必修第三册Unit 3 The world of science(写实验报告)-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高一英语单元写作深度指导(外研版2019)

Unit 3 The world of science 单元写作深度指导 写实验报告 ▲有关实验报告的表达 (第一部分)The experiment is designed to find out what will happen...(实验目的) (第二部分)I prepared a boiled egg,a glass bottle and hot water to do the experiment.(实验器材) First,remove the shell of the egg.Then carefully...Later... After that...At last...(实验步骤,注意表示动作先后顺序的连词) (第三部分) After the experiment,we can draw the conclusion that...(实验结论) ▲基础词汇 instruction　n.操作指南,用法说明 procedure n.步骤 draw/reach/come to a conclusion 得出结论 material n.材料 be designed to 目的是 I.要点解读 实验报告是把实验目的、方法、过程、结果等记录下来,经过整理写成的书面汇总材料。实验报告要明确体现实验目的、步骤和结果,对具体实验现象的描述要客观准确,分析要全面具体,语言要简洁质朴、通俗易懂。 II.结构框架 III.常用词汇 (1)描写实验目的 ...carry out an experiment to find out... The aim of the experiment is to find out... ...with the purpose of discovering... (2)描写实验用品 To carry out/make/do/perform the experiment,you need... The following things are needed... The following apparatuses are used... 【附-实验用品:apparatus(仪器),beaker(烧杯),equipment(设备), test tube(试管),test tube holder(试管夹),balance(天平),liquid(液体), solid(固体), gas(气体)】 (3)描写实验方法或过程 ...make good preparations for... It is important that... ...do the experiment as follows. firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally; first,then,next,after that,two hours later; after several days find a better way of doing... (4)描写实验结论 From this experiment we can conclude... ...draw/come to the conclusion that... In conclusion... IV.必备句式 (1)段首句 The aim of the experiment is to find out the temperature and what happens when water is boiling. 实验的目的是观察水沸腾的温度和现象。 To do/carry out/conduct the experiment, you need the following materials:beaker, thermometer, alcohol lamp and match.为了做实验,你需要下列材料:烧杯、温度计、酒精灯和火柴。 Below is a description of a simple scientific experiment on the idea of saving resources. 下面是一个关于节约资源这个想法的简单科学实验的描述。 (2)主体段落句 With all the things prepared, the experiment began.一切准备就绪后,实验开始。 First, I removed the shell of the egg.Then, I carefully poured some hot water into the bottle, and shook the bottle gently.After a few minutes, I poured out the hot water.首先,我把蛋壳去掉。然后,我小心翼翼地往瓶子里倒了一些热水,轻轻地摇了摇瓶子。几分钟后,我把热水倒了出来。 (3)段尾句 After the experiment I can draw the conclusion that air pressure indeed exists, and it is very powerful.It is the force of the air that pushed the egg into the bottle.经过实验,我可以得出结论,空气压力确实存在,它是非常强大的。是空气的力量把鸡蛋推进瓶子里的。 We can draw a conclusion that water boils when the temperature reaches 100℃. 我们可以得出结论:水在温度达到100℃时沸腾。 IV.优化策略 1.‌开头引入‌ 简短地介绍研究的主题或问题背景，引起读者的兴趣。可以提及研究的起源、目的或重要性。 2.‌研究过程概述‌ 按照时间顺序或逻辑顺序，简要描述研究的主要步骤。强调关键的研究方法、实验设计或数据收集过程。避免过多细节，保持简洁明了。 3.‌主要发现或成果‌ 概括研究的主要发现或成果，突出其新颖性或重要性。可以提及研究对实践或理论的贡献。 4.‌结尾总结‌ 简要总结研究的意义和价值。可以提及研究的局限性或未来研究方向。 【范文示例】 In recent years, the depletion of fossil fuels and the increasing concern over environmental issues have prompted a global shift towards renewable energy sources. My research, conducted over the past six months, focuses on exploring the potential of solar energy as a sustainable alternative to traditional energy sources. The journey began with an extensive literature review, where I delved into the existing research on solar energy technologies, their efficiencies, and the challenges they face. This foundational knowledge guided the formulation of my research question: How can we improve the efficiency of solar panels to make them more viable for widespread use? Next, I designed a series of experiments to test different materials and configurations for solar panels. Using a controlled environment, I measured the energy output of various setups under simulated sunlight conditions. This process involved numerous trials and adjustments, but eventually, I identified a particular combination of materials that significantly enhanced the efficiency of the panels. The most notable finding from my research is a novel solar panel design that achieves a 15% increase in energy conversion efficiency compared to standard panels. This improvement could have significant implications for the cost-effectiveness and feasibility of solar energy projects. In conclusion, my research on renewable energy sources, specifically solar energy, has been a rewarding and enlightening experience. While the results are promising, I acknowledge that there is still much work to be done in this field. I am excited to see how future research can further advance our understanding and application of solar energy. 假定你是李华,请根据以下提示写一篇实验报告。 项目 内容 实验目的 观察水的沸腾 实验步骤 1 在烧杯中放入适量的水 2 把温度计放到水中 3 点燃酒精灯,仔细观察温度计和水的变化 实验结果 1 水温在60℃以下时,随着水温不断升高,杯底气泡(bubble)越来越多,有少量气泡上升 2 水温在60~90℃时,杯底气泡逐渐减少,气泡上升逐渐加快 3 水温达到100℃时,气泡上升最快,水面气泡最多,温度不再变化 实验结论 水在100℃时开始沸腾 参考词汇:烧杯beaker;温度计thermometer;酒精灯alcohol burner 注意: 1.写作词数应为80个左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 【写作示例】 I.读题布局 II.句式建构 1.设计该实验的目的是观察水沸腾时的温度及沸腾过程中发生的变化。 This experiment is designed to observe the temperature when water boils and what happens in water during the boiling.  2.为了做实验,我准备了以下器材:水、一个温度计、一个烧杯和一盏酒精灯。 To carry out the experiment,I prepared the following equipment:water,a thermometer, a beaker and an alcohol burner.  3.现在你能够看到,当温度达到100℃时,大量的气泡会从杯底上升至水面。 Now you can see that when the temperature reaches 100 degrees centigrade, plenty of bubbles rise from the bottom of the beaker to the water surface.  4.实验后,我可以得出结论:水在100℃时开始沸腾,另外大量的气泡会在沸腾过程中上升至水面。 After the experiment,I can draw a conclusion:water starts boiling at 100 degrees centigrade with plenty of bubbles rising to the surface during the boiling.  III.衔接成篇 　　This experiment is designed to observe the temperature when water boils and what happens in water during the boiling.To carry out the experiment,I prepared the following equipment:water,a thermometer,a beaker and an alcohol burner. Procedure: First,half fill the beaker with water.Then put the thermometer in it.Finally,light the alcohol burner to heat the water and observe the readings of the thermometer.Now it can be seen that plenty of bubbles rise from the bottom of the beaker to the water surface with the temperature reaching 100 degrees centigrade. After the experiment,I can draw a conclusion that water starts boiling at 100 degrees centigrade while plenty of bubbles rise to the surface during the boiling. 1.假设你是明启中学的学生李华，最近参加了一个研究性学习项目，在全体高三学生中开展了题为“高中生对未来职业规划的认知与准备”的调查。根据下表调查结果，撰写调查报告，内容需包括： 1.简要描述数据； 2.分析原因； 3.提出建议。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假定你是李华，你所在的兴趣小组对中学生使用“搜题软件”的情况进行了调查研究。请为校英文报写一篇文章，内容包括： 1. 调查结果 （如图所示） 2. 分析原因；使用者 3. 你的感想。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假设你是李华，最近你班就“人类是否应该开展克隆研究”行了讨论。请根据讨论结果，写一封80词左右的信给某英文报社的编辑来报道此事。 注意：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：克隆 cloning；器官 organ；移植 transplant；基因 gene (adj. Genetic)； 伦理的；道德的 ethical 赞成的理由 反对的理由 你的看法 1. 挽救濒危动物； 2. 再造人体器官，用于移植。 1. 引起基因变异； 2. 克隆人导致伦理道德混乱。 …… Dear Editor, Recently our class has had a discussion about whether the clone research should be carried out. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4．假定你是李华。外教老师Ryan正在做中美高中生生涯规划的对比研究，你帮助他完成了你校学生未来从业方向的调查（见下图）。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.调查结果描述； 2.简单评论。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 5．5月20日是＂中国学生营养日＂，那天你校研究性学习小组就早餐问题进行了一次调查，其结果令人担忧(见下图)。请你根据调查结果写一篇英语短文，倡导营养早餐。 注意：1. 所写内容要包括图中所提供的全部信息，并谈谈自己的看法； 2. 词数100左右； 3. 参考词汇：营养不良 malnutrition As we know, breakfast is important.___________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．研究发现，结识志趣相同的朋友，建立良好的社交网络，有益于我们的身心健康。但生活中，有一些人在情绪低落时不愿与人吐露。请根据你对右侧两幅图的理解，以“You Are Not Alone”为题，用英语写一篇作文。 你的作文应包括以下内容： 1．简要描述两幅图的内容； 2．举例说明你的经历和做法； 3．提出你的建议。 注意： 1．可参照图片适当发挥； 2．作文词数150左右； 3．作文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 参考词汇：mask (面具)   negative emotions (消极情绪) You Are Not Alone _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 7．假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为＂父母是否以子女为荣＂。通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）。根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须： 1.描述调研数据； 2.分析可能导致这一结果的原因。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．北京时间4月27日16时26分，23岁的旅美归国大熊猫“丫丫”抵达上海浦东国际机场。据了解，中美开展大熊猫合作研究二十年来，为促进濒危物种保护研究发挥了积极作用。保护野生动物这一话题再次走进人们的视野。那么我们应该如何保护野生动物，尤其是濒危动物(endangered animals) 呢？ 假设你是李华，请根据下面的内容提示，写一篇倡议书，呼吁大家保护濒临灭绝的动物，内容可适当发挥。 动物现状及被捕杀原因 被捕杀，失去家园，濒临灭绝…… (1) 被肉食 (2) 为了得到皮毛…… 保护措施 (1) 不杀害濒危动物 (2) 不砍伐森林 (3) 不污染环境…… 呼吁 …… 注意： (1) 词数80—100，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； (2) 短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3) 在文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。 Dear fellow students, Animals are good friends to human beings but ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! Li Hua 9．俗话说：“笑一笑，十年少。”研究发现笑对身体的健康是很有益处的。请以“Laughter is Good for Both Body and Mind”为题谈谈你的看法。 注意：1．词数100左右; 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假设你是明启中学学生王磊，最近正在进行一项有关“人际关系”的研究，经过问卷调查，结果如下表所示： 对象 每天聊天的时间(平均) 同学 2小时 家长 10分钟 老师 30分钟 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 3 The world of science 单元写作深度指导 写实验报告 ▲有关实验报告的表达 (第一部分)The experiment is designed to find out what will happen...(实验目的) (第二部分)I prepared a boiled egg,a glass bottle and hot water to do the experiment.(实验器材) First,remove the shell of the egg.Then carefully...Later... After that...At last...(实验步骤,注意表示动作先后顺序的连词) (第三部分) After the experiment,we can draw the conclusion that...(实验结论) ▲基础词汇 instruction　n.操作指南,用法说明 procedure n.步骤 draw/reach/come to a conclusion 得出结论 material n.材料 be designed to 目的是 I.要点解读 实验报告是把实验目的、方法、过程、结果等记录下来,经过整理写成的书面汇总材料。实验报告要明确体现实验目的、步骤和结果,对具体实验现象的描述要客观准确,分析要全面具体,语言要简洁质朴、通俗易懂。 II.结构框架 III.常用词汇 (1)描写实验目的 ...carry out an experiment to find out... The aim of the experiment is to find out... ...with the purpose of discovering... (2)描写实验用品 To carry out/make/do/perform the experiment,you need... The following things are needed... The following apparatuses are used... 【附-实验用品:apparatus(仪器),beaker(烧杯),equipment(设备), test tube(试管),test tube holder(试管夹),balance(天平),liquid(液体), solid(固体), gas(气体)】 (3)描写实验方法或过程 ...make good preparations for... It is important that... ...do the experiment as follows. firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally; first,then,next,after that,two hours later; after several days find a better way of doing... (4)描写实验结论 From this experiment we can conclude... ...draw/come to the conclusion that... In conclusion... IV.必备句式 (1)段首句 The aim of the experiment is to find out the temperature and what happens when water is boiling. 实验的目的是观察水沸腾的温度和现象。 To do/carry out/conduct the experiment, you need the following materials:beaker, thermometer, alcohol lamp and match.为了做实验,你需要下列材料:烧杯、温度计、酒精灯和火柴。 Below is a description of a simple scientific experiment on the idea of saving resources. 下面是一个关于节约资源这个想法的简单科学实验的描述。 (2)主体段落句 With all the things prepared, the experiment began.一切准备就绪后,实验开始。 First, I removed the shell of the egg.Then, I carefully poured some hot water into the bottle, and shook the bottle gently.After a few minutes, I poured out the hot water.首先,我把蛋壳去掉。然后,我小心翼翼地往瓶子里倒了一些热水,轻轻地摇了摇瓶子。几分钟后,我把热水倒了出来。 (3)段尾句 After the experiment I can draw the conclusion that air pressure indeed exists, and it is very powerful.It is the force of the air that pushed the egg into the bottle.经过实验,我可以得出结论,空气压力确实存在,它是非常强大的。是空气的力量把鸡蛋推进瓶子里的。 We can draw a conclusion that water boils when the temperature reaches 100℃. 我们可以得出结论:水在温度达到100℃时沸腾。 IV.优化策略 1.‌开头引入‌ 简短地介绍研究的主题或问题背景，引起读者的兴趣。可以提及研究的起源、目的或重要性。 2.‌研究过程概述‌ 按照时间顺序或逻辑顺序，简要描述研究的主要步骤。强调关键的研究方法、实验设计或数据收集过程。避免过多细节，保持简洁明了。 3.‌主要发现或成果‌ 概括研究的主要发现或成果，突出其新颖性或重要性。可以提及研究对实践或理论的贡献。 4.‌结尾总结‌ 简要总结研究的意义和价值。可以提及研究的局限性或未来研究方向。 【范文示例】 In recent years, the depletion of fossil fuels and the increasing concern over environmental issues have prompted a global shift towards renewable energy sources. My research, conducted over the past six months, focuses on exploring the potential of solar energy as a sustainable alternative to traditional energy sources. The journey began with an extensive literature review, where I delved into the existing research on solar energy technologies, their efficiencies, and the challenges they face. This foundational knowledge guided the formulation of my research question: How can we improve the efficiency of solar panels to make them more viable for widespread use? Next, I designed a series of experiments to test different materials and configurations for solar panels. Using a controlled environment, I measured the energy output of various setups under simulated sunlight conditions. This process involved numerous trials and adjustments, but eventually, I identified a particular combination of materials that significantly enhanced the efficiency of the panels. The most notable finding from my research is a novel solar panel design that achieves a 15% increase in energy conversion efficiency compared to standard panels. This improvement could have significant implications for the cost-effectiveness and feasibility of solar energy projects. In conclusion, my research on renewable energy sources, specifically solar energy, has been a rewarding and enlightening experience. While the results are promising, I acknowledge that there is still much work to be done in this field. I am excited to see how future research can further advance our understanding and application of solar energy. 假定你是李华,请根据以下提示写一篇实验报告。 项目 内容 实验目的 观察水的沸腾 实验步骤 1 在烧杯中放入适量的水 2 把温度计放到水中 3 点燃酒精灯,仔细观察温度计和水的变化 实验结果 1 水温在60℃以下时,随着水温不断升高,杯底气泡(bubble)越来越多,有少量气泡上升 2 水温在60~90℃时,杯底气泡逐渐减少,气泡上升逐渐加快 3 水温达到100℃时,气泡上升最快,水面气泡最多,温度不再变化 实验结论 水在100℃时开始沸腾 参考词汇:烧杯beaker;温度计thermometer;酒精灯alcohol burner 注意: 1.写作词数应为80个左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 【写作示例】 I.读题布局 II.句式建构 1.设计该实验的目的是观察水沸腾时的温度及沸腾过程中发生的变化。 This experiment is designed to observe the temperature when water boils and what happens in water during the boiling.  2.为了做实验,我准备了以下器材:水、一个温度计、一个烧杯和一盏酒精灯。 To carry out the experiment,I prepared the following equipment:water,a thermometer, a beaker and an alcohol burner.  3.现在你能够看到,当温度达到100℃时,大量的气泡会从杯底上升至水面。 Now you can see that when the temperature reaches 100 degrees centigrade, plenty of bubbles rise from the bottom of the beaker to the water surface.  4.实验后,我可以得出结论:水在100℃时开始沸腾,另外大量的气泡会在沸腾过程中上升至水面。 After the experiment,I can draw a conclusion:water starts boiling at 100 degrees centigrade with plenty of bubbles rising to the surface during the boiling.  III.衔接成篇 　　This experiment is designed to observe the temperature when water boils and what happens in water during the boiling.To carry out the experiment,I prepared the following equipment:water,a thermometer,a beaker and an alcohol burner. Procedure: First,half fill the beaker with water.Then put the thermometer in it.Finally,light the alcohol burner to heat the water and observe the readings of the thermometer.Now it can be seen that plenty of bubbles rise from the bottom of the beaker to the water surface with the temperature reaching 100 degrees centigrade. After the experiment,I can draw a conclusion that water starts boiling at 100 degrees centigrade while plenty of bubbles rise to the surface during the boiling. 1.假设你是明启中学的学生李华，最近参加了一个研究性学习项目，在全体高三学生中开展了题为“高中生对未来职业规划的认知与准备”的调查。根据下表调查结果，撰写调查报告，内容需包括： 1.简要描述数据； 2.分析原因； 3.提出建议。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假定你是李华，你所在的兴趣小组对中学生使用“搜题软件”的情况进行了调查研究。请为校英文报写一篇文章，内容包括： 1. 调查结果 （如图所示） 2. 分析原因；使用者 3. 你的感想。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假设你是李华，最近你班就“人类是否应该开展克隆研究”行了讨论。请根据讨论结果，写一封80词左右的信给某英文报社的编辑来报道此事。 注意：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：克隆 cloning；器官 organ；移植 transplant；基因 gene (adj. Genetic)； 伦理的；道德的 ethical 赞成的理由 反对的理由 你的看法 1. 挽救濒危动物； 2. 再造人体器官，用于移植。 1. 引起基因变异； 2. 克隆人导致伦理道德混乱。 …… Dear Editor, Recently our class has had a discussion about whether the clone research should be carried out. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4．假定你是李华。外教老师Ryan正在做中美高中生生涯规划的对比研究，你帮助他完成了你校学生未来从业方向的调查（见下图）。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.调查结果描述； 2.简单评论。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 5．5月20日是＂中国学生营养日＂，那天你校研究性学习小组就早餐问题进行了一次调查，其结果令人担忧(见下图)。请你根据调查结果写一篇英语短文，倡导营养早餐。 注意：1. 所写内容要包括图中所提供的全部信息，并谈谈自己的看法； 2. 词数100左右； 3. 参考词汇：营养不良 malnutrition As we know, breakfast is important.___________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．研究发现，结识志趣相同的朋友，建立良好的社交网络，有益于我们的身心健康。但生活中，有一些人在情绪低落时不愿与人吐露。请根据你对右侧两幅图的理解，以“You Are Not Alone”为题，用英语写一篇作文。 你的作文应包括以下内容： 1．简要描述两幅图的内容； 2．举例说明你的经历和做法； 3．提出你的建议。 注意： 1．可参照图片适当发挥； 2．作文词数150左右； 3．作文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 参考词汇：mask (面具)   negative emotions (消极情绪) You Are Not Alone _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 7．假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为＂父母是否以子女为荣＂。通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）。根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须： 1.描述调研数据； 2.分析可能导致这一结果的原因。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．北京时间4月27日16时26分，23岁的旅美归国大熊猫“丫丫”抵达上海浦东国际机场。据了解，中美开展大熊猫合作研究二十年来，为促进濒危物种保护研究发挥了积极作用。保护野生动物这一话题再次走进人们的视野。那么我们应该如何保护野生动物，尤其是濒危动物(endangered animals) 呢？ 假设你是李华，请根据下面的内容提示，写一篇倡议书，呼吁大家保护濒临灭绝的动物，内容可适当发挥。 动物现状及被捕杀原因 被捕杀，失去家园，濒临灭绝…… (1) 被肉食 (2) 为了得到皮毛…… 保护措施 (1) 不杀害濒危动物 (2) 不砍伐森林 (3) 不污染环境…… 呼吁 …… 注意： (1) 词数80—100，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； (2) 短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3) 在文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。 Dear fellow students, Animals are good friends to human beings but ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! Li Hua 9．俗话说：“笑一笑，十年少。”研究发现笑对身体的健康是很有益处的。请以“Laughter is Good for Both Body and Mind”为题谈谈你的看法。 注意：1．词数100左右; 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假设你是明启中学学生王磊，最近正在进行一项有关“人际关系”的研究，经过问卷调查，结果如下表所示： 对象 每天聊天的时间(平均) 同学 2小时 家长 10分钟 老师 30分钟 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1． Report on High School Students' Career Planning Awareness As a student at Mingqi High, I conducted a survey on “High School Students’ Awareness and Preparation for Future Career Planning.” The results showed that 40% of seniors have a clear career plan, 30% have received guidance, but only 20% have engaged in career-related activities. Several factors could contribute to these findings. Firstly, the lack of comprehensive career guidance programs may hinder students’ ability to develop clear career plans. Secondly, limited opportunities for extracurricular career activities restrict students’ exposure to various career paths. To address these issues, I recommend that schools enhance their career guidance programs by offering more regular and comprehensive workshops. Additionally, encouraging students to participate in extracurricular career activities can broaden their horizons and provide valuable insights. Collaboration with local businesses for internships and mentoring programs can further enrich students’ practical experiences and help them make informed career decisions. By strengthening career support systems and increasing practical exposure, we can better prepare students for their future careers. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于图表写作。假设你是明启中学的学生李华，最近参加了一个研究性学习项目，在全体高三学生中开展了题为“高中生对未来职业规划的认知与准备”的调查，要求考生根据调查结果，撰写调查报告。 1. 词汇积累 组织：conduct→organize 显示：show→present 解决：address→solve 建议：recommend→suggest 2. 句式拓展 合并为复合句 原句：To address these issues, I recommend that schools enhance their career guidance programs by offering more regular and comprehensive workshops. Additionally, encouraging students to participate in extracurricular career activities can broaden their horizons and provide valuable insights. 拓展句：To address these issues, I recommend that schools not only enhance their career guidance programs by offering more regular and comprehensive workshops but also encourage students to participate in extracurricular career activities, which can broaden their horizons and provide valuable insights. [高分句型1]The results showed that 40% of seniors have a clear career plan, 30% have received guidance, but only 20% have engaged in career-related activities.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2]To address these issues, I recommend that schools enhance their career guidance programs by offering more regular and comprehensive workshops.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) 2．       Recently, our interest group conducted a survey on the use of question-solving apps among high school students. The results are astonishing: about 60% of students admit to frequently relying on these apps for homework assistance. The reasons behind this trend are diverse. Facing heavy academic pressure and tight schedules, students are drawn to quick solutions. These question-solving apps offer them a rapid means to tackle academic challenges. Additionally, the excessive expectations from society and family are partly to blame for this phenomenon. Personally, using these apps moderately as a learning tool is wise, rather than allowing them to spoil our critical thinking and problem-solving skills. After all, learning is not merely about finding answers; it’s about understanding knowledge, which is essential for our long-term personal growth. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于图表类作文，要求考生根据图表分析调查结果、产生这种结果的原因，并发表感想。 1. 词汇积累 令人惊讶的：astonishing→surprising 依赖：rely on→depend on 压力：pressure→stress 处理：tackle→handle 2. 句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Facing heavy academic pressure and tight schedules, students are drawn to quick solutions. 拓展句：Because they face heavy academic pressure and tight schedules, students are drawn to quick solutions. 【高分句型1】The results are astonishing: about 60% of students admit to frequently relying on these apps for homework assistance. (使用了动名词短语作宾语) 【高分句型2】After all, learning is not merely about finding answers; it’s about understanding knowledge, which is essential for our long-term personal growth. (使用了动名词分别作主语和宾语、which引导非限制性定语从句) 3． Dear Editor, Recently our class has had a discussion about whether the clone research should be carried out. Some of the students are for the clone research. They say cloning is of help in researching into the cures for many diseases as well as useful for saving endangered animals. Cloning human cells in a lab could offer perfect organs for patients to transplant. However, others are against it. Though cloning might improve the quality of life, it might bring about some genetic changes. It also might raise ethical problems. Personally, cloning should be dealt with carefully and monitored closely by the government, because we don’t understand enough what effects cloning will have on the world in the future. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。假设你是李华，最近你班就“人类是否应该开展克隆研究”行了讨论。请根据讨论结果，写一封80词左右的信给某英文报社的编辑来报道此事。 1.词汇积累 引起：raise→cause/lead to 反对：be against→disapprove of 有益的：be of help→be helpful 疾病：disease→sickness 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：Some of the students are for the clone research. They say cloning is of help in researching into the cures for many diseases as well as useful for saving endangered animals. 拓展句：Some of the students are for the clone research, who say cloning is of help in researching into the cures for many diseases as well as useful for saving endangered animals. [高分句型1] Recently our class has had a discussion about whether the clone research should be carried out. (运用了whether引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] Though cloning might improve the quality of life, it might bring about some genetic changes. (运用了though引导让步状语从句) 4． Dear Ryan, A survey on career planning for high school students in China has been done and here are the results. According to the chart, 75.5 percent of the students do not have a clear direction for their future career, accounting for the majority of students. 15 percent students have never considered their future career, and only 9.5 percent students have a clear understanding of what they wants to do in the future. Students are the future of a country. No one will not feel heartbroken, facing such a result. Everyone, including teachers, parents of students, schools, and all sectors of society, should take action to inspire students to think about their future careers and have clear goals for their future. Only in this way can students have motivation to learn and the country has hope. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。外教老师Ryan正在做中美高中生生涯规划的对比研究，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，描述你帮助他完成了的你校学生未来从业方向的调查结果并简单评论。 1.词汇积累； 占，构成：account→ make up 考虑：consider → think about 鼓励：inspire →encourage 目标：goal →target 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：According to the chart, 75.5 percent of the students do not have a clear direction for their future career, accounting for the majority of students. 拓展句：According to the chart, 75.5 percent of the students do not have a clear direction for their future career, which account for the majority of students. 【高分句型1】15 percent students have never considered their future career, and only 9.5 percent students have a clear understanding of what they wants to do in the future (运用了what引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】No one will not feel heartbroken, facing such a result. (运用了双重否定以及现在分词充当状语) 5． As we know, breakfast is important. But not all students have realized its importance. On May 20th, the research study group of our school conducted a survey about breakfast. The result is as follows: 55 percent of the surveyed students who have breakfast regularly keep healthy and are always full of energy. 25 percent of them just have junk food instead. They don’t have a balanced diet, which makes them suffer from malnutrition. Besides, 20 percent of them skip breakfast to go to school. As a result, they often feel hungry in class and can’t listen to teachers carefully. What’s worse, they get ill easily. As far as I am concerned, it’s necessary for us to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast. Only in this way can we enjoy a healthy and wonderful life. 这是一篇图表类作文。首先，考生要简单介绍一下调查背景和调查主题。其次，考生要根据图表数据介绍调查结果，同时要根据调查结果分析不同早餐带来的不同结果。最后，考生要倡导营养早餐。该文章应用一般现在时态。 【亮点分析】所给范文内容齐全，要点明确，条理清楚。but，besides，as a result，what’s worse，as far as I’m concerned等的使用，使上下文衔接自然。适当使用了一些不同的句式：1. 定语从句：who have breakfast regularly； which makes them suffer from malnutrition   2. 非谓语动词 to have breakfast   3. 倒装句 Only in this way can we enjoy a healthy and wonderful life。 6． You Are Not Alone All of us need somebody with whom we can share our emotions. But in Picture 1, the person tends to hide his negative emotions behind a mask. Luckily, in Picture 2, he gets over his negative feelings after talking to a friend. In fact, everyone has different things that put them in negative emotions. For example, I used to feel nervous and worried before exams and become sad or disappointed if the grades weren’t satisfying. But each time I got upset, I would turn to my teachers, my parents or friends, who were always timely helping me out. Avoiding negative emotions is impossible. Yet making changes in our life can cut down on negative emotions and having friendships can give us confidence that we matter. Therefore, we should learn to become open to others. When we open our hearts and open our minds, new experiences will open up for us. (150 words) 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文。要求考生根据所给图片，以“You Are Not Alone”为题进行写作，讲述两幅图的内容，同时结合个人经历和做法，提出建议。 1.词汇积累 倾向于：want to/like to→tend to→would like to 克服：get over→overcome 令人满意的：satisfying→good 减少：cut down→reduce 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Avoiding negative emotions is impossible. 拓展句：It is impossible to avoid negative emotions. 【高分句型1】All of us need somebody with whom we can share our emotions.（运用了介词+whom引导的定语从句） 【高分句型2】But each time I got upset, I would turn to my teachers, my parents or friends, who were always timely helping me out.（运用了each time引导时间状语从句；who引导非限制性定语从句） 7． Recently, I took part in an inquiry learning research, whose topic is whether parents are proud of their children. After doing the research into the students in my school and their parents, I found that there is a big difference between the two sides. 80% of the parents think that they are proud of their children while 60% of the students think that their parents are proud of them. As far as I am concerned, the reasons why the parents and their children have different opinions on the same question are as follows. Firstly, there is only one child in most families. Therefore, the parents pay more attention to their children than themselves. Secondly, the children are accustomed to the love given by their parents. Thirdly, the children are not confident of themselves thinking that they are not excellent to make their parents proud of them 这是一篇图表类作文。首先，考生要对图表内容数据进行介绍，注意要突出数据的差别。其次，考生要分析导致图表结果的原因，陈述自己的看法。整篇文章应用一般现在时态。 【亮点分析】所给范文要点齐全，条理明确，完整的表达了题文要求。长短句交叉使用，语言得体。while，firstly，secondly，thirdly的使用使文章条理清楚，衔接自然。适当运用了一些较好的词汇和句式：1. 定语从句：whose topic is whether parents are proud of their children；why the parents and their children have different opinions  2. 宾语从句：that there is a big difference between the two sides  3. as far as I am concerned  4. ；be accustomed to 8． Dear fellow students, Animals are good friends to human beings, but people kill too many of them for their meat or fur. People also cut down many trees and take away their homes. Animals have no place to live. So they are becoming fewer and fewer. It is not right to kill animals. So people should stop killing animals and cutting down trees. In order to protect animals, more trees should be planted and some animals can be put in the zoo. Besides, people should stop polluting the environment. Recycle useful rubbish. Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans, paper, bottles, and so on. Small actions can make a great difference to the earth. Let's take action immediately. Thank you! Li Hua 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生根据提示，写一篇倡议书，呼吁大家保护濒临灭绝的动物。 1.词汇积累 为了：in order to→so as to 夺走：take away→rob of 此外：besides→in addition 立即：immediately→at once 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：Animals have no place to live. So they are becoming fewer and fewer. 拓展句：Animals are becoming fewer and fewer because they have no place to live. [高分句型1] In order to protect animals, more trees should be planted and some animals can be put in the zoo. (运用了不定式作目的状语) [高分句型2] So people should stop killing animals and cutting down trees. (运用了动名词作宾语) 9． Laughter is Good for Both Body and Mind As the saying goes, laughter is the best medicine. Research also shows that laughing has significant benefits both physically and psychologically. To begin with, laughter has a similar effect to physical exercise. It relaxes our muscles, increases blood flow to the heart and strengthens the immune system, which helps our body to fight infection better. What’s more, laughter helps relieve stress and anxiety. When we laugh, the level of stress chemicals in our body falls. Then we will experience a sense of well-being. Last but not the least, laughter helps to make relationships stronger and enhance teamwork. If we always try to be happy, people around us will enjoy our company and feel energized by it. Now it is the time to laugh frequently throughout the day. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。俗话说：“笑一笑，十年少。”研究发现笑对身体的健康是很有益处的。请以“Laughter is Good for Both Body and Mind”为题谈谈你的看法。 1.词汇积累 压力：stress→pressure 首先：to begin with→first of all 重要的：significant→important 快乐的：happy→delighted 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：When we laugh, the level of stress chemicals in our body falls. Then we will experience a sense of well-being. 拓展句：When we laugh, the level of stress chemicals in our body falls so that we will experience a sense of well-being. [高分句型1] Research also shows that laughing has significant benefits both physically and psychologically. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] If we always try to be happy, people around us will enjoy our company and feel energized by it. (运用了if引导条件状语从句) 10． Recently I did a survey on senior high school students’ interpersonal relationships with their classmates, parents and teachers. The results show that the students spend two hours on day chatting with their peers, 30 minutes with teachers, but merely 10 minutes with their parents. The results are understandable yet worrying. Students spend most of the day at school, so it is natural for them to chat more with their classmates. They never fail to find something to talk about, from schoolwork to pop stars, from shared hobbies to current events, etc. When they come across difficulties in study, they would turn to their teachers for help. Back home, however, students are buried with loads of homework, hardly finding enough time to have an enjoyable chat with their parents. Besides, many parents are over-enthusiastic about their children’s academic performance and tend to impose their wish on them. To ease the tension or disagreement, some students would simply refrain themselves from chatting with of their parents, resulting in ever decreasing communication between each other. The development of interpersonal relationships, especially the relationships with one’s loved ones, plays an important role in the young generation’s physical and mental growth. Communication is the initial step of a good relationship. Hopefully, the results of my survey will encourage the students to talk more with their parents. After all, only when we establish a good relationship with our parents can we get along better with others. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于图表作文，要求考生就最近正在进行一项有关“人际关系”的研究的调查结果进行说明和分析原因。 1.词汇积累 交谈：chat→communicate 遇到：come across→run into 帮助：help→assistance 而且：besides→what’s more 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：To ease the tension or disagreement, some students would simply refrain themselves from chatting with of their parents, resulting in ever decreasing communication between each other. 拓展句：To ease the tension or disagreement, some students would simply refrain themselves from chatting with of their parents, which results in ever decreasing communication between each other. 【高分句型1】 Back home, however, students are buried with loads of homework, hardly finding enough time to have an enjoyable chat with their parents. （运用了现在分词作状语） 【高分句型2】After all, only when we establish a good relationship with our parents can we get along better with others.（运用了部分倒装） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$