities I’ve learned a lot and realized the importance of fire safety. B.分析利弊型说明文写作模板 这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物不身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度或对事物前景提出预测。 1.说明事物现状。 2.事物本身的优缺点(或一方面) 3.你对现状(或前景)的看法。 Nowadays many people prefer(现状)because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally,its advantages can be seen as follows.First(现状的优点一).Besides(优点二). But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that(现状的缺点一).To make matters worse,(缺点二). Through the above analysis,I believe that the positive aspects overweight the negative ones.Therefore,I would like to(我的看法). 经典范文赏析 Nowadays many youngsters prefer to go online in their spare time.Generally,its advantages can be seen as follows:first, through the Internet, they can gain new knowledge and the latest news at home and abroad.Besides, network offers them a convenient way to communicate with each other.The Internet makes their life outside class colorful. But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.0neof the important disadvantages is that some students prefer to play computer games instead of studying their lessons,To make matters worse, there are some students who are often absent from school for days.Through the above analysis,I think we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in,Only in this way can we make full use of it.As for me,I would like to go online in my spare time. (四)常考应用文 一．建议信写作模板 Dear(对方的称呼)，You have asked me for my advice with regard to(问题),and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions:(建议的内容). I hope you(祝愿). Yours sincerely, Li Ming 经典范文欣赏 Hi Worried,I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment.The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong,so you don't have to worry so much.The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you'll regret.Here are three useful tips. First,talk to someone you trust about how you feel.This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger,And third,remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal. Yours, Jamie （2024常州中考） 假如你是李平，收到英国笔友 Peter的求助信，请你根据来信，按照要求写一封英文回信。 Dear Li Ping These days I’m going crazy! My teacher requires me to run for half an hour every morning. But I don’t like sports at all. I think it’s meaningless. What do you think of it? Could you share your sports experience and tell me what you have learned from it? Please give me some advice as well. Yours, Peter 注意： 1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, I’m glad to receive your letter. I understand how you feel. I used to dislike sports too, but now I enjoy running. Running is very good for health. It not only keeps us healthy but also makes us more energetic. When I started running, I found it difficult at first. But soon I started to feel stronger and happier. Moreover, running every morning helped me focus better during the day. My advice is to start slowly and set small goals. Then try listening to music or thinking about your favourite things while running, which will make running more enjoyable. Give yourself a chance to try running, I’m sure you’ll love it. Yours, Li Ping 二．求职(申请)信写作模板 Dear Sir or Madam, I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in(报纸名称)on(广告发布时间). Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but I also have the right personality for a(职位名称).0n the one hand,(第一个原因).0n the other hand,(另一个原因). Should you grant me a personal interview,I would be most grateful.If you need to know more about me,please feel free to contact me at any time at(电话号码). Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 经典范文欣赏 Dear Sir or Madam, I'm Li Hua,a middle school student from China.I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it.I've been learning English for l0 years,and I speak fluent English.What is more, I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well.I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to your reply! Regards, Li Hua （2023福建中考） 某地“美丽乡村（Beautiful Village）”项目吸引了不少外宾，暑假期间需要数名擅长英语的小导游。假定你是李华，希望成为其中的一员。请你结合以下表格提示，给该项目的外事负责人王先生写一封英文自荐信。词数80左右。 What kind of person you are friendly, active… What you are good at speak English, tell stories… What you can do introduce local culture, help foreigners… 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 【答案】例文 Dear Mr. Wang, I am Li Hua. I am glad to know that you are in need of some tour guides. I’d like to be one of them. I think I am suitable for the job. First of all, I am friendly and patient. I am active in many activities. Besides, I speak English well and have won several prizes in English speaking competitions. I am also good at telling stories. So I can introduce local culture to foreigners in English. Most importantly, I have visited the beautiful village many times and I can help foreigners better understand the life of the village. I would be thankful if I could be given the chance. Yours, Li Hua 三．邀请信写作模板 Dear(对方的称呼) There will a(内容)at/in(地点)on(时间).We would be honored to have you there with us.The occasion will start at(具体时间).This will be followed by a(进一步的安排).At around(时间),(另一个安排). I really hope you can make it.RSVP before (通知你的最后期限). Yours sincerely, Li Ming 经典范文欣赏 Hi Susan We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming's birthday.We'd like to invite you to the party,We want to give him a surprise, so please keep secret about it.We'll gather at the Students' Club at 8 pm this Friday,after the evening classes,And it's going to last about an hour.We each will prepare a little present.When he come,we'll light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday" together for him.Then the cake will be cut and we'll sing songs and play games.It'll be nice to see how excited he will be.I'm sure you'll have a good time at the party,too. Yours, Li Hua （2023北京中考） 假设你是李华。你们班想在毕业之前为学校做一件有意义的事，如种植纪念树、去校图书馆整理图书等。你打算邀请交换生Peter参加这次活动。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动内容、意义及安排。 提示词语：invite, plant, meaningful, beautiful, library 提示问题：What activity do you plan to do? Why do you want to organize this activity? When and where will you have this activity? 【答案】例文： Dear Peter, How is everything going? I’m writing to invite you to join us. As we are going to graduate, our classmates plan to plant a tree together. We all know that trees can stop the wind from blowing the sand, and they can also make our school beautiful. So we decide to plant a tree for our school. Next Sunday, we will meet at the gate of the school and then go to the playground. We will dig a hole, plant the tree and then water it. I believe we all will have a great time. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 四．演讲(发言)稿写作 演讲稿首先要开门见山，既要一下子抓住听众，又要提出你自己的观点。中间要用各种方法和所准备的材料说明、支持你的观点，以达到感染听众的效果。然后在结尾强调说明观点或得出结论，结束演讲。 演讲稿写作模板Good morning,everyone!(开头称呼)I'm(自我介绍).The topic of my speech is(提出主题). As is know to all(对现象进行具体的分析). How can we solve this problem?In my opinion(给出建议). For one thing(理由一).For another(理由二).What's more (理由三)Therefore/All in all/Above all(总结). That's all.Thank you(for listening)!(结束语) 经典范文欣赏 Good morning,everyone. I'm Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School.The topic of my speech is “Let's ride bicycles”. As is known to all,with the improvement of people's living standards,cars have become a popular means of transport,bringing great convenience to our life.However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. How can we solve the problem then?As far as I'm concerned,riding bicycles is a good solution,For one thing,bicycles don't need any petrol and they are energy saving.For another,bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won't give off waste gas. What's more,riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health. Therefore, let's take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles.Come on and join us! Thank you! （2024宿迁中考） 唯有不断成长，才能遇见更好的自己。你校正在开展主题为“做更好的自己”的演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请以“To be a better self”为题写一篇演讲稿，从懂感恩、亲自然、爱自己三个方面谈一谈自己的理解。 To be a better self 懂感恩 敬爱父母；服务社区…… 亲自然 保护环境；关爱动物…… 爱自己 健康生活；培养兴趣…… 注意事项： 1．内容必须包括表格中的要点，并适当发挥1-2点； 2．词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。 【答案】 例文： To be a better self Dear schoolmates, I am Li Hua. I am glad to be here to give a speech about “To be a better self”. Being a better self, I think, means more than being excellent in study but being an all-round person. In order to become a better version of ourselves, we should first be grateful. We should love our parents. We also use our spare time to serve the community. If we meet people in need of help, we should lend a hand in time. Second, we should get close to nature. We should protect the environment and care for animals. We also do volunteer work to promote the importance of animals and plants. Finally, we have to love ourselves. We should live a healthy life and develop our hobbies. We should learn ways to relax ourselves and keep a good mood. I strongly believe that a better self can definitely lead us to a better future and let’s make changes from now on. That’s all. Thanks for your listening! 中考模拟试题 1．（2024·福建厦门·一模）假如你是李华，你校正在举办英语读书节活动。作为组织者，你遇到了一些困难。请你根据下列提示，给学校的外教Mr. White写一份电子邮件，请求他给予帮助。词数80左右。 The English Reading Festival Time: June 2, 2024 Activities: read English books, have an English speech contest (竞赛) Difficulties: have no experience in organizing, activities,… 注意事项: （1）必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； （3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。 Dear Mr. White, How is everything going? I am writing to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Look forward to your earliest reply. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mr. White, How is everything going? I am writing to ask for your help. The English Reading Festival is going to be held in our school on June 2, 2024. There will be some interesting activities, such as reading English books and having an English speech contest. However, I meet some difficulties. First, I have no experience in organizing activities, so would you please share some advice on how to organize a good reading festival? What’s more, I have no idea what kind of English books are suitable for junior high school students. Could you recommend some books to me? Look forward to your earliest reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，写一封电子邮件； ② 时态：一般将来时和一般现在时； ③ 提示：根据要点提示介绍英语读书活动和遇到的困难。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍英语读书节活动； 第二步，寻求帮助，解释具体需要什么帮助。 [亮点词汇] ① have no experience没有经验 ② What’s more 而且 ③ be suitable for 适合于 [高分句型] ① There will be some interesting activities, such as reading English books and having an English speech contest. （There be 句型） 2．（2024·福建福州·一模）福州烟台山(Yantai Hill)旅游项目吸引了许多外来游客，暑假期间需要数名擅长英语的小导游，假设你是康康，你想要向该项目的负责人推荐自己好友李华。请你写一封介绍信，推荐李华。 注意：1）必须包括要点内容，可适当拓展； 2）词数80左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3）文章不得透露真实个人姓名和学校名称。 What kind of person Grade Nine, outgoing, ... What he is good at English, communicate, local stories What he can do Introduce... , show. around Dear sir, I am Kangkang from Fuzhou, I am happy to know that you are in need of some tour guides for Yantai Hill tourism this year, so I’d like to recommend my good friend Li Hua for this job. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Kangkang 【答案】Dear sir, I am Kangkang from Fuzhou, I am happy to know that you are in need of some tour guides for Yantai Hill tourism this year, so I’d like to recommend my good friend Li Hua for this job. First of all, he is a Grade Nine student, who is outgoing, friendly and patient. He is active in many activities. Besides, he can speak English well and communicate with foreigners easily. Meanwhile, he is also good at telling local stories. So he can introduce local culture to foreigners in English. Most importantly, he has visited the beautiful Yantai Hill many times so that he can help to show foreigners around the hill. Looking forward to your early reply.                                                                         Yours, Kangkang 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍李华的基本信息； 第二步，具体阐述李华擅长的东西； 第三步，描述李华能做的事情。 [亮点词汇] ①communicate with sb和某人交流 ②be good at doing擅长做某事 ③show sb around带某人参观 [高分句型] ①First of all, he is a Grade Nine student, who is outgoing, friendly and patient. He is active in many activities. (who引导非限制性定语从句) ②Most importantly, he has visited the beautiful Yantai Hill many times so that he can help to show foreigners around the hill.(so that引导目的状语从句) 3．（2024·福建福州·二模）假设你是李华，你所在的班级将举行一次跑步捡垃圾 (plogging) 的活动，你想邀请你们班外教Steve参加，请你结合下面的思维导图写一封邀请邮件。词数80左右。 Plogging When April 27th, 2024 Meeting place the school playground Route (路线) from our school to West Lake What to take white gloves, a rubbish bag Purposes healthy… Your opinion … 注意事项： ●必须包含思维导图的信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； ●意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； ●文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 Dear Steve, Our class will hold an activity called “plogging”. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Lihua 【答案】例文 Dear Steve, Our class will hold an activity called “plogging”. First of all, I think it necessary to introduce what is plogging. Actually, it is a kind of popular sports way, which combines sports with social service. This activity will take place on April 27th, 2024. And we will do it from our school to West Lake. We will meet at the school playground. What exactly should we do? We should take trash bags and white gloves with us and then pick up the trash while running. What’s more, we can also stay healthy. In my opinion, this is a meaningful activity. I hope you can all join us. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Lihua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：本文应使用“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍邀请对方参加此次活动”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题，介绍自己的意图； 第二步，根据题干的思维导图介绍活动的时间，要求等信息； 第三步，表达对这次活动的肯定，并期待对方来参加活动。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all首先 ②pick up捡起 [高分句型] ①Actually, it is a kind of popular sports way, which combines sports with social service.（定语从句） ②I hope you can all join us.（宾语从句） 4．（2024·福建泉州·二模）假如你是李华，法国学生Sophie将要来你校做交流。她发来邮件向你询问如何在中国举止得当。请你结合以下图文提示，给Sophie 回一封邮件。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数： 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Sophie, I’m glad to hear you’ll be joining us for an exchange program! Don’t worry about the dos and don’ts in China. I’ll give you some important tips on etiquette (礼仪). ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope these tips help you feel prepared for your visit. Can’t wait to meet you in person! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Sophie, I’m glad to hear you’ll be joining us for an exchange program! Don’t worry about the dos and don’ts in China. I’ll give you some important tips on etiquette. China is a country with a long history, so there are many customs here. Firstly, you are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, you should bring a gift when you are invited to a party and be sure to arrive on time or a few minutes earlier. Thirdly, when you eat meals with others, it’s rude to point at others with your chopsticks. And don’t make noise when you have your soup. I hope these tips help you feel prepared for your visit. Can’t wait to meet you in person! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体介绍要给出一些重要的礼仪提示； 第二步，具体介绍不同方面的一些礼仪情况，包括问候，拜访人们以及餐桌礼仪等； 第三步，最后总结并结束文章。 [亮点词汇] ① be supposed to应该做某事 ② on time准时 ③ make noise制造噪音 [高分句型] ① you are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. (when引导的时间状语从句) ② it’s rude to point at others with your chopsticks. (it固定句型) 5．（2024·福建福州·二模）现我校将兴建新图书馆，学校英文报以“My Green School Library”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿，介绍你所设计（design）的绿色图书馆。词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）。 注意事项： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 My Green School Library I want to design a green school library.   __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Green School Library I want to design a green school library. It will be greatly different from the present ones. The library is green, blue and white. And it’s in the shape of spaceships with all kinds of electrical appliances. It will use solar power and be controlled by computers. What’s more, it’s made up of recyclable materials and solar panels. All its energy comes from the sun, which are environment-friendly to our earth. Thanks to the modern computer system, we can lend the books we are interested in and return them conveniently by scanning our face. The most exciting thing is that you can listen to music in your seat to relax yourself when you feel tired. It is large enough so that you can also rest inside and feel comfortable. What a wonderful library it is! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”与“一般将来时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示写一篇作文，介绍你所设计的图书馆。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍图书馆的样子； 第二步，具体阐述它是如何体现绿色环保的； 第三步，最后介绍我们可以在那里做什么。 [亮点词汇] ①be made up of由……组成 ②Thanks to幸亏 ③are interested in对……感兴趣 [高分句型] ①All its energy comes from the sun, which are environment-friendly to our earth. （定语从句） ②The most exciting thing is that you can listen to music in your seat to relax yourself when you feel tired.（when引导的时间状语从句） 6．（2022·福建莆田·一模）假设你是李华，你校将举办“感受中国传统文化”的活动，请你结合提示，给在外国的朋友 Jim 写一封电子邮件，邀请他前来参加，词数 80 左右。 要求： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。 3.请勿在文中使用真实姓名学校及提示信息以外的地名。 Dear Jim, I heard that you are a fan of Chinese culture. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】参考范文 Dear Peter, I heard that you are a fan of Chinese culture. So I’m writing to invite you to the activity “Experience traditional Chinese culture”, which will be held on June 26th in our school playground or school hall. You can experience all kinds of traditional Chinese culture in the activity. A series of lectures on traditional Chinese culture will be given, which can help you to learn more about Chinese culture. Meanwhile, there will be some activities about ancient Chinese poetry. Besides, you can taste a lot of delicious traditional Chinese food. It’s a good chance both to increase your understanding of Chinese culture and make new friends. I sincerely hope you can come and enjoy it. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封电子邮件。邀请Jim来参加学校举办的活动。 2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般将来时，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题，介绍这个活动的时间；第二段介绍在这个活动里都可以经历些什么；最后一段邀请对方来参加。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 7．（2024·福建莆田·一模）假定你是李华，你参加了你校开展的主题为“创新体验，快乐成长”的科技节活动。请结合如图所示，分享此次活动的过程和感受。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear John, How is everything going? Our school’s science and technology festival was a great success. Let me tell you something about it. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear John, How is everything going? Our school’s science and technology festival was a great success. Let me tell you something about it. The festival took place on January 20th in the school hall. There were many kinds of activities on that day. First, the science teacher gave an interesting speech. He encouraged us to be more active and creative. Then, we had a design competition. And we shared inventions with others after the competition. Students showed talents for science and technology and enjoyed the happiness that they brought them. Also I truly believe that such activities are crucial for our growth and development. These activities not only made our school life more colorful but helped us realize the importance of science and technology. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信； ②时态：时态为一般过去时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍科技节活动的过程和感受，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍科技节活动的时间、地点和具体的活动； 第三步，介绍自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①take place发生 ②encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事 ③share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物 [高分句型] Students showed talents for science and technology and enjoyed the happiness that they brought them. (that引导的定语从句) 8．（2024·福建南平·一模）新课标对学生的英语课外阅读提出了更高的要求，培养阅读习惯变得更为重要。目前，许多中学生课外阅读量很少。请你结合以下表格提示，写一篇英语短文，对这一现状进行分析并提出合理的建议。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 At present many students do little reading after class. Here are several reasons. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 At present many students do little reading after class. Here are several reasons. First of all, most students have too much homework to do. Some students haven’t developed reading habit. They prefer to spend their free time watching TV or the Internet. However, reading actually has many advantages. It can not only increase our knowledge, improve our thinking, but also make our lives more colorful. Here are my suggestions to share with everyone. We can form reading groups, read whole English books together, and then share our reading experiences with each other. Let’s start reading today and enjoy the fun of reading! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍许多中学生课外阅读量很少的原因并提出合理的建议，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍许多中学生课外阅读量很少的原因； 第二步，介绍阅读的好处； 第三步，介绍自己的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all首先 ②prefer to do更喜欢做某事 ③share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物 [高分句型] ①It can not only increase our knowledge, improve our thinking, but also make our lives more colorful. (not only...but also结构) ②Let’s start reading today and enjoy the fun of reading! (祈使句) 9．（2024·福建三明·一模）汉语在国际交往中发挥着越来越重要的作用，学习和研究汉语的人也越来越多。你的英国朋友Anna的学校即将开设特色选修课程，她在考虑是否选修汉语，来信询问你的建议。假设你是李华，请你根据以下提示给她写封回信。 要求： 1.必须包含以上要点，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 3.词数100词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Anna, I’m so glad to hear from you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice can help you. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Anna, I’m so glad to hear from you. Knowing you have an interest in Chinese, I suggest you choose the Chinese course. Chinese is spoken widely in the world. With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular. Learning Chinese is not only a way to communicate, but also a chance to admire Chinese culture. In my opinion, there are many ways to learn Chinese. It’s useful to read Chinese books and listen to Chinese songs. What’s more, you are supposed to join a Chinese club to practice your spoken Chinese. Learning is a lifelong journey. Keep practicing every day, then it will bring something new. I hope my advice can help you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误，行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，提出观点并说明原因； 第二步，给出学习汉语的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①not only…but also…不仅……而且…… ②what’s more而且 ③be supposed to应该 [高分句型] ①Knowing you have an interest in Chinese, I suggest you choose the Chinese course.（省略that的宾语从句） ②Learning Chinese is not only a way to communicate, but also a chance to admire Chinese culture.（动名词作主语） 10．（2023·福建福州·模拟预测）5月20日，教育部召开了全国中小学“五项管理”落实推进视频会议，青少年的手机、睡眠、作业、读物、体质等问题再次引起了广泛关注。最近，你们班就同学们在英语阅读方面存在的问题进行了一次调查并展开了讨论。请你根据表格内容写一篇调查报告，并提出一些建议。 注意： 1. 文章必须包括表格中的全部内容； 2. 建议可面向学生、老师或者学校； 3. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 词数80左右。 英语阅读现状 你的建议 1. 对英语阅读不感兴趣(23%) 2. 作业太多，没时间阅读(40%) 3. 阅读有困难，缺乏正确的方法(35%) 4. 没有合适的阅读材料(50%) …… （至少两点）     Recently, we have done a survey of students’ English reading status in our class, but the results are not pleasing. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文： Recently, we have done a survey of students’ English reading status in our class, but the results are not pleasing. 23% of my classmates aren’t interested in English reading. 40% say they hardly have time for reading because of too much homework. 35% of them have difficulty in reading and don’t know how to read in right ways. Besides, half of the students say they don’t have suitable reading materials. In my opinion, we’re supposed to spend more time in reading. We need to practice reading every day. As for teachers, I hope that they can give us less homework and teach us how to improve our reading abilities. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体介绍做了一项调查，结果不令人满意（题目已给出）； 第二步，具体介绍各种状况中人数的占比情况； 第三步，最后给出自己的建议。 [亮点词汇] ① do a survey做调查 ② too much太多 ③ in one’s opinion在某人看来 [高分句型] ① 40% say they hardly have time for reading because of too much homework.（宾语从句） ② 35% of them have difficulty in reading and don’t know how to read in right ways.（疑问词+不定式） 11．（2023·福建·厦门三模）假如你是李明，你的美国朋友David 向你了解暑假社会实践活动的计划，请结合下表内容写一封邮件向他介绍你的计划。 Social Practice Plan What to do Why to do so ●volunteer to do... ●make a survey about... ●have a graduation trip to... ●… ●be helpful... ●learn more about... ●open one’s eyes... ●… 注意： 1）文中必须包含至少两项活动的内容要点，可适当发挥； 2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； 3）词数：80~ 100；邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear David, Glad to share my social practice plan with you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Ming 【答案】例文： Dear David, Glad to share my social practice plan with you. As it will be the last summer holiday in junior school, some classmates and I plan to go on a graduation trip to Hangzhou, the capital city of Zhejiang. By enjoying the beautiful scenery and colorful cultures there, we can open our eyes and bring some unforgettable memories. After the trip, I will volunteer to help in our city library, sorting out books, guiding readers to the right bookshelves, and of course, communicating with different people. I’m sure this experience can not only enrich my life but help me understand the true meaning of learning by doing. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Ming 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封邮件作文。向David介绍自己的暑假社会实践活动计划。 2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般将来时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段根据材料提示内容介绍自己的计划；最后一段表达期待对方的回信。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 12．（2023·福建厦门·模拟预测）成长是一种蜕变，在跌跌撞撞中成就更好的自己。你可能学会了一项新技能，或者掌握了新知识，也可能是养成了一种好习惯。请选择一个方面谈谈你成长改变的经历以及收获。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1.必须包含所有的内容要点； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 In the final exam of the ninth grade, I got the first place in my class. I have regained my confidence. I believe everything is easy. In the seventh grade, I was crazy about computer games. At that time, I went to bed very late every night. I couldn’t get up in the morning. I slept in class and didn’t listen carefully. So I failed the exam. I felt that my classmates looked down on me, and my teachers and parents worried about me. Later, I realized that this was not good. I began to ask my teachers and my good friends for help. Since then, I didn’t play computer games anymore. I developed good learning habits. I studied hard and achieved my dreams. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，话题作文，谈谈你成长改变的经历以及收获； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作时，围绕话题进行叙述，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题（总写）。我获得了第一名，认为一切很简单； 第二步，叙述成长改变的经历； 第三步，谈谈收获，结尾。努力学习，实现了梦想。 [亮点词汇] ①In the final exam of在……的期末考试中 ②get the first place获得第一名 ③be crazy about迷恋 ④look down on瞧不起 ⑤ask … for help请求帮助 ⑥develop good learning habits养成良好的学习习惯 ⑦study hard and achieve dreams努力学习，实现梦想 [高分句型] I felt that my classmates looked down on me, and my teachers and parents worried about me.（宾语从句） 13．（2023·福建福州·模拟预测）假如你是李华，上周末你们学校组织学生去一所盲人学校帮助盲人学生。你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一篇短文介绍此次活动，并谈谈感受。词数80左右。 Time last weekend Place at a blind school Activities do the cleaning, read books, play games... Feeling(s) ... 注意事项： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚， 表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文： Last weekend the students from our school volunteered to help the blind students at a blind school. We started by helping the blind students do the cleaning. After that, we read some interesting books to them. We were lost in the books and communication with them so that we nearly forgot the time. After lunch, we played games with them. But with time going by, we had to say goodbye to our new friends in the afternoon. 　  Many students said they were happy that they could offer help to those who badly needed it. In return, the blind students also taught them how to face difficulties in a positive way. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：材料所给内容不得遗漏，注意“感受部分”需自行阐述。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明活动的时间、地点、人物； 第二步，详细介绍活动的具体内容； 第三步，写出活动后感受。 [亮点词汇] ① volunteer to do sth. 自愿做某事 ② in return 作为回报 ③ time going by 时间在流逝 [高分句型] ① We were lost in the books and communication with them so that we nearly forgot the time.（so that引导结果状语从句） ② Many students said they were happy that they could offer help to those who badly needed it.（宾语从句、原因状语从句） 14．（2023·福建福州·模拟预测）2023年5月30日，神舟十六号载人飞船的成功发射，是我国航天事业的又一重大里程碑。它不仅标志着我国航天业的飞速发展，更让我们对未来的探索和发展充满了期待和信心。假如你校将举办一场主题为“My Space Dream”的英语演讲比赛，请根据下列提示写一篇演讲稿，简单阐述近年来我国航天事业的发展情况并谈谈你为实现航天梦将做何准备。 提示： （1）What do you think of our space industry? （2）What do you think of flying to the moon? （3）What are you going to do? Why? 注意： （1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； （2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （3）词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：take exercise，get knowledge Good morning, everyone. I’m glad to stand here to give a speech. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening! 【答案】例文 Good morning, everyone. I’m glad to stand here to give a speech. As we know, in recent years, China has made great progress in its space industry. We Chinese are all proud of it! Since I was a child, I have been dream of becoming an astronaut, because flying into the moon is so cool. I know becoming an astronaut is not easy, but I will try my best to achieve it. So I am going to study hard and get more knowledge about space. What’s more, I plan to take more exercise to get a strong body. As the saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” I strongly believe that as long as I keep on trying, my dream will come true one day. Thanks for your listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：根据所给问题提示，介绍自己的航天梦以及为实现航天梦将做何准备，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍近年来中国的航天事业的情况； 第二步，介绍自己的航天梦，以及为实现它该如何做； 第三步，表达自己的决心。 [亮点词汇] ①make great progress in...在某方面取得巨大的进步 ②be proud of以……为傲 ③try my best to do sth竭尽全力做某事 ④keep on doing继续做某事 [高分句型] ①Since I was a child, I have been dream of becoming an astronaut, because flying into the moon is so cool. (since引导的时间状语从句；because引导的原因状语从句) ②Where there is a will, there is a way.(名言警句) ③I strongly believe that as long as I keep on trying, my dream will come true one day.(that引导的宾语从句；as long as引导的条件状语从句) 15．（2023·福建厦门·模拟预测）假定你是李华，受邀参加学校组织的健身经验活动分享。请你结合以下图示，写一篇英文演讲稿，通过自己的亲身经历，分享锻炼建议，号召同学们积极参与体育运动，保持身体健康。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有要求的内容，可适当发挥; 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范; 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Ladies and gentlemen, It’s my great honor to have a chance to give a speech here. I’m a huge fan of sports. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文： Ladies and gentlemen, It’s my great honor to have a chance to give a speech here. I’m a huge fan of sports. I think that doing sports can not only be relaxing, but also be good for our health. My favorite sport is running. I run for an hour every morning. I only need to buy a pair of comfortable sports shoes for it. It costs very little. By doing sports, I am getting healthier and healthier now. And I’m more outgoing. I have also made many friends. Therefore, I suggest that students will do more sports. Here are a few tips. Firstly, doing sport should be appropriate. Secondly, before doing sports, it is important to understand one’s physical condition. Thirdly, doing sport requires persistence. Finally, I hope my classmates become stronger and stronger. That’s all, thank you. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏思维导图中给出的关键信息，写演讲稿通过自身经历来分享锻炼建议，号召同学们参加体育锻炼。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍锻炼的重要性； 第二步，分享自己的经历及感受并给出做锻炼相关的建议，号召同学们一起做锻炼； 第三步，感谢大家的聆听。 [亮点词汇] ①not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且…… ②a pair of 一双 [高分句型] ①By doing sports, I am getting healthier and healthier now.（形容词比较级+and+形容词比较级，表示“越来越……”） ②Therefore, I suggest that students will do more sports.（that引导宾语从句） 16．（2023·福建漳州·模拟预测）某英文网站开展关于“美丽校园，健康生活”的征稿活动。请根据以下思维导图内容积极投稿，倡导同学们“爱护校园环境，健康快乐生活”。字数80左右。 注意事项： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Students need to have a healthy school life. What can we do to make it? Here I’ve got some ideas to share with you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version Students need to have a healthy school life. What can we do to make it? Here I’ve got some ideas to share with you. First, it’s important to keep our school clean. For example, we can clean the floor and desks every day, because a good environment is helpful to our study and health. Second, it’s good to do some sports like running, playing basketball and so on. Third, we’d better look after ourselves well by developing good living habits, such as washing hands in time and wearing masks when it is necessary. Finally, if we get on well with each other and are in a good mood, we’ll enjoy a happy and healthy school life. I hope they will work for you! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，引入主题（开头已给出）； 第二步，具体阐述如何做到健康校园生活； 第三步，最后表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①for example比如 ②in time及时 ③get on well with sb和某人相处得好 [高分句型] ①For example, we can clean the floor and desks every day, because a good environment is helpful to our study and health. （because引导的原因状语从句） ②Finally, if we get on well with each other and are in a good mood, we’ll enjoy a happy and healthy school life.（if引导的条件状语从句） 17．（2023·福建福州·模拟预测）上周英语老师要求小组就“你最想做的志愿服务”对同学们进行问卷调查，下图是你们小组的相关统计结果。请你根据以下图片及文字提示用英语写一篇短文，准备做小组汇报，并汇报你们小组的计划以及原因。 注意: (1) 须包括提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥。(2) 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。(3) 词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 We did a survey about students’ favourite volunteering work last weekend. Here are the results. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 We did a survey about students’ favourite volunteering work last weekend. Here are the results. 60% of the students like serving in the library, while only 20% of them enjoy doing some cleaning job in the park. The students who want to volunteer in the old people’s home and help with the traffic separately take up 10%. As for our group, we like serving in the library, too. We will go to the library every weekend. We can help readers find the books and we can also help the librarians to sort out the books and keep the order. Volunteering work helps people in need. It also offers us chances to experience the social life and develop our abilities and skills. Let’s volunteer together! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意数字的表达，语言表述要严谨，体现调查报告的客观性。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。由活动引出问卷调查； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。阐述问卷调查的具体结果以及本小组的计划以及原因； 第三步，书写结语。肯定志愿活动的意义，号召大家多多参与。 [亮点词汇] ①take up 占据 ②sort out 整理 ③keep the order 维持秩序 ④social life 社交生活 [高分句型] ①The students who want to volunteer in the old people’s home and help with the traffic separately take up 10%.（who引导的定语从句） ②It also offers us chances to experience the social life and develop our abilities and skills.（offer sb. sth.  offer可接双宾语，表示“向某人提供某物”） 18．（2022·湖南怀化·中考真题）国家提出将“劳动教育（labor education）”纳入中小学国家课程方案，请结合自身的劳动经历，谈谈你对劳动教育的看法。内容包括： 1. 你对劳动教育的看法 be good for health; relax from the hard study… 2. 你自身的劳动经历及感受 at home: do the dishes; sweep the floor… at school: clean the classroom; water flowers… 3. 你对劳动教育课程的建议 offer different kinds of labor classes; hold competitions about labor skills… 要求: 1. 文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名； 2. 包含以上表格内所有信息，可适当发挥； 3. 词数：80词左右；文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 It’s reported that labor education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 It’s reported that labor education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think it’s necessary. Because it is good for our health. We can relax from the hard study by doing labor. I usually do labor at home such as doing the dishes, sweeping the floor and taking out the rubbish. At school I often clean the classroom and water flowers. I can not only keep healthy, but also develop good habits from it. As for how to run the course in our school. I have some ideas. The school can offer different kinds of labor classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow plants. What’s more, the school can also hold competitions about the labor skills to see who is the best. Such activities make our school life more colorful and meaningful. I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term. I believe I will do well in it. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“劳动教育”写一篇短文。 2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段介绍劳动对我们的好处；第二段介绍自己在家里和在学校的劳动经历；最后一段提出对劳动教育课程的建议。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 19．（2023·福建泉州·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校今年暑假将为外国学生举办一场汉语夏令营活动（Chinese Summer Camp）。请你根据下面海报的内容，用英语给你的笔友David写一封电子邮件，介绍本次活动并邀请他参加。词数80左右。 Welcome to Chinese Summer Camp Time：July 18th—July 28th, 2023 Place：No.8 Junior High School Activities：★Study Chinese daily expressions ★Know about Chinese history and culture ★Visit the museum ★... Sign up (报名): Before July 2nd, on the school website 注意事项： （1）必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； （3）请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。 Dear David,   I’m glad to know that you are interested in Chinese culture. Here is a piece of good news. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours,   Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear David,   I’m glad to know that you are interested in Chinese culture. Here is a piece of good news. Our school will have a Chinese Summer Camp. I’d like to invite you to join us. It will last 11 days from July 18th to July 28th, 2023 at No.8 Junior High School. We will have many activities, such as studying Chinese daily expressions, knowing about Chinese history and culture, visiting the museum, attending some lectures on Chinese history and so on. If you want to be part of it, please sign up for it before July 2nd on the school website. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours,   Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。 ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中汉语夏令营活动的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“用英语给你的笔友David写一封电子邮件，介绍本次活动并邀请他参加”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、地点、活动内容等”几个方面重点介绍汉语夏令营活动的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语，表达“我期待你的回复”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣； ②invite sb to do sth邀请某人做某事； ③want to do sth想要做某事； ④sign up for报名参加。 [高分句型] ①I’d like to invite you to join us. (动词不定式作宾语) ②If you want to be part of it, please sign up for it before July 2nd on the school website. (if引导的条件状语从句) 20．（2023·福建·三模）又是一年毕业季。为了给学生提供”感谢师恩”的平台，某英文报以”Thank you, …”为题，向广大学生征文。请你根据以下思维导图，并结合自身的经历，用英语写一篇短文应征。词数80左右。 Introduction（looks；personalities（性格）；...） Experience（example/story） Influence on me（…） 注意事项: 1.必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Thank you, ________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Thank you, my English teacher In my junior school life, many people have helped me. Thank them very much. But the person I want to thank most is my English teacher Miss Lee. Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair. She’s very outgoing. And she is kind and helpful. She helps me a lot. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became increasingly interested in it. I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me and her help is very useful for my future development. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作内容已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给要点，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明自己最想感谢的老师，并简单介绍一下老师的外貌和性格特征； 第二步，阐述与老师之间发生的经历或故事； 第三步，阐述老师给我带来的影响。 [亮点词汇] ① in trouble处于困境中 ② encourage鼓励 ③ make great progress取得很大进步 ④ increasingly不断增加地 [高分句型] ① When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice.（when引导的时间状语从句） ② I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset.（宾语从句） ③ I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me.（定语从句） 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$