必修第三册Unit 4 Amazing art(介绍艺术作品)-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高一英语单元写作深度指导(外研版2019)

Unit 4 Amazing art 单元写作深度指导 介绍艺术作品 ▲描述艺术品 This sunflower painting was an oil painting by Vincent van Gogh. This one (The painting) was completed in Arles in 1889. It shows sunflowers in a vase, mostly in three shades of yellow. The colours of the flowers range from bright yellows to brownish yellows, showing that the flowers are at different stages of life. The sunflower paintings held special meaning for Van Gogh. ▲基础词汇 famous著名的 show表达;表现 describe描述 one of the most important... 最重要的……之一 be considered as被认为…… be popular with受……欢迎 leave a deep impression on me给我留下深刻印象 give me a better understanding of life让我更好地理解生活 attract/catch one’s attention吸引某人的注意 give a vivid description of...生动描述…… 　I.要点解读 　　本单元的写作任务是介绍一件艺术作品,属于事物说明文的范畴。事物说明文,一般是通过对具体事物的形状、构造、性质、特点、用途等作客观而准确的说明,使读者了解、认识这个或这类事物。 II.结构框架 写好事物说明文要从五点入手:一要抓住特征说明事物;二要选好说明角度;三要合理安排说明顺序;四要恰当地使用各种说明方法;五要运用准确、简明的语言说明。 III.必备表达 1.常用词块 be skilled/good at　　　 擅长 be kept in good condition 保存完好 be enthusiastic about 对……充满热情 date back to... 追溯到…… pass down 传承 spread Chinese culture 传播中国文化 in memory of 为了纪念…… 2.必备句式 (1)作品特点 It is a famous painting drawn by Wu Daozi, one of the greatest artists in the Tang Dynasty. 这幅名画是由吴道子画的,他是唐朝最伟大的画家之一。 The painting vividly reflects the life of people in Sichuan Province. 这幅画生动地反映了四川人的生活。 (2)具体描述 It measures 50 centimeters long./It is 50 centimeters in length.它长50厘米。 The colors range from yellows to browns. 它的颜色从黄色到棕色。 Chinese painting is known for its brush drawings in black inks and natural colors. 中国画因用黑色墨汁和自然色的毛笔画而出名。 (3)对作品的评价 The painting is known for its accurate images of people and scenery. 这幅画因精准的人物和风景形象而出名。 There is no doubt that the masterpiece plays an important role in the development of sculpture. 毫无疑问,这部杰出的作品在雕塑发展史上起着重要的作用。 All the visitors speak highly of it. 所有游客都对它做出高度评价。 IV.优化策略 1.‌开头引入‌ 简要介绍艺术作品的名称、作者和创作背景。吸引读者的注意力，提出文章的主题。 2.‌详细描述‌ 详细描述艺术作品的外观、风格、色彩、构图等视觉元素。分析作品所表达的主题、情感或寓意。可以提及作品在艺术史上的地位或影响。 3.‌个人感受‌ 分享自己对作品的感受或理解。可以结合个人经历或情感，使文章更加生动和真实。 4.‌结尾总结‌ 总结作品的特点和价值。强调作品对自己的影响或启示。可以提出对读者的建议或期望。 【范文示例】 In the realm of art, there are countless masterpieces that captivate our senses and ignite our imagination. One such artwork that has always fascinated me is "The Starry Night," a mesmerizing painting by the legendary Dutch artist Vincent van Gogh. Painted in 1889 during his stay at the Saint-Paul-de-Mausole asylum in France, this piece not only reflects van Gogh's unique artistic style but also delves deep into the complexities of his inner world. At first glance, "The Starry Night" draws the viewer into its swirling vortex of colors and patterns. The dominant blues and yellows create a striking contrast, symbolizing the turmoil and tranquility that coexisted within van Gogh's mind. The sky, rendered in bold, vigorous strokes, seems to be alive, with stars swirling in a cosmic dance. The cypress tree in the foreground stands tall and solemn, its dark, twisted form contrasting sharply with the vibrant sky behind it. This juxtaposition of elements adds depth and drama to the composition, making it a visual feast for the eyes. Beyond its visual appeal, "The Starry Night" conveys a profound message about the human experience. The painting is often interpreted as a representation of van Gogh's struggles with mental illness and his yearning for peace. The swirling stars and turbulent sky mirror the chaos in his mind, while the calm village below suggests a longing for serenity and stability. This duality reflects the complex nature of human emotions, where pain and beauty can coexist. Personally, "The Starry Night" resonates with me deeply. It reminds me of the power of art to express the inexpressible, to capture the essence of human experience in a way that words cannot. Whenever I gaze upon this painting, I am transported to a world where emotions are raw and real, and where the boundaries between the internal and external blur. In conclusion, "The Starry Night" is not just a painting; it is a testament to the human spirit's resilience and creativity. It teaches us that even in the darkest times, there is beauty to be found and expressed. As we continue to appreciate and study this masterpiece, we are reminded of the enduring power of art to inspire, comfort, and challenge us. I encourage everyone to take a moment to immerse themselves in the world of "The Starry Night," and to let its beauty and depth touch their hearts. 　假定你是校报英文版的编辑李华,你们计划在下期报纸的“Great Artworks”栏目中为读者介绍《六骏图》。请你根据提示信息,为其配上一段英文说明。 项目 内容 名称 《六骏图》(The Six Horses) 作者 徐悲鸿 特点 六匹马形态各异;表现出了马的活力;是力量、速度和成功的象征。 评价 结合了中国的水墨画技巧(ink and wash technique)以及西方的一些绘画技巧,是中国最著名的绘画作品之一。 注意: 1.写作词数应为80个左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 【写作示例】 I.读题布局 II.句式建构 1.《六骏图》是由徐悲鸿画的一幅名画。 The Six Horses is a famous painting drawn by Xu Beihong.  2.徐悲鸿是一位著名的中国画家,他因他的中国水墨画马而最为著名。 Xu Beihong is a well-known Chinese artist and is most famous for his Chinese ink and wash paintings of horses.  3.这幅画是中国水墨画技法与西方绘画技法的结合,被认为是中国最著名的画作之一。 (1)This painting, a combination of Chinese ink and wash techniques with Western painting skills, is considered as one of the most famous paintings in China.  (2)This painting,(which is) considered as one of the most famous paintings in China, is a combination of Chinese ink and wash techniques with Western painting skills.  4.画中的六匹马姿势各异,姿态优美,活灵活现。 With various positions, the six horses in the painting are vivid, graceful and active.  5.这幅画显示了马的力量。 The painting shows the strength of the horses.  6.这幅画是力量、速度和成功的象征。 The painting is the symbol of power,speed and success.  7.总而言之,这幅画真的是天才的杰作,马的形象和它展现的精神令人惊叹。 In a word, the painting is really a work of genius and the images of the horses and the spirits it shows are amazing.  III.衔接成篇 　　The Six Horses is a famous painting drawn by Xu Beihong, a well-known Chinese artist who is most famous for his Chinese ink and wash paintings of horses. 　　This painting, a combination of Chinese ink and wash techniques with Western painting skills, is considered as one of the most famous paintings in China. With various positions, the six horses in the painting are vivid, graceful and active. The painting not only shows the strength of the horses but also is the symbol of power, speed and success. 　　In a word, the painting is really a work of genius and the images of the horses and the spirits it shows are amazing. 1．假如你是李雷，上周参观了以“Working the Waste into Magic”为主题的环保作品展。请你根据以下信息，写一篇短文，在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。 What were on show What they are made of/from What you think clothes chairs model planes ... waste paper plastic bottles used wood and glass ... creative save... ... 注意:(1)短文须介绍至少两项展品，可适当发挥； (2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； (3)词数:80—100。短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about the show “Working the Waste into Magic”. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假定你是李华，你校英语社正在举办以保护世界野生动植物为主题的绘画比赛，你创作了以下作品参赛，请写一篇发言稿，向评委介绍你的这幅作品。 内容包括： 1. 作品主要信息介绍； 2. 作品解读。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为100 左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 参考词汇 rhinoceros 独角犀牛 giraffe 长颈鹿 Distinguished judges, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you. 3．假如你是李华，你校英语报开设了一个介绍影视作品的专栏，请根据下面表格中的提示为该栏目写一篇关于电影《流浪地球》的影评。 片名 The Wandering Earth 导演 郭帆 故事梗概 该片改编于刘慈欣的同名小说。影片讲述了在不久的未来太阳即将毁灭，太阳系已经不适合人类生存。面对绝境，人们将开启“流浪地球”计划，试图带着地球一起逃离太阳系，寻找人类的新家园。 评论 1. 该电影是中国科幻电影史上的里程碑，自上映以来，深受观众欢迎。 2. …… 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 不要逐条翻译，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：里程碑landmark _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假定你是学生会主席李华。学校将举办一次以＂校园生活·创意无限＂(Innovations on Campus)为主题的创意作品展评活动。请你根据以下图示，以短文形式用英语写一份书面通知。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3.开头及结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇: 校园campus        创意作品innovation        颁奖prize-giving Notice An exciting event ＂Innovations on Campus＂ is around the corner. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Come on, everybody! It’s your show time. Student Union 5．你是明启中学学生李华，最近上海博物馆推出了三款文创周边产品，吸引了不少年轻人追捧，分别是：（1）馆藏藏品日历 ；（2）中外艺术家明信片；（3） “丝绸之路”主题丝巾。 No. 1 No. 2 No. 3 以上海博物馆馆藏藏品为主题的日历，印有中华古代水墨画、书法、历史文物的展品细节信息。 以中外名画为主题，色彩艳丽，可作为贺卡、明信片、书签使用。   以“帆船”为主题元素、以海上丝绸之路航线为底，以浅蓝色呼应瓷器配色，100%桑蚕丝材料。 售价：79元 售价：10元/ 张 售价：330元 请比较这三个产品，选择一款文创产品以赠予外国笔友Tom，从不同角度（如设计创意、实用价值、文化意蕴、销售价格等）阐述你的选择理由。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假如你是李华。你的澳大利亚朋友Tom听说春节期间你去了马街书会 (Majie Quyi Show), 请你给他写封回信, 介绍下马街书会的基本情况。 历史 700 多年 性质 民间艺术盛会; “中国十大民俗”之一 时间 每年阴历正月十一至十三 地点 河南宝丰马街 演员 来自全国的曲艺艺人 内容 40多种曲艺和其它传统曲目 注意: 1. 词数80 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 7．假如你是李华，上周六参观了你市博物馆举办的“遇见艺术家”中国艺术展，请为你校英文报写一则评论。内容包括： 1. 展览概况； 2. 观展感受； 3. 意见或建议。 注意：1. 词数80词左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．你校在学生中开展调查，想了解学生对艺术鉴赏Art Appreciation这门课程是否感兴趣。请写一篇短文，给你校英文网站投稿，内容包括： 1. 描述图表(chart)； 2. 试分析产生该结果的原因； 3. 你的看法。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A survey on Art Appreciation ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．戏曲艺术是中华文明的一个重要组成部分，是我国传统文化的代表之一。但是在物质水平提高和精神文化丰富的同时，戏曲艺术的地位却逐渐下降，保护传统文化的形势迫在眉睫。请你参照以下信息介绍一种被列入国家非物质文化遗产目录的剧种——秦腔。 主要信息： 1．秦腔(Qinqiang Opera)，中国汉族最古老的戏剧之一，源于陕西和甘肃的农村地区，流行于中国西北部的陕西、甘肃、青海、宁夏等地； 2．秦腔所演的剧目丰富：有神话、民间故事等；秦腔的角色也十分众多，表演特色鲜明； 3．2006年5月20日，经国务院(the State Council)批准列入第一批国家级非物质文化遗产名录。 …… 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假定你是李华，你校英语社团值校“艺术节”之际举办一场主题为“艺术”的演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿参加，内容包括： 1．在你看来，艺术是什么？ 2．艺术给人带来什么？ 3．如何提高自己的艺术修养？ 注意：字数在80词左右。 参考词汇：艺术修养 artistic accomplishment Good morning, everyone! I'm Li Hua. It’s my honor to stand here and give a speech about art. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your listening! 参考答案 1． Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about the show “Working the Waste into Magic”. A number of creative works were on show, including clothes made of waste paper and model planes made of used wood and glass. Another fascinating work is a chair that is made of plastic bottles. They are glued together and painted in different colors. I was most interested in a backpack for computers. It is made out of a pair of old jeans! With the zipper of jeans on the top, two pockets on two sides, the backpack looks both useful and fashionable. It even has a logo! I felt amazed at how waste could be put to such good use. It really helps to save energy and build a greener future. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生写一篇短文，在英语课上介绍以“Working the Waste into Magic”为主题的环保作品展上展示的展品，并分享自己的想法与感受。 1.词汇积累 许多：a number of→a good many 感兴趣：be interested in→take interest in 实用的：useful→practical 惊讶的：amazed→surprised 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：I was most interested in a backpack for computers. It is made out of a pair of old jeans! 拓展句：I was most interested in a backpack for computers, which is made out of a pair of old jeans! [高分句型1] Another fascinating work is a chair that is made of plastic bottles. (运用了that引导定语从句) [高分句型2] I felt amazed at how waste could be put to such good use. (运用了how引导宾语从句) 2． Distinguished judges, I am Li Hua, and I am honored to present my artwork, titled “Save Wild Life,” for this competition. In my painting, a giraffe, an elephant, and a black bear stand together on a large hand, symbolizing our responsibility to protect and care for these magnificent creatures. The message “Save Wild Life” is prominently displayed, serving as a reminder of our duty to preserve the biodiversity of our planet. Through my artwork, I hope to raise awareness about the importance of wildlife conservation and inspire each of us to take action. Wildlife is a crucial part of our ecosystem, and it is our responsibility to ensure their survival. Thank you for considering my entry and hope you will like it. Thank you. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。校英语社正在举办以保护世界野生动植物为主题的绘画比赛，李华创作了一幅作品参赛，要求考生以李华的名义写一篇发言稿，向评委介绍你的这幅作品。 1.词汇积累 比赛：competition → contest 保护：preserve → protect 希望：hope → wish 重要性：importance → significance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：In my painting, a giraffe, an elephant, and a black bear stand together on a large hand, symbolizing our responsibility to protect and care for these magnificent creatures. 拓展句：In my painting, a giraffe, an elephant, and a black bear stand together on a large hand, which symbolizes our responsibility to protect and care for these magnificent creatures. [高分句型1] I am Li Hua, and I am honored to present my artwork, titled “Save Wild Life,” for this competition.(运用了过去分词作后置定语) [高分句型2] The message “Save Wild Life” is prominently displayed, serving as a reminder of our duty to preserve the biodiversity of our planet.(运用了现在分词作伴随状语) 3．          The Wandering Earth is a science fiction film directed by Guo Fan and adapted from Liu Cixin's novel of the same name. The film tells the story that in the near future the sun is dying and the solar system is no longer suitable for life. Faced with the danger of human extinction, people will start the "Wandering Earth" project, trying to escape from the solar system with the earth and looking for a new home for human beings. The film is a landmark in the history of Chinese science fiction films and has been popular with audience since its release. So I highly recommend this film. 【分析】本篇书面表达属于影评，考生根据表格中的提示为校英语报介绍影视作品的栏目写一篇关于电影《流浪地球》的影评。 1.词汇积累 改编：revise→adapted from 适合做：is fit for →is suitable for 面对：facing→ faced with j建议：suggest→ recommend 2. 句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：The film is a landmark in the history of Chinese science fiction films and has been popular with audience since its release. So I highly recommend this film. 拓展句： The film is a landmark in the history of Chinese science fiction films and has been popular with audience since its release，which is why I highly recommend this film. [高分句型1] Faced with the danger of human extinction, people will start the "Wandering Earth" project, trying to escape from the solar system with the earth and looking for a new home for human beings.（非谓语动词作状语） [高分句型2]The film tells the story that in the near future the sun is dying and the solar system is no longer suitable for life.（that引导的同位语从句） 4． Notice     An exciting event ＂Innovations on Campus＂ is around the corner.  Every one of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills. Note that your innovations must be school things. Along with your wonderful innovation, you need to hand in a report, explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use. All the collections will be on show from June 16 to 18 in the gym. Looking forward to the prize-giving ceremony? Sure!  It’ll be held from 15:00 to 17:00 on June 18. So don’t miss the chance of being the winner. Your contribution will certainly make the event a huge success. For any questions. Call Li Hua at 44876655. Come on, everybody! It’s your show time. Student Union 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于看图作文。 第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为看图作文：假定你是学生会主席李华。学校将举办一次以＂校园生活·创意无限＂(Innovations on Campus)为主题的创意作品展评活动。请你根据以下图示，以短文形式用英语写一份书面通知。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：around the corner（即将来临）；encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills（鼓励创造性思维，充分发挥你的DIY技能）；Along with your wonderful innovation（伴随着你精彩的创新）等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 本文内容完整，符合图画内容，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。Every one of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills.句中使用which引导的非限制性定语从句；you need to hand in a report, explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use.句中使用现在分词作伴随状语和how/what引导的宾语从句；It’ll be held from 15:00 to 17:00 on June 18.句中使用一般将来时态的被动语态。 5． I am writing to introduce and compare three cultural and creative products recently launched by the Shanghai Museum, which have attracted a lot of attention from young people. After considering various aspects, I have chosen the “Silk Road” themed silk scarf as the ideal gift for you. Firstly, the silk scarf features a sailboat theme, symbolizing the historical maritime Silk Road. The use of a light blue color scheme complements the colors found in Chinese porcelain, creating a visually appealing design. Secondly, considering practical value, the silk scarf is versatile. It can be worn as a fashion accessory or used as a decorative item at home. It not only adds elegance to your outfit but also serves as a reminder of the historical significance of the Silk Road. Last but not least, the silk scarf is reasonably priced compared to other luxury accessories of similar quality, which offers excellent value for money, making it an affordable and meaningful gift. In conclusion, considering its exceptional design creativity, practical value, profound cultural significance, and reasonable price, I believe the “Silk Road” themed silk scarf would be the perfect cultural and creative gift for Tom. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生比较三款文创周边产品，选择一款文创产品以赠予外国笔友Tom，从不同角度（如设计创意、实用价值、文化意蕴、销售价格等）阐述选择理由。 1.词汇积累 举办：launch→hold 各种各样的：various→ a variety of 首先：firstly→ first of all 总之：in conclusion→ all in all 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：After considering various aspects, I have chosen the “Silk Road” themed silk scarf as the ideal gift for you. 拓展句：After I have considered various aspects, I have chosen the “Silk Road” themed silk scarf as the ideal gift for you. 【高分句型1】I am writing to introduce and compare three cultural and creative products recently launched by the Shanghai Museum, which have attracted a lot of attention from young people. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】In conclusion, considering its exceptional design creativity, practical value, profound cultural significance, and reasonable price, I believe the “Silk Road” themed silk scarf would be the perfect cultural and creative gift for Tom.（运用了现在分词作状语的结构） 6． Dear Tom, I’m glad you’re interested in my recent trip to the Majie Quyi Show during the Spring Festival. This unique folk art festival, known as one of the “Top Ten Chinese Folk Customs”, has a history of over 700 years. It takes place annually from the 11th to the 13th day of the first lunar month in Majie, Baofeng, Henan. Performers from all over China gather here to showcase more than 40 types of Quyi and other traditional tunes, making it a truly remarkable event for folk art lovers. I had a wonderful time experiencing this vibrant display of Chinese cultural heritage. Yours, Li Hua 【写作分析】本篇是图表作文。你的澳大利亚朋友Tom听说春节期间你去了马街书会，要求考生给他写封回信, 介绍下马街书会的基本情况。 1. 词汇积累 高兴：glad→delighted 独特的：unique→special 展示：showcase→display 活动：event→activity 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：This unique folk art festival, known as one of the “Top Ten Chinese Folk Customs”, has a history of over 700 years. 拓展句：This unique folk art festival, which is known as one of the “Top Ten Chinese Folk Customs”, has a history of over 700 years. [高级句型1]I’m glad you’re interested in my recent trip to the Majie Quyi Show during the Spring Festival.(省略that的宾语从句) [高级句型2]Performers from all over China gather here to showcase more than 40 types of Quyi and other traditional tunes, making it a truly remarkable event for folk art lovers.(现在分词作结构状语) 7． Last Saturday, I visited an exhibition titled “Meeting Artists”, which was held by our city’s museum. Many artworks, including works of Chinese calligraphy and landscape paintings, were on show. The host explained every work in detail, which helped the visitors have a better understanding. The works were amazing and left a deep impression on me. The exhibition not only promoted the inheritance of Chinese traditional culture but strengthened our national pride. I hope there will be more activities like this, and future exhibitions will last longer so that more people can have the opportunity to appreciate great artworks. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。题目要求考生就市博物馆举办的“遇见艺术家”中国艺术展写一则评论，需介绍展览概况，分享观展感受，并给出意见或建议。 1. 词汇积累 展示中：on show→on exhibition, on display 解释：explain→clarify, explicate 了不起的：amazing→astonishing, awesome, breathtaking 促进：promote→facilitate, advance, further 加强：strengthen→enhance, augment 以便：so that→in order that 2. 句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：The exhibition not only promoted the inheritance of Chinese traditional culture but strengthened our national pride. 拓展句：Not only did the exhibition promote the inheritance of Chinese traditional culture, but it strengthened our national pride. [高分句型1] Last Saturday, I visited an exhibition titled “Meeting Artists”, which was held by our city’s museum. (运用了过去分词短语titled…作exhibition的后置定语、关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] The host explained every work in detail, which helped the visitors have a better understanding. (运用了关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型3] I hope there will be more activities like this, and future exhibitions will last longer so that more people can have the opportunity to appreciate great artworks. (运用了连接词that引导名词性从句作hope的宾语并被省略、so that引导目的状语从句) 8． A survey on Art Appreciation As is shown in the chart, 67.24 percent of the students fairly like it, while only 9 percent dislike it. It goes without saying that most students have fancy on Art Appreciation. There are some reasons accounting for the result. For instance, it is the the multi-media approach to teaching that has made Art Appreciation classes more interesting, ranging from images to movies. What’s more, students are encouraged to engage in art exhibitions and artistic performances, which arouses their enthusiasm. In my opinion, the result of the survey is a good beginning. Since art appreciation has played a vital role in our life, the importance of it can never be over-emphasized. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校英文网站投稿，就学生对艺术鉴Art Appreciation 这门课程是否感兴趣写一篇短文。 1.词汇积累 喜欢：like → be fond of 此外：what’s more → in addition 鼓励：encourage → inspire 重要性：importance → significance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：There are some reasons accounting for the result. 拓展句：There are some reasons which account for the result. 【高分句型1】What’s more, students are encouraged to engage in art exhibitions and artistic performances, which arouses their enthusiasm. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Since art appreciation has played a vital role in our life, the importance of it can never be over-emphasized. (运用了since引导的原因状语从句) 9．                                                                            Qinqiang Opera Qinqiang Opera is one of the oldest operas of the Han nationality. It originated from rural areas of Shaanxi and Gansu. Later, it became popular in the northwest areas like Shaanxi, Gansu, Qinghai, Ningxia and so on. Qinqiang Opera tells a variety of stories, like fairy tales and folk tales. Besides, Qinqiang Opera has different kinds of characters and each of them has a unique style of performing. In order to protect our traditional culture, on May 20th, 2006, Qinqiang was named as Intangible Cultural Heritage with the approval of the State Council. So it is a must for us to do everything we can do to protect it. 【写作分析】本文是开放性作文。要求考生参照所给信息介绍一种被列入国家非物质文化遗产目录的剧种——秦腔。 1.词汇积累 后来：later→afterwards 各种各样的：a variety of→varieties of 此外：besides→what’s more 批准：approval→permission 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Qinqiang Opera is one of the oldest operas of the Han nationality. It originated from rural areas of Shaanxi and Gansu. 拓展句：Qinqiang Opera is one of the oldest operas of the Han nationality, which originated from rural areas of Shaanxi and Gansu. 【高分句型1】In order to protect our traditional culture, on May 20th, 2006, Qinqiang was named as Intangible Cultural Heritage with the approval of the State Council.（运用了被动语态和不定式作目的状语） 【高分句型2】So it is a must for us to do everything we can do to protect it.（运用了不定式作真正的主语，省略关系代词that引导的定语从句） 10． Good morning, everyone! I'm Li Hua. It's my honor to stand here and give a speech about art. In my opinion, art belongs to the category of beauty which is created and appreciated by people. I believe that what art can bring to us is mainly a sense of enjoyment. Besides, art also provides us with a chance to broaden our horizons. Last but not least, art can help us adjust our mood, allowing us to lead a heathy life. Finally, the most basic way to improve our artistic accomplishment is to attend art class. And we can also go to art museums, galleries an so on to appreciate many different kinds of art forms. Thank you for your listening! 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“艺术”为主题，结合所给内容写一篇演讲稿。 1.词汇积累 依我看；在我看来：In my opinion→From my point of view 此外：Besides → What’s more 机会：chance→opportunity 各种各样的： many different kinds of → various kinds of 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Last but not least, art can help us adjust our mood, allowing us to lead a heathy life. 拓展句：Last but not least, art can help us adjust our mood, which allows us to lead a heathy life. 【高分句型1】In my opinion, art belongs to the category of beauty which is created and appreciated by people.（运用了which引导的限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】I believe that what art can bring to us is mainly a sense of enjoyment. （运用了that引导的宾语从句；what引导的主语从句） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 4 Amazing art 单元写作深度指导 介绍艺术作品 ▲描述艺术品 This sunflower painting was an oil painting by Vincent van Gogh. This one (The painting) was completed in Arles in 1889. It shows sunflowers in a vase, mostly in three shades of yellow. The colours of the flowers range from bright yellows to brownish yellows, showing that the flowers are at different stages of life. The sunflower paintings held special meaning for Van Gogh. ▲基础词汇 famous著名的 show表达;表现 describe描述 one of the most important... 最重要的……之一 be considered as被认为…… be popular with受……欢迎 leave a deep impression on me给我留下深刻印象 give me a better understanding of life让我更好地理解生活 attract/catch one’s attention吸引某人的注意 give a vivid description of...生动描述…… 　I.要点解读 　　本单元的写作任务是介绍一件艺术作品,属于事物说明文的范畴。事物说明文,一般是通过对具体事物的形状、构造、性质、特点、用途等作客观而准确的说明,使读者了解、认识这个或这类事物。 II.结构框架 写好事物说明文要从五点入手:一要抓住特征说明事物;二要选好说明角度;三要合理安排说明顺序;四要恰当地使用各种说明方法;五要运用准确、简明的语言说明。 III.必备表达 1.常用词块 be skilled/good at　　　 擅长 be kept in good condition 保存完好 be enthusiastic about 对……充满热情 date back to... 追溯到…… pass down 传承 spread Chinese culture 传播中国文化 in memory of 为了纪念…… 2.必备句式 (1)作品特点 It is a famous painting drawn by Wu Daozi, one of the greatest artists in the Tang Dynasty. 这幅名画是由吴道子画的,他是唐朝最伟大的画家之一。 The painting vividly reflects the life of people in Sichuan Province. 这幅画生动地反映了四川人的生活。 (2)具体描述 It measures 50 centimeters long./It is 50 centimeters in length.它长50厘米。 The colors range from yellows to browns. 它的颜色从黄色到棕色。 Chinese painting is known for its brush drawings in black inks and natural colors. 中国画因用黑色墨汁和自然色的毛笔画而出名。 (3)对作品的评价 The painting is known for its accurate images of people and scenery. 这幅画因精准的人物和风景形象而出名。 There is no doubt that the masterpiece plays an important role in the development of sculpture. 毫无疑问,这部杰出的作品在雕塑发展史上起着重要的作用。 All the visitors speak highly of it. 所有游客都对它做出高度评价。 IV.优化策略 1.‌开头引入‌ 简要介绍艺术作品的名称、作者和创作背景。吸引读者的注意力，提出文章的主题。 2.‌详细描述‌ 详细描述艺术作品的外观、风格、色彩、构图等视觉元素。分析作品所表达的主题、情感或寓意。可以提及作品在艺术史上的地位或影响。 3.‌个人感受‌ 分享自己对作品的感受或理解。可以结合个人经历或情感，使文章更加生动和真实。 4.‌结尾总结‌ 总结作品的特点和价值。强调作品对自己的影响或启示。可以提出对读者的建议或期望。 【范文示例】 In the realm of art, there are countless masterpieces that captivate our senses and ignite our imagination. One such artwork that has always fascinated me is "The Starry Night," a mesmerizing painting by the legendary Dutch artist Vincent van Gogh. Painted in 1889 during his stay at the Saint-Paul-de-Mausole asylum in France, this piece not only reflects van Gogh's unique artistic style but also delves deep into the complexities of his inner world. At first glance, "The Starry Night" draws the viewer into its swirling vortex of colors and patterns. The dominant blues and yellows create a striking contrast, symbolizing the turmoil and tranquility that coexisted within van Gogh's mind. The sky, rendered in bold, vigorous strokes, seems to be alive, with stars swirling in a cosmic dance. The cypress tree in the foreground stands tall and solemn, its dark, twisted form contrasting sharply with the vibrant sky behind it. This juxtaposition of elements adds depth and drama to the composition, making it a visual feast for the eyes. Beyond its visual appeal, "The Starry Night" conveys a profound message about the human experience. The painting is often interpreted as a representation of van Gogh's struggles with mental illness and his yearning for peace. The swirling stars and turbulent sky mirror the chaos in his mind, while the calm village below suggests a longing for serenity and stability. This duality reflects the complex nature of human emotions, where pain and beauty can coexist. Personally, "The Starry Night" resonates with me deeply. It reminds me of the power of art to express the inexpressible, to capture the essence of human experience in a way that words cannot. Whenever I gaze upon this painting, I am transported to a world where emotions are raw and real, and where the boundaries between the internal and external blur. In conclusion, "The Starry Night" is not just a painting; it is a testament to the human spirit's resilience and creativity. It teaches us that even in the darkest times, there is beauty to be found and expressed. As we continue to appreciate and study this masterpiece, we are reminded of the enduring power of art to inspire, comfort, and challenge us. I encourage everyone to take a moment to immerse themselves in the world of "The Starry Night," and to let its beauty and depth touch their hearts. 　假定你是校报英文版的编辑李华,你们计划在下期报纸的“Great Artworks”栏目中为读者介绍《六骏图》。请你根据提示信息,为其配上一段英文说明。 项目 内容 名称 《六骏图》(The Six Horses) 作者 徐悲鸿 特点 六匹马形态各异;表现出了马的活力;是力量、速度和成功的象征。 评价 结合了中国的水墨画技巧(ink and wash technique)以及西方的一些绘画技巧,是中国最著名的绘画作品之一。 注意: 1.写作词数应为80个左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 【写作示例】 I.读题布局 II.句式建构 1.《六骏图》是由徐悲鸿画的一幅名画。 The Six Horses is a famous painting drawn by Xu Beihong.  2.徐悲鸿是一位著名的中国画家,他因他的中国水墨画马而最为著名。 Xu Beihong is a well-known Chinese artist and is most famous for his Chinese ink and wash paintings of horses.  3.这幅画是中国水墨画技法与西方绘画技法的结合,被认为是中国最著名的画作之一。 (1)This painting, a combination of Chinese ink and wash techniques with Western painting skills, is considered as one of the most famous paintings in China.  (2)This painting,(which is) considered as one of the most famous paintings in China, is a combination of Chinese ink and wash techniques with Western painting skills.  4.画中的六匹马姿势各异,姿态优美,活灵活现。 With various positions, the six horses in the painting are vivid, graceful and active.  5.这幅画显示了马的力量。 The painting shows the strength of the horses.  6.这幅画是力量、速度和成功的象征。 The painting is the symbol of power,speed and success.  7.总而言之,这幅画真的是天才的杰作,马的形象和它展现的精神令人惊叹。 In a word, the painting is really a work of genius and the images of the horses and the spirits it shows are amazing.  III.衔接成篇 　　The Six Horses is a famous painting drawn by Xu Beihong, a well-known Chinese artist who is most famous for his Chinese ink and wash paintings of horses. 　　This painting, a combination of Chinese ink and wash techniques with Western painting skills, is considered as one of the most famous paintings in China. With various positions, the six horses in the painting are vivid, graceful and active. The painting not only shows the strength of the horses but also is the symbol of power, speed and success. 　　In a word, the painting is really a work of genius and the images of the horses and the spirits it shows are amazing. 1．假如你是李雷，上周参观了以“Working the Waste into Magic”为主题的环保作品展。请你根据以下信息，写一篇短文，在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。 What were on show What they are made of/from What you think clothes chairs model planes ... waste paper plastic bottles used wood and glass ... creative save... ... 注意:(1)短文须介绍至少两项展品，可适当发挥； (2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； (3)词数:80—100。短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about the show “Working the Waste into Magic”. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假定你是李华，你校英语社正在举办以保护世界野生动植物为主题的绘画比赛，你创作了以下作品参赛，请写一篇发言稿，向评委介绍你的这幅作品。 内容包括： 1. 作品主要信息介绍； 2. 作品解读。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为100 左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 参考词汇 rhinoceros 独角犀牛 giraffe 长颈鹿 Distinguished judges, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you. 3．假如你是李华，你校英语报开设了一个介绍影视作品的专栏，请根据下面表格中的提示为该栏目写一篇关于电影《流浪地球》的影评。 片名 The Wandering Earth 导演 郭帆 故事梗概 该片改编于刘慈欣的同名小说。影片讲述了在不久的未来太阳即将毁灭，太阳系已经不适合人类生存。面对绝境，人们将开启“流浪地球”计划，试图带着地球一起逃离太阳系，寻找人类的新家园。 评论 1. 该电影是中国科幻电影史上的里程碑，自上映以来，深受观众欢迎。 2. …… 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 不要逐条翻译，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：里程碑landmark _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假定你是学生会主席李华。学校将举办一次以＂校园生活·创意无限＂(Innovations on Campus)为主题的创意作品展评活动。请你根据以下图示，以短文形式用英语写一份书面通知。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3.开头及结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇: 校园campus        创意作品innovation        颁奖prize-giving Notice An exciting event ＂Innovations on Campus＂ is around the corner. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Come on, everybody! It’s your show time. Student Union 5．你是明启中学学生李华，最近上海博物馆推出了三款文创周边产品，吸引了不少年轻人追捧，分别是：（1）馆藏藏品日历 ；（2）中外艺术家明信片；（3） “丝绸之路”主题丝巾。 No. 1 No. 2 No. 3 以上海博物馆馆藏藏品为主题的日历，印有中华古代水墨画、书法、历史文物的展品细节信息。 以中外名画为主题，色彩艳丽，可作为贺卡、明信片、书签使用。   以“帆船”为主题元素、以海上丝绸之路航线为底，以浅蓝色呼应瓷器配色，100%桑蚕丝材料。 售价：79元 售价：10元/ 张 售价：330元 请比较这三个产品，选择一款文创产品以赠予外国笔友Tom，从不同角度（如设计创意、实用价值、文化意蕴、销售价格等）阐述你的选择理由。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假如你是李华。你的澳大利亚朋友Tom听说春节期间你去了马街书会 (Majie Quyi Show), 请你给他写封回信, 介绍下马街书会的基本情况。 历史 700 多年 性质 民间艺术盛会; “中国十大民俗”之一 时间 每年阴历正月十一至十三 地点 河南宝丰马街 演员 来自全国的曲艺艺人 内容 40多种曲艺和其它传统曲目 注意: 1. 词数80 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 7．假如你是李华，上周六参观了你市博物馆举办的“遇见艺术家”中国艺术展，请为你校英文报写一则评论。内容包括： 1. 展览概况； 2. 观展感受； 3. 意见或建议。 注意：1. 词数80词左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．你校在学生中开展调查，想了解学生对艺术鉴赏Art Appreciation这门课程是否感兴趣。请写一篇短文，给你校英文网站投稿，内容包括： 1. 描述图表(chart)； 2. 试分析产生该结果的原因； 3. 你的看法。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A survey on Art Appreciation ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．戏曲艺术是中华文明的一个重要组成部分，是我国传统文化的代表之一。但是在物质水平提高和精神文化丰富的同时，戏曲艺术的地位却逐渐下降，保护传统文化的形势迫在眉睫。请你参照以下信息介绍一种被列入国家非物质文化遗产目录的剧种——秦腔。 主要信息： 1．秦腔(Qinqiang Opera)，中国汉族最古老的戏剧之一，源于陕西和甘肃的农村地区，流行于中国西北部的陕西、甘肃、青海、宁夏等地； 2．秦腔所演的剧目丰富：有神话、民间故事等；秦腔的角色也十分众多，表演特色鲜明； 3．2006年5月20日，经国务院(the State Council)批准列入第一批国家级非物质文化遗产名录。 …… 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假定你是李华，你校英语社团值校“艺术节”之际举办一场主题为“艺术”的演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿参加，内容包括： 1．在你看来，艺术是什么？ 2．艺术给人带来什么？ 3．如何提高自己的艺术修养？ 注意：字数在80词左右。 参考词汇：艺术修养 artistic accomplishment Good morning, everyone! 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